2012中考英语：五月冲刺（书面表达第2集共26页）

2012中考英语：五月冲刺（书面表达第2集共26页）

所有书面表达都有参考范文，选自2012年3月、4月全国各地的知名中学的模拟题、调研题，有一部分原创题。题材广泛，命题紧跟时代。其中7：关于“低碳”的文章有2篇。
1、、根据中文和英文提示，写一篇意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的短文。
假设你叫刘京，是美国中学生托尼的笔友。他想了解一下中国学生在假期一般都做什么事情。下面的图表是你对你班同学假期活动的调查结果。请你根据这个图表给你的笔友写封回信，简述调查结果并谈谈你这个寒假的活动安排及理由。
Hi! Tony,I’m glad to hear from you.______________________________________________
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______________________________________________________________If you have more questions, please ask me.Yours,Liu Jing.
参考范文
文段表达 ******One possible version:Hi! Tony,I’m glad to hear from you. I did a survey about vacation activities among my classmates. Here are the results.Among the fifty students taking part in the survey, half of them stay at home, fifteen of them take part in some volunteer activities and the other 10 students travel either in China or abroad.As for me, I am going to volunteer my time to help others. First, I am going to visit an old people’s home to cheer them up. I am good at singing and dancing, so I can put this love to good use by spending time with these elders. Helping children with their English at an after-school teaching center is also a good choice for me. English has always been my favorite subject and I am among the best English learners in my class. Not only can I take the chance to do something meaningful, but I can improve my own English by teaching others. I am sure I will have a busy and wonderful winter vacation.If you have more questions, please ask me.Yours,Liu Jing
书面表达评分标准：第一档：（15~13分）完全符合题目要求，观点正确, 要点齐全。句式多样，词汇丰富。语言准确，语意连贯，表达清楚，具有逻辑性。第二档：（12~9分）基本符合题目要求，观点正确, 要点齐全。语法结构和词汇基本满足文章需要。语言基本通顺，语意基本连贯，表达基本清楚。虽然有少量语言错误，但不影响整体理解。第三档：（8~5分）部分内容符合题目要求，要点不齐全。语法结构和词汇错误较多，语言不通顺，表达不够清楚，影响整体理解。第四档：（4~0分）与题目有关内容不多，只是简单拼凑词语，所写内容难以理解。
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2、、书面表达
下面是Linda 的申请 。假如你是Linda，请根据表格信息，写一封信介绍你自己，申请参加暑假美国交换学生项目。
要求：
必须包括表格内容，可适当发挥。
词数80—100，书信开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Application Form(申请表)
Name
Linda
Age
16
Nationality
Chinese
Grade
Junior 3
School
No.2 Middle School
Personality
Outgoing and friendly
Favorite subjects
English and music
Hobbies
Collecting coins, playing the violin and dancing
Plan
Learn English and make many friends

Dear Sir,
I wish to be an exchange student in America this summer vacation. My name is Linda.
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Yours,
Linda


参考范文******书面表达
Dear Sir,
I wish to be an exchange student in America this summer vacation. My name is Linda. I’m a 16-year-old Chinese girl. I’m a student from No.2 Middle School and I’m in Junior 3. My favorite subjects are English and music because they are really interesting. But I find math is so difficult for me. In fact, I’m outgoing and friendly, and I have lots of friends here. In my spare time, I enjoy collecting coins and I have hundreds of coins from different countries. I also enjoy playing the violin and dancing. If I could join the project, I would learn more English and make more friends.

Yours,
Linda
评分标准　　　(一)评分原则：　　1. 本题总分为15分，按5个档次给分。　　2. 评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言的表达初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求　　来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。　　3. 评分时，应注意的主要内容为:内容要点，参考词汇的应用和语法结构的数量和正确性、　　上下文的连贯性及语言的得体性。　　4. 拼写、书写、标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响度予以考虑。　　5. 英美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。　　(二)各档次的给分范围和要求：　　第五档：(13—15分)包含内容要点；语言基本无误；行文连贯，能使用修饰词或表示顺序、逻辑关系的连接词，表达清楚。文字优美，语言精彩，略有拼写等错误的，可不扣分。　　第四档：（10—12分)基本包含内容要点，语言有少量错误，行文基本连贯，表达基本清楚。　　第三档：(7—9分)包含部分要点；语言虽有较多错误，尚能达意。　　第二档：（3—6分)语言错误多，影响意思表达；错误百出，不知所云。　　第一档： (0—2分)白卷或文不对题，只抄了提示词。

