2022届高考英语读后续写精读精炼（二十四）含答案解析
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2022届高考英语读后续写精读精炼（二十四）
目录 内容
Part A 读后续写模考经典原文
Part B 读后续写思路引导
Part C 写作优秀句式翻译
Part D 篇章写作润色
Part E 课后练笔巩固提升
Part A 读后续写模考经典原文
On Friday evening, Emmett and I went to a movie as scheduled. After purchasing the tickets and drinks, we entered the cinema with delight beforehand, waiting for the beginning of the movie.
When I got up in the middle of the movie, Emmett whispered, “Carter, where are you going?” “I forgot to call my mom to tell her what time to pick us up.” I whispered back, leaving my jacket on the seat.
I squeezed past the people in my row, trying not to step on any feet while still watching the screen. I didn’t want to miss a thing. Balfour, the good guy in the movie, was trapped in an underground cave.
When I came back, Balfour’s flashlight almost went out. An enormous snake was moving toward him, twisting its body. Balfour struggled to loosen the chains around his hands and feet to reach his magic cape. With the cape around him, he could completely disappear.
I crawled back across eight people (I counted on the way out), never taking my eyes off the screen. I sat down in my seat slowly, then picked up my drink, and swallowed it quickly. But suddenly my brain said, “That’s not coke. That’s lemonade.” I looked down at the cup, just as the girl next to me shouted, “He drank my lemonade!”
“ Shhhh!” the people around us said, making quiet complaints.
“ Where’s Emmett?” I asked, as if the girl had hidden him under her seat.
“ Carter, down here,” Emmett answered in a low voice. He was two rows ahead of me. I was in the wrong row! Everyone was turning around to look at me.
“ Here,” I said, handing the girl her drink.
“Eww,” she said. “You have had a drink of it, so you owe me a lemonade.”
“Shhhh!” everyone said again.
“OK, OK,” I said, starting my crawl across eight sets of feet again. Everybody were complaining as I inched out.
“Don’t come back,” the boy on the end said.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。
Paragraph 1:
But the problem was that I had to come back to bring this girl a new lemonade.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph 2:
I thought about crawling out of this row and back into Emmett’s row, but I couldn’t.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Part B 读后续写思路引导
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了周五晚上，作者和埃米特按计划去看了一场电影，在看电影期间作者去给妈妈打电话，回来了作者发现自己做错了座位，还误喝了一个女孩的柠檬水。
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“但问题是，我必须回来给这个女孩带一杯新的柠檬水。”可知，第一段可描写作者给女孩买柠檬水带回去的经过的。
②由第二段首句内容“我想过从这一排匍匐着出去，回到艾美特那一排去，但我做不到。”可知，第二段可描写作者最终等到电影结束，抓起夹克跑了出去，结果发现又拿错了那个女孩的夹克。
2.续写线索：买柠檬水——递给女孩柠檬水——等待电影结束——抓起夹克跑出去——发现拿错夹克——再次找到女孩
3.词汇激活
行为类
看：look at /saw/spot/notice
移动：move through / fall into/ hurry out/run out in a hurry
情绪类
尴尬：embarrassment/ awkwardness
不满：complaints/ dissatisfaction
Part C 写作优秀句式翻译
但问题是，我不得不回来给这个女孩带来一个新的柠檬水。
我买了一杯柠檬水，深吸了一口气，然后又回去了。
这一次，我弯下腰，看着每一行尽头的每个人。
当我看到同一个男孩时，我迅速地回到了那个女孩身边。
不幸的是，我踩到一个男孩的脚，撞了膝盖。
在向他道歉后，我迅速倒在女孩旁边的座位上，把柠檬水递给她。
我们周围的人都转身抱怨地盯着我看。
我想爬出这一排，爬回到艾米特的一排，但我不能。
也许我会就呆在那里直到电影结束。
谢谢我喝柠檬水，那个女孩谈到了我错过的情节。我低声说：“谢谢。
电影院亮了，我抓起座位上的夹克，匆匆走了出去。
艾米特赶上了我，“你认识那个女孩吗？”“
不。””我回答。“那你为什么要有她的夹克呢？
”我低头一看，发现了一件亮粉色的夹克。“我又走了，”我尴尬地说，看到了人群中的那个女孩。
参考答案：
But the problem was that I had to come back to bring this girl a new lemonade.
I bought a lemonade, took a deep breath, and went back.
This time, I bent low, looking at every person on the end of each row.
When I saw the same boy, I moved through fast to get back to that girl.
