2022届高考英语读后续写精读精炼（二十二）
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2022届高考英语读后续写精读精炼（二十二）
目录 内容
Part A 读后续写模考经典原文
Part B 读后续写思路引导
Part C 写作优秀句式翻译
Part D 篇章写作润色
Part E 课后练笔巩固提升
Part A 读后续写模考经典原文
Most young kids are very self-centered most of the time. It’s like their brain meters are stuck on “selfish.” This certainly described me, until I met my dear grandmother.
My father had been born in Japan, and he had many old, old photographs of the palatial (宫殿般的) estate that had belonged to his family through many generations. He told me stories of gorgeous rooms full of golden furniture and silk wall papers. He also described magnificent gardens, full of the sweet scents of exotic flowers and the gentle thin stream of graceful fountains.
From all these, I figured my grandmother must be rich. I had never met her before she came from Japan, but at eight, I reasoned that if I were nice to her, she would take me back to Japan to live in luxury. It was a good plan, I thought, and I vowed to spend time with my grandmother so she would grow to love me and want me to accompany her upon her return.
We went to pick her up at the airport. “There she is!” my father called. I expected to see some royal kimono-clad (穿着和服的) creature like I’d seen in pictures. Instead, I saw a tiny woman with silver hair, wearing an ordinary blue suit. She did not look wealthy to me. Still, I vowed to be attentive, to make myself indispensable to her during her stay.
To get closer to her, I flattered her into telling me stories about old Japan. She enjoyed making needlecraft with delicate designs, and as she worked, she wove tales of Japanese legends and history as delicate and beautiful as the designs she created. I listened, fascinated. Her words were a mix of the two languages, so I didn’t completely understand everything at first. Interestingly, however, as her English improved, so did my understanding of Japanese.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为 150 左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Para 1:
No one spoke of her going back, and I was like an ant on a hot griddle.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Para 2:
My dreams of a luxurious life had been broken.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Part B 读后续写思路引导
本文以人物为线索为展开，作者的父亲小时候出生在日本，通过之前的照片作者推测祖母的家庭肯定很富裕；作者想着讨好祖母，希望祖母带他去日本生活；祖母来了，但并不是穿着和服来的，而是穿着一件普通的蓝色西装；作者主动和祖母接近，祖母跟他讲着日本的历史传说故事，祖母的英文水平进步了，作者对日本的理解也随之加深。
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“没人说她要回去，“我”就像一只热锅上的蚂蚁。”可知，第一段可描写作者急于去日本过奢侈的生活，所以主动向祖母询问归期，并希望祖母带自己一起回日本，以及祖母的回应。
②由第二段首句内容“我奢华生活的梦想破灭了。”可知，第二段可描写作者梦想破裂后的感受，以及最后作者意识到真正的财富是什么。
2.续写线索：焦虑担忧——鼓起勇气——解释说明——梦想破灭——驱散悲伤
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.鼓起勇气：work up my courage/take heart of grace /get up the courage
②.解释说明：explain/make clear/account for
③.梦想破灭：be broken/be shattered/fall through
④.驱散悲伤：sweep my sadness away/disperse the sad
情绪类
①.焦虑担忧：anxious/worried/alarming
Part C 写作优秀句式翻译
没有人说她回去，我就像一只热烤锅上的蚂蚁。
但我急于开始我的日本奢侈生活，所以有一天晚上我鼓起了勇气。
“奶奶，回到日本，能带我去吗？”我胆怯地问。
虽然有点惊讶，但她从刺绣中抬起头来，眼睛深情地望着我。
“不，我现在住在这里。但你为什么要离开？
所以我告诉她了那些故事。
她笑着，抚摸着我的头，解释说。她的曾祖父确实有很多财富，但战争摧毁了一切
现在祖父去世了，她想和家人住在这里。
我对奢侈生活的梦想已经破灭了。
一开始我很失望，甚至把自己锁在房间里，哭了很长一段时间。
突然间，奶奶和我们住在一起的事实驱散了我的悲伤。
我曾试着让她爱我，这样我就可以和她一起去日本了。
我很快就明白了，我不需要日本的财富。我的祖母就在家里给了我更多的财富。
参考答案：
No one spoke of her going back, and I was like an ant on a hot griddle.
But I was anxious to commence my life of Japanese luxury, so one evening I worked up my courage.
“When you go back to Japan, grandma, will you take me?” I asked timidly.
