2021年中考英语作文高分技巧及话题预测(附范文)

2021年中考英语作文高分技巧及话题预测(附范文)
中考英语作文高分技巧：
结构要清晰
结构清晰这点真的很重要，我们都知道，阅卷老师们要在规定的间内批阅上千份作文，而清晰的结构，会让阅卷老师一目了然，自然就会喜欢你的作文。
什么结构好呢？那就是三段式。
第一段要开门见山，直接拿出主题。给大家举个例子，比如，写我的妈妈，第一段直接就说
My
mother
is
a
worker.
She
is
beautiful
and
she
is
a
good
mother.
明确自己的观点。
第二段就要说，她为什么是一个好妈妈。1.
She
works
hard.
2.
She
is
very
strict
with
me.
3.
She
always
encourages
me
and
help
me
when
I
am
in
trouble.
详细说出妈妈的优点。
第三段得出结论。大家可以发表自己的观点，也可以提出建议和希望。如，I
love
my
mother.
I
love
my
family！
二、时态要准确
英语作文除了结构，还有一个是阅卷老师最敏感的，那就是时态，这也是一篇作文是否得高分的关键。要明确文章的时态、同时人称要一致、数要一致、首尾要呼应。再根据内容要求，现确定事情是过去已经发生还是未来即将发生，比如记叙一件事要用一般过去时；写经常发生的事或对人物的描写，要用一般现在时；对于未来的憧憬要用一般将来时；过去的事情对现在造成的影响或过去延续到现在的状况都用现在完成时。一定不能乱用乱配。
三、短语运用要灵活
同学们在写作文的时候，要尽量使用有把握的词，避免不必要的失分。当然，定语从句、宾语从句等句型，在关键的时候用上一两个，会增添你文章的文采。在英语中存在很多简单又能表达很多意思的短语。这些短语的运用可以使作文更加原汁原味。
还有对关联词的使用，如first
of
all，secondly，finally，last，so
that，in
order
that，not...but，not
only...but
also等。还可以使用高级点的如，in
a
word，all
in
all
（表示总结的），but，yet，however（表示转折）等。
经验丰富的阅卷老师很在意这些逻辑连接词，因为这些词体现了整个文章的思路。
四、写全要点
近年的各地中考英语提示性作文比较多，也就是说写作内容几乎都有要点提示，确切地说就是给出写作提纲，通常都是3
～
5个提示点，这种作文，同学们一定记住不要逐字翻译，但是提示点必须在文章中有所体现。文章写得再好，如果缺少了要点就会扣分的。所以要点也就是文章的第二段内容，同学们要把提示点写全，然后围绕提示点充分发挥，丰富自己所写的内容。
五、书写要认真
这一点同学们必须高度重视，作文的书写一定要保持规范整洁，同一篇文章书写规范整洁的和书写混乱的之间可以有2到5分的差距。
给阅卷老师留下最深刻印象的就是你的书写，最简单的得分点就是我们的认真书写。工整漂亮的书写会给评卷老师留下美好的第一印象和愉快的心情，在扣分时自然会“手下留情”。
大家切记不要涂改，在情况允许的前提下可以打些草稿。避免不必要的丢分。
漂亮的字体是可以练出来的，只要大家在心里注意了自己的书写，都会写得很好。
中考英语作文话题预测及范文
情绪控制
推荐理由：
近一段时间，青少年的情绪控制一度被推上热潮，因情绪失控酿成悲剧的事件屡见不鲜，同学们在做好自我情绪控制的同时更要重点关注这一话题。
题目：
假如你是
Jack，你的朋友汤姆写信向你求助如何控制自己的情绪：他经常感到心烦，一点小事就能让他生气，他感觉很糟糕。请你根据提示内容给他写一封回信告诉他如何克服这些情绪。80
词左右，信件开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
素材提示：
1.可能会使用到的短语：
deal
with
对待
share
experience
分享经验
outdoor
sports
户外运动
2.可是会使用到的句型：
make
sb
/
sth
+
adj.
使某人或某物
make
sb
/
sth
do
sth
使某人或某物做某事
开头及结尾：
Dear
Tom,
I
know
your
feelings.
Don’t
worry
about
them.