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3、、书面表达******
英语报社正在开展以“Growing Pains（成长的烦恼）”为主题的英语征文活动，请你以下面表格中的内容写一篇征文。
My Biggest Problem
too busy
In the past
Now
much free time
stay in school all day
watch TV in the evening
study
…
…
Feeling and Hope: …
要求：1. 内容充实，适当发挥，结构完整，语意连贯。
2. 词数80左右。征文的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear editor,
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Best wishes!
Rose
参考范文******书面表达******One Possible Version:
Dear editor,
My biggest problem is that I’m too busy. When I was young, I used to have so much free time, but these days I stay in school all day. Before I started high school, I used to spend a lot of time watching my favorite TV programs, but now I have to study. I love music, and my mother used to take me to concerts. These days, I hardly ever have time for concerts. I have to go to different classes at weekends.
I’m very tired. I really miss the old days. I wish I wouldn’t grow up.
Best wishes!
Rose
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4、、书面表达
Should teenagers follow the fashion?
Recently I’ve had a discussion with my classmates about teens’ fashion following.
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参考范文******书面表达******One possible version:
Recently I’ve had a discussion with my classmates about teens’ fashion following. Some of them think teenagers should follow the fashion because it can help us keep up with the times. And it makes teens look cool and fashionable. But some students disagree. They believe that it wastes time and money. Also it may get in the way of the schoolwork.
In my opinion, following the fashion is good for teens. As we know, teenagers need all-round development. However, the knowledge in books alone has been unable to meet our needs. On the other hand, teenagers are also part of society. Society is always progressing. It’s our duty to know what’s going on in the world.(74 words)

1. 按5个档次给分。中档属第三档（9分—7分）。
2. 按学生所写内容和所用语言确定档次（内容分和语言分各占一半）。
3. 总词数不足40个可在本题总得分中扣去1分；如书写整齐美观，可在本题总得分中加1分.
4. 本题有一定的开放性，所以只要言之有理，就应给分。
（一） 内容要点：
1. 学生的观点：①紧跟时代，时尚帅气; ② 浪费时间金钱，妨碍学习.(7分)
2. 自己的观点及理由（8分）
（二） 各档次的给分范围和要求:
第五档（很好）：(15--13分) 完全完成试题规定的任务。
① 信息全。②语言可读性强，语言结构基本正确，有少量错误。
第四档（好）：(12--10分)：完全完成试题规定的任务。
① 有主要信息。②语言基本正确，有一些错误。
第三档（还好）：(9--7分)：基本完成试题规定的任务。
① 有主要信息。②语言尚可读，有一些错误，但尚能达意。
第二档（较差）：(6--4分)：未能恰当完成试题规定的任务。
① 信息不全。②只有个别句子可读，语言错误较多，且不能达意。
第一档（差）：（3分--1分）
① 不能表达有关信息。②只有几个有关单词，语言错误很多，不能达意。
注意：凡不写任何内容、抄袭其他内容、所写内容无法看清者一律给0分。
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5、、书面表达******
经过三年紧张而忙碌的学习，你肯定掌握了许多的好的方法，请你以“The Ways Of My Study”写一篇80-100字的短文，要点可包括如下：
What subject(s) do you like best?
How do you learn it/them best? (Give two or three examples)
What are you going to do to learn it/them better?
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参考范文******书面表达
My favorite subject is English, and I have some good ways to learn it. First, I listen to the teacher carefully and take notes when necessary. Second, I always do homework by myself. Also, I’ll go over my lessons after school in order to remember the key points. To learn English better, I’ll speak English as much as possible, because as the saying goes:“Practice makes more perfect”. What’s more, I often encourage myself to be confident.
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假如你是Jim,你校试行在课间播放音乐，你班的同学对此进行了讨论，看法不一，大多数同学赞同，而部分同学反对。请你根据表格中所提供的信息，给你们的校长写封信，介绍大家的观点，同时谈谈自己的看法。词数：不少于80词（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
赞同者
反对者
原因
1. 音乐给人们带来快乐；
2. 使大脑得到放松；
3. 能提高下一课的学习效率。
1. 课间时间太短，播放音乐达不到预期效果；
2. 有时上课后还沉浸在课间听的音乐中，对上课有影响。
参考词汇：study efficiency学习效率； expected预期的； effect影响； peace安静
Dear Headmaster,
We have had a discussion about whether to play music during the break. All the students in our class gave the ideas.
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参考范文及评分标准

