山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（80份打包）

山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（40）短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号 (∧), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线 ( \ ) 划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，从第11处起不计分。
An Australian farmer found the kangaroo caught in the fence around his
farms. He thought the poor animal was injured, but the kind farmer took off his
jacket and put on the animal．Then he started trying to cut the fence to free the
animals．But as soon as the kangaroo were free, it jumped up and ran away with the
jacket．The farmer was worried because of his wallet was in the pocket．But, to my
surprise, when he gets home, he saw the animal waiting at the door, still wore his
jacket with the wallet in the pocket．
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假如你班要就“如何为高考做准备”开一个班会，请根据以下内容写一篇发言稿，谈谈你对高考备考过程中要注意的事项及建议理由：
1. 保持良好的心态有助于减轻焦虑，还能增强克服困难的勇气；
2. 目标明确、正确评价自己。太低的目标使人松懈，太高的目标使人丧失信心；
3. 与父母、老师或同学沟通帮忙走出困境；
4. 作息合理，饮食均衡，以保持旺盛的精力。
注意：
1．词数120左右，开头已为你写好(不计入总词数)；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
No doubt every Senior 3 student wishes to be successful in the National College Entrance Examination.___________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
短文改错：
An Australian farmer found the kangaroo caught in the fence around his farms．He
a farm
thought the poor animal was injured, but the kind farmer took off his jacket and put
so 或 and
∧on the animal．Then he started trying to cut the fence to free the animals．But as
it animal
soon as the kangaroo were free, it jumped up and ran away with the jacket．The
was
farmer was worried because o f his wallet was in the pocket．But, to my surprise, his
when he gets home, he saw the animal waiting at the door, still wore his jacket with
got wearing
the wallet in the pocket．
写作：
one possible version
No doubt every Senior 3 student wishes to be successful in the National college Entrance Examination. Yet what should we do in order to achieve success Here are some suggestions.
First, it’s very important to have a right attitude, for a normal state of mind and self-confidence not only helps us to relax but also enables us to overcome difficulties bravely. Meanwhile, we should have a definite goal and a correct estimation of ourselves. Only in this way will we not be easily pleased or disappointed with what we have known and done. Besides, we’d better sometimes talk with our parents, teachers or classmates, who may help us out when we’re in trouble. Finally, keeping a proper balance between study and rest keeps us energetic and a healthy diet is useful as well.
With these done, I think we can greatly improve our performance.山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（45）短文改错
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误.对标题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边的横线上划（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（︿），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Time flies as an arrow. I’m already in the second half 1
of senior grade 3 before I realized it. It is only a little more 2
than three months before I graduate middle school. At 3
the present, I’m busy reviewing my lessons in order to 4
take the college entrance examination. I hope to go to 5
Beijing University, that is one of the best universities not 6
only in China but also in the world. I’ll try my best to turn 7
my dream to reality. Most of my classmates are also 8
studying very hard to realize our wishes. I do believe 9
everyone will be able to enter a very good university and college. 10
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科学技术在日新月异地发展，它们在人们生活中的应用越来越广泛，但是也带来了一些问题。结合下面的图画，谈谈科学技术给人们造成的影响。
注意：
1．词数：100—120词左右。
2．开头已为你写好，不计入词数。可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
From the above pictures, we can see the following scene.
短文改错
1．As →like 2．realized→realize 3．graduate∧from
4．去掉the 5．to→into 6．our→their
7．√ 8．to→into 9．our→their
10．and→or
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One possible version:
Form the above pictures, we can see the following scene: in the past when father came back from work and stepped into the house, his wife would bring him a cup of hot coffee and his little son used to happily greet him with “Daddy”, and his daughter would throw away her book to welcome him, which made him glad and also “Hi” to them happily.
But now when father gets home, he finds that his son is addicted to playing computer games and his daughter is busy phoning her friends and his wife is absorbed in watching TV series. Everyone is doing something and cares nothing about his return. The father doesn’t become angry because he is also dealing with his business with a cell phone.
What the pictures reflect is that the wide use of technology is beginning to influence the relationship between family members, who seem to have no time communicating with each other.山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（71）
短文改错
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的同用斜线(＼)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(./\)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
It is a pleasure of me to write this letter to tell you how 1.
much I enjoyed my staying in your home．This was 2.
my first time visit to an English family．At first，I was 3.
worrying about my poor English．Yet seeing your wife 4.
waiting for me with warm smiles，I immediately knew 5.
all would be right．There are other happy memories 6.
what I’11 keep with me forever．I particularly enjoyed 7.
driving through the countryside with you and saw the 8.
changing colours of the leaves in the trees．I also liked 9.
the fishing trip．It was so great fun． 10.
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假如你叫李华，寒假期问要去英国Embassy English Language School(EELS)进行短期学习。以下是英方学校寄给你的课程安排选择表。请你仔细阅读课程表，按要求给校方回一封信。
Schedule for EELS Winter English Courses
English Courses Total Hours of Study Total Hours of Part-time Job Date
Six-week course 120 48 January 15-February 28
Four-week course 60 No Job but Tour Instead January 15-February 15
Please include the following:Your choice and possible reasons;your present English level;Specific language skill you want to improve;other personal requirements.
注意：
1．信的内容须包括所有已给出的信息，但也可以适当发挥使信的内容连贯完整。
2．词数100左右。
3．信的开头已为你写好，不记入总此数。
Dear Sir，
Thank you for your offer of inviting me to the winter English course in your school．
1.of—for 2.staying—stay 3.time
4.worring--worried 5.对 6.be all
7.what—that 8.saw—seeing 9.in—on 10.so—such山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（4）
短文改错
假定在英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文。请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误, 每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改l0处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
John, a little boy living next door to me, liked fast food very much. His parents was so busy that they had a little time to cook for him at home. So they often took him eat fast food. That’s because John became overweight. My mother had always told his parents that too much fast food was harmful, and they ignored my mother’s advices. Recently, the doctor warned him never to eat fast food any more after the poor boy has a physical examination. Her parents came to realize what a terribly mistake they had made. Now John’s mother often comes to ask my mother for advice in how to make healthy food.
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假设你是某外国语学校的高三学生李华，前两天你在报纸上读到重庆女生张姣以满分成绩考入耶鲁大学的报道，心情十分激动。请用英语给她写一封信，主要内容如下：
1. 表示祝贺；
2. 请教学习方法；
3. 询问未来计划。
注意：1. 词数100~120；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
提示词语：耶鲁大学 Yale University
21世纪教育网 Zhao Jiao,
I am Li Hua, a senior 3 student from an international foreign language middle school. _________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________
Best wishes！
Yours,
Li Hua
改错：
John, a little boy living next door to me, liked fast food very much. His parents was so
were
busy that they had a little time to cook for him at home. So they often took him ∧eat fast food. 去掉 to
That’s because John became overweight. My mother had always told his parents that too much fast why
food was harmful, and they ignored my mother’s advices. Recently, the doctor warned him never but advice
to eat fast food any more after the poor boy has a physical examination. Her parents came to realize
had His
what a terribly mistake they had made. Now John’s mother often comes to ask to my terrible
mother for advice in how to make healthy food.
on或about
作文
Zhang Jiao,
I am Li Hua, a senior 3 student from an international foreign language middle school. I happened to read the exciting news that you were admitted to Yale University with a full mark.
Firstly, congratulations! Your success really encourages me and gives me the power to realize my own dream. Secondly, would you give me some suggestions on how to study efficiently These days I have been working hard for the National College Entrance Examination but the result seems unsatisfying. And lastly, I want to ask you about your future plan, for I find that my dream for the future keeps changing, so I am at a loss now. I’m sure your idea will be of great help to me.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（13）
短文改错
Dear Sir,
I am university student. I once thought life at the 1．_________
university must be excellent, but now I changed my mind. 2．_________
I have three roommates, and I was the last one to move 3．_________
into the dormitory. Last term, I got along peacefully and 4．_________
happy. But I find they are not willing to be with me now. 5．_________
They don’t talk with me, they’ve become cold toward 6．_________
me. Many time, I have wanted to talk with them about what 7．_________
I felt like, but I failed to find an opening. When leaving 8．_________
alone, I am always recall this sadness. Why can’t I win true 9．_________
friendship I’m lonely, and look forward to get your advice soon. 10．_________
Yours,
Peter
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假如你叫李华，寒假期间要去英国Embassy English Language School (EELS) 进行短期学习。以下是英方学校寄给你的课程安排选择表。请你仔细阅读，按要求给校方回一封信。
Schedule for EELS Winter English Courses
English Courses Total Hours of Study Total Hours of Part-time Job Date
six-week course 120 48 Feb 1－Mar 12
Four-week course 60 No Job but Tour Instead Feb1－Feb 27
Please include the following:1. Your choice and possible reasons;　　　　　　　　　 2. Your present English level;3. Specific language skill you want to improve;　　　　　4. Other personal requirements.
注意：1．信的开头已为你写好； 2．词数：100左右。可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir,
Thank you for your offer of inviting me to the winter English course in your school.
1. am后加上a; 2. changed 前加上have或改为change; 3. 正确；
4. I 改为we; 5. happy改为happily; 6. 第二个they 前面加上and;
7. time改为times; 8. leaving改为left;
9. 去掉am; 10. get改为getting;
One possible version:
Dear Sir,
Thank you for your offer of inviting me to the winter English course in your school. As for my choice between the two courses, I prefer the four-week course for 60 hours of study. Because this would allow me more time to do some traveling and make a few new friends too.
Of all the subjects I’m learning at school, I like English best. I have been learning English for 6 years but my spoken English remains poor. So I hope to take this chance to improve it. If possible, I’d like to stay with a family for a couple of days so that I can know some customs in England. I believe I will have a wonderful time this winter.
Yours truly,
Li Hua山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（51）短文改错
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：
如无错误，在该行右边横线上划一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正; 该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。?
It is reported, some needy students receive 1.
financial support from some kind people but never 2.
express our thanks. Personally, I think they are wrong. 3.
Though the helpers didn’t expect any reward in return, 4.
but it’s necessary and good manner to say “thank you”. 5.
Besides, it is a basic social skill express ourselves in 6.
modern society.Maybe some of them do feel thankfully. 7.
It is only because they are afraid of looked down upon 8.
which they remain silent. But I just want to say that being 9.
poor for a moment doesn’t mean you will be poor forever. 10.
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大陆赠送台湾的熊猫团团和圆圆在春节期间受到了台湾民众的热捧。假设你是陈力，你的英国朋友Jim想知道具体情况，请你根据以下要点向Jim做个简要介绍。
团团圆圆的名字的寓意；
他们去年12月份到达台湾后的反响(如：春节期间每天有将近2万人参观……)；
你对团团圆圆的祝福。
注意：
要准确使用语法和词汇；使用一定的句型，词汇，清楚、连贯地表达自己的意思；
词数：120左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
Dear Jim,
Thanks for the letter. Now let me tell you something about the two pandas.
Yours,
Chen L i
1.It →As 2.√ 3.our改为their
4.didn’t改为don’t 5.manner改为manners
6.∧express→ to 7.thankfully改为thankful
8.∧looked→being 9.which改为that 10.a改为the
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Dear Jim,
Thanks for the letter. Now let me tell you something about the two pandas.
The combination of “Tuantuan and Yuanyuan”means reunion in Chinese. They express mainland people’s hope for the reunion between the mainland and the island. Since their arrival as gifts from the Chinese mainland in December 2008, they have been superstars on the island. Taiwan residents are excited at just a brief glimpse of these fascinating animals. During the festival, about 20,000 people visited “Tuantuan and Yuanyuan”each day and their lovely appearances made a deep impression on the visitors.
As the symbol of peace and love, this pair of giant pandas conveys great wishes from the mainland to Taiwan. I hope that they will live happily in Taiwan and become a bridge of communication between the two sides.
Yours,
Chen Li山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（53）短文改错
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误.对标题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边的横线上划（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（︿），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
As an English beginner, I found difficult to read fast. It 1．
was because whenever I read I always try to translate every 2．
English word or sentence into Chinese after I could 3．
understand it. As a result of, it usually took me over 10 4．
minutes to finish read a passage. To get it over, I read 5．
a lot. Firstly, you read the passage fast and answered the 6．
questions within six minutes. Secondly, I checked the answer 7．
to see which of them were wrong. Then I looked up only 8．
those key new words to seeing why they were wrong. 9．
By this way, I have improved my reading speed a lot. 10．
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据一项调查显示，有85.8%的中学生说自己的字迹不好看，而他们又不想改善字迹，其理由有很大差别。请根据下图写一篇100个词左右的短文，说明该现象并发表自己的看法，开头已给出。
Nowadays, with the growing popularity of computers, teachers, students and their parents are paying less and less attention to handwriting.
短文改错
1．found后加it 2．try改为tried 3．after改为before
4．去掉of 5．第一个read改为reading 6．you改为I
7．answer改为answers
8．√ 9．seeing改为see 10．By改为In
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One Possible version：
Nowadays, with the growing popularity of computers, teachers, students and their parents are paying less and less attention to handwriting.
According to a recent survey, about 85.8 percent of middle school students think that their handwriting is poor. Yet for various reasons, many students don't want to improve their hand—writing. 51.5 percent of the students think that they can just use a computer, so there is no need to waste time improving their handwriting, and 32. 3 percent believe that they are so busy with the study that they do not have time to practise. 10. 9 percent think that practising handwriting is useless.
As the saying goes, writing style shows the man. Beautiful and neat handwriting is beneficial, especially for middle school students. Therefore, in my opinion, more emphasis should be placed on this aspect in future.山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（46）短文改错
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误.对标题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边的横线上划（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（︿），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
When father bought me a computer for a birthday present 1．
in last year, I felt very excited. As we all know, computers 2．
are getting more usefully nowadays. Much information 3．
can be stored in it. We can learn what has lately happened 4．
in the world on the Internet. People had to do lots of work 5．
which was very danger. Now, computers can do it instead. 6．
When an exam is come, I do exercises on my computer. 7．
Then it will correct them but tell me the right answers. 8．
It is convenient for me to prepare for the exam than 9．
before. The computer have become a real friend of mine. 10．
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假如你是江城某中学高三学生名叫李想，住在江城。你的加拿大笔友Bob来信谈到了他所居住的城市，并希望了解你家乡江城的情况。请你用英语写一封回信。回信须包括下表中的内容。
自然情况 ①位于长江边、风景优美、适合居住
成 就 ②经济发展迅速③新建了不少工厂、住房、道路等。
存在问题 ④水、空气污染⑤交通拥挤
对江城发展的看法 ⑥(内容由考生自己拟定)’
注意：1．回信中不能使用“江城”以外的地名。
2．词数150左右。信的开头与结尾已为你写好，不计入词数。
Dear Bob，
It’s very kind of you to write me and let me know about your beautiful city. Now I’d like to__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Xiang
1．for – as 2．去掉in 3．usefully – useful 4．it – them 5．对
6．dangerous 7．coming 8．but –and
9．more convenient 10．have – has
Dear Bob，
It’s very kind of you to write me and let me know about your beautiful city. Now I’d like to tell you something about my hometown Jiangcheng.
Located on the bank of the Changjiang River, Jiangcheng is a beautiful city which is quite suitable for people to live in. With its fast economical development in the past ten years, new factories, houses and streets and roads have been built, which have invited more and more people from other places to come to work and live here. So, more schools and hospitals are available for its people.
However, there are some problems, such as water and air pollution and heavy traffic in rush hours. Our city government and people should pay special attention to protecting the environment. We should not develop at the sacrifice of our environment. So I think everyone will want to do something to make our city more beautiful.
I hope you will come to China and pay a visit to our city. You’ll have a good time here.
Yours,
Li Xiang山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（43）短文改错
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误，对标有题号的每一题做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上划对（√）如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下面情况改正：
此行多一词：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（︿），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一词：在错词的下面划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原文没有错误不要改。
Did you enjoy yourself yesterday I suppose you do. But I’d 1.
like to tell you what a bad day I had yesterday. Nothing 2.
just went wrong. On the morning, my alarm clock didn’t ring, 3.
since I woke up an hour late. I was in such a hurry that I burnt my 4.
hand when I was cooking the breakfast. Then I ran out of the house 5.
to catch the 8:30 buses. This is the bus I usually take. But, you 6.
may laugh, I missed it of course. I am very unhappy, and scared 7.
as well because teacher hates the students coming late to school. 8.
So I ran three miles to school only to discover that nobody 9.
was there. The school was quiet but peaceful. Our classroom was 10.
locked. I realized that moment. It was Sunday.
书面表达
下面四幅图片描述的是李明和爷爷从养鸟到放鸟的一段经历。请根据图片所提供的信息以第三人称用英语写一篇短文。
注意：
①短文必须包括所有图片的主要内容，短文的内容要连贯、完整；
②短文单词数：100左右。
短文改错
1.do-did
2.Nothing-Everything
3.On-In
4.since-so
5.去掉第一个the
6.buses-bus
7.am-was
8.在teacher前加my/the
9.√
10.but-and
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One possible Version
One Saturday morning. Li Ming and his grandpa were feeding the bird in the cage. The bird was unhappy though it had enough food and water, Li Ming did not know why.
The next morning on his way to school, Li Ming saw some birds flying in the sky. Them be thought of the lonely bird in the cage, He decided to persuade his grandpa to set the bird free. When he got home, he said to his grandpa, “Birds are our friendly We should give the bird freedom.” To his delight, his grandpa agreed.
The bird was set free. Grandpa and the children were very happy to see the bird flying away into the sky.山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（79）
短文改错
My family lived on a farm when I was a little boy.
We often play games together, such as hide-and-seek. 1. ____
One of us would hide and others would try to find him. 2. ____
I remember a time I hid behind some old wood in the cottage. 3. ____
All was silent. I couldn’t hear a sound, just the wind blow. 4. ____
I was scared. And the longer I waited for, the more scared I became. 5. ____
Eventual, I heard footsteps coming down the yard. 6. ____
I saw my brother getting closer and closer. 7. ____
When he saw me, he laughed loudly, shouting in the top of his voice 8. ____
so that someone could hear him say, “Eh, I’ve found our Tommy!” 9. ____
Though it was long time before, I can still see the look on his face today.
