嘉兴市2020?2021学年第二学期期末检测
局二英语
(2021.
6)
试题卷
考生须知:
1-全卷分试题卷和答题纸两部分,试题卷12页,答题侬2页,合计14页,有四部
分考查内容,满分为150分,考试时间为120分钟.
本卷答案必须做在答题纸的相应位置上,做在试题卷上无效.
请用黑墨水签字笔将学校、班级、姓名分别填写在答题纸的相应位置上.
第一部分:听力(共两节,满分30分)
做题时,先将答案标在试卷上。录音内容结束后,你将有两分钟的时间将试卷上的答
案转涂到答题纸上。
第一节(共5小题;每小题1.5分,满分7.5分)
听下面5段对话。每段对话后有一个小题,从题中所给的A、B、C三个选项中选出
最佳选项,并标在试卷的相应位置。听完每段对话后,你都有10秒钟的时间来回答有关
小题和阅读下一小题。每段对话仅读一遍。
What
has
the
man
been
doing?
Reading
a
book.
B.
Checking
the
power
supply.
C.
Writing
a
report.
Where
does
the
conversation
most
probably
take
place?
In
a
shop.
B.
At
an
airport.
When
will
the
heating
be
repaired?
On
Wednesday.
B.
On
Thursday.
What
does
the
man
want
for
his
birthday?
A
sweater.
B-A
book,
What
does
the
man
mean?
He'll
call
the
waiter.
He
doesn't
like
crowds.
He
doesn't
mind
waiting.
第二节(共15小题;每小题1分,满分15分)
听下面5段对话或独白.每段对话或独白后有几个小题,从题中所给的A、B、C三
个选项中选出最佳选项,并标在试卷的相应位置。听每段对话或独白前,你将有时间阅读
各个小题,每小题5秒钟;听完后,各小题给出5秒钟的作答时间。每段对话或独白读两
遍。
听第6段材料,回答第6、7题。
What
does
the
woman
think
of
the
black
coat?
What
experience
does
the
woman
have?
Writing
reports.
Giving
presentations.
Dealing
with
foreigners.
听第10段材料,回答第18至20题。
18.
Who
is
probably
the
speaker?
A
local
shop
owner.
A
visitor
to
the
town.
A
government
official.
19.
What
makes
the
town
a
great
place
to
live
in?
It
has
almost
no
crime.
It
has
a
swimming
pool.
It
has
cheap
restaurants.
What
was
built
in
the
town
last
year?
第二部分:阅读理解(共两节,满分35分)
第一节(共10个小题;每小题2.5分,满分25分)
阅读下列短文,从每题所给的A、B、C和D四个选项中,选出最佳选项,并在答题
纸上将该项涂黑.
Albrecht
DUrer
was
born
in
Nuremberg
in
1471,
in
present
day
Germany.
He
was
a
painter,
writer
and
engraver(雕刻师),but
his
first
and
probably
greatest
artistic
influence
was
in
the
medium
of
printmaking.
Albrecht's
father
was
a
goldsmith(金匠)and
the
young
Albrecht
naturally
became
his
student,
learning
shaping
and
engraving
jewelry.
He
also
started
learning
from
a
local
高二期末检测英语试题卷
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artist
Michael
Wolgemut,
who
specialized
in
artistic
woodcuts
for
books.
Dilrer's
first
contact
with
art
was
in
the
woodcut
printing
range,
so
it
is
little
wonder
that
he
went
on
to
become
expert
in
this
field.
He
actually
expanded
the
craft
of
producing
pictures
for
printing,
giving
it
more
depth,
and
he
raised
print-making
into
an
art-form.
Towards
the
end
of
the
century
(1497-1500),
Diirer
produced
an
impressive
series
of
religious
woodcuts.
Indeed,
it
was
in
1513-1514
that
Diirer
produced
the
three
extraordinary
engravings
A
Knight,
Death
and
DeviP;
uMelencolian;
"Saini
Jerome
in
his
CelP)
that
had
a
strong
influence
on
the
art
world
and
came
to
be
known
as
the
Master
Engravings.
DHrer's
success
as
a
printmaker
rapidly
spread
across
Europe.
He
was
highly
aware
of
his
artistic
image
and
authorship,
which
is
obvious
in
his
remarkable
signature.
