2012中考英语：五月冲刺（书面表达第3集共23页--作文高分秘诀、预测）
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2012中考英语：五月冲刺（书面表达第3集共23页--作文高分秘诀、预测）
该精品1、介绍了初中英语作文高分秘诀 2、2012书面表达预测（10篇）--电子邀请函、回复求助、询问旅行事宜、中华美德（演讲稿）、爱护动物志愿者（面试稿）、“低碳”生活、旅游感受、为笔友排忧解难、网上交友、升上高中的设想。 3、2012书面表达实战训练题及参考范文
我为大家准备了英语作文考试的一些方法，供大家参考。
初中英语作文高分秘诀
***书面表达的方法介绍：
书面表达是每年中考必考题型，是考查学生交际能力的一个重要组成部分。书面表达通常有三种形式：
1、书信、日记、通知、留言、假条；
2、看图作文；
3、根据汉语提示作文。
??? 无论是那一种书面表达形式，考生所写的短文都要紧扣主题、文理通顺，要素完整，语言准确、得当、格式正确、无大、小写和拼写错误，标点符号正确，能达到交际目的。
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【名师解难】
一. 训练方法
1. 记。认真系统复习和背诵基础知识和优美的句子、句型。中国有句古话，叫“熟读唐诗三百首，不会吟诗也会作”。同样，要使自己具有较强的写作能力，首先应该熟读和背诵一些句型和短文。许多同学写出来的语言根本不符合英语的语言习惯，相当一部分人有对照中文逐字翻译的不良习惯，不去理会中英文的差异。大量的背诵和阅读是提高写作能力的有效办法，同学们若有大量的现成语言积累在脑海里，自己写起文段来，就可以做到脱口而出，或是模仿、套用，甚至发挥。
2. 练。每练一篇书面表达题，都要真正学到一点东西，不可贪多而边学边忘。平时可以采用循序渐进、灵活多样的练习方式。从根据提示词写单句开始，到写单句，然后到写几句话，最后到写流利的文段。尽量尝试多种形式的写作，如短信、说明、通知、便条、明信片、看图写作、根据表格或记录写短文等。
3. 写。要进行实战写作。要求自己在20分钟内写出100个词的短文，并且质量高、内容全、形式正确。这样形成习惯，考试时就能得心应手。?
二. 应试策略
1. 审题目：要切中题意。《中考考试说明》指出，书面表达要切中题意。怎样才能切中题意？就是要认真审题，看到考题后，先不要急于动笔，要仔细看清题目要求的内容。在自己的头脑中构思出一个框架或画面，确定短文的中心思想，不要匆匆下笔，看懂题意，根据图画、图表、提纲或短文提供的资料和信息来审题。审题要审格式、体裁、人物关系、故事情节、主体时态、活动时间、地点等。
2. 圈要点：防止遗漏要点。要点是给分的一个重要因素。为了防止写作过程中遗漏要点，同学们要充分发挥自己的观察力，把情景中给出的各个要点逐条列出。
3. 列提纲：为写作做好准备。根据文章要点短文的中心思想将主要句型、关键词语记下，形成提纲。
4. 定基调：定出时态、人称、顺序、开头、结尾。
5. 写全文：写短文时要做到以下六个方面：
(1)避免使用汉语式英语，尽量使用自己熟悉的句型。几种句型可交替使用，以避免重复和呆板。
(2)多用简单句型，记事、写人一般都不需要复杂的句型。可适当多使用陈述句、一般疑问句、祈使句和感叹句。不用或少用非谓语或情态动词等较复杂的句型。
(3)注意语法、句法知识的灵活运用。
1）语态、时态要准确无误。
2）主谓语要一致，主语的人称和数要和谓语一致。
3）注意人称代词的宾格形式。
4）注意冠词用法，例如： He is an honest student.中的an不能写成a。
5）注意拼写、标点符号和大小写，例如：receive, believe, fourteen, forty, ninth, restaurant等。
(4)描写人物时，要生动具体，例如：
1）外表特征：tall, short, fat, thin, strong, weak, ordinary-looking 等。
2）服饰颜色：red, yellow, blue, white, green, brown, black 等。
3）内心境界：glad, happy, sad, excited, anxious, interested 等。
4）感情描写：love, like, hate, feel, laugh, cry, smile, shout 等。
5）动作描写：come, go, get, have, take, bring, fetch 等。
(5)上下文要连贯。上下文的连贯性也是评分的一条原则，因此同学们应把写好的句子，根据故事情节，事情发生的先后次序（时间或空间），使用一些表示并列、递进等过渡词进行加工整理，使文章连贯、自然、流畅。同学们应注意下面过渡的用法：
1）表示并列关系的：and, as well as, or… 2）表示转折关系的：but, yet, however… 3）表示时间关系的：when, while, after, before, then, after that… 4）表示因果关系的：so, therefore ,as a result… 5）表示目的的：in order to, in order that , so as to, so that… 6）表示列举的：for example , such as… 7）表示总结性的：in general, in all, in a word, generally speaking…
