备考2017年小升初英语专题复习卷(十)作文
一、写作题。
1．以“My Favourite Animal”为题, 描写一种你最喜爱的动物。要求：1. 要对其进行外形描写。2. 条理清楚, 意思连贯, 语句通顺, 标点正确, 书写规范、清晰。3. 不少于40个单词。
2．彼得(Peter)来自美国, 他l2岁, 现在和父母生活在中国。请你根据给出的参考词汇, 以“My day参考词汇：like China and Chinese food, noodles, a lot of friends, go to the park, hobbies, swimming, running, playing badminton
3．根据图片以“My Bedroom”为题写一篇短文。要求：l. 用there be句型描述自己的卧室。2. 条理清楚, 意思连贯, 语句通顺, 标点正确, 书写规范。3.不少于50个单词。
4．以“My Day”为题写一篇短文。要求：1. 描述自己一天的活动。2. 条理清楚, 意思连贯, 语句通顺, 标点正确, 书写规范、清晰。3. 不少于50个单词。
5．以“My Favourite Season”为题描述自己最喜欢的季节。要求：1. 描述自己最喜欢的季节的天气、能进行的活动以及喜欢的原因等。2. 条理清楚, 意思连贯, 语句通顺, 标点正确, 书写规范、清晰。3. 不少于50个单词。
6．假如你上周末生病了, 但你的朋友们都度过了一个愉快的周末。请以“Last Weekend”为题根据图片写一篇短文, 介绍朋友们上周末的活动。要求：l. 运用过去时态。2. 条理清楚, 意思连贯, 语句通顺, 标点正确, 书写规范。3. 不少于50个单词。
7．暑假快要到了。好好计划一下你的假期吧, 让它过得既快乐又有意义。请以“My Summer Vacation Plan”为题写一篇短文。要求：l. 用be going to句型计划一下自己的暑假活动安排。2. 条理清楚, 意思连贯, 语句通顺, 标点正确, 书写规范、清晰。3.不少于50个单词。
8．看图, 请以“My Family”为题写一篇短文。要求：1. 介绍家庭成员的人数, 职业, 爱好等。2. 条理清楚, 意思连贯, 语句通顺, 标点正确, 书写规范、清晰。3. 不少于50个单词。
9．以“My Favourite Festival”为题写一篇短文。要求：1. 描述自己最喜欢的节日, 说明喜欢的原因。2. 条理清楚, 意思连贯, 语句通顺, 标点正确, 书写规范、清晰。3. 不少于50个单词。
10．每个人都有自己的职业梦想, 你长大后想从事什么职业呢 请以“I want to be…”为题描述自己未来的职业。要求：l. 把题目补充完整, 展开合理的想象描述自己未来的职业。2·条理清楚, 意思连贯, 语句通顺, 标点正确, 书写规范、清晰。3. 不少于50个单词。
11．从小养成好的习惯能使人受益终生。你有哪些好的习惯呢 请以“My Good Habits”习题描述自己的好习惯。要求：l. 描述自己的好习惯, 并说明这些好习惯给你带来的好处。2·条理清楚, 意思连贯, 语句通顺, 标点正确, 书写规范、清晰。3. 不少于50个单词。
12．假如你是埃米(Amy), 马上就要毕业了, 在你六年的小学生活中老师给了你无私的帮助。请给你最喜欢的老师写一封信来表达你对他／她的感激之情。要求：1. 以书信的格式来表达对老师的感谢。2. 条理清楚, 意思连贯, 语句通顺, 标点正确, 书写规范、清晰。3·不少于50个单词。
13．假如你是Bill, 请根据下面提供的信息写一篇介绍自己的短文。要求：条理清晰, 语句连贯, 标点正确, 书写清晰、规范。40-50个单词。(8分)
14．假如你是萨拉(Sarah), 你马上就要过十二岁生日了, 请写二封邀请信, 邀请你的朋友玛丽(Mary)来参加你在星期六下午六点举行的生日派对。并写清楚如何去你家。要求：1.邀请信中要包含所有已给信息, 可适当发挥。2. 条理清楚, 意思连贯, 语句通顺, 标点正确, 书写规范、清晰。3. 不少于50个单词。
答案解析部分
1．【答案】My Favourite Animal
My favourite animal is rabbit. I have a rabbit. Its name is sweet. It's very small. It's white. It has long ears. It has a short tail. It has red eyes. It likes eating carrots. It likes jumping. I like it very much. It's lovely. It's my best friend. I like my rabbit.
