中考高频话题写作指导（四）
--学校活动
一、话题解读
本话题主要是围绕学生的课堂活动,课余活动以及学习科目等。因此在书面表达的设题上,主要从介绍学生的日常学习活动和学科入手,并进一步阐述学生对这些事物的见解和看法,从而展现与学生有关的校园生活经历及情感。
二、素材积累
【好词好句积累】
1.词汇积累
学科:
____________________________________________________________________________________________
常用动词:
____________________________________________________________________________________________
常用形容词:
____________________________________________________________________________________________
2.短语积累
学习:
____________________________________________________________________________________________
其他:
____________________________________________________________________________________________
句子积累
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
三、真题分析
(2017·苏州)假定你是苏华,你最近认识的英国笔友David给你发了一封电子邮件,想了解你初中三年来在学习和生活方面的一些收获、困惑和感受,请认真阅读下面的邮件,根据信中的内容及你的实际用英语回复
To:
suhua@china.
com
From:
davidsmith@
britain.
com
Subject:
School
life
Dear
Su
Hua,
Glad
to
hear
you're
graduating
from
junior
high
school.
I'm
interested
in
how
you
feel
about
those
three
years
of
school
life.
Would
you
please
tell
me
the
following
things?
What
do
you
like
best
about
your
school
life?
What's
the
biggest
problem
as
a
junior
student?
Who
has
helped
you
most?
And
why?
Do
you
enjoy
your
school
life?
Why
or
why
not?
I
look
forward
to
hearing
from
you
soon.
All
the
best,
David
注意:
1.词数90左右,开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数;一
2.回复须包括所有要点,可适当发挥,使全文连贯、通顺;
3.文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear
David,
Thank
you
so
much
for
your
email.
I'm
very
happy
to
tell
you
about
my
school
life.
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
How
about
your
school
life?
Write
to
me
soon.
Best
wishes,
Su
Hua
【审题思路】
1.这是一篇应用文,注意正确使用邮件格式;
2.根据自己的实际情况一一回答
David想要了解的内容;
3.可适当发挥,注意行文连贯,语句通顺。
【写作指导】
要点提示
素材串联
开头:直入主题
谈论学校生活(
tell
you
about
my
school
life)
正文:初中生活
1.最喜欢的事物及原因(football
club
best;
made
quite
a
few
friends;
chance
to
learn
team
spirit)
2.最大的问题(to
achieve
balance
between
my
schoolwork
and
my
hobbies)
3.谁对你的帮助最大及原因(my
English
teacher
always
comes
to
me)
结尾:感受及结束语
对初中生活的感受(enjoy;
colorful
and
meaningful;
write
to
me
soon)
【普通范文】
Dear
David,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
Best
wishes!
Su
Hua
【句子升格】
So
she
has
helped
me
most
in
junior
high
school.
who引导的定语从句改写句子)
____________________________________________________________________________________________
2.
I
enjoy
my
school
life
because
it's
colorful
and
meaningful.(用The
reason
why..
is
that…改写句子)
____________________________________________________________________________________________
【佳作赏析】
Dear
David,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
How
about
your
school
life?
Write
to
me
soon.
Best
wishes!
Su
Hua
四、实战演练
初中生活很快就要结束了。假如你们学校
English
Club邀请你写一篇演讲稿,给七年级新生学习和生活提几点建议。请参考以下要点,写一篇80词左右的英语短文。
1.初中科目很多,好的学习方法很重要;()od
2.锻炼身体,保持健康;
3.参加社团活动,使自己在学校的生活丰富多彩;
4.多读书,多交朋友。
【温馨提示】
1.此篇习作要求学生写一篇演讲稿,给七年级新生在学习和生活上提出自己的建议。
2.以第二人称进行叙述,时态以一般现在时为主。
3.根据自己的经验从四个方面提出自己的建议,可以使用can/should,并用
first
second
..
third
fourth贯穿全文。
4.最后提出自己的希望和祝愿。
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________中考高频话题写作指导（四）
--学校活动
一、话题解读
本话题主要是围绕学生的课堂活动,课余活动以及学习科目等。因此在书面表达的设题上,主要从介绍学生的日常学习活动和学科入手,并进一步阐述学生对这些事物的见解和看法,从而展现与学生有关的校园生活经历及情感。
二、素材积累
【好词好句积累】
1.词汇积累
学科:
Chinese,
English,math,
physics,
geography,
politics,
history,chemistry,p.e.,
science,
music,art
常用动词:
finish,end,
teach,last,
begin,
choose,
learn,join
常用形容词:
helpful,
interesting,
boring,
difficult,easy,
colorful,
rich,
lively
2.短语积累
学习:
be
good
at/do
well
in,
be
interested
in,
different
kinds
of,
help...
with,
make
great
progress
其他:
take
part
in,
after-school-
activities,
make
friends,have
a
break/rest,
do
more
sports,
get
into
trouble,
such
as
3.句子积累
I
am
lucky
to
study
in
this
beautiful
school.
I've
also
met
some
problems
over
the
three
years.
They
always
try
to
make
their
lessons
lively
and
interesting.
I
am
sure
you
will
learn
lot
and
you
will
find
it
very
interesting
at
the
same
time.
I
enjoy
my
school
life
because
it's
colorful
and
meaningful.