Unfortunately, I stepped on a boy’s feet and banged my knee.
After apologizing to him, I quickly fell into the seat next to the girl and handed her the lemonade.
Everyone around us all turned to stare at me again with some complaints.
I thought about crawling out of this row and back into Emmett’s row, but I couldn’t.
Maybe I would just stay there until the movie ended.
Thanking me for the lemonade, the girl talked about the plots I missed. I whispered back, “Thanks.”
When the lights of the cinema came on, I grabbed my jacket on the seat and hurried out.
Emmett caught up with me, “Do you know that girl?
“No.” I answered. “Then why do you have her jacket?”
I looked down and found a bright pink jacket. “Here I go again,” I said with embarrassment, spotting the girl in the crowd.
Part D 篇章写作润色
Paragraph 1
But the problem was that I had to come back to bring this girl a new lemonade. I bought a lemonade, took a deep breath, and went back. This time, I bent low, looking at every person on the end of each row. When I saw the same boy, I moved through fast to get back to that girl. Unfortunately, I stepped on a boy’s feet and banged my knee. After apologizing to him, I quickly fell into the seat next to the girl and handed her the lemonade. Everyone around us all turned to stare at me again with some complaints.
Paragraph 2
I thought about crawling out of this row and back into Emmett’s row, but I couldn’t. Maybe I would just stay there until the movie ended. Thanking me for the lemonade, the girl talked about the plots I missed. I whispered back, “Thanks.” When the lights of the cinema came on, I grabbed my jacket on the seat and hurried out. Emmett caught up with me, “Do you know that girl? “No.” I answered. “Then why do you have her jacket?” I looked down and found a bright pink jacket. “Here I go again,” I said with embarrassment, spotting the girl in the crowd.
Part E 课后练笔巩固提升 .
Christmas Day was coming. I was just a kid then, and my big sister told me there was no Santa Claus. I fled to my Grandma because she would be straight with me. I knew Grandma always told me the truth. Grandma was home, and I told her everything. She was ready for me. “No Santa Claus !” She shouted. “Ridiculous! Don’t believe it.” That rumor has been going around for years, and it makes me mad, plain mad.
“Now, put on your coat, and let’s go.”
“Go where, Grandma?” I asked. “Where” turned out to be Kerby’s General Store, the one store in town that had a little bit of just about everything. As we walked through its doors, Grandma handed me ten dollars. “Take this money, ” she said, “and buy something for someone who needs it. I’ll wait for you in the car.” Then she turned and walked out of Kerby’s.
I was only eight years old. I’d often gone shopping with my mother, but never had I shopped for anything all by myself. The store seemed big and crowded, full of people competing to finish their Christmas shopping. For a few moments I just stood there, confused, holding that ten-dollar bill, wondering what to buy and who to buy it for. I suddenly thought of Bobby Decker, who was a kid with bad breath and messy hair. He sat right behind me in Mrs Pollock’s grade-two class. Bobby Decker didn’t have a coat. I knew that because he never went out for recess(放假) during the winter. His mother always wrote a note, telling the teacher that he had a cough, but we kids knew that Bobby Decker didn’t have a cough, and he didn’t have a coat. I would buy Bobby Decker a coat! I settled on a red one, which looked really warm, and he would like that.
“Is this a Christmas present for someone?” the lady behind the counter asked kindly, as I laid my ten dollars down. “Yes.”
The nice lady smiled at me, put the coat in a bag and wished me a Merry Christmas.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150词左右；
2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
Paragraph 1:
That evening, Grandma helped me wrap the coat in Christmas paper.
__________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph 2:
Grandma and I waited breathlessly for Bobby Decker’s front door to open and finally it opened.
__________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
参考答案：
Paragraph 1:
That evening, Grandma helped me wrap the coat in Christmas paper. She wrote “To Bobby, From Santa Claus” on it, after which she drove me over to Bobby Decker’s house, explaining I was officially one of Santa’s helpers. Grandma parked down the street form Bobby’s house, and I took a deep breath, and dashed for his front door. Seeing no other people notice us, I put the Christmas present down, pounded his doorbell and then Grandma and I hid in the car.
Paragraph 2:
Grandma and I waited breathlessly for Bobby Decker’s front door to open and finally it opened. Out went Bobby Decker. Seeing the coat in the bag, he looked very astonished and then called his mother to go out. After hearing them say “Thanks” to Santa Claus, I felt very proud of what I had done. At that time I decided to be Santa’s helper for ever. It was on that night that I realized the truth that he who has no Christmas in his heart will never find Christmas under a tree.
