中考高频话题写作指导（十一）
--旅游与交通
一、话题解读
命题者一般是针对学校组织的集体外出活动来设计试题,要求考生对活动的过程、所见所闻以及自身感受进行描述。通常会涉及旅行目的、旅行地点、必备物品、出发时间、出行方式及旅行路线(包括问路和使用地图)等。此类试题通常以文字、图画提示或者表格提示的方式来考查。这类文章多用一般过去式。
二、素材积累
【好词好句积累】
1.词汇积累
旅游:
____________________________________________________________________________________________
交通:
____________________________________________________________________________________________
物品:
____________________________________________________________________________________________
2.短语积累
__________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
经历:
____________________________________________________________________________________________
句子积累
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
三、真题分析
(2018·张家界)你班将于本周六组织同学们去张家界国家森林公园进行科普小活动。请你根据下面的提示,以班长李华的名义给同学们发布一则通知。
Scientific
activities
in
Zhangjiajie
forest
park
How
to
get
there:●
by
bus
When
to
meet:●at8:00am.
When
to
return:●at3:30pm
What
to
do:
●listen
to
a
talk
about
the
Forest
Park
●know
about
plants
and
take
notes
Where
to
meet:
●eat
the
school
gate
要求:
1.内容必须包括所提示的信息,可适当发挥;
2.文中不能出现自己的真实姓名和学校名称;
3.不少于80词(文章开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)
Dear
classmates,
May
I
have
your
attention
please?
We
will
have
scientific
activities
in
Zhangjiajie
Forest
Park
this
Saturday.
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
That's
all.
Thank
you!
【审题思路】
1.该篇作文为一则通知,属于应用文。
2.认真阅读图表,通知内容要涵盖所有要点(时间、地点、交通方式及要做的事情)
3.通知的内容都涉及将来的事情,应该用第一人称和一般将来时态。
【写作指导】
要点提示
素材串联
开头:提出话题
去张家界国家森林公园进行科普小活动(We
will
have
scientific
activities...
正文:具体内容
1.时间(meet
at8:00a.m.;
return
at3:30p.m.)
2.地点(meet
at
the
school
gate)
3.交通方式(by
bus)
4.要做的事情(listen
to
talk
about
the
forest
park;
know
about
plants
and
take
notes)
结尾:致谢
That
‘s
all.
Thank
you!
【普通范文】
Dear
classmates,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
That's
all.
Thank
you!
【句子升格】
1.
What
will
we
do
there?
Do
you
want
to
know?(合并为含宾语从句的复合句)
____________________________________________________________________________________________
2.
We
are
going
to
listen
to
a
talk
about
the
forest
park.
So
we
can
know
more
about
Zhangjiajie
Forest
Park.
(in
order
to将两句合并为一句)
____________________________________________________________________________________________
【佳作赏析】
Dear
classmates,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
That's
all.
Thank
you!
四、实战演练
假如你是你们班的班长李明,你将帮忙安排你们班的外教的儿子Tom来武汉的活动。请用电子邮件告知他。
要点:
1.参观城市博物馆,了解武汉文化;
2.走进课堂,交流学校生活;
3.去东湖划船,欣赏风景;
4.在家举办朋友聚会,品尝美食;
5.补充一至两点个人想法。
要求:
1.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称
2.内容连贯,不要逐条翻译;
3.词数60-80(邮件的格式已给出,不计入总词数)
参考词汇:
City
Museum城市博物馆;
East
Lake湖;view
景色
【温馨提示】
1.本文为电子邮件,注意应用文格式
2.根据要点提示介绍所有活动内容,并注意适当发挥,尤其要添加一两点个人想法。
3.词数为60-80,时态以一般将来时为主,也会用到一般现在时。
Hi
Tom,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours
Li
Ming中考高频话题写作指导（十一）
--旅游与交通
一、话题解读
命题者一般是针对学校组织的集体外出活动来设计试题,要求考生对活动的过程、所见所闻以及自身感受进行描述。通常会涉及旅行目的、旅行地点、必备物品、出发时间、出行方式及旅行路线(包括问路和使用地图)等。此类试题通常以文字、图画提示或者表格提示的方式来考查。这类文章多用一般过去式。
二、素材积累
【好词好句积累】
1.词汇积累
旅游:
travel,trip,
visit,
scenery,
beautiful,
attractive,
wonderful,
meaningful,
famous,
relax
交通:bus,ride,
train,taxi,walk,
plane
物品:
camera,
clothes,
water,food,
shoes,
phone,tent,
photo,watch,
backpack
2.短语积累
on
a
trip/visit
to,
places
of
interest,
one
of...,on
vacation,
on
holiday,
have
good
time/enjoy
oneself
经历:
take
bus,
get
together,
eat
delicious
food,
sing
and
dance,
take
photos,
meet
foreigners,
talk
with
each
other,enjoy
doing
sth.
little
tired
but
happy
3.句子积累
My
school
trip
was
great/good/wonderful.
We
went
to
...with
We
went
to..
by
bus.
/We
took
a
bus
to...
We
took
quite
a
few/a
lot
of
photos
there.
I'd
like
to
go
somewhere
quiet/relaxing/interesting..
It
was
fun/interesting/relaxing..
to
do
sth.
We
stayed
there
for..
