2022届高考英语读后续写精读精炼（二十八）含答案解析
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2022届高考英语读后续写精读精炼（二十八）
目录 内容
Part A 读后续写模考经典原文
Part B 读后续写思路引导
Part C 写作优秀句式翻译
Part D 篇章写作润色
Part E 课后练笔巩固提升
Part A读后续写模考经典原文
When a tornado(龙卷风) touched down in a small town nearby,many families were left completed ruined. Afterward all the local newspapers carried many human-interest stories featuring some of the families who suffered the hardest.
One Sunday, a particular picture especially touched me. A young woman stood in front of an entirely shattered(破碎的) mobile home, a depressed expression on her face. A young boy, seven or eight years old, stood at her side, eyes downward. Clutching(紧握) at her skirt was a tiny girl who stared into the camera, eyes wide with confusion and fear.
The article that went with the picture gave the clothing sizes of each family member. With growing interest, I noticed that their sizes closely matched ours. This would be a good opportunity to teach my children to help those less fortunate than themselves. I stuck the picture of the young family on our refrigerator, explaining their difficulty to my seven-year-old twins, Brad and Brett, and to three-year-old Meghan.
“These poor people now have nothing,” I said. “We’ll share what we have with them. I brought three large boxes down from the room upstairs and placed them on the living room floor. Meghan watched seriously, as the boys and I filled one of the boxes with canned goods and foods.
While I sorted through our clothes, I encouraged the boys to go through their toys and donate some of their less favorite things. Meghan watched quietly as the boys piled up old toys and games.
Meghan walked up with Lucy, her worn, much-loved rag doll hugged tightly to her chest. She came to the box that held the toys, pressed her round little face into Lucy's flat, painted-on-face, gave her a final kiss, then laid her gently on top of the other toys.
“Oh, Honey,” I said.” You don’t have to give Lucy. You love her so much.”
Meghan nodded seriously, eyes filled with held-back tears. "Lucy makes me happy, Mommy. Maybe she’ll make that other little girl happy,too.”
Paragraph. 1:
The boys had watched,open-mouthed,as their baby sister placed her favorite doll in the box.
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____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph. 2:
I looked my children for a long moment.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Part B 读后续写思路引导
本文以一张报纸上照片为线索展开。讲述了一次严重的龙卷风灾害后，作者在报纸上看到了很多受灾家庭的照片，心生怜悯之情。于是决定发动自己的家人向他们捐赠一些物资，自己的女儿将自己最喜欢的玩具也捐了出去的故事。
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“当他们的小妹妹把她最喜欢的洋娃娃放进盒子里时，两个男孩张大了嘴巴看着。”可知，第一段可描写男孩子门在看到妹妹这一举动之后的表现。
②由第二段首句内容“我盯着我的孩子看了很长时间。”可知，第二段可描写作者在看到自己孩子的举动之后的反应和内心的感悟。
2.续写线索：男孩子惊讶——男孩子拿出自己的东西——我惊讶——拿出我的东西——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.放弃： let go of / abandon
②.忍住泪水：swallowing back/holding back tears
情绪类
①.惊讶：astonished / amazed / be surprised
②.犹豫：hesitate/stand at
Part C 写作优秀句式翻译
男孩们张大嘴看着妹妹把她最喜欢的娃娃放在盒子里。
布拉德一句话也不说，站起来走进他的房间。
他带着一个他最喜欢的动作玩偶回来了。
他犹豫了一下，抓住了玩具，然后看了看梅根，把它放在露西旁边的盒子里。
布雷特的脸上掠过一个慢慢的微笑。
然后他跳了起来，眼睛闪着光芒，跑去拿他的一些珍贵的火柴盒车。
我惊讶地发现，我意识到男孩们也认识到了小梅根的手势的意思。?
我看了看我的孩子们很长时间。我流下眼泪，把三个都拉在怀里。
受到孩子们的启发，我把旧夹克从衣服盒里脱下了旧夹克。
我把它换成了上周发现的新的猎人绿色夹克。
我希望照片中的年轻女人能像我一样喜欢它。我们很容易给我们不再想要的东西，但更难放弃我们珍惜的东西。
然而，给予的真正精神是用心奉献。
参考答案：
The boys had watched, open-mouthed, as their baby sister placed her favorite doll in the box.