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2022届高考英语读后续写精读精炼（二十四）
目录 内容
Part A 读后续写模考经典原文
Part B 读后续写思路引导
Part C 写作优秀句式翻译
Part D 篇章写作润色
Part E 课后练笔巩固提升
Part A 读后续写模考经典原文
On Friday evening, Emmett and I went to a movie as scheduled. After purchasing the tickets and drinks, we entered the cinema with delight beforehand, waiting for the beginning of the movie.
When I got up in the middle of the movie, Emmett whispered, “Carter, where are you going?” “I forgot to call my mom to tell her what time to pick us up.” I whispered back, leaving my jacket on the seat.
I squeezed past the people in my row, trying not to step on any feet while still watching the screen. I didn’t want to miss a thing. Balfour, the good guy in the movie, was trapped in an underground cave.
When I came back, Balfour’s flashlight almost went out. An enormous snake was moving toward him, twisting its body. Balfour struggled to loosen the chains around his hands and feet to reach his magic cape. With the cape around him, he could completely disappear.
I crawled back across eight people (I counted on the way out), never taking my eyes off the screen. I sat down in my seat slowly, then picked up my drink, and swallowed it quickly. But suddenly my brain said, “That’s not coke. That’s lemonade.” I looked down at the cup, just as the girl next to me shouted, “He drank my lemonade!”
“ Shhhh!” the people around us said, making quiet complaints.
“ Where’s Emmett?” I asked, as if the girl had hidden him under her seat.
“ Carter, down here,” Emmett answered in a low voice. He was two rows ahead of me. I was in the wrong row! Everyone was turning around to look at me.
“ Here,” I said, handing the girl her drink.
“Eww,” she said. “You have had a drink of it, so you owe me a lemonade.”
“Shhhh!” everyone said again.
“OK, OK,” I said, starting my crawl across eight sets of feet again. Everybody were complaining as I inched out.
“Don’t come back,” the boy on the end said.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。
Paragraph 1:
But the problem was that I had to come back to bring this girl a new lemonade.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph 2:
I thought about crawling out of this row and back into Emmett’s row, but I couldn’t.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Part B 读后续写思路引导
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了周五晚上，作者和埃米特按计划去看了一场电影，在看电影期间作者去给妈妈打电话，回来了作者发现自己做错了座位，还误喝了一个女孩的柠檬水。
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“但问题是，我必须回来给这个女孩带一杯新的柠檬水。”可知，第一段可描写作者给女孩买柠檬水带回去的经过的。
②由第二段首句内容“我想过从这一排匍匐着出去，回到艾美特那一排去，但我做不到。”可知，第二段可描写作者最终等到电影结束，抓起夹克跑了出去，结果发现又拿错了那个女孩的夹克。
2.续写线索：买柠檬水——递给女孩柠檬水——等待电影结束——抓起夹克跑出去——发现拿错夹克——再次找到女孩
3.词汇激活
行为类
看：look at /saw/spot/notice
移动：move through / fall into/ hurry out/run out in a hurry
情绪类
尴尬：embarrassment/ awkwardness
不满：complaints/ dissatisfaction
Part C 写作优秀句式翻译
但问题是，我不得不回来给这个女孩带来一个新的柠檬水。
我买了一杯柠檬水，深吸了一口气，然后又回去了。
这一次，我弯下腰，看着每一行尽头的每个人。
当我看到同一个男孩时，我迅速地回到了那个女孩身边。
不幸的是，我踩到一个男孩的脚，撞了膝盖。
在向他道歉后，我迅速倒在女孩旁边的座位上，把柠檬水递给她。
我们周围的人都转身抱怨地盯着我看。
我想爬出这一排，爬回到艾米特的一排，但我不能。
也许我会就呆在那里直到电影结束。
谢谢我喝柠檬水，那个女孩谈到了我错过的情节。我低声说：“谢谢。
电影院亮了，我抓起座位上的夹克，匆匆走了出去。
艾米特赶上了我，“你认识那个女孩吗？”“
不。””我回答。“那你为什么要有她的夹克呢？
”我低头一看，发现了一件亮粉色的夹克。“我又走了，”我尴尬地说，看到了人群中的那个女孩。
参考答案：
But the problem was that I had to come back to bring this girl a new lemonade.
I bought a lemonade, took a deep breath, and went back.
This time, I bent low, looking at every person on the end of each row.
When I saw the same boy, I moved through fast to get back to that girl.
Unfortunately, I stepped on a boy’s feet and banged my knee.