【知识点】命题作文
【解析】【分析】这是以“我最喜欢的动物”为主题是作文，用一般现在时时态，描述最喜欢的动物的形状，长得怎样，动物的喜好，要求语句通顺清晰，用简短的句子.
【点评】文章写出最喜欢的动物是兔子，描述动物的习性和喜欢吃什么，语句通顺.
2．【答案】My day
I am Peter.I am 12 years old.Now I live in China with my parents.I have a lot of friends and we go to the park on the weekend.I have many hobbies.I like swimming,running and play badminton. I like noodles best.I like China and Chinese food.
【知识点】命题作文
【解析】【分析】这是一篇给材料作文，用所给的词组和短语，写出现在彼得在中国的生活，用一般现在时时态，材料只给了一部分，然后写时选取自己熟悉的内容，尽量用简短的句子.
【点评】这是一篇命题作文，根据所给的材料紧扣话题，使上下文逻辑关系紧密.
3．【答案】My Bedroom
I have my own bedroom. It's small but nice. There is a bed, a sofa, a closet and a shelf in my bedroom. There is also a plant in my bedroom. There are many books on the shelf. I like reading books. There is a picture above my bed. I like my bedroom very much.
【知识点】应用文
【解析】【分析】这是一篇以“我的卧室”为主题的作文，描述自己的卧室，主要以there be句型，用一般现在时时态，运用了大量的介词短语，in my bedroom，on the shelf，above my bed等，知道卧室描述的物品在什么位置，一目了然.
【点评】文章用there be句型的一般现在时描述了自己的卧室，描写清晰。
4．【答案】My Day
I get up at 6：00 a. m. Then l wash my face and brush my teeth. I eat breakfast at 7：00 a. m. Then I go to school. I have seven classes every day. Classes begin at 8：00 a. m. school is over at 4：30 P. m. After school, I often play table tennis with my friends. I eat dinner at 7：00 P. m. Then I listen to music；I do my homework at 8：OO P. m. I go to bed at 9：30 P. m. This is my day.
【知识点】命题作文
【解析】【分析】这是一篇以“我的一天”为主题的作文，根据材料用一般现在时时态，描述自己一天的活动，语句要通顺连贯.
【点评】文章条理清晰，语法准确，使用了大量动词短语，给文章增色不少，例如：get up，wash my face，go to school，play table tennis，eat dinner，listen to music，do my homework，go to bed等，牢记这些词组，写作时就可以引用，使文章表达更清晰.
5．【答案】My Favourite Season
There are four seasons in a year. They are spring, summer, autumn and winter. My favourite season is winter. Although it is cold in winter, and sometimes it snows, I play with snow. I can make a snowman with my friends. I like skiing and skating, so I often go skiing and skating with my friends in winter. I also like the winter vacation and the Spring Festival. So winter is my favourite season.
【知识点】命题作文
【解析】【分析】根据所给的内容，根据材料，应该主要用一般现在时，结合所给的材料可知，写作中尽量用简短的句子，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系
【点评】文章中使用了非常好的短语或连词会给文章增色，Although虽然，so所以等，启到上下文连接的作用.
6．【答案】Last Weekend
I had a bad time last weekend. Because l was ill. But my friends had a good time last weekend. Amy drew a very beautiful picture. Sarah read an interesting book. Mary and her sister went to the park. They chased the butterflies. Lily jumped a rope. She had a good time.