One possible version参考范文:
Dear Headmaster,
We have had a discussion about whether to play music during the break. All the students in our class gave the ideas.
Most of us agree the music should be played. They think listening to music can make them feel happy. Besides, music helps them relax after hard study. What’s more, music can help them improve the study efficiency.
On the other hand, some students disagree. They think they can not get the expected results by listening to music, as the break is short. In addition, in class some students are still lost in music, which has a bad effect on studies.
I think what we need is peace instead of the noise produced by the music. So I don’t like listening to music during the break.
Yours sincerely,
Jim
书面表达评分标准:
1. 本题共20分，按五个档次给分：第一档20—16分 第二档15—11分 第三档10—6分 第四档5—1分 第五档 0分
2. 评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后调整给分；
3. 评分时，应注意上下文连贯，内容完整以及所用词汇和语法的准确性；
4. 拼写及标点符号，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑是否扣分。英美拼法及词汇用法均可接受。
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7、、书面表达（原创）******书面表达******（“低碳”第1篇）

地球是我们的家园，我们作为地球的主人， 就应该好好保护地球。 现在正在倡导“低碳”生活， 只要我们不污染环境，不浪费能源，就能够让我们周围变得更洁净， 生活变得更美好。 作为中学生， 我们应该怎样做呢？谈谈你的想法。要求：短文中不得出现真实的校名和人名；80词左右。
提示词： lowcarbon lifestyle 低碳生活方式
How to make our earth turn better








































参考范文******书面表达
（一）评分细则：
一级(15-13) 1. 所写内容符合试卷所提供的各种信息；
2. 句子正确通顺, 或只有个别小错；
3. 单词拼写错误不超过4个。
二级（12-9） 1. 所写的内容与试卷所提供的各种信息基本相符合；
2. 句子基本正确，表达错误较少，表达较通顺；
3. 单词拼写错误不超过6个。
三级（8-5） 1. 所写的内容与试卷所提供的信息基本相符；
2. 句子表达错误较多，但尚可读懂；
3. 单词拼写错误不超过10个。
四级（4分以下） 1. 所写内容与试卷提供的信息不符；
2. 只有少数句子表达正确；
3. 拼写错误在10个以上。
五级 只有个别词语可读，但通篇不知所云。
学生所写出的短文有创意，可适当加分。（不超过2分。）
参考范文：
How to make our earth turn better
The earth I sour home. We should protect our earth as the owner. But how to live a lowcarbon lifestyle?
I think as middle school students, we should save the resources around us, such as the water, the electricity and so on . Remember to turn off the lights when you leave the classroom. Also, I think saving paper is necessary. Thus, fewer trees will be cut down. If we can save more food, the peasants will plant more trees on their farm. Don’t throw litter everywhere, it will pollute our environment.
If everyone can make a contribution to our earth, our life will be better and better.
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书面表达******节约资源,保护环境（“低碳”第2篇）
节约资源,保护环境,从我们身边的小事做起。Li Ming 是一个注重“低碳”生活的中学生，假设你是他, 请以 “My Low-carbon Life”为题，写一篇80词左右的短文，简单描述自己的“低碳生活”。
要点：
（1）每天步行上学；
（2）离开教室时，关灯、电扇、电视等；
（3）不用水时，记得关水龙头，循环使用水；
（4）充分使用纸张；
（5）不使用塑料袋。
参考词汇：on foot, turn off, tap, reuse, make full use of, plastic bag

