Dear Ann,
I’m glad to hear from you. You sound so worried about learning English, which makes me really want to help you out. Well, as teenagers, it’s common for us to have all kinds of problems. So don’t worry too much about that.
As for learning new words, I believe that finding the right way is the most important. First, you are supposed to pay attention to the relation between the spelling and pronunciation. That means you need to read the words loudly and correctly. Second, have you ever thought about making flashcards to help you memorize the words I think it’s a good idea to have a try. Then, if I were you, I would try to use these new words in my real life. You could hardly forget them if you do that. Last but not least, you’d better always remember to ask for help.
I wish what I say here could give you some help.
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
Sue(共11张PPT)
Topic: Help Solve Problems
By Sue from Chengguan Middle School
【九年级写作复习课】
1. You should (not)… / You could (always)…
2. Maybe you should…/You should (perhaps)…
3. If I were you, I’d…
4. Why not… /Why don’t you …
5. How / What about…
6. Have you thought about…
7. It’s a good idea to…
8. You’d better (not) do…
9. You’re (not) supposed to …
10. Doing sth. is also a great way to…
11. If you always try your best, you’ll…
Give advice/suggestions
Can you help solve the problems
Dear Sue,
It’s difficult to remember
new words. I always forget
them quickly. What should I do
Ann
Dear Sue,
You know I’m so shy that I only have a small circle of friends. And sometimes I feel lonely. I don’t know what to do.
Bill
Good beginnings:
It’s common to have such problems. Don’t worry. You’re not alone.
▲
As a teenager, I met the same problem as you. But now I’ve got over it.
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Sorry to hear that, but you needn’t worry about it.
▲
Beginning:
Body:
Ending:
( Offer comfort )
( Give advice )
( Write your hopes )
Best wishes!
Good luck!
I hope what I say here can help you.
…
How to write a letter to help solve problems
3 parts
假设你是Yan，你的笔友Tina给你写了封信，请你根据信的内容，给她写一封回信，谈谈你的看法，并帮她排忧解难。
要求: 1. 条理清楚，行文连贯；
2. 至少给出两条建议；
3. 词数：80~100。（给出部分不计入总词数）
Dear Yan,
I’m afraid I’ve got a big problem recently. My mother talks too much to me. She always tells me, “Be careful while crossing the street.” “Put on more clothes.” “Did you do a good job at school ” and so on. I’m annoyed. What shall I do
Tina
Practice
作文评分标准
第五档：18—20分
很好地完成了规定的写作任务。包含内容要点；语言基本无误；行文连贯，能使用修饰词或表示顺序、逻辑关系的连接词，表达清楚。使用较为丰富的语法结构和词汇。
第四档：15—17分
较好地完成了规定的写作任务。基本包含所有要点，行文基本连贯，格式基本正确，结构较为完整，语句正确；语言错误较少；表达基本清楚，书写较为规范。
第三档：11—14分
基本上完成了规定的写作任务。包含主要内容要点，结构欠完整，少数语句不通顺，语言虽有较多错误，但尚能达意。格式基本正确，书写基本规范。
第二档：6—10分
未能按要求完成规定的写作任务。只包含少数内容要点结构不完整，语言错误较多，影响意思表达；书写欠规范。
第一档：1—5分
只写出了几个单词或个别要点，错误百出，格式书写均不正确。
0分：白卷或文不对题。
Homework
Find good words and expressions
from your partner’s writing and
write them down.
2. Improve your own writing.
It’s common to have such problems/feel nervous before exams/… Don’t worry. You’re not alone.
2. As a teenager, I met the same problem as you.
But now I’ve got over it.
3. Sorry to hear that, but you needn’t worry about it.
4. There are lots of things you could do.
5. Here’s some advice that may work. /Here are some ideas/suggestions for you.
…
1. You should (not)… / You could…
2. Maybe you should…
3. If I were you, I’d…
3. Why not… / Why don’t you …
4. How / What about…
5. It’s a good idea to…
6. You’d better (not) do…
7. Remember to … / Try (not) to…
8. You’re (not) supposed to …
9. Doing sth. is also a great way to…
10. If you always try your best, you’ll ...
…
