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译林版《英语》六下Unit8
My
dream
(Writing
time)
A
tradition
Write
down
your
dream,
keep
it
at
school.
help
sick
people
Let’s
guess!
台下学生根据提示谈论图片内容，
台上学生竞猜职业名称。
wear
a
white
coat
busy
and
careful
doctor
keep
people
safe
Let’s
guess!
台下学生根据提示谈论图片内容，
台上学生竞猜职业名称。
wear
uniforms
helpful
and
brave
policeman
work
in
the
kitchen
Let’s
guess!
台下学生根据提示谈论图片内容，
台上学生竞猜职业名称。
wear
a
tall
white
hat
make
nice
food
for
people
cook
care
about
children
Let’s
guess!
台下学生根据提示谈论图片内容，
台上学生竞猜职业名称。
give
many
lessons
kind
and
patient
teacher
save
people
from
fire
Let’s
guess!
台下学生根据提示谈论图片内容，
台上学生竞猜职业名称。
wear
uniforms
strong
and
brave
fireman
fly
in
the
sky
Let’s
guess!
台下学生根据提示谈论图片内容，
台上学生竞猜职业名称。
wear
uniforms
healthy
and
cool
pilot
Let’s
guess!
台下学生根据提示谈论图片内容，
台上学生竞猜职业名称。
work
at
home
read
and
think
a
lot
write
stories
for
people
writer
Mary
wants
to
write
down
her
dream,
but
her
arm
is
broken.
Let’s
ask!
My
dream
根据话题
my
dream,
向Mary提问。
A
survey
about
’s
dream
Q1.What’s
your
dream?
A
survey
about
’s
dream
Q2.Why
do
you
want
to
be...?
A
survey
about
’s
dream
Q3.What
will
you
do
to
make
your
dream
come
true?
Compare
and
find
对照范文，找出不同之处，发现使
习作更为合理的方法。
My
dream
I
have
a
dream.
I
want
to
be
a
great
doctor
like
Zhong
Nanshan
because
I
want
to
help
sick
people.
I
also
want
to
have
a
good
life
,
so
my
family
will
be
happy
and
proud.
To
make
my
dream
come
true,
I
will
study
hard
and
go
to
college.
Doctors
work
hard,
so
I
will
do
sports
and
keep
healthy.
Being
a
doctor
is
not
easy,
but
I
will
never
give
up.
Think
and
discuss
小组讨论：一篇优秀习作的标准。
What
makes
a
good
writing
about
My
dream?
Make
and
talk
先根据清单制作Y型图，再组内交流my
dream。
可使用以下句型交流哦！
I
have...
I
want
to
be...because/so...
To
...,
I
will...
Read
and
write
根据Y型图，写一写自己的梦想。
My
dream
beginning
why
how
ending
I
have
a
dream.
I
want
to
be
a
great
doctor
like
Zhong
Nanshan
because
I
want
to
help
sick
people.
I
also
want
to
have
a
good
life,
so
my
family
will
be
happy
and
proud.
To
make
my
dream
come
true,
I
will
study
hard
and
go
to
college.
Doctors
work
hard,
so
I
will
do
sports
and
keep
healthy.
Being
a
doctor
is
not
easy,
but
I
will
never
give
up.
what
Correct
and
grade
根据评分表，同桌交换批改并评定等级。
Writing
Score
Sheet
(评分表)
序号
评价标准
符合加
1
Covering
what,why
&
how(覆盖所有要点)
2
Making
a
good
Y
map
(绘制合理的Y型图)
3
Explaining
with
because,
so
&
to
(运用说理式表达)
4
Giving
an
example
(举例子)
5
Using
discriptive
words(使用修饰词)
6
Adding
a
beginning
&
an
ending
(添加开头结尾)
7
Writing
carefully
and
correctly(认真规范地书写)
等级
A：6~7
；
B：3~5
；
C：3
以下
等
级_______________
批阅人________________
Give
an
example
I
want
to
be
a
popular
writer
____________.
给出具体的例子
I
want
to
be
a
famous
scientist
____________.
Give
an
example
给出具体的例子
Explain
with
BECAUSE,SO
&TO
补充原因
Some
students
are
very
naughty(调皮的)，
so
I
will______________________.
To________________________，
I
will
learn
from
famous
teachers
.
补充对策
补充目的
I
want
to
be
a
teacher
because
________________________.
Explain
with
BECAUSE,SO
&TO
补充原因
I
want
to
be
a
cool
policeman
because________________.