As
his
art
became
increasingly
valuable,
DUrer's
signature
was
always
copied,
which
even
led
him
to
accuse
the
engraver
Marcantonio
Raimondi
of
repeatedly
copying
his
works
and
signature
and
selling
them
off
as
originals.
In
the
end,
the
court
ruled
that
Raimondi
could
continue
making
copies
of
Diirer's,
as
long
as
he
didn't
reproduce
the
artisfs
signature.
Diirer
died
in
1528
and
was
buried
in
Nuremberg.
Like
most
famous
Italian
artists,
DOrer
probably
felt
himself
to
be
an
“artist-king,"
and
his
self-portraits(自画像)seem
undoubtedly
to
show
a
man
sure
of
his
own
gift.
Which
of
the
following
best
describes
Albrecht
DUrer?
Open-minded.
B.
Generous.
C.
Easy-going.
D.
Talented.
What
do
we
know
about
Diirer's
three
great
engravings?
They
were
made
with
the
help
of
his
father.
They
were
created
in
the
early
16th
century.
They
were
recognized
as
a
new
way
of
painting.
They
were
influenced
by
the
art
world
of
his
time.
What
can
we
infer
from
paragraph
3?
DOrer
got
angry
with
the
court.
Diirer's
signature
was
easy
to
copy.
Diirer's
reputation
as
a
printmaker
was
high.
Diirer
had
a
good
relationship
with
Raimondi.
uWonftyou
be
my
neighbor?”
is
a
famous
song
from
Mister
Rogers
Neighborhood,
a
popular
children's
television
show.
The
show,
broadcast
for
31
years
and
ending
in
2001,
sought
to
teach
American
children
the
importance
of
kindness
and
understanding
towards
others.
But
recently
fewer
and
fewer
Americans
seem
to
know
their
neighbors.
That
may
be
destroying
America's
communities.
Marc
Dunkelman
wrote
a
book
caUed
uThe
Vanishing
Neighbor^.
In
it,
he
examined
how
American
communities
have
changed
over
time.
Dunkelman
said
most
Americans
have
three
levels
of
relationships:
The
inner
circle
includes
family
and
close
friends.
The
middle
circle
is
more
casual
relationships.
People
in
this
circle
include
neighbors
and
people
in
community
groups.
The
outer
circle
includes
people
who
live
far
away
but
share
a
common
interest.
In
his
book,
Dunkelman
argued
that
people
spend
most
of
their
time
and
attention
on
the
inner
and
outer
circles.
But
he
said
the
middle-circle
is
necessary
to
strengthening
local
communities.
Relationships
with
neighbors
are
important
for
debate,
hearing
different
ideas
and
finding
compromise.
Americans
used
to
have
more
middle-circle
relationships.
Face-to-face
communication
was
unavoidable
without
cell
phones
or
the
internet.
People
also
felt
more
of
a
duty
to
join
community
organizations.
Dunkelman
argued
that
modern
life
has
made
middle-circle
relationships
less
important.
He
said
globalization,
education
and
more
women
in
the
workforce
have
resulted
in
less
middle-circle
communication.
Americans
may
be
losing
what
it
means
to
be
a
good
neighbor
as
Fred
Rogers
of
Mister
Rogers
Neighborhood
taught.
However,
doing
good
for
a
neighbor
is
healthy
“not
just
for
our
neighbor,
but
for
ourselves
as
well,”
Dunkelman
said.
"Learning
how
to
be
a
good
citizen
can
be
lost
when
we
defer(推延)the
problem
to
somebody
else.^,
What
does
the
underlined
word
"that"
refer
to
in
paragraph
1?
The
Jack
of
close
ties
with
neighbors.
The
popularity
of
children's
TV
shows.
The
way
of
teaching
children
to
be
kind.
The
previous
knowledge
of
communities.
What
is
a
benefit
of
having
middle-circle
relationships?
Preventing
digital
harm.
Sharing
opinions
with
others.
Bearing
more
family
responsibilities.
Raising
awareness
of
health
problems.
Which
of
the
following
is
the
best
title
for
the
text?
How
to
Get
Along
with
Neighbors?
The
Inner-circle
or
the
Middle-circle?
Why
are
Americans
Becoming
Distant?
Are
American
Communities
Disappearing?