【知识点】命题作文
【解析】【分析】这是一篇根据图片，以“上周末”为主题的作文，根据题目用一般过去时，描述过去愉快的周末，语句通顺连贯，表达清晰.
【点评】文章用一般过去时描述了朋友快乐的周末，运用了大量的动词短语，had a good time，drew a very beautiful picture，went to the park，jumped a rope，这些动词短语用的是过去式，牢记过去式规则.
7．【答案】My Summer Vacation Plan The summer vacation is coming soon. I am very happy. And I made my plan yesterday. Now, let me tell you. First, I am going to the nature park with my friends and have a picnic there. Next. I will go stropping with my mother because I like going shopping. Then, I am going to visit Beijing. I am going to the Great Wall and the Summer Palace. This is my summer vacation plan.
【知识点】命题作文
【解析】【分析】文章以“我的暑假计划”为题，根据材料和题目，文章用一般将来时时态，描述将要计划做的事情，快乐而又意义.
【点评】文章写得条理清晰，语句连贯，运用了First，Next，Then等词，使文章上下文衔接的更好.
8．【答案】My Family There are five people in my family. They are my grandfather, grandmother, my parents and me. My father is a doctor. He likes playing football. He is very kind. My mother is a teacher. She teaches English. She often reads books in the evening. I am a student. I like playing computer games and doing sports with my friends. I often go hiking with my parents on the weekend. I love my family very much.
【知识点】命题作文
【解析】【分析】以“我的家”为主题，根据材料用一般现在时和there be句型，描述家庭成员，人数及爱好，用简短的句子，使文章上下句符合逻辑关系
【点评】这篇文章描述了家庭成员，职业爱好，喜欢做什么，文章用了很多短语和词组，read book，playcomputer games，go hike with my parents，love my family very much，牢记这些短语对写作很有好处.
9．【答案】My Favourite Festival My favourite festival is the Spring Festival because I have lots of fun during the Spring Festival. The Spring Festival is an important festival in our country. It is usually in January or February. Our family members get together. We have a big dinner in my grandparents'home. I always eat a lot of delicious food. My cousin and I both get red packets from our grandparents. We often watch TV at home and sometimes read books. I'm very happy during the Spring Festival. What is your favourite festival
【知识点】命题作文
【解析】【分析】这是篇命题作文，以“我最喜欢的节日”为主题，根据材料用一般现在时，文章描述出与家人在一起的快乐和做什么事，喜欢的原因
【点评】文章描述了最喜欢春节，运用了大量短语，get together，eat a lot of delicious food，get red packets ，watch TV，read book，平时牢记词组和短语，对写作很有好处.
10．【答案】I want To be a headmaster
I want to be a headmaster when I grow up. I think that's a good job. My school is in the forest、It's very beautiful。I go to work at eight o'clock in the morning. The teachers in my school are kind and patient. They are all hard working. The children in my school are polite and helpful. They have three classes in the morning. In the afternoon, they play in the forest. They have no homework. They are very happy!
【知识点】命题作文
【解析】【分析】这是一篇命题作文，以“我想当.....”为题，描述未来想当什么职业，根据材料用一般现在时，用简短的句子描述了自己的梦想，说明了理由，语句通顺，逻辑清晰.
【点评】文章描述自己将来是一名校长，需要教育孩子，让孩子们快乐的生活，想象孩子们向往的生活.
11．【答案】My Good Habits
I am smart and healthy because I have some good habits. I love reading books very much. I think books are important for everyone. A book can tell us a lot, and we can learn a lot from it. I also like playing sports. In the past, 1 was fat and unhealthy. But now, I'm strong and healthy. My good habits make me happy, relax and fie What about your habits
【知识点】命题作文
【解析】【分析】这是篇以“我的好习惯”为题，根据材料主要以一般现在时为主，描述自己的好习惯，带给自己的好处，写作时注意上下文的过渡要符合逻辑关系.
【点评】这篇短文详细描述了自己的爱好，过去怎样现在怎样，给自己带来了好处.最后一句非常好， My good habits make me happy, relax and fie What about your habits 这句话给文章增色很多.
