高考英语读后续写之肖像描写 学案（含答案）

中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
专题课后续写-肖像描写
学习目标：
1.掌握关于外貌细节描写的高级词汇，句型等表达；
2.提升读后续写的细节描写水平；
学习方法：
肖像描写的思维导图
2.了解外貌描写的作用：烘托人物形象，使读者对人物有更清晰的感受；反映人物心理；可以推动故事情节发展，进一步引出下文。
从脸型、头发、五官等入手。
脸型（face）:
round?圆的;
thin?瘦的;
long?长的;
square?方的。?
头发（hair）:
(1)?发型（hair
style）:
straight?直的;
curly?卷发的;
pigtails?辫子;
crew
cut?平头;
bald秃头的。
Her
hair
is
brown
and
curly.
她有着一头棕色而卷曲的头发。
(2)?发色(hair
color):
jet-black?乌黑的;
fair?金色的;
blonde?淡黄色的;
golden?金黄色的;
dyed?染色的;
brunette?浅黑色的;
mousey?灰褐色的;
chestnut?栗色的.
?五官:
(1)?眼睛（eye）:
deep-set?深陷的;
sunken?凹陷的;
bulging/protruding?凸出的;
eyelashes?睫毛;
eyebrows?眉毛?
(2)?鼻子(nose):
long?长的;
straight?挺直的;
big?大的;
small?小的;
flat?扁平的;
hooked?钩状的.?
(3)?嘴部(mouth):
tooth?牙齿;
even?整齐的;
uneven?不整齐的;
chin下巴。?
服饰神情
一个人的服饰也是外貌的重要组成部分，对服饰的描写也很重要。
服饰（dress）:
Appearance,
attractive,
ordinary,
feature,
handsome,
pretty,
ugly,
plain,
neat,
tidy,
smart?;
scruffy?邋遢的；casual?随便的;
conservative?不显眼的;
elegant?;
fashionable?;
suave?文雅的;
untidy,
good-looking,
elegant,
round-faced,
well-dressed,
shabby,
cute,
scar.
笑容（smile）:
bright?欢快的;
broad?无所顾忌的;
charming?可爱的;
cunning?狡猾的;
faint?不明显的;
happy?高兴的;
pleasant令人愉快的;
sad?伤心的;
sweet?甜蜜的;
pleased?满意的;
grinning?露齿而笑的;
smirking?傻笑的;
friendly?友好的;
warm?温暖的，热情的;
cold不热情的.?
头部与皮肤：
beard,
moustache,
wrinkle,
pale,
straight,
grey,
bald,
curly,
wavy,
fair-skinned,
dark-skinned,
shoulder-length,
smooth,
rough,
体型:
figure,
average,
build,
heavy,
slim,
thin,
height,
medium,
weigh,
overweight,
muscle,
skinny,
stout,
年龄：
young,
middle-aged,
elderly,
in
one’s
thirties
3.句型学习（with
复合，定从，同位语，非谓语动词等使用）
）Indeed,
his
sunburnt
face
and
arms
and
his
slim,
strong
body
are
just
like
those
of
millions
of
Chinese
farmers,
for
whom
he
has
struggled
for
the
past
five
decades.
）
The
tramp(流浪汉),
a
poor,
homeless
man
with
a
moustache,
wore
large
trousers,
worn-out
shoes
and
a
small
round
black
hat.（必修4，Unit3
）
3）He
was
a
wizened
old
man
with
wrinkled
face
and
a
sad
expression.
Over
his
shoulder
was
thrown
a
rough
brown
coat,all
torn
and
full
of
holes,
his
thick
boots
were
old
and
patched
;
and
with
one
hand
?he
leant
on
a
rough
stick,while
with
the
other
he
held
out
his
battered
hat
for
money.
他是一个老人，满脸的皱纹和悲伤的表情。他的肩膀上搭着一件粗糙，破烂的棕色外套，他的厚靴子上也打了补丁，他用一个手倚着一根拐杖，另一只手拿他的破帽子讨钱。
4）He
was
wonderfully
good-looking
with
his
brown
hair,his
clear-cut
face
and
his
grey
eyes.he
was
popular
with
the
men
as
he
was
with
women.