C
In
an
age
of
online
shopping,
commercial
algorithms(算法)and
streamed
entertainment,
most
of
us
rarely
face
up
to
things
that
have
not
been
digitally
matched
to
our
previous
interests
or
prejudices.
Few
will
have
avoided
the
suggestion
Mif
you've
enjoyed
X,
then
you'll
like
Y
and
Z”
as
they
surf
the
internet
looking
for
books,
films
or
music.
But
now
there
are
efforts
to
fight
back
against
it.
In
both
the
arts
and
the
media,
a
series
of
new
projects
are
celebrating
the
importance
of
coming
across
the
unexpected.
A
newself-help
book
by
Neil
Farber
an
American
academic
and
doctor
focuses
on
the
vital
role
that
chance
plays
in
enriching
our
lives
and
thoughts.
An
unconventional
service,
Trade
Journal
Cooperative,
is
offering
to
send
a
random
publication
direct
to
your
door
four
times
a
year,
from
Professional
Pasta
to
American
Funeral
Director
or
Plumber
Magazine.
A
new
radio
app,
Stack,
deliberately
delivers
music
chosen
by
someone
else.
Stack
has
been
set
up
in
response
to
the
vast
areas
of
unknown
music
available
to
download.
The
music
on
Stack
is
instead
chosen
by
a
number
of
DJs
and
musicians
and,
importantly,
listeners
cannot
influence
what
it
plays.
"It's
not
designed
around
your
usage,”
says
Wigram,
who
is
an
art
dealer.
uBut
it
removes
the
anxiety
of
having
to
'】ike',
or
diking9
something
by
mistake,
and
suddenly
being
recommended
tracks
that
you
don't
even
like.
Algorithms
reduce
diversity
and
chance.
And
it's
that
element
of
chance,
of
discovering
a
new
track,
that
an
algorithm
can't
compete
with.
I
do
believe
that
human
beings
can
do
it
better
than
algorithms."
So
the
hope
for
an
interesting
future,
according
to
Wigram,
depends
upon
a
good
mix
of
blind
chance
and
trusted
human
recommendations—a
bit
like
the
shelves
of
the
old
independent
record
stores
and
bookshops.
What
is
mainly
talked
about
in
paragraph
1?
A
dilemma
facing
internet
users.
A
suggestion
given
by
internet
providers.
An
online
phenomenon
related
to
preference.
An
open
discussion
concerning
online
shopping.
Why
are
the
examples
in
paragraph
3
mentioned?
To
indicate
the
influence
of
the
media.
To
explain
the
operation
of
new
projects.
To
prove
the
success
of
a
creative
service.
To
show
the
significance
of
chance
in
life.
How
does
the
app
Stack
help
listeners
choose
a
song?
A.
By
offering
expert
recommendations.
B.
By
making
use
of
algorithms.
C.
By
removing
the
anxiety
of
musicians.
D.
By
providing
plenty
of
songs.
What
is
the
author's
purpose
in
writing
the
text?
To
promote
a
healthy
digital
lifestyle.
To
give
helpful
tips
on
how
to
make
choices.
To
advocate
a
new
way
out
of
algorithms
control.
To
introduce
different
types
of
marketing
services.
第二节(共5个小题;每小题2分,满分10分)
根据短文内容,从短文后的选项中选出能填入空白处的最佳选项。选项中有两项为多
余选项。
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髙二期末检测英语试题卷第7页(共12页)
When
setting
up
a
garden
or
area
of
land
with
plants,
many
often
forget
to
plan
a
walkway,
or
path.
Or
there
is
a
path,
but
it
is
not
beautiful
or
easy
to
use.
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can
also
show
you
where
to
walk,
and
guide
your
eyes
and
imagination
throughout
the
garden.
32
Wide
paths
and
winding
paths
are
for
walking
slowly.
They're
good
if
you
want
people
to
take
a
longer
look
at
what's
in
the
garden.
Choose
a
straight
path
to
go
from
the
back
door
to
the
vegetable
garden,
or
any
other
place
where
you
may
walk
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you
can
use
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that
is
colored
andmade
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flagstone.
To
make
a
path
of
brick,
stone
or
concrete
slabs(厚板),you
should
give
the
solid
material
a
well-drained(易排水的)base.
