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2022届高考英语读后续写精读精炼(二十五)
目录 内容
Part A 读后续写模考经典原文
Part B 读后续写思路引导
Part C 写作优秀句式翻译
Part D 篇章写作润色
Part E 课后练笔巩固提升
Part A 读后续写模考经典原文
A long time ago, there was a happy prince and princess in a country. They took care of and loved each other very much, and their country was happy, too. Therefore they didn’t envy anything else. There was one thing they worried about. They wanted to make sure they could live happily forever like this.
One day, one of the officials found out the couple’s worry and told them, “Prince, I heard that there is a magic charm(吉祥饰物), and it can protect you from any unfortunate event. If you always carry the magic charm with you, your fear and worry will disappear.” “Is it true? Where can I find that charm?” The prince asked him joyfully. “There is an old man in the forest, and he knows about everything. You can ask him.”
The couple visited the old man, and asked for help with their worries and fears. The old man nodded his head as if he knew everything and said, “Travel all around the world. Then, when you meet a very happy couple, ask them to cut a piece of their underwear. If you keep the piece of the underwear, your fear and worry will go away.”
The couple appreciated the old man's kindness and set out on the journey. The couple wandered around everywhere and heard about a happy knight (骑士) and his wife in a town. They went to visit the knight. “Are you really happy like the rumor?” Then the knight answered. “Of course, we are, Prince. But our only worry and problem is that we didn't have any children.”
They had to find an absolutely happy couple, so they continued their journey. They visited a happy couple who were famous for their happiness in the next town.And they asked the couple if they were really happy. The couple answered. “Yes, we are very happy. But we have too many children. A mother with a large family of children never has a peaceful day. We worry too much about our children.”
They could not get a magic charm this time too,and kept going on their trip. It was very hard to find the happiest couple in the world.
One day, the prince couple met a shepherd(牧羊人) and his wife in a big field.
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Feeling disappointed and tired out, the prince couple decided to go back.
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Part B 读后续写思路引导
本文是一篇寓言故事,一位王子和公主快乐地生活在一起,他们想自己能像这样幸福地生活下去,于是到处寻找世界上绝对幸福的夫妇。最后他们发现真正的幸福就在自己手上。
1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“一天,王子夫妇在一块大田里遇见了一个牧羊人和他的妻子。”可知,第一段可描写牧羊人夫妇幸福地生活,王子夫妇请求他们剪一件内衣,但是牧羊人拒绝了他们。
②由第二段首句内容“王子夫妇感到失望和疲惫,决定回去。”可知,第二段可描写王子夫妇去找智者询问,最后明白了幸福就在自己手里。
2.续写线索:找到牧羊人——请求牧羊人——遭到拒绝——找到智者——智者点播——领悟感受
3.词类激活
行为类
①接近:approach/ draw near
②拜访:visit/ call on
③意识到:realize/ be aware of
情感类
①困惑的:confused/ puzzled
②坚定地:firmly/ tightly
Part C 写作优秀句式翻译
一天,这对王子在一块大田野上遇到了一个牧羊人和他的妻子。
牧羊人牵着一群羊,他的妻子带着两个孩子去找他。
牧羊人一看到他的家人,就径直跑到他们跟前,轮流亲吻和拥抱他们每个人。
知道这是他们想要的最幸福的家庭,王子夫妇走近他们,礼貌地问“抱歉,你能帮我们剪一件内衣吗?
但这对最幸福的牧羊人夫妇感到困惑,说:“我们想帮助你,但我们不穿内衣。”
王子夫妇感到失望和疲惫,决定回去。
他们一回到祖国,就拜访了这位老人,说哪里找不到魔法的魅力。
老人笑了笑。“那么,我们的旅行是徒劳的吗?”
这对王子夫妇对自己思考了一会儿,最后,他们意识到真正的魔法魅力就在他们的脑海中,而幸福取决于他们自己。
然后他们紧紧地握着手,互相看着对方的眼睛,知道无论发生什么,他们都不会不高兴。
参考答案:
One day, the prince couple met a shepherd and his wife in a big field.
The shepherd was driving a herd of sheep, and his wife took their two children to him.
The moment the shepherd saw his family, he ran to them directly, kissing and embracing each of them by turns.