12．【答案】Dear Miss Wang, I am g1ad to be your student. You like the students and you are good to us. You teach well and we all like you. You always make us be interested in our lessons. You often help us with our lessons. You often play sports with us. We are very happy when we and you are together. You are like our parents and take good care of us. You are very beautiful. Thank you for your teaching. Yours. Amy
【知识点】应用文
【解析】【分析】这是一篇感谢信，表达学生对老师的感激之情，主要用一般现在时，语法准确，格式准确，文章的内容条理清晰.
【点评】这篇文章表达了学生对老师的喜欢感激之情，运用了大量的短语，例如：help us with our lessons帮我们复习功课，take good care of us好好照顾我们，Thank you for your teaching谢谢你的教导.
13．【答案】I'm Bill. I'm l3 years old. I have a happy family. There are four people in my family. They are my father, my mother, my sister and me. I have many hobbies, I like drawing very much. I like running and playing basketball, too. I want to be a doctor in the future.
【知识点】命题作文
【解析】【分析】根据所给的内容，自我介绍，根据材料，应该主要用一般现在时，结合所给的材料可知，描述现在的自己，写作中尽量用简短的句子，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系.
【点评】如果文章中使用了非常好的短语或句子会给文章增色，例如：like drawing very much非常好喜欢画画，like running and playing basketball喜欢跑步和打篮球.
14．【答案】Dear Mary, P1ease come to my twelfth birthday party at 6 p. m. on Saturday. Now let me tell you how to come： 1) Start from me bus stop in front of our school. 2) Take the NO. 17 bus. 3) Get off at the post once. 4) Walk east for tree minutes. 5) Find the white building on the left. 6) Look for me near the door. Yours. Sarah
【知识点】应用文
【解析】【分析】这是一篇邀请信，内容具体，时间，地点及具体路线，语句通顺，条理清晰，多数用祈使句.
【点评】本题考查了邀请信，注意格式，语法正确，尽量使用简单的句子，简洁明了.
1 / 1备考2017年小升初英语专题复习卷(十)作文
一、写作题。
1．以“My Favourite Animal”为题, 描写一种你最喜爱的动物。要求：1. 要对其进行外形描写。2. 条理清楚, 意思连贯, 语句通顺, 标点正确, 书写规范、清晰。3. 不少于40个单词。
【答案】My Favourite Animal
My favourite animal is rabbit. I have a rabbit. Its name is sweet. It's very small. It's white. It has long ears. It has a short tail. It has red eyes. It likes eating carrots. It likes jumping. I like it very much. It's lovely. It's my best friend. I like my rabbit.
【知识点】命题作文
【解析】【分析】这是以“我最喜欢的动物”为主题是作文，用一般现在时时态，描述最喜欢的动物的形状，长得怎样，动物的喜好，要求语句通顺清晰，用简短的句子.
【点评】文章写出最喜欢的动物是兔子，描述动物的习性和喜欢吃什么，语句通顺.
2．彼得(Peter)来自美国, 他l2岁, 现在和父母生活在中国。请你根据给出的参考词汇, 以“My day参考词汇：like China and Chinese food, noodles, a lot of friends, go to the park, hobbies, swimming, running, playing badminton
【答案】My day
I am Peter.I am 12 years old.Now I live in China with my parents.I have a lot of friends and we go to the park on the weekend.I have many hobbies.I like swimming,running and play badminton. I like noodles best.I like China and Chinese food.
【知识点】命题作文
【解析】【分析】这是一篇给材料作文，用所给的词组和短语，写出现在彼得在中国的生活，用一般现在时时态，材料只给了一部分，然后写时选取自己熟悉的内容，尽量用简短的句子.
【点评】这是一篇命题作文，根据所给的材料紧扣话题，使上下文逻辑关系紧密.