他长得很帅，棕色的眼睛和头发，轮廓清晰的脸庞，灰色的眼睛，男人和女人都喜欢他。
5）Most
people
on
the
train
are
white,
dressed
for
business
trips
or
vacations-
and
that
the
father
and
son
were
black,
dresses
in
clothes
that
were
just
about
as
inexpensive
as
you
can
buy.
6）His
eyes
are
deep-set
because
he
has
worked
till
midnight
for
a
long
time.
他的眼睛深陷，因为他这段时间经常工作到深夜。
7）He
was
born
a
hooked
nose.
他天生是鹰钩鼻。
8）When
he
laughs,
we
see
his
even
teeth.
当他笑的时候，我们看见他有一口整齐的牙齿。
9）The
middle-aged
man
already
has
double
chins
and
receding
hairline.
这个中年人已有了双下巴，头发也日渐稀少。
10）He
looked
even
smaller
than
he
really
was
because
he
wore
dirty
clothes.
　　他看上去比他本来年龄更小，因为他穿着脏衣服。
　　
经典小说范文
丰富读后续写句型多样化
1）
An
adverb
Carefully,?he
stepped
over
all
the
broken
glass.
Joyfully?he
skipped
up
the
street.
But
no
more
helicopters
came
and
it
was
getting
dark
again.?Immediately,
an
absolute
darkness
ruled
the
forest.?（时间副词衔接+环境描写）
2）An
adj.
phrase?
Curious
to
know
what
was
inside,
he
tiptoed
into
the
dark
cave.
Unable
to
say
a
word,
he
was
rooted
to
the
spot.
But
no
more
helicopters
came
and
it
was
getting
dark
again.?Desperate
and
hopeless,?Jane?knelt
down,
tears
streaming
down
her
face.?（并列情绪形容词）
?It
was
daybreak
when
Jane
woke
up.?Weak
as
she
was,
she
struggled
to
her
feet,
continuing
searching
for?assistance.?（状态形容词+as/though
引导的倒装句）
Suddenly
a
little
rabbit
jumped
out
in
front
of
my
horse.?Afraid
that
I
might
hurt
the
lovely
small
creature,
I
automatically
let
out
a
cry
to
stop
my
horse.?(情绪形容词+从句)
We
had
no
idea
where
we
were
and
it
got
dark.?Exhausted
and
hungry,
I
wondered
if
we
could
find
our
way
back.?
30.
A
participle
(-ing
or
–ed
word)
Looking?around
him
cautiously,
he
slipped
into
the
room
and
softly
closed
the
door.
Exhausted,
he
was
glad
the
race
was
finally
over.
But
no
more
helicopters
came
and
it
was
getting
dark
again.?Feeling
disappointed,?Jane?had
to
stay
alone
for
another
night.?（现在分词+情绪形容词）
It
was
daybreak
when
Jane
woke
up.?Feeling
refreshed,?she
continued
to
walk
along
the?stream?to
find
the
way
out.（现在分词+状态形容词）
4).??A
conjunction
As
he
walked,
he
whistled
Although
he
was
afraid,
he
jumped
right
in.
5).??????
A
prepositional
phrase
At
the
end
of
the
lane?he
suddenly
stopped.
At
the
sight
of
the
snake,
the
little
girl
screamed
at
the
top
of
her
voice.
6).??????
A
dialogue
or
a
monologue
“Let’s
see
who
gets
there
first!”?Rachel
shouted,
as
she
pedaled
fast
and
zoomed
past
Jenny.
“Hold
on
tight!”?My
father
yelled.
We
just
finished
bucking
in
as
the
coaster
jerked
into
motion.
This
was
my
first
roller
coaster
ride.
?The
car
abruptly
stopped
in
front
of
him.?"Get
into
the
car."?Paul
shouted
at
Mac.?
7).??????
A
character?
Mark
is
a
studious
boy
who
loves
reading.
His
classmates
often
tease
him
for
being
too
hardworking
and
they
call
him
Mr.
Smart.One
afternoon,
while
studying
at
home…
8).??????
An
emotion
The
moment
she
saw
how
she
did
for
her
Science
test,?tears
started
welling
up
in
Tina’s
eyes
and
falling
down
her
cheeks.
