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读写任务公开课学案
Possible version 1:
…
From your letter, I come to know that watching TV, especially watching it for a long time, is really bad for your health, while doing exercise can lengthen our life. You are worried about me and want me to get rid of my bad habits.
_________________________________for what I did in the past. I’m sorry that I made you worry all the time and I’m also grateful that you remind me of these details.
But actually I have a surprise for you—_______________________________. Influenced by my fellow classmates, I have been taking part in after-class exercise ________dancing, jogging, cycling and so on. Every morning, I go jogging for about twenty minutes. ________, on weekends I usually go climbing or go cycling with my friends. Because of exercise I’m in perfect health and I’m slim now as you can see from my pictures.
I’ve benefited a lot from exercise and______________. I will take good care of myself and I wish you healthy and happy every day!
Love,
Charlie
Possible version 2:
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(过渡+要点1主题句) ____________________________________________ learning English is beneficial to both our life and our future careers. (过渡语) _____, to learn English well is very necessary for us students.
(过渡语) ________________________________, (要点2主题句) __________________________________________________________________
_______________. (列举理由一) _____________________, …… (列举理由二) ___________________,……
(过渡+要点3主题句) ____________________________________________
________________________ …… (过渡语) _______________,……
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Teaching Design
Task-based Writing----Topic Sentence & Struture of A Paragraph
Ⅰ. Teaching aims
To help the students learn the importance of topic sentence and transition in a paragraph and encourage them to make an outline before writing.
Ⅱ. Difficulties
To ask the students to make an outline immediately.
Ⅲ. Teaching procedure
Teaching steps Purpose
Step 1 Revision & Lead-inComment the summary the student finished lask week and sum up how to organize a summary.Step 2 DiscoveringLearn about tow versions of students’ writing and make a comparation.Step 3 PracticeMake an outline of a Task-based Writing.1) Read the demands carefully.2) Make an outline immediately.3) Group-work: have a discussion on one outline and make it better.4) Give a report.Step 4 SummarySum up what’s important while writing.Step 5 Assignment According to the outline, finish the writing. 1.To review how to organize a summary.2. To lead in the topic sentence.To guide the students to discover the importance of topic sentence and transition in a paragraph.To encourage the students to use what they learn to improve their skills of organizing a composition.Help the students sum up what they learned.Consolidation.
附一. 写作综合训练10
阅读下面的短问，然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
Dear Charlie,
Recently I have read an article, which I’d like to share with you.
“As a study suggests, every hour that an adult spends watching TV reduces life by almost 22 micutes. Watching TV for an average of six hours a day can reduce your life by five years.
The research claims that such a lifestyle is as bad for health as smoking and overweight. This is because when watching TV, people tend to fall lack of exercise and eat unhealthily. Another study shows that exercising for just 15 minutes a day can increase your life by up to three years.”
When reading this article, I couldn’t help worrying about you. You used to like watching TV. When a program that you liked was on, you couldn’t tear yourself away from it. You had your meals on the sofa in front of TV and you only went to toilet when it was advertisement time.
Now you live alone far away from home, I can’t always tell you to pay attention to your health. But I want to remind you that such a lifestyle is bad for your health. I hope you can make some changes to it little by little.
Love,
Mom
【写作内容】
假如你是Charlie，读完信后，请给妈妈写一封回信。
1． 以约30个词概括来信的主要内容；
2． 以约120个词介绍自己的近况，并包括如下要点：
（1） 读信后的感受；
（2） 介绍目前的健康和锻炼情况；
（3） 表达你自己的决心。
【写作要求】
1． 作文中可使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；
2． 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3． 信的格式和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
【评分标准】
概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。
Dear Mom,
I’m very happy to hear from you. How are you Thank you for your advice.
_________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
Love,
Charlie
附二 写作综合训练12
阅读下面的短问，然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
“Sometimes I dream in English. Once my roommate asked me what I was talking about in my sleep and it turned out I was talking aloud in English.”
Radslaw Raddy Majewski, a football player, is learning English with this teacher. He has just signed a three-year contract with a club in Nottingham. Mr. Majewski arrived at the club a year ago from Warsaw, Poland. Since then, he has been learning English.
He studied English at school but says it did not prepare him for coming and working in the country. “For the first two months I couldn’t speak to anyone.” He thinks his English has greatly improved and has made his working life much easier. “Now I don’t have to think too much about an answer—it’s automatic.”