(6)不会表达，另辟蹊径。中考作文给分是以要点和语言准确度而定，不以文采打分。造句越简单准确越好，造复合句容易出错，容易被扣分，阅卷场上有句话：“错误面前人人平等，文采好不加分”。如遇到个别要点表达不出来或难以表达，可采用变通的办法，化难为易，化繁为简。总之，所造句子要正确、得体、符合英语表达习惯。
6.改病句：认真检查，改正错误。中考作文时，由于时间紧、内容多，同学们出错在所难免。因此，改错这一环节必不可少。中考作文评卷是根据要点、语言准确性、上下文的连贯性来给分，根据错误多少来扣分。因此，中考时花几分钟时间用来检查错误显得尤为重要。检查错误应从以下几个方面入手：
1）格式是否有错。
2）拼写有无错误。
3）语言是否用错。
4）时态、语态错误。
5）标点错误。
6）人称是否用错。
三. 注意事项
书面表达要特别注意书写工整，卷面整洁。每年阅卷老师在十来天的时间里要看十几万考生的作文，工作量之大，时间之紧，可想而知。书写是否工整，卷面是否整洁与得分高低直接有关。
分析实例：
假如你叫张强。请根据下面美国朋友Bob的来信内容，结合你自己的情况写一篇语言连惯、符合逻辑的英文回信。?
要求：1. 认真阅读来信的内容，从中获得你需要的信息。?
2. 词数：80左右。回信的开头、结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。
注意：回信中不得出现你的真实地址和所在学校的名称。?
Dear friend,?
Hello！I’m your new friend. My name is Bob. I’m fifteen. I’m American. I live in New York.?
I am a middle school student. I’m good at maths. It is very interesting. My favourite sport is basketball. And I am not only a basketball fan but also a good player. I like pop music. My friends and I often sing pop songs together.?
After school, I am interested in getting on-line. I have known a lot about China from the Internet. Now I’m learning Chinese. I hope I will visit your country one day.?
Please write to me and tell me something about your life. I’m looking forward to hearing from you.?
Yours,?
Bob?
Dear Bob,
_______________________________________________________________________________________
???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? Yours,
????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? Zhang Qiang
?
【解析】根据前面提到第六个步骤，我们来写一下这篇书面表达。
1.审题目：通过审题目我们可以知道：本篇书面表达应是写一封回信，写信人是张强，收信人是Bob，信的内容应是介绍张强自己的情况。
2. 圈要点：根据来信判断，写回信必须包括以下要点：1、收到对方的来信；2、愿意和对方交朋友；3、自己的姓名、年龄和住址；4、自己的身份、特长和爱好； 5、自己的希望。
3、列提纲：1. got your letter 2. glad to be your friend 3. name, zhang Qiang, fifteen, live in Shaanxi 4. a middle school student, like English, like sports, good at drawing, 5. hope we’ll meet in China
4、定基调：1. 时态：收到来信用一般过去时，介绍情况用一般现在时，希望用一般将来时。2. 人称用第一人称。3.可按提纲的顺序来写。4. 开头和结尾题目已经给出。
5、写全文：
Dear Bob,
??? I got your letter yesterday. I’m very glad to be your pen friend. My name is Zhang Qiang. I’m fifteen years old, too. I live in Shaanxi.
?I’m a middle school student, too. I like English and physics very much. I also like sports, but I’m good at drawing. I know a little about America. Could you tell me something more about your country in your next letter?
I hope we’ll meet in China some day. I’m sure we’ll have a good time together.