Put
drainage
material
such
as
sand
or
rock
dust
in
the
path
material
provides
a
solid
base
beneath
the
surface,
and
prevents
water
from
collecting
there,
freezing
and
pushing
up
the
stones.
Add
enough
material
so
that
when
stones
or
bricks
are
in
place,
their
top
sides
are
a
little
above
ground
level.
Afterwards,
put
more
stone
dust
or
sand
on
top
of
the
path,
then
sweep
the
material
to
fill
the
empty
spaces.
Add
some
water
to
further
settle
the
material.
35
Push
down
on
it
and
smooth
it
as
you
work.
Be
sure
the
path
is
wide
enough
for
a
wheelchair.
For
stone
paths,
use
stone
cut
into
large,
flat
pieces.
A
well-designed
path
can
do
more
than
keep
your
feet
dry.
Sweep
and
water
a
few
days
later
again,
after
everything
has
settled.
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Consider
safety,
appearance
and
cost
when
choosing
a
surface
material.
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When
pining
a
path,
ask
yourselfifit
is
both
appealing
and
easy
to
use
第三部分:语言运用(共两节,满分45分)
第f完形壊空(共2。个小题;每小题“分,满分%分)
处的鷲露在錦鶯算、B、C和D四个选项中,选出可以填入空白
高二期末检测英语试题卷第8页(共12页)
Are
you
still
at
school?
What
do
you
want
to
do
when
you
leave?
It's
a
very
important
36
and
of
course
you
cannot
always
pick
and
choose.
37___
things
like
money
or
diplomas
decide
for
you.
In
Paul
Holmes's
case,
it
was
his
38
that
decided
for
him.
He
is
only
0.93
meters
tall.
He
tried
working
in
an
amusement
park.
And
then
he
tried
to
become
a
carpenter.
But
he
was
too
39
for
both
these
jobs.
So
when
he
was
eighteen,
he
became
40
.
His
41
was
an
unusual
one.
And
the
Manpower
Services
Commission,
an
organization
which
42
the
government
on
employment
policy,
had
an
unusual
way
out.
They
_43
Paul
a
job
as
a
trainee
clown(小丑).PauPs
44
was
to
work
in
a
circus.
And
it
just
45
that
a
famous
clown,
Jacko
Fossett
was
46
an
assistant
at
that
time.
This
was
the
47
of
a
lifetime
to
Paul.
First
they
__48__
Paul
for
a
brightly-colored
clownrs
suit.
Then
he
had
to
learn
all
about
tumbling(空翻)acts,
putting
on
make-up
and
making
children
49
.
Falling
over
without
50
yourself
is
an
art
which
it
takes
time
to
51
.
As
Paul
said
in
an
interview,
Ulfyou
don't
__52
_
what
you
Ye
doing,
you
can
break
your
nose.”
第二节(共10个小题;每小题1.5分,
阅读下面材料,在空白处墳入适当的内容(1个単词)或括号内単词的正确形式。
Look
at
the
graphite(石墨)tip
of
your
pencil.
Ifs
hard
56
(imagine)
anyone
carving
detailed
sculptures
into
that
tiny
surface.
57
Salavat
Fldai,
a
Russian
artist,
does
just
that.
Fidai
says
the
process
is
58
(extreme)
hard
and
time-consuming.
Graphite
is
fragile,
and
his
sculptures
are
so
small
that
they're
measured
in
millimeters
and
even
microns(^^K).
To
see
59
he9s
doing,
he
has
to
look
through
a
microscope,
a
tool
_60
helps
people
do
close
work
such
as
making
61
(watcb)
or
studying
errors.
Carving
one
sculpture
can
take
8
hours―
r
62
week!
When
be
started
out,
he
carved
giant
pencils.
As
he
became
more
comfortable,
he
switched
to
pencils
of
regular
size.
Sometimes
he
works
_63__
mechanical
pencils
with
even
narrower
graphite
rodsf^^)-
Fidai's
sculptures
used
to
break
a
lot
while
he
was
working.
"This
rarely
_64(happen)
now,”
he
says.
have
experience.
I
am
calm
and
focused."
Fidai
is
always
testing
his
Jimirs,。find
easier
waysthings.
His
advice
to
you?
Experiment
Look
for
new
ways.