Knowing that this was known to be the happiest family they were looking for, the prince couple approached them and asked politely “I am sorry, but could you please cut a piece of your underwear for us?”
But the happiest shepherd couple felt confused and said “We would like to help you but we don’t wear any underwear.”
Feeling disappointed and tired out, the prince couple decided to go back.
Immediately they returned to their country they visited the old wise man, saying that the magic charm was no where to be found.
The old man smiled. “Well is our trip a vain effort?”
The prince couple thought to themselves for a while and finally, they realized that the true magic charm was in their mind, and happiness depends on themselves.
Then they held hands firmly and looked in each other’s eyes, knowing that they would never be unhappy whatever came their way.
Part D 篇章写作润色
One day, the prince couple met a shepherd and his wife in a big field. The shepherd was driving a herd of sheep, and his wife took their two children to him. The moment the shepherd saw his family, he ran to them directly, kissing and embracing each of them by turns. Knowing that this was known to be the happiest family they were looking for, the prince couple approached them and asked politely “I am sorry, but could you please cut a piece of your underwear for us?” But the happiest shepherd couple felt confused and said “We would like to help you but we don’t wear any underwear.”
Feeling disappointed and tired out, the prince couple decided to go back. Immediately they returned to their country they visited the old wise man, saying that the magic charm was no where to be found. The old man smiled. “Well is our trip a vain effort?” The prince couple thought to themselves for a while and finally, they realized that the true magic charm was in their mind, and happiness depends on themselves. Then they held hands firmly and looked in each other’s eyes, knowing that they would never be unhappy whatever came their way.
Part E 课后练笔巩固提升 .
It was time to go home. “Remember to work on your class speeches for homework,” Miss Walker called as everyone started talking and packing their school bags. Jenny felt sick. She hated having to read aloud in class. She was sure everyone got really bored listening to her. Once, when Jenny was reading out her holiday diary, Lee was even looking at his watch, a silver and blue one which seemed just magical.
Jenny watched Lee walk ahead of her as they left school. He seemed so clever, and he had a certain sort of shining confidence. He was just one of those people who were good at everything. Jenny sighed. As she turned the comer, she saw Lee’s watch lying right in the middle of the path.
Jenny knew she should just pick it up and return it to him, but she didn’t want 10 nm after him. Jenny bent down quickly, picked up the watch and ran home. On arriving home, Jenny put it on almost without thinking. She was surprised it fitted so well. She walked to the mirror and started practicing her speech. Words just flooded out of her. “I’m going to talk about swimming. I have been lucky. I’ve won lots of competitions. But when I’m in a race, I’m not really thinking about winning. I’m just loving the feeling of being in the water…” Jenny laughed with excitement. She walked across the room. She suddenly seemed to have a certain sort of confidence. Turning back to the mirror, Jenny saw a flash of light from the watch in the glass. The flashes of silver seemed almost magical. So maybe Lee’s watch really DID have something magic about it.
The next day, as the lesson began, Miss Walker asked who was going to be brave and go first. Nobody moved. Jenny slowly raised her arm. Before Miss Walker could say anything, there was a shout from behind. “She’s stolen my watch!” Lee said angrily, “It went missing at school yesterday.”
注意:
1所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
Paragraph 1:
Everybody was fixing their eyes on Jenny, waiting for an explanation.
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Miss Walker smiled and asked the class to listen to Jenny’s speech first.
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参考答案:
Paragraph 1:
Everybody was fixing their eyes on Jenny, waiting for an explanation. Jenny didn’t answer. How could she explain about the watch and its magic? No one could understand. No one could believe. “But I saw you wearing it yesterday,” Miss Walker gently reminded him. For a moment Lee remained silent and then he apologized he had just remembered that. Jenny was relieved saying she had found it on the way home and decided to return it after the speech. Everybody was puzzled and asked why. Jenny again was speechless. Paragraph 2:
Miss Walker smiled and asked the class to listen to Jenny’s speech first. Jenny walked slowly to the front. She couldn’t think properly. All round her, a sea of faces was watching. She felt so frightened and the watch didn’t seem magical at all. Suddenly she saw Miss Walker’s encouraging eyes. Jenny took a deep breath. “I’m going to talk about swimming…” Ten minutes later the whole class stood up applauding Jenny’s wonderful speech. Jenny smiled as she eventually realized the real source of confidence.
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