Please write (to) me soon.
Yours,
Zhang Qiang
6、改病句：认真复查一边，如有错误，加以改正。
******2012书面表达预测******
1.电子邀请函:
假如你是张文，八年级四班的班长。你们班排练了一部英文课本剧（an English textbook play），准备本周六下午4:00在学校礼堂（the school hall）演出。请你用英语给学校的外籍教师Terry写一封80字左右的E-mail，邀请他来观看演出，并在演出结束时发言。
注意：1. 可增加细节，使文章连贯完整；2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Terry,
Hi, I’m Zhang Wen, monitor of Class 4, Grade 8.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
We are all looking forward to your coming.
Zhang Wen
Dear Terry,
Hi, I’m Zhang Wen, monitor of Class 4, Grade 8. I’m writing to ask if you will be free on Saturday. Our class have made an English textbook play. We are going to put it on at the school hall on Saturday. Time is 4:00 p.m. The play is about a famous English story. I’m sure you will enjoy it. We hope you can come, and we do hope you can give a speech at he end of the performance. We’d like you to give us some tips about English learning. If you can come, please let me know.
We are all looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Zhang Wen
2.回复求助
假设你是某英文杂志的“知心姐姐”（Agony Sister），Helen. 请阅读下面的这封求助信，并根据信的内容写一封回信。
要求：1. 80词左右；2. 文中不要出现作者本人的真实信息。
Dear Helen,
Last Sunday, my classmates and I went to the park. I wanted to take some photos. My father was out at that time, so I took his camera without telling her. Unfortunately, the camera went out of my bag and dropped on the ground when I was climbing the hill. It didn’t work at all. I put it back quietly after I returned home. And I haven’t told him till now. when I face my father, I feel terrible. What should I do?
Yours, David
Dear David,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes,
Helen
One possible version:
Dear David,
First, I think you'd better tell your father immediately. It you tell him the truth, he'll be
angry with you. But at least you'll prove how honest you are. Then I think you should offer to pay. But you shouldn't use your pocket money. Yes, a camera is expensive, maybe you can't afford it. If you offer to do some jobs around the house, he'll realize that you're truly sorry.
Oh, remember to be careful next tune.
Best wishes,
3. 询问旅行事宜
假如你叫李华，是杭州市某中学初三学生。你计划于毕业考试后去英格兰旅行。信中要包括自己的行程安排；询问风俗习惯和苏格兰的旅游地点。词数60左右。
列举写作要点
1.旅游安排；plan
?2. 风俗习惯；culture and customs
?3. 名胜：places of interest
三、列出关键短语和句型
be away 离开 provide…with 提供… would like to do 想要做某事
Dear Ben,
How is everything? I am going to travel to England with my parents after finishing the final exam. We’d like to be away for about ten days. But I don’t know about England. I hope you can provide me with some information about the customs of England. I would like to travel to exciting places in England. Please introduce some interesting places to me.
Yours.
Li Hua
4：中华美德（演讲稿）
假如你是王明，你将代表学校参加杭州市屮学生英诂演讲比赛。演讲的题目是 We should help parents do housework. 请你用英诰写一篇演讲稿。
要点提示：
现 象
你常做的家务
你的体会和看法
许多学生懒惰，不愿做家务。
◆ 修理床铺
◆ 浇花
◆ 打扫房间
◆ 倒垃圾
◆……
……
(至少两点）
参考词汇: lazy, chores, make the bed, water flowers, clean the room, take out the trash, relaxing, interesting, proud, pleased, duty
要求：1.短文须包含要点提示中的所有信息，并可适当发挥； 2. 80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 3.文中不得出现自己的真实姓名、校名和地名。
Ladies and gentlemen,
Good morning! I'm Wang Ming. It's my honor to give you a speech. My topic is We should help parents do housework.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That's all. Thanks for your listening!
One possible version:
Ladies and gentlemen,
Good morning! I'm Wang Ming It's my honor to give you a speech. My topic is We should help parents do housework. Now many students are too lazy to do housework. But I think we should help parents do some housework because they are busy with their work and tired after work. 1 often help my parents do many chores. In the morning, I will make the bed and water flowers. They are relaxing and interesting In the evening, I often clean the room and take out the trash. When 1 see the tidy room, 1 feel proud of myself. My parents are pleased with me. 1 think it's our duty to help our parents with some chores.
