2022届高考英语读后续写精读精炼（三十）含答案解析
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2022届高考英语读后续写精读精炼（三十）
目录 内容
Part A 读后续写模考经典原文
Part B 读后续写思路引导
Part C 写作优秀句式翻译
Part D 篇章写作润色
Part E 课后练笔巩固提升
Part A读后续写模考经典原文
A sudden call came into Jimmy Gilleece's bar this past March. A newly married woman who had spent the afternoon at the dive beach bar couldn’t find her wallet. She didn't care about her ID．credit cards, or $150 in cash, but her wedding ring was just inside.
Gilleece. 42. didn't like the idea that a theft could have happened at his place, so he spent hours searching 16 different cameras, watching the woman’s every step until she went to sit on a bench outside and left when her ride arrived. Within minutes, a young man in a hoodie(连帽衫)approached the bench, Put something in his pocket, and walked off. Gilleece posted a clip on the bar’s Facebook page. “I didn't want to criticize him." he said. “I just asked if anybody knew who the guy was.” Within hours. Giileece got a text message from 17-year-old Rivers Prather, who admitted taking the wallet and said he'd done it because he hadn't eaten in two days. Thinking the ring was fake, he threw the wallet into the ocean and took the money to buy a sandwich.
Gilleece. unsure whether he believed Prather, told the teenager Io meet him at the docks(码头).There. they got to talking, and Prather said that he wasn't getting along with his family and had been living in the woods for a week Gilleece. a father of two. took stock of(审视)Prather- his small body, his flushing(涨得通红的)checks - and saw him for what he was: more of a kid than a criminal.
Hou ever, the police were already on the ease and because of the missing ring. Prather could be facing severe charge. Gilleece decided to help. He employed two local divers to search the waters where Prather had thrown the wallet. Meanwhile, the police wanted Gilleece to bring the teen down to the station. Instead. Gilleece called the police and told them. "He's going to be al the docks with me tomorrow.”
注意:1.续写词数应为150词左右;
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1:
A crowd had gathered to watch the two divers search in the strong current.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph 2:
But it wasn’t over for Gilleece.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Part B 读后续写思路引导
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了一位刚结婚的女士在Gilleece的酒吧里丢了钱包，这位女士很在意放在钱包里的结婚戒指。Gilleece不相信他店里会发生这件事情。于是，他开始调查，之后收到Prather的信息。Prather告诉了他偷钱包的原因，并且他把钱包已经丢到了海里。最后，Gilleece并没有把他当作罪犯，反而决定帮助Prather，他雇了两位潜水员在海里成功地打捞到了钱包的故事。
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“一群人聚集在一起，看着两个潜水员在强流中搜寻。”可知，第一段可描写潜水员搜寻戒指的过程，并成功找到了戒指。
②由第二段首句内容“但这对Gilleece来说还没有结束。”可知，第二段可描写Gilleece帮Prather安排住宿的地方，让他重新回到正常的生活，Prather受到了感动，决心做个好人。
2.续写线索：搜寻——嫌疑——找到——开心——帮助——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
搜寻：search /seek for
嫌疑：question/suspect
找到：find/get back
情绪类
开心：happy/be delightful
焦虑：grow worried/be anxious
Part C 写作优秀句式翻译
一群人聚集在一起，观看这两名潜水员在湍急的水流中搜寻。
不止一个人通过了，没有戒指的迹象。
吉利斯开始担心，尤其是当警察开始询问普拉瑟并试图让他承认保留了戒指的时候
每过一分钟，他都增加了他逮捕那个年轻人的机会。
然后，一个潜水员跳了出来。他手里拿着钱包，里面是戒指。
人群中爆发出了欢呼声。就连侦探也很高兴。
但吉里斯的一切还没有结束。
他一直为普拉瑟睡在寒冷的树林里而感到烦恼。
吉利斯知道他的家足够大，可以给普拉瑟一个地方住一段时间。
他告诉这个少年，他可以和家人呆在一起，直到那个男孩再次站起来。
他还给了孩子在酒吧的一份工作。“大多数人会把录像（监控录像）交给警察，但要选择相信我，帮助我。
我会像他预期的那样，努力努力成为一个好人，”普拉瑟在一次采访中说。
参考答案：
A crowd had gathered to watch the two divers search in the strong current.
