中考高频话题写作指导（十二）
--物品介绍
一、话题解读
该话题主要围绕物品介绍命题。内容以新发明介绍和礼物介绍为主,包括物品的外形、发明者、发明的时间、用途、意义和礼物的来源及意义等,让考生在掌握描述一件物品的技能的同时更好地提高学习英语的积极性。
二、素材积累
【好词好句积累】
1.词汇积累
外观：
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用途:
____________________________________________________________________________________________
特点:
____________________________________________________________________________________________
改进:
____________________________________________________________________________________________
2.短语积累
用途:
____________________________________________________________________________________________
特点:
____________________________________________________________________________________________
其他:
____________________________________________________________________________________________
句子积累
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
三、真题分析
(2017·广州)假如你发明的“飞行单车”在学校科技节中获奖,被推荐参加一个国际青少年科技展览。请用英语介绍你的发明,内容包括下图中1-4项。
飞行单车
1.外观:两个轮子,两只翅膀
2.用途:行驶于地面和空中、可拍照、能对话
3.特点:速度快、使用太阳能、环保
4.改进计划:(1~2点)
注意:
1.参考词汇:轮子wheel太阳能
solar
power;
2.词数80左右(文章的开头已给出,不计入词数);
3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
My
invention
is
a
flying
bike.
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________
【审题思路】
本文要求写出飞行单车的外观、用途和特点,还要提出自己的改进计划,是夹叙夹议的说明文。
2.重点写飞行单车的外观、用途和特点。
3.时态以一般现在时为主。
【写作指导】
要点提示
素材串联
开头:介绍发明
a
flying
bike
正文:具体介绍
1.外观:
two
wheels
and
a
pair
of
wings
2.用途:
ride
on
the
ground
and
in
the
air;
3.特点:
high
speed;
solar
power;
energy;
environmentally-friendly
结尾:改进计划
use
a
light
material
【普通范文】
________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
【句子升格】
1.
It
is
a
special
bike
and
it
has
two
wheels
and
a
pair
of
wings.(用with改为含有伴随状语的句子)
____________________________________________________________________________________________
2.
Besides,
you
can
take
pictures
of
the
beautiful
scenery
and
communicate
with
others
when
using
the
flying
bike.(用
not
only...
but
also改写句子
____________________________________________________________________________________________
【佳作赏析】
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
四、实战演练
(2018·东营)在你的成长历程中,一定收到过礼物。有件礼物不一定贵重,但是在你看来却非常珍贵。
某英语杂志以“
Precious
Present(一件珍贵的礼物)”为题举办征文活动,请写一篇短文,跟大家分享。内容包括:
1.这件礼物是什么?
2.你为什么觉得它珍贵?
3.它背后有什么故事?
要求:
1.100词左右;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名及校名。
【温馨提示】
1.本文是一篇记叙文,介绍自己收到的一件珍贵的礼物,用第一人称。
2.涉及过去的事件应该用一般过去时。
3.围绕三个问题展开写作:礼物是什么;珍贵的原因;背后的故事。
4.注意表达准确,文意连贯。
A
Precious
Present
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________中考高频话题写作指导（十二）
--物品介绍
一、话题解读
该话题主要围绕物品介绍命题。内容以新发明介绍和礼物介绍为主,包括物品的外形、发明者、发明的时间、用途、意义和礼物的来源及意义等,让考生在掌握描述一件物品的技能的同时更好地提高学习英语的积极性。
二、素材积累
【好词好句积累】
1.词汇积累
外观：special,
bike,
wheels,
wings,
wide,
height
用途:
drive,
ground,air,
photos,talk,create
特点:fast,
environmentally-friendly,
technology
改进:
light,iron,high,
quality,
frame,
large,
possible
2.短语积累
用途:
both
and,
on
the
ground,
in
the
air,
take
photos,
talk
with,
be
used
to
do
sth.
特点:
be
driven
by,
solar
energy
light
iron,
high
quality,
as
large
as
possible
其他:
by
oneself,
in
one's'
spare
time
3.句子积累
They
are
used
for
posting
letters.
The
kind
of
machine
was
made
in
Beijing.
It
is
believed
to
be
the
most
.
invention
because..
It
is
playing
an
important
part
in
our
daily
life.
With
the
development
of
science
and
technology,
our
life
has
been
changed
by
some
great
inventions.
三、真题分析
(2017·广州)假如你发明的“飞行单车”在学校科技节中获奖,被推荐参加一个国际青少年科技展览。请用英语介绍你的发明,内容包括下图中1-4项。
飞行单车
1.外观:两个轮子,两只翅膀
2.用途:行驶于地面和空中、可拍照、能对话
3.特点:速度快、使用太阳能、环保
4.改进计划:(1~2点)
注意:
1.参考词汇:轮子wheel太阳能
solar
power;
2.词数80左右(文章的开头已给出,不计入词数);
3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
My
invention
is
a
flying
bike.