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参考范文：One possible version:
My Low-carbon Life
My name is Li Ming. I am a middle school student. I go to school on foot every day. I always remember to turn off the lights, the TV and the fans when I leave the classroom. When I am not using water, I always turn off the tap. I often reuse water, for example, when I finish washing the clothes, I use the water to clean the floor and water flowers. I never use plastic bags. I think saving paper is necessary, so I often make full use of paper. It’s important for us to live a low-carbon life to protect the environment.
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英语课上，同学们就“快乐是什么”展开了热烈的讨论。假定你是李诺，请根据下表内容完成发言稿。
What is happiness?
Why?
some people
rich, successful
Money is important.
I
friendship
1. warm
2. laugh
3. …
要求：
⑴　发言稿需包括表中所有信息，可适当拓展；
⑵　自己的想法必须在２个句子以上；
　　　⑶　文章的开头已给出（不计入总词数），你只需接着写；
　　　⑷　词数在８０左右。
Happiness is friendship.
What is happiness? Different people have different opinions.
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参考范文
Happiness is friendship.
What is happiness? Different people have different opinions.
Some people spend all their time trying to find what happiness is, but they find nothing in the end. Many people think that when they become rich and successful, happiness will naturally follow. However, money is not the answer to all the problems.
In my opinion, being with friends is happiness. Friends are just like sunshine. They warm my heart and light my life. When I’m happy, my friends laugh with me. When I’m sad, my friends cry with me. I can share my secrets with them.
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某市教育局将每年的9月1日定为爱心慈善日（Charity Day）,今年活动的主题是“人人为贫困孩子献爱心”。 现在请你以学生会的名义写一份倡议书，内容要点如下（括号中的词汇可供参考）：
1．许多孩子因贫困上不起学；（too… to…）
2．他们没有足够的学习用品和衣物；（school things and clothes）
3．每个孩子都因该有上学的权利；(have the right to do something)
4．我们因该做一些力所能及的事去帮助他们，比如……(as possible as we can)
5．希望他们和我们一样享有获得知识的机会。(the same …as…,get knowledge)
注意：1. 文中开头,结尾已给出，不计入总次数；
2. 80词左右。
Dear students,
In some parts of our country, there are many children out of school.____________________
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Thanks for your joining!
Students’ Union
参考范文******书面表达
One possible version:
Dear students,
In some parts of our country, there are many children out of school. They are too poor to go to school. At the same time , they don’t have enough school things and clothes. In my opinion, each child should have the right to go to school, but there are few chances for the poor children. So we should help them. We can donate our school things, clothes and so on. We hope they will enjoy the same chance of getting knowledge as we do in the school.
Thanks for your joining!
Students’ Union
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三月里，你们学校开展学雷锋活动。请你以学生会主席的名义发出“学雷锋”活动的倡议。
内容必须包含如下要点：
我们要时时替他人着想，尽全力帮助需要帮助的人，在学习上帮助同学。
我们要从身边最小的事做起，不乱抛乱扔，主动拾捡。
在学习我们要刻苦勤奋，不轻易放弃。
我们要爱护班级和学校，时刻记住团队精神，为班级为学校争光。
无论什么时候，我们都要有雷锋精神，做一个对国家有用的人。
要求： 1.词数：80词左右;
2.文中不能出现真实的姓名和所在学校的名称。
开头已给出，不记入总词数。
Learning from Lei Feng
Everyone,
Lei Feng's spirit has affected several generations of people(几代人). In the modern life, we still need to have such a spirit. It is also very important for us students.We should__________________________
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________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________The Students' Union
March 5th,2012
参考范文****** 书面表达。
We should think of others all the time. We should try our best to help people in need. As students, we should help our classmates with their studies. We should do from the smallest thing, such as volunteering to pick up litter instead of dropping/throwing litter carelessly. In our study, we also need to study hard, and not to give up easily. We should do things for our class and our school, and let them feel proud of us. In future, we should always have the spirit of Lei Feng. We should remember to be a useful person to our country.
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在一次英语班会上，老师请同学们以“Proud of My School"为主题发言。请根据下面所给
的提示写一篇发言稿。
提示：★What does your school look like?
★What fun do you have at school?
★Why do you like your school?
要求：★意思连贯，语句通顺，字迹工整，可适当发挥。
★不少于80个词，文中不得出现真实的人名、地名。
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参考范文******