Without a word, Brad rose and went to his room.
He came back carrying one of his favorite action figures.
He hesitated briefly, clutching the toy, then looked over at Meghan and placed it in the box next to Lucy.
A slow smile spread across Brett’s face.
Then he jumped up, eyes twinkling as he ran to fetch some of his prized Matchbox cars.
Astonished, I realized that the boys had also recognized what little Meghan’s gesture meant
I looked at my children for a long moment. Swallowing back tears, I pulled all three of them into my arms.
Inspired by my little ones, I removed my old jacket from the box of clothes.
I replaced it with the new hunter green jacket that I had found on sale last week.
I hoped the young woman in the picture would love it as much as I did. It’s easy to give what we don’t want any more, but harder to let go of things we cherish.
However, the true spirit of giving is to give with your heart.
Part D 篇章写作润色
The boys had watched, open-mouthed, as their baby sister placed her favorite doll in the box. Without a word, Brad rose and went to his room. He came back carrying one of his favorite action figures. He hesitated briefly, clutching the toy, then looked over at Meghan and placed it in the box next to Lucy. A slow smile spread across Brett’s face. Then he jumped up, eyes twinkling as he ran to fetch some of his prized Matchbox cars. Astonished, I realized that the boys had also recognized what little Meghan’s gesture meant.?
I looked at my children for a long moment. Swallowing back tears, I pulled all three of them into my arms. Inspired by my little ones, I removed my old jacket from the box of clothes. I replaced it with the new hunter green jacket that I had found on sale last week. I hoped the young woman in the picture would love it as much as I did. It’s easy to give what we don’t want any more, but harder to let go of things we cherish. However, the true spirit of giving is to give with your heart.
Part E 课后练笔巩固提升 .
The rain came down steady and hard. Jason Storie heard it but was not worried as he prepared for a day of caving with five friends in a remote spot 80 miles northwest of his home in Duncan, on Canada’s Vancouver Island.
It was 6 a.m. on December 5, 2015. As a newcomer to the sport, Jason had gone caving only four times. This would be his toughest outing yet: a cave called Cascade. It was dangerous enough that the entrance was blocked by a locked metal door to keep the casual cavers out. About a mile long and 338 feet deep,Cascade was full of tums and barely passable tight squeezes.
Jason was new among the group, with the least experience and, at 43, older by a decade or more. It was his friend Andrew Munoz, 33, who introduced him to the sport. Unlike Jason,Andrew was an expert caver-a former caving guide, actually.
They hiked a bit before coming to the door, which sat in the ground—you’d miss it if you weren’t looking for it. It was 10 a.m. With their way lighted by headlamps, they walked down a narrow passage studded with sharp rocks. The silence was broken by a drip-drip-drip from above. Soon the drip turned into a light but steady flow, and they were wading in water up to their ankles, then to their shins.
Two hours later, they approached one of the features that made the cave unique: a narrow passage not big enough to stand up in that led into a short, tight downhill. This had a name: Bastard’s Crawl. Four streams met here, and indeed, the water was flowing more quickly. The sound of the water had turned into a roar. When they finally neared the top of the Crawl, there were barely four inches of air left between the water and the ceiling. not enough for them to keep their heads up to breathe. They came to terrifying realization that they were in danger！
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
Paragraph 1：
The water kept rising, and there was no hope of rescue.
__________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph 2：
Slowly but steadily, the group made their way forward.
__________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
参考答案：
The water kept rising, and there was no hope of rescue. The hours passed. Jason and Andrew didn’t dare to move for fear of slipping. They dozed off and then jerked themselves awake. Every once in a while, one of them turned on his headlamp to check the water level. An hour later, the water level went down enough that they could try an escape. Stiff from keeping in one position for 12 hours, they slowly unfolded their bodies. Jason screamed in pain, but he was determined not to let it stop him.
Slowly but steadily, the group made their way forward. Still, each time Jason moved a leg, he cried out. Over the next 90 minutes, they made their way toward the entrance, at times in chest-high water. Now, in a passage that was high enough for them to walk upright, Jason saw something flicker in the distance. “Lights! I see lights!” Jason shouted out. For the first time since entering the cave, over 20 hours earlier, Jason’s emotions got the best of him and tears trickled down his cheeks.
.
