2012中考英语:五月冲刺(书面表达第1集共26页)
所有书面表达都有参考范文,选自2012年3月、4月全国各地的知名中学的模拟题、调研题。题材广泛,命题紧跟时代。
1、、书面表达【原创】******
假定你是李斌,最近你们班就“低碳”生活方式进行了讨论,你的美国朋友Jack来信向你询问讨论情况,请你用英语写封回信,简单地介绍以下讨论结果:
1.节水节电;
2.垃圾分类;
3.少用纸巾,重拾手帕;
4.步行,骑自行车或乘坐公交车。
参考词汇:低碳low carbon 纸巾tissue
注意:词数100以内(不含开头和结尾所给出的字数);可适当增加细节了,以使行文连贯;开头已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Dear Jack,
Thank you for your letter asking about our discussion on low carbon lifestyle. Here is something about it.
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Best wishes,
Li Bing
参考答案******
书面表达。
各档次的给分范围和要求:
第五档(很好): (15分-13分) 完全完成试题规定的任务。
① 信息全。② 语言可读性强,语言结构基本正确,有少量错误。
第四档(好): (12分-10分) 完全完成试题规定的任务。
① 有主要信息。② 语言基本正确,有一些错误。
第三档 (还好):(9分-7分)基本完成试题规定的任务。
① 有主要信息。 ② 语言尚可读,有一些错误,但尚能达意。
第二档(较差):(6分-4分) 未能恰当完成试题规定的任务。
① 信息不全。 ② 只有个别句子可读,语言错误较多,且不能达意。
第一档 (差): (3分-1分)未能完成试题规定的任务。
① 不能表达有关信息。 ② 只有几个有关单词,语言错误很多,不能达意。
注意:凡不写任何内容、抄袭其它内容、所写内容无法看清者一律给0分。
参考范文:
Dear Jack,
Thank you for your letter asking about our discussion on low carbon lifestyle. Here is something about it.
We can do a lot in our daily life to achieve the goal of low carbon life. First, we’d better turn off lights if possible and spend less time watching TV or surfing the Internet. Saving water also matters much. Besides, we should sort out the rubbish, hoping that we might recycle some, which will surely benefit us a great deal. ln addition, we suggest using handkerchiefs instead of tissues so that we can prevent more trees from being cut down. More importantly, when we go out, walking, riding bikes or taking buses should be our first choice, which contributes to a cleaner world.
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2、、书面表达(原创)******
一家英文杂志社正在调查中考后学生不同的放松方式。假如你是陈林,请结合表格中的信息并结合自身的看法,给杂志社写一封信。
Names
Ways
Reasons
Lihong
go on vacation
1.dream of it for a long time
2.relaxing
Zhenming
read more books
1. favorite hobby
2. get more knowledge
Chenlin
…..
1…..
2……
注意:1. 内容必须包括表格中的信息;
2. 开头已经为你写好,你只需接着写;
3. 词数:70个左右。开头和结尾部分的内容不计入总词数。
Dear editor,
I’m writing to tell you about how different middle school students relax themselves in the coming summer vacation after high school entrance examination._________________________-
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Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Chen Len
参考答案******
书面表达
Dear editor,
I’m writing to tell you about how different middle school students relax themselves in the coming summer vacation after high school entrance examination._Lihong would like to go on a vacation. Because she has dreamed of it for a long time and it is really relaxing. She believes that she will have a good time during the coming summer vacation. As for Zhenming, he will just stay at home and read more books. Reading is his favorite hobby and he wants to get more knowledge. I’m Chenlin. I hope I can play with my best friends. As we all know, we pay more attention to our study so that we don’t have more time to spend with our friends. Besides, we may go to different high schools. So we can remember each other forever.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Chen Len
评分标准******评分原则:
按5个档次给分。中档属于第三档(9分---7分)。
按学生所写内容和所用语言确定档次(内容分和语言分各占一半)。
总词数不足40个可在本题总得分中扣去1分;如书写整齐美观,可在本题总得分中加1分。
本题有一定的开放性,所以只要言之有理,就应给分。
内容要点:
1.存在的环境问题2方面(3分);
3.,采取怎样的保护措施,举例2—3方面 (4分)
(二)各档次的给分范围和要求:
第五档(很好):(15分-13分)完全完成试题规定的任务。
①问题和措施的信息全。②语言可读性强,语言结构基本正确,有少量错误。
第四档 (好):(12分-10分)完全完成试题规定的任务。
①有主要信息。②语言基本正确,有一些错误。
第三档 (还好): (9分-7分)基本完成试题规定的任务。
①有主要信息。②语言尚可读,有一些错误,但尚达意。
第二档 (较差): (6分-4分) 未能恰当完成试题规定的任务。
①信息不全。②只有个别句子可读,语言错误较多,且不能达意。
第一档 (差): (3分-1分) 未能完成试题规定的任务。
①不能表达有关信息。②只有几个有关单词,语言错误很多,不能达意。
注意: 凡不写任何内容、抄袭其他内容、所写内容无法看清者一律给0分.