My school is very big. There are several tall buildings in it. There are more than 2000 students in my school. We have a big playground with lots of trees around it. There are a lot of flowers everywhere.
We have a lot of fun at school every day. After class we play games and do lots of sports, like playing basketball, football and tennis. We work very hard and do very well in our lessons. I love my school because it’s like a big family. The teachers in my school are very kind to us. I am proud of my school because it is one of the best schools in my heart.
得分评分标准
(第一档)
10-12分 包含所有信息，内容完整，语句通顺，意思连贯。没有或基本没有语法、拼写错误，书写规范，词数符合要求。
（第二档）
7-9分 包含大部分信息，内容较完整，表达基本清楚，语句较通顺，仅有少量语法、拼写错误，书写规范，词数基本符合要求。
（第三档）
4-6分 写出基本信息，语句基本通顺，但句子较简单，表达不够清楚，有部分语法、拼写错误。
（第四档）
1-3分 仅能传递个别信息，通篇只有个别句子可读。
（第五档）
0分 只字未写、通篇不知所云或写的内容与所要求内容无关。
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我市是一个海滨旅游城市，每年夏天接待大量的外国游客。学校学生会决定招聘12个志愿者在暑假期间为外国游客服务。
假若你是李华(16岁，九年级十一班），希望参加这次志愿活动，既帮助别人，锻炼自己，又能提高自己的英语能力。
请根据所给提示，用英文回复下面的招聘启事。
1. 注意内容包括应聘的条件、目的及打算；2. 不要出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 邮件开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；4. 词数在70左右。
12 Volunteers Wanted
Serving for the foreign visitors during the summer vacation.
Outgoing; Excellent spoken English；Know about some western culture. Those who are interested in this activity, please send your email to student union@ 163. com before June 14th, 2010 for an applying.
Student Union
Dear Sir/Madam，
I am interested in becoming one of the volunteers.

I'm looking forward to your early reply.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hu
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Dear Sir/Madam,
I am interested in becoming one of the volunteers.I'm Li Hua,a girl of sixteen years old, from Class 11,Grade 9. English is my favorite subject, and I can speak English very well. What's more,I know some customs of some foreign countries. As an outgoing girl, I really like to meet all kinds of people.
To be a volunteer, I can not only help others but also help myself,because I can get much knowledge and working skills from helping others. Besides, it can improve my English.
If I am accepted, I'll try my best to do it well. I'm looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
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13、、书面表达
健康一直是人们关注的问题，我校要举行以“关爱健康”为题的主题班会，请根据以下内容谈谈你的看法。
1、保持健康的重要性；
2、保持健康的方法：多吃水果蔬菜；每天锻炼一小时；早睡早起；勤洗手；
3、自己的看法（至少一条）。
注意：
1、文中不能出现真实的校名和姓名；
2、内容可适当扩展；
3、词数：60~80词；
4、文章开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。
Boys and girls,
It is very important for us students to keep healthy.
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Boys and girls
It is very important for us students to keep healthy.
There are many ways to be healthy. We’d better eat more fruits and vegetables. Take exercise for at least one hour every day. We need enough sleep and rest so it is important to go to bed early and get up early. Besides，we should wash our hands as often as possible. In my opinion，we mustn’t drink wine or smoke. They are bad for our health.
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假如你是第四中学的一名初三学生刘红，你要写一封信给青少年专家Sigmund Friend，告诉他你遇到的问题，并请求帮助。请根据下列表格中所列的信息，写完这封信。
姓 名
刘 红
星 座
Gemini
最喜爱的颜色
blue, yellow
存在问题
父母管得很紧，几乎没有时间玩；
迷恋上网聊天，经常晚回家，不能准时交作业；
学习成绩下降，父母要求你放弃上网，为此很生气。
目前需求
希望得到建议
注意：
1．词数90左右。信的开头和结尾已写好，不计入总词数。
2．信中须包括所有内容要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使语句通顺，意思连贯，符合逻辑。
Dear Sigmund Friend,
My name is Liu Hong. I’m a Grade 9 student in No. 4 Middle School._________
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Can you give me some useful advice? I hope to hear from you soon.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Liu Hong
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请根据下列要点介绍你的好朋友小刚：
优
点
①中等身材，想像力足够丰富。
②善良友好，乐于助人，经常帮助处于困境中的人。
③曾和抢劫犯进行殊死搏斗，并向警方提供了一些导致凶犯被捕的有用的线索。
④两年前制作了一个机器人，看起来像真人一样，它会扫地、整理床铺和给房间通风。
缺点
①每天熬夜，早上上学迟到。②不能按时交家庭作业。③喜欢看恐怖片。
梦
想
①50年后的地球会变成一个大花园，空气清新，没有一点污染。
②公交系统专门为了舒适而设计，人们不开汽车而是骑着特殊的自行车。
③地球上没有学校，每个学生有一台和星际网络相连的电脑，他们可以在网上学校学习、做作业、考试，我们有更多的空余时间进行兴趣爱好。
注意：1.短文应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥。
2.表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯。
3.词数：100词左右。
My best friend
My best friend is Xiao Gang. ___________________________________________