_21?????????è?????(www.21cnjy.com)_
2022届高考英语读后续写精读精炼（二十八）
目录 内容
Part A 读后续写模考经典原文
Part B 读后续写思路引导
Part C 写作优秀句式翻译
Part D 篇章写作润色
Part E 课后练笔巩固提升
Part A读后续写模考经典原文
When a tornado(龙卷风) touched down in a small town nearby,many families were left completed ruined. Afterward all the local newspapers carried many human-interest stories featuring some of the families who suffered the hardest.
One Sunday, a particular picture especially touched me. A young woman stood in front of an entirely shattered(破碎的) mobile home, a depressed expression on her face. A young boy, seven or eight years old, stood at her side, eyes downward. Clutching(紧握) at her skirt was a tiny girl who stared into the camera, eyes wide with confusion and fear.
The article that went with the picture gave the clothing sizes of each family member. With growing interest, I noticed that their sizes closely matched ours. This would be a good opportunity to teach my children to help those less fortunate than themselves. I stuck the picture of the young family on our refrigerator, explaining their difficulty to my seven-year-old twins, Brad and Brett, and to three-year-old Meghan.
“These poor people now have nothing,” I said. “We’ll share what we have with them. I brought three large boxes down from the room upstairs and placed them on the living room floor. Meghan watched seriously, as the boys and I filled one of the boxes with canned goods and foods.
While I sorted through our clothes, I encouraged the boys to go through their toys and donate some of their less favorite things. Meghan watched quietly as the boys piled up old toys and games.
Meghan walked up with Lucy, her worn, much-loved rag doll hugged tightly to her chest. She came to the box that held the toys, pressed her round little face into Lucy's flat, painted-on-face, gave her a final kiss, then laid her gently on top of the other toys.
“Oh, Honey,” I said.” You don’t have to give Lucy. You love her so much.”
Meghan nodded seriously, eyes filled with held-back tears. "Lucy makes me happy, Mommy. Maybe she’ll make that other little girl happy,too.”
Paragraph. 1:
The boys had watched,open-mouthed,as their baby sister placed her favorite doll in the box.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph. 2:
I looked my children for a long moment.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Part B 读后续写思路引导
本文以一张报纸上照片为线索展开。讲述了一次严重的龙卷风灾害后，作者在报纸上看到了很多受灾家庭的照片，心生怜悯之情。于是决定发动自己的家人向他们捐赠一些物资，自己的女儿将自己最喜欢的玩具也捐了出去的故事。
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“当他们的小妹妹把她最喜欢的洋娃娃放进盒子里时，两个男孩张大了嘴巴看着。”可知，第一段可描写男孩子门在看到妹妹这一举动之后的表现。
②由第二段首句内容“我盯着我的孩子看了很长时间。”可知，第二段可描写作者在看到自己孩子的举动之后的反应和内心的感悟。
2.续写线索：男孩子惊讶——男孩子拿出自己的东西——我惊讶——拿出我的东西——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.放弃： let go of / abandon
②.忍住泪水：swallowing back/holding back tears
情绪类
①.惊讶：astonished / amazed / be surprised
②.犹豫：hesitate/stand at
Part C 写作优秀句式翻译
男孩们张大嘴看着妹妹把她最喜欢的娃娃放在盒子里。
布拉德一句话也不说，站起来走进他的房间。
他带着一个他最喜欢的动作玩偶回来了。
他犹豫了一下，抓住了玩具，然后看了看梅根，把它放在露西旁边的盒子里。
布雷特的脸上掠过一个慢慢的微笑。
然后他跳了起来，眼睛闪着光芒，跑去拿他的一些珍贵的火柴盒车。
我惊讶地发现，我意识到男孩们也认识到了小梅根的手势的意思。?
我看了看我的孩子们很长时间。我流下眼泪，把三个都拉在怀里。
受到孩子们的启发，我把旧夹克从衣服盒里脱下了旧夹克。
我把它换成了上周发现的新的猎人绿色夹克。
我希望照片中的年轻女人能像我一样喜欢它。我们很容易给我们不再想要的东西，但更难放弃我们珍惜的东西。
然而，给予的真正精神是用心奉献。
参考答案：
The boys had watched, open-mouthed, as their baby sister placed her favorite doll in the box.
Without a word, Brad rose and went to his room.