三、真题分析
(2017·苏州)假定你是苏华,你最近认识的英国笔友David给你发了一封电子邮件,想了解你初中三年来在学习和生活方面的一些收获、困惑和感受,请认真阅读下面的邮件,根据信中的内容及你的实际用英语回复
To:
suhua@china.
com
From:
davidsmith@
britain.
com
Subject:
School
life
Dear
Su
Hua,
Glad
to
hear
you're
graduating
from
junior
high
school.
I'm
interested
in
how
you
feel
about
those
three
years
of
school
life.
Would
you
please
tell
me
the
following
things?
What
do
you
like
best
about
your
school
life?
What's
the
biggest
problem
as
a
junior
student?
Who
has
helped
you
most?
And
why?
Do
you
enjoy
your
school
life?
Why
or
why
not?
I
look
forward
to
hearing
from
you
soon.
All
the
best,
David
注意:
1.词数90左右,开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数;一
2.回复须包括所有要点,可适当发挥,使全文连贯、通顺;
3.文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear
David,
Thank
you
so
much
for
your
email.
I'm
very
happy
to
tell
you
about
my
school
life.
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
How
about
your
school
life?
Write
to
me
soon.
Best
wishes,
Su
Hua
【审题思路】
1.这是一篇应用文,注意正确使用邮件格式;
2.根据自己的实际情况一一回答
David想要了解的内容;
3.可适当发挥,注意行文连贯,语句通顺。
【写作指导】
要点提示
素材串联
开头:直入主题
谈论学校生活(
tell
you
about
my
school
life)
正文:初中生活
1.最喜欢的事物及原因(football
club
best;
made
quite
a
few
friends;
chance
to
learn
team
spirit)
2.最大的问题(to
achieve
balance
between
my
schoolwork
and
my
hobbies)
3.谁对你的帮助最大及原因(my
English
teacher
always
comes
to
me)
结尾:感受及结束语
对初中生活的感受(enjoy;
colorful
and
meaningful;
write
to
me
soon)
【普通范文】
Dear
David,
Thank
you
so
much
for
your
email.
I'm
very
happy
to
tell
you
about
my
school
life.
I
like
the
football
club
best,
because
I've
made
quite
a
few
friends
by
joining
the
club.
And
it's
an
excellent
chance
to
learn
team
spirit.
However,
I've
also
met
some
problems
over
the
three
years.
The
biggest
one
is
how
to
achieve
a
balance
between
my
schoolwork
and
my
hobbies.
Whenever
I
am
in
great
need,
my
English
teacher
always
comes
to
me.
So
she
has
helped
me
most
in
junior
high
school.
All
in
all,
I
enjoy
my
school
life
because
it's
colorful
and
meaningful.
How
about
your
school
life?
Write
to
me
soon.
Best
wishes!
Su
Hua
【句子升格】
1.
So
she
has
helped
me
most
in
junior
high
school.
who引导的定语从句改写句子)
So
she
is
the
person
who
helped
me
most
in
junior
high
school
2.
I
enjoy
my
school
life
because
it's
colorful
and
meaningful.(用The
reason
why..
is
that…改写句子)
The
reason
why
I
enjoy
my
school
life
is
that
the
school
life
is
colorful
and
meaningful.
【佳作赏析】
Dear
David,
Thank
you
so
much
for
your
email.
I'm
very
happy
to
tell
you
about
my
school
life.I
like
the
football
club
best,
because
I've
made
quite
a
few
friends
by
joining
the
club.
And
it's
an
excellent
chance
to
learn
team
spirit.However,
I've
also
met
some
problems
over
the
three
years.
The
biggest
one
is
how
to
achieve
a
balance
between
my
schoolwork
and
my
hobbies.
Whenever
I
am
in
great
need,my
English
teacher
always
comes
to
me.
So
she
is
the
person
who
helped
me
most
in
junior
high
school.
All
in
all,
the
reason
why
I
enjoy
my
school
life
is
colorful
and
meaningful.
How
about
your
school
life?
Write
to
me
soon.
Best
wishes!
Su
Hua
四、实战演练
初中生活很快就要结束了。假如你们学校
English
Club邀请你写一篇演讲稿,给七年级新生学习和生活提几点建议。请参考以下要点,写一篇80词左右的英语短文。
1.初中科目很多,好的学习方法很重要;()od
2.锻炼身体,保持健康;
3.参加社团活动,使自己在学校的生活丰富多彩;
4.多读书,多交朋友。
【温馨提示】
1.此篇习作要求学生写一篇演讲稿,给七年级新生在学习和生活上提出自己的建议。
2.以第二人称进行叙述,时态以一般现在时为主。
3.根据自己的经验从四个方面提出自己的建议,可以使用can/should,并用
first
second
..
third
fourth贯穿全文。
4.最后提出自己的希望和祝愿。
Hello,
everyone!
You
are
new
students
here,
while
I
have
been
studying
here
for
over
two
years.
Today
I
want
to
give
you
some
suggestions
to
help
you
spend
meaningful
middle
school
life
First,
you
need
to
learn
many
subjects
and
it's
important
to
have
a
good
study
method.
You
know,
method
is
better
than
hard
work
sometimes.
Second,you
'd'
better
take
muck
exercise
if
you
want
to
keep
healthy.
Third,
you
can
join
your
favorite
clubs
and
take
part
in
some
interesting
activities.
And
you
will
find
your
school
life
colorful.
Fourth,
you
should
read
more
books
and
make
more
friends
You
will
get
knowledge
and
friendship
from
them,
which
will
help
you
a
lot
in
your
future
life.I
hope
all
of
the
above
will
be
helpful
to
you,
and
I
wish
you
happy
school
life.