参考范文******书面表达：
My best friend
My best friend is Xiao Gang. He is medium height. He is imaginative. He is kind and friendly. He is helpful and often helps the people in trouble. Once he put up a good fight with the robber and provide the police with the useful clues. Two years ago he made a robot. It looks like a real person. It can make the bed and air the rooms.
But he has some shortcomings. He often stays up late and is late for class. He can’t hand in his homework on time. He likes watching horror films.
His dream is that the earth will become a big garden in 50 years with fresh air. There’s no pollution. The public transport system is specially designed in order to be comfortable. People ride special bikes instead of cars. There is no school on the earth. Every student has a computer connected to the interplanetary network. They can study, do their homework and take exams. We can have more spare time for our hobbies.
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根据所给图画，用英语写一篇约80词的短文。要求完整叙述故事内容，并谈谈个人的看法。
熊：bear 牛 ox
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书面表达可分为4个等级：
（1）9-10分 短文内容符合每幅图画情景，语句通顺，情节连贯，书写工整，无语法错误，字数符合要求。
（2）7-8分 短文内容基本符合每幅图画情景，语句通顺，情节较连贯，书写工整，语法错误较少（1-2处），字数基本符合要求。
（3）5-6分 短文内容符合每幅图画情景，语句尚通顺，情节较连贯，书写较工整，3-4处语法错误，字数在60词左右。
（4）5分以下。短文内容不能紧扣图画情景，语句不够通顺，语法错误较多，书写一般，字数在50词以下。
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健康一直是人们关注的问题，我校要举行以“关爱健康”为题的主题班会，请根据以下内容谈谈你的看法。
1、保持健康的重要性；
2、保持健康的方法：多吃水果蔬菜；每天锻炼一小时；早睡早起；勤洗手；
3、自己的看法（至少一条）。
注意：
1、文中不能出现真实的校名和姓名；
2、内容可适当扩展；
3、词数：60~80词；
4、文章开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总数
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参考范文******书面表达
Boys and girls
It is very important for us students to keep healthy.
There are many ways to be healthy. We’d better eat more fruits and vegetables. Take exercise for at least one hour every day. We need enough sleep and rest so it is important to go to bed early and get up early. Besides，we should wash our hands as often as possible. In my opinion，we mustn’t drink wine or smoke. They are bad for our health.
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18、、书面表达******倡议书
假如你们学校要开展“创建和谐校园(to build a harmonious campus)”活动，请根据提示写一篇倡议书，号召大家为创建和谐校园而努力。词数：100词左右。（短文开头已给出，不计入总词数）
要点提示：
1. 努力学习，参加课外活动；
2. 有爱互助，尊敬师长；
3. 爱护花草树木，不随地乱扔废弃物。

Our school is like our home. We should try to build up a harmonious campus.