Though a bit surprised, she looked up from her embroidery, her eyes peeking lovingly at me.
“No, I live here now. But why do you want to leave?”
So I told her about those stories.
She smiled, stroking my head, and explained. Her great grandfather did have much wealth, but the war destroyed everything.
Now that grandfather had passed away, she wished to remain here with family.
My dreams of a luxurious life had been broken.
At first so disappointed was I that I even locked myself in the room, crying for quite a while.
Then suddenly the fact that grandma was staying with us swept my sadness away.
I had tried to make her love me so that I could join her in Japan.
I soon understood that I didn't need the wealth of Japan. My grandmother had given me far greater riches right here at home.
Part D 篇章写作润色
No one spoke of her going back, and I was like an ant on a hot griddle. But I was anxious to commence my life of Japanese luxury, so one evening I worked up my courage. “When you go back to Japan, grandma, will you take me?” I asked timidly. Though a bit surprised, she looked up from her embroidery, her eyes peeking lovingly at me. “No, I live here now. But why do you want to leave?” So I told her about those stories. She smiled, stroking my head, and explained. Her great grandfather did have much wealth, but the war destroyed everything. Now that grandfather had passed away, she wished to remain here with family.
My dreams of a luxurious life had been broken. At first so disappointed was I that I even locked myself in the room, crying for quite a while. Then suddenly the fact that grandma was staying with us swept my sadness away. I had tried to make her love me so that I could join her in Japan. I soon understood that I didn't need the wealth of Japan. My grandmother had given me far greater riches right here at home.
Part E 课后练笔巩固提升 .
“Ouch!” I howled in pain as I dropped the hammer onto my foot. I felt foolish.
It was pouring with rain, and, lame for a moment, I hopped around to the driver's side.
“No luck?” said George. We had a flat tyre (轮胎) and I was trying to change the wheel. But it was stuck firm.
We had driven ten hours along the road through the jungle without seeing another soul. In the distance was an ox working in the field.
“So what do we do now? How can we find a garage?” asked George, as I got back into the car.
About fifteen minutes later, the rain stopped. Out of the jungle came an old woman. She walked towards us carrying something long and thin.
“Uh, oh, here comes danger!” said George, “ She’s got a spear.”
She was wearing traditional garments, with short sleeves, a colorful necklace and other jewelry. As she got closer, we saw the spear was just a wooden pole. I got out.
“Hello!” I said, in English. “Can you help us?” I pointed to the wheel.
She stared at it, and then made a gesture to follow her back to the jungle. George and I looked at each other, and then set off after her.
Soon we came to a tent under some trees. It had a firm framework of wooden poles, like the one the woman was carrying, covered with heavy cloth, and fastened with rope made of some kind of loose plant fiber. All round were corn plants. It was harvest time for the grain, and a spade, a fork and other tools were lying on the ground. Nearby were some chicks and a rooster, and a pig tied to a post.
The woman folded back a cloth and invited us in. My eyes had to adjust to the darkness inside. The tent was furnished with a few mats on the floor, and a low table with a teapot. She picked up a photo and showed it to us. Was it her husband? The man in the photo was bare to the waist. He looked much too young. She was probably a widow (寡妇). Maybe her son or her nephew?
Our hostess poured some tea, and watched smiling as we drank.
“Say something,” said George.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
Paragraph 1:
I was wondering what to say when I heard the sound of footsteps out of the tent.
__________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph 2:
Together we walked back to the car.
__________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
参考答案：
Paragraph 1:
I was wondering what to say when I heard the sound of footsteps out of the tent. We both looked up. It was exactly the young man in the photo but looked much stronger. The woman said something to him, looking at us smiling. “Need some Mg?” he asked. It’s amazing he was speaking very good English! George and I looked at each other, eyes lit up. “Yes, and we were wondering if you could have one of our tyres changed.” “Follow me!” he said, sounding like sort of an order.
Paragraph 2:
We got up and together walked back to the car. The man grabbed the wheel with one hand and a spanner with the other. With an outburst of shout, the tyre was loosened up. “You just need a bit of effort. Haha!” George and I stood there dumfounded watching him finishing the whole job, gratitude and admiration rushing in my heart. The knot that had been tired up by the pain in my foot, the cold soaking rain and the stubborn flat tyre was loosened up too, in the warm tea from the woman, the heroic shout of the man, the mountain view in the distance and the joy of being able to set off again.