Everything
will
be
OK
if
you
try
to
do
something.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Hope
all
the
ways
can
be
helpful
to
you!
Yours,
Jack
范文：
Dear
Tom,
I
know
your
feelings.
Don’t
worry
about
them.
Everything
will
be
ok
if
you
try
to
do
something.
Firstly,
when
you
feel
bad,
you
can
listen
to
music.?Nice
music
can
help
make
you
relaxed
and
forget
all
the
unhappy
things
and
problems.
Secondly,
talk
to
someone
you
trust.
For
example,
you
can
talk
to
your
parents.?Parents
can
share
their
experience
of
dealing
with
bad
moods.
Keeping
feelings
inside
can
make
things
worse.
Thirdly,
go
for
a
run,
play
tennis
or
do
other
outdoor
sports.
Exercise
can
make
you
feel
relaxed.
Hope
all
the
ways
can
be
helpful
to
you!
Yours,
Jack
减压
生活节奏加快，竞争日益激烈，让大多数中学生在生活和学习上或多或少产生了压力，如何应对压力是大家不可回避的问题。
为了更好地发现及解决同学们中存在的心理压力问题,你们班特意开展了一次以"Less
Pressure,
Better
Life"为主题的英语演讲比赛,请你准备发言稿,谈谈你的一些缓解压力的好办法,与同学分享,内容包括:
(1)
同学们普遍存在的压力是什么;
(2)
我的压力是什么;
(3)
我是如何成功缓解我的压力的。
注意:文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。词数80~100。
范文：
Less
Pressure,
Better
Life
Hello,
boys
and
girls!
Pressure
is
a
serious
problem
in
today’s
world.
Students
in
our
class
are
under
too
much
pressure.
Some
students
can’t
get
on
well
with
their
classmates,
while
others
may
worry
about
their
exams.
I’m
always
under
pressure,
too.
My
parents
want
me
to
be
the
top
student
in
class.
So
they
send
me
to
all
kinds
of
after-classes
at
weekends.
Last
Monday
evening,
I
had
a
talk
with
my
mother.
I
told
her
I
was
not
lazy.
I
really
felt
tired.
I
needed
time
to
relax.
My
mother
agreed
with
me
at
last.
So
I
think
a
conversation
with
parents
is
necessary
to
solve
the
problem.
That’s
all.
Thank
you!
校园安全
推荐理由：
校园安全关乎孩子的身心健康成长，校园安全事故也成为社会新闻的热点之一。
校园霸凌、校园食品、校园消防等校园安全问题时有发生，如何有效提升校园安全指数，完善校园安全设备一直是我们需要思考的问题。
题目：
最近我们学校在征集校园生活安全事故的事例，请你写一篇题为
How
to
Keep
Safe
in
Our
School
的短文。
内容包括：
1.记述你亲身经历或亲眼所见的校园意外事件(经过与结果)
2.提出关于避免这种校园意外事件的建议(至少2条);
3.呼吁每个学生重视校园安全。
作文要求：
1.不能照抄原文；
2.不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名；
3.语句连贯，词数
80
左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
范文：
How
to
Keep
Safe
in
Our
School？
Do
you
know
that
our
school
life
could
be
dangerous
if
we
are
not
careful
enough?
In
fact
we
often
see
or
hear
about
accidents
at
school.
Now
let
me
tell
you
one
accident.
One
day,
when
I
was
walking
in
the
hallway
near
my
classroom,
I
saw
two
students
running
after
each
other.
Suddenly,
one
of
them
fell
down
and
hurt
his
leg
because
of
the
wet
floor.
At
last,
the
student
stayed
in
hospital
for
one
month.
To
keep
safe
in
our
school,
I
think
we
should
always
walk:
but
not
run
at
school.
And
also
our
school
or
the
teachers
should
make
some
rules
to
stop
the
students
from
running.
Let's
pay
attention
to
our
safety
in
our
school.
4.
