中考书面表达专题课件

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Welcome to our class!
By Fan Xiulan
Jiaotan Middle School
学习如农耕 我们如农夫
一份耕耘，一分收获
If you plant a good seed in spring,
you will have a good harvest in autumn.
一篇文章由句子组成
一个句子由单词组成
article
word
sentence
1、now
sing
Miss QQ is singing now.
Miss QQ
2、yesterday
She sang yesterday.
3、tomorrow
She will sing tomorrow.
现在进行时
一般过去时
一般将来时
now
every day
last Sunday
She is running now.
She runs every day.
She ran last Sunday.
run
dance
cook
She will cook next evening.
at eight last night
She was dancing at eight last night.
next evening
swim
Tense
5月1日天气晴朗……一个老人在海里游泳……
2.Tense:
一般过去时
An old man swam in the sea.
1.Key word:
swim
日记里的动词时态
通知里的动词时态
We are going to /will swim in the sea.
We will go swimming in the sea.
1.Key word：swim
不要迟到，自带午饭和饮料
注意事项
骑自行车
交通方式
去海里游泳
活动
5月1日
活动时间
通 知：
一般将来时
2.Tense:
介绍人物时的动词时态
姓 名：Tom 年 龄：16
国 籍：英国 职 业：学生
经常做的运动：游泳
理 想：当一个作家
Tom often swims.
He often goes swimming.
1.Key word: swim
一般现在时
2.Tense:
Step 1:
Step 2:
How to begin writing
Look carefully and find the key words
仔细审题，找出关键动词
Decide which tense to use
确定时态、人称
Let’s move to Step 3!
Yesterday, Tony and Anna were on
their way home.…
Tony and Anna talked happily.
An old woman walked in front of them.
She carried a basket of apples.
talk …
walk …
carry…
…
(yesterday)
Key words:
Yesterday, Tony and Anna were on
their way home.…
Key words:
fall down…
ran
everywhere
She fell down and the apples ran everywhere.
Key words:
pick up…
help… stand up
Tony helped her to stand up and Anna picked up the apples.
Key words:
help …carry
go home
say
Anna helped the old woman carry the
apples. They helped her to go home.
The old woman said, “Thanks a lot.”
Step3:We need an outline(提纲):
talk …happily , walk, carry
fall down, run everywhere
3. help...stand up, pick up
4. help… go home
参考作文：
Yesterday, Tony and Anna were on their way home. They talked happily. An old woman walked in front of them. She carried a basket of apples. Suddenly, the old woman fell down and the apples ran everywhere. Tony helped her to stand up and Anna picked the apples up. Then they helped the old woman to go home. She was very thankful.
Look carefully and find out the key words
仔细审题，找关键动词
Make an outline 列提纲，以免遗漏要点
Check and correct mistakes
检查订正
How to write an article
Step 1:
Decide which tense to use 确定时态、人称
Step 2:
Step 3:
Step 4:
邮递员的一天
根据汉语提示，记叙一个邮递员
Mr. Smith的一天：
7:30 起床 刷牙洗脸
8:15 跟家人告别
公交车没赶上
一天的辛苦工作
4:00 回家
7:30 起床
刷牙洗脸
8:15 跟家人告别
公交车没赶上
一天的辛苦工作
4:00 回家
Key words:
get up
say goodbye
not catch/ miss
work hard
go home/ return home
brush / wash
邮递员的一天
In a Monday morning, Mr. Smith got up
at seven thirty and put up the clothes.
He wished his face and brushed his tooth. It was a querter past eight. He said good-
bye to his wife. He didn’t catch the bus
because there were many people sat on
the bus. He ran to work, he gave the
letters to the people who waited for
them. He goes home at four. He were
tired, but he was happy.
On
on
washed
teeth
quarter
was
sitting或去掉
and
∧
went
Mr. Smith got up at half past seven on
a Monday morning. After the breakfast,
he said goodbye to his family and left
home. Unluckily, by the time he arrived
at the bus stop, the bus had already gone.
So he had to walk to the post office and
got letters which he should send. In the
daytime, he was busy sending letters and
newspapers from house to house. He
didn’t return home until four o’clock. He
was tired but happy.
难度较大：
英文写作四步：
仔细审题，找出关键动词
确定基调：时态、人称等
列提纲
认真检查
Step 1:
Step 2:
Step 3:
Step 4:
Remember again.
1. 多用简单句，注意时态语态
2. 化难为易，化繁为简
3. 此路不通，绕道迂回
4. 字迹工整，留好印象
5. 卷面整洁
Gold tips(金点子):
Homework: 网络已成为我们生活的一部分。请你根据以下要点以“The Internet in Our Life”为题，用英语写一篇短文.
1. 好处：多彩、便捷的生活，如：交友、放松；（请再举一个例子）
2. 坏处：沉溺于网络，影响身体、学业
3. 你的观点 （自拟，至少一点）
注意：
1．词数80左右。短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数
2．短文须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺； 3．短文不得出现真实的人名、校名等信息。
The Internet in Our Life
Internet plays a very important role in our life. .