3、、书面表达******
近年来,家乡发生了翻天覆地的变化……, 你一定会为家乡的日新月异倍感自豪,同时为目前的状况深感忧虑,请你为家乡的建设及环境的改善献计献策,好吗?请根据表格内的提示,写一篇题为 I love my hometown 的短文,字数:90字左右。
自豪
马路宽敞(wide),工厂林立;
交通便捷,火车站已投入使用8年;
忧虑
建房、修路,农田越来越少;
污染严重,鱼大量死亡;
建议
认识保护环境的重要性;
呼吁人们不要再毁坏农田;
…(至少再提一条建议)
Over the years, great changes have taken place in my hometown.
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参考范文******
书面表达
文章仅供参考,表达正确都给分:
Over the years, great changes have taken place in my hometown.The roads are wider and there are many more factories than before. It’s easy for people to travel to and from town. A railway station has been in service for eight years. I’m proud of that. At the same time, I am worried that there is less and less farmland because people are destroying farmland to build houses and roads. The pollution is so serious that a lot of fish have died. I suggest that people should realize the importance of protecting the environment. They shouldn’t destroy farmland any more. We should also stop the factories from polluting the rivers. I hope my hometown will become more and more beautiful.
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4、、书面表达(原创)******
假如你是刘磊,你生活在农村,你的笔友Peter将随团来你家做客一天,请你将以下安排发邮件告知。
上午活动安排
meet my parents
go fishing by the river near our village with me
harvest(收获)vegetables with me
下午活动安排
…
注意:1.内容必须包括上午的安排和下午的安排;
2.开头已经为你写好,你只需接着写;
3.词数:70个左右。开头和结尾部分内容不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
I am writing to tell you the schedule of your coming visit.
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I’m looking forward to seeing you soon.
Liu Lei
参考范文******
书面表达
Hi Peter,
I am writing to tell you the schedule of your coming visit. In the morning,you will meet my parents first,and then go fishing with me by the river near our village.After that,you will harvest vegetables with me.The vegetables are all fresh and healthy.My mother will cook delicious lunch.
In the afternoon,you can watch birds with me.There are many different kinds of birds near our house. Finally,you will learn how to feed chickens,we feed them three times a day.
I’m looking forward to seeing you soon.
Liu Lei
书面表达评分标准
本大题共15分,内容和语言占14分,字数1分。按5个档次给分。评分时根据其内容、语言表达的准确程度及其书写情况分档,最后确定分数。内容要点可用不同方式表达,对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分。
评分档次:
第1档:(13-15分)紧紧围绕中心话题,内容详实,表述准确完整,语言流畅,语法、拼写无误,书写工整。
第2档:(9-12分)能够围绕中心话题,表述比较清楚,语句较通顺完整,基本上无语法、拼写错误,书写工整。
第3档:(5~6分)能够围绕中心话题,表述基本清楚,语句基本通顺,有一些语法、拼写错误,但不影响句意理解,书写工整。
第4档:(4-8分)能够表述中心话题的一些方面,语句不够通顺完整,语法、拼写错误较多,书写不够工整。
第5档:(0-3分)对中心话题表述不清,语法、拼写错误多,不知所云,书写混乱。
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5、、书面表达******
航标杂志社正在做关于家庭成员中最喜欢的节日的调查。假如你是Alice ,请根据表中的信息并结合自己的看法,给杂志社写一封信。(改编)
Family members
Favourite festival
Reasons
Father
National Day
1. a seven-dayholiday
2. favourite season
Mother
Mid-Autumn Day
1. likes moon cakes
2. family party
Alice
1.
2.
注意:
1. 内容必须包括表格中的信息;
2. 开头已经为你写好,你只需要接着写;
3. 词数:70个词左右。 开头和结尾部分的内容不计入总词数。
英语试卷 第8页
Dear editor,
I am writing to tell you about what festival my family members like.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Alice
参考范文******书面表达
Dear editor,
I am writing to tell you about what festival my family members like. My father’s
favourite festival is National Day because he can have a seven-day holiday and
Autumn is his favourite season. My mother likes Mid-Autumn Day best because she likes
moon cakes and she likes having a big family party. My favourite festival is Christmas
Day. On Christmas Day, I can get some Christmas gifts and know more about Christmas.