5.爱护动物志愿者（面试稿）
十月四日是世界动物日，你校组织以“I want to be a volunteer of protecting animals”为题的志愿者选拔比赛。假如李明参加比赛，请你以“李明”的名义写一篇英语面试材料推荐自己，内容如下：
品质
善良，善待动物；
勤劳，做额外事；
爱好
……（至少两点）
事迹
组织慈善义演，为Save China’s Tigers筹款；
……（至少一点）
感悟
动物是人类的朋友；
保护动物就是保护我们自己；
打算
……（至少两点）
要求：
1.词数100个左右。面试材料的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
2.所写短文必须包括以上内容，自由发挥的内容必须围绕主题。
3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。
（参考词汇：额外的extra）
I want to be a volunteer of protecting animals
Hello, everyone. I’m Li Ming. I want to be a volunteer of protecting animals. _______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
If I can be a volunteer,___________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
Thank you for listening!
I want to be a volunteer of protecting animals
Hello, everyone. I’m Li Ming. I want to be a volunteer of protecting animals I’m glad to make a speech here. I am kind to others. I am good with animals. I like playing football and the guitar. I have ever organized raising money for Save China’s Tigers. And I keep some homeless little animals.
Animals are our friends. We should love each other. I am always thinking protecting animals is protecting ourselves. If I can be a volunteer, I will work harder and do more meaningful things to protect animals. I will announce more people love animals like me. I must try my best to make the world more united.
Thanks for listening!
猜题6、“低碳”生活
我国是一个发展中国家，我们应该勤俭节约，使我国成为一个节约型的社会。我们中学生应该从身边的点滴做起，节约能源。 你是如何做的？请你就这一个话题写一篇小短文，要求语句通顺，语法正确，意思完整，70词左右。下列词语仅供参考 （don’t take ---, recycle books and paper, turn off--,take your own bags,
don’t use plastic bags ，cut down ,take care of---------------)
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
范文：
How to save environment? I think we should do the followings: First, it’s best to ride a bike to school, don’t take a bus or a taxi. Second, I will remember to turn off the lights when I leave the classroom. Third, in my free time, I will collect the empty bottles and waste paper for recycling. The fourth idea is turning off the shower when
I ‘m not using it. Fifth, it is imporment to save water and money. Also, I won’t spend too much money on expensive things. Last, we had better not cut down the trees, we have to take care of the trees . I’ll try my best to save the energy, I hope I can do something for our country.
猜题7、旅游感受
假设你2012年五一期间刚刚从桂林旅游回来。请根据自己的想象及所给的信息，给你的一位朋友Tony写一封信，介绍你对桂林之旅的感受。
注意：（1）词数70-80，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）注意书信格式，信中不得出现真实姓名。
location
in the northeast of Guangxi
history
more than 2,000 years
total size (总面积)
about 27,800 square kilometers
characters
green mountains, clear waters, unique caves and beautiful stones
The most famous tourist attractions (旅游胜地)
Elephant Trunk Hill, Li River, Reed Flute Cave and Seven-star Park
the city symbol (象征)
Elephant Trunk Hill
transportation
by air, by train or by bus; get around on free buses in the city
may 9th, 2012
Dear Tony,
I had a wonderful trip to Guilin with my parents this summer holiday.
________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________
___________
范文：
Dear Tony,
I had a wonderful trip to Guilin with my parents this summer holiday. It is a small city in the northeast of Guangxi. It is more than 2,000 years old and the whole city is about 27,800 square kilometers. There are green mountains, clear waters, unique caves and beautiful stones there. The most famous tourist attractions are Elephant Trunk Hill, Li River, Reed Flute Cave and Seven-star Park. Elephant Trunk Hill is the symbol of the city. It is really a fantastic hill. It looks like a huge elephant drinking water by the Li River!
Ask your parents to bring you to Guilin next time. You can go there by air, by train or by bus and get around on free buses in the city. If you go, I can go with you. I would like to visit it again! I am sure we will have a great time there.
