2022届高考英语读后续写精读精炼（二十七）含答案解析
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2022届高考英语读后续写精读精炼（二十七）
目录 内容
Part A 读后续写模考经典原文
Part B 读后续写思路引导
Part C 写作优秀句式翻译
Part D 篇章写作润色
Part E 课后练笔巩固提升
Gary Messina, an investment banking analyst, now 38, was on his morning run along New York City's East River. Suddenly something caught his eye-a large 60-year-old man balancing on the four-foot-high railing (栏杆)that guarded the path from the water. As he got closer to the scene, the man took a step forward and jumped into the dark, rough river below. Messina rushed to the railing to find that the man was struggling in the water, clearly unable to swim. If he had intended to kill himself that morning, he had now changed his mind. The jumper screamed crazily for help as the rapids pulled him away from the seawall （防波堤）.Other joggers also heard the man's calling. John Green, now 31, immediately dropped his phone and keys on land, along with his sneakers, and jumped in the cold river. "People had called the police, but it was unclear when they'd get there," says Green, a commercial insurance broker. "I just reacted." Soon after that, Messina joined him in the river.
The flow was rapid while the temperature was freezing. Reaching to the jumper seemed to be a nearly impossible task for the two rescuers. Luckily, just as the jumper was losing strength, Green grabbed hold of him. The pair were about 30 yards from the seawall when Messina caught up with them. They stabilized the man, with Messina supporting his back and Green holding him up from either side. He was unresponsive but not unconscious.
As the men made their way toward the concrete seawall that stretched for blocks in each direction, Green had an awful realization: With the water flowing a good eight feet below the lip of the wail and no ladder or dock（码头）in sight, there was no way out of the river. What's worse, the jumper, who was six foot two and weighed around 260 pounds, was deadweight in his rescuers' arms, which meant they could use only their legs to support themselves in the water.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1:
A rescue boat is on its way," someone shouted to them.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph 2:
However, they encountered a new threat: The flow created by the rapids was sucking them under the boat.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Part B 读后续写思路引导
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Gary Messina和John Green勇敢救落水老人，但在过程中不断遇到险境的故事。
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“‘救援船已经在路上了，’有人对他们喊道。”可知，第一段可描写在救援船来之前三个人遇到的危险情况。
②由第二段首句内容“然而，他们遇到了一个新的威胁：急流产生的水流把他们吞没在船下。”可知，第二段可描写经过艰难险阻后最终获救的过程。
2.续写线索：踩水困难——到河边——救援船出现——新威胁的出现——回到陆地——回到工作
3.词汇激活
行为类
① 随着时间推移：as time goes by/with the passage of time/then As Time Passed
② 变得困难：become difficult/become tough
③ 到达：arrive/get to/reach
④ 出现：turn up/come out
⑤ 设法抓住：catch at/reach out for/grasp at
情绪类
① 幸运的是：be lucky to do/?fortunately for the week
② 毫无疑问：beyond all question/beyond doubt/without doubt
③ 精疲力尽：dead beat?/be used up
Part C 写作优秀句式翻译
“一艘救援船正在途中，”有人对他们喊道。
随着时间的推移，踩着的水变得越来越困难了。
十分钟后，他们设法到达了河边。
格林试图用一只手和一只英尺咬进墙上的一个小裂缝里，结果在这个过程中割伤了自己。
与水流搏斗，把那个人抱在水面上，很快就变得筋疲力尽，于是他们一边尽可能靠近墙，一边漂流。
幸运的是，救援船终于出现了。
然而，他们遇到了一个新的威胁：急流造成的水流把他们吸到船上。
墨西拿记得就在救援人员被打倒时，救援人员抓住了这名男子，让他放手。“我已经完全没有活力了，”他说。
不知怎么的，他抓住了一根固定在甲板上的杆子，毫无疑问地把他带到了安全的地方。
十分钟后，这群人就回到了陆地上。
他们救下来的那个人被送往医院接受评估。
至于救援人员，他们俩在上午10点半都在上班了。
“我有点晚了，”格林微笑着承认。“但我有一个很好的借口。”
参考答案：
"A rescue boat is on its way," someone yelled to them.
Treading water was getting tougher as time went by.
After ten minutes, they managed to get to the river's edge.
Green tried wedging a hand and a foot into a tiny crack in the wall, resulting in cutting himself in the process.