That can help me learn English better.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Alice
(一)评分原则:
1.按5 个档次给分。中档属第三档(9分—7 分)。
2.按学生所写内容和用语言确定档次(内容分和语言分各占一半)。
3.总词数不足40个在本题总得分扣去1分;如书写整齐美观,可在本题总得分中加1分。
(二)各档次的给分范围及要求:
1.很好:(15分—13分)信息全;语言可读性强,语言结构基本正确,少量错误。
2.好: (12分—10分)有主要信息;语言基本正确,有一些错误。
3.还好:(9分—7分)有主要信息;语言尚可读,有一些错误,但尚能达意。
4.较差:(6分—4分)信息不全;只有个别句子可读,语言错误较多,且不能达意。
5.差: (3分—1分)不能表达有关信息;只有几个有关单词,语言错误很多,不能达意。
注意:凡不写任何内容、抄袭其它内容、所写内容无法看清者一律给0分。
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6、、1.If we don't save water,the last drop 0f water will be our tear.
环境污染是当今世界上最大的问题。根据提示,请你用自己的话说说应该怎样保护我们的水资源。
1.生命离不开水; 2.饮用水在减少; 3.水污染严重; 4.应该保护和再利用水。
注意:1.根据所给题目,请用英语写一篇短文或对话,分值相等;
2.写短文:词数不少于80个;
3.表达真实可行,内容连贯正确,语言流畅。
写作指导:
1. 分析所给提示的重点关联处:水的重要性、目前水的状况以及如何保护并再利用(recycle)水资源。
2. 直接翻译是不能很好地完成本文的写作的,因此和合理的安排和组织。一定要按照第一点的提示顺序来写作。
3. 注意字数的控制,同时因为是中考形式,“注意”的第四点一定要特别留意,尤其是“不得使用真实人名”,否则该试卷会按舞弊处理的。
One possible version: 参考范文
Water is very important to us.We can’t 1ive without water. But some people don’t care about this.They often waste a lot of drinking water.They pour dirty water into rivers or lakes, and they throw rubbish into them, too. So we have less and less drinking water. At the same time, many rivers and lakes are seriously po1luted.We must do something to stop the po1lution.we must protect the water.We must find ways to recycle it.If we don’t,the last drop of water will be a tear drop.
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7、、书面表达******
请根据以下内容帮助Linda完成给她朋友的信,谈谈怎么陪妈妈度过即将到来的母亲节。
1. 母爱是世界上最伟大的;
2. 母亲节(Mother’s Day)—般在五月的第二个星期日;
3. 孩子们用各种方式让母亲感受到对她的爱,如:送鲜花、贺卡和礼物给母亲;帮助母亲做家务, 让母亲休息—天等;
4. 请再提出两个庆祝母亲节的建议。
要求: 1)词数90左右。
2) 短文必须包括所有要点,不要逐词翻译,可适当发挥,使文章连贯,通顺。
Dear Wendy,
I’m very happy to hear from you. _______________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Lots of love
Linda
书面表达评分标准:
1.评分时先根据短文内容和语言表达,初步确定其所属档次,然后根据该档次的要求衡量,确定或调整档次,最后给分。
2.本大题满分为15分,不设小数点以下分值。按五个档次给分。
3.文中若出现真实的人名、校名,扣2分。
4.需提出两个庆祝母亲节的建议。
一档
13-15分
包含所有要点,应用了较丰富的语言结构和词汇, 用词准确、语法正确、句子通顺、行文连贯、表达清楚,具有较强的语言运用能力。
二档
10-12分
基本包含所有要点,应用了较丰富的语言结构和词汇,句子较通顺,表达较清楚,但有少量错误。
三档
7-9分
内容包含了多数要点,语言表达过于简单,句子不够通顺,有部分语言错误,基本上不影响总体理解。
四档
4-6分
只包含了少数要点,语言不规范,句子无条理,行文不连贯,语言错误严重,影响理解。
五档
0-3分
只写出与要求的内容相关的一些信息词语,语言错误多。
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8、、书面表达 ******
一家美国杂志社正在调查不同国家孩子周末活动情况。假如你是王凯,请根据表中的信息并结合自身看法,给杂志社写一封信。
Names & Countries
Weekend activities
Reasons
Justin(India)
Helping with the farm work
1.ket parents relax
2.a poor family
Norma(Australia)
Taking a trip to the beach
1.have little homework
2.so much to do and see
Wang Kai(China)
…
1. …
2. …
注意:
1.内容必须包括表格中的信息;
2.开头已经为你写好,你只需接着写;
3.词数:至少70词。开头和结尾部分的内容不计入总词数。
Dear editor,
I am writing to tell you about how children from different countries spend theirweekends.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Wang Kai
(原创)
书面表达参考范文******
Dear editor,
I am writing to tell you about how children from different countries spend their weekends. Justin comes from a poor family in India. On weekends, he usually helps parents with the farm work. He wants his parents to relax. Norma is an Australian girl. On weekends, she has little homework to do so she usually takes a trip to the beach with her friends. She thinks there is so much to do and see on the beach. As for me, I usually do some sports and read some books after finishing my homework. I think we should take part in some relaxing and pleasant activities on weekends.