参考范文******书面表达
Our school is like our home. We should try to build up a harmonious campus.
First of all, we should work hard at our lessons. After school, we had better take an active part in all kinds of school activities to help improve our health and study.
Then we should be friendly to one another. We should respect our teachers and get on well with our classmates.
Thirdly, it is our duty to keep the school yard clean and tidy. We shouldn’t throw wastes around or pick flowers.
Please do your best to make our school more and more beautiful.
评分说明：
要求考生用适当的时态、语态、句式和词语，完整准确地表述所提示的内容，书写工整。分四档评分：
１、短文通顺完整，表达清楚, 语言基本无误，12－15分;
２、短文较通顺完整，表达基本清楚，语言有少量错误，8－11分;
３、能写明基本要点，短文不够通顺完整，语言有较多错误，但尚能达意，4－7分;
４、仅能写明部分要点，短文不完整，语言错误多，影响意思表达，0－3分。
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19、、书面表达
每个人的心目中都有自己喜欢或崇拜的偶像，他或她可能影响到你日常生活的喜怒哀乐，甚至影响到你对人生目标和成长道路的选择。请你用英语写一篇80词以上的短文。太太你心目中的偶像。
内容要求：
1、他或她大致的外貌和个性特征;
2、你为什么特别喜欢或崇拜他;
3、他对你最大的影响是什么？
参考词汇：make sb one’s idol 把某人作为偶像；崇拜某人。
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I like sports very much, so I have made Yao Ming ,a great athlete, my idol since I was in the primary school .He’s really tall and strong, and he is good at playing basketball. As a powerful athlete, he is so energetic and skillful that he was chosen as a new NBA star. And I’m so proud of him .
I like him because he is hard-working and kind-hearted. He often gives the money to charity and tries to help the people who are in trouble. I do learn a lot from him. I’m working hard at school now. I wish I could be successful like him some day.

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20、、书面表达******
Hold to Your Dreams（坚持梦想）
提示：你的心中一定藏有美好的梦想，虽然通向梦想的道路是不平坦的，但我们一直坚持着自己的梦想…
要求：(1)根据所给题目，用英文写一篇短文，说说你的梦想；
(2)阐述“坚持梦想才能实现它”，能适当举例说明；
(3)词数90左右。
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参考范文******书面表达
Hold to Your Dreams
Everyone has his dreams. My dream is to get into Da Gang Middle School. I think people who always hold to their dreams will be successful at last.
We all know Marie Curie, a famous scientist. She has set a good example. She discovered radium after four years' hard work. She never gave up and her dream came true at last. There are also many other examples around us. The players in the Olympic Games and even our hard-working classmates are all dream holders. So I will hold to my dreams to the end. I believe my dream will come true soon.
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21、、书面表达******推荐自己
假如你是LiHua,你校英语俱乐部正在招聘新成员。你想成为其中的一员，需要给英语俱乐部主席Mr Wang用英语写一封信推荐自己。
提示：（1）性格外向；（2）喜欢看英文小说、运动、交友；（3）多次在学校英语竞赛中获奖。
注意：1.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。2.语言通顺，意思连贯，书写规范。3. 80词左右。







参考范文******书面表达
Dear Mr Wang,
My name is Li Hua. I want to be a member of the English Club very much. I’m an outgoing boy. I like playing sports and making friends with others. And I also like taking with others. I won several prizes in the school English competitions. So I believe I can communicate with other club members freely in English. If I’m lucky enough to be a member of the English club, I’ll study harder to help more students with English.
I’m looking forward to your reply. Thank you!
Yours,
Li Hua
评分标准：
1. 内容完整，并有自己的发挥，语句流畅，无语法错误，书写规范，给13-15分;2. 内容完整，语句较流畅，有一定的发挥, 基本无语法错误，书写基本规范，给10-12分;3. 内容基本完整，语句欠流畅，有所发挥,语法错误较多，书写较规范，给7-9分;
4. 内容不够完整，有可读的完整句子，语法错误多，书写欠规范，给4-6分;
5. 只写出个别要点，语法错误很多，书写不规范，没有句子可读，给0-3分。
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