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
【审题思路】
本文要求写出飞行单车的外观、用途和特点,还要提出自己的改进计划,是夹叙夹议的说明文。
2.重点写飞行单车的外观、用途和特点。
3.时态以一般现在时为主。
【写作指导】
要点提示
素材串联
开头:介绍发明
a
flying
bike
正文:具体介绍
1.外观:
two
wheels
and
a
pair
of
wings
2.用途:
ride
on
the
ground
and
in
the
air;
3.特点:
high
speed;
solar
power;
energy;
environmentally-friendly
结尾:改进计划
use
a
light
material
【普通范文】
My
invention
is
a
flying
bike.
It
is
a
special
bike
and
it
has
two
wheels
and
a
pair
of
wings.
You
can
either
ride
the
bike
on
the
ground
or
fly
it
in
the
air.
Besides,
you
can
take
pictures
of
the
beautiful
scenery
and
communicate
with
others
when
using
the
flying
bike.
The
flying
bike
has
its
advantages.
Firstly,
its
high
speed
can
help
you
reach
somewhere
quickly.
Secondly,
the
flying
bike
uses
solar
power
as
energy,
which
can
reduce
air
pollution
Therefore,
it
is
environmentally-friendly
to
use
the
flying
bike.
What's
more,
the
flying
bike
will
be
improved
by
being
made
of
a
light
material
so
that
people
can
carry
it
conveniently.
I
believe
it
will
be
popular
in
the
future.
【句子升格】
1.
It
is
a
special
bike
and
it
has
two
wheels
and
a
pair
of
wings.(用with改为含有伴随状语的句子)
It
is
a
special
bike
with
two
wheels
and
a
pair
of
wings
2.
Besides,
you
can
take
pictures
of
the
beautiful
scenery
and
communicate
with
others
when
using
the
flying
bike.(用
not
only...
but
also改写句子
Besides,
you
can
not
only
take
pictures
of
the
beautiful
scenery
but
also
communicate
with
others
when
using
the
flying
bike.
【佳作赏析】
My
invention
is
a
flying
bike.
It
is
a
special
bike
with
two
wheels
and
a
pair
of
wings.
You
can
either
ride
the
bike
on
the
ground
or
fly
it
in
the
air.
Besides,
you
can
not
only
take
pictures
of
the
beautiful
scenery
but
also
communicate
with
others
when
using
the
flying
bike.
The
flying
bike
has
its
advantages.
Firstly,
its
high
speed
can
help
you
reach
somewhere
quickly.
Secondly,
the
flying
bike
uses
solar
power
as
energy
which
can
reduce
air
pollution.
Therefore,
it
is
environmentally-
to
use
the
flying
bike.
What's
more,
the
flying
bike
will
be
improved
by
being
made
of
a
light
material
so
that
people
can
carry
it
conveniently.
I
believe
it
will
be
popular
in
the
future.
四、实战演练
(2018·东营)在你的成长历程中,一定收到过礼物。有件礼物不一定贵重,但是在你看来却非常珍贵。
某英语杂志以“
Precious
Present(一件珍贵的礼物)”为题举办征文活动,请写一篇短文,跟大家分享。内容包括:
1.这件礼物是什么?
2.你为什么觉得它珍贵?
3.它背后有什么故事?
要求:
1.100词左右;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名及校名。
【温馨提示】
1.本文是一篇记叙文,介绍自己收到的一件珍贵的礼物,用第一人称。
2.涉及过去的事件应该用一般过去时。
3.围绕三个问题展开写作:礼物是什么;珍贵的原因;背后的故事。
4.注意表达准确,文意连贯。
A
Precious
Present
I
have
received
lots
of
presents
so
far.
Among
the
presents,
the
most
precious
one
I've
received
is
a
book.
five
years
ago,
I
hurt
my
legs
because
of
an
accident.
So
had
to
stay
at
home
for
a
few
months
and
I
fell
behind
others.
My
good
friend,
Jack,
gave
a
book
written
by
Nick
who
was
without
arms
or
legs.
The
book
encouraged
me
not
to
be
afraid
of
difficulties.
Later,
my
study
got
better
and
better,
bu
Jack
moved
to
another
city.
Whenever
I
look
at
the
book,
I
think
of
my
friend
Jack
The
book
not
only
shows
friendship
between
us,
but
also
tells
me
not
to
give
up
easily.
I'll
keep
it
forever.