What do you think?
Looking forward to you reply.
Yours,
Wang Kai
评分细则
1、按5个档次给分。中档属第三档(9分—7分)。
2、按学生所写内容和所用语言确定档次(内容分和语言分各占一半)。
3、总词数不足的在本题总分中扣去1分;如书写整齐美观,可在本题总得分中加1分。
4、本题有一定的开放性,所以只要言之有理,就应给分
各档次的给分范围和要求:
第五档(很好):(15—13分)完全完成试题规定的任务。
信息全。 2)语言可读性强,语言结构基本正确,有少量错误。
第四档(好):(12—10分)完全完成试题规定的任务。
有主要信息。 2)语言基本正确,有一些错误。
第三档(还好):(9—7分)基本完成试题规定的任务。
有主要信息。 2)语言尚可读,有一些错误,但尚能达意。
第二档(较差):(6—4)未能恰当完成试题规定的任务。
信息不全。 2) 只有个别句子可读,语言错误较多,且不能达意。
第一档(差):(3—1分)未能完成试题规定的任务。
1)不能表达有关信息。2)只有几个有关单词,语言错误很多,不能达意。
注意:凡不写任何内容、抄袭其他内容、所写内容无法看清者一律给0分。
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9、、书面表达(根据初三学生现实自编.)
最近,学校里经常出现学生之间争吵的事件,你们和你们的老师就同学之间发生矛盾时,是否向老师汇报一事交换了意见,并各自发表了自己的观点。现在请你参照表内所提供的信息,写一篇英语短文。
Your teacher’s ideas
Your ideas
1.not old enough to solve the problem by yourselves
1. …
2.easier to make things worse
2. …
3.share everything with teachers
3. …
1.所写内容必须包括表格中老师的观点和你的至少三个观点;
2.开头已写好,不计入总词数;
3.词数:80个左右。
Recently we’re had a discussion with our teachers about whether we should make them know the quarrels between our classmates.
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评分标准
评分原则:
按5个档次给分。中档属第三档(9分—7分)。
按学生所写内容和所用语言确定档次(内容分和语言分各占一半)。
总词数不足40个可在本题总得分中扣去1分;如书写整齐美观,可在本题总得分中加1分。
本题有一定的开放性,所以只要言之有理,就应给分。
(一) 内容要点:
1.应包括表格中的所有信息。(5分,每点1分)
2.自己的建议(至少三条)。(2分)
(二)各档次的给分范围和要求:
第五档 (很好):(15~l 3分) 完全完成试题规定的任务。
1)信息全。 2)语言可读性强,语言结构基本正确,有少量错误。
第四档 (好):(12~10分) 完全完成试题规定的任务。
有主要信息。 2)语言基本正确,有一些错误。
第三档 (还好):(9~7分) 基本完成试题规定的任务。
1)有主要信息。 2)语言尚可读,有一些错误,但尚能达意。
第二档 (较差):(6~4分) 未能恰当完成试题规定的任务。
1)信息不全。 2)只有个别句子可读,语言错误较多,且不能达意。
第一档 (差): (3~1分) 未能完成试题规定的任务。
1)不能表达有关信息。2)只有几个有关单词,语言错误很多,不能达意。
注意:凡不写任何内容、抄袭其他内容、所写内容无法看清者一律给0分。
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10、、书面表达******
假如你叫张蒙,班主任王老师想了解班级同学的状况,以便有针对性地对学生进行考前心理疏导。请你根据下面的内容要求,给班主任王老师写封e-mail,说明自己的情况,并请她给你提一些建议。
内容要求:
1、学习任务重,睡眠不足,缺少体育活动。同学间缺乏沟通和交流。
2、在家不允许看电视、上网、听音乐等。
(参考词汇:have a lot of homework to do , not have enough time to sleep, do sports,talk/communicate, be not allowed to ,surf the Intenet, listen to music)
注意:
1、字数80左右。文中不得出现真实的校名、姓名。
2、开头和结尾已给出。不计入总词数。
From: zhangmeng@163.com To:chlw524@sina.com Subject:problems Date:March 23
Dear Ms. Zhang,
I’m very glad to write to you.