Learning a foreign language can be beneficial to careers. Mastering a foreign language, one has more choices when choosing a job. For example, if one has a good command of English, he/she can go to companies of English-speaking countries or companies that cooperate with those companies. Besides, it’s easier for one to get a promotion. That’s why many adults nowadays attend classes, trying their best to pick up English.
【写作内容】
1. 以约30个词概括来信的主要内容；
2. 以约120个词发表你的感想与看法，内容包括：
(1) 读完这篇文章后的感受；
(2) 你今后想从事怎样的工作，你认为学好英语对你的工作将有什么帮助；
(3) 谈谈你认为最好的练习英语口语的方法。
【写作要求】
3. 作文中可使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；
4． 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；
【评分标准】
概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。
读写任务公开课学案
Possible version 1:
…
From your letter, I come to know that watching TV, especially watching it for a long time, is really bad for your health, while doing exercise can lengthen our life. You are worried about me and want me to get rid of my bad habits.
_________________________________for what I did in the past. I’m sorry that I made you worry all the time and I’m also grateful that you remind me of these details.
But actually I have a surprise for you—_______________________________. Influenced by my fellow classmates, I have been taking part in after-class exercise ________dancing, jogging, cycling and so on. Every morning, I go jogging for about twenty minutes. ________, on weekends I usually go climbing or go cycling with my friends. Because of exercise I’m in perfect health and I’m slim now as you can see from my pictures.
I’ve benefited a lot from exercise and______________. I will take good care of myself and I wish you healthy and happy every day!
Love,
Charlie
Possible version 2:
……
(过渡+要点1主题句) ____________________________________________ learning English is beneficial to both our life and our future careers. (过渡语) _____, to learn English well is very necessary for us students.
(过渡语) ________________________________, (要点2主题句) __________________________________________________________________
_______________. (列举理由一) _____________________, …… (列举理由二) ___________________,……
(过渡+要点3主题句) ____________________________________________
________________________ …… (过渡语) _______________,……
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-- Topic sentence & structure of a paragraph
Task-based writing
【写作内容】
假如你是Charlie，读完信后，请给妈妈写一封回信。
1. 以约30个词概括来信的主要内容；
审题
人称 →
第一人称
写作综合训练(10)—读写任务(要点1)
Lead-in
注意主题句和关键词
Dear Charlie,
Recently I have read an article, which I’d like to share with you.
“As a study suggests, every hour that an adult spends watching TV reduces life by almost 22 minutes. Watching TV for an average of six hours a day can reduce your life by five years.
The research claims that such a lifestyle is as bad for health as smoking and overweight. This is because when watching TV, people tend to fall lack of exercise and eat unhealthily. Another study shows that exercising for just 15 minutes a day can increase your life by up to three years.”
When reading this article, I couldn’t help worrying about you. You used to like watching TV. When a program that you liked was on, you couldn’t tear yourself away from it. You had your meals on the sofa in front of TV and you only went to toilet when it was advertisement time.
Now you live alone far away from home, I can’t always tell you to pay attention to your health. But I want to remind you that such a lifestyle is bad for your health. I hope you can make some changes to it little by little.
Love,
Mom
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Possible version:
From your letter, I come to know that ___________, especially watching it ____ __________, is really ___ for your______, _____ ____________can _______ our life. You are ___________ me and ____ me to ________ my bad habits.
watching TV
a long time
for
bad
health
while
doing exercise
lengthen
worried about
want
get rid of
Comparation:
The letter is mainly about Charlie’s mother tells Charlie the bad influence of watching TV so long, and shows that she was worring about charlie’s health.
In your letter, you said that watching TV for
a long time is really harmful to health and exercise everyday can build up my body. Therefore, you want me to keep away from my bad habits.
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立场错误;
要点不全;
语言欠准确。
要点基本齐全；
语言准确；
有适当的过渡语。
Summing up:
写概括，首先要利用好_______ , 抓住______，省去用来支撑主题句的具体细节,运用适当的_____，用25-35个词概括文章的大意。要注意语言的_______。
关键词
主题句
句型
准确性
【写作内容】
假如你是Charlie，读完信后，请给妈妈写一封回信。
1. ……
2. 以约120个词介绍自己的近况，并包括如下要点：
(1)读信后的感受；
(2)介绍目前的健康和锻炼情况；
(3)表达你自己的决心。
审题
时态:
以一般现在时为主体
I think you are right, Mom. So far, I had spent so many time to watching TV that I haven’t enough to finish the homeworks. And it caused that I lack of exercises.
