中考高频话题写作指导（七）
--安全与救护
一、话题解读
命题者一般会围绕考生熟悉的安全问题而进行设题,内容主要涉及校园安全、交通安全等问题,要求考生对校规、家规、交通规则等进行描写。要求注意祈使句、情态动词can和haveto等的用法。此类试题通常利用要点提示的方式来考查。
二、素材积累
【好词好句积累】
1.词汇积累
顺序:
____________________________________________________________________________________________
规则:
____________________________________________________________________________________________
事件:
____________________________________________________________________________________________
2.短语积累
顺序:
____________________________________________________________________________________________
规则:
____________________________________________________________________________________________
3.句子积累
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
三、真题分析
(2018·德州)树立自我保护意识,健康快乐地成长是每个青少年的必修课。下面是某地关心下一代工作委员会为青少年编写的《青少年自我保护、健康成长手册》的部分内容。作为一名中学生,写一篇文章,内容包括:①陈述你是怎样践行手册中提及的三条事项的;
②补充至少一条你认为重要的其他事项。
Improve
Child
Self-protection
Make
children
grow
healthily
About
traffic
rules
run
the
red
light
X
cross
the
zebra
walk(斑马线)√
About
food
eat
fruit
and
vegetables
√
eat
fast
food×
3.
About
making
friends
meet
strangers
alone
X
help
each
other√
要求:
1.语言通顺,要点齐全,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范;
2.文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称;
3.80-100词,文章开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Self-protection
is
one
of
the
most
important
skills
for
teenagers.
But
how
do
protect
myself
and
grow
up
healthily?Now
let
me
share
my
experience
and
ideas
with
you.
First,
always
obey
the
traffic
rules
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
In
short,
if
we
obey
the
rules
and
take
care
of
ourselves,we
will
grow
up
safely
and
healthily.
【审题思路】
细读所给的文字提示,提取以下信息:
1.介绍的是如何践行《青少年自我保护、健康成长手册》中的部分内容,因此文章为说明文。
2.写作时以第一人称为主,偶尔涉及第三人称。
3.介绍如何践行手册的部分内容,通常用一般现在时,偶尔涉及将来时。
4.词数80—100,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数,不得出现真实的人名和地名。
【写作指导】
要点提示
素材串联
开头:自我保护的重要性
自我保护对青少年来说是最重要的技能之一(one
of;
grow
up;
share
with..)
正文:分享自我保护的经历和想法
首先,遵守交通规则,不闯红灯(obey;traffic
rules;
always)
第二,健康安全地饮食(It's+adj.+to
do
sth.;
fast
food;
do
harm
to)
第三,不独自去见陌生人(alone;
on
the
Internet;
at
the
same
time;
each
other)
更重要的是,夏天不去游泳(It's+adj.+
for
sb.
to
do
sth.;
especially)
结尾:遵守规遵守规则,保护自己
遵守规则，照顾好自己,健康安全地成长(obey;
take
care
of;
safely
and
healthily)
【普通范文】
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
【句子升格】
1.
When
the
traffic
light
is
red,
I
won't
go.
I
will
go
after
it
turns
green.(用not.
until改写句子)
____________________________________________________________________________________________
2.
I
never
meet
strangers
alone.
I
make
some
friends
on
the
Internet,
but
never
meet
them.(用who引导的定语从句改写句子)
____________________________________________________________________________________________
【佳作赏析】
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
四、实战演练
3月26日是第二十三个全国中小学生安全教育日。今年安全教育日的主题是“普及安全知识,确保生命安全”。暑假即将来临,为了进一步增强中小学生的安全意识,提高自我保护能力,学校将举行以安全为主题的征文活动。请你根据下列表格内容写一篇题为“How
can
we
make
ourselves
safe?”的英语短文。
要点
内容
饮食安全
不吃变质食物,少吃或不吃垃圾食品。
交友安全
网上慎重交友,不和陌生人交谈。
旅行安全
照看好私人物品,遇险及时报警。
游泳安全
不独自游泳,不到河、湖里游泳。
.......
......