10. ____
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2008年一月中国南方大部分地区遭遇了前所未有的低温暴风雪恶劣天气，请你以王明的名义，根据提示（需适当补充细节），给某报社的编辑写信。120词左右。
提示：
1. 雪灾严重影响了人们的生活；
2. 人们齐心协力，共同迎战暴风雪；
3. 这个过程让我看到了……
1. play → played 2. others前加the 3. a → one
4. blow → blowing 5. 去掉for
6. Eventual → Eventually 7. √ 83. in → at
8. someone → everyone 9. before → ago
书面表达（One possible version）
Dear Editor,
In January 2008, many parts in the south of China experienced the worst snowstorms. The disaster greatly affected the lives of people. Many vehicles were trapped on the road, many flights were cancelled, and many trains were delayed. Worse still, some areas suffered power failures. However, in the face of this disaster, people united to fight against the heavy snowstorms, making every effort to rescue the people trapped in the snowstorms and to ensure that everything would return to normal as soon as possible.
During these days, we can feel from TV and newspaper reports, and from people’s reactions that love exists everywhere.
Sincerely yours,
Wang Ming山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（2）
短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（︿），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I am a senior high school student．To my opinion, the classroom is a place for students to gain knowledges．So quietness is badly need for us to learn in the classroom．But recently some
students has brought their mobile phones to the classroom and we often hear of the ring of mobile phones．Some of them even wasted precious time in class type short messages on the mobile phones．To keep the classroom quietly and make us focus more on our studies, I suggest that mobile phones be used in the classroom．At least, they shouldn’t be used where we are having a class．
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假如你是Li Hua，担任学生会主席， 你校刚在10月10日举行完首届校园外语节，请你按以下内容要点准备一篇英语稿，投递到英文报，The 21st Century。
目 的： 为了丰富校园生活，提高同学们学习外语的积极性，校学生会特举办首届校园外语节。
参赛形式： 以班级为单位参加。
活动内容： 英文演讲，英文歌曲和英语短剧比赛。
活动裁判： 本校英语教师和外教。
活动影响： 增强了学生学习英语的兴趣等。
参考词汇： Foreign Language Festival, English Speech Contest, English Playlets Competition
注意： 词数100左右；信的开头和结尾已为你写好，但不计入总词数。
21世纪教育网 Editor，
On Oct.10th, our school held the first Foreign Language Festival…. …
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
改错
1. … To my opinion… To → In
2. … gain knowledges … knowledges → knowledge
3. … is badly need for … need → needed
4. … students has brought… has → have
5. …often hear of the ring … 去掉of
6. … wasted precious time… wasted → waste
7. … class type short … type → typing
8. … To keep the classroom quietly … quietly → quiet
9. … mobile phones be used … phones be之间加not 或shouldn’t
10. …where we are having … where → when
editor,
On Oct.10th,our school held the first Foreign Language Festival.It aimed to make campus life more colourful as well as to encourge students to study English.
There were three activities during this festival—English Speech Contest,English Songs and English Playlets Competition. Each contestant from all the classes took part in them actively. And the judges consisted of our English teachers and foreign teachers.
As the chairman of the Students’ Union, I was completely involved in the festival. In my opinion, this festival has been successfully organized. Also, the atmosphere of learning English has been well constructed. Moreover, it has effectively raised our awareness of cross-culture and teamwork. I hope such activities will be regularly held then.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hu山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（80）
　短文改错
此题要求改正所给短文的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉；在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉；该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）；在该行右边横线上写出该加的词；该行错一个词，在错的词下划一个横线；在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Nowadays, paper still come from trees. Unfortunately, we use a 1. ________
lot of paper every day. We must not waste paper and there will 2. ________
not be any trees leaving on Earth. No trees means no paper. We 3. ________
need 17 trees make one ton of paper. We must start using less 4. ________
paper now because it takes about 100 years of a tree to grow. 5. ________
How can we save paper Firstly, we can use both the sides 6. ________
of every sheet of paper. We can re - use envelope. We can choose
7. ________
drinks in bottles instead of drinks in cardboard cartons. We can 8. ________
re - use plastic cups and plates instead of paper ones. We can also
9. ________
use handkerchiefs instead of paper tissues. We can use less paper
10. ________
shopping bags and we can re - use these paper bags later as well.
书面表达
根据下面的提示，写一篇约100个单词的英语短文。题目和开头已经给出。
1. 2001年7月，中国获得2008年在北京举办奥运会的权利。
2. 2001年11月，中国加入了世界贸易组织（the WTO）。
3. 在北京，业余时间学习英语的人数比前几年增长了近70％。出租车司机至少能讲100句英语日常用语。
写作要求：
短文应包括以上提示要点，可适当增加必要的语句，使短文内容更加充实、结构更加紧凑。
English Is getting More Important
The year 2001 was a great year in the history of China. Inspiring events occurred one after another.
1. come-comes paper作主语，谓语动词用单数
2. and-or，or“否则”
3. leaving-left
4. make前加to，不定式作后置定语
5. of-for，for sb. /sth to do为一常用短语
6. 去掉the
7. envelope-envelopes
8. √
9. re-use 改为use
10. less-fewer这里修饰的是bags
书面表达
One possible version:
English Is Getting More Important
The year 2001 was a great year in the history of China. Inspiring events occurred one after another. For example. In July, 2001 China succeeded in winning the right of holding the 2008 Olympic Games in Beijing； in November of the same year China joined the WTO（or: became a member of the WTO）at last. That means we Chinese will have more chances to communicate （or: get on）with people from all parts of the world. Therefore, English is getting more and more important.
It is said that in Beijing more and more people are learning English in their spare time. The number of people learning English is nearly 70 percent larger than that of the last years'. Even the taxi drivers have been asked to be able to speak 100 words and expressions of everyday English.
Nowadays, we Chinese are crazy about English learning.山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（7）
短文改错
该文中共有十处错误,每句中最多有两处,错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（ ＼）划掉。
修改： 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2、只允许修改十处, 多者(从第11处起) 不计分。
I am a senior 3 student. Recently I have made a survey among 100 boys and 100 girls. The result of the survey is as the follows: That the boys like to do most is to become businessmen while the girls favorite work is to be teachers. Only few boys want to do this job. It is interested that the number of boys and girls who want to be doctors are equal. As for lawyers, more boys expect to have this job. Therefore, there are still students are not clear about their future. In a word, they all express they would work hard at their lessons for the College Entrance Examination. As long as they do this badly, they will realize their great dreams.
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假如你是李华，你暑假期间要去英国某语言学校进行短期学习。以下是英方学校寄给你的课程安排选择表。请你仔细阅读安排表，按要求给校方回复一封信。
Schedule for Summer English Courses
English Courses Total Hours of Study and Day-Trip Date Tuition(学费)
six-week course 75 hours of study；five days of trip July 6--August 16 1000 pounds
four-week course 60 hours of study；no trip July 6--August 2 600 pounds
回信需包括以下内容：
1．你选择哪种课程及你选择的理由。
2．介绍你的现有英语水平。
3．你希望在哪些方面有所提高。
4．你的其它要求。
注意：1．开头语己为你写好，不计入总词数。2．词数：100左右。
Dear Sir(Madam)，
Thank you for sending me the Schedule for Summer English Courses. _______
____________________________________________________________________
Li Hua
短文改错：
1.去掉as后的the ; 2.That 改为What; 3.favourite前的girls改为girls’;
4. few 前加a; 5.interested 改为interesting; 6. equal 前的are改为is; 7.Therefore改为However; 8.students后加who; 9.would 改为will.
10. badly改为well.
书面表达：
Dear Sir/Madam,
Thank you for sending me the Schedule for Summer English Courses. As for my choice, I’d prefer the six-week course for 75 hours of study. This would allow me more time to see your beautiful country while learning the language. I would like to do some traveling and make a few new friends.
I have been learning English for 6 years and now I am able to listen, speak, read and write in English. I hope to take this chance to improve my spoken English as much as possible. Besides, I’d like to stay home for a couple of days so that I can know better about English habits and customs. I believe I will have a wonderful time in England this summer.
Li Hua山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（6）
短文改错
Last weekend we went mountain-climbing．Even the heavy rain in the morning could not prevent us go．Setting off very early, we went along an extreme narrow road, all in high spirits．On every side of the road were green fields and some farm house．We could hear the sound of the rain and our footsteps mixing with our laughter．At noon we reached top of the mountain．That surprised us most was the beauty of the scenes there．After having a short rest and sharing with the food we had brought, we started going down．It rained even harder．We are wet to the skin, and we still sang and laughed happily．
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假设你是李华，山西某中学高中学生，今年暑假将前往澳大利亚参加主题为WATER FOR LIFE 的交流活动。请你以参访代表的身份，根据以下图片提示，用英语写一篇发言稿。
注意：
　　1．根据图片的内容适当展开，以使行文连贯；　　
2．开头与结尾已写好，不计入总词数；
　　3．文中不能出现考生的具体信息； 　　
4．词数：100左右
　　参考词汇：短缺shortage; ks**5u
Ladies and gentlemen,
Good morning．I’m Li Hua from Shanxi,China．It’s my great honor to be here to say something about global water shortage and ways of dealing with it．
That’s all．Thank you．
Last weekend we went mountain-climbing．Even the heavy rain in the morning could not
prevent us go．Setting off very early, we went along an extreme narrow road, all in high spirits．
going extremely
On every side of the road were green fields and some farm house．We could hear the sound of
each/ either houses
the rain and our footsteps mixing with our laughter．At noon we reached ︿ top of the
mixed the
mountain．That surprised us most was the beauty of the scenes there．After having a short rest
What
and sharing with the food we had brought, we started going down．It rained even harder．We
删除with
are wet to the skin, and we still sang and laughed happily．
were but
Ladies and gentlemen,
Good morning．I’m Li Hua from Ningxia China．It’s my great honor to be here to say something about global water shortage and ways of dealing with it．
As we know, the global water shortage is becoming increasingly severe mainly due to global warming, environmental pollution and the ever-increasing population．Therefore, it’s high time we did something about it．
Firstly, an effective way, I think, is to reserve water in a scientific way for future use．Secondly, new methods need to be developed to use the existing water resources, for example, turning sea water into fresh water．Thirdly, we must stop water pollution by law．Last but not least, it’s everyone’s responsibility to make good use of water, such as recycling and saving water in our daily life．
In conclusion, people around the world should be aware of the real situation of water shortage, protect the present water resources and explore potential ones scientifically．
That’s all．Thank you
global warming
other reason(s) 山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（58）短文改错
假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
When Joe left university, he got a good job in a bike's factory．And after he had worked there for some years, he decided to have a change．So he put a notice several newspapers, says what experience he had and the kind of job he would like to have．One of the answer he received was from a man who was looking for a job either．This man wrote to him, "Dear sir, when you get a new job, to be kind enough to give your name and address to your present boss as I have been trying to find a position like yours for a long time．" After he had finished reading the letter, he suddenly realizes what he had done was real foolish.
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假如你是李华，你在美国的笔友Jack最近因为被朋友误解而苦恼。请你根据所给提示，给他发一封100词的英语电子邮件对他进行开解。开头和结尾已为你写好。
内容包括：1．安慰Jack。
2．解决办法（至少两条）。
Dear Jack,
I am sorry to know that you are being misunderstood by your friends these days.
Yours sincerely
Li Hua山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（21）
短文改错
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词；在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错误的不要改。
I often dream of becoming a teacher. I dream of standing on 1.
the platform in the classroom or giving lessons to lovely boys 2.
and girls. I teach them, playing with them and watch them 3.
growing up. I always feel young stayed with them. I know it 4.
is not easily to be a teacher. I have to learn in order to teach. 5.
Without enough knowledge, I can never learn well. What is 6.
much more, I have to be friends with my pupils and take care 7.
of them. Only by this way can I be a good teacher and win 8.
respect from them. Therefore, now I ought to work very hardly 9.
make my dream come true. 10.
书面表达
目前，学校普遍存在部分同学成绩落后的现象。假如你是班长，班主任请你对此现象在班会上作一个简短发言，分析成绩落后的原因，并提出你的建议。发言稿的內容要点如下：
1. 主要原因：
①对学习缺乏信心； ②没有集中精力学习； ③尚未养成良好的习惯……
2. 你的建议：……
注意：1. 可以根据內容适当发挥，以使行文连贯；
2. 词数：100左右（发言稿的开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Nowadays quite a few of us are falling behind with our studies.…山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（30）短文改错
该文中共有十处错误,每句中最多有两处,错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（ ＼）划掉。
修改： 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2、只允许修改十处, 多者(从第11处起) 不计分。
I am a senior 3 student. Recently I have made a survey among 100 boys and 100 girls. The result of the survey is as the follows: That the boys like to do most is to become businessmen while the girls favorite work is to be teachers. Only few boys want to do this job. It is interested that the number of boys and girls who want to be doctors are equal. As for lawyers, more boys expect to have this job. Therefore, there are still students are not clear about their future. In a word, they all express they would work hard at their lessons for the College Entrance Examination. As long as they do this badly, they will realize their great dreams.
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假如你是李华，你暑假期间要去英国某语言学校进行短期学习。以下是英方学校寄给你的课程安排选择表。请你仔细阅读安排表，按要求给校方回复一封信。
Schedule for Summer English Courses
English Courses Total Hours of Study and Day-Trip Date Tuition(学费)
six-week course 75 hours of study；five days of trip July 6--August 16 1000 pounds
four-week course 60 hours of study；no trip July 6--August 2 600 pounds
回信需包括以下内容：
1．你选择哪种课程及你选择的理由。
2．介绍你的现有英语水平。
3．你希望在哪些方面有所提高。
4．你的其它要求。
注意：1．开头语己为你写好，不计入总词数。2．词数：100左右。
Dear Sir(Madam)，
Thank you for sending me the Schedule for Summer English Courses.
__________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________Li Hua
短文改错：
1.去掉as后的the ; 2.That 改为What; 3.favourite前的girls改为girls’;
4. few 前加a; 5.interested 改为interesting; 6. equal 前的are改为is; 7.Therefore改为However; 8.students后加who; 9.would 改为will.
10. badly改为well.
书面表达：
Dear Sir/Madam,
Thank you for sending me the Schedule for Summer English Courses. As for my choice, I’d prefer the six-week course for 75 hours of study. This would allow me more time to see your beautiful country while learning the language. I would like to do some traveling and make a few new friends.
I have been learning English for 6 years and now I am able to listen, speak, read and write in English. I hope to take this chance to improve my spoken English as much as possible. Besides, I’d like to stay home for a couple of days so that I can know better about English habits and customs. I believe I will have a wonderful time in England this summer.
Li Hua山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（50）短文改错
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边的横线上划一个“√”如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（╲）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
This summer holiday, I get a chance to teach English 1. _____
beginners. I experienced life as teacher for the first time. 2. ______
The students were very small, but I was even nervous when 3. ______
so many kids stared at me. Fortunately, their warmly welcome 4. ______
encouraged me. I taught them some letters, sang English songs 5. _____
and played games with them, fill the classroom with laughter. 6. ______
But little kid like talking with each other in class, so it was 7. ______
hard to control the class. As a result, I got a sore throat. Thus, 8. ______
I found that teaching is cool and exciting, especially that 9. ______
when you help your students to learn anything with joy. 10. _____
书面表达
假设你是李华，你的美国老师Miss Morgan要求你们明天下午去听一个美国历史的讲座。你因故不能参加。请你根据以下要点，写一封短信向Miss Morgan请假。
内容要点：
1. 表示歉意；
2. 理由：去机场接从法国回来的舅舅；
3. 询问：是否有录音，以便补听讲座。
注意：1. 词数：100词左右；
2. 可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
21世纪教育网 Miss Morgan,
___________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
1. get → got 2. as后加a 3. 去掉even 4. warmly → warm
5. √ 6. fill → filling 7. kid → kids 8. Thus → However
9. 去掉that 10. anything → something
书面表达：
One possible version:
21世纪教育网 Miss Morgan,
I am so sorry that I won’t be able to attend the lecture on American history tomorrow afternoon. My uncle is returning home from France, and I have promised to meet him at the airport at 3:30 tomorrow afternoon.
I am very much interested in American society and history. I wonder if it is possible for the talk to be recorded, and if so, could I borrow the tape It would mean a great deal to me to listen to the tape and make up for what is covered in the talk. I would appreciate it if you could allow me to ask for a leave of absence.
Thank you.
Yours,
Li Hua山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（42）短文改错
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\ )划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Some students think a difficult exam is just like a challenge and the more difficult it is, the more better it will be. They say a difficult exam can help students to find out what they are weak in their studies and improve their learning methods.
Though, others were against a difficult exam. In their opinions, if it is very difficult, they may become discourage and feel terrible about their studies.
I prefer an exam neither too difficult or too easy. A very easy exam is not good for teachers to learn how we are getting with our studies, and a too difficult exam will make us lose our heart.
书面表达
假如你是一名高三学生，经常为看电视的事跟妈妈闹意见，今天你跟妈妈达成一致。请根据以下表格的内容，以An Argument为题为《英语广场》写一篇100字左右的英语短文：
母亲 儿子
高三学生学习任务重，看电视浪费时间 学习一天很疲劳，看电视可以放松一下
儿子自制力差，看电视会影响视力 看电视也可以增长知识，了解国际国内大事，紧跟时代
上学期间不准我看电视，但在周末允许我看新闻、文艺、体育或科普类节目。
注意：1、短文的开头已给出，不记人总词数。
2、不能遗漏表格中的内容，但不要逐字翻译。
3、可以适当增添合乎情理的过渡性语言。
I am a Senior 3 student. I often quarrel with my mother over whether I can watch TV after school.
短文改错
1.and the more----- and that the more 2. more better---- better
3.what---where 4. though---however 5.were—are 6.opinions---opinion
7.discourage----discouraged 8. or--nor
9. getting with---getting on with
10. lose our heart---lose heart
书面表达
I am a Senior 3 student. I often quarrel with my mother over whether I can watch TV after school. My mother holds the view that students in Senior 3, heavily burdened with their studies, are too busy to spare any time to watch TV. It seems to her that once I am allowed to do that I will not be able to control myself and forget all about my study. She also thinks that it is bad for my eyes to watch TV too often. But I really can’t accept her ideas. I think it is relaxing to watch TV after a day’s hard work. Not only can it set my mind at rest, but it can broaden my horizons. Now we have at last reached an agreement that I can only watch TV at weekends, and the programs should be limited to news and programs of entertainment, sports or science.山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（29）短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及修改均限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。
The winter holiday is coming, which made me excited. I have been looking forward at relaxing myself. I'd like to go skating, climb mountains and see several movie. I think I can play basketball with my classmates. What wonderful time I'll have during the winter holiday! Therefore, my parents think different. They don't want me go out. They are afraid I'll be knocked down by a truck , fall off a tree, or fight with others. Besides, they are afraid I will lose my way. I hate being treated like a bird keeping in a cage. To get more freedom, so I will try to persuade him.
