中考高频话题写作指导（八）
--人际交往与沟通
一、话题解读
人际交往是中学生必修的社会学课程之一,本话题主要针对初中学生的生活交际特点,从问题与建议、发出和接受邀请、有礼貌地请求许可和询问信息、请求与提供帮助及合作与交流等几个方面设题;然后根据所学的知识展开论述,表达情感与态度。
二、素材积累
好词好句积累
1.词汇积累
友谊:
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人际:
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2.短语积累
友谊:
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交往:
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其他:
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句子积累
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
三、真题分析
(2018·黄石)假设你是李华,你的朋友刘明在学习、生活等方面遇到了一些问题和困难,所以他经常感到焦虑和郁闷请你根据以下内容给他发一封电子邮件,帮助他克服焦虑情绪,轻松、快乐地学习和生活。
内容包括:
1.每个人都会有苦恼、焦虑的时候;
2.一定要告诉别人你的烦恼;
3.遇到任何困难时,与同学交流或和老师、家长及时沟通;
4.可就如何轻松、快乐地学习和生活等适当发挥。
作文要求:
1.不得照抄原文,不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名;
2.语句连贯,词数80个左右。作文开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:焦虑的
anxious;与…沟通
communicate
with;变得轻松
get
relaxed;解决问题
solve
problems
Dear
Liu
Ming,
Everyone
man
feel
worried
or
sad
sometimes.
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li
Hua
【审题思路】
本文是一篇应用文,要求写一封建议信。
一封建议信通常包含三部分内容:开头(表明已获悉对方的烦恼并给予安慰)一主体(分析问题并提出建议)—结尾(给予鼓励)
3.用一般现在时态,可使用第一人称和第二人称。
【写作指导】
要点提示
素材串联
开头:已获悉对方的烦恼并给予安慰
人人都有烦恼(Everyone
may
feel..)
正文:分析问题并提出建议
1.向他人倾诉(you
can
tell
others)
2.与同学、老师或家长及时沟通(Its
good
to
communicate
with)
3.适当发挥(listening
to
music;
taking
part
in
outdoor
activities;
smile
at
yourself
and
never
keep
silent)
结尾:给予鼓励
能够克服困难(
believe
all
of
them
can
be
overcome
in
the
end.)
【普通范文】
Dear
Liu
Ming,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li
Hua
【句子升格】
1.
When
you
are
anxious,
you
can
tell
others.(用It
's'
all
right
to
do
sth.改写句子)
____________________________________________________________________________________________
2.
We
may
have
many
difficulties,
but
I
believe
all
of
them
can
be
overcome
in
the
end.(用No
matter
how改写句子)
____________________________________________________________________________________________
【佳作赏析】
Dear
Liu
Ming,
___________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li
Hua
四、实战演练
(2018·益阳)假如你叫王平,你的好朋友李明写信告诉你说他热爱科学,梦想成为一名科学家,但他不知道该怎么做才能实现自己的梦想。请你给他回一封信,提出你的一些建议。建议内容包括:上课认真听讲,努力学习各门功课,多阅读科学书籍,多向别人提问请教…
要求:
1.词数70左右,开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2.可适当增加细节,使行文连贯;
3.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息
参考词汇:
subject
science
question
keep
on
Dear
Li
Ming,
I'm
glad
to
know
that
you
want
to
be
a
scientist
when
you
grow
up.
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
I
hope
your
dream
will
come
true.
Yours
Nang
ping
【温馨提示】
1.向对方提建议,可用第二人称,用一般现在时。
2.建议要明确,具有合理性和说服性,注意措辞,慎用can't,must/mustn't't等带有命令语气的词。
3.所写内容要围绕题中所给的建议内容,注意层次,合理过渡。
Li
Ming,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
I
hope
your
dream
will
come
true.
ours,
Wang
Ping中考高频话题写作指导（八）
--人际交往与沟通
一、话题解读
人际交往是中学生必修的社会学课程之一,本话题主要针对初中学生的生活交际特点,从问题与建议、发出和接受邀请、有礼貌地请求许可和询问信息、请求与提供帮助及合作与交流等几个方面设题;然后根据所学的知识展开论述,表达情感与态度。
二、素材积累
好词好句积累
1.词汇积累
友谊:
friendship,
truth,
believe,
understand,love,help,
communicate,
moved
人际:kind,talk,
argue,
friendly,
unforgettable,
story,
pleasant,
important,
share,
happiness,
feeling
2.短语积累
友谊:
be
friendly
to,
tell
the
truth,
believe
in
in
one
's
life,
between..
and...,
help
each
other,
communicate
with,for
ever
交往:
talk
with,
argue
with,
happen
to,
share
with,the
feeling
of,
with
the
help
of,
look
forward
to
其他:
not...
any
more,
fall
behind,
no
matter
3.句子积累
After
reading
your
letter,
I
feel
sorry
to
learn
that...
You'
'd
better
What/How
about...?
It's
best
for
you
to..
I
do
hope
my
advice
can
be
helpful
to
you.
Whatever
you
decide
to
do,
good
luck
to
you!