9).???????A
setting
I?closed
my
eyes
to
enjoy
the
gentle
breeze
and
the
sounds
of
the
clashing
waves.?Gently
opening
my
eyes,
I
saw
my
parents
taking?a
relaxing
stroll
along
the
beach.
The
cave
was
dark
and
everything
was
silent.
I
couldn’t
even
see
my
hand
in
front
of
my
face.?I
knew
this
adventure
was
going
to
be
something
that
I
would
never
forget.
We
drove
through
several
states
and
saw
lots
of
great
sights
along
the
way.?I
looked
out
of
the
car
window,
winding
rivers,
lofty
mountains,
sunny
beaches
and
deep
valleys
holding
me
entirely
in
their
fascination.?（视觉+环境描写+拟人）
10).???????An
action
Furry?started
wagging
his
tail
and
running
around
in
circles?when
he
saw
his
master
taking
a
leash
out
from
the
drawer.
Furry
was
all
ready
for
his
evening
walk.
?The
next
day
we
remembered
the
brand-new
tent
we
had
brought
with
us.?Dad?exchanged
a
glance
with
me.
Why
not
camp
to
satisfy?Mom???（动作描写+问句衔接）
11).???????Sound
effects
BOOM,
CRASH!?The
wind
was
howling
outside
of
my
house.
We
were
having
a
terrible
thunder
storm.
I
was
very
scared.
12).???????A
question
Have
you
ever
been
on
a
self-driving
trip??Let
me
tell
you
an
exciting
trip
my
family
took
this
summer.
Why
does
trouble
always
follow
me
around?
Do
I
have
a
"kick
me"
sign
on
my
back
or
something?
fascination.?（视觉+环境描写+拟人）??
小试牛刀：
根据所给提示，翻译下列句子。
我的同桌是个衣服从不合身的古怪男孩。(定语从句；odd)
萨莉
(Sally)
是个二十岁出头，长发及腰的女孩。(with复合结构)
____________________________________________________________________________
我想知道这么多年玛丽是怎样保持身材的。(宾语从句)
我多希望想出一种有效的减肥方法啊！(感叹句；figure
out)
__________________________________________________________________________
他脸上流露着如此严肃的表情，我很害怕。(such
...
that
...;
wear)
2.完形填空
A
number
of
recent
books
with
titles
like
Raising
Cain,
Real
Boys,
and
Lost
Boys
all
focus
on
the
same
issue:
Today’s
teenage
boys
are
feeling
more
anxiety
than
ever
before
about
their
physical
______1____.
Bombarded
(向…..大量提供信息)
by
advertising
featuring
well-muscled,
____2______
young
men,
teenage
boys
are
experiencing
what
teenage
girls
have
been
coping
with
for
years
They
are
afraid
that
they
cannot
possibly________3______
the
media’s
idealized
image
of
teenage
boys.
Young
boys
below
the
average
in_______4_______,
weight,
or
both
suffer
the
most.
Often
they
are
cruelly
teased
by
their
muscular
peers
(同龄人).
Some
react
to
the
ridicule
by
heading
for
the
gym
and
lifting______5________.
Yet
even
those
who
successfully______6________
their
muscles
don’t
like
the
feeling
that
they
are
considered
worthless
if
they
lose
their
hard-won
muscle
tone
Others,
convinced
that
no
amount
of
body_____7_______
can
help,
often
withdraw
from
social
contact
with
their
peers
This
is
their
way
of
avoiding
ridicule
about
their
size
or_____8_______.
Still,
they
are
understandably
angry
at
being
badly_____9_______
because
of
their
body
type.
Although
school
psychologists
generally
recognize
that
boys
today
are
having
severe
body_____10______
problems,
they
are
at
a
loss
about
what
to
do
to
solve
those
problems.
1A.
fitnessB.
exerciseC.
appearanceD.
education2
A.
nobleB.
sociableC.
sensitiveD.
attractive3
A.
live
up
to
B.