Yours,
Lily
猜题8、为笔友排忧解难
假如你是韩梅，下面是一封你的笔友Alice 给你发来的e-mail, 请根据e-mail的内容，给他写一封回信。与她交流看法，并帮她排忧解难。
提示词语：listen to, mother’s love, care about, communicate with, get along with, smile
Dear Han Mei ,
I’m afraid I’ve got a big problem recently. My mother talks too much to me. She always tells me, “Be careful while crossing the street.” “Put on more clothes.” “Did you do a good job at school?” and so on. I’m annoyed(烦恼). What shall I do? Can you give me some ideas?
Alice
Dear Alice,
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
Han Mei
范文：
Dear Alice,
As a teenager, I met the same problem as you. But now I can get on/ along better with my mother. Here are some ideas for you.
Your mother talks much, because she cares about you. Maybe it shows your mother’s love. So I think you should listen to her. If your opinions are different from your mother’s, you can communicate with her, and tell her what you’re thinking about. If your mother doesn’t take your advice, just keep silent and give her a smile.
I hope what I say here can help you a lot.
Han Mei
猜题9、网上交友
网上交友已成为当代青年生活的一部分。它有助于青年人认识和了解世界，方便朋友之间相互了解，相互帮助。同时也存在一些危险，令人担心。请以Is making friends online bad or good?为题写一篇80字左右的短文，谈谈你对网上交友的观点。开头已给出。（10分）
参考词：分享，分担share 欺骗cheat
Is making friends online bad or good?
Life without friends must be boring. __________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
范文：
Life without friends must be boring. More and more young people enjoy making friends online, so it has become a part of their lives.
It is true that making friends online helps us a lot. The more friends we have, the more information we get. That means we can know and understand the world better. What’s more, friends can help each other when they are in trouble, and share their happiness and sadness when they are happy or sad.
Of course, making friends online may bring danger and trouble, too. Some bad and harmful things have happened to some people. There have been many people who are cheated online.
So I think making friends online is good and helpful, but we must be careful.
猜题10、升上高中的设想
2012年九月，我们每一位同学即将进入新的学校。请你根据下列提示，以“New School, New Life” 为题，用英文写一篇80词左右的短文，谈一谈你的新学校、新生活、新打算，（注：文章的开头已给出，不计入词数）
What kind of new friends and teachers would you like to have?
What do you think your new school life will be like?
How will you improve yourself in the future?
New School, New Life
I’m a student in a secondary school and will graduate in two months. I hope to ____________
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范文：
I’m a student in a secondary school and will graduate in two months. I hope to study in a beautiful high school. I want to have lots of good friends. My new teachers will be very friendly to me and I can learn a lot from them. In the new school, we will have enough time to do after-school activities. The life will be very colourful. If I have some problems in the new school, I can go to a ‘buddy club’ for help. In the future, I will do my best to improve myself. I believe I will be better and better.
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根据要求完成下列短文写作，把答案写在答题卡指定的位置上。
你喜欢阅读吗？请你以 “Reading---A good Habit” 为题写一篇有关阅读的短文。
内容包括：
1. 你的阅读习惯（喜欢的书籍、阅读的时间地点、购书方式等等）。
2. 阅读带给你什么益处（至少两点）。
3. 号召大家都读书。
作文要求：
1. 不能照抄原文，不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。如需使用学校名
称或学生的姓名，一律使用Shantou Middle School 和Jenny.
2. 语句连贯，词数80词左右。
Reading---A good Habit
Reading is a very good habit. I like reading very much. ________________________________
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参考范文******One possible vision:
Reading---A good Habit
Reading is a very good habit. I like reading very much. In my eyes, I think that forming a good reading habit is necessary for us. It can not only improve our knowledge but also make us to think over more different things efficiently.
Besides, we can do some reading every time when we are free. For example, I often read some of my favorite books in my spare time both at home or in the library. What I like most are story books because most of them are quite interesting. Now I often buy my favorite books on line for its big discount.
Finally, I like to share my favorite books with our family or my classmates. Since reading can benefits us a lot, it’s time for us to have our good reading habit now!
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书面表达
初中三年的学校生活就要结束了，回顾三年的学校生活，你(Jack)感慨万分。校园网的英语论坛开辟了“My School Life”专栏，供同学们发表感言。请你为该专栏写一篇短文，回顾自己三年的学校生活。
短文主要包括：回顾、感谢、祝愿等。回顾应涉及到生动有趣的课堂、活泼可爱的同学、丰富多