书面表达
假如你非常喜欢中央电视台的“动物世界（Animal World）”这个节目，请根据以下内容提示，以“My Favourite TV Program”为题，给CCTV-9英语频道的编辑写一篇英语短文。
喜欢这一节目的理由：1. 喜欢小动物；2. 节目生动有趣；3. 增长了不少知识。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增减细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数。
My Favourite TV Promgram
“Animal World” is a popular TV program by CCTV. It is also my favourite program.
短文改错：
1. made→makes　 2. at→to 　 3. movie→movies 4. 加a　
5. Therefore→However　 6. different →differently 7. go前加to　　
8. keeping→kept　 9. 去掉so 10.him→them
书面表达：
My Favourite TV Promgram
“Animal World” is a popular TV program by CCTV. It is also my favourite program.
I like it because I really like small animals. Also, th/e host has the ability to make the program lively and interesting. Finally, from the program I have learned a lot about how animals live, which I didn’t know before.
By watching the program, I have begun to understand the relationship between people, animals and nature. I have also realized how important it is to protect the environment and nature.
I know that animals are a part of nature. They can’t be separated from human beings. If we want to live well, we must keep the balance of nature. We should let everyone understand that we must take care of our planet and stop destroying it.山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（62）短文改错
此题要求改正所有短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（︿）,在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Time flies as an arrow. I'm already in the second half 1.______
of Senior Grade 3 before I realized it. It is only a little more 2.______
than one month before I graduate middle school. At 3.______
the present, I'm busy reviewing my lessons in order to 4.______
taking the college entrance examination. I hope to go to 5.______
Beijing University, that is one of the best universities not 6.______
only in China but also in the world. I'll try my best to turn 7.______
my dream to reality. Most of my classmates are also 8.______
studying very hard to realize our wishes. I do believe everyone 9.______
will be able to enter a very good university and college. 10.______
书面表达
请根据以下表格中的信息介绍2010年上海世博会：
时间 2010年五月一日——十月三十一日
地点 上海
主题 城市让生活更美好
宗旨 促进城市多元化、经济的繁荣、科技的创新
参展者 200多个国家、机构和7000万人参加，展示各国在工农业、科学、技术、文化艺术方面所取得的成就。
注意：不要拘泥于要点，可以适当发挥，词数120左右
参考词汇：促进：promote 产品博览会：exposition 创新：innovation.
改错：
1.As—like 2.realized-realize 3.graduate∧ from 4.去掉the
5. taking---take 6.that—which 7. √ 8. to—into
9. our—their 10. and—or
书面表达：
The World Expo 2010 is going to take place in Shanghai ,one of the biggest city in China .It is scheduled to last from May 1 to October 31,2010.The theme of it is "Better City ,Better Life", which means it is designed to promote cultural diversity ,economic prosperity and scientific innovation of the city. More than 200 countries have been prepared to take part so as to display their outstanding achievements in industry ,agriculture ,science, technology ,culture and art .About 70, 000, 000 visitors from different parts of the world are expected to attend the event.
I hope the World Expo 2010 will become one of the most impressive international fairs and expositions in history .We are expecting new friends to come to Shanghai.山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（28）短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误．每句中最多有两处。错误涉及单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，井在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Lots of bad behaviors still exist around us. For an example, some people often cross the streets against traffic rules. Some didn't make room for the old or disabled at the bus and some even litter and spit freely in public. The above behavior do great harm to our city and will leave a bad impression on visitors. It's high time which we solved the problem.
Firstly, I'll start with myself to perform good manners all the time and somewhere. Secondly, I'll call at all the people around to behave polite. Thirdly, everyone should do his bit help build up a harmonious society. Next, some effective measures should be taken to give up the bad behaviors.
书面表达
假设你是李华，最近你校美国外教Jack想要为他的两个儿子在学生中找一名中文辅导教师。你希望为他们辅导。请你用英语给Jack写封申请信。内容主要包括：
1．个人情况，性别、年龄；
2．个人特长：语文好、喜欢英语、善于交流、有耐心；
3．优势：曾为外国人辅导中文、担任学校广播站英语广播员。
参考词汇：辅导教师tutor
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Jack
My name is Li Hua.
Yours.
Li Hua
短文改错
第二句：去掉For后面的an；
第三句：didn’t改为don’t；at改为on；
第四句：behavior改为behaviors；
第五句：which改为that；
第六句：somewhere改为everywhere；
第七句：at改为on；polite改为politely；
第八句：help前加to；
第九句：Next改为Lastly
One possible version:
Dear Jack,
My name is li Hua. I'm an 18-year-old boy, studying in the same school where you work. I know you want to find a Chinese tutor for your two sons. I'm sure I am fit for the job. My advantages are as follows.
Yours,
Li Hua山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（19）
短文改错
下面短文中有10处语法错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加上一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起）不记分。
21世纪教育网 Tom,
I'd like to tell you something more about our school sports meet. It was holding on Oct. 6, which was a fine day. There were over 1,000 students and teachers attend it. Wang Lin, a student from my class won the 100-meters race. He finish the race in 12.6 seconds and broke in the school record. The sports meet was really success. That was because we were all trying to do my best. Although I was not one of the winner, I was proud of that we had cone. I’m looking forward to receiving your letter.
书面表达
假如你是太原某所中学的学生李华。暑假将至，你校外籍教师Mr. Smith打算利用暑假外出旅游，请你根据图片和中文提示用英语写一封信，为Mr. Smith提供旅游建议。
1.需要说明旅游线路。
2.告知旅行日程安排、就餐及住宿等情况
注意：1．短文必须包括所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
2．词数：100-120之间；
3．信的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
21世纪教育网 Mr. Smith,
Here is my suggestion about your journey during the Summer holiday...
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours Sincerely
Lihua
改错：第1句：划掉more
第2句：holding→held
第3句：attend→attending
第4句：100-meters→100-meter
第5句: finish→finished
第5句：划掉第二个in
第6句：success前加a或success→successful
第7句：my→our
第8句：winner→winners
第8句：that→what或that前加all
书面表达：
Dear Mr Smith,
Here is my suggestion about your journey during the Summer holiday. On July 20, you are to take a train to Tai'an City to climb Mount Tai, on the top of which, if lucky, you'll have the chance to see the sunrise early in the morning. On July 23, you may take the train to Beijing. You can visit Tian'anmen Square in the afternoon. After it you can live in Beijing Hotel, Which will offer you various Chinese traditional food. Next day, I suggest you visit the Great Wall, the longest wall in the world. For the next four days, you can go to the Summer Palace, walk around and do some shopping. In the afternoon, you may return to Taiyuan by plane.
I hope you have a pleasant journey!
Yours,
Li Hua
太原山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（67）
短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。务必按照以下要求的格式修改，否则不得分。
增加：在缺词处加一个下漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出修改的词。
删除：把多余的词用从左上向右下的斜线（\）划掉即可。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线（_____），并在该词下面写出修改的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Peter Judd joined in the army when he was eighteen, and for several months he was
taught how to be a good soldier. He did quite good in everything except shooting. One
day he and his friends were practice shooting, and all of them were doing quite well
besides Peter. After he had shot at the target nine times and had not hit him once, the
officer who was trying to teach the young soldiers shoot said, “You’re quite hopeless.
Peter! Don’t waste your last bullet，too! Go behind that wall and shoot yourself with it!”
Peter felt shameful. He went behind the wall, and a few seconds later the officer and
the other young soldier heard the sound of a shot.
“Heavens!” the officer said, “Has that silly man really shot himself ”
He ran behind the wall anxiously, but Peter is all right. “I'm sorry, sir.” he said, “and
I missed again.”
书面表达
假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Jack来信询问中国人是如何庆祝国庆的。 请根据以下提示，给他回一封电子邮件。
1. 普天同庆：大街小巷及各大商店焕然一新，悬挂中国国旗，有些出租车和私家车也悬挂国旗。
2. 庆祝活动：各地电视台推出国庆专题文艺节目，普通社区自发举行各种形式的庆祝活动。
3. 休闲度假：国庆期间，人们可以外出旅游，也可以回家与家人团聚等。
注意：1. 不要逐字逐句翻译。
2. 词数：100词左右（开头结尾已给出，不计入词数）
21世纪教育网 Jack，
You asked me in your letter how people in China celebrate National Day. Let me tell you.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
In China, National Day is happy time for all the people.
Yours,
Li Hua
短文改错
第一行：去掉in
第二行：第二个good改为well
第三行：practice改为practicing
第四行：besides改为except或but；him改为it
第五行：shoot前加to
第六行：（正确）
第七行：shameful改为ashamed
第八行：soldier改为soldiers
第九行：（正确）
第十行：is改为was；and改为but
书面表达
Dear Jack，
You asked me in your letter how people in China celebrate National Day. Let me tell you.
National Day is such an important time for Chinese people that it is celebrated all over the country. The streets take on a clear look. Big stores are hanging up national flags and you can even see national flags on some taxies and private cars.
All TV stations are bringing entertaining programs about National Day, while ordinary communities create all kinds of activities in celebration of it such as Yangge Dance.
People can take leisure holiday during National Day. They may go on a tour, or even travel abroad; they may also spend the holiday at home with their families.
In China, National Day is happy time for all the p ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com / " \o "欢迎登陆21世纪教育网 )eople.
Yours,
Li Hua山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（57）短文改错
假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(︿)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
书面表达
假如你校要举办一次主题为“How to Communicate with Friends”的英语演讲比赛，请你用英语写一篇演讲稿。要点如下：
1．尊重并信任朋友； 2．常与朋友聊天； 3．换位思考问题。
注意：
1．词数100左右，题目已给出；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．参考词汇：换位思考：put oneself in sb. ’s shoes
短文改错
I'm very glad to have received the letter you sent me two weeks before. I have been thinking
bout the question you ask me. On my opinion, you should come back after finished your
ies abroad. For one reason, that you are studying is badly needed nowadays in our
country,It will be quite easily for you to find a good job. In fact, I know a few big company in
our city are hoping to hire people like you. For another reason, I think it will be tdo much more
convenient for me to look after your parents as they are getting old. But this is only my point. It is
up to you a make a right che山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（11）
短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（︿），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Mr Wang,
We’re so pleased that you are willing to sharing your views.
In the course of the general revision, what we needed is a chain of knowledge. As you know, we didn’t learn well enough in the first two years, but please slow down and make sure we have real mastered something. Besides, we need a little more time to think for us. As for those important points which also make us confusing, would you please give us more practices in case we forget Meanwhile, we need our instructions, for example, on how to write with natural English. We still have another request: please don’t make us do too many homework.
By the way, we often feel worried, which has very bad effect on our study. We would appreciate it if you would give us some encouragement from time to time.
书面表达
假设你是李华，你的网友李明来信诉说他英语基础不好，学习很吃力，打算放弃这门学科。请根据以下提示用英语级他回一封e-mail:
消极对待英语学习不可取；
如何面对英语学习过程中的困难；
谈谈你的英语学习方法。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Li Ming,
I’ve learned from your last letter that you have difficulty in learning English and intend to give it up. I think it’s unwise to give up this subject. Otherwise, you might be left far behind because English is necessary for us all.
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Mr Wang,
We’re so pleased that you are willing to sharing your views.
share
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need
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so
real mastered something. Besides, we need a little more time to think for us. As for those
really ourselves
important points which also make us confusing, would you please give us more practices in case
confused practice
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English. We still have another request: please don’t make us do too many homework.
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appreciate it if you would give us some encouragement from time to time.
书面表达：
One possible version:
Dear Li Ming,
I’ve learned from your last letter that you have difficulty in learning English and intend to give it up. I think it’s unwise to give up this subject. Otherwise, you might be left far behind because English is necessary for us all.
Negative attitudes are bad for your study and sometimes even make you feel depressed. In the face of learning difficulties, what you need to do is calm down and improve your learning methods, as well as ask your teachers for advice.
I believe vocabulary is an important part of English, just like a good foundation for a good building. Also, I often listen to English programs on TV and on the radio. Besides, I’ve learned a lot online.
Anyway, Rome is not built in a day. Only by sticking to studying can you make progress sin English. I hope my advice can be of some help to you.山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（64）短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线划掉。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Verne was born in 1828 and was died in 1905. To make the living, he had to write and sell stories. He studied botany, applied science and many others subjects. His famous novel “20,000 Leagues Under the Sea” describes Dr Aronnax, his servant or a Canadian whale hunter set out to finding the monster. After months of searching they manage to find. And in the collision that followed, the three companion are thrown overboard. They are lucky taken on board and Captain Nemo decides not to kill them and make them his guests and took them on a voyage.
书面表达
在当今社会上，有些人认为：“九零后”的行为方式和价值观令人担忧。请根据下表中所提供的信息，阐述观点，帮助人们消除忧虑。
人们对“九零后”的忧虑 1．自私；2．依赖性强；3．贪图过舒适的生活等。
“九零后”的长处 敢于挑战……(请联系自己拟定内容,再列举两至三点。)
注意：1．词数100左右：
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头已写好，不计入总词数。
We, post 90’s generation, are developing our unique values in special manners. It has raised people’s some worry. ____________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Verne was born in 1828 and was died in 1905. To make the living, he had to write and
a
sell stories. He studied botany, applied science and many others subjects. His famous
other
novel “20,000 Leagues Under the Sea” describes Dr Aronnax, his servant or a
and
Canadian whale hunter set out to finding the monster. After months of searching
find
they manage to find∧. And in the collision that followed, the three companion are
it follows companions
thrown overboard. They are lucky taken on board and Captain Nemo decides not to
luckily
kill them and make them his guests and takes them on a voyage.
but
One possible version:
We, post 90’s generation, are developing our unique values in special manners. It has raised people’s some worry.
They are worried that we rely on our parents too much and tend to live a comfortable life. Besides, they think we are selfish and are unwilling to work with others, which makes it hard for us to achieve success.
However, we have our own advantages. Firstly, we are independent in thinking and desire to learn more about the world around us. Secondly, we have the courage to meet challenges and take risks in our life, which helps to realize our dreams. What’s more, we are creative and can keep up with modern science and technology.
Please do trust us. We are a hopeful generation.山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（49）短文改错
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉,在该行右边横线上写出该词,并且也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没错的不要改。
Charlie Lee, aged fifteen, and his sister Roseanne,
earn their pocket money by washing his father’s car, 1.________
watering the plants, cleaning the balcony, and do 2.________
odd jobs around a house. Their parents prefer giving 3.________
them money for doing jobs to buying them present. 4.________
Charlie and Roseanne usually receives about $25 for 5.________
each job. They often bargain their father over the rate 6.________
of pay and the job to be done. Mrs. Lee said, “We were 7.________
teaching them that the money doesn’t come out of 8.________
nowhere. It means more to them unless they feel that they’ve 9.________
earned it and they better understand the value of things. 10.________
书面表达
据一项调查显示，有85.8%的中学生说自己的字迹不好看，而他们又不想改善字迹，其理由有很大差别。请根据下图写一篇100个词左右的短文，说明该现象并发表自己的看法，开头已给出。
Nowadays, with the growing popularity of computers, teachers, students and their parents are paying less and less attention to handwriting.山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（68）
短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。务必按照以下要求的格式修改，否则不得分。
增加：在缺词处加一个下漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出修改的词。
删除：把多余的词用从左上向右下的斜线（\）划掉即可。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线（_____），并在该词下面写出修改的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Some students think a difficult exam is just like a challenge and the more difficult it is, the more better it will be. They say a difficult exam can help students to find out what they are weak in their studies and improve their learning methods. Though, others were against a difficult exam. In their opinions, if it is very difficult, they may become discourage and feel terrible about their studies. I prefer an exam neither too difficult or too easy. A very easy exam is not good for teachers to learn how we are getting with our studies, and a too difficult exam will make us lose our heart.
书面表达
2011年度湖南卫视策划的“快乐女声”节目再度热播，酒吧歌手段林希荣获冠军，在很多观众特别是中学生中引起了很大的反响，上周末你班为此展开了一场讨论。
观点
支持者 给一些平凡却爱唱歌的女孩提供了一个展示才华的舞台，增强了她们的竞争意识和提高自我素质的意识
反对者 花费了太多的时间和精力，轻信一夜成名。不能集中注意力学习，对她们未来发展不利
你的观点 。。。。。。考生自己设想
要求：1.行文连贯，内容完整。 2.题目和开头语已经给出。
3.次数100左右。 4.参考词汇 Happy Girls’ Voice 快乐女声
Recently many people especially high school students have been fascinated by a singing competition “Happy Girls’ Voice”, which was held by Hunan TV station…….
短文改错
1.and the more----- and that the more 2. more better---- better
3.what---where 4. though---however 5.were—are 6.opinions---opinion
7.discourage----discouraged 8. or--nor
9. getting with---getting on /along with
10. lose our heart---lose heart
写作
Recently many people especially high school students have been fascinated by a singing competition “ Super Girls’ Voice “ ,which was held by Hunan TV station . Last week students in our class had a heated discussion about it .
Some students supporting it think highly of the competition .They think it has offered a wonderful stage to ordinary but well singing girls to show their talents in public , and encourages people to pursue their dreams ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com / " \o "欢迎登陆21世纪教育网 ) . What’s more , they can also develop their sense of competing during competitions.
On the other hand , the others don’t agree with them . They think a series of competitions costs lots of time and money. As most of girls are still students who hold ideas to become famous by a night but should concentrate on their study at present , taking part in it is not good for their further progress.
In my opinion , it is just a successful program , which has attracted lots of audience’s attention .But seeing a bunch of girls with passion try hard to realize their dreams in the competition ,we are inspired to study harder to be the Super Girls too ,just as competitors .山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（69）
短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）下面写出该加的词。
删除：粑多余的词用斜线划掉。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My favourite sport is football．I was a member of our school football team．We practise of three times every week and often watch football match on TV together．Play football not only makes us grow tall and strong but also give us a sense of fair play and team spirit．We must keep in mind that we play for the team instead ourselves．Also, the sport teaches us the important of obedience．Each player must obey the captain, which is the leader of the team．And they must not break the rules too often unless we want to win the game．
书面表达
假定你是李华，亚洲冬季运动会将在你居住的地方举办，现在正在招募志愿者，你希望成为其中一员。请按要求用英文给组委会写一封申请信，内容应包括：
个人情况：年龄、性别、学历
个人条件：英语好、爱好体育、善于交往、乐于助人、熟悉本地情况
承诺：提供最佳服务
注意：
词数100左右，开头语已为你写好；可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
生词：申请-apply (v.)，application(n．)；志愿者-volunteer高考资源网（ www.），您身边的高考专家
高考资源网（ www.），您身边的高考专家
山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（72）
短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第l1处起）不计分。
21世纪教育网 Chairman,
I’m a student from Class 1, Grade 3. I want to join in your club. At school, I study very hardly. I’m always ready to help others. I got on well with my classmates but I like to help them with their lessons. I often help the old to crossing the road. On the bus, I often give my seat to others. On weekends, I usually go to the park pick up rubbish. I want to join a club very much. For one reason, I like to make friend and work with others. For other, I will have more chances to help others. I would be glad if accepting.
