中考高频话题写作指导（三）
--日常活动
一、话题解读
命题者经常针对考生熟悉的日常活动来设计试题,此类试题一般以要点提示或者表格提示的方式来考查。日常活动主要包括上学、运动、打扫卫生、做饭和洗衣服等,甚至包括洗刷洗淋浴等个人卫生的细节描述。对业余时间的活动描述,除了做家庭作业外,还应有一些娱乐活动,如看电视、散步、旅游、走亲访友等。
二、素材积累
【好词好句积累】
1.词汇积累
日常:
____________________________________________________________________________________________
运动:
____________________________________________________________________________________________
健康:
____________________________________________________________________________________________
其他:
____________________________________________________________________________________________
短语积累
____________________________________________________________________________________________
日常:
____________________________________________________________________________________________
运动:
____________________________________________________________________________________________
其他:
____________________________________________________________________________________________
3.句子积累
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
三、真题分析
(2018·菏泽)假如你是王宁,你的英国笔友Linda想了解你的周末生活。请根据下面的内容提示,给
Linda写一封电子邮件,告诉她你是如何度过上个周末的。
内容提示:
1.上周六上午,你和父母一起骑自行车去了一家草莓采摘观光园;
2.听采摘观光园主人讲述自己的人生故事:16岁时一场车祸夺去了她的双腿,在地方政府和家人的帮助下创建草莓采摘观光园,每年收入近百万元,吸引大量游客;
3.和采摘观光园主人合影,在采摘观光园餐馆就餐;
4.你的感受。
要求:
1.语言规范,语句通顺,内容充实;
2.字数:不少于100词;开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
可能用到的词汇:
Picking
and
Sightseeing
Garden采摘观光园;
strawberry草莓;
local
government地方政府;
attract吸引;
tourist游客
Dear
Linda,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
Thanks
for
your
last
email.
Yours,
Wang
Ning
【审题思路】
1.本文是回复朋友的邮件,要求介绍自己如何度过上个周末的情况,应该用一般过去时。
2.开头直接介绍时间、地点和人物。
3.按照事件的经过进行写作,注意合理过渡和连贯性。
4.文末要谈论自己的感受。
【写作指导】
要点提示
素材串联
开头:交代时间、地点人物
上周六上午,你和父母一起骑自行车去了一家草莓采摘观光园(On
Saturday
morning,
I
rode
my
bike
to..
and
with..)
正文:园主的故事
1.16岁时一场车祸夺去了她的双腿(lost
her
legs
in
a
traffic
accident
at
the
age
of
16)
2.在地方政府和家人的帮助下创建草莓采摘观光园,每年收入近百万元,吸引大量游客(with
the
help
of;
set
up;
large
number
of
tourists;
nearly
a
million
yuan)
3.和采摘观光园主人合影,在采摘观光园餐馆就餐(took
some
photos
with;had
lunch)
结尾:感受
极好的一课(
great
lesson)
【普通范文】
Dear
Linda,
__________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Wang
Ning
【句子升格】
1.
The
local
government
and
her
family
helped
her
setup
the
Strawberry
Picking
and
Sightseeing
Garden.(用with
the
help
of改写句子)
____________________________________________________________________________________________
2.
The
owner
of
the
garden
lost
her
legs,
but
she
didn't
lose
the
love
of
life.(用although改写句子)
____________________________________________________________________________________________
3.