三、真题分析
(2018·张家界)你班将于本周六组织同学们去张家界国家森林公园进行科普小活动。请你根据下面的提示,以班长李华的名义给同学们发布一则通知。
Scientific
activities
in
Zhangjiajie
forest
park
How
to
get
there:●
by
bus
When
to
meet:●at8:00am.
When
to
return:●at3:30pm
What
to
do:
●listen
to
a
talk
about
the
Forest
Park
●know
about
plants
and
take
notes
Where
to
meet:
●eat
the
school
gate
要求:
1.内容必须包括所提示的信息,可适当发挥;
2.文中不能出现自己的真实姓名和学校名称;
3.不少于80词(文章开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)
Dear
classmates,
May
I
have
your
attention
please?
We
will
have
scientific
activities
in
Zhangjiajie
Forest
Park
this
Saturday.
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
That's
all.
Thank
you!
【审题思路】
1.该篇作文为一则通知,属于应用文。
2.认真阅读图表,通知内容要涵盖所有要点(时间、地点、交通方式及要做的事情)
3.通知的内容都涉及将来的事情,应该用第一人称和一般将来时态。
【写作指导】
要点提示
素材串联
开头:提出话题
去张家界国家森林公园进行科普小活动(We
will
have
scientific
activities...
正文:具体内容
1.时间(meet
at8:00a.m.;
return
at3:30p.m.)
2.地点(meet
at
the
school
gate)
3.交通方式(by
bus)
4.要做的事情(listen
to
talk
about
the
forest
park;
know
about
plants
and
take
notes)
结尾:致谢
That
‘s
all.
Thank
you!
【普通范文】
Dear
classmates,
May
I
have
your
attention
please?
We
will
have
scientific
activities
in
Zhangjiajie
Forest
Park
this
Saturday.We
are
going
to
meet
at
the
school
gate
at
8:
00
in
the
morning,
and
we
will
go
there
by
bus.
What
will
we
do
there?
Do
you
want
to
know?
Now,
let
me
tell
you.
First,
we
are
going
to
listen
to
a
talk
about
the
forest
park.
So
we
can
know
more
about
Zhangjiajie
Forest
Park.
Then
we
will
go
to
the
forest
to
know
about
plants.
We
should
take
some
notes
about
what
we
learn.
During
the
free
time,
we
can
take
a
lot
of
photos
with
our
classmates.
Finally,
we
will
return
at
3:
00
in
the
afternoon.
That's
all.
Thank
you!
【句子升格】
1.
What
will
we
do
there?
Do
you
want
to
know?(合并为含宾语从句的复合句)
Do
you
want
to
know
what
we
will
do
there?
2.
We
are
going
to
listen
to
a
talk
about
the
forest
park.
So
we
can
know
more
about
Zhangjiajie
Forest
Park.
(in
order
to将两句合并为一句)
We
are
going
to
listen
to
a
talk
about
the
forest
park
in
order
to
know
more
about
Zhangjiajie
Forest
Park.
【佳作赏析】
Dear
classmates,
May
I
have
your
attention
please?
We
will
have
scientific
activities
in
Zhangjiajie
Forest
Park
this
Saturday.
We
are
going
to
meet
at
the
school
gate
at
8,
00
in
the
morning,
and
we
will
go
there
by
bus.
Do
you
want
to
know
what
we
will
do
there?
Now,
let
me
tell
you.
First,
we
are
going
to
listen
to
a
talk
about
the
forest
park
in
order
to
know
more
about
Zhangjiajie
Forest
Park.
Then
we
will
go
to
the
forest
to
know
about
plants.
We
should
take
some
notes
about
what
we
learn.
During
the
free
time,
we
can
take
lot
of
photos
with
our
classmates.
Finally,
we
will
return
at3:00
in
the
afternoon.
That's
all.
Thank
you!
四、实战演练
假如你是你们班的班长李明,你将帮忙安排你们班的外教的儿子Tom来武汉的活动。请用电子邮件告知他。
要点:
1.参观城市博物馆,了解武汉文化;
2.走进课堂,交流学校生活;
3.去东湖划船,欣赏风景;
4.在家举办朋友聚会,品尝美食;
5.补充一至两点个人想法。
要求:
1.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称
2.内容连贯,不要逐条翻译;
3.词数60-80(邮件的格式已给出,不计入总词数)
参考词汇:
City
Museum城市博物馆;
East
Lake湖;view
景色
【温馨提示】
1.本文为电子邮件,注意应用文格式
2.根据要点提示介绍所有活动内容,并注意适当发挥,尤其要添加一两点个人想法。
3.词数为60-80,时态以一般将来时为主,也会用到一般现在时。
Hi
Tom,
I'm
glad
to
hear
that
you'll
come
to
Wuhan.
Wuhan
is
a
beautiful
city
full
of
culture
and
history.
Visiting
City
Museum
is
a
good
way
to
learn
about
Wuhan.
We
can
go
boating
in
East
Lake
and
enjoy
the
fascinating
views.
Then
we'll
invite
you
to
our
class
and
talk
about
school
life
friends
and
I
will
have
a
party
for
you
at
my
home.
And
you
can
taste
our
traditional
food
as
well.
If
possible,
you
may
watch
Han
Show.
Hope
you'll
have
fun
here.
Yours
Li
Ming
