Unit 7 Seasons
Task
Enjoy a video.
Learn about the winter in Harbin and talk about
four seasons.
Learn how to write a similar article on your
favourite season by yourselves.
Learning aims
Topic:
1. The article is written to introduce a/an _______.
A. place B. season C. sport
Tense:
2. The main tense used in the article is _______.
A. the past tense (一般过去式)
B. the simple future tense(一般将来时)
C. the simple present (一般现在时)
Look through and choose.
I love winter
Winter is my favorite season. It is very cold and everyone has to wear thick warm clothes, but I always enjoy the winter here in Harbin.
The temperature is usually below zero and it is often snowy. Everything is covered in deep white snow, and the lakes and rivers are frozen. During this season, you cannot see beautiful flowers or green trees, but the land is quiet and beautiful.
My friends and I love playing outside in winter. It is exciting to have big snowball fights. We throw snowballs at each other, screaming and laughing. We also make snowmen and use carrots for their noses. They look funny. Moreover, I enjoy the Ice Festival each year. There are beautiful ice lanterns everywhere. It is really wonderful.
Winter is great.
Topic sentence
All the contents(内容) should be about the topic.
Topic:
1. The article is written to introduce a/an _______.
A. place B. season C. sport
Tense:
2. The main tense used in the article is _______.
A. the past tense (一般过去式)
B. the simple future tense(一般将来时)
C. the simple present (一般现在时)
Look through and choose.
I love winter
Winter is my favorite season. It is very cold and everyone has to wear thick warm clothes, but I always enjoy the winter here in Harbin.
The temperature is usually below zero and it is often snowy. Everything is covered in deep white snow, and the lakes and rivers are frozen. During this season, you cannot see beautiful flowers or green trees, but the land is quiet and beautiful.
My friends and I love playing outside in winter. It is exciting to have big snowball fights. We throw snowballs at each other, screaming and laughing. We also make snowmen and use carrots for their noses. They look funny. Moreover, I enjoy the Ice Festival each year. There are beautiful ice lanterns everywhere. It is really wonderful.
Winter is great.
Para 1
Para 2
Para 3
Para 4
a. How does the writer find the winter?
b. What activities do people love doing in winter?
c. What’s the weather like and what do the views(景色)look like?
d. What is the writer’s favourite season?
Para 1
Para 2
Para 3
Para 4
Look through and match.
I love winter
Winter is my favorite season. It is very cold and everyone has to wear thick warm clothes, but I always enjoy the winter here in Harbin.
The temperature is usually below zero and it is often snowy. Everything is covered in deep white snow, and the lakes and rivers are frozen. During this season, you cannot see beautiful flowers or green trees, but the land is quiet and beautiful.
My friends and I love playing outside in winter. It is exciting to have big snowball fights. We throw snowballs at each other, screaming and laughing. We also make snowmen and use carrots for their noses. They look funny. Moreover, I enjoy the Ice Festival each year. There are beautiful ice lanterns everywhere. It is really wonderful.
Winter is great.
Para 2:
Weather & Views
Para 3:
Activities & The festival
Para 4: The writer’s feeling
Clear structure
Para 1: The writer’s favourite season
Structure(结构)
Beginning
The writer’s favourite season
Main body
Weather
Views
Activities
Festivals
Ending
The writer’s feeling about his/her favourite season
People have_________________.
They ________________ each other.
They also _____________ and ____________
their noses.
There are beautiful ice lanterns at the __________ everywhere.
It is cold and snowy. The temperature is usually _______.
Everything ___________ deep white snow.
The rivers and lakes are ______.
The land is quiet and beautiful.
below zero
is covered in
frozen
Para 1
Para 2
Para 3
Para 4
Ice Festival
use carrots for
make snowmen
throw snowballs at
big snowball fights
Contents (内容)
snowy
below zero and be frozen
be covered in deep snow
The land is quiet and beautiful
make snowmen
have snowball fights
throw snowballs at …
go skiing/skating
enjoy ice lanterns everywhere
the Spring Festival
the Lantern Festival
the winter holiday
…
Rich content
Pair work:
A:What’s your favourite season?
B: ….
A:Why do you like…best?
B: Because….
warm, windy and bright
turn green
colourful and beautiful flowers
bees and butterflies
spring rain
take off thick clothes
fly kites
plant trees
go on picnics
Tree-planting Day
May Day
…
Rich content
Pair work:
A:What’s your favourite season?
B: ….
A:Why do you like…best?
B: Because….
hot
bright sunshine
beautiful lotus(荷花)
hide from the Sun
eat ice cream to feel cool
play water sports
go swimming
the Dragon Boat Festival
the summer holiday
…
Rich content
Pair work:
A:What’s your favourite season?