I've
learned
a
great
lesson
from
her
during
this
unforgettable
trip.(用定语从句改写句子)
____________________________________________________________________________________________
【佳作赏析】
Dear
Linda,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Wang
Ning
四、实战演练
(2018·桂林)假如你是六班的班长张华,本周末你们班将去绿色农场开展课外活动,请你根据下面表格中的要点,写一封电子邮件通知同学们。
Place
the
Green
Farm
Time
Saturday
Gathering
place
and
time(集合地点和时间)
the
school
gate,
8:
00
Transportation
by
bike
Thing
you
can
&
can’t
do
grow
vegetables,
feed
animals,
have
lunch,
pick
up
oranges,
wear
sports
shoes,
not
swim
要求:
1.文章字数在80词左右。开头已经给出,不计入总词数;
2.文中不得出现涉及考生真实信息的人名、地名或校名等。
【温馨提示】
1本文为电子邮件,注意书信的格式。
2.根据要点提示通知所有内容(时间、地点、交通、注意事项)
3.交代注意事项时用情态动词can/can'tid
4.词数为80词左右,时态以一般现在时为主,也会用到一般将来时。
From:
Zhang
Hua
To:
Class6
Subject:
To
the
Green
Farm
Yours
Zhang
Hua中考高频话题写作指导（三）
--日常活动
一、话题解读
命题者经常针对考生熟悉的日常活动来设计试题,此类试题一般以要点提示或者表格提示的方式来考查。日常活动主要包括上学、运动、打扫卫生、做饭和洗衣服等,甚至包括洗刷洗淋浴等个人卫生的细节描述。对业余时间的活动描述,除了做家庭作业外,还应有一些娱乐活动,如看电视、散步、旅游、走亲访友等。
二、素材积累
【好词好句积累】
1.词汇积累
日常:
habit,eat,
sleep,wash,walk,ride,
sweep,
clean,
drink,
watch,
visit,
sing,
dance
运动:
exercise,
sports,
basketball,
volleyball,run,swim,
gym,
football,
hike,
swimming,
jogging
健康:
health,
energy,
fresh,
fruit,
vegetable
其他:
happy,
important,
necessary,
interesting
2.短语积累
日常:
get
up,
have
breakfast/lunch/supper,
do
homework,
clean
the
house,
listen
to
music,
read
books,
tell
stories,
watch
TV
运动:
take
walk,
do
sports/exercise,
play
basketball/
football,
ride
a
bike,
climb
the
mountains,
long
jump
其他:
pick
the
strawberries,
milk
the
cow,
be
good
for,be
full
of,
either......,
from...
to..
3.句子积累
He
has
little
time
for
his
favorite
sport-soccer.
I
spend
much
time
on
my
homework.
I
was
very
tied
but
I
felt
happy.
We
have
a
great
time
doing
sports
on
the
playground.
Our
daily
life
is
full
of
pleasure.
三、真题分析
(2018·菏泽)假如你是王宁,你的英国笔友Linda想了解你的周末生活。请根据下面的内容提示,给
Linda写一封电子邮件,告诉她你是如何度过上个周末的。
内容提示:
1.上周六上午,你和父母一起骑自行车去了一家草莓采摘观光园;
2.听采摘观光园主人讲述自己的人生故事:16岁时一场车祸夺去了她的双腿,在地方政府和家人的帮助下创建草莓采摘观光园,每年收入近百万元,吸引大量游客;
3.和采摘观光园主人合影,在采摘观光园餐馆就餐;
4.你的感受。
要求:
1.语言规范,语句通顺,内容充实;
2.字数:不少于100词;开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
可能用到的词汇:
Picking
and
Sightseeing
Garden采摘观光园;
strawberry草莓;
local
government地方政府;
attract吸引;
tourist游客
Dear
Linda,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
Thanks
for
your
last
email.
Yours,
Wang
Ning
【审题思路】
1.本文是回复朋友的邮件,要求介绍自己如何度过上个周末的情况,应该用一般过去时。
2.开头直接介绍时间、地点和人物。
3.按照事件的经过进行写作,注意合理过渡和连贯性。
4.文末要谈论自己的感受。
【写作指导】
要点提示
素材串联
开头:交代时间、地点人物
上周六上午,你和父母一起骑自行车去了一家草莓采摘观光园(On
Saturday
morning,
I
rode
my
bike
to..
and
with..)
正文:园主的故事
1.16岁时一场车祸夺去了她的双腿(lost
her
legs
in
a
traffic
accident
at
the
age
of
16)
2.在地方政府和家人的帮助下创建草莓采摘观光园,每年收入近百万元,吸引大量游客(with
the
help
of;
set
up;
large
number
of
tourists;
nearly
a
million
yuan)
3.和采摘观光园主人合影,在采摘观光园餐馆就餐(took
some
photos
with;had
lunch)
结尾:感受
极好的一课(
great
lesson)
【普通范文】
Dear
Linda,
Thanks
for
your
last
email.
In
your
email,
you
asked
me
about
my
last
weekend.
Now,
let
me
tell
you
about
it.
On
Saturday
morning,
I
rode
my
bike
to
a
Strawberry
Picking
and
Sightseeing
Garden
with
my
parents.
In
the
garden,
I
heard
the
owner
talking
about
her
life
story.