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2022届高考英语读后续写精读精炼（二十二）
目录 内容
Part A 读后续写模考经典原文
Part B 读后续写思路引导
Part C 写作优秀句式翻译
Part D 篇章写作润色
Part E 课后练笔巩固提升
Part A 读后续写模考经典原文
Most young kids are very self-centered most of the time. It’s like their brain meters are stuck on “selfish.” This certainly described me, until I met my dear grandmother.
My father had been born in Japan, and he had many old, old photographs of the palatial (宫殿般的) estate that had belonged to his family through many generations. He told me stories of gorgeous rooms full of golden furniture and silk wall papers. He also described magnificent gardens, full of the sweet scents of exotic flowers and the gentle thin stream of graceful fountains.
From all these, I figured my grandmother must be rich. I had never met her before she came from Japan, but at eight, I reasoned that if I were nice to her, she would take me back to Japan to live in luxury. It was a good plan, I thought, and I vowed to spend time with my grandmother so she would grow to love me and want me to accompany her upon her return.
We went to pick her up at the airport. “There she is!” my father called. I expected to see some royal kimono-clad (穿着和服的) creature like I’d seen in pictures. Instead, I saw a tiny woman with silver hair, wearing an ordinary blue suit. She did not look wealthy to me. Still, I vowed to be attentive, to make myself indispensable to her during her stay.
To get closer to her, I flattered her into telling me stories about old Japan. She enjoyed making needlecraft with delicate designs, and as she worked, she wove tales of Japanese legends and history as delicate and beautiful as the designs she created. I listened, fascinated. Her words were a mix of the two languages, so I didn’t completely understand everything at first. Interestingly, however, as her English improved, so did my understanding of Japanese.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为 150 左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Para 1:
No one spoke of her going back, and I was like an ant on a hot griddle.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Para 2:
My dreams of a luxurious life had been broken.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Part B 读后续写思路引导
本文以人物为线索为展开，作者的父亲小时候出生在日本，通过之前的照片作者推测祖母的家庭肯定很富裕；作者想着讨好祖母，希望祖母带他去日本生活；祖母来了，但并不是穿着和服来的，而是穿着一件普通的蓝色西装；作者主动和祖母接近，祖母跟他讲着日本的历史传说故事，祖母的英文水平进步了，作者对日本的理解也随之加深。
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“没人说她要回去，“我”就像一只热锅上的蚂蚁。”可知，第一段可描写作者急于去日本过奢侈的生活，所以主动向祖母询问归期，并希望祖母带自己一起回日本，以及祖母的回应。
②由第二段首句内容“我奢华生活的梦想破灭了。”可知，第二段可描写作者梦想破裂后的感受，以及最后作者意识到真正的财富是什么。
2.续写线索：焦虑担忧——鼓起勇气——解释说明——梦想破灭——驱散悲伤
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.鼓起勇气：work up my courage/take heart of grace /get up the courage
②.解释说明：explain/make clear/account for
③.梦想破灭：be broken/be shattered/fall through
④.驱散悲伤：sweep my sadness away/disperse the sad
情绪类
①.焦虑担忧：anxious/worried/alarming
Part C 写作优秀句式翻译
没有人说她回去，我就像一只热烤锅上的蚂蚁。
但我急于开始我的日本奢侈生活，所以有一天晚上我鼓起了勇气。
“奶奶，回到日本，能带我去吗？”我胆怯地问。
虽然有点惊讶，但她从刺绣中抬起头来，眼睛深情地望着我。
“不，我现在住在这里。但你为什么要离开？
所以我告诉她了那些故事。
她笑着，抚摸着我的头，解释说。她的曾祖父确实有很多财富，但战争摧毁了一切
现在祖父去世了，她想和家人住在这里。
我对奢侈生活的梦想已经破灭了。
一开始我很失望，甚至把自己锁在房间里，哭了很长一段时间。
突然间，奶奶和我们住在一起的事实驱散了我的悲伤。
我曾试着让她爱我，这样我就可以和她一起去日本了。
我很快就明白了，我不需要日本的财富。我的祖母就在家里给了我更多的财富。
参考答案：
No one spoke of her going back, and I was like an ant on a hot griddle.
But I was anxious to commence my life of Japanese luxury, so one evening I worked up my courage.
“When you go back to Japan, grandma, will you take me?” I asked timidly.