He came back carrying one of his favorite action figures.
He hesitated briefly, clutching the toy, then looked over at Meghan and placed it in the box next to Lucy.
A slow smile spread across Brett’s face.
Then he jumped up, eyes twinkling as he ran to fetch some of his prized Matchbox cars.
Astonished, I realized that the boys had also recognized what little Meghan’s gesture meant
I looked at my children for a long moment. Swallowing back tears, I pulled all three of them into my arms.
Inspired by my little ones, I removed my old jacket from the box of clothes.
I replaced it with the new hunter green jacket that I had found on sale last week.
I hoped the young woman in the picture would love it as much as I did. It’s easy to give what we don’t want any more, but harder to let go of things we cherish.
However, the true spirit of giving is to give with your heart.
Part D 篇章写作润色
The boys had watched, open-mouthed, as their baby sister placed her favorite doll in the box. Without a word, Brad rose and went to his room. He came back carrying one of his favorite action figures. He hesitated briefly, clutching the toy, then looked over at Meghan and placed it in the box next to Lucy. A slow smile spread across Brett’s face. Then he jumped up, eyes twinkling as he ran to fetch some of his prized Matchbox cars. Astonished, I realized that the boys had also recognized what little Meghan’s gesture meant.?
I looked at my children for a long moment. Swallowing back tears, I pulled all three of them into my arms. Inspired by my little ones, I removed my old jacket from the box of clothes. I replaced it with the new hunter green jacket that I had found on sale last week. I hoped the young woman in the picture would love it as much as I did. It’s easy to give what we don’t want any more, but harder to let go of things we cherish. However, the true spirit of giving is to give with your heart.
Part E 课后练笔巩固提升 .
The rain came down steady and hard. Jason Storie heard it but was not worried as he prepared for a day of caving with five friends in a remote spot 80 miles northwest of his home in Duncan, on Canada’s Vancouver Island.
It was 6 a.m. on December 5, 2015. As a newcomer to the sport, Jason had gone caving only four times. This would be his toughest outing yet: a cave called Cascade. It was dangerous enough that the entrance was blocked by a locked metal door to keep the casual cavers out. About a mile long and 338 feet deep,Cascade was full of tums and barely passable tight squeezes.
Jason was new among the group, with the least experience and, at 43, older by a decade or more. It was his friend Andrew Munoz, 33, who introduced him to the sport. Unlike Jason,Andrew was an expert caver-a former caving guide, actually.
They hiked a bit before coming to the door, which sat in the ground—you’d miss it if you weren’t looking for it. It was 10 a.m. With their way lighted by headlamps, they walked down a narrow passage studded with sharp rocks. The silence was broken by a drip-drip-drip from above. Soon the drip turned into a light but steady flow, and they were wading in water up to their ankles, then to their shins.
Two hours later, they approached one of the features that made the cave unique: a narrow passage not big enough to stand up in that led into a short, tight downhill. This had a name: Bastard’s Crawl. Four streams met here, and indeed, the water was flowing more quickly. The sound of the water had turned into a roar. When they finally neared the top of the Crawl, there were barely four inches of air left between the water and the ceiling. not enough for them to keep their heads up to breathe. They came to terrifying realization that they were in danger！
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
Paragraph 1：
The water kept rising, and there was no hope of rescue.
__________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph 2：
Slowly but steadily, the group made their way forward.
__________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
参考答案：
The water kept rising, and there was no hope of rescue. The hours passed. Jason and Andrew didn’t dare to move for fear of slipping. They dozed off and then jerked themselves awake. Every once in a while, one of them turned on his headlamp to check the water level. An hour later, the water level went down enough that they could try an escape. Stiff from keeping in one position for 12 hours, they slowly unfolded their bodies. Jason screamed in pain, but he was determined not to let it stop him.
Slowly but steadily, the group made their way forward. Still, each time Jason moved a leg, he cried out. Over the next 90 minutes, they made their way toward the entrance, at times in chest-high water. Now, in a passage that was high enough for them to walk upright, Jason saw something flicker in the distance. “Lights! I see lights!” Jason shouted out. For the first time since entering the cave, over 20 hours earlier, Jason’s emotions got the best of him and tears trickled down his cheeks.
.
_21?????????è?????(www.21cnjy.com)_