三、真题分析
(2018·黄石)假设你是李华,你的朋友刘明在学习、生活等方面遇到了一些问题和困难,所以他经常感到焦虑和郁闷请你根据以下内容给他发一封电子邮件,帮助他克服焦虑情绪,轻松、快乐地学习和生活。
内容包括:
1.每个人都会有苦恼、焦虑的时候;
2.一定要告诉别人你的烦恼;
3.遇到任何困难时,与同学交流或和老师、家长及时沟通;
4.可就如何轻松、快乐地学习和生活等适当发挥。
作文要求:
1.不得照抄原文,不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名;
2.语句连贯,词数80个左右。作文开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:焦虑的
anxious;与…沟通
communicate
with;变得轻松
get
relaxed;解决问题
solve
problems
Dear
Liu
Ming,
Everyone
man
feel
worried
or
sad
sometimes.
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li
Hua
【审题思路】
本文是一篇应用文,要求写一封建议信。
一封建议信通常包含三部分内容:开头(表明已获悉对方的烦恼并给予安慰)一主体(分析问题并提出建议)—结尾(给予鼓励)
3.用一般现在时态,可使用第一人称和第二人称。
【写作指导】
要点提示
素材串联
开头:已获悉对方的烦恼并给予安慰
人人都有烦恼(Everyone
may
feel..)
正文:分析问题并提出建议
1.向他人倾诉(you
can
tell
others)
2.与同学、老师或家长及时沟通(Its
good
to
communicate
with)
3.适当发挥(listening
to
music;
taking
part
in
outdoor
activities;
smile
at
yourself
and
never
keep
silent)
结尾:给予鼓励
能够克服困难(
believe
all
of
them
can
be
overcome
in
the
end.)
【普通范文】
Dear
Liu
Ming,
Everyone
may
feel
worried
or
sad
sometimes.
When
you
are
anxious,
you
can
tell
others.
It's
good
to
communicate
with
your
classmates,
teachers
or
parents
when
you
are
in
trouble.
Thus,
you
can
solve
the
problems
from
study
or
life
easily.
Listening
to
music
or
taking
part
in
outdoor
activities
is
another
way
to
help
you
get
relaxed.
Try
to
smile
at
yourself
and
never
keep
silent
about
your
problems
Please
do
remember:
you're
not
alone.
We
may
have
many
difficulties,
but
believe
all
of
them
can
be
overcome
in
the
end.
Yours,
Li
Hua
【句子升格】
1.
When
you
are
anxious,
you
can
tell
others.(用It
's'
all
right
to
do
sth.改写句子)
It's
all
right
to
tell
others
when
you
are
anxious
2.
We
may
have
many
difficulties,
but
I
believe
all
of
them
can
be
overcome
in
the
end.(用No
matter
how改写句子)
No
matter
how
many
difficulties
we
have,
I
believe
all
of
them
can
be
overcome
in
the
end.
【佳作赏析】
Dear
Liu
Ming,
Everyone
may
feel
worried
or
sad
sometimes.
It's
all
right
to
tell
others
when
you
are
anxious.
It's
good
to
communicate
with
your
classmates,
teachers
or
parents
when
you
are
in
trouble.
Thus,
you
can
solve
the
problems
from
study
or
life
easily.
Listening
to
music
or
taking
part
in
out
door
activities
is
another
way
to
help
you
get
relaxed.
Try
to
smile
at
yourself
and
never
keep
silent
about
your
problems.
Please
do
remember:
you're
not
alone.
No
matter
how
many
difficulties
we
have,
I
believe
all
of
them
can
be
overcome
in
the
end.
Yours,
Li
Hua
四、实战演练
(2018·益阳)假如你叫王平,你的好朋友李明写信告诉你说他热爱科学,梦想成为一名科学家,但他不知道该怎么做才能实现自己的梦想。请你给他回一封信,提出你的一些建议。建议内容包括:上课认真听讲,努力学习各门功课,多阅读科学书籍,多向别人提问请教…
要求:
1.词数70左右,开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2.可适当增加细节,使行文连贯;
3.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息
参考词汇:
subject
science
question
keep
on
Dear
Li
Ming,
I'm
glad
to
know
that
you
want
to
be
a
scientist
when
you
grow
up.
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
I
hope
your
dream
will
come
true.
Yours
Nang
ping
【温馨提示】
1.向对方提建议,可用第二人称,用一般现在时。
2.建议要明确,具有合理性和说服性,注意措辞,慎用can't,must/mustn't't等带有命令语气的词。
3.所写内容要围绕题中所给的建议内容,注意层次,合理过渡。
Li
Ming,
I'm
glad
to
know
that
you
want
to
be
a
scientist
when
you
grow
up.
Though
there
are
different
ways
to
success,
but
almost
all
the
winners
have
something
in
common.
Here
are
some
of
my
ideas
about
how
to
realize
your
dream.
First,
you
should
listen
to
your
teachers
carefully
in
class.
It
is
the
basic
to
be
good
at
your
lessons.
Second,
try
to
do
well
in
all
your
subjects,
especially
science.
In
your
free
time,
you
can
also
read
some
science
books.
It
helps
develop
your
interests
in
science
and
open
your
eyes
to
the
world
Third,
don't
feel
shy
to
ask
for
help
from
others.
Remember:
Two
heads
are
always
better
than
one.
I
hope
your
dream
will
come
true.
ours,
Wang
Ping