More than an hoi passed, with no sign of the ring.
Gilleece grew worried, especially when the police began questi Prather and trying to get him to admit to keeping the ring.
Each passing minute increased the chances that he would arrest the young man.
Then a diver popped up.
In his hand was the wallet, and inside was the ring.
Cheers erupted from the crowd. Even the detective was happy.
But it wasn’t over for Gilleece. He’d been troubled about Prather sleeping in the cold woods.
Gilleece knew his home was big enough to give Prather a place to live for a while.
He told the teen he could stay with his family until the boy got on his feet again.
He also gave the kid a job at his bar.“Most people would have given the footage(监控录像)to police, but be chose to believe me and help me.
I’ll work hard to become a good guy, just as he expected,” Prather said in an interview.
Part D 篇章写作润色
A crowd had gathered to watch the two divers search in the strong current. More than an hoi passed, with no sign of the ring. Gilleece grew worried, especially when the police began questi Prather and trying to get him to admit to keeping the ring. Each passing minute increased the chances that he would arrest the young man. Then a diver popped up. In his hand was the wallet, and inside was the ring. Cheers erupted from the crowd. Even the detective was happy.
But it wasn’t over for Gilleece. He’d been troubled about Prather sleeping in the cold woods. Gilleece knew his home was big enough to give Prather a place to live for a while. He told the teen he could stay with his family until the boy got on his feet again. He also gave the kid a job at his bar.“Most people would have given the footage(监控录像)to police, but be chose to believe me and help me. I’ll work hard to become a good guy, just as he expected,” Prather said in an interview.
Part E 课后练笔巩固提升 .
On a cold windy day, a poor boy tried to pay his way through school by selling goods door to door. Wandering on the street, he was not a successful seller. What’s worse, he found that he only had one dime(十分硬币)left. His empty stomach reminded him constantly that for days he hadn’t eaten anything. He had no choice but to beg for a meal at the next house. Hesitantly he knocked at the door, thinking about what to say when it opened. However, he lost his nerve when a lovely young woman opened the door. “What can I do for you?” asked the young woman. The boy paused for a while. “Would you please give me some...a drink of water?” the boy dare not look directly into her eyes. She looked at the bony boy and thought he might need something to give himself energy so she brought him a glass of milk. His head rising and small hands taking the cup, he drank it up slowly, and then asked, “How much do I owe you?”“You don’t owe me anything,” she replied with a warm smile on her face. “My mother has taught me never to accept pay for a kindness.” Deeply moved, he said sincerely, “Then I shall thank you from the bottom of my heart.”As Howard Kelly left that house, he felt stronger physically. It also increased his faith in God and the whole human race. As a matter of fact, he was about to give up and quit before that point.
Years later the young woman became critically ill. However, the local doctors were unable to give her the effective medical treatment. Finally they sent her to a hospital in the big city, where specialists can be called in to cure her rare disease. Among those famous specialists, Dr. Howard Kelly was called in for the consultation. When he heard the name of the town she came from, a strange light filled his eyes. Immediately, he rose and went down through the hospital hall into her room.
注意:
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
Paragraph 1:
Dressed in his doctor’s gown, he went in to see her.
__________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph 2:
The bill was sent to her room.
__________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
参考答案：
Paragraph 1:
Dressed in his doctor’s gown, he went in to see her. He saw her lying on the bed and recognized her at once. Her lovely face looked pale. He went back to the consultation room and determined to do his best to save her life. From that day on, he gave special attention to her case. Luckily, after a long struggle, the battle was won. Dr. Kelly requested the business office to pass the final bill to him for approval. He looked at it and then wrote something on the side.
Paragraph 2:
The bill was sent to her room. Hesitantly she took it. She was afraid to open it because she was sure that it would take the rest of her life to pay it off. Finally she opened it, on the side of which a note caught her attention. She read these words, “Paid in full with a glass of milk.” signed by Dr. Howard Kelly. Tears of joy flooded her eyes as she prayed silently, “Thank you, God.”