3．根据图片以“My Bedroom”为题写一篇短文。要求：l. 用there be句型描述自己的卧室。2. 条理清楚, 意思连贯, 语句通顺, 标点正确, 书写规范。3.不少于50个单词。
【答案】My Bedroom
I have my own bedroom. It's small but nice. There is a bed, a sofa, a closet and a shelf in my bedroom. There is also a plant in my bedroom. There are many books on the shelf. I like reading books. There is a picture above my bed. I like my bedroom very much.
【知识点】应用文
【解析】【分析】这是一篇以“我的卧室”为主题的作文，描述自己的卧室，主要以there be句型，用一般现在时时态，运用了大量的介词短语，in my bedroom，on the shelf，above my bed等，知道卧室描述的物品在什么位置，一目了然.
【点评】文章用there be句型的一般现在时描述了自己的卧室，描写清晰。
4．以“My Day”为题写一篇短文。要求：1. 描述自己一天的活动。2. 条理清楚, 意思连贯, 语句通顺, 标点正确, 书写规范、清晰。3. 不少于50个单词。
【答案】My Day
I get up at 6：00 a. m. Then l wash my face and brush my teeth. I eat breakfast at 7：00 a. m. Then I go to school. I have seven classes every day. Classes begin at 8：00 a. m. school is over at 4：30 P. m. After school, I often play table tennis with my friends. I eat dinner at 7：00 P. m. Then I listen to music；I do my homework at 8：OO P. m. I go to bed at 9：30 P. m. This is my day.
【知识点】命题作文
【解析】【分析】这是一篇以“我的一天”为主题的作文，根据材料用一般现在时时态，描述自己一天的活动，语句要通顺连贯.
【点评】文章条理清晰，语法准确，使用了大量动词短语，给文章增色不少，例如：get up，wash my face，go to school，play table tennis，eat dinner，listen to music，do my homework，go to bed等，牢记这些词组，写作时就可以引用，使文章表达更清晰.
5．以“My Favourite Season”为题描述自己最喜欢的季节。要求：1. 描述自己最喜欢的季节的天气、能进行的活动以及喜欢的原因等。2. 条理清楚, 意思连贯, 语句通顺, 标点正确, 书写规范、清晰。3. 不少于50个单词。
【答案】My Favourite Season
There are four seasons in a year. They are spring, summer, autumn and winter. My favourite season is winter. Although it is cold in winter, and sometimes it snows, I play with snow. I can make a snowman with my friends. I like skiing and skating, so I often go skiing and skating with my friends in winter. I also like the winter vacation and the Spring Festival. So winter is my favourite season.
【知识点】命题作文
【解析】【分析】根据所给的内容，根据材料，应该主要用一般现在时，结合所给的材料可知，写作中尽量用简短的句子，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系
【点评】文章中使用了非常好的短语或连词会给文章增色，Although虽然，so所以等，启到上下文连接的作用.
6．假如你上周末生病了, 但你的朋友们都度过了一个愉快的周末。请以“Last Weekend”为题根据图片写一篇短文, 介绍朋友们上周末的活动。要求：l. 运用过去时态。2. 条理清楚, 意思连贯, 语句通顺, 标点正确, 书写规范。3. 不少于50个单词。
【答案】Last Weekend
I had a bad time last weekend. Because l was ill. But my friends had a good time last weekend. Amy drew a very beautiful picture. Sarah read an interesting book. Mary and her sister went to the park. They chased the butterflies. Lily jumped a rope. She had a good time.
【知识点】命题作文
【解析】【分析】这是一篇根据图片，以“上周末”为主题的作文，根据题目用一般过去时，描述过去愉快的周末，语句通顺连贯，表达清晰.
【点评】文章用一般过去时描述了朋友快乐的周末，运用了大量的动词短语，had a good time，drew a very beautiful picture，went to the park，jumped a rope，这些动词短语用的是过去式，牢记过去式规则.
