2022届高考英语读后续写精读精炼（二十一）
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2022届高考英语读后续写精读精炼（二十一）
目录 内容
Part A 读后续写模考经典原文
Part B 读后续写思路引导
Part C 写作优秀句式翻译
Part D 篇章写作润色
Part E 课后练笔巩固提升
Part A 读后续写模考经典原文
My best friend's mother was a social worker in Detroit, Michigan. Because of that, my friend Victoria and I were introduced early to the world of volunteering.
We did plenty of charity(慈善) work. We always had a good time, and continued to volunteer whenever we had time, often even when we didn't. It became second nature. Hairstyles came and went, but Victoria and I found places to donate our time because that's how we were raised.
One particular morning we signed up for "Paint the Town",an organization in Detroit to help low?income homeowners clean their houses. We were assigned(分配) a dilapidated(破烂的) house in one of the worst communities of the city. I was afraid as we got near to the front door, not knowing who we would find on the other side. We knocked three times quickly and stepped back, waiting to be let in.
When the door opened, my mouth did, too. Standing there was a little old lady with wisps(一束) of white hair and a purple apron(围裙) tied around her waist.
"Hello" she said, "I'm Amelia. Please come in and I will show you where to start."Her smile shone brightly. “I am just baking some cookies for you girls to eat.”
As she led us to the parts of her house that needed painting, my heart softened. Here was one of the scariest? looking houses in the city, but behind its doors was a sweet old lady with a cane and a big smile.
Here we were coming to help her, and instead she was doing something for us—baking homemade cookies and serving us tea!
注意:(1)续写词数应为150左右；
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
There was no age barrier that day as we worked on Amelia's house.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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“Nonsense！” she criticized(批评).
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Part B 读后续写思路引导
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了我和我的朋友维多利亚在她的母亲的影响下接触了志愿服务的世界。我们做了大量的慈善工作。我们报名参加了“粉刷城镇”，这是底特律一个帮助低收入房主清洁房屋的组织。我们被分配一个在城市的最糟糕的一个社区。但主人却是一个和蔼的老太太，我们在帮她的时候，她也在为我们做些事情，自制了曲奇饼，并端茶给我们喝。
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“那天我们为阿米莉亚的房子工作，没有年龄障碍。”可知，第一段可描写作者和她的朋友和老奶奶相处的很好，交流了很多话题。
②由第二段首句内容“胡说!” 她批评道。可知，第二段可描写老奶奶的见解和看法，以及对作者的影响。
2.续写线索：帮刷墙——款待——交流——可怜——被嘲笑——见解
3.词汇激活
行为类
①一起走路：get near/accompany him/keep her company
②.回家：go back home/return home
③.拒绝：shake his head/decline/refuse politely/laugh at
情绪类
①.感谢：showing his appreciation/show his gratitude/be grateful
②.积极：positive attitude/act positively/keep it up
Part C 写作优秀句式翻译
那天我们在阿米莉亚家工作时，没有年龄障碍。
阿米莉亚呆在附近，在我们画画时和我们交谈，告诉我们她的祖国爱尔兰，以及她是如何来到底特律的。
我为她住在附近这么可怜的地方感到很难过。
当我这样告诉她的时候，她嘲笑我。
胡话！她批评道（批评）。
“这是我的房子，即使它在我周围倒塌了。
我感到很高兴你们这些女孩来帮我解决这个问题。
我在这里很高兴。我看到了社区的变化，看到了人们来来又去，但我总是留下来。
我们可能在外部都有所不同，但在内部上，我们都在追求同一件事——社区。
没有什么比帮助别人更让你高兴的了。
当我在城里的不同地方做志愿者时，她对我说的话重回我脑海了。
参考答案：
There was no age barrier that day as we worked on Amelia's house.
Amelia stayed close by, talking to us as we painted, telling us about her native Ireland and how she came to Detroit.
I felt so sad for her living in such a poor part of the neighborhood with no one to keep her company.
When I told her so, she laughed at me.
“Nonsense！” she criticized( 批评).
“This is my house even if it is falling down around me.
I feel blessed that you girls came to help fix it up.
I'm happy here. I've watched the neighborhood change, and seen people come and go, but I always stay.
We may all be different on the outside, but on the inside, we are all just after the same thing—community.
Keep it up. Nothing will make you happier than helping other people.”
What she said to me replayed itself as I volunteered in different parts of the town.
Part D 篇章写作润色
There was no age barrier that day as we worked on Amelia's house. Amelia stayed close by, talking to us as we painted, telling us about her native Ireland and how she came to Detroit. I felt so sad for her living in such a poor part of the neighborhood with no one to keep her company. When I told her so, she laughed at me.
“Nonsense！” she criticized( 批评). “This is my house even if it is falling down around me. I feel blessed that you girls came to help fix it up. I'm happy here. I've watched the neighborhood change, and seen people come and go, but I always stay. We may all be different on the outside, but on the inside, we are all just after the same thing—community. Keep it up. Nothing will make you happier than helping other people.”What she said to me replayed itself as I volunteered in different parts of the town.