第四部分:写作(共两节,满分40分)
第一节:应用文写作(满分15分)
假定你是李华,得知你校上届外籍毕业生Peter在就读的大学获得十佳歌手称号,你
想邀请他来校英语文化节演出。请给他写封邮件,内容包括:
表示祝贺:
提出邀请;
期待回复。
注意:
词数80左右;
可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
第二节:概要写作(满分25分)
阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Learning
a
new
language
can
feel
like
performing
magic.
Suddenly,
a
whole
other
world
opens
up
and
you
discover
a
completely
new
side
of
life.
Of
course,
learning
a
language
doesn't
happen
by
magic,
but
rather
through
study.
Here
are
some
advantages
about
how
the
brain
changes
during
language
learning.
It
sounds
like
something
a
child
may
ask:
does
learning
new
things
;
f
算
5
It
turns
out
that
this
is
what
language
learning
does
to
血
brain.
Th
?…
Armed
Forces
Interpreter
Academy,
who
were
going
trough
a
i^guage
屁:g
program.
For
a
contro!
group,
the
researchers
selected
students
who
were
studying
medicine
and
cognitive^知的)science
at
Umea
University.
The
researchers
discovered
that
brain
structure
changed
only
in
the
language
learning
group.
The
results
suggest
that
language
learning
is
a
promising
way
to
keep
the
brain
in
shape,
and
offers
cognitive
benefits
more
than
other
forms
of
study.
Many
of
us
dream
of
being
able
to
focus
better,
and
according
to
a
study
published
in
the
journal
Brain
and
Language,
learning
new
languages
could
help
make
that
dream
come
true.
The
researchers
from
Northwestern
University
tested
bilingual(双语的)and
monoJingg(单语的)individuals
using
a
language
comprehension
task.
The
task
involved
listening
to
a
word,
and
then
selecting
the
corresponding
image
from
a
group
of
four.
Bilingual
participants
were
obviously
better
at
figuring
out
the
target
word.
It
shows
that
being
bilingual
comes
with
more
ability
to
leave
aside
unnecessary
information,
which
is
key
to
increasing
focus.
Several
other
studies
have
shown
a
link
between
being
bilingual
and
delaying
the
beginning
of
Alzheimer's
disease
by
an
average
of
four
years.
language
chaMenges
our
gray
cells,
which
helps
gning.exercising
your
body,
providing
your
brain
considerabie
health
benefits.
嘉兴市2020?2021学年第二学期期末检测
高二英语参考答案及评分标准(2021.6)
一、
听力(每小题1.5分,满分30分)
1-5ABBAC
6-10BAABC
二、
阅读理解(共两节,满分35分)
第一节(每小题2.5分,满分25分)
21-23
DBC
24-26
ABD
第二节(每小题2分,满分10分)
11-15
CCBAB
16-20
ACCAB
27-30
CDAC
31-35
DGCAE
三、语言运用(共两节,满分45分)
第一节(每小题1.5分,满分30分)
36-40
DBACA
41-45ADBDB
第二节(每小题1.5分,满分15分)
56.
to
imagine
57.
But
58.
extremely
61.
watches
62.
a/one
63.