Yours,
Li Ping
书面表达
假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Tim给你发了一封电子邮件，向你了解你参加上海世博会志愿者的服务工作的情况。请参照表格中的提示，给Tim写一封邮件回复。
世博会简介 特点 首次在发展中国家举行
参观人数 超过7千万
志愿工作 地点 北京馆
职责 介绍北京的文化和著名建筑
工作之余 参观其它场馆；了解科技成就及新发明；……
注意：
1．邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好。
2．词数不少于100。
3．参考词汇：上海世博会the Shanghai Exposition 北京馆Beijing Pavilion
21世纪教育网 Tim,
I’ve received your email, asking me about my volunteer work in the Shanghai Exposition. Now let me tell you something exciting.
_______________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Fondly yours,
Li Hua
短文改错
21世纪教育网 Chairman,
I’m a student from Class 1, Grade 3. I want to join in your club. At school, I
study very hardly. I’m always ready to help others. I got on well with my
hard get
classmates but I like to help them with their lessons. I often help the old to crossing
and cross
the road. On the bus, I often give my seat to others. On weekends, I usually go to
the park ∧ pick up rubbish. I want to join a club very much. For one reason, I like
to the
to make friend and work with others. For other, I will have more chances to help
friends another
others. I would be glad if accepting.
accepted
Yours,
Li Ping
欢迎广大教师踊跃来稿，稿酬丰厚。 www.
欢迎广大教师踊跃来稿，稿酬丰厚。 www.山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（16）
短文改错
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一词：把多余的词用斜线（／）划掉，在该行右边横线上写上该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一词：在缺词处加一个漏字符（︿），在该行右边横线上写上该加的词。
此行错一词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的请不要改。
Mrs Hunt’s sister said she is coming to see her 1.
with his daughter. Mrs Hunt was happy 2.
because she has not seen her sisiter for months,. She knew 3
the girl liked bananas, and she was busy in the kitchen 4
and couldn’t go out. She gave any money 5
to her son Bruce and said, “Go and buy two kilos bananas.” 6
Bruce liked bananas, either. Thirty minutes 7
late he came back with the bananas. Mrs Hunt weighed 8
the bananas. And found they were half a kilo short. She took 9
out the bag to the shopkeeper and said, “I sent my little son 10
for two kilos of bananas, but you give him only one and a half kilos!”
“Have you weighed your little son, Madam ” asked the shopkeeper.”
书面表达
假定你是李华，准备参加学校举办的主题为“健康成长”的英语作文比赛。请按要求写一篇短文，主要内容包括：
积极的人生态度；
努力学习；
参加体育锻炼。
注意：1. 词数100左右
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头已为你写好。（不计入词数）
We all want grow up happily and healthily,山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（56）短文改错
假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（︿），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出改正后的词。
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Schools should be clean and pure place. But now something bad happens. Some students cheated in examinations at school. As students, we often have examinations many of which are sometime too difficult for us. In addition, some students not work hard at their lessons. So when taking examinations, they are dishonest in order that get better results to please his parents and teachers. I think it wrong to cheat in examinations though it breaks the rules of schools. We students should be honest and try to get good grades in studying hard instead of by cheating in the examinations. What’s more, we should improve our study methods and get good prepared for examinations.
书面表达
假设你叫严志胜，你的老同学吴琛半年前去加拿大留学，你们常通过e-mail互通情况，最近他来信介绍他在那里的情况，并询问你和你们班的同学们。请你根据以下他的来信以及上述介绍，写一封100词左右的回复邮件。
Hi, Yan Zhisheng,
I have just spent my term 1 in this semester at Unionville High School. I have to say this is a great school. I have joined the Match Club of the school and taken part in some math competitions. This is good for me to apply for the University of Waterloo, which is my dream school.
By they way, I’ve got my mid-term scores. I have 4 courses, and the scores are 94, 91, 84 and 79. I am not satisfied with my score in ESLD scourse, so I will try my best to work harder in term 2.
How are you getting along How is Class 0806 Please write back.
I sincerely wish you the best of luck in everything!
Wu Chen
要点：
1．对他在如此短时间取得的成绩表示祝贺；
2．表达你对他ESLD课程成绩提高的信心；
3．简要介绍自己和全班的情况。
注意：
1．可以适当发挥，不要简单翻译；
2．词数100左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。
Hi, Wu Chen,
Nice to read your e-mail today. Congratulations on your good mid-term scores! You’ve been in Canada…
Best wishes!
Yan Zhisheng山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（17）
短文改错
When Joe left university, he got a good work in a bike factory. 1. ____
But after he had been worked there for some years, he decided 2. _____
to have change, so he put a notice in several newspapers, 3. _____
saying what experiences he had and the kind of job he would 4. _____
like to have. One of the answers he accepted was from a man 5. _______
was looking for a job, too. This man wrote to him, “Dear, sir, 6. _______
when you get a new job, be kind enough to give your name and 7. ___
address to your present boss as I have been trying to find 8. _________
a position like yours for a long time. ” After he reads the letter, 9. ________
he suddenly realized that what he had done was real foolish. 10. ________
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假如你是李华，目睹了近年来你所在城市的变化。你写了一篇有关城市变化及所带来的思考的短文寄给某英语报社。短文包括城市的变化，并表达你的感受和建议：在建设和发展的同时，还应加强文物和古迹保护，以传承文化。
几年前 满街小商铺，小卖摊点，拥挤，垃圾
现在 街道宽敞，沿街种植了绿树和鲜花，新建了公园和高楼
注意：
1. 词数：100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
3. 参考词汇：摊点：stalls 历史文物historical relics
1. work 改成job 2. 去掉been 3. change前加 a
4. experiences改成 experience 5. accepted改成 received
6. 去掉was 或was前加 who 7. your改成 my 8. 正确
9. reads 改成read 10. real 改成really
Our city has changed greatly over the last few years. Streets used to be narrow, with old buildings and stalls crowded together, and litter everywhere. Nowadays the streets are wider, cleaner and there are trees and flowers growing along the sidewalks. However, in creating a more modern city some tradition has been lost. Some of the historical buildings have been torn down and highrise buildings and parks have been built in their place. The ancient culture has disappeared, and our city has become the same as all other cities: modern, clean but without its own special character. Are all changes good changes I think we should do something to protect our historical relics at the same time.山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（34）短文改错
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误.对标题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边的横线上划（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（︿），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
When I was a child, my mom was pushed me to study 1________
hard, hoping I could get a chance to go to college. I experience 2________
pressure for the first time. I did that my mom expected 3 ________
because I didn’t want to let her off. I was born to a poor 4________
peasant family, but I really know life is not easy. All the 5 ________
things my mother did was the result of her hope that I could 6 ________
lead better life in the future. As the saying goes, “no pains, no 7 ____
gains.” I was finally able to meet my mother’s expectation and 8 ____
have a chance to go to college. Thanks to my mother’s push and the 9____
pressure, I made it. Now, I no longer think pressure is a good thing. 10________
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1．短文必须包括以上要点，可适当添加细节。
2．词数：100词左右。开头已经为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear fellow students,
I’d like to introduce you to a new website---.
短文改错
When I was a child, my mom was pushed me to study 1 was
hard, hoping I could get a chance to go to college. I experience
2 experienced
pressure for the first time. I did that my mom expected 3 what
because I didn’t want to let her off. I was born to a poor 4 down
peasant family, but I really know life is not easy. All the 5 and或so
things my mother did was the result of her hope that I could 6 were
lead ∧better life in the future. As the saying goes, “no pains, no 7 a
gains.” I was finally able to meet my mother’s expectation and
8 expectations
have a chance to go to college. Thanks to my mother’s push and the 9 √
pressure, I made it. Now, I no longer think pressure is a good thing. 10 bad
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One possible version
Dear fellow students,
I’d like to introduce you to a new website---.
The purpose of setting up such a website is to develop your interest of learning English and make learning English easy and enjoyable for us students. A wide variety of English materials are available in this website, such as English exercises, foreign cultures, English short stories, etc. And you can also enjoy chatting in English here with other English learners so that you can improve both your oral and written English. Furthermore, if you’d like to show your own English writings and exchange your English learning experiences with others, this website is your best choice. Meanwhile, your English can get improved by being corrected by others.
Welcome to surf this website and be a member of it!山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（73）
短文改错
此题要求改正所给短文的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上划一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
该行缺一个词:在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词:在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改
Though great progress has been made in science these years, there 1. ______
are still many people living in poor conditions. They make their lives by 2. ______
collecting and selling used things. Their children cannot go to a school 3. ______
because they have not enough money to send their children to there. 4. ______
Why you think so many people still suffer from poverty now 5. _____
The answer lies on the population explosion. A president 6.______
of a developing country once said, “It is us who are to blame for 7.______
the poverty because we used to ‘produce’ child without limit” 8.______ Although these few words sound simple enough, it may 9. _______
clear point out one of the causes of the population explosion.10._____
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假如你准备参加《中国日报》组织的题为“ Nothing Is Small”的中学生短文比赛，比赛要求简要描述下列三幅画的内容，并陈述你画中悟出的道理。
参考生词：1. 道钉：rail spike 2. 烟头：butt 3. 管涌：tube fountain 4. 灾难：disaster
注意：1. 短文应包括图中提供的信息，可适当发挥，行文连贯、完整；
2. 字数：120左右。
高三英语试卷 　第1页（共2页）山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（26）
改错
此题要求改正所有短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（）,在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
According to a survey, quite few junior and senior students 1.______
visit Internet bars frequent. They are there mainly to play games. 2.______
Worse still，many of whom even look at some unhealthy pictures. 3.______
Some of the students sometimes stayed in the bar for a whole night. 4.______
All these have a bad effect not only on their studies but also 5.______
on their health. And it is no doubt that Net bars do no good to 6.______
students. I think students should make the full use of time, work 7.______
hard at their lessons and try their best to gain more knowledges 8.______
in order to have a bright future. I’m sincerely called on these 9.______
students who are addicted to Net bars to keep far away from it. 10.______
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下图中，欧阳的妈妈正在与老师交谈，请根据图画所给提示，用英语写一篇短文。要求：1.简述图片内容；2.说明该现象；3.写出自己的感想。
注意：
词数150左右，开头已经写好，不计入总词数。
One day, OuYang’s mum was talking with his teacher.
1.few前加a 2.frequent-frequently 3.whom—them
4.stayed—stay 5.正确 6.it—there
7.去掉 the 8.knowledges—knowledge 9. called—calling
10.it—them
One possible version:
One day, OuYang’s mum was talking with his teacher. When the teacher asked OuYang’s mum what shortcomings he had, the mother talked a lot. While being asked about her son’s advantages, she kept silent, not knowing what to say.
The picture reflects a real problem in our daily family life. The parents try to satisfy their children physically, arranging everything for their children. As a result, they expect their children should get good marks in return. They think the children must follow their advice, no matter whether it is suitable to their children. However, when children don’t obey their will or can’t live up to their expectations, they will complain a lot. In a word, too much complaint and little communication make the love selfish.
In my opinion, parents should communicate with their children as much as possible. Only in this way can children and parents understand each other. I believe mutual understanding and toleration can make them both happy.山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（52）短文改错
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误.对标题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边的横线上划（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（︿），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
The Great Mountain is a place of interest. There are
many visitors every day. Years ago, some people pay no 1．
attention of the protection of the environment. They threw 2．
about waste paper, plastic bags and tins. Beside, they cut 3．
down trees, picked flowers, caught birds but even 4．
killed animals. What was worse, they often made a fire 5．
to cook in the forest, that was dangerous. Changes have 6．
been taken place now. When visitors leave, they take away 7．
rubbish with us. They no longer hunt animals. Plants are also 8．
being protected. All visitors carry their own lunch in order that 9．
prevent forest fires. The Great Mountain has taken on new look 10．
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在学习、生活和工作中，学会与人合作是非常重要的。请你根据下表中提供的信息，写一篇题为“Being a good partner”的英文演讲稿。
为何与人合作 1．现代社会必备；2．可省时间和精力；3．更多互相学习的机会。
与谁合作 与喜欢的人合作 心情愉快，同甘共苦；
与不喜欢的人合作 学会容忍，努力挖掘其优点；时间有时会改变看法。
怎样合作 请你发表自己的观点……（至少2点看法）
注意：
1．适当发挥，不要简单翻译；演讲稿中不得提及考生本人姓名。
2．词数100左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总数。
3．参考词汇：合作：cooperate v. 有效地：efficiently adv
Good afternoon，everyone!
短文改错
1．pay改为paid
2．of改为to
3．Beside改为Besides
4．but改为and
5． √
6．that改为which
7．去掉been
8．us改为them
9．that改为to
10．在on后加a
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Good afternoon, everyone!
The topic of my speech today is “Being a good partner”.
In this busy, modern world, if we want to complete our work more efficiently, we must all learn to cooperate with others, because not only can cooperation save us a lot of time and energy, but also we can learn much from each other.
We’ll be lucky enough to find someone we like to cooperate with due to the fact that we can share our joy and sadness with him. However, it can be difficult to cooperate with someone we dislike. In this case, we’ll have to lean to put with some of his shortcomings and try to discover his advantages.
In my opinion, to be a good partner, we should try to listen to others’ opinions, never force our ideas on other and if he makes mistakes, try to point them out in a polite way.
Thank you for listening!山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（20）
短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Friendship is very importance. Everyone needs friendship. In all our lives we can’t live without friendship just as we can’t live without air and water. Friendship makes us getting on well with one another to go ahead under different kind of difficulties in the front of us. But real friendship is no easy to come by. True friendship must be sincerely and be based on understand each other but not on benefits of each other. A good friend can always be a good teacher to us.、By his advices we are persuading to go the right way. Therefore， more friends we have, the better we can improve ourselves.
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假定你是李华，看到班上有部分同学在完成作业时，不自己独立完成而是抄袭他人的作业，针对这种现象，请你以My opinion on copying others’ homework为题谈谈你自己的看法。
注意：1. 短文必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥；
2. 短文标题与开头已为你写好，不计入总词数：
3.词数： 100词左右。
主要原因 作业量大，偏难
对功课不感兴趣，懒惰
完成任务，取悦老师
危害及解决办法 抄袭不对，违反校规
要诚实，勤奋学习
有困难可请教同学和老师
个人看法 ------
短文改错
第一句：importance改为 important
第四句：getting改为get, kind改为kinds, 去掉the
第五句：no改为not
第六句：sincerely改为sincere，understand改为 understanding
第八句：advices改为advice, persuading 改为 persuaded
第九句：Therefore后加the
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One Possible Version
My opinion on copying others’ homework
It is known to us all that some students copy others' homework. On one hand, we students have to do a large amount of homework both at home and at school. It is also true that sometimes we have some problems which are too difficult for us to work out. On the other hand, lazy and uninterested in their lessons, some students copy others’ homework both to finish the assignments and please their teachers.
In a word, copying others’ homework is a bad habit. For one thing, it’s against the rules of the school. We should be honest and work hard to achieve high grades. If we have difficulties, we can turn to our teachers and our classmates for help. For another, copying others’ homework too often, we will lose the ability that can help us to think.
As far as I’m concerned, it’s for our own sake to study. We should do our best to gain knowledge. Let’s do our bit to prevent such bad behavior from spreading.山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（54）短文改错
此题要求改正所给短文的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉；在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉；该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）；在该行右边横线上写出该加的词；该行错一个词，在错的词下划一个横线；在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：原行没有错的不要改。
At a party, it is quite normal of someone to have 1．________
a short conversation with you and then go on to talking 2．________
to other people! Don’t think they dislike you and that 3．________
they are impolite. That has the custom at many parties 4．________
in Britain, particularly there people are standing up rather 5．________
than sitting down. Here are two ways of finishing conversation 6．________
at a party. ”Excuse me. I think I’ll go and get another drinking. 7．________
See you later, perhaps ” “Oh. Excuse me, I've already seen 8．________
Mary Jennings over there. I’ve get to discuss a meeting we 9．________
are having on Thursday. Would you excuse me for a moment 10．________
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假设你是校学生会主席，请你为下周要举行的英语演讲比赛制定评分标准，包含以下要点：
1．文章主题明确；20％
2．语言表达清楚；10％
3．发音准确地道；20％
4．语速适中；10％
5．带有感彩。40％
1．of-for　2．talking-talk　 3．and-or　 4．has-is　 5．there-where　
6．finishing-finishing a　 7．drinking -drink　 8．already-just　 9．get-got　
10．去掉right改为“√”
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One possible version:
If you want to get a very good grade in the coming English speech competition next week, first, you must have a good piece of writing whose subject is quite clear. Also the article should have very good wording. And then, when you are giving the speech, you must pronounce every word correctly and you should have standard intonation and proper speed. The most important of all, you should give the speech with emotion. I hope that everybody is well prepared according to the rules mentioned above. Wish you good luck.山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（75）
短文改错
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第l1处起）不计分。
I happen to meet some American tourists at gate of the Summer Palace last week. I greeted them with English and then we began to chat. I got to know they were college student traveling in China. Most of us were fond of Chinese medicine. They were busy taking pictures and were surprising at the changes that had taken place in the past few years. After that, we went boat and had a good time. We were exchanged our e-mail addresses such that we could write to each other in the future. They thanked me again and again. I was gladly to have a chance to practice my oral English.
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近几年，家长送大学新生报到入学成为一种普遍的现象。上周，你班就家长送孩子上大学的这种现象进行了讨论。结果如下：
益处 弊端
1．确保旅途安全，加深感情交流； 1．不利于锻炼学生的独立能力；
2．促进家长对大学的了解。 2．影响学校的正常教学，增加管理的难度。
请你根据以上内容提示，写一篇100词左右的英语短文，并发表自己的观点。
参考词汇：陪伴 accompany; 确保 guarantee
They were busy taking pictures and were surprising at the changes that had taken
surprised
place in the past few years. After that, we went boat and had a good time. We were
boating
exchanged our e-mail addresses such that we could write to each other in the
so
future. They thanked me again and again. I was gladly to have a chance to practice
glad
my oral English.