要求:
1.必须包含所给的全部要点及内容,可适当发挥;
2.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名;
3.字数80—100,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
提示词:
be
careful(小心),
go
bad(变质)
【温馨提示】
1.本文叙述如何保护自身安全,用一般现在时。
2.根据要点提示(饮食安全、交友安全、旅行安全、游泳安全)书写,必要时可作适当发挥。
3.句型主要是祈使句,并使用情态动词can和
have
to等。
How
can
we
make
ourselves
safe?
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________中考高频话题写作指导（七）
--安全与救护
一、话题解读
命题者一般会围绕考生熟悉的安全问题而进行设题,内容主要涉及校园安全、交通安全等问题,要求考生对校规、家规、交通规则等进行描写。要求注意祈使句、情态动词can和haveto等的用法。此类试题通常利用要点提示的方式来考查。
二、素材积累
【好词好句积累】
1.词汇积累
顺序:
first,
second,
third,
fourth,next,last,
finally
规则:can,can't,
should,
shouldn''t,must,
mustn''t,don't,
allow
事件:swim,
drive,
earthquake,fire,
safety,hurt
2.短语积累
顺序:
at
first,
first
of
all,
at
last,
last
but
not
least,
in
the
end
规则:be(not)
supposed
to,be(not)
allowed
to
do,had
better(not),
have
to,
be
(not)
expected
to
obey
traffic
rules,
how
to
protect
ourselves,
behave
well
in
public,
ask
for
help,
in
trouble/danger,
keep
calm
3.句子积累
You
are
(not)allowed
to
do
sth.
You
are
supposed/expected
to...
every
day.
If
you...you
will...
You'd
better...or...
In
a
word,
it
is
important
for
all
of
us
to
remember
these
rules.
三、真题分析
(2018·德州)树立自我保护意识,健康快乐地成长是每个青少年的必修课。下面是某地关心下一代工作委员会为青少年编写的《青少年自我保护、健康成长手册》的部分内容。作为一名中学生,写一篇文章,内容包括:①陈述你是怎样践行手册中提及的三条事项的;
②补充至少一条你认为重要的其他事项。
Improve
Child
Self-protection
Make
children
grow
healthily
About
traffic
rules
run
the
red
light
X
cross
the
zebra
walk(斑马线)√
About
food
eat
fruit
and
vegetables
√
eat
fast
food×
3.
About
making
friends
meet
strangers
alone
X
help
each
other√
要求:
1.语言通顺,要点齐全,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范;
2.文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称;
3.80-100词,文章开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Self-protection
is
one
of
the
most
important
skills
for
teenagers.
But
how
do
protect
myself
and
grow
up
healthily?Now
let
me
share
my
experience
and
ideas
with
you.
First,
always
obey
the
traffic
rules
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
In
short,
if
we
obey
the
rules
and
take
care
of
ourselves,we
will
grow
up
safely
and
healthily.
【审题思路】
细读所给的文字提示,提取以下信息:
1.介绍的是如何践行《青少年自我保护、健康成长手册》中的部分内容,因此文章为说明文。
2.写作时以第一人称为主,偶尔涉及第三人称。
3.介绍如何践行手册的部分内容,通常用一般现在时,偶尔涉及将来时。
4.词数80—100,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数,不得出现真实的人名和地名。
【写作指导】
要点提示
素材串联
开头:自我保护的重要性
自我保护对青少年来说是最重要的技能之一(one
of;
grow
up;
share
with..)
正文:分享自我保护的经历和想法
首先,遵守交通规则,不闯红灯(obey;traffic
rules;
always)
第二,健康安全地饮食(It's+adj.+to
do
sth.;
fast
food;
do
harm
to)
第三,不独自去见陌生人(alone;
on
the
Internet;
at
the
same
time;
each
other)
更重要的是,夏天不去游泳(It's+adj.+
for
sb.
to
do
sth.;
especially)
结尾:遵守规遵守规则,保护自己
遵守规则，照顾好自己,健康安全地成长(obey;
take
care
of;
safely
and
healthily)
【普通范文】
Self-protection
is
one
of
the
most
important
skills
for
teenagers.
But
how
do
protect
myself
and
grow
up
healthily?
Now
let
me
share
my
experience
and
ideas
with
you
First,
I
always
obey
the
traffic
rules
and
I
never
run
the
red
light.
When
the
traffic
light
is
red,
I
won't
go.
I
will
go
after
it
turns
green.