After apologizing to him, I quickly fell into the seat next to the girl and handed her the lemonade.
Everyone around us all turned to stare at me again with some complaints.
I thought about crawling out of this row and back into Emmett’s row, but I couldn’t.
Maybe I would just stay there until the movie ended.
Thanking me for the lemonade, the girl talked about the plots I missed. I whispered back, “Thanks.”
When the lights of the cinema came on, I grabbed my jacket on the seat and hurried out.
Emmett caught up with me, “Do you know that girl?
“No.” I answered. “Then why do you have her jacket?”
I looked down and found a bright pink jacket. “Here I go again,” I said with embarrassment, spotting the girl in the crowd.
Part D 篇章写作润色
Paragraph 1
But the problem was that I had to come back to bring this girl a new lemonade. I bought a lemonade, took a deep breath, and went back. This time, I bent low, looking at every person on the end of each row. When I saw the same boy, I moved through fast to get back to that girl. Unfortunately, I stepped on a boy’s feet and banged my knee. After apologizing to him, I quickly fell into the seat next to the girl and handed her the lemonade. Everyone around us all turned to stare at me again with some complaints.
Paragraph 2
I thought about crawling out of this row and back into Emmett’s row, but I couldn’t. Maybe I would just stay there until the movie ended. Thanking me for the lemonade, the girl talked about the plots I missed. I whispered back, “Thanks.” When the lights of the cinema came on, I grabbed my jacket on the seat and hurried out. Emmett caught up with me, “Do you know that girl? “No.” I answered. “Then why do you have her jacket?” I looked down and found a bright pink jacket. “Here I go again,” I said with embarrassment, spotting the girl in the crowd.
Part E 课后练笔巩固提升 .
Christmas Day was coming. I was just a kid then, and my big sister told me there was no Santa Claus. I fled to my Grandma because she would be straight with me. I knew Grandma always told me the truth. Grandma was home, and I told her everything. She was ready for me. “No Santa Claus !” She shouted. “Ridiculous! Don’t believe it.” That rumor has been going around for years, and it makes me mad, plain mad.
“Now, put on your coat, and let’s go.”
“Go where, Grandma?” I asked. “Where” turned out to be Kerby’s General Store, the one store in town that had a little bit of just about everything. As we walked through its doors, Grandma handed me ten dollars. “Take this money, ” she said, “and buy something for someone who needs it. I’ll wait for you in the car.” Then she turned and walked out of Kerby’s.
I was only eight years old. I’d often gone shopping with my mother, but never had I shopped for anything all by myself. The store seemed big and crowded, full of people competing to finish their Christmas shopping. For a few moments I just stood there, confused, holding that ten-dollar bill, wondering what to buy and who to buy it for. I suddenly thought of Bobby Decker, who was a kid with bad breath and messy hair. He sat right behind me in Mrs Pollock’s grade-two class. Bobby Decker didn’t have a coat. I knew that because he never went out for recess(放假) during the winter. His mother always wrote a note, telling the teacher that he had a cough, but we kids knew that Bobby Decker didn’t have a cough, and he didn’t have a coat. I would buy Bobby Decker a coat! I settled on a red one, which looked really warm, and he would like that.
“Is this a Christmas present for someone?” the lady behind the counter asked kindly, as I laid my ten dollars down. “Yes.”
The nice lady smiled at me, put the coat in a bag and wished me a Merry Christmas.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150词左右；
2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
Paragraph 1:
That evening, Grandma helped me wrap the coat in Christmas paper.
__________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph 2:
Grandma and I waited breathlessly for Bobby Decker’s front door to open and finally it opened.
__________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
参考答案：
Paragraph 1:
That evening, Grandma helped me wrap the coat in Christmas paper. She wrote “To Bobby, From Santa Claus” on it, after which she drove me over to Bobby Decker’s house, explaining I was officially one of Santa’s helpers. Grandma parked down the street form Bobby’s house, and I took a deep breath, and dashed for his front door. Seeing no other people notice us, I put the Christmas present down, pounded his doorbell and then Grandma and I hid in the car.
Paragraph 2:
Grandma and I waited breathlessly for Bobby Decker’s front door to open and finally it opened. Out went Bobby Decker. Seeing the coat in the bag, he looked very astonished and then called his mother to go out. After hearing them say “Thanks” to Santa Claus, I felt very proud of what I had done. At that time I decided to be Santa’s helper for ever. It was on that night that I realized the truth that he who has no Christmas in his heart will never find Christmas under a tree.
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