She
lost
her
legs
in
a
traffic
accident
at
the
age
of
16.
The
local
government
and
her
family
helped
her
set
up
the
Strawberry
Picking
and
Sightseeing
Garden.
It
attracts
a
large
number
of
tourists.
She
could
get
nearly
million
yuan
every
year.
After
that,
we
took
some
photos
with
the
owner
of
the
garden
and
later
had
lunch
in
the
garden.
The
owner
of
the
garden
lost
her
legs,
but
she
didn't
lose
the
love
of
life.
She
didn't
give
up.
I've
learned
a
great
lesson
from
her
during
this
unforgettable
trip.
What
do
you
think
of
her?
I'
m
looking
forward
to
your
reply.
Best
wishes.
Yours,
Wang
Ning
【句子升格】
1.
The
local
government
and
her
family
helped
her
set
up
the
Strawberry
Picking
and
Sightseeing
Garden.(用with
the
help
of改写句子)
With
the
help
of
the
local
government
and
her
family,she
set
up
the
Strawberry
Picking
and
Sightseeing
Garden.
2.
The
owner
of
the
garden
lost
her
legs,
but
she
didn't
lose
the
love
of
life.(用although改写句子)
Although
the
owner
of
the
garden
lost
her
legs,
she
didn't
lose
the
love
of
life.
3.
I've
learned
a
great
lesson
from
her
during
this
unforgettable
trip.(用定语从句改写句子)
This
is
a
great
lesson
I've
learned
from
her
during
this
unforgettable
trip.
【佳作赏析】
Dear
Linda,
Thanks
for
your
last
email.
In
your
email,
you
asked
me
about
my
last
weekend.
Now,
let
me
tell
you
about
it.
On
Saturday
morning,
rode
my
bike
to
a
Strawberry
Picking
and
Sightseeing
Garden
with
my
parents.
In
the
her
legs
in
a
traffic
accident
at
the
age
of
16.
With
the
help
of
the
local
government
and
her
family,
she
set
up
the
Strawberry
Picking
and
Sightseeing
Garden.
It
attracts
large
number
of
tourists.
She
could
get
nearly
a
million
yuan
every
year.
After
that,
we
took
some
photos
with
the
owner
of
the
garden
and
later
had
lunch
in
the
garden.
Although
the
owner
of
the
garden
lost
her
legs,
she
didn't
lose
the
love
of
life.
She
didn't
give
up.
This
is
a
great
lesson
I've
learned
from
a
lot
during
this
unforgettable
trip.
What
do
you
think
of
her?
I'm
looking
forward
to
your
reply.
Best
wishes.
Yours,
Wang
Ning
四、实战演练
(2018·桂林)假如你是六班的班长张华,本周末你们班将去绿色农场开展课外活动,请你根据下面表格中的要点,写一封电子邮件通知同学们。
Place
the
Green
Farm
Time
Saturday
Gathering
place
and
time(集合地点和时间)
the
school
gate,
8:
00
Transportation
by
bike
Thing
you
can
&
can’t
do
grow
vegetables,
feed
animals,
have
lunch,
pick
up
oranges,
wear
sports
shoes,
not
swim
要求:
1.文章字数在80词左右。开头已经给出,不计入总词数;
2.文中不得出现涉及考生真实信息的人名、地名或校名等。
【温馨提示】
1本文为电子邮件,注意书信的格式。
2.根据要点提示通知所有内容(时间、地点、交通、注意事项)
3.交代注意事项时用情态动词can/can'tid
4.词数为80词左右,时态以一般现在时为主,也会用到一般将来时。
From:
Zhang
Hua
To:
Class6
Subject:
To
the
Green
Farm
Hi,
everyone!
We
will
go
to
the
Green
Farm
on
Saturday.
We'll
meet
at
the
school
gate
at
8:
00
am.
We
go
there
by
bike.
We'll
have
a
lot
of
things
to
do
there
need
to
wear
sports
shoes.
We
can
pick
up
fresh
oranges.
We
can
also
grow
vegetables
and
feed
animals.
But
we
mustn't
swim
in
the
river
to
keep
safe.
We'll
have
lunch
on
the
farm.
You
can
take
some
water
or
other
drinks
with
you.
I
hope
everyone
will
have
a
great
time.
See
you
then!
Yours
Zhang
Hua