7．暑假快要到了。好好计划一下你的假期吧, 让它过得既快乐又有意义。请以“My Summer Vacation Plan”为题写一篇短文。要求：l. 用be going to句型计划一下自己的暑假活动安排。2. 条理清楚, 意思连贯, 语句通顺, 标点正确, 书写规范、清晰。3.不少于50个单词。
【答案】My Summer Vacation Plan The summer vacation is coming soon. I am very happy. And I made my plan yesterday. Now, let me tell you. First, I am going to the nature park with my friends and have a picnic there. Next. I will go stropping with my mother because I like going shopping. Then, I am going to visit Beijing. I am going to the Great Wall and the Summer Palace. This is my summer vacation plan.
【知识点】命题作文
【解析】【分析】文章以“我的暑假计划”为题，根据材料和题目，文章用一般将来时时态，描述将要计划做的事情，快乐而又意义.
【点评】文章写得条理清晰，语句连贯，运用了First，Next，Then等词，使文章上下文衔接的更好.
8．看图, 请以“My Family”为题写一篇短文。要求：1. 介绍家庭成员的人数, 职业, 爱好等。2. 条理清楚, 意思连贯, 语句通顺, 标点正确, 书写规范、清晰。3. 不少于50个单词。
【答案】My Family There are five people in my family. They are my grandfather, grandmother, my parents and me. My father is a doctor. He likes playing football. He is very kind. My mother is a teacher. She teaches English. She often reads books in the evening. I am a student. I like playing computer games and doing sports with my friends. I often go hiking with my parents on the weekend. I love my family very much.
【知识点】命题作文
【解析】【分析】以“我的家”为主题，根据材料用一般现在时和there be句型，描述家庭成员，人数及爱好，用简短的句子，使文章上下句符合逻辑关系
【点评】这篇文章描述了家庭成员，职业爱好，喜欢做什么，文章用了很多短语和词组，read book，playcomputer games，go hike with my parents，love my family very much，牢记这些短语对写作很有好处.
9．以“My Favourite Festival”为题写一篇短文。要求：1. 描述自己最喜欢的节日, 说明喜欢的原因。2. 条理清楚, 意思连贯, 语句通顺, 标点正确, 书写规范、清晰。3. 不少于50个单词。
【答案】My Favourite Festival My favourite festival is the Spring Festival because I have lots of fun during the Spring Festival. The Spring Festival is an important festival in our country. It is usually in January or February. Our family members get together. We have a big dinner in my grandparents'home. I always eat a lot of delicious food. My cousin and I both get red packets from our grandparents. We often watch TV at home and sometimes read books. I'm very happy during the Spring Festival. What is your favourite festival
【知识点】命题作文
【解析】【分析】这是篇命题作文，以“我最喜欢的节日”为主题，根据材料用一般现在时，文章描述出与家人在一起的快乐和做什么事，喜欢的原因
【点评】文章描述了最喜欢春节，运用了大量短语，get together，eat a lot of delicious food，get red packets ，watch TV，read book，平时牢记词组和短语，对写作很有好处.
10．每个人都有自己的职业梦想, 你长大后想从事什么职业呢 请以“I want to be…”为题描述自己未来的职业。要求：l. 把题目补充完整, 展开合理的想象描述自己未来的职业。2·条理清楚, 意思连贯, 语句通顺, 标点正确, 书写规范、清晰。3. 不少于50个单词。
【答案】I want To be a headmaster
I want to be a headmaster when I grow up. I think that's a good job. My school is in the forest、It's very beautiful。I go to work at eight o'clock in the morning. The teachers in my school are kind and patient. They are all hard working. The children in my school are polite and helpful. They have three classes in the morning. In the afternoon, they play in the forest. They have no homework. They are very happy!
【知识点】命题作文
【解析】【分析】这是一篇命题作文，以“我想当.....”为题，描述未来想当什么职业，根据材料用一般现在时，用简短的句子描述了自己的梦想，说明了理由，语句通顺，逻辑清晰.
【点评】文章描述自己将来是一名校长，需要教育孩子，让孩子们快乐的生活，想象孩子们向往的生活.