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In recent years, it is common to see many parents accompany their children to college on the first day of school. Last week, our class discussed this phenomenon, about which our opinions were varied.
The advantages of accompanying children to college are obvious. It can guarantee the children’s safe arrival and promote the relationship between parents and children. Besides, parents can learn more about the college.
However, there’re also some disadvantages. First, with parents round, the children become more dependent. Second, too many visitors’ coming may disturb the normal teaching, making it hard to keep the campus in order.
I think it is unnecessary for parents to accompany their children to college.山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（12）
短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（︿），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Different students hold different view on whether we should start a blog on the Internet． Some believe it can provide with a colorful stage for students to show their talents．Also, it's nice way to help them relieving pressure．However, other have an opposite opinion over it． They thought managing a blog will take much time and energy．Personally, I do approve of students having their own blogs．Nowadays, the Internet is playing an important part to our life．As high school students, it's necessary to learn and make the most of it．In fact, whether it's good or bad depend on how we employ it．If we can take fully advantage of it but avoid its negative effects, we can surely benefit a lot from it．
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据报道，某大学生演了排队占座“大战”。为了在空调教室中争得一个学习的座位，数百人从晚上11点开始在教学楼前通宵排队，两名学生甚至带上了蚊帐搭成简易帐篷。请你就此现象用英语写一篇短文，包括下列要点：
1．简单介绍此现象；
2．你对此现象的看法：
（1）通宵排队不值得；
（2）影响白天的学习效率。
3．你的建议（学校和学生两个方面）……
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：有空调的air-conditioned 效率efficiency山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（44）短文改错
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误. 对标题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边的横线上划（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（︿），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
My mother was born in a small town in Italy. She was
three when her parents settle in the USA in 1926. They lived 1.
in Chicago, there my grandfather worked making ice cream. 2.
At 16 my mother graduated a high school, went on to 3.
a secretarial school, and finally worked with 4.
a secretary for a railroad company.
She was beautiful, too. When a local photographer
used her pictures in his monthly window display（陈列）, 5.
she was very happily. Her favorite photo showed her 6.
sitting by Lake Michigan. My mother was always used 7.
to say that when we died, God gave you back your 8.
“best self”. She’d show us that picture and say to our 9.
children, “This is how I’m going to look like in heaven. ” 10.
书面表达
最近，你校组织高三学生开展了一场讨论。讨论主题是：周末双休日要不要上课。请根据下表提供的信息写一篇短文，客观地介绍一下讨论的情况，同时阐明你的观点。
40% 50% 10%
1. 要上课2. 高考6月举行，要抓紧时间 1. 不要上课2. 休息好，提高学习效率 1. 其中一天学习，一天休息2. 学习与休息两头兼顾
注意：
1. 不要在书面表达中出现所在学校的校名和本人姓名，否则本节判为零分；
2. 词数：100~120词；
3. 参考词汇：高考——the college entrance examinations
4. 开头和结尾已经写好，且不记入词数。
Recently we have had a discussion about whether we should have classes on weekends.
短文改错
1. settle – settled 2. there – where 3. graduate后加from
4. with – as 5. √ 6. happily – happy 7. 去掉was
8. we – you 9. our – us 10. how – what
书面表达
One possible version:
Recently we have had a discussion about whether we should have classes on weekends.
40% of us think we should have class on weekends because the college entrance examinations will be held in June, and we should make full use of our free time to review what we have learnt. Another 50% are against the idea of having classes on weekends. They believe students should have a good rest on weekends so that they can study more effectively during the weekdays. The rest 10% don’t agree with either of the ideas above. They think study and rest are both important for students. So they suggested one day of the weekend should be used to study and the other to have a rest.
From my point of view, it’s not good to have classes on weekends since only when we have a good rest and a strong body can we study well.山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（35）短文改错
Now I have taken over ten years at school. As a 1._______
child, I regarded the school a beautiful garden. I went to 2._______
school happily and excited with a small bag. Time 3._______
flew fast. Now I’m studying at a senior middle school. 4._______
Every day morning, on my way to school, the rising sun 5._______
greets me with a smile. At class I enjoy putting my 6._______
heart into listening to the teachers. In the evening, I do 7._______
exercises, like a farmer working hardly, expecting a good 8._______
harvest. During breaks between class, I often go out 9._______
for rest. How happy the life is! I’m sure I will never 10._______
forget the wonderful time at school.
书面表达
假如你是李华，你校高三同学正在开展一场讨论，讨论主题是：高三学生要不要参加体育锻炼？请你根据下表所提供的信息，给某英文报纸写一封信，介绍讨论情况。
注意：1．信的开头已为你写好。2．词数：100左右。
55%的学生认为 45%的学生认为
1．应该每天进行体育锻炼。2．可以做早操，打乒乓球，打篮球，但不要时间太长3．锻炼能增强体质，减少疾病。4．运动使大脑休息，使复习效果更好 1．锻炼浪费时间。2．锻炼使人疲劳。3．运动以后很兴奋，较长时间不能复习功课。4．运动中可能会受伤。
Dear Editor ,
I’m writing to tell you about a discussion we’ve had about whether students of Senior 3 should take physical exercise
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
1．take 改成spent 2. 加as 3. excitedly
4. flies 5. 去掉day 6. At改成In 7. 正确
8．hardly改成hard 9. class改成classes 10. 加a
Li Hua（One possible version ）
Dear Editor ,
I’m writing to tell you about a discussion we’ve had about whether students of Senior 3 should take physical exercise . 55% of the students think they should take exercise every day , such as doing morning exercises , playing ping-pong ball and playing basketball , but it shouldn’t take up too much time . Exercise builds one’s body and reduces diseases . Sports let their brains have a rest so that their revision will be more effective .
On the other hand , 45% believe taking exercise is a waste of time and tiring . After having sports , they are much too excited for a long time to pay attention to their lessons . It’s also possible to be hurt in sports .
Yours sincerely山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（1）
短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Jack had gone to a university to study the history, but at the end of his first year, his history professors failed him in his examinations, and he was told why he would have to leave the university. But, his father decided to see the professor to urge him to let Jack continue his studies the followed year. “He’s a good boy, if you let him pass this time, I’m sure he’ll improve a lot next year and pass the examinations by the end of it.” said Jack’s father. “No, no, that’s quite impossible,” replied the professor immediate. “Last month I asked him when Napoleon had died. He didn’t know!” “Please, sir, give him other chance,” said Jack’s father. “You see, we didn’t have any newspapers in our house, so none of us even know that Napoleon was ill.”
　书面表达
　假如你叫李华，最近你校在为一批来自英国的学生征寻住宿家庭，你有意申请。请用英语给校长写封信，说明你申请的理由：
　　1．住房宽敞，有私家车；
　　2．擅长英语，乐于交流；
　　3．去年接待过英国学生。
　　注意：
　　1．词数100左右；
　　2．可适当增加细节以使行文连贯；
　　3．信的开头已为你写好，不计人总词数。
　　21世纪教育网 Sir，
　　I'm writing to request a valuable chance to be one of the host families for the British students．____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
　　 Yours, Li Hua
短文改错
1. study the history 2. professors-----professor 3. why-----that
4. But-----However 5. followed-----following 6. He’s a good boy, 后加and
7. by -----at 8. immediate-----immediately 9. other-----another
10. didn’t ----- don’t
书面表达
Dear Sir,
I'm writing to request a valuable chance to be one of the host families tor the British students．
Located in a beautiful and quiet neighborhood, our large fully-equipped apartment answers all their needs．Apart from the convenient public transportation, our own car can also take them to some nearby places of interest．With fluent English and an outgoing personality, I'm sure I will have no difficulty communicating with them．Above all, we hosted two British students last year, through which we've gained lots of experience．In addition, my mother's expert cooking can guarantee them a wonderful chance of tasting delicious Chinese food．
I would greatly appreciate it if I could have the chance to host them and make friends with them．Looking forward to your reply．
Yours,
Li Hua山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（41）短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The winter holiday is coming, which made me excited. I have been looking forward at relaxing myself. I’d like to go skating, climb mountains and see several movie. I think I can play basketball with my classmates. How a wonderful time I’ll have during the winter holiday! But, my parents think different. They don’t want me go out. They are afraid I’ll be knocked down by a truck, fallen off a tree, or fight with others. Besides, they are afraid I will lose my way. I hate being treated like a bird keeping in a cage. To get more freedom, so I will try to persuade them.
书面表达
随着英语和网络的普及，一些英语词汇被夹杂于汉语表达中，如用hold表示“能对付、扛得住”，用out表示“过时、陈旧”。请针对该现象，根据以下要点写一篇英语短文。
1.该现象积极和消极的方面；
2.该现象背后反映了什么；
3.你是否接受这种表达及理由。
注意：1. 词数：100左右 2. 参考词汇：phenomenon 现象
短文改错：
The winter holiday is coming, which made me excited. I have been looking forward at relaxing
makes to
myself. I’d like to go skating, climb mountains and see several movie. I think I can play basketball
movies
with my classmates. How a wonderful time I’ll have during the winter holiday! But, my parents
What However
think different. They don’t want me go out. They are afraid I’ll be knocked down by a truck, fallen off a
differently to fall
tree, or fight with others. Besides, they are afraid I will lose my way. I hate being treated like a bird
keeping in a cage. To get more freedom, so I will try to persuade them.
kept
作文：
With the popularity of English and the Internet, some people like to use English words in Chinese expressions. For example, the use of the word “hold” to mean “ to control or be able to deal with “, and “out” to mean “out of date, not fashionable”.
As we all know , every coin has two sides, and the positive side of this phenomenon is that much fun can be felt sometimes when English words are directly put in Chinese expressions. However, this phenomenon also has a negative effect on the proper use of standard Chinese. It shows that the western culture is gradually influencing our life. Personally, I don’t appreciate this fashion because keeping Chinese pure is beyond any fashion.山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（9）
短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\） 划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Mary，
I have received your E-mail.Don’t worried about me.I’m getting on well with my research work in the lab.But in my surprise, you say you will give up learn English.The reason is because you have not done well in it recently and you have lose interest.I’m afraid that I can’t agree with you.I know it is not easy to learn English, and English is widely used in the world today and it will be important tool in our future work.Beside, it is becoming more and more important in our daily life.If you study hardly, you will succeed.Do remember that where there is a will, there is a way.I’m looking forward to hearing a good news from you!
Yours,
Li Hua
书面表达
假如你是李华，你所在社区为了提
倡节约能源决定开展“小事从我做起”
活动。现委托你写一份倡议书。请根据
下图写一份100字左右倡议书（开头结
尾已给出不计入总数）可根据图画内容
适度展开，以使行文连贯。
Dear residents,
It is everyone’s duty to work hard to build an energy-saving society.________________
____________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________
Neighborhood Associations山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（15）
短文改错
假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号( ＾), 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（ ＼）划掉。
修改： 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改十处, 多者(从第11处起) 不计分。
Last Sunday I saw a worst storm in years. It came sudden and went on for over three hours. After lunch, I went into my room to have a rest. The air was hot, but all was quiet. Then a strong wind started to blow into my room. Pieces of paper on my desk flew high into the air and some flew out the open window. As I ran out to catch it, big drop of rain began to fall. When I come back into my house, it was raining more harder and harder. Then I heard a loud crashing sound from the back of the house. When I ran out of my room to find out that had happened, a big tree had fallen down and broke the top of the backroom.
第二节：书面表达（满分25分）
______ 高中生在成长过程中会碰到以下烦恼。就这一话题你班正积极筹备召开一次主题班会。请你依据下表进行必要的思考，并用英语准备一篇到会发言的材料。
词数：120 左右
烦恼 解决办法
相貌、体形不美 不必在意
不被他人理解，朋友少 加强沟通
学习滞后，压力大 自我鼓励； 坚定目标
零花钱不多 学会节俭
注意：
1．开头已写好 不计入总词数。
2． 语言通顺，结构严谨。
3．参考词汇：零花钱 pocket money 压力 stress
Boys and girls,
____We high school students do have some growing pains, but we can rid of them correctly________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________ That’s all．Thank you
Last Sunday I saw a worst storm in years. It came sudden and went on for over three
the suddenly
hours. After lunch, I went into my room to have a rest. The air was hot, but all was quiet.
and
Then a strong wind started to blow into my room. Pieces of paper on my desk flew high
into the air and some flew out ∧ the open window. As I ran out to catch it, big drop of
of them drops
rain began to fall. When I come back into my house, it was raining more harder and
came much
harder. Then I heard a loud crashing sound from the back of the house. When I ran out of
my room to find out that had happened, a big tree had fallen down and broke the top of
what broken
the backroom.
Boys and girls,
We high school students do have some growing pains, but we can rid of them correctly and wisely．
First, some of us are upset about their body styles and looks．It’s unnecessary and it’s not important at all．We needn’t care about it．It’s one’s inner beauty that mattes．Second, we sometimes seem to be misunderstood by our teachers, patents and classmates．Facing this, we can find a proper time to have a heart-to-heart talk with them, trying to remove the misunderstanding．Some of us have fewer friends．I think being open-minded and friendly will do you good．Third, we may fall behind others, which makes us feel stressed．Actually we can encourage ourselves to work efficiently, full of determination．Last, some of us don’t have much pocket money, so they feel unhappy．Isn’t it strange So long as we have some, that’s enough．And we can learn to save money!
That’s all．Thank you．山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（32）短文改错
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误.对标题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边的横线上划（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（︿），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
When my father bought me a computer for a birthday present 1．
in last year, I felt very excited. As we all know, computers 2．
are getting more usefully nowadays. Much information 3．
can be stored in it. We can learn what has lately happened 4．
in the world on the Internet. People had to do lots of work, 5．
that was very dangerous. Now, computers can do it instead. 6．
When an exam is come, I do exercises on my computer. 7．
Then it will correct them but tell me the right answers. 8．
It is convenient for me to prepare for the exam than 9．
before. The computer have become a real friend of mine. 10．
书面表达
在学习生活和工作中，与人合作是非常重要的。请你根据下表中所提供的信息，写一篇题为 “Cooperate with others”的英文演讲稿。
为何与人合作: 1.在忙碌的、现代化的社会中，要想有效地完成一项工作，我们必须学会与人合作。
2.可以节省时间和精力。
3.从合作者身上学到很多。
与谁合作: 1. 与喜欢的人合作 心情愉快，一起分享工作中的快乐和痛苦
2.与不喜欢的人合作 比较困难，但只要更多地关注我们的工作，而不是合作者本人，时间长了，也会发现他是一个很好相处的人。
怎样做一个好的合作者 请你发表自己的观点……（至少2点看法）
注意：
1．对所给要点，逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。
2．词数100左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总数。
3．演讲稿中不得提及考生所在学校及本人姓名。
参考词汇：合作者 partner
Good afternoon, everyone!
The topic of my speech today is “Cooperate with others”. ____________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank you for your listening!
1. for—as 2. in 去掉 3.usefully—useful 4.it---them
5. √ 6.that—which 7. come—coming 8. but—and
9. convenient 前加 more 10. have—has
Good afternoon, everyone!
The topic of my speech today is “Cooperate with others”.
In this busy, modern world, if we want to complete our work effectively and efficiently, we must all learn to cooperate with others. If we lose our partner, then we will fail. Cooperation can save us a lot of time and energy. Additionally, we can learn much from our partners by cooperating them.
When we cooperate with someone we like, we will feel very happy. And we can share our pleasure and sadness with him. But it can be difficult to be cooperative with someone we dislike. In such a situation, we may focus on our work, instead of our partner. Perhaps in working together with him for a long time, we’ll learn that he is a man to get along well with. Even if this doesn’t happen, it’s still worth a try.
How can we become a good partner In my opinion, (we should try to listen to others’ opinions. If he makes mistakes, we also try to point them out. Thirdly, we mustn’t beat others to make them in unfavorable position)
Thank you for your listening!山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（31）短文改错
Dear Michelle,
I’m very exciting! Today is my first day at a new school in Australia. 1____
The school I study at is a government school. Although I’m new to my 2____
classmates, the teacher asks me to introduce me to them in class. I tell them 3 ____
I come from Hong Kong and I like to play with computer games, listen to 4____
music and do sports in my spare time. I also like the Australia way of life. 5____
Australia is big country. The shopping malls are big. There are mainly six 6____
public library and museums in Sydney. Just a few minutes’ walk from 7____
which I live, there is a huge park. Around my house, there is plenty of space.8____
Michelle, I miss you very much. I’ll never forget the days we spend 9____
together and the fun we shared with all our old classmates. 10____
书面表达
假设你是晨光中学的学生会主席李华。学生会将举办每年一度的英语演讲比赛，本年度的主题为“The English Novel I like Best”。作为组织者，你将在演讲比赛开幕时发言，请你根据以下提示用英语写一篇发言稿。
1. 说明比赛的意义，如提高英语听说能力，养成读书的习惯等；
2. 说明比赛的注意事项，如每人演讲不超过5分钟，语言流利，发音准确等；
3. 预祝比赛圆满成功。
注意： 1. 词数：不少于100词；
2. 可适当加入细节，以使行文连贯；
3.发言稿的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入词数。
Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen,
Welcome to this year’s English speech competition.___________________
________________________________________________________________
Thank you!
改错 1.exciting→excited 2.Although→because/since/as
3.me→myself 4. 去掉with 5. Australia→Australian
6. a∧big 7. library→libraries 8. which→where
9.spend→spent 10.√
写作
One possible version
Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen,
Welcome to this year’s English speech competition. In order to improve the abilities of both English speaking and listening, we continue to hold the English speech competition. I believe it will be of great help to form the good habit of reading, too.
There are some important points every speaker should be aware of. Please listen to me carefully. First of all, the speech must be finished within five minutes. Second, you should speak fluent English. At last, everyone should pronounce correctly. We expect to hear the fluent expression and standard pronunciation.