Part E 课后练笔巩固提升 .
Several years ago, I was living in New York and working for an airline, so I never got back home for Christmas. My Christmas was happy too with some other colleagues around. But in my heart I was sad because I couldn’t stay with my family. Sometimes my colleagues would say our Christmas was filled with tears. But this Christmas was different. I was lucky. I had the whole day off, which meant I could stay with my family on Christmas Eve.
When Christmas morning came, I awoke to a small hand rubbing my face. “Dad, Merry Christmas!” was all my younger son had time to say. He seemed to be racing against time. I knew he was hunting for gifts with his brother eagerly. I got downstairs just to see the two little boys’ faces as they looked at the pocket rockets Santa Claus had left them. I realized that the real Christmas was for the children who had deep belief in the amazing power of Santa Claus. At first, their fingers went almost shyly over their toys. When their inspection (检查) had been completed, the two boys ensured that the gifts were really delivered by Santa Claus and they dragged everything into the center of the living room.
Delight flooded the room. As their mother began giving out gifts, I smiled to myself, wondering how my unexpected gifts this year would be received. With so many Christmas spent outside, I had prepared so many gifts for my children and together with my wife I hid them in several secret places. But the children were excellent detectives and they found all of them. They were happily opening packages constantly thanking considerate Santa Claus for his kindness and ability to know their desires. But I had not received a single one. I knew they had forgotten my existence with my absence from their Christmas these years.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右；
2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
Paragraph 1:
I had to admit that my disappointment was growing steadily.
__________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph 2:
Suddenly my wife walked up to me.
__________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
参考答案：
Paragraph l:
I had to admit that my disappointment was growing steadily. I was wondering whether I could get a gift when my younger son ran to me, who was really kind enough to save my face. He asked me to admire his gift which he deeply believed was carefully chosen by Santa Claus. Hesaid happily that he would share some of the gifts of his and allow me to choose one from them. I thanked him from the bottom of my heart, still feeling disappointed.
Paragraph 2:
Suddenly my wife walked up to me. It seemed that she had guessed how I felt. She asked me to look at the Christmas tree which was decorated with so many boxes. I think she was showing off her efforts on the decoration but she took off a small box and passed it to me smiling and saying it was for me. I opened it and saw a letter which read We will never forget you. Merry Christmas! Under the letter was a watch which was clicking with delight. I was moved to tears.
_21?????????è?????(www.21cnjy.com)_
2022届高考英语读后续写精读精炼（二十一）
目录 内容
Part A 读后续写模考经典原文
Part B 读后续写思路引导
Part C 写作优秀句式翻译
Part D 篇章写作润色
Part E 课后练笔巩固提升
Part A 读后续写模考经典原文
My best friend's mother was a social worker in Detroit, Michigan. Because of that, my friend Victoria and I were introduced early to the world of volunteering.
We did plenty of charity(慈善) work. We always had a good time, and continued to volunteer whenever we had time, often even when we didn't. It became second nature. Hairstyles came and went, but Victoria and I found places to donate our time because that's how we were raised.
One particular morning we signed up for "Paint the Town",an organization in Detroit to help low?income homeowners clean their houses. We were assigned(分配) a dilapidated(破烂的) house in one of the worst communities of the city. I was afraid as we got near to the front door, not knowing who we would find on the other side. We knocked three times quickly and stepped back, waiting to be let in.
When the door opened, my mouth did, too. Standing there was a little old lady with wisps(一束) of white hair and a purple apron(围裙) tied around her waist.
"Hello" she said, "I'm Amelia. Please come in and I will show you where to start."Her smile shone brightly. “I am just baking some cookies for you girls to eat.”
As she led us to the parts of her house that needed painting, my heart softened. Here was one of the scariest? looking houses in the city, but behind its doors was a sweet old lady with a cane and a big smile.
Here we were coming to help her, and instead she was doing something for us—baking homemade cookies and serving us tea!
注意:(1)续写词数应为150左右；
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
There was no age barrier that day as we worked on Amelia's house.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
“Nonsense！” she criticized(批评).