Though a bit surprised, she looked up from her embroidery, her eyes peeking lovingly at me.
“No, I live here now. But why do you want to leave?”
So I told her about those stories.
She smiled, stroking my head, and explained. Her great grandfather did have much wealth, but the war destroyed everything.
Now that grandfather had passed away, she wished to remain here with family.
My dreams of a luxurious life had been broken.
At first so disappointed was I that I even locked myself in the room, crying for quite a while.
Then suddenly the fact that grandma was staying with us swept my sadness away.
I had tried to make her love me so that I could join her in Japan.
I soon understood that I didn't need the wealth of Japan. My grandmother had given me far greater riches right here at home.
Part D 篇章写作润色
No one spoke of her going back, and I was like an ant on a hot griddle. But I was anxious to commence my life of Japanese luxury, so one evening I worked up my courage. “When you go back to Japan, grandma, will you take me?” I asked timidly. Though a bit surprised, she looked up from her embroidery, her eyes peeking lovingly at me. “No, I live here now. But why do you want to leave?” So I told her about those stories. She smiled, stroking my head, and explained. Her great grandfather did have much wealth, but the war destroyed everything. Now that grandfather had passed away, she wished to remain here with family.
My dreams of a luxurious life had been broken. At first so disappointed was I that I even locked myself in the room, crying for quite a while. Then suddenly the fact that grandma was staying with us swept my sadness away. I had tried to make her love me so that I could join her in Japan. I soon understood that I didn't need the wealth of Japan. My grandmother had given me far greater riches right here at home.
Part E 课后练笔巩固提升 .
“Ouch!” I howled in pain as I dropped the hammer onto my foot. I felt foolish.
It was pouring with rain, and, lame for a moment, I hopped around to the driver's side.
“No luck?” said George. We had a flat tyre (轮胎) and I was trying to change the wheel. But it was stuck firm.
We had driven ten hours along the road through the jungle without seeing another soul. In the distance was an ox working in the field.
“So what do we do now? How can we find a garage?” asked George, as I got back into the car.
About fifteen minutes later, the rain stopped. Out of the jungle came an old woman. She walked towards us carrying something long and thin.
“Uh, oh, here comes danger!” said George, “ She’s got a spear.”
She was wearing traditional garments, with short sleeves, a colorful necklace and other jewelry. As she got closer, we saw the spear was just a wooden pole. I got out.
“Hello!” I said, in English. “Can you help us?” I pointed to the wheel.
She stared at it, and then made a gesture to follow her back to the jungle. George and I looked at each other, and then set off after her.
Soon we came to a tent under some trees. It had a firm framework of wooden poles, like the one the woman was carrying, covered with heavy cloth, and fastened with rope made of some kind of loose plant fiber. All round were corn plants. It was harvest time for the grain, and a spade, a fork and other tools were lying on the ground. Nearby were some chicks and a rooster, and a pig tied to a post.
The woman folded back a cloth and invited us in. My eyes had to adjust to the darkness inside. The tent was furnished with a few mats on the floor, and a low table with a teapot. She picked up a photo and showed it to us. Was it her husband? The man in the photo was bare to the waist. He looked much too young. She was probably a widow (寡妇). Maybe her son or her nephew?
Our hostess poured some tea, and watched smiling as we drank.
“Say something,” said George.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
Paragraph 1:
I was wondering what to say when I heard the sound of footsteps out of the tent.
__________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph 2:
Together we walked back to the car.
__________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
参考答案：
Paragraph 1:
I was wondering what to say when I heard the sound of footsteps out of the tent. We both looked up. It was exactly the young man in the photo but looked much stronger. The woman said something to him, looking at us smiling. “Need some Mg?” he asked. It’s amazing he was speaking very good English! George and I looked at each other, eyes lit up. “Yes, and we were wondering if you could have one of our tyres changed.” “Follow me!” he said, sounding like sort of an order.
Paragraph 2:
We got up and together walked back to the car. The man grabbed the wheel with one hand and a spanner with the other. With an outburst of shout, the tyre was loosened up. “You just need a bit of effort. Haha!” George and I stood there dumfounded watching him finishing the whole job, gratitude and admiration rushing in my heart. The knot that had been tired up by the pain in my foot, the cold soaking rain and the stubborn flat tyre was loosened up too, in the warm tea from the woman, the heroic shout of the man, the mountain view in the distance and the joy of being able to set off again.
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