Recently, I found that I couldn’t focus my mind in class because I always felt asleep. I feel my body status is between health and unhealth now. so I make up my mind to do exercises from now on.
Last, I promised you that I will get into a health lifestyle.
Version 1
Mom, after reading your letter, I’m lost in thought. What you said expresses your concerns to me, which makes me moved. I will fully consider your suggestion.
At present, I am in good condition and I have set a plan to exercise every day. First of all, in order to ensure I have enough time to study, I only watch TV in my spare time. Secondly, I always sleep and get up early, as the saying goes, “Early to bed and early to rise makes a man healthy, wealthy and wise.” Last but not least, I play basketball everyday, which is helpful to relax myself even makes my stronger and stronger. In a word, what I’m doing now enriches my experience and garantees my good health.
Now, Mom, I promise you that I will reduce the time in watching TV and change the lifestyle about it. So, you needn’t worry about me so much, and everything will go well.
Version 1
Possible version:
…
From your letter, I come to know that watching TV, especially watching it for a long time, is really bad for your health, while doing exercise can lengthen our life. You are worried about me and want me to get rid of my bad habits.
_________________________________for what I did in the past. I’m sorry that I made you worry all the time and I’m also grateful that you remind me of these details.
But actually I have a surprise for you—_______________
__________________________________________________. Influenced by my fellow classmates, I have been taking part in after-class exercise ________dancing, jogging, cycling and so on. Every morning, I go jogging for about twenty minutes. ________, on weekends I usually go climbing or go cycling with my friends. Because of exercise I’m in perfect health and I’m slim now as you can see from my pictures.
I’ve benefited a lot from exercise and______________. I will take good care of myself and I wish you healthy and happy every day!
Love,
Charlie
After reading your letter, I feel ashamed
I have already got rid of my bad habits of watching TV and doing little exercise.
such as
Besides
I will keep it up
Exemplifying in Skills
发表感想/感受的常用句型
When reading the story, my tears
rolled down.
2) I was shocked/deeply moved by the...
3) After reading the story,I was lost in
thought. I came to realize that...
4) I feel ashamed/sorry for what I did in the past.
……
●介绍目前的健康和锻炼情况:
Eg.
However, Mom, I want to tell you a good piece of news -- I have got rid of my bad habit of watching TV and set a plan to take exercise every day.
At present, I am in good condition and have been doing exercise regularly. …
As a matter of fact / In fact, …
……
●表达你自己的决心:
Eg.
From now on, I will make up my mind to …
To make you at ease, I promise (that) I will …
Getting benefit from exercise, I’m determined to keep it on/up. …
……
Practice
《能力解读与专项训练》
Page 215 写作综合训练12
第二节 读写任务
Step 1 审题，理解要点要求；
Step 2
根据要点，列一个写作提纲（写出主题句及拓展句之间的衔接词/过渡语，具体内容用省略号代替不用写概括）
Possible version:
……
(过渡+要点1主题句) ________________________
____________________ learning English is beneficial to both our life and our future careers. (过渡语) _____, to learn English well is very necessary for us students.
(过渡语) ________________________________, (要点2主题句)______________________________________
____________________________________. (列举理由一) _____________________, ……… (列举理由二) ___________________,………
(过渡+要点3主题句) ________________________
___________________________________ ……… (过渡语) _______________,………
After reading the passage, I come to realize that
Therefore
Since I was a primary school student
As far as I’m concerned,
Moreover/Furthermore
the best way to improve our oral English is that
Besides/In addition
To begin with/First of all
I have expected to be a … in the future and I think English will do help to my career
一般是读写任务的第一个要点，篇幅不宜太长，通常_____话即可。结构可以是：_______________。
Summary
What did you learn in this class
读写任务考查根据要点来写作。
我们通常按____来分段，其中每一段的第一
句最好是_____________，概括整段的内
容，让改卷老师一下就能抓到主要内容。
2. 用适当的______________把用来支撑中心句的拓展句衔接起来;
3. 注意段落之间的_________;
4. 读后感受
要点
中心句/主题句
衔接词/过渡语
衔接/过渡
2~3句
总体感受→解释说明
举例叙述 发表意见 列举做法 设身处地
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读写任务的考查要点分析表
读后感受
Assignment
According to the outline, finish the Task-based Writing on P215(写作综合训练12)
《朗声高考英语能力解读与专项训练》
Thank you!
