使用说明
第一张幻灯片中的音乐为课前休息音乐，须鼠标单击播放；
第二张幻灯片中有五个菜单，为独个打开。
第六张幻灯片中“词汇”和“句型”为动作按钮(共19张PPT)
Writing
高考英语写作高分策略
导入
词汇与句型
行文的流畅
文章的思想
高考英语写作高分策略
总结
Which one is more beautiful
Which composition feels more attractive, why
漂亮的书写是写作得分的亮点
影响给分的因素之一：作文的卷面
在高考写作评分标准中，明确规定“如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。”
Which sentence do you think attracts the teachers
1.The character of this party is that it relates people’s lives
2.The most striking feature of this party is its traditionally close link with ordinary people’s lives.
3.Young people don’t want to watch TV ,so they pay attention to other forms of celebration.
4.Young people focus their attention on other forms of celebration instead of immersing themselves in TV.
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影响给分的因素之二：
文中所采用的语言材料
人靠衣装，文靠词装
A. 词汇的选择灵活新颖，出奇制胜；
B. 句型结构运用灵活多变;
高考写作评分标准第五档（21—25分）第三点要求：语言结构和词汇选用恰当和丰富。
词汇
句型
Practice
Find some similar words or phrases of the followings
good
2. think
3.clever
perfect excellent outstanding pleasant wonderful favorable magnificent
in one's opinion/view
hold the view that …
it is widely shared that …
wise bright smart intelligent cute
一些常用句型
There is no denying that……
There is a widespread concern that……
It goes without saying that……
We have reasons to believe that……
Taking all these factors into account, we may draw the conclusion that……
Practice
1.汶川在2008年发生了一次大地震。
A strong/big earthquake happened in Wenchuan in 2008.
There was a strong earthquake in Wenchuan in 2008.
A terrible earthquake hit/struck Wenchuan in 2008.
2.你八月十五的来信我今天早晨收到了.
I received your letter which was written on August 15th
this morning.
Your letter of August 15th reached/got to me this morning.
改变句子语序，实现句子形式多样化
1.He got excited when he heard the news.
→___ the news, he got excited.
2.The girl went home, because she was hungry and thirsty.
→_________________, the girl went home.
3.I studied Chinese, English and Physics at school.
→______________________________include Chinese, English and Physics .
4.It was early in the morning. Mr. Smith was in his garden. He was watering flowers.
→_________________, Mr. Smith was watering
_________________.
Hearing
Hungry and thirsty
The main subjects I studied at school
Early in the morning
in the garden
使用强势句式，增强语句表现力
1.We were glad to see crops and vegetables growing well.
→_______we were to see crops and vegetables growing well!
2. Radio broadcasts didn’t begin until 1920.
→It was__________________________________________.
3.He never speaks about his own family.
→Never__________________________________________.
4.A notice is saying ”Please Save Water” on the wall.
→On the wall______________________________________.
5.Though he is a child, he knows a lot.
→___________________________________.
How glad
not until 1920 that radio broadcasts began
does he speak about his own family
is a notice saying ”Please Save Water”
Child though/as he is, he knows a lot
影响给分的因素之三：行文的流畅
上下贯通、一气呵成
高考写作评分标准第五档（21—25分）第四点要求：有效采用不同连接手段，层次清楚。
正确而巧妙地使用好连接词
and,then,also,besides,morever,what's more furthermore,in addition,more than that...
1.表递进
２.表转折
３.表因果
４.表目的
５.表归纳
but,however,although,though,in spite of,despite after all,on the contrary,on the other hand...
because,since,therefore,so,hence,thus,consequently as a result/consequence,on account of...
in order that,so that,for the purpose of...
in general,in brief,in short,in conclusion,
in a word,on the whole...
如何将这几个讲述汶川地震的句子更好地连接起来，显得更有文采，得到高分呢？
Many houses and schools were destroyed. More than five million people are living a hard life now. The students there need help and schools should be built. Students can return to classes soon.
Practice
William Shakespeare (2008高考湖南卷书面表达) Do you know Hamlet Have you read The Merchant of Venice These two great works are both written by William Shakespeare, my favorite English writer and the man of all ages! Shakespeare, a son from a poor family, a man of little education, wrote plays and poems that are read all over the world, I like him because his comedies and tragedies bring me into a fantastic world; I love him because his poems let me enjoy the beauty of the English language; I admire him because his keen sights set me thinking and teach me how to lead a meaningful life! Since “Life is a stage”, we are actually all actors and actresses. On this stage, everyone had his own role to play. and I will try my best to play my role well.
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影响给分的因素之四：文章的思想
小结：
1. 作文的卷面； -----整洁的卷面
2. 文章的语言； -----丰富的词汇
3. 行文的流畅； -----流畅的结构
4. 文章的思想； -----独到的见解
Homework
在紧张的高三备考阶段，你班老师就如何提高复习效率这个问题，广泛征求学生的意见。假如你是李华，请根据以下提示，给英语老师写封信，表达你们的需求和建议。
1.教学进程不要太快，留足思考时间；
2.反复训练重要的知识点；
3.指导学习方法；
4.减少作业以保证质量。 注意：1.不要按提示逐句翻译；2.不少于120个单词。