开展有意义的活动
推荐理由：
开展各项有意义的活动如：文明城市、文明校园在我们的学习生活中是较为常见的，也是十分有意义的，需要同学们进一步关注。
题目：
为配合我市开展“创建文明城市（build
a
civilized
city)活动，学校举办以"
How
to
Behave
Well"为主题的英语征文比赛。现在请你根据所给提示内容，用英语写一篇参塞短文。
提示：
1.衣着整洁
2.保持环境卫生
3.待人有礼，乐于助人
4.遵守交通规则
要求：
1.文章必须包括所给提示中的内容，可适当发挥
2.文中不能出现考生的真实姓名、校名和其他真实信息
3.词数：80
词左右
范文：
How
to
Behave
Well?
In
order
to
build
a
civilized
city,
we
students
should
try
our
best
to
behave
well
in
the
activities.
It's
a
good
habit
to
keep
our
clothes
clean
and
tidy.
Our
city
should
be
kept
clean
every
day.
Don't
throw
litter
or
spit
on
the
ground.
It's
good
manners
to
say
"Thank
you"
and
"Please"
and
so
on.
We
should
never
say
dirty
words.
Be
friendly
to
others
and
always
ready
to
help
the
people
in
need.
For
example,
when
we
are
on
a
bus,?we
should
give
our
seats
to
the
old
and
the
women
with
babies.
We
should
also
obey
traffic
rules.
When
the
traffic
lights
are
red,
we
should
stop.
And
we'd
better
not
talk
or
laugh
loudly
in
public.
If
everyone
behaves
well,
our
city
will
be
more
beautiful
and
more
attractive.
?志愿者
推荐理由：
对于学生群体来说，利用周末和寒暑假期去从事志愿者活动是一件非常有意义的事，能深层次体验社会生活，锻炼自身的社会实践能力，给他人送去帮助和温暖。
与此相关的话题也极可能出现在中考的书面表达中，这就需要同学们多参加社会实践，积累相关素材。
题目1:
假如你是
Steve,是志愿者俱乐部的一名成员你觉得参加志愿者活动是一件有意义的事情，因此你想邀请你的朋友
Brian
一起参加。请根据提示给他写一封信，介绍俱乐部的活动。
要求：80
词左右，可适当发挥。信件的格式和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
范文1：
Dear
Brian,
I
am
a
member
of
the
Volunteer
Club.
I'd
like
to
introduce
the
activities
in
the
Volunteer
Club
to
you.
In
order
to
help
people
in
need
and
raise
their
spirits,
we
often
do
some
voluntary
work
at
weekends.
We
often
go
to
the
Children's
Hospital
to
play
games
with
the
children
there.
In
addition,
we
teach
them
to
draw
pictures
as
well
as
telling
them
interesting
stories.
We
also
go
to
the
Old
People's
Home.
There
we
help
to
do
some
cleaning
and
spend
time
chatting
with
them.
Sometimes,
we
sing
songs,
dance
and
put
on
plays
for
them.
I
think
doing
voluntary
work
can
make
our
life
richer.
Would
you
like
to
join
me?
I'm
looking
forward
to
your
reply.
Yours,
Steve
题目2：
假如你是
Ella,你们年级计划下个月组织一次赴四川贫困地区做志愿工作的活动。请根据以下要点提示向你的校长史密斯先生写一封请求信，阐明一下这次志愿者服务活动的相关内容以及你的感想。
要求：80
词左右，给出部分不计入总词数，可适当发挥。
提示：
1.活动时间及地点：下个月在四川贫困地区；
2.活动目的：帮助孩子们并使他们振奋；
3.活动内容：教孩子们唱歌，给孩子们讲故事，给他们传授不同的知识；
4.你的请求。
范文2：
Dear
Mr.
Smith,
We
are
writing
to
ask
permission
for
a
voluntary
work
activity.
In
order
to
help
the
children
in
poor
areas
and
raise
their
spirits,
our
grade
decides
to
organize
a
voluntary
activity
in
Sichuan
Province
next
month.
We
plan
to
teach
them
to
sing
and
tell
them
interesting
stories
about
the
outside
world.
We
will
spend
two
days
with
them.
We
will
also
teach
different
knowledge
to
them
so
that
they
can
have
a
better
understanding
of
the
world.
In
my
opinion,
the
activity
is
very
meaningful.
Could
you
please
give
us
permission
to
have
the
activity?
Your
sincerely,
Ella