with/on
注意:大小写错误属于不正确形式,不给分。
四、写作(共两节,满分40分)
第一节:应用文写作(满分15分)
(一)评分原则
本题总分为15分,按5个档次给分。
评分时,先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次,然后以该档次的要求来衡
量、确定或调整档次,最后给分。
词数少于60和多余100的,从总分中减去2分。
评分时,应注意的主要内容为:内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的丰富性和准确
性及上下文的连贯性。
拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面,评分时,应视其对交际的影响程度予
以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。
如书写较差,以致影响交际,将分数降低一个档次。
(二)各档次的给分范围和要求
档次
描述
完全完成了试题规定的任务。
一覆盖所有内容要点。
第五档
(13—15)
一应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。
一语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误,但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级
词汇所致:具备较强的语言运用能力。
一有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。
完全达到了预期的写作目的。
第四档
(10—12)
完全完成了试题规定的任务。
一虽漏掉1、2个次重点,但覆盖所有主要内容。
一应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。
一语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确,些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语
法结构或词汇所致。
一应用简单的语句间连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。
达到了预期的写作目的。
第三档
(7—9)
基本完成了试题规定的任务。
一虽漏掉一些内容,但覆盖所有主要内容。
一应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。
一有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,但不影响理解。
一应用简单的语句间连接成分,使全文内容连贯。
整体而言,基本达到了预期的写作目的。
第二档
(4—6)
未适当完成试题规定的任务。
一漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容,写了一些无关内容。
一语法结构单调,词汇项目有限。
一有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响了对写作内容的理解。
一较少使用语句间的连接成分,内容缺乏连贯性。
信息未能清楚地传达给读者。
第一档
(1—3)
未完成试题规定的任务。
一明显漏掉主要内容,写了一些无关内容,原因可能是未理解试题要求。
一语法结构单调,词汇项目有限。
一较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响对写作内容的理解。
一缺乏语句间的连接成分,内容不连贯。
信息未能传达给读者。
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未能传达给读者任何信息:内容太少,无法评判;写的内容均与所要求
内容无关或所写内容无法看清。
(三)该题具体要求
内容要点:
表示祝贺;
提出邀请;
期待回复。
语法结构和词汇的应用:
时态符合写作情景;
使用与主题相关的词汇;
能够使用恰当的语法结构。
上下文的连贯性:
按内容要点有逻辑展开:
使用恰当的表达方式使内容连贯。
(四)参考范文
Dear
Peter,
Hardly
could
I
conceal
my
excitement
on
hearing
that
you
earned
the
title
of
your
college's
Top
Ten
Singers.
Congratulations!
Deeply
impressed
by
your
talent
for
music,
1
sincerely
invite
you
to
sing
at
our
English
Culture
Festival,
which
is
scheduled
for
June
16
in
our
school
Art
Hall.
The
exotic
culture
you
may
bring
as
well
as
your
brilliant
performances
will
definitely
add
a
special
flavor
to
our
festival
Looking
forward
to
your
earliest
reply!
Yours,
Li
Hua
第二节:概要写作(满分25分)
(一)
评分原则
本题总分为25分,按5个档次给分。
评分时,先根据所写概要的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次,然后以该档次的要
求来衡量、确定或调整档次,最后给分。
词数少于40和多余80的,从总分中减去2分。
评分时,应主要从以下四个方面考虑:
(1)
对原文要点的理解和呈现情况;
(2)
应用语法结构和词汇的准确性;
(3)
上下文的连贯性;
(4)
对各要点表达的独立性情况。
拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面,评分时,应视其对交际的影响程度予
以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。
如书写较差以致影响交际,可将分数降低一个档次。
(二)
各档次的给分范围和要求
档次
描述
第五档
(21—25)
一理解准确,涵盖全部要点。
一能准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇。
一有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使所完成的概要结构紧凑。
一完全使用自己的语言。
第四档
(16—20)
一理解准确,涵盖绝大部分要点。
—所使用语法结构和词汇可能有些许错误,但完全不影响意义表达。
一比较有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使所完成的概要结构紧凑。
一有个别整句抄自原文。
第三档
(11—15)
一理解较为准确,涵盖大部分要点。
一所使用语法结构和词汇虽有些错误,但不影响意义表达。
一应用简单的语句间连接成分,使上下文内容连贯。
一出现两句以上整句抄自原文现象。
第二档
(6—10)
一理解有误差,仅涵盖半数要点。
一有些语法结构和词汇方面的错误,影响了意义的表达。
一较少使用语句间的连接成分,全文内容缺少连贯性。
一出现两句以上整句抄自原文现象。
第一档
(1—5)
一没有理解原文,造成概要内容与原文主题不符。
一有较多语法结构和词汇方面的错误,严重影响了意义的表达。
一缺乏语句间的连接成分,全文内容不连贯。
-多个句子抄自原文。
0
白卷、内容太少无法评判或所写内容与所提供内容无关。
One
possible
version:
Learning
a
new
language,
which
happens
through
study,
exerts
positive
impacts
on
your
brain.(要点一)According
to
researchers,
it
makes
your
brain
grow
better
and
brings
more
cognitive
advantages.(要点二)It
can
also
keep
you
away
from
distractions
and
help
you
concentrate
on
what
you
arc
doing.(要点三)Moreover;
it
brings
health
benefits
as
well,
slowing
down
the
aging
of
your
brain.(要点四)