中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
2022高考英语之应用文写作(十)
原文呈现
假如你是李华,你听说好友小明因为压力太大想辍学。请你根据以下要点提示给他写一封信:
劝小明正确对待压力,并提出减轻压力的几个方法;
希望小明接受自己的建议。
注意:
词数80左右:
可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Xiao Ming,
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Yours,
Li Hua
知识储备
词组:
打算:
辍学:
最好的朋友:
放弃:
有正确的态度:
正常生活:
冷静:
发现:
设法做:
提出:
处理:
锻炼:
倾听:
转向某人寻求帮助:
采取帮助:
考虑到:
做出一个正确的决定:
参考答案:
intend?to;
drop?out;
best friends;
give up;
have?a?right?attitude?towards;
normal?life;
calm?down;
find?out;
manage?to do;
come?up?with;
deal?with;
as to;
take exercise;
listen to;
turn to sb. for help;
take?sth.?into?account;
make?a right decision
句式:
1.我很抱歉得知你打算因为高压力而退学。
作为你最好的朋友之一,我希望你能放弃这个想法。
你应该对压力有一个正确的态度。
我建议你冷静下来,找出压力的原因,想办法应对。
至于如何减轻压力,你可以进行锻炼,听音乐,或者向你的老师或同学寻求帮助。
我希望你能考虑到我的建议,我相信你会做出正确的决定。
参考答案:
I’m?sorry?to?learn?that?you?intend?to?drop?out?for?high?stress.
As one of your best friends, I hope that you can give up the idea.
You?should?have?a?right?attitude?towards?stress.
I?suggest?you?calm?down?and?find?out?the?cause?of?your?stress?and?manage?to?come?up?with?ways?of?dealing?with?it.
As to how to reduce stress, you may take exercise, listen to music or turn to your teachers or classmates for help.
I?hope?that?you?can?take?my?suggestion?into?account?and?I’m?convinced?that?you?will
?make?a right decision.
思路点拨
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一封信给好友小明,让小明正确对待压力和提出一些建议。
第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
人称:第一、二人称
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时。
结构:总-分-总法
要点:
1.劝小明正确对待压力,并提出减轻压力的几个方法;
2.希望小明接受自己的建议。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
第三步:连词成句;根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First?of?all;Second;
2.表并列补充关系:as to;and;or;
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
佳作展现
Dear?Xiaoming,
I’m?sorry?to?learn?that?you?intend?to?drop?out?for?high?stress. As one of your best friends, I hope that you can give up the idea.
First?of?all,you?should?have?a?right?attitude?towards?stress.Stress?is?a?small?part?in?our?normal?life.Second,?I?suggest?you?calm?down?and?find?out?the?cause?of?your?stress?and?manage?to?come?up?with?ways?of?dealing?with?it. As to how to reduce stress, you may take exercise, listen to music or turn to your teachers or classmates for help.
I?hope?that?you?can?take?my?suggestion?into?account?and?I’m?convinced?that?you?will?make?a right decision.
Yours?truly,
Li?hua
课后训练
Passage A
假如你是李华,因事你不能按时上交关于中西方文化差异的作文,请你用英文写一封电子邮件,向你的老师Chris请求延时交作业,内容包括:
1、请求延时;
2、说明原因;
3、希望批准。
注意:
1、词数80左右;
2、可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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Passage B
假定你是李华,你于5月1日从某网站购买的扫地机器人出现质量问题,地板清扫不干净,并且无法识别障碍物(如家具),严重影响你的情绪。请你给网商写封投诉信,希望问题得到重视,并在6月15日前解决好问题,内容包括:
1、产品质量问题;
2、要求全额退款;
3、等候答复。
注意:
1、词数80左右;
2、可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3、书信的开头和结尾已经给出
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A
Dear Chris,
I’m Li Hua. I’m terribly sorry that I will fail to finish my essay on cultural differences which is due on January 5th. I’m writing this to request you to extend the deadline.
Something unexpected occurred to my family. My mother suddenly fell ill yesterday and I must leave for home today. I’ m afraid it will take me a week before I get back to school. I have written an outline and a draft for the essay and I assure you that I will hand it in on my return.
Could you kindly grant me a one-week extension? I would appreciate it if you could approve my request. With best regards.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
B
Dear Customer Service Manager,
I'm writing to express my dissatisfaction with the robot cleaner I purchased from your shop on May 1.
One of the reasons for my dissatisfaction is that it can't sweep the floor clean, which I can hardly tolerate. What makes matters worse is that it can't identify furniture accurately, greatly affecting my mood.
I'd appreciate it if you could give me a full refund. Meanwhile, I wish this matter to be settled before June 15. It is my firm belief that you'll take my complaint seriously and I await your response.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
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