Best wishes,
Zhang Meng
参考范文
Ⅹ.书面表达(15分)
From: zhangmeng@163.com To:chlw524@sina.com Subject:problems Date:March 23
Dear Ms. Zhang,
I’m very glad to write to you. I have a lot of troubles these days . Every day I have a lot of homework to do at school. I don’t have enough time to sleep. I nearly have no time to do sports. My friends and I can hardly find time to talk or play together.
When I get back home from school, I’m not allowed to watch TV, surf the Internet or listen to my favorite music. I feel worried about them. I don’t know what I should do. Could you please give me some suggestions?
Best wishes,
Zhang Meng
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11、书面表达******
总结是有效学习的重要组成部分,每个同学都应重视和培养这方面的能力。今天的英语考试已经接近尾声了,经过近两个小时的答题体验,请总结一下自己在英语学习中中取得的进步和存在的不足,并对今后的英语学习拟定一些计划。下面的提示句可以帮助你更好地完成写作。
要求:1、紧扣主题,观点正确,行文连贯、流畅。2、提示句需在文中出现。3、字数80— 100左右。
I have just had a very… time in this English examination. I found I have made great progress in… But there is still… to learn further. In the future, I will try my best in…
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One possible version:
I have just had a very wonderful time in this English examination. I'm happy that I have done it well. I can finish it without effort. Because my English often gives me a hand, he teaches me how to study. Many students also help me with my homework. If I have problems with it, my classmates are willing to help me. I found I have made great progress in English. But there is still a lot to learn future. Sometimes I can't pronounce the word correctly. So I will communicate with my students, friends, parents. In the future, I will try my best in it. I believe my English will be better and better.
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12、、书面表达******
人们对于学生网上交友持不同意见。请你用英语写一篇关于学生网上
交友的短文,介绍人们的不同观点,并表达自己的看法。
赞成的理由
反对的理由
你的看法
1.广交朋友
1.浪费时间
?
2.可自由表达思想
2.影响学习
3.有利于外语学习
3.可能上当受骗
注: 80字左右。(书写不整齐者,酌情扣分。)
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One possible version【参考范文】
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Should students make friends on line? Some people say yes. The internet helps make many friends. Chatting on line, students can more freely express their feelings and opinions, and even get
help with their foreign language studies.
Others, however, think students should not. They say making friends on line is a waste of time, which
should be spent more meaningfully on study. Besides, some students get cheated on line. It is my opinion that students should place their study, health and safety before other things. As for friendship, we can readily find it in our classmates and other people around us.
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13、、书面表达 (共2篇,第一篇满分10分;第二篇满分15分,共25分)
1. 根据下面提示写一篇日记。? (1)今天早晨你骑自行车去上学,在路上你听到附近河中有小女孩的呼救声,就跳下自行车,跳入河中救起了小女孩,但由于迟到受到老师的批评。? (2)下午,小女孩的父亲到校感谢,老师知道原因后,向你道歉,并号召大家向你学习。? (3)时间:10月7日,星期一。? (4)天气:小雨。? (5)词数60-80。2.紧张的初中学习生活就要结束了,你即将迎来一个轻松的暑假。请根据下面方框内的提示写一篇短文,谈谈你的假期计划。
暑? 假? 计? 划
1、好好休息,学会放松
2、读书,因为读书既有趣又能学到很多知识
3、陪父母聊天,帮他们做家务
5、……
注意:1、词数80~100;
2、文中不得出现真实的地址和姓名;
3、方框内容不必逐字翻译,可适当发挥。
参考词汇:知识 knowledge,? 社会活动 social activities
参考范文******书面表达 (满分25分)
第一篇******
1. October 7, Monday Rainy? This morning I went to school by bike. On my way to school, I heard a little girl crying for help in the river nearby. I jumped off the bike and into the river. I swam up to the girl and brought her to the bank. When I got to school, the class had already begun. My teacher was very angry with me.? In the afternoon, the girl's father came to school to thank me for saving his daughter. When my teacher knew this, she said sorry to me and asked all the students to learn from me. I was glad that I had done a good deed.