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2022届高考英语读后续写精读精炼（三十）
目录 内容
Part A 读后续写模考经典原文
Part B 读后续写思路引导
Part C 写作优秀句式翻译
Part D 篇章写作润色
Part E 课后练笔巩固提升
Part A读后续写模考经典原文
A sudden call came into Jimmy Gilleece's bar this past March. A newly married woman who had spent the afternoon at the dive beach bar couldn’t find her wallet. She didn't care about her ID．credit cards, or $150 in cash, but her wedding ring was just inside.
Gilleece. 42. didn't like the idea that a theft could have happened at his place, so he spent hours searching 16 different cameras, watching the woman’s every step until she went to sit on a bench outside and left when her ride arrived. Within minutes, a young man in a hoodie(连帽衫)approached the bench, Put something in his pocket, and walked off. Gilleece posted a clip on the bar’s Facebook page. “I didn't want to criticize him." he said. “I just asked if anybody knew who the guy was.” Within hours. Giileece got a text message from 17-year-old Rivers Prather, who admitted taking the wallet and said he'd done it because he hadn't eaten in two days. Thinking the ring was fake, he threw the wallet into the ocean and took the money to buy a sandwich.
Gilleece. unsure whether he believed Prather, told the teenager Io meet him at the docks(码头).There. they got to talking, and Prather said that he wasn't getting along with his family and had been living in the woods for a week Gilleece. a father of two. took stock of(审视)Prather- his small body, his flushing(涨得通红的)checks - and saw him for what he was: more of a kid than a criminal.
Hou ever, the police were already on the ease and because of the missing ring. Prather could be facing severe charge. Gilleece decided to help. He employed two local divers to search the waters where Prather had thrown the wallet. Meanwhile, the police wanted Gilleece to bring the teen down to the station. Instead. Gilleece called the police and told them. "He's going to be al the docks with me tomorrow.”
注意:1.续写词数应为150词左右;
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1:
A crowd had gathered to watch the two divers search in the strong current.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph 2:
But it wasn’t over for Gilleece.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Part B 读后续写思路引导
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了一位刚结婚的女士在Gilleece的酒吧里丢了钱包，这位女士很在意放在钱包里的结婚戒指。Gilleece不相信他店里会发生这件事情。于是，他开始调查，之后收到Prather的信息。Prather告诉了他偷钱包的原因，并且他把钱包已经丢到了海里。最后，Gilleece并没有把他当作罪犯，反而决定帮助Prather，他雇了两位潜水员在海里成功地打捞到了钱包的故事。
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“一群人聚集在一起，看着两个潜水员在强流中搜寻。”可知，第一段可描写潜水员搜寻戒指的过程，并成功找到了戒指。
②由第二段首句内容“但这对Gilleece来说还没有结束。”可知，第二段可描写Gilleece帮Prather安排住宿的地方，让他重新回到正常的生活，Prather受到了感动，决心做个好人。
2.续写线索：搜寻——嫌疑——找到——开心——帮助——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
搜寻：search /seek for
嫌疑：question/suspect
找到：find/get back
情绪类
开心：happy/be delightful
焦虑：grow worried/be anxious
Part C 写作优秀句式翻译
一群人聚集在一起，观看这两名潜水员在湍急的水流中搜寻。
不止一个人通过了，没有戒指的迹象。
吉利斯开始担心，尤其是当警察开始询问普拉瑟并试图让他承认保留了戒指的时候
每过一分钟，他都增加了他逮捕那个年轻人的机会。
然后，一个潜水员跳了出来。他手里拿着钱包，里面是戒指。
人群中爆发出了欢呼声。就连侦探也很高兴。
但吉里斯的一切还没有结束。
他一直为普拉瑟睡在寒冷的树林里而感到烦恼。
吉利斯知道他的家足够大，可以给普拉瑟一个地方住一段时间。
他告诉这个少年，他可以和家人呆在一起，直到那个男孩再次站起来。
他还给了孩子在酒吧的一份工作。“大多数人会把录像（监控录像）交给警察，但要选择相信我，帮助我。
我会像他预期的那样，努力努力成为一个好人，”普拉瑟在一次采访中说。
参考答案：
A crowd had gathered to watch the two divers search in the strong current.