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Part B 读后续写思路引导
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了我和我的朋友维多利亚在她的母亲的影响下接触了志愿服务的世界。我们做了大量的慈善工作。我们报名参加了“粉刷城镇”，这是底特律一个帮助低收入房主清洁房屋的组织。我们被分配一个在城市的最糟糕的一个社区。但主人却是一个和蔼的老太太，我们在帮她的时候，她也在为我们做些事情，自制了曲奇饼，并端茶给我们喝。
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“那天我们为阿米莉亚的房子工作，没有年龄障碍。”可知，第一段可描写作者和她的朋友和老奶奶相处的很好，交流了很多话题。
②由第二段首句内容“胡说!” 她批评道。可知，第二段可描写老奶奶的见解和看法，以及对作者的影响。
2.续写线索：帮刷墙——款待——交流——可怜——被嘲笑——见解
3.词汇激活
行为类
①一起走路：get near/accompany him/keep her company
②.回家：go back home/return home
③.拒绝：shake his head/decline/refuse politely/laugh at
情绪类
①.感谢：showing his appreciation/show his gratitude/be grateful
②.积极：positive attitude/act positively/keep it up
Part C 写作优秀句式翻译
那天我们在阿米莉亚家工作时，没有年龄障碍。
阿米莉亚呆在附近，在我们画画时和我们交谈，告诉我们她的祖国爱尔兰，以及她是如何来到底特律的。
我为她住在附近这么可怜的地方感到很难过。
当我这样告诉她的时候，她嘲笑我。
胡话！她批评道（批评）。
“这是我的房子，即使它在我周围倒塌了。
我感到很高兴你们这些女孩来帮我解决这个问题。
我在这里很高兴。我看到了社区的变化，看到了人们来来又去，但我总是留下来。
我们可能在外部都有所不同，但在内部上，我们都在追求同一件事——社区。
没有什么比帮助别人更让你高兴的了。
当我在城里的不同地方做志愿者时，她对我说的话重回我脑海了。
参考答案：
There was no age barrier that day as we worked on Amelia's house.
Amelia stayed close by, talking to us as we painted, telling us about her native Ireland and how she came to Detroit.
I felt so sad for her living in such a poor part of the neighborhood with no one to keep her company.
When I told her so, she laughed at me.
“Nonsense！” she criticized( 批评).
“This is my house even if it is falling down around me.
I feel blessed that you girls came to help fix it up.
I'm happy here. I've watched the neighborhood change, and seen people come and go, but I always stay.
We may all be different on the outside, but on the inside, we are all just after the same thing—community.
Keep it up. Nothing will make you happier than helping other people.”
What she said to me replayed itself as I volunteered in different parts of the town.
Part D 篇章写作润色
There was no age barrier that day as we worked on Amelia's house. Amelia stayed close by, talking to us as we painted, telling us about her native Ireland and how she came to Detroit. I felt so sad for her living in such a poor part of the neighborhood with no one to keep her company. When I told her so, she laughed at me.
“Nonsense！” she criticized( 批评). “This is my house even if it is falling down around me. I feel blessed that you girls came to help fix it up. I'm happy here. I've watched the neighborhood change, and seen people come and go, but I always stay. We may all be different on the outside, but on the inside, we are all just after the same thing—community. Keep it up. Nothing will make you happier than helping other people.”What she said to me replayed itself as I volunteered in different parts of the town.
Part E 课后练笔巩固提升 .
Several years ago, I was living in New York and working for an airline, so I never got back home for Christmas. My Christmas was happy too with some other colleagues around. But in my heart I was sad because I couldn’t stay with my family. Sometimes my colleagues would say our Christmas was filled with tears. But this Christmas was different. I was lucky. I had the whole day off, which meant I could stay with my family on Christmas Eve.
When Christmas morning came, I awoke to a small hand rubbing my face. “Dad, Merry Christmas!” was all my younger son had time to say. He seemed to be racing against time. I knew he was hunting for gifts with his brother eagerly. I got downstairs just to see the two little boys’ faces as they looked at the pocket rockets Santa Claus had left them. I realized that the real Christmas was for the children who had deep belief in the amazing power of Santa Claus. At first, their fingers went almost shyly over their toys. When their inspection (检查) had been completed, the two boys ensured that the gifts were really delivered by Santa Claus and they dragged everything into the center of the living room.
Delight flooded the room. As their mother began giving out gifts, I smiled to myself, wondering how my unexpected gifts this year would be received. With so many Christmas spent outside, I had prepared so many gifts for my children and together with my wife I hid them in several secret places. But the children were excellent detectives and they found all of them. They were happily opening packages constantly thanking considerate Santa Claus for his kindness and ability to know their desires. But I had not received a single one. I knew they had forgotten my existence with my absence from their Christmas these years.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右；
2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
Paragraph 1:
I had to admit that my disappointment was growing steadily.
__________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph 2:
Suddenly my wife walked up to me.
__________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
参考答案：
Paragraph l:
I had to admit that my disappointment was growing steadily. I was wondering whether I could get a gift when my younger son ran to me, who was really kind enough to save my face. He asked me to admire his gift which he deeply believed was carefully chosen by Santa Claus. Hesaid happily that he would share some of the gifts of his and allow me to choose one from them. I thanked him from the bottom of my heart, still feeling disappointed.
Paragraph 2:
Suddenly my wife walked up to me. It seemed that she had guessed how I felt. She asked me to look at the Christmas tree which was decorated with so many boxes. I think she was showing off her efforts on the decoration but she took off a small box and passed it to me smiling and saying it was for me. I opened it and saw a letter which read We will never forget you. Merry Christmas! Under the letter was a watch which was clicking with delight. I was moved to tears.
_21?????????è?????(www.21cnjy.com)_