第二篇
2. One possible version:
The summer holiday is coming. I’m going to have a good rest and learn to relax myself. I will read more useful books because reading more books is not only interesting but also can make me learn more knowledge. I will try to spend more time in chatting with my parents and help them to do some housework. I am going to take part in the social activities so that I can know more about the society. If possible, I’d like to go to Shanghai for a visit of the World Expo. I’m sure I’ll have an interesting and meaningful summer holiday.
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14、、书面表达(原创)****** 假设你叫李明,暑假后就要进入高中(senior school)学习。你的父母亲觉得你应该住校学习,但是你觉得住校与住在家里都各有利弊,所以你想通过e-mail 征求英国笔友Bill 的意见。住校与住在家里的优点包括住宿、饮食、交通等几个方面。
Staying at home
Staying at school
住宿
have own room
…
饮食
have better food
…
交通
have to ride to school
…
注意:1、字数控制在80左右; 2、不要出现你的真实姓名; 3、开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。 Dear Bill, How is everything going? Something is troubling me very much. So I’m writing to ask for
your advice.
I’m going to study in the senior school in September. I can live either at school or at home.
It’s so hard for me to make a decision. I’ll be very glad if you could give me some suggestions. Please write back soon.
Yours, Li Ming
书面表达【参考范文】****** Dear Bill, How is everything going? Something is troubling me very much. So I’m writing to ask for your advice. I’m going to study in the senior middle school in September. I can live either at school or at home.
My parents think I should live at school. But I have different ideas. At home, I have my own room. So I can have a good sleep. However, I have to share one room with 5-6 students at school. Maybe I can’t sleep well. It’s a problem. Although I can have better food at home, I enjoy eating with my classmates. I think it’s great fun and I can make more friends. If I live at home, I’ll have to ride to school. It’s a waste of time and not safe. It’s so hard for me to make a decision. I’ll be very glad if you could give me some suggestions. Please write back soon. Yours,
Li Ming
书面表达评分原则: 1. 按5个档次给分。中档属第三档(9分一7分)。 ' 2. 按学生所写内容和所用语言确定档次(内容分和语言分各占一半)。 3. 总词数不足40个可在本题总得分中扣去1分;如书写整齐美观,可在本题总得分中加1分。 4. 本题有一定的开放性,所以只要言之有理,就应给分。 (一) 内容要点: 1. 住校的利弊(饮食、住宿、交通)(3分) 2. 不住校的利弊(饮食、住宿、交通)(3分) (二) 各档次的给分范围和要求: 第五档(很好):(15分一13分)完全完成试题规定的任务。 ①信息全。②语言可读性强,语言结构基本正确,有少量错误。 第四档(好):(12分一10分)完全完成试题规定的任务。 ①有主要信息。②语言基本正确,有一些错误。 第三档(还好):(9分一7分)基本完成试题规定的任务。 ①有主要信息。②语言尚可读,有一些错误,但尚能达意。 第二档(较差):(6分一4 分)未能恰当完成试题规定的任务。 ①信息不全。②只有个别句子可读,语言错误较多,且不能达意。 第一档(差):(3分一l分)未能完成试题规定的任务。 ①不能表达有关信息。②只有几个有关单词,语言错误很多,不能达意。 注意:凡不写任何内容、抄袭其他内容、所写内容无法看清者一律给0分。
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15、、书面表达。(原创)******
假设你叫Li Hua。上星期,你和同学们在班队课上一起讨论一个话题:Low carbon----Make the world greener.现在你根据同学们的观点和你自己的观点,用英语写一篇关于这次讨论的汇报材料。
Your classmates’ ideas
Your ideas
Save water and electric.
Don’t use plastic bags.
Form the good habit of saving energy.
…….
▲ 开头和结尾部分已写好。
▲ 可适当增加谈论话题时常用的话语,使所写内容连贯。
▲ 所写内容必须包括上面表格中同学的观点和你自己的至少三个观点。
▲ 词数:70左右。
Last week, I had a discussion with my classmates . The topic of the discussion is “ Low carbon----Make the world greener.” __________________________________
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Last week, I had a discussion with my friend, Alice on the Internet. The topic of the discussion is “Low carbon----Make the world greener.”
Alice thinks water is the basic source of life, so we should protect water. It’s necessary to forbid shops and supermarkets from offering free plastic bags. When shopping, we can use cloth bags or baskets instead of plastic bags as we used to. We should form the good habit of saving energy in our daily life.