Finally, I’d like to wish the competition a great success and I hope every competitor can perform at your best!山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（47）短文改错
Dear Michelle,
I’m very exciting! Today is my first day at a new school in Australia. 1_____
The school I study at is a government school. Although I’m new to my 2_____
classmates, the teacher asks me to introduce me to them in class.I tell them 3 ____
I come from Hong Kong and I like to play with computer games, listen to 4_____
music and do sports in my spare time. I also like the Australia way of life. 5_____
Australia is big country. The shopping malls are big. There are mainly six 6____
public library and museums in Sydney. Just a few minutes’ walk from 7_____
which I live, there is a park. Around my house, there is plenty of space. 8_____
Michelle, I miss you very much. I’ll never forget the days we spend 9_____
together and the fun we shared with all our old classmates. 10_____
书面表达
你是李华从电视上看到美国正流行甲型HINI流感（A/HINI flu）,部分学校停课你为你正在美国上学的笔友Mike的健康与安全担心。请立即给他写一封email询问他的情况，并给他提出防护建议。
要点：一．询问
1.他的健康状况； 2.他们学校有无甲型HINI流感病例（A/HINI flu cases）；
3.他们是否还上学。
二．建议
1.尽量呆在家里，少去人多的地方； 2.勤洗手，讲卫生；
3.多开窗，保持空气新鲜； 4.多吃水果蔬菜。
注意： 1. 100词左右； 2. 首句已给出，不计入总词数。
改错 1.exciting→excited 2.Although→Because/Since/As
3.me→myself 4. 去掉with 5. Australia→Australian
6. a∧big 7. library→libraries 8. which→where
9.spend→spent 10.√
书面表达：
One possible version:
Dear Mike,
From the TV I know many A/HINI I flu cases are reported recently in the United States and many schools are closed as a result. I’m so worried about you. Are you all right Are there any A/HINI flu cases in your school Do you still have to go to school every day
To stay away from the disease, you’d better stay at home as much as possible and not go to places where there are many people. Wash your hands more often to keep them clean. Open the window to have more fresh air in the room. And eat more fruit and vegetables to keep yourself fit and strong.
So far the disease is not so deadly as it seems to be. Do be at ease! Take care and you’ll be OK.
Yours truly,
Li Hua山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（23）改错
下列每个句子中有一处错误，在错误处进行标识并在后面横线上加以改正
1．Our volleyball team has won three championships in row.
_________
2．The smile on his face suggests that he be pleased with what you said.
_________
3．I have read the material several times but it doesn’t make any meaning to me. _________
4．Australia is a very large country, whose climate varies greatly depends on the area. _________
5．Fruits are in fact related, although they’re different from first sight. _________
6．Under no circumstance shall we give up halfway before difficulties . _________
7．A good ad often uses words for which people attach positive meanings . _________
8．Sorry, we’re closing down for lunch. _________
9．Habitat is of equal important to the output of crops. _________
10．Until recently no school lessons were held in languages rather than
English in Australia . _________
书面表达
现在，各种媒体上的广告越来越多，它们给人们生活带来便利的同时，也带来了不少问题。请你根据下表用英语写一篇关于广告的短文。
词数：100～120
赞同意见 反对意见
1．能引导人们消费；2．使人们意识到一些社会问题和政府政策；3．精心制作的广告给人以艺术享受。 1．某些虚假广告坑害消费者；2．占据报纸许多版面以及广播和电视的大量时间；3．长时间插播的电视广告让人心烦，应予以限制。
1. in后加a 2.be→is 3.meaning→sense
4.depends→depending 5.from→at
6.circumstance→circumstances 7.for→to
8.down→up 9.important→importance 10.rather→other
With more and more advertisements around us, people hold different opinions.
Some people think ads can provide information about various goods and help people to make a better choice. Sometimes ads can make people aware of social problems and government policies. What’s more, excellent ads are considered as a kind of art works and make people enjoyable.
Meanwhile other people believe some false ads cheat consumers. As a result, they lose their money. Sometimes ads cover too much space in newpapers and take too much time on TV and on the radio. Many people complain that they’re tired of advertising when ads interrupt their favorite programs for a long time. They hope that such ads will be limited.山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（39）短文改错
Last weekend we went mountain-climbing．Even the heavy rain in the morning could not prevent us go．Setting off very early, we went along an extreme narrow road, all in high spirits．On every side of the road were green fields and some farm house．We could hear the sound of the rain and our footsteps mixing with our laughter．At noon we reached top of the mountain．That surprised us most was the beauty of the scenes there．After having a short rest and sharing with the food we had brought, we started going down．It rained even harder．We are wet to the skin, and we still sang and laughed happily．
书面表达
假设你是李华，山西某中学高中学生，今年暑假将前往澳大利亚参加主题为WATER FOR LIFE 的交流活动。请你以参访代表的身份，根据以下图片提示，用英语写一篇发言稿。
注意：
　　1．根据图片的内容适当展开，以使行文连贯；　　
2．开头与结尾已写好，不计入总词数；
　　3．文中不能出现考生的具体信息； 　　
4．词数：100左右
　　参考词汇：短缺shortage; ks**5u
Ladies and gentlemen,
Good morning．I’m Li Hua from Shanxi,China．It’s my great honor to be here to say something about global water shortage and ways of dealing with it．
That’s all．Thank you．
Last weekend we went mountain-climbing．Even the heavy rain in the morning could not
prevent us go．Setting off very early, we went along an extreme narrow road, all in high spirits．
going extremely
On every side of the road were green fields and some farm house．We could hear the sound of
each/ either houses
the rain and our footsteps mixing with our laughter．At noon we reached ︿ top of the
mixed the
mountain．That surprised us most was the beauty of the scenes there．After having a short rest
What
and sharing with the food we had brought, we started going down．It rained even harder．We
删除with
are wet to the skin, and we still sang and laughed happily．ks**5u
were but
Ladies and gentlemen,
Good morning．I’m Li Hua from Ningxia China．It’s my great honor to be here to say something about global water shortage and ways of dealing with it．
As we know, the global water shortage is becoming increasingly severe mainly due to global warming, environmental pollution and the ever-increasing population．Therefore, it’s high time we did something about it．
Firstly, an effective way, I think, is to reserve water in a scientific way for future use．Secondly, new methods need to be developed to use the existing water resources, for example, turning sea water into fresh water．Thirdly, we must stop water pollution by law．Last but not least, it’s everyone’s responsibility to make good use of water, such as recycling and saving water in our daily life．
In conclusion, people around the world should be aware of the real situation of water shortage, protect the present water resources and explore potential ones scientifically．
That’s all．Thank you
global warming
other reason(s) 山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（27）短文改错
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断；如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只一个错误），则按下列是情况改正；
此行多一个词；把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该项词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Dear Grandpa,
Thank you for your letter.
My school is organizing a basketball team and
there' s just a chance which I can join in. I'm little of 1. ______
course, but terribly quick and bravely. While the others 2. _______
are jumping about in the air, I can run under my legs 3. _______
and get the ball. It will be lots of fun for practicing out 4. _______
on the playground in the afternoon with the tree 5. _______
around us all red and yellow and everybody laughing 6. _______
and shouting. These are the happier girls I' ve ever 7. _______
seen and I' m the happiest in all! 8. _______
I meant to write long letter and tell you all the 9. _______
things I' m doing at school, but the bell was ringing, 10. _______
so I just have to stop here.
Love,
Judy
书面表达
目前，不少人在写作文与交流中喜欢使用网络语言，有时讲汉语时还夹杂着英语，如PK等。就此现象，你班最近举行了一场讨论。请根据下表的提示，客观的介绍讨论情况及你的观点。
40%的同学认为 60%的同学认为 你的观点
1．有点荒诞，有时让人无法理解2．违背了汉语的语法规则，对学英语毫无帮助 1．幽默，活泼，语言更具多样性2．有助于表达思想 ？
1．词数：100～120. 开头已经写出（不计入总词数）；
2．可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．参考词汇：荒诞ridiculous
Nowadays, with the development of the Internet, there came a kind of language called Web Language.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
改错
1.which→that 2.bravely→brave 3.my→their 4.去掉for
5.tree→trees 6.√ 7.happier→happiest
8.in→of 9.long前加a 10.was→is
书面表达：
Nowadays, with the development of the Internet, there came a kind of language called Web Language. Some people even speak Chinese mixed with English words. This is a phenomenon worth thinking about.
40% students think it kind of ridiculous. In their opinion, it makes no sense in helping people communicate or learn English. Besides, it is against the Chinese grammar rules. However, 60% students are fond of this way. They appreciate its humour. They think it of special help in expressing themselves. And it can make the language varied.
Personally, I don’t think it good to use this kind of language. It may be fashionable as some think, but you may also get your idea confusing, leaving other people at a loss as to your meaning.山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（22）短文改错
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词：在错的词下画一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Wise men don’t always act as wise 1.__________
as we think. At times they maybe do something silly, 2.__________
and then the stories about their foolish acts are still 3.__________
widely talked throughout the world in modern times. 4.__________
For example, Beethoven was said to having insisted on 5.__________
paying a waiter in a restaurant for a dinner he has not 6.__________
eaten or ever ordered; the British physicist Newton, while lives 7._____
in London, cut two holes in the door, one big, other small, 8.__________
so as for his two cats to pass by. He only thought the 9.__________
bigger cat couldn’t get through the smaller holes easily. 10.__________
书面表达
为了创造学校的英语学习氛围，激发同学们学习英语的兴趣，我校将举行英语演讲比赛。请你根据下面内容以学生会名义向全校学生做口头通知，介绍相关情况。
活动：英语演讲比赛
比赛时间：5月22日下午；地点：报告厅
比赛要求：
（1）话题从备选的8个话题中自选
（2）选手每人先进行一段20秒以内的自我介绍，演讲时间不超过3分钟
奖励办法：各年级设一、二、三等奖
报名时间：5月15日前
报名地点：学生会办公室
注意： 1.词数不少于60.
2.通知的开头和结尾已为你写好。
3.选手：contestant
Boys and girls, I have an announcement to make.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thank you.
1.wise→wisely 2.√ 3.去掉then 4.talked后加about
5.having→have 6.has→had 7.lives→living
8.other前加the 9.by→through 10.holes→hole
One possible version:
Boys and girls, I have an announcement to make.
In order to provide an atmosphere of learning English and arouse the students’ interest in English, we will have an English speech competition.
The competition will be held at our lecture hall on the afternoon of May 22nd. There will be eight topics for all the contestants to choose from. Before the speech, every contestant will have to give a self-introduction in twenty seconds and the speech can’t last more than three minutes. We’ll award the first, second and third prizes for each grade. Hurry up to the office of the Students’ Union before May 15th to enter your names for the right opportunity offered to you!
That’s all. Thank you.山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（70）
短文改错
此题要求改正短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用（划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下画一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
One day I happen to find a chatting room on 1．
my QQ，where people were chatting with English．I tried 2．
to chat with some of them．To my surprised， I found 3．
the oral English of some junior students were better 4．
than me．I asked them for advice and they told me 5．
to practise more on QQ．But every day after that I 6．
spent one hour practise my oral English on QQ． 7．
Day by day I learned from many useful words and 8．
expressions．With time going by， I found that I could 9．
even communicate some college students freely． 10．
写作
假如你叫李平，是一位成绩优秀的学生，你班班主任在安排座位时，让成绩好的学生和成绩差的学生同桌，这在你们班成绩优秀的学生中引起了反响，班会课上大家就此进行了讨论。现在请你根据下表把讨论结果向班主任写一封信反映一下，并说出自己的观点。
赞同 反对 你的观点
1．成绩差的学生也有可取之处。2．相互学习，建立友谊；3．帮助差生也能提高自己 并建立自信。 1．部分学习差的学生常常上课说话，影响自己。2．老是问问题，使自己不能专心学习。
注意：1．词数：100字左右，短文的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
2．短文需包括表中所有要点，内容可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。
3．参考词汇：成绩差的学生：a slower student 自信：self-confidence
Dear Mr．Zhang,
We have held a discussion about whether it is good or not for a top student to share a desk with a slower student．
Yours,
Li Ping
短文改错
1．happen→happened　 2．with→in　 3．surprised→surprise
4．were→was 5．me→mine　 6．But→So
7. practise→practising　 8．from\
9．√ 10．communicate∧with
作文：
Dear Mr．Zhang,
We have held a discussion about whether it is good or not for a top student to share a desk with a slower student．
Some are for the idea．As they know, everyone has strengths as well as weaknesses．Although they are not good at lessons, they might do well in other fields like sports or arts．Therefore, they can learn from each other, and they may develop friendship．In addition, top students can help slower ones gain self-confidence by helping them with their lessons, which benefits them all．
However, others don’t hold the same view．They think some slower students are always making trouble, such as keeping talking in class, breaking school rules．Besides, slower students often ask top students questions, which has a bad effect on their studies．
In my opinion, I’d like to choose to share a desk with a slower student so that we can learn from each other and make progress together．
Yours,
Li Ping山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（10）
短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（八），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Several weeks ago, my parents were away for business, and I had to be all by me for
two days. My parents start early that morning, and I got up soon after they left. The first one
night I was scared, so I turned on all the light and kept them on the whole night. For fear of
get up late the next morning, I put three alarm clocks near bed and set the alarms at 6:00, 6:10,
and 6:15. In order to prove I could take care myself, I washed my own clothes, though I can
wait for my mother to do it. I really felt proud of myself but thought I was a big girl.
书面表达
假如你是李华。你的英国笔友Jenny将要在寒假来中国，并计划到山西观光旅游。请你根据以下要点给她写一封电子邮件。
1．表示欢迎；
2．住宿安排；
3．行程安排（包括接机，游览、购物等）。
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Jenny，
Yours
Li Hua山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（33）　短文改错
此题要求改正短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用(划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下画一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
One day I happen to find a chatting room on 1.——.
my QQ，where people were chatting with English. I tried 2.——.
to chat with some of them. To my surprised， I found 3.——
the oral English of some junior students were better 4.——.
than me. I asked them for advice and they told me 5.——.
to practise more on QQ. But every day after that I 6.——
spent one hour practise my oral English on QQ. 7.——
Day by day I learned from many useful words and 8.——
expressions. With time going by， I found that I could 9.——.
even communicate some college students freely. 10.——
写作
假如你叫李平，是一位成绩优秀的学生，你班班主任在安排座位时，让成绩好的学生和成绩差的学生同桌，这在你们班成绩优秀的学生中引起了反响，班会课上大家就此进行了讨论。现在请你根据下表把讨论结果向班主任写一封信反映一下，并说出自己的观点。
赞同 反对 你的观点
1.成绩差的学生也有可取之处。
2．相互学习 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com / " \o "欢迎登陆21世纪教育网 )，建立友谊；
3．帮助差生也能提高自己 并建立自信。 1．部分学习差的学生常常上课说话，影响自己。
2．老是问问题，使自己不能专心学习。
注意：1．词数：100字左右，短文的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
2．短文需包括表中所有要点，内容可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。
3．参考词汇：成绩差的学生：a slower student 自信：self-confidence
Dear Mr. Zhang,
We have held a discussion about whether it is good or not for a top student to share a desk with a slower student.
Yours Li Ping
短文改错
1. happen→happened　 2. with→in　
3. surprised→surprise 4. were→was
5. me→mine　 6. But→So
7. practise→practising　 8. from\　
9. √ municate∧with
写作：
Dear Mr. Zhang,
We have held a discussion about whether it is good or not for a top student to share a desk with a slower student.
Some are for the idea. As they know, everyone has strengths as well as weaknesses. Although they are not good at lessons, they might do well in other fields like sports or arts. Therefore, they can learn from each other, and they may develop friendship. In addition, top students can help slower ones gain self-confidence by helping them with their lessons, which benefits them all.
However, others don’t hold the same view. They think some slower students are always making trouble, such as keeping talking in class, breaking school rules．Besides, slower students often ask top students questions, which has a bad effect on their studies.
In my opinion, I’d like to choose to share a desk with a slower student so that we can learn from each other and make progress together.
Yours ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com / " \o "欢迎登陆21世纪教育网 ),
Li Ping山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（60）短文改错
If someone asks you how you can make you always 1.
happy, you will perhaps find rather difficult to give him 2.
the proper answer. Do you remember the old saying “No 3.
human being can really be happy who is not giving or trying 4.
to give happiness to others ” If you will always think of 5.
taking more from others and give them less, you won’t be 6.
able to have happiness in your life even you are very rich. 7.
Here is an article for you. If each of you follow it, 8.
your unhappy day will come to an end. So you should 9.
learn to give up your own interests when necessarily 10.
书面表达
英语书面表达：介绍中国的中秋节。（100字左右）
提示：
1. 中秋节在9、10月到来。我们吃各种不同的月饼，如：有坚果（nut）的、肉的、蛋黄（yolk）的等等。
2. 人们喜欢在露天（in the open air）边吃月饼边赏月。
3. 在外工作的亲人赶回家和家人团聚，回顾过去，展望未来。
1. 改you为yourself.
2. 在find后加it充当形式宾语，真正宾语是后面的动词不定式，构成“主谓宾补”这一单句形式。
3. 改the为a。
4. √
5. 去掉will,条件状语从句中用一般现在时态表示将来。
6. 改give为giving，与前面taking并列。
7. 在even后加if，引导让步状语。
8. 改follow为follows。句子主语为each of you是单数。
9. 改day为days。
10. 改necessarily为necessary。该句为省去了主谓语it is的省略句，应用形容词作表语。
书面表达：
Mid-autumn Day is a Chinese festival. It usually comes in September or October. On that day we usually eat a big dinner and mooncakes.（It is said “Hou Yi” missed his wife, so he made mooncakes. It looks like the moon.）
There are many kinds of mooncakes. They are small round cakes with meat, nuts, yolk or something sweet inside. Eating mooncakes has been our custom. Families stay outside in the open air eating mooncakes. The most important thing is looking at the moon, In the evening, the moon looks brighter and rounder. We call this moon the full moon.
On that day, there will be a big family dinner which makes family members round up. People who work far away from their homes will try to come back for the union. At dinner, they can look back on the past and look forward to the future together. After dinner, people will light the lanterns which are usually red and round. Children will play with their own toy lanterns happily, so we call this day getting together.山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（78）
短文改错
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√)；如有错误（每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（＼)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Dear Lin Tao，
I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble in deal with 1.
the new high school life. I'd like to give you any advice. 2.
Firstly，you must work hard at all lesson and try your best 3.
to get good grades. By this way，you are likely to attend an 4.
ideal university for a better future. Secondly，you need get 5.
along well with your classmates and teachers，that will 6.
help you to build good interpersonal relationships. Thirdly， 7.
you have to learn what to live on your own. The ability 8.
to survive in society is also of the great importance for us. 9.
I hope you will find these ideas usefully. All the best! 10.
Yours，
Li Hua
书面表达
假如你是高三的学生，最近你就高三模拟考试该难还是该容易这个问题进行了一次调查。请结合下表内容，用英语写一篇短文，介绍有关调查情况，并发表自己的看法。
赞成偏难，反对偏易 赞成偏易，反对偏难
1. 喜欢挑战，越难越好；2. 有助于学生了解自己的薄弱环节，改进学习方法。 1. 题目太难，学生会泄气，会害怕今后的高考；2. 题目容易，易获高分，有自信。
注意：1. 词数100左右，开头已为你写好（不计入总词数)；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Recently I have made an investigation on whether a model-test paper for Senior Three should be difficult or easy.