Bad
people
are
very
dangerous(危险的)，
so
I
will______________________.
To_________________________，
I
will
study
hard
and
go
to
police
school.
补充对策
补充目的
仔细观察Y型图，分析习作与范文中梦想与理由、努力方向的匹配情况。
习作
范文
Dream
great
doctor
great
teacher
famous
basketball
player
popular
actor
great
writer
great
writer
walk
in
space
change
the
world
bring
people
nice
music
make
people
healthy
make
country
strong
Compare
and
find
对照范文，找出不同之处，发现写出优秀习作的方法。
My
dream
I
want
to
be
a
great
doctor
like
Zhong
nanshan.
Because
I
want
to
help
sick
people.
I
also
want
to
make
big
monkey
so
my
family
will
be
happy.
To
make
my
dream
come
true,
I
will
study
hard
and
go
to
college.
I
will
also
do
sports
because
it’s
a
hard
work.
This
is
my
dream.
I
will
never
give
up.
help
sick
people
have
a
easy
life
eat
a
lot
and
get
strong
study
hard
and
go
to
college
doctor
Why？
How？
What？
Why？
How？
What？
I
want
to
be
a________teacher.
kind
popular
patient
耐心的
caring
有爱心的
Use
discriptive
words
加入修饰性词语
Use
discriptive
words
I
want
to
be
a______policeman.
加入修饰性词语
brave
cool
helpful
乐于助人的
I
will
read
many
books.
I
will
have
many
lessons.
I
will
read
many
books
and
have
many
lessons.
and
Combine
sentences
用and合并下列句子
Combine
sentences
Being
a
pianist
is
not
easy.
I
will
never
give
up.
but
Being
a
pianist
is
not
easy,
but
I
will
never
give
up.
用but合并下列句子
Think
and
discuss
小组讨论：一篇优秀习作的标准。
What
makes
a
good
writing
about
My
dream?
Combining
sentences
(合并句子)
Explaining
why
(阐释原因)
Taking
an
example
(举例子)
Using
discriptive
words(使用修饰词)
Adding
an
ending
(添加结尾)
Covering
what,why
and
how(覆盖所有要点)
Writing
carefully
and
correctly(认真规范地书写)
1
2
3
4
5
6
7
My
dream
I
have
a
dream.
I
want
to
be
a
great
doctor
like
Zhong
nanshan
because
I
want
to
help
sick
people.
I
also
want
to
have
a
good
life
so
my
family
will
be
happy
and
proud.
To
make
my
dream
come
true,
I
will
study
hard
and
go
to
college.
Doctors
work
hard,
so
I
will
do
sports
and
keep
healthy.
Being
a
doctor
is
not
easy,
but
I
will
never
give
up.
Writing
Score
Sheet
(评分表)
序号
评价标准
符合加
1
Covering
what,why
&
how(覆盖所有要点)
2
Making
a
good
Y
map
(绘制合理的Y型图)
3
Expaining
with
because,
so
&
to
(运用说理式表达)
4
Taking
an
example
(举例子)
5
Using
discriptive
words(使用修饰词)
6
Adding
a
beginning
&
ending
(添加开头结尾)
7
Writing
carefully
and
correctly(认真规范地书写)
等级
A：6~7
；
B：3~5
；
C：3
以下
等
级_______________
批阅人________________
Taking
an
example
Using
discriptive
words
Adding
a
beginning
&
an
ending
Covering
what,why
&
how
Writing
carefully
and
correctly
Expaining
with
because,
so
&
to
Making
a
good
Y
map
Lawyers
are
clever
and
careful,
so
I
will___________________.
Reason
things
out
补充对策
Reason
things
out
补充原因
I
want
to
be
a
kind
teacher
because
____________________________.
To
______________________,
I
will
keep
young
and
beautiful.
补充目的
Explain
with
TO
My
dream
I
have
a
dream.
I
want
to
be
a
great
doctor
like
Zhong
Nanshan
because
I
want
to
help
sick
people.
I
also
want
to
have
a
good
life,
so
my
family
will
be
happy
and
proud.
To
make
my
dream
come
true,
I
will
study
hard
and
go
to
college.
Doctors
work
hard,
so
I
will
do
sports
and
keep
healthy.
Being
a
doctor
is
not
easy,
but
I
will
never
give
up.
A
tradition
Write
down
your
dream,
keep
it
at
school.
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