So in my opinion, we must take effective measures to save our planet. First, we should go to work on foot or by bus instead of driving a car if possible. Second, we shouldn’t pour waste water into the river. Third, plant more trees, because trees can make the air clean and make the life colorful.
评分原则:
按5个档次给分。中档属第三档(9分—7分)。
按学生所写内容和所用语言确定档次(内容分和语言分各占一半)。
总词数不足40个可在本题总得分中扣去1分;如书写整齐美观,可在本题总得分中加1分。
本题有一定的开放性,所以只要言之有理,就应给分。
(一) 内容要点:
1.应包括表格中的所有信息。(5分,每点1分)
2.自己的建议(至少三条)。(2分)
(二)各档次的给分范围和要求:
第五档 (很好):(15~l 3分) 完全完成试题规定的任务。
1)信息全。 2)语言可读性强,语言结构基本正确,有少量错误。
第四档 (好):(12~10分) 完全完成试题规定的任务。
有主要信息。 2)语言基本正确,有一些错误。
第三档 (还好):(9~7分) 基本完成试题规定的任务。
1)有主要信息。 2)语言尚可读,有一些错误,但尚能达意。
第二档 (较差):(6~4分) 未能恰当完成试题规定的任务。
1)信息不全。 2)只有个别句子可读,语言错误较多,且不能达意。
第一档 (差): (3~1分) 未能完成试题规定的任务。
1)不能表达有关信息。2)只有几个有关单词,语言错误很多,不能达意。
注意:凡不写任何内容、抄袭其他内容、所写内容无法看清者一律给0分。
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16、、书面表达(原创)******
近来,智能手机越来越受人们的青睐,但是其利弊也引发了很多争议。在此,抽取杭州居民50人为调查对象,调查结果如下图。
请你根据所给提示,用英语作简要介绍并标明自己的观点。
注意:(1)所写内容必须包括表中各方观点并进行合理拓展,可以适当增加细节,要求意思连贯、语句通顺;
(2) 词数80左右,短文的开头已给出(不计入总词数)。
Recently, the smart phone is more and more popular with people, but the topic is also disputed, different people have different opinions. Take 50 local people in Hangzhou as example.
书面表达【参考范文】******
Recently, the smart phone is more and more popular with people, but the topic that if it’s good or not is also disputed, different people have different opinions. Take 50 local people in Hangzhou as the example.
Most people think that the smart phone is so convenient that they can surf the Internet whenever and wherever they need. But some parents worry that it is not good for their children, because the students would like to spend a lot time playing games, not searching useful information. And a few ones say that they can’t afford one smart phone because of the high price. In addition, five of them insist that the smart phone can make people feel relaxed after tired work.
In my opinion, the smart phone will be tended to be accepted by people in the future, for it is a good helper in our daily life.
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17、、书面表达(原创)******
一家英文杂志社正在调查不同的孩子在Volunteer Week活动中的情况。假如你是马琳,请根据表中的信息并结合自身的看法,给杂志社写一封信。
Country
Activities
Reasons
Lucy(Australia)
go to old people’s home
be lonely
2. like working inside
Bob (UK)
help clean up the city street
be dirty
2. like shopping
Ma Lin (China)
…
1.
2.
注意: 1.内容必须包括表格中的信息;
2.开头已经为你写好,你只需接着写;
3.词数:70个左右。开头和结尾部分的内容不计入总词数。
Dear editor,
I am writing to tell you about what children from different countries do during the Volunteer Week.
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书面表达【参考范文】******
Possible version
Dear editor,
I am writing to tell you about what children from different countries do during the Volunteer Week. Lucy from Australia wants to go to old people’s home because she likes working inside. And she thinks the old people there feel lonely. So she wants to talk with them and cheer them up. As for the British boy Bob, he wants to help clean up the city streets because he likes shopping. And he finds the streets are often dirty. I come from China….
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours
Lin Chao
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18、、书面表达。******
目前,学校存在少数学生考试作弊现象。我校小看拟对此现象向同学们征稿,标题是My opinion on Cheating in Examination。请根据下列提示用英语写一篇征文稿。
内容要点如下:
主要原因
平时不用功、懒惰
取悦父母、老师
个人看法
作弊不对,违反校规。
要诚实,努力学习
参考词汇:cheat (v) 作弊
要求:
词数:80词左右。
短文标题与开头已为你写好,不计入总词数。
文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations
It is known to us all that some students cheat in examinations at school.