Fighting the current and holding the man above the water quickly became exhausting, so they gave in to drifting while staying as close to the wall as they could.
Fortunately, the rescue boat finally came in sight.
However, they encountered a new threat: The flow created by the rapids was sucking them under the boat.
Messina remembers being pulled down just as the rescuers grabbed onto the man allowing him to let go. "I was completely out of energy," he says.
Somehow, he grasped a pole attached to the boat deck, which undisputedly brought him to safety.
Within ten minutes, the group was back on land.
The man they had saved was taken to the hospital for evaluation.
As for the rescuers, both of them was at work by 10:30 a. m.
"I was a bit late," admits Green, smiling. "But I had a good excuse."
Part D 篇章写作润色
"A rescue boat is on its way," someone yelled to them. Treading water was getting tougher as time went by. After ten minutes, they managed to get to the river's edge. Green tried wedging a hand and a foot into a tiny crack in the wall, resulting in cutting himself in the process. Fighting the current and holding the man above the water quickly became exhausting, so they gave in to drifting while staying as close to the wall as they could. Fortunately, the rescue boat finally came in sight.
However, they encountered a new threat: The flow created by the rapids was sucking them under the boat. Messina remembers being pulled down just as the rescuers grabbed onto the man allowing him to let go. "I was completely out of energy," he says. Somehow, he grasped a pole attached to the boat deck, which undisputedly brought him to safety. Within ten minutes, the group was back on land. The man they had saved was taken to the hospital for evaluation. As for the rescuers, both of them was at work by 10:30 a. m. "I was a bit late," admits Green, smiling. "But I had a good excuse."
Part E 课后练笔巩固提升 .
When tragedy struck his little girl during the Depression(大萧条), this father did the only thing he could.
The tragedy happened in the year 1933. I was only 6 years old when I was rushed to the hospital with two crushed feet. My parents were told I might never walk again.
The accident happened when I was sitting in front of our house in Lowell, Massachusetts. I was playing in a puddle(水坑) after a rainstorm and suddenly felt a huge weight on my feet. When I looked up, there was a car tire on them. I cried out, but the motor was running and no one could hear me over the engine.
The driver had run across the street for a newspaper. When he got back to his car, he drove away—never knowing he had parked on my feet.
Just about then, our neighbor’s son came home and saw me bent over my feet in pain. He immediately carried me home, and I remember thinking how tall and strong he was.
An ambulance came, and I remained in the hospital for 3 weeks while my feet were “repaired”. When I returned home, I could hardly walk.
I sat in our bay window and watched the children play on the street and longed to join them…but I couldn’t. I felt so left out despite my parents’ company.
My parents were told that if I was ever to walk again, I’d need treatment, which in those days meant riding a tricycle(三轮车)to strengthen the muscle and eventually get my feet back into condition for walking.
Our family couldn’t afford such an extravagance(奢侈品). Times were tough during the Depression, and there were five mouths to feed, besides buying coal and wood for the stove.
Dad couldn’t afford the bus fare and on cold winter days he walked 7 miles every day in his only winter coat to get to work. No, there was no money for a tricycle. I would be a cripple(瘸子)all my life.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
Paragraph 1：
Then on day, while sitting at my usual place in the window, I saw my father walking up the street carrying a tricycle on his shoulder.
__________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph 2:
It was many years later before I learned where and how Dad had got the tricycle.
__________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
参考答案：
Paragraph 1:
Then one day，while sitting at my usual place in the window, I saw my father walking up the street carrying a tricycle on his shoulder. Was that true? I couldn't believe my eyes.I opened the window and cried out,“Is that tricycle for me？” Having put down the tricycle，Dad told me that it belonged to me.“Ride the tricycle every day，and then you will be all right，my girl！”From then on，with my father's company，I rode it every day to strengthen my muscle.Regardless of pain，I kept on practicing riding．Eventually I got my feet back into condition，and could walk normally!
Paragraph 2:
It was many years later before I learned where and how Dad had got the tricycle. My mother told me what happened on those cold winter days．In his only winter coat，he was wandering around the hospital.He begged the doctor to save my feet.Moved by my father，the doctor asked the hospital to give my father a parttime job to do.With the doctor's help，my father got the job.Working day and night，eventually，he earned enough money to buy the tricycle.