More than an hoi passed, with no sign of the ring.
Gilleece grew worried, especially when the police began questi Prather and trying to get him to admit to keeping the ring.
Each passing minute increased the chances that he would arrest the young man.
Then a diver popped up.
In his hand was the wallet, and inside was the ring.
Cheers erupted from the crowd. Even the detective was happy.
But it wasn’t over for Gilleece. He’d been troubled about Prather sleeping in the cold woods.
Gilleece knew his home was big enough to give Prather a place to live for a while.
He told the teen he could stay with his family until the boy got on his feet again.
He also gave the kid a job at his bar.“Most people would have given the footage(监控录像)to police, but be chose to believe me and help me.
I’ll work hard to become a good guy, just as he expected,” Prather said in an interview.
Part D 篇章写作润色
A crowd had gathered to watch the two divers search in the strong current. More than an hoi passed, with no sign of the ring. Gilleece grew worried, especially when the police began questi Prather and trying to get him to admit to keeping the ring. Each passing minute increased the chances that he would arrest the young man. Then a diver popped up. In his hand was the wallet, and inside was the ring. Cheers erupted from the crowd. Even the detective was happy.
But it wasn’t over for Gilleece. He’d been troubled about Prather sleeping in the cold woods. Gilleece knew his home was big enough to give Prather a place to live for a while. He told the teen he could stay with his family until the boy got on his feet again. He also gave the kid a job at his bar.“Most people would have given the footage(监控录像)to police, but be chose to believe me and help me. I’ll work hard to become a good guy, just as he expected,” Prather said in an interview.
Part E 课后练笔巩固提升 .
On a cold windy day, a poor boy tried to pay his way through school by selling goods door to door. Wandering on the street, he was not a successful seller. What’s worse, he found that he only had one dime(十分硬币)left. His empty stomach reminded him constantly that for days he hadn’t eaten anything. He had no choice but to beg for a meal at the next house. Hesitantly he knocked at the door, thinking about what to say when it opened. However, he lost his nerve when a lovely young woman opened the door. “What can I do for you?” asked the young woman. The boy paused for a while. “Would you please give me some...a drink of water?” the boy dare not look directly into her eyes. She looked at the bony boy and thought he might need something to give himself energy so she brought him a glass of milk. His head rising and small hands taking the cup, he drank it up slowly, and then asked, “How much do I owe you?”“You don’t owe me anything,” she replied with a warm smile on her face. “My mother has taught me never to accept pay for a kindness.” Deeply moved, he said sincerely, “Then I shall thank you from the bottom of my heart.”As Howard Kelly left that house, he felt stronger physically. It also increased his faith in God and the whole human race. As a matter of fact, he was about to give up and quit before that point.
Years later the young woman became critically ill. However, the local doctors were unable to give her the effective medical treatment. Finally they sent her to a hospital in the big city, where specialists can be called in to cure her rare disease. Among those famous specialists, Dr. Howard Kelly was called in for the consultation. When he heard the name of the town she came from, a strange light filled his eyes. Immediately, he rose and went down through the hospital hall into her room.
注意:
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
Paragraph 1:
Dressed in his doctor’s gown, he went in to see her.
__________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph 2:
The bill was sent to her room.
__________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
参考答案：
Paragraph 1:
Dressed in his doctor’s gown, he went in to see her. He saw her lying on the bed and recognized her at once. Her lovely face looked pale. He went back to the consultation room and determined to do his best to save her life. From that day on, he gave special attention to her case. Luckily, after a long struggle, the battle was won. Dr. Kelly requested the business office to pass the final bill to him for approval. He looked at it and then wrote something on the side.
Paragraph 2:
The bill was sent to her room. Hesitantly she took it. She was afraid to open it because she was sure that it would take the rest of her life to pay it off. Finally she opened it, on the side of which a note caught her attention. She read these words, “Paid in full with a glass of milk.” signed by Dr. Howard Kelly. Tears of joy flooded her eyes as she prayed silently, “Thank you, God.”
_21?????????è?????(www.21cnjy.com)_