11．从小养成好的习惯能使人受益终生。你有哪些好的习惯呢 请以“My Good Habits”习题描述自己的好习惯。要求：l. 描述自己的好习惯, 并说明这些好习惯给你带来的好处。2·条理清楚, 意思连贯, 语句通顺, 标点正确, 书写规范、清晰。3. 不少于50个单词。
【答案】My Good Habits
I am smart and healthy because I have some good habits. I love reading books very much. I think books are important for everyone. A book can tell us a lot, and we can learn a lot from it. I also like playing sports. In the past, 1 was fat and unhealthy. But now, I'm strong and healthy. My good habits make me happy, relax and fie What about your habits
【知识点】命题作文
【解析】【分析】这是篇以“我的好习惯”为题，根据材料主要以一般现在时为主，描述自己的好习惯，带给自己的好处，写作时注意上下文的过渡要符合逻辑关系.
【点评】这篇短文详细描述了自己的爱好，过去怎样现在怎样，给自己带来了好处.最后一句非常好， My good habits make me happy, relax and fie What about your habits 这句话给文章增色很多.
12．假如你是埃米(Amy), 马上就要毕业了, 在你六年的小学生活中老师给了你无私的帮助。请给你最喜欢的老师写一封信来表达你对他／她的感激之情。要求：1. 以书信的格式来表达对老师的感谢。2. 条理清楚, 意思连贯, 语句通顺, 标点正确, 书写规范、清晰。3·不少于50个单词。
【答案】Dear Miss Wang, I am g1ad to be your student. You like the students and you are good to us. You teach well and we all like you. You always make us be interested in our lessons. You often help us with our lessons. You often play sports with us. We are very happy when we and you are together. You are like our parents and take good care of us. You are very beautiful. Thank you for your teaching. Yours. Amy
【知识点】应用文
【解析】【分析】这是一篇感谢信，表达学生对老师的感激之情，主要用一般现在时，语法准确，格式准确，文章的内容条理清晰.
【点评】这篇文章表达了学生对老师的喜欢感激之情，运用了大量的短语，例如：help us with our lessons帮我们复习功课，take good care of us好好照顾我们，Thank you for your teaching谢谢你的教导.
13．假如你是Bill, 请根据下面提供的信息写一篇介绍自己的短文。要求：条理清晰, 语句连贯, 标点正确, 书写清晰、规范。40-50个单词。(8分)
【答案】I'm Bill. I'm l3 years old. I have a happy family. There are four people in my family. They are my father, my mother, my sister and me. I have many hobbies, I like drawing very much. I like running and playing basketball, too. I want to be a doctor in the future.
【知识点】命题作文
【解析】【分析】根据所给的内容，自我介绍，根据材料，应该主要用一般现在时，结合所给的材料可知，描述现在的自己，写作中尽量用简短的句子，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系.
【点评】如果文章中使用了非常好的短语或句子会给文章增色，例如：like drawing very much非常好喜欢画画，like running and playing basketball喜欢跑步和打篮球.
14．假如你是萨拉(Sarah), 你马上就要过十二岁生日了, 请写二封邀请信, 邀请你的朋友玛丽(Mary)来参加你在星期六下午六点举行的生日派对。并写清楚如何去你家。要求：1.邀请信中要包含所有已给信息, 可适当发挥。2. 条理清楚, 意思连贯, 语句通顺, 标点正确, 书写规范、清晰。3. 不少于50个单词。
【答案】Dear Mary, P1ease come to my twelfth birthday party at 6 p. m. on Saturday. Now let me tell you how to come： 1) Start from me bus stop in front of our school. 2) Take the NO. 17 bus. 3) Get off at the post once. 4) Walk east for tree minutes. 5) Find the white building on the left. 6) Look for me near the door. Yours. Sarah
【知识点】应用文
【解析】【分析】这是一篇邀请信，内容具体，时间，地点及具体路线，语句通顺，条理清晰，多数用祈使句.
【点评】本题考查了邀请信，注意格式，语法正确，尽量使用简单的句子，简洁明了.
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