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2022届高考英语读后续写精读精炼（二十七）
目录 内容
Part A 读后续写模考经典原文
Part B 读后续写思路引导
Part C 写作优秀句式翻译
Part D 篇章写作润色
Part E 课后练笔巩固提升
Gary Messina, an investment banking analyst, now 38, was on his morning run along New York City's East River. Suddenly something caught his eye-a large 60-year-old man balancing on the four-foot-high railing (栏杆)that guarded the path from the water. As he got closer to the scene, the man took a step forward and jumped into the dark, rough river below. Messina rushed to the railing to find that the man was struggling in the water, clearly unable to swim. If he had intended to kill himself that morning, he had now changed his mind. The jumper screamed crazily for help as the rapids pulled him away from the seawall （防波堤）.Other joggers also heard the man's calling. John Green, now 31, immediately dropped his phone and keys on land, along with his sneakers, and jumped in the cold river. "People had called the police, but it was unclear when they'd get there," says Green, a commercial insurance broker. "I just reacted." Soon after that, Messina joined him in the river.
The flow was rapid while the temperature was freezing. Reaching to the jumper seemed to be a nearly impossible task for the two rescuers. Luckily, just as the jumper was losing strength, Green grabbed hold of him. The pair were about 30 yards from the seawall when Messina caught up with them. They stabilized the man, with Messina supporting his back and Green holding him up from either side. He was unresponsive but not unconscious.
As the men made their way toward the concrete seawall that stretched for blocks in each direction, Green had an awful realization: With the water flowing a good eight feet below the lip of the wail and no ladder or dock（码头）in sight, there was no way out of the river. What's worse, the jumper, who was six foot two and weighed around 260 pounds, was deadweight in his rescuers' arms, which meant they could use only their legs to support themselves in the water.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1:
A rescue boat is on its way," someone shouted to them.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph 2:
However, they encountered a new threat: The flow created by the rapids was sucking them under the boat.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Part B 读后续写思路引导
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Gary Messina和John Green勇敢救落水老人，但在过程中不断遇到险境的故事。
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“‘救援船已经在路上了，’有人对他们喊道。”可知，第一段可描写在救援船来之前三个人遇到的危险情况。
②由第二段首句内容“然而，他们遇到了一个新的威胁：急流产生的水流把他们吞没在船下。”可知，第二段可描写经过艰难险阻后最终获救的过程。
2.续写线索：踩水困难——到河边——救援船出现——新威胁的出现——回到陆地——回到工作
3.词汇激活
行为类
① 随着时间推移：as time goes by/with the passage of time/then As Time Passed
② 变得困难：become difficult/become tough
③ 到达：arrive/get to/reach
④ 出现：turn up/come out
⑤ 设法抓住：catch at/reach out for/grasp at
情绪类
① 幸运的是：be lucky to do/?fortunately for the week
② 毫无疑问：beyond all question/beyond doubt/without doubt
③ 精疲力尽：dead beat?/be used up
Part C 写作优秀句式翻译
“一艘救援船正在途中，”有人对他们喊道。
随着时间的推移，踩着的水变得越来越困难了。
十分钟后，他们设法到达了河边。
格林试图用一只手和一只英尺咬进墙上的一个小裂缝里，结果在这个过程中割伤了自己。
与水流搏斗，把那个人抱在水面上，很快就变得筋疲力尽，于是他们一边尽可能靠近墙，一边漂流。
幸运的是，救援船终于出现了。
然而，他们遇到了一个新的威胁：急流造成的水流把他们吸到船上。
墨西拿记得就在救援人员被打倒时，救援人员抓住了这名男子，让他放手。“我已经完全没有活力了，”他说。
不知怎么的，他抓住了一根固定在甲板上的杆子，毫无疑问地把他带到了安全的地方。
十分钟后，这群人就回到了陆地上。
他们救下来的那个人被送往医院接受评估。
至于救援人员，他们俩在上午10点半都在上班了。
“我有点晚了，”格林微笑着承认。“但我有一个很好的借口。”
参考答案：
"A rescue boat is on its way," someone yelled to them.
Treading water was getting tougher as time went by.
After ten minutes, they managed to get to the river's edge.
Green tried wedging a hand and a foot into a tiny crack in the wall, resulting in cutting himself in the process.