1. deal→dealing 2. any→some 3. lesson→lessons 4. By→In
5. need后加to 6. That→which 7. √ 8. What→how 9. 去掉the
10. usefully→useful
书面表达
One possible version：
Recently I have made an investigation on whether a model-test paper for Senior Three should be difficult or easy. Opinions are divided on this matter.
Some students think that a difficult exam is just like a challenge. The harder, the better. It can help students find out where they are weak in studies and improve their learning approaches.
Others，however，are against a difficult exam. In their opinion，if it is very difficult，they may become discouraged and feel terrible about the coming College Entrance Examination. Besides，with an easy exam，they can get high marks and gain confidence.
I prefer it to be neither too difficult nor too easy, because if it is too easy, teachers will not know how we are getting on with our studies, but if it is too difficult, we will lose heart.山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（59）短文改错
此题要求改正所有短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（︿）,在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Nowadays in the United States, more and more people are 1. _____________
beginning to build underground houses where save open land. 2. _____________
When houses are underground, there are more land for parks, 3. _____________
playgrounds and gardens. Underground house also save energy. 4. _____________
They use only a few energy to stay warm or cool. As we know, 5. _____________
the idea underground houses is very old. People in the past 6. _____________
live in underground houses and underground cities in China. And 7. _____________
today you can’t find large underground shopping centers in China, 8. _____________
Japan, South Korea and Canada as well as. Some countries also 9. _____________
build underground factories and shop-houses to held things. 10. _____________
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最近，你班参加了某英文报组织的讨论会，主题为：影响世界可持续发展的主要因素是环境污染还是贫困。请根据下表提供的信息，客观地介绍讨论情况。
环境污染是最大的杀手 1.环境污染每年可造成七百多万人死亡2.仅空气污染就造成近三百万人死亡3.20%的人喝不上干净的水
贫困是最大的杀手 1.为了谋生不得不牺牲环境2.由于贫困，无钱投资教育
双方都同意 只有通过国际合作，可持续发展才能顺利进行。
注意：1. 可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;
2. 词数：100左右; 开头已给出，不计入总词数;
3. 参考词汇：可持续发展sustainable development
Recently, our class have had a discussion about the factors that influence the sustainable development in the world.
短文改错：
Nowadays in the United States, more and more people are 1.对
beginning to build underground houses where save open land. 2. that/which
When houses are underground, there are more land for parks, 3. is
playgrounds and gardens. Underground house also save energy. 4. houses
They use only a few energy to stay warm or cool. As we know, 5. little
the idea加 underground houses is very old. People in the past 6. 加of
live in underground houses and underground cities in China. And 7. lived
today you can’t find large underground shopping centers in China, 8. can
Japan, South Korea and Canada as well as. Some countries also 9.去掉as
build underground factories and shop-houses to held things. 10. hold
书面表达
One possible version:
Recently, our class have had a discussion about the factors the sustainable development in the world.
Some students think environmental pollution is the biggest killer, which can cause more than seven million deaths every year. Air pollution alone causes almost three million people to lose their lives. 20% of the people on earth do not have access to clean drinking water.
However, others think poverty is the biggest killer. For one thing, in order to survive they have to cut down trees and destroy fields. As a result, they make clean air and pure water badly polluted. For another, they can’t afford education. But it is known to us all that without education man can’t live peacefully with nature.
Despite the disagreement, they all believe only through international cooperation can sustainable development go smoothly.山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（65）短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线划掉。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Traffic jam is very serious problem in big city especially during rush hours. It can cause lots of trouble. First, people must have to spend longer time getting to our destinations. It was said that much of the lateness for work is caused by traffic jam. Second, wait in the car for a long time can easy put drivers in a bad mood which may lead to more accidents. Also, traffic jam cause serious air pollution. But it is necessary to deal with this problem.
In my opinion, the government should develop public transport. It should be cheaper and more convenient and comfortable. Besides, we should use public transport as much as possibly. It’s better to share cars during rush hours. In a word, we should take any possible measures to reduce the use of cars.
书面表达
最近海航在你校招收飞行员，请你根据提示，用英语写一封应聘信。应包括以下要点：
个人信息：姓名、性别、年龄、身高、所在学校等；
申请条件：1. 身体、心理素质；
2. 自己的特长；
3. 自我控制能力和合作意识；
4. 有一定航空航天知识，对航空航天的兴趣。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已写好，不计入总词数；
4. 参考词汇：心理素质 mental quality
21世纪教育网 Sir or Madam,
I have learned the news that pilots are wanted in your company. I’d like to apply for that job very much.____________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours truly
Li Hua
短文改错：
Traffic jam is ∧ very serious problem in big city especially during rush hours. It can cause lots of trouble. First, people must have to spend longer time getting to our destinations. It was said that much of the lateness for work is caused by traffic jam. Second, wait in the car for a long time can easy put drivers in a bad mood which may lead to more accidents. Also, traffic jam cause serious air pollution. But it is necessary to deal with this problem.
In my opinion, the government should develop public transport. It should be cheaper and more convenient and comfortable. Besides, we should use public transport as much as possibly. It’s better to share cars during rush hours. In a word, we should take any possible measures to reduce the use of cars.
写作： One possible version:
21世纪教育网 Sir or Madam,
I have learned the news that pilots are wanted in your company. I’d like to apply for that job very much. Below are my qualifications for the job.
I am Li Hua, male, aged 16. I am now studying at Taiyuan No. 5 Middle School. Since my childhood, I have showed special interest in space flight and have a good understanding of it. Therefore, I attach great importance to subjects such as physics, computer science, English and so on, in which I have been doing very well. In addition, I am in good health, 1.77 meters tall and I have an excellent mental quality and good self-control. What’s more, I show a high sense of team spirit, which I think is of vital importance for a pilot.
If I am chosen, I will train hard and try my best to do it well.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours truly
Li Hua
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下面短文中有10处错误,每句最多2处错误,请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面加上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。
Time flies as an arrow. I'm already in the second half
of senior grade 3 before I realized it. It is only a little more than three months before I graduate middle school. At the present, I'm busy reviewing my lessons in order to take the college entrance examination. I hope to go to Beijing University, that is one of the best universities not only in China but also in the world. I'll try my best to turn my dream to reality. Most of my classmates are also studying very hard to realize our wishes. I do believe everyone will be able to enter into a very good university and college.
书面表达
人们完成工作的方式通常有两种：独立完成与合作完成。两种方式各有特点。请你以“Working Individually or Working in a Team”为题，按照以下要点写一篇英语短文：
1. 独立完成：自行安排、自己解决问题；
2. 合作完成：一起讨论、相互学习；
3. 我喜欢的方式和理由。注意：词数100-120，文章的题目和开头已给出(不计词数)。
Working Individually or Working in a Team
There are basically two ways to get work done.
短文改错
1.As—like 2.realized-realize 3.graduate∧ from 4.去掉the
5. examination---examinations 6.that—which 7. 去掉 into 8. to—into 9. our—their 10. and—or
书面表达One possible version
Working Individually or Working in a Team
There are basically two ways to get work done. One is to work individually. In this way, people can decide for themselves when to start work and how to do it. What’s more, they will be able to learn how to solve problems on their own.
People may also choose to work in a team, where they can learn from each other and help each other. Besides, they may work out better ways to get work done by discussion.
Personally, I prefer to work in a team, which offers me a chance to learn how to get along with others and to share my experiences with them. As the work can be divided among several people, it can be done efficiently. Teamwork is always important.山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（18）
短文改错
请对每一行做出判断，如无错误，在该行右边横线上划一个√，如有错误，按照改错的方法改，请将答案写在答题卡上。
　　When people think of carrot, they usually picture in their mind 1. _________
a vegetable that is long, thin or orange. But carrots come in many 2. _________
different sizes and shapes. And not all carrots are orange. Belgian 3. _________
White carrots are, as their name suggested, white. For the best 4. _________
results, carrots should be grown in sandy soil where does not 5. _________
hold water for a long time. To prepare you garden for carrots, 6. _________
to dig up the soil, loosen it and turn it over. Weather, soil 7. _________
conditions and age will affect the way which carrots taste. Experts 8. _________
say warm days, cool nights and a medium soil temperature is 9. _________
the best conditions for growing carrots that taste greatly. 10. _________
书面表达
众所周知，读书对于一个人来说是很重要的，但是，选择适合自己的书更为重要，尤其是中学生，为此，专家为中学生提出了如下的建议，请你用英语把下面的建议介绍给你的同学。字数100左右，不要逐字翻译，可以适当增减。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
　　1.选择难易程度适合你的书
　　2.选择的书不仅能让你扩大知识面，同时还可以让你获得一些乐趣
　　3.书的内容要广
　　4.可以让老师、同学甚至朋友推荐书目 （to make recommendations）
　　5.可以先读一下书的概要（summary）部分，或书的前几页，看是否能引起你的兴趣
　　6.如果你在看一本书的时候，发现看不下去了，那么就放弃它,别人喜欢的书不一定
你也喜欢。
Reading is a pleasure. We can get a lot of knowledge through reading. But it is not easy to choose a book that is suitable for us. …
1. carrot →carrots 2. or→ and
3. √ 4. suggested → suggest
5. where →that / which 6. you → your 7. 去掉to
8. which前加in / which→ that / 去掉which
9. is → are 10. greatly → great
A possible version:
Reading is a pleasure. We can get a lot of knowledge through reading. But it is not always easy to choose a book that is suitable for us. So some experts give some advice on how to choose books.
Before we choose a book, we can ask our English teacher, classmates and even friends with whom you have things in common to make recommendations. Or we can have a brief look at the summary or read the first few pages. If it holds your attention, then it's probably a good book for you.
We should choose books that are neither too easy nor too difficult. These books should provide us with both knowledge and fun. We ought to read books on different subjects. If you are reading a book that you can't get through, it's okay to abandon it for something else. Don’t think that you must like the books that others like.山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（55）短文改错
假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(A)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
After supper Liu Wei came and ask me to go and see a film with film. In our way to the cinema, we saw the little girl sitting by the roadside crying. We bought her a cake to stop her cry. When we asked she lived, she said she did not know. So we took him to the police station and asked the polices to take care of her. After that we went to the cinema. And when we got there, the movie was almost over. Although we missed the movie, but we felt very happy because we did a well deed.
书面表达
假如你叫王敏，是一名高三年级的学生，在学习英语的过程中你遇到一些问题，想得到老师的帮助。现在请给你的英语老师Miss Li写一封求助信，内容如下：
学习英语时你遇到的问题 生词多，记忆有难度；语法难，理解有障碍，写作提高有困难；……
请求老师提供帮助 讲解记单词的方法；授课时慢一些；传授学习语法及提高写作的方法；……
注意：
1．内容包括所有要点，可以适当发挥，不要简单翻译；
2．词数100左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Miss Li，
I'm one of your students in Class Six, Senior Three. Nowadays I
Thank you.
Yours sincerely,
Wang Min山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（76）
短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\） 划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
This morning I got up early and went to school as usually, only to find there
were nobody in the classroom because it is Sunday. “How a bad memory I
have!” I couldn’t help laughing. Stand in front of the school gate, I began to
wonder what to do next. Suddenly a good idea occurs to me. “Why not get
together with some good friends for a picnic in such a fine weather ” I
immediately telephoned some of my best friends, but they all agreed to
join me. About two hours late, we finally arrived a pleasant park with trees and
flowers here and there. We really enjoyed us greatly.
书面表达
假如你是李华， 是某中学学生。最近你校在为一批来自英国的学生征寻住宿家庭，你有意申请。请根据下面提供的信息用英语给校长写封信，说明你申请的理由。
申请理由
住宿条件 宽敞，整洁，环境优美
语言优势 擅长英语，父母是英语教授，不会有交流困难
接待经验 上个月刚刚接待过两名美国学生
参观游览 父亲可驾车陪同参观附近的名胜
其他
Dear sir,
I’m writing to request a valuable chance to be one of the host families for the British students
短文改错：1.usually- usual 2. were- was 3. how- what
4. stand-standing 5. occurs-occurred 6.such a
7. but-and 8. late- later 9. arrived∧at 10. us-ourselves
书面表达（One possible version）：
Dear sir,
I’m writing to request a valuable chance to be one of the host families for the British students. We have a large and clean house, which lies in a beautiful area of the city. I’m good at English and my parents are both professors of English, so I’m sure we won’t have any difficulty communicating with English speakers. My father is an excellent driver and we will be very glad to show foreign students around some nearby places of interest in our own car. Last month we received two American students. We had a great time. Besides, my mother cooks well, so the students will be able to enjoy delicious Chinese food. I would greatly appreciate it if I could have the chance to make friends with them.
Looking forward to your reply.山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（48）短文改错
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）;如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词作斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词；在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行的右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
At present, playing computer games are becoming more and 1. ___________
more popular with people, especially with students. Take Tom 2. ___________
and Mike for example. Every day after the school, they go to the 3. ___________
computer bar to play games till lately at night, and they often have 4. ___________
a competition to see who wins many scores. Once, Tom didn’t go 5. ___________
home until eleven o’clock in night. When he got home, he told his 6. ___________
mother he had been gone over his lessons. Poor mom! She believed 7. ___________
him and cooked two eggs for him. “Take more care of yourselves as 8. ___________
you work too hardly, my dear son.” She said. Tom’s face turned red 9. ___________
at his mother’s praise. Later he made his mind to work really hard. 10. _______
书面表达
假如你叫李华,你们班同学在讨论有关阅读途径问题，请你根据以下提示写一篇英语短文。
1. e-books,MP4: 省时、环保、能满足人们现代生活的节奏等;
2. traditional books: 便于保存和收藏、可反复阅读、可触摸等;
3. 你的观点: ……。
注意: 1. 开头已给出，不计入总词数; 2. 词数100-120左右; 3. 可适当增减。
As computers are becoming a popular tool for us to have access to news and knowledge, e-books, which can be read online or on an MP4, seem to be preferred as a convenient means by more and more people. Does this trend imply that e-books will take the place of traditional books？
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__________________________________________________________________
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__________________________________________________________________山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（25）短文改错
文中共有10处语言错误，错误涉及一个单词的增加、删减或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（︿），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
How a great party! I seldom go to parties because it’s such a problem to me to remember people names. I’m so glad I’ve read that book about improving your memory. The author suggest do exercises, and they really help. I don’t worry about what people would think me any more, and I try to pay attention to that people are saying. As result, I have a great time! I’m even planning to go on dancing with my friends. I will have an English test tomorrow, so I could stop writing now and start studying.
书面表达
假定你是李华，暑假期间去你的好友张明所在的城市旅游，现已回家。旅游两周期间，你住在朋友家，他们为你提供了吃、住、行及旅游方面的帮助。请给朋友及其家人写一封120字左右的感谢信。内容包括以下要点：
1. 已安全到家，对他们的帮助表示感谢。
2. 谈谈旅游期间的感受。
3. 希望保持联系。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
短文改错
1. How—What 2. to—for 3. people—people’s
4.suggest—suggests 5. do—doing
6. think—think of 7. that—what 8. result—a result
9. go on—go 10. could—should /must
书面表达
21世纪教育网 Zhang Ming,
I’m writing to you from my home in China. I returned home safe and sound. When I think of the wonderful two weeks I spent in America, I just can’t help thinking of you and your family. It was so kind of you to have provided everything to make my staying there such a happy and lucky experience. I’ve learned so much, not only the rich culture but also the splendid customs. And I really enjoyed a great deal the fun and laughter we shared with each other. Thank you very much. I’ll always remember this trip as well as your kindness. ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com / " \o "欢迎登陆21世纪教育网 )
I’ll keep in touch and write to you later. Please take care!山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（61）短文改错
此题要求改正所有短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（︿）,在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
There are advantage for students to work while 1. ____________
studying at school. One of them was that 2. _____________
they can earn money. For the most part, 3. ____________
students working to earn money for their own 4. _____________
use. Earning their own money allow them 5. _____________
to spend on anything as if they please. 6. _____________
They would have to ask their parents for 7. _____________
money or for permission to do things by 8. _____________
the money. Some students may also to save 9. _____________
up for our college or future use. 10. _____________
书面表达
最近，你校同学正在参加某英文报社正在组织的一场讨论。讨论主题是：公园要不要收门票？请你根据下表所提供的信息，给报社写一封信，客观地介绍讨论情况并表明你自己的观点。
60% 的同学认为： 40% 的同学认为：
不应收门票公园是公众休闲的地方如收门票，需建大门、围墙，会影响城市形象 应收门票支付园林工人工资购买新花木
注意：1. 信的开头已为你写好。不计入词数。2. 词数：120左右。
Dear editor,
I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we’ve had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks._________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours truly,
Li Hua
短文改错：
There are advantage for students to work while 1. advantages
studying at school. One of them was that 2. is
they can earn money. For the most part, 3. √
students working to earn money for their own 4. work
use. Earning their own money allow them 5. allows
to spend on anything as if they please. 6. if
They would∧have to ask their parents for 7.not或would→wouldn’t
money or for permission to do things by 8. with
the money. Some students may also to save 9. to
up for our college or future use. 10. their
书面表达
One possible version:
Dear editor,
I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we’ve had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks.
Opinions are divided on the question. 60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees. They believe a public park should be free of charge. People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. What’s more, it will become necessary to build gate and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city.
On the other hand, 40% think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardeners and other workers, and to buy plants and young trees. They suggest, however, fees should be charged low.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
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短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\） 划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My parents and I went to the park last Sunday. There were lots of visitors
stand in front of the ticket window. We waited a long time and buy three tickets.
In the Tiger Mountain of the park, I was so eagerly to see the fierce frightened
animals that I quickened my steps through the crowd. Unfortunate，I got
separated from my parents. I had hard time looking for them, and I had no
luck. Wandering in the park，I felt alone without any companions. Worse still，
I had no money, so I had to walk to home, covering as much as 5 kilometer.