B: ….
A:Why do you like…best?
B: Because….
cool and dry
turn yellow and brown
harvest time
go hiking
go on picnics
enjoy the maple leaves
Teachers’ Day
National Day
Mid–autumn Festival
…
Rich content
Pair work:
A:What’s your favourite season?
B: ….
A:Why do you like…best?
B: Because….
I love winter
Winter is my favorite season. It is very cold and everyone has to wear thick warm clothes, but I always enjoy the winter here in Harbin.
The temperature is usually below zero and it is often snowy. Everything is covered in deep white snow, and the lakes and rivers are frozen. During this season, you cannot see beautiful flowers or green trees, but the land is quiet and beautiful.
My friends and I love playing outside in winter. It is exciting to have big snowball fights. We throw snowballs at each other, screaming and laughing. We also make snowmen and use carrots for their noses. They look funny. Moreover, I enjoy the Ice Festival each year. There are beautiful ice lanterns everywhere. It is really wonderful.
Winter is great.
Fine language
Conjunctions
连词
…, and ….
…, but ….
Although…,….
…because….
However,….
Every time/When…,….
not only…but also…
neither…nor…
…
Transitions
过渡词
besides, what’s more, moreover…
Although winter means cold weather, I love it all the same.
In autumn, we have a school trip. We also have lots of fun picking fruits. Moreover, we enjoy the Mid-autumn festival.
Every time it snows, I will remember an old saying, "If winter comes, can spring be far behind?”
Fine language
Conjunctions&transitions
It's exciting to have big snowball fights. We throw snowballs at each other, screaming and laughing. We also make snowmen and use carrots for their noses. They look funny.
It's a perfect time to have big snowball fights. We have fun not only throwing snowballs at each other but also making snowmen together. In order to make our snowmen look funny, we use carrots for their noses.
Which one is better?
Fine language
Different expressions
In winter, trees and flowers forget to grow.
In winter, trees and flowers stop growing.
personification(拟人手法)
Compare and enjoy the beauty of good words.
A:
B:
Which one is better?
A:
B:
In autumn, I like watching golden leaves fall down from the tree.
In autumn, I like watching golden leaves dance in the air.
Fine language
My favourite season
Feelings
Weather &Views
The temperature is usually …
and it is often snowy/ windy …
During this season, you can/ cannot …
Para 2
Write
… is my favourite season.
It is warm/ hot/ cool/ cold ...
I always enjoy it.
My friends and I often …
I enjoy (festival) …
The season is great./…
Para 3
Para 4
Activities & Festivals
Para 1
Favourite season
Tips:
1. Use the simple present tense(一般现在时).
2. Tell your favourite season from three parts: the season, reasons and feelings.
3. Try to use transitions to make the article more fluent(流畅的) and fine expressions to make the article more attractive (有吸引力的).
Work in groups of 5 and choose your favourite season.
Four of you each write one of the four paragraphs.
The fifth one can copy the article into the poster.
Choose a leader in your group to share your article in front of the class.
Writing
今年的学校英语节活动中,八年级同学将进行写作比赛
题目是My favourite season,优秀作品将以海报形式展出。
Show time
What makes a good article?
1
2
3
Para 1 Your favouite season
Para 2 Weather & Sights
Para 3 Activities & Festivals
Para 4 Your feelings
Think of as many ideas as you can
(1) Different expressions
(2) Conjunctions&Transitions
(3) Correct tense, spelling ...
Why?
To be a thinker
To be an organized writer
To be a careful writer
Love nature!
Enjoy your life!
Nature is full of beauty.
We should protect nature and make our world more beautiful.
You must:
A. Write an article about one of the four seasons
including weather, views, activities and your feeling.
And then polish your article according to the given
writing evaluation table(评价表).
If you can:
B. Make a poster to share your article.
Homework
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分值
满分
得分
Structure
1.
Do you try to write from three parts: the favourite season, reasons and feelings?
3
Content
2.
Are all the paragraphs about your favourite season?
4
3.
Are there any creative(创新的) ideas and more details(细节) about the favourite season?
3
Language
4.
Do you use the simple present tense and the first person?
2
5.
Do you try to use proper transitions(过渡语) to make the article more fluent(流畅的)?
3
6.
Do you use good expressions to make the article more attractive(有吸引力的)?
2
Others
7.
Is your handwriting(书写) beautiful and tidy? Do you pay more attention to the correct spellings, capital letters and punctuation marks?
3
总分
20
What do you think of this article?
The writing evaluation table(评价表)
Thank you!