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My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations
It is known to us all that some students cheat in examinations at school. Why does it happen? On the one hand, I think that they cheat in the examinations mainly because they usually didn’t listen to the teacher carefully and make notes well in class, after class they didn’t work hard at their lessons , either. On the other hand, they want to get high grades to make their parents or teachers happy, though they know it’s not right to do so.
Cheating in the examinations is a bad thing. First, cheating is against the school rules. Secondly, as a student, we should be honest. So if you have ever cheated before, I think you should stop doing that again. You can get your high grades by working hard. You will be happy only when you work hard alone.
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19、、书面表达
假如你是泉州清源山风景区的管理人员,请你用英语为游客订出一些规章制度,内容包括:环境卫生保护、森林防火安全、乱涂乱刻(crave)、树木保护、人身安全等,至少5句。
Notice to the Tourists
1.
2.
3.
4.
5.
6.
(参考答案:
Please keep the place clean and tidy.
Don’t throw rubbish onto the ground.
No smoking is allowed.
Don’t use fire on the mountains.
Don’t cut down the trees
Don’t crave on the trees. Please be careful when you climb up and down the mountains. )
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暑假就要到了,某社团将组织部分青年参加一些志愿活动。请你根据面前的海报和你个人特长,选择参加其中两项活动,谈谈你选择它们的原因以及你准备具体做些什么?(词数80左右)
☆★☆ Visit Old People’s Home
☆★☆ Teach in the Village School
☆★☆ Help Clean Up the City Parks
☆★☆ Help Sick Children in the Hospital
Come and join us!
(参考答案:
Dear Sir,
I am a middle student. I want to be a volunteer to help people. I think I’m the person who can get on well with the old. Although I’m busy, I still want to visit Old People’s Home as a volunteer. More than doing some cleaning for the old, performing a play with my friends is another thing I can do.
If I had another chance, I would help sick children in the hospital. I love children and I plan to put this love to good use by working in the hospital with sick children.
In a word. I would like to help people who need help. Please call me up—62878888.
Warm-hearted
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童年是难忘的,有快乐、有悲伤。请你以“Childhood Memories”为题,写一篇短文,和大家一起分享你童年中的喜怒哀乐吧!词数:80左右
温馨提示:childhood n. 童年
Childhood Memories
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(参考答案:
I remember my childhood just like yesterday. There was a river around our village. When summer came, I often swam there with my friends. We played with water, and sometimes caught fishes. When we felt tired, we had fun looking for something to eat in the field nearby. Once we were found to pick tomatoes, the farmer shouted to us while we ran away as fast as possible. At that time, I had nothing to worry about. But now, everything has changed!
Goodbye, my childhood! How I wish I could meet you again!)
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你校与英国某中学结成姊妹学校,英方校刊编辑(Ann)来信了解你校的课外活动情况及你们的建议,请你根据下面提供的内容用英语写一篇80词左右的短文,(文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数)
生词:兴趣小组 interest group 活动 activity
活动时间:4:50 – 5:50
主要内容:(1)体育类:篮球、足球;
(2)兴趣小组活动: 绘画 歌舞 电脑等;
(3)英语角 (周三下午)。
建议:(1)增加课外活动时间;
(2)减少作业量。
Dear Ann,
I’ like to tell you something about the out- of-class activity in our school. We usually _______
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(参考答案:
I’ like to tell you something about the out- of-class activity in our school. We usually have activities from 4:50—5:50 in the afternoon. We have different kinds of activities. Some students are interested in sports. They play basketball and football. We also have some special interest groups, such as drawing, singing and dancing. And now, We computer games are the most popular. On Wednesday afternoon we go to English Corner. We like speaking English there. We hope to spend more time on such activities and less time on homework.)
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22、、书面表达******
下面是Sarah给Sue的e-mail, 请你仔细阅读原文, 然后根据你的情况,以Sue为名给Sarah发一封e-mail. 字数在80个词左右。
请注意:1. 不得写出自己或学校的真实名称;2. 不得照抄原文。
(参考答案:
Dear Sarah,
Thanks for your e-mail. I’m glad you are enjoying your holiday. Now let me tell you something about my holiday. I didn’t do well in my maths exam, so the most important thing for me in the holiday is that I must spend most of the time on it. I’ll do some more exercises. When I have time, I’ll visit some friends. Also I’ll help my parents with their farm work. After the farm work we will make a trip to Yellow Mountains. I believe we’ll enjoy it.
I hope you can come to see me sometime in the holiday.
Sue)
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