书面表达
假如你是晓华，住在山西，你的加拿大笔友Bob来信谈到了他所居住的城市，并希望了解你的家乡的情况。请用英语写一封回信，回信必须包括下表中的内容。
自然情况 位于黄河边，风景优美，适合居住
成就 经济发展迅速，新建了不少工厂、住房、道路等
存在问题 水、空气污染，交通拥挤
对山西发展的看法 内容由考生拟定
词数100 左右
短文改错：
My parents and I went to the park last Sunday. There were lots of visitors stand in front of
standing
the ticket window. We waited a long time and buy three tickets. In the Tiger Mountain of
bought
the park, I was so eagerly to see the fierce frightened animals that I quickened my steps
eager frightening
through the crowd. Unfortunate，I got separated from my parents. I had ∧hard time Unfortunately a
looking for them, and I had no luck. Wandering in the park，I felt alone without any
but lonely
companions. Worse still，I had no money, so I had to walk to home, covering as much as 5 kilometer.
kilometres
书面表达（One possible version）：
Dear Bob,
It’s very kind of you to write to me and let me know about your beautiful city. Now I’d like to tell you something about my hometown Shanxi.
My hometown stands on the bank of Huanghe River. It is a beautiful place for people to live in. Its economy has been developing rapidly in the past ten years. New factories, houses and roads have been built. More schools and hospitals are available for its people. However, there are still some problems, such as water, air pollution and heavy traffic in rush hours.
In my opinion, Shanxi should develop its economy scientifically. I would also think that the growth of its population should be brought under control so that we’ll have a better hometown in future山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（24）短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（／）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。
In my village children are left school for various reasons. Some families are so poor to send their children to school, and they had to earn money to support their families. Many parents do not think them useless to send their children to school. They would rather let their children staying at home. I feel worried this. I think every of child should have a chance to go to school . We should pay attentions to the education of children, for we will play an important part on our socialist construction in the future. Ways must be found prevent children from leave off their studies.
书面表达
假设你是李华，作为友谊中学高三毕业生的学生代表，请你根据以下要点在毕业典礼上用英文作一个告别演讲：
1. 首先感谢家人，朋友和老师；
2. 其次对高中生活简要回顾；
3. 最后对未来以展望。
注意：1. 信的开头与结尾已给出；
2. 词数在100左右为宜。
21世纪教育网 teachers, families and graduates, welcome and thank you for joining us tonight at Youyi High School graduation ceremony for the Class of 2011!
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Eventually, all the best to the Class of 2011. Thank you very much.
改 错
1.left —leaving 2.so——too 3.had ——have
4.them ——it 5.staying —stay 6.have a chance
7.attentions —attention 8.on —in
9.∧to prevent 10.leave—leaving
书面表达
21世纪教育网 teachers, families and graduates, welcome and thank you for joining us tonight at Xinhua High School graduation ceremony for the Class of 2011! First, I’m glad to thank all our families and friends for their love and support on behalf of the graduates.
I also want to thank our hardworking teachers for guiding us through to this moment. My personal thanks to Mr Liu, you got me through Math when I had lost hope. Graduation is a time to go over enjoyable memories which have been made over the past three years. Many events become so vivid in my mind at this moment, such as military training, soccer and basketball games.
But graduation is also a time to look forward to the future in front of us. No matter what you want to do next, I hope you can try it clearly. I believe we’ll go smoothly in the future if we work hard.
Eventually, all the best to the Class of 2011. Thank you very much.山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（66）
短文改错
假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（︿），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出改正后的词。
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm written to make the complaint about the poor quality of a computer that I bought from your company．
Frankly spoken, this brand had always been my favorite．In October 1st, 2009, I bought the computer from one of your chain store located in Zhongguancun．It operates well first, so ten days later, there was a fault that bothered me it always turned off automatically．Its poor quality ruined almost all his previous impression towards your products．
The problem is so terrible that 1 strong request full amount of refund or a new computer．
I would appreciate it all your assistance in this matter．If you have any questions, please don't hesitate contact me．Looking forward to your reply．
Yours sincerely
Li Ming
书面表达
假如你是李华，在最近的研究性学习当中，受《英语周报》 (English Weekly)之邀，你对本校2000（男女生人数各半）名同学进行了使用手机情况的调查。现将调查结果（如下表所示）用英语给报社的编辑写一封信，报道此事以引起大家的关注，并给出你的观点和建议。
注意：
1、报道应包括图表所示内容，为使行文连贯可适度添加细节。
2、文章的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
3、词数：100左右
4、参考词汇：调查： make a survey; send SMS (send short messages)
Dear editor,
I have recently made a survey among 2000 students in our school about their purpose of using cell phones.
Yours,
Li Hua山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（8）
短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\） 划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
This morning I got up early and went to school as usually, only to find there were nobody in the classroom because it is Sunday. “How a bad memory I have!” I couldn’t help laughing. Stand in front of the school gate, I began to wonder what to do next. Suddenly a good idea occurs to me. “Why not get together with some good friends for a picnic in such a fine weather ” I immediately telephoned some of my best friends, but they all agreed to join me. About two hours late, we finally arrived a pleasant park with trees and flowers here and there. We really enjoyed us greatly.
书面表达
你们学校最近做了一项调查，调查的主题是“你寒假会去做兼职挣钱吗？”下面是调查结果：
结果 原因
89%选择不去 1．父母不允许 2．学习太忙，没时间3．不知道自己能做什么工作
11%选择去 1．学以致用2．积累社会经验3．减轻父母的压力
请你就此用英文写一篇文章。
注意：1．词数100—120 词。 2．可适当拓展内容以使行文连贯。
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
短文改错：
1.usually- usual 2. were- was 3. how- what 4. stand-standing
5. occurs-occurred 6.such a 7. but-and 8. late- later
9. arrived∧at 10. us-ourselves
书面表达（One possible version）：
Recently, Our school has carried out a survey about whether students will do some part-time work during the winter holiday. 89% of the students said no. First, their parents won’t allow them to do so; second, they are so busy with their studies during the holiday that they can’t afford the time to do it; third, they are not sure what job they can do. 11% of the students planned to work during the winter holiday. They think working is a good chance to put what they have learned into practice. Through work, they can gain lots of social experience. In addition, by doing a part-time job to earn some money, they can reduce their parents` pressure. 21世纪教育网山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（3）
短文改错
I just came back from Britain last week. I was luckily enough to be one of the students from different country to visit the UK from Feb. 16 to 28. We paid a visit to a good many of places, like London, Oxford or the Lake District. I learned much about British culture and history in London, where was my favorite. I also liked Oxford, in which I saw much more old buildings. The Lake District was beautiful, but it was pity that it rained heavily when they were there. The most excited thing for me in Britain was that I make a lot of friends there.
书面表达
高中生在成长的过程中会碰到一些烦恼。就这一话题你班正积极筹备召开一次主题班会。请你依据下表进行必要的思考，并用英语准备一篇发言稿。
Pains Solutions
相貌、体形不美 不必在意
不被他人理解，朋友少 加强沟通
学习滞后，压力大 ？
零花钱不多 ？
…
注意：1.词数：120左右；开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；
2．语言通顺，结构严谨。
Boys and girls，
We high school students do have some growing pains，but we can get rid of them correctly and wisely.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
短文改错
I just came back from Britain last week. I was luckily enough to be one of the students from different
lucky
country to visit the UK from Feb. 16 to 28. We paid a visit to a good many of places, like London, Oxford
countries
or the Lake District. I learned much about British culture and history in London, where was my favorite.
and which
I also liked Oxford, in which I saw much more old buildings. The Lake District was beautiful, but it was
many
∧ pity that it rained heavily when they were there. The most excited thing for me in Britain was that I
a we exciting
make a lot of friends there.
made
书面表达
Boys and girls，
We high school students do have some growing pains, but we can get rid of them correctly and wisely. First, some of us are upset about their figures and looks. It’s unnecessary and it’s not important at all. We needn’t care about it. It is one’s inner beauty that matters. Second, we sometimes seem to be misunderstood by our teachers, parents and classmates. Facing this, we can find a proper time to have a heart to heart talk with them, trying to remove the misunderstanding. Some of us have fewer friends. I think being open minded and friendly will do us good.Third, we may fall behind others, which makes us stressed. Actually we can encourage ourselves to work efficiently, full of determination. Last, some of us don’t have much pocket money, so they feel unhappy. Isn’t it strange So long as we have some, that’s enough. And we can learn to earn money! That’s all. Thank you.山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（77）
短文改错
此题要求改正所给短文中的借误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处划一个漏字符（︿），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
I still remember special experience when I was a pupil. 1.__________
One day, as I does something wrong, my teacher was very 2.__________
angry and decided to have a talk with my father and me. When I 3.__________
got home, I dared not to tell the truth. I told my father that there 4.__________
would be a parents meeting in the evening and the students 5.__________
should take part in, too. My father believed what I said. So 6.__________
in the evening, he was good dressed and took me to school. 7.__________
At the school gate, father was puzzling seeing no other 8.__________
parents. I had to say him the truth. At that time, I realized that 9.__________
tell a lie couldn’t solve any problem. 10.__________
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高中生活即将结束，大学生活很快开始，请你根据提示写一篇词数为100左右的英语短文，表达你对高中生活的遗憾和对未来的打算。内容包括以下要点，不要逐字翻译，可以适当增减。第一句话已给出，不计入总词数。
1. 注重学习多，注重其它方面少, 如：社会活动，体育锻炼等；
2. 暑假中要参加一些公益活动， 如：帮助小学生学习，帮老人做事，做志愿者等；
3. 大学生活的计划: 努力学习，生活自理，和老师同学相处好。
Before graduation, I feel an urge to talk about my regrets for the senior high school and the plan for my college goals.
短文改错：
1. special 前加a 2. does改为did 3. 正确 4. 去掉to
5. parents 改为parents’ 6. 去掉in; 或在in 后加it 7. good 改为 well
8. puzzling 改为 puzzled 9. say 改为 tell 10. tell改为telling
书面表达：
Before graduation, I feel an urge to talk about my regrets for the senior high school and the plan for my college goals.
Thinking of the three years in my senior high, I find that I’ve focused too much on my lessons but paid so little attention to other aspects such as social activities, physical exercise, and my parents.
In the summer vacation, I’m going to do some voluntary work. I will help school students with their studies. I will also help old people do what they can’t do by themselves.
After I enter college, I will learn to live on my own, for I will be away from my parents. Above all, I will study hard and get along well with all my classmates and teachers at college. I am sure I can be good at my major and reach my goals.山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（14）
短文改错
此题要求改正所给短文的错误。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1． 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2． 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Ralph,
I am an university student． I once thought life at the university must be excellent,
but now I changed my mind． I have three roommates, and I was the last one
to move into the dormitory． Last term, I got along peacefully and happy． But I find
they are not willing to be with me now． They don’t talk with me, and they’ve
become cold toward me． Many time, I have wanted to talk with them about how I
felt like, but I failed to find an opening． When leaving alone, I always recall this
sadness． But I am an honest student． Why don’t I win true friendship
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伦敦奥组委以海报形式面向世界招募2012年伦敦奥运会志愿者。请你根据下表信息，以李华的身份向伦敦奥组委写一封自荐信，要求为奥运会服务。
姓名 李华（男） 年龄 17岁 学校 北京四中
有利条件 1．已学习10年英语，英语口语流利；2．北京第29届奥运会志愿者，熟悉比赛项目，有经验；3．今年夏天已通过互派留学生（exchange students）测试，届时将就读于伊顿公学（Eton College）;4．交际能力强，善于与人相处。
注意：1．词数100左右； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．开头和结尾已给出（不计词数）。
Dear London Olympic Committee,
I have read your poster for recruiting volunteers． I think I am fit for the job． I’d like to recommend myself．
… …
All the best!
Looking forward to your reply．
Truly yours
Li Hua山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（36）短文改错
There must be a great many of people who didn’t 1._______
go to university, even if they want to, since they 2.______
couldn’t afford the time off work; they had their family 3._______
to support, or if they were women, they have to stay 4.________
at home in order to look after their children. 5.______
As the opening of the Open University in January, 6.______
1971, people in Britain are now able to take university 7.______
degree despite these difficulty, for the courses 8.______
are specially designing so that you can study at home. 9.______
In this way many people’s dreams have come into true. 10.______
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人们完成工作的方式通常有两种: 独立完成和合作完成。两种方式各有特点。请你以此为话题，按照以下要点写一篇英语短文：
1. 独立完成：自行安排、自己解决问题。
2. 合作完成：一起讨论、相互学习。
3. 我喜欢的方式和理由。
注意：词数120左右，文章的题目和开头已给出（不记入总词数）
Working Individually or Working in a Team
There are basically two ways to get work done.
____________________________________________________________
短文改错：
1. of 2. want→wanted 3. family→families 4. have→had 5. √
6. As→ With 7. take∧a 8. difficulty→difficulties
9. designing→designed 10.into
One possible version:
Working Individually or Working in a team
There are basically two ways to get work done. One is to work individually. In this way, people can decide for themselves when to start work and how to do it. What’s more, they will be able to learn how to solve problems on their own and how to think independently.
People may also choose to work in a team, where they can learn from each other and help each other. Besides, they may work out better ways to get work done by discussion. They can truly learn the skills of cooperation and how to get through the ideas to their mates.
Personally, I prefer to work in a team, which offers me a chance to learn how to get along with others and to share my experiences with them. As the work can be divided among several people, it can be done efficiently. Teamwork is always important.
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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（＾），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。21世纪教育网
注意：1.每处错误及其修改句均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者 (从第11处起) 不计分。
It's reported that a new kind of road, which can play music, has appeared in Japan. Different kinds of music is played when drivers drive his cars on different parts of the road. This is good news for drivers, because drivers often feel tired after drive for a long time. The music played by the road can make them feel relaxed and reminds them what kind of road they are driving. Besides, it also does better to the pedestrians on the road. This is a excellent example for bringing music to people’s daily life. I hope such kind of road would be designed in our country as if we have so many people and so many cars.
书面表达
最近， 你班学生就暑假上辅导班的问题进行了讨论。结论如下：
赞成52% 培养学习兴趣，增长知识，提高成绩
反对48% 增加学习负担，减少了娱乐和放松的时间
请你根据以上表格的内容，写一篇100词左右的英语短文，反映讨论的结果，并谈谈你对上暑假辅导班的看法。
注意：开头已经为你写好，不计入总词数；
参考词汇：辅导班auxiliary classes
Recently our class had a discussion about whether the students should attend auxiliary classes during the summer vacation……
短文改错
第二句：is改为are； his改为their；
第三句：drive改为driving或drive前加they；
第四句： reminds改为remind; driving后加on；
第五句：better改为good；
第六句：a改为an; for改为of；
第七句：would改为will；删去if. 21世纪教育网
书面表达
Recently our class had a discussion about whether the students should attend auxiliary classes during the summer vacation.
52% of the students agree to it because they can follow their interests and learn more about their favorite subjects. Besides, they can gain more knowledge by receiving instructions from their tutors so that they can improve their academic performance.
However, 48% of the students are strongly against it. They think it adds more burdens to their study, which in turn reduces their time to have fun and relax.
In my opinion, the summer vacation is a good time for us to rest and to do what we like. You can make your own decision based on your interest. ks山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（5）
短文改错
错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改
增加：在缺词出加一个漏字符号（︿），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改侯的词。
注意：只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。者据
Never shall I forget the first English lesson giving by Miss Liu. One Monday morning, when she entered the classroom, we found out that she was a young and beautiful lady. Then she introduced her and said they shouldn’t call her Teacher Liu but Miss Liu. Later, she let us go to the blackboard and said something about ourselves in English in turns. When it was my turn, I felt too shy that I didn’t dare to say anything before the class. She went up to me and said kind, “Don’t be afraid. I believe you can do well.” At last, I went to the blackboard.
She praised me for that I had done.
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面对中学生“出国热”，社会对此有不同的看法。请你以Studying Abroad为题，根据以下提供的信息，谈谈自己的看法。
Advantages disadvantages
1．良好的语言环境，更利于预言学习。2．拓宽视野，学习国外先进的科学技术。3．传播各民族间的不同文化。 1．年纪小，缺乏生活经验，自立能力差。2．情感孤独，思乡。3．生活学习费用高。
注意：1．第一句已为你写好，不计入总词数。
2．词数120左右
3．参考词汇：媒介，中间人mediator
In recent years, studying abroad has been popular.
改错
giving—given 去掉out her---herself they---we said----say turns---turn
too---so kind---kindly do后加it that---what
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86．A possible version:
In recent years, studying abroad has been popular．Tens of thousands of Chinese students have gone to foreign countries to study．Many people are trying their best to apply to apply to go abroad.
There are many advantages in attending schools abroad．First, students who have studied abroad can act as mediators between people of different cultures．Second, we can learn much more advanced knowledge of science and technology from foreign countries．Third, we can learn much foreign languages more quickly.
However, there are some disadvantages．Most of the students are too young to live alone without any living experience．Besides, being far away from their home country, they may feel lonely and homesick．Also, of course, the costs are much higher there than at home．In spite of theses, advantages are more than disadvantages．In my opinion, it is advisable to attend schools abroad.山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（63）短文改错
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处如一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Many teachers worry about the effects of television on young people.
According to studies, any children spend more time 1._________
watching television than they spend in school. Because so 2._________
much viewing, children may not be develop the habit of 3._________
read and the ability to enjoy themselves. No one worries 4._________
much about the radio program young people listen to, 5._________
although radios can be very noise. Teachers also wonder about 6._________
the effects of television commercials. On one year the 7._________
average child will see 25,000 television commercials, all 8._________
planned and written by grown-ups to make children to want 9._________
things that they don't real need. 10._________
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近几年， 考生该不该复读这一话题一直为社会所关注。下面是某班同学就此问题的讨论结果。请你给某英文报社写一封信，介绍一下讨论的情况，并谈谈你的看法。
多数学生认为可以复读：
对于失败的同学又多了一次机会；
多复习一年更有把握考上理想的大学，有利于将来的就业。
少数学生认为不该复读：
对于应届生不公平
增加家庭经济负担
考大学不是唯一的出路
注意：词数120左右（信的开头已给出，不计入总词数）
Dear editor,
I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we’ve had about whether students should retake classes.
_________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________
改错：1.any→many/some 2.Because→Because of
3.去掉be 4.read→reading
5.program→programs 6.noise→noisy
7.On→In 8.无错
9.去掉第二个to 10.real→really
书面表达：
Dear editor,
I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we’ve had about whether students should retake classes.
Most of the students think that retaking classes means another chance to those who have failed once. Through one year’s hard work, they can make better preparations for entering a satisfactory university so as to get a better job in the future. On the other hand, some do not like the idea of retaking classes. They think it unfair for students who take the exam for the first time. Besides, it also adds to the burdens of their family. What’s more, going to college is not the only choice for some students beyond their abilities.
In my opinion, everyone can be successful in life so long as he tries his best, whether or not he could go to college.