Look
down
toC.
make
up
forD.
get
along
with4
A.
heightB.
skillC.
intelligenceD.
ability5A.
headsB.
weightsC.
objectsD.
arms6A.
relaxB.
controlC.
strengthenD.
loosen7
A.
checkingB.
practicingC.
improvingD.
building8A.
shapeB.
styleC.
characterD.
behaviour9
A.
servedB.
instructedC.
treatedD.
measured10A.
healthB.
imageC.
languageD.
Size
3.
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A
MOTHER’S
DAY
SURPRISE
The
twins
were
filled
with
excitement
as
they
thought
of
the
surprise
they
were
planning
for
Mother’s
Day.
How
pleased
and
proud
Mother
would
be
when
they
brought
her
breakfast
in
bed.
They
planned
to
make
French
toast
and
chicken
porridge.
They
had
watched
their
mother
in
the
kitchen.
There
was
nothing
to
it.
Jenna
and
Jeff
knew
exactly
what
to
do.
The
big
day
came
at
last.
The
alarm
rang
at
6
a.m.
The
pair
went
down
the
stairs
quietly
to
the
kitchen.
They
decided
to
boil
the
porridge
first.
They
put
some
rice
into
a
pot
of
water
and
left
it
to
boil
while
they
made
the
French
toast.
Jeff
broke
two
eggs
into
a
plate
and
added
in
some
milk.
Jenna
found
the
bread
and
put
two
slices
into
the
egg
mixture.
Next,
Jeff
turned
on
the
second
stove
burner
to
heat
up
the
frying
pan.
Everything
was
going
smoothly
until
Jeff
started
frying
the
bread.
The
pan
was
too
hot
and
the
bread
turned
black
within
seconds.
Jenna
threw
the
burnt
piece
into
the
sink
and
put
in
the
other
slice
of
bread.
This
time,
she
turned
down
the
fire
so
it
cooked
nicely.
Then
Jeff
noticed
steam
shooting
out
of
the
pot
and
the
lid
starting
to
shake.
The
next
minute,
the
porridge
boiled
over
and
put
out
the
fire.
Jenna
panicked.
Thankfully,
Jeff
stayed
calm
and
turned
off
the
gas
quickly.
But
the
stove
was
a
mess
now.
Jenna
told
Jeff
to
clean
it
up
so
they
could
continue
to
cook
the
rest
of
the
porridge.
But
Jeff’s
hand
touched
the
hot
burner
and
he
gave
a
cry
of
pain.
Jenna
made
him
put
his
hand
in
cold
water.
Then
she
caught
the
smell
of
burning.
Oh
dear!
The
piece
of
bread
in
the
pan
had
turned
black
as
well.
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右。
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
As
the
twins
looked
around
them
in
disappointment,
their
father
appeared.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
The
twins
carried
the
breakfast
upstairs
and
woke
their
mother
up.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Keys:
1.
My
deskmate
is
an
odd
boy
who
wears
unsuitable
clothes.
Sally
is
twenty-year-old
girl
with
long
hair.
I
wonder
how
Mary
to
keep
fit
in
these
years.
How
I
hope
to
figure
out
an
effective
way
to
lose
weight.
His
face
wears
such
a
serious
expression
that
I
feel
scared.
2.CBAAB
CDACB
3.As
the
twins
looked
around
them
in
disappointment,
their
father
appeared.
Father’s
appearing
was
like
a
savior
to
the
two
children.
Under
the
guidance
of
their
father,
they
took
positive
actions
and
started
all
over
again.
They
made
the
bread
and
then
went
on
cooking
porridge.
Father
helped
them
adjust
the
fire,
which
was
the
key
to
success.
It
was
all
right
this
time.
Delicious
breakfast
was
ready.
How
happy
they
were!
The
twins
carried
the
breakfast
upstairs
and
woke
their
mother
up.
When
their
mother
saw
the
delicious
and
perfect
breakfast
in
front
of
her,
she
was
very
surprised.
It
was
not
only
the
gift,
but
the
love
of
the
children
for
her
that
moved
her
very
much.
The
two
children
could
finish
cooking
a
breakfast,
which
she
didn’t
expect.
The
children
said
loudly,
“Happy
Mother’s
Day!”
Mother
hugged
them
tightly
and
kissed
them
again
and
again.
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