Fighting the current and holding the man above the water quickly became exhausting, so they gave in to drifting while staying as close to the wall as they could.
Fortunately, the rescue boat finally came in sight.
However, they encountered a new threat: The flow created by the rapids was sucking them under the boat.
Messina remembers being pulled down just as the rescuers grabbed onto the man allowing him to let go. "I was completely out of energy," he says.
Somehow, he grasped a pole attached to the boat deck, which undisputedly brought him to safety.
Within ten minutes, the group was back on land.
The man they had saved was taken to the hospital for evaluation.
As for the rescuers, both of them was at work by 10:30 a. m.
"I was a bit late," admits Green, smiling. "But I had a good excuse."
Part D 篇章写作润色
"A rescue boat is on its way," someone yelled to them. Treading water was getting tougher as time went by. After ten minutes, they managed to get to the river's edge. Green tried wedging a hand and a foot into a tiny crack in the wall, resulting in cutting himself in the process. Fighting the current and holding the man above the water quickly became exhausting, so they gave in to drifting while staying as close to the wall as they could. Fortunately, the rescue boat finally came in sight.
However, they encountered a new threat: The flow created by the rapids was sucking them under the boat. Messina remembers being pulled down just as the rescuers grabbed onto the man allowing him to let go. "I was completely out of energy," he says. Somehow, he grasped a pole attached to the boat deck, which undisputedly brought him to safety. Within ten minutes, the group was back on land. The man they had saved was taken to the hospital for evaluation. As for the rescuers, both of them was at work by 10:30 a. m. "I was a bit late," admits Green, smiling. "But I had a good excuse."
Part E 课后练笔巩固提升 .
When tragedy struck his little girl during the Depression(大萧条), this father did the only thing he could.
The tragedy happened in the year 1933. I was only 6 years old when I was rushed to the hospital with two crushed feet. My parents were told I might never walk again.
The accident happened when I was sitting in front of our house in Lowell, Massachusetts. I was playing in a puddle(水坑) after a rainstorm and suddenly felt a huge weight on my feet. When I looked up, there was a car tire on them. I cried out, but the motor was running and no one could hear me over the engine.
The driver had run across the street for a newspaper. When he got back to his car, he drove away—never knowing he had parked on my feet.
Just about then, our neighbor’s son came home and saw me bent over my feet in pain. He immediately carried me home, and I remember thinking how tall and strong he was.
An ambulance came, and I remained in the hospital for 3 weeks while my feet were “repaired”. When I returned home, I could hardly walk.
I sat in our bay window and watched the children play on the street and longed to join them…but I couldn’t. I felt so left out despite my parents’ company.
My parents were told that if I was ever to walk again, I’d need treatment, which in those days meant riding a tricycle(三轮车)to strengthen the muscle and eventually get my feet back into condition for walking.
Our family couldn’t afford such an extravagance(奢侈品). Times were tough during the Depression, and there were five mouths to feed, besides buying coal and wood for the stove.
Dad couldn’t afford the bus fare and on cold winter days he walked 7 miles every day in his only winter coat to get to work. No, there was no money for a tricycle. I would be a cripple(瘸子)all my life.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
Paragraph 1：
Then on day, while sitting at my usual place in the window, I saw my father walking up the street carrying a tricycle on his shoulder.
__________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph 2:
It was many years later before I learned where and how Dad had got the tricycle.
__________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
参考答案：
Paragraph 1:
Then one day，while sitting at my usual place in the window, I saw my father walking up the street carrying a tricycle on his shoulder. Was that true? I couldn't believe my eyes.I opened the window and cried out,“Is that tricycle for me？” Having put down the tricycle，Dad told me that it belonged to me.“Ride the tricycle every day，and then you will be all right，my girl！”From then on，with my father's company，I rode it every day to strengthen my muscle.Regardless of pain，I kept on practicing riding．Eventually I got my feet back into condition，and could walk normally!
Paragraph 2:
It was many years later before I learned where and how Dad had got the tricycle. My mother told me what happened on those cold winter days．In his only winter coat，he was wandering around the hospital.He begged the doctor to save my feet.Moved by my father，the doctor asked the hospital to give my father a parttime job to do.With the doctor's help，my father got the job.Working day and night，eventually，he earned enough money to buy the tricycle.
_21?????????è?????(www.21cnjy.com)_