I
always
cross
the
zebra
walk
because
it's
safe.
Second,
I
often
eat
healthily
and
safely.
It's
important
to
eat
more
fruit
and
vegetables.
Eating
too
much
fast
food
will
do
harm
to
my
body.
Third,
I
never
meet
strangers
alone.
I
make
some
friends
on
the
Internet,
but
I
never
meet
them.
At
the
same
time
if
we
are
true
friends
we
should
help
each
other.
summer
is
coming,
it's
dangerous
some
advice.
Now
especially
in
deep
lakes
or
rivers.
So
don't
do
that.
In
short,
if
we
obey
the
rules
and
take
care
of
ourselves,
we
will
grow
up
safely
and
healthily
【句子升格】
1.
When
the
traffic
light
is
red,
I
won't
go.
I
will
go
after
it
turns
green.(用not.
until改写句子)
When
the
traffic
light
is
red,
I
won't
go
until
it
turns
green.
2.
I
never
meet
strangers
alone.
I
make
some
friends
on
the
Internet,
but
never
meet
them.(用who引导的定语从句改写句子)
I
never
meet
strangers
alone,
especially
friends
who
I
make
on
the
Internet.
【佳作赏析】
Self-protection
is
one
of
the
most
important
skills
fo
or
teenagers.
But
how
do
I
protect
myself
and
grow
up
healthily?
Now
let
me
share
my
experience
and
ideas
with
you.
First,
I
always
obey
the
traffic
rules
and
I
never
run
the
red
light.
When
the
traffic
light
is
red,
I
won't
go
until
it
turns
green.
I
always
cross
the
zebra
walk
because
it's
safe.
Second,
I
often
eat
healthily
and
safely.
It's
important
to
eat
more
fruit
and
vegetables.
Eating
too
much
fast
food
will
do
harm
to
my
body.
Third,
never
meet
strangers
alone,
especially
friends
who
I
make
on
the
Internet.
At
the
same
time
if
we
are
true
friends,
we
should
help
each
other.
What's
more,
I'd
like
to
give
you
some
advice.
Now
summer
is
coming,
it's
dangerous
for
us
to
swim
alone,
especially
in
deep
lakes
or
rivers.
So
don't
do
that.
In
short,
if
we
obey
the
rules
and
take
care
of
ourselves,
we
will
grow
up
safely
and
healthily.
四、实战演练
3月26日是第二十三个全国中小学生安全教育日。今年安全教育日的主题是“普及安全知识,确保生命安全”。暑假即将来临,为了进一步增强中小学生的安全意识,提高自我保护能力,学校将举行以安全为主题的征文活动。请你根据下列表格内容写一篇题为“How
can
we
make
ourselves
safe?”的英语短文。
要点
内容
饮食安全
不吃变质食物,少吃或不吃垃圾食品。
交友安全
网上慎重交友,不和陌生人交谈。
旅行安全
照看好私人物品,遇险及时报警。
游泳安全
不独自游泳,不到河、湖里游泳。
.......
......
要求:
1.必须包含所给的全部要点及内容,可适当发挥;
2.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名;
3.字数80—100,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
提示词:
be
careful(小心),
go
bad(变质)
【温馨提示】
1.本文叙述如何保护自身安全,用一般现在时。
2.根据要点提示(饮食安全、交友安全、旅行安全、游泳安全)书写,必要时可作适当发挥。
3.句型主要是祈使句,并使用情态动词can和
have
to等。
How
can
we
make
ourselves
safe?
As
teenagers,
to
learn
how
to
make
ourselves
safe
is
especially
important.
Here
are
some
of
my
suggestions.
First,
we
are
supposed
to
be
careful
when
making
friends
online,
which
may
bring
us
unnecessary
troubles.
Second,
remember
never
to
go
swimming
on
our
own
in
the
river
or
lake
because
doing
that
will
probably
put
ourselves
into
dangerous
situations.
Besides,
in
order
to
eat
healthily
and
safely.
we'd
better
eat
less
junk
food
and
not
eat
food
that
goes
bad,
for
they
will
do
harm
to
our
health.
At
last,
when
traveling
outside,
take
care
of
our
personal
things
and
call
the
police
for
help
in
time
if
we
are
in
danger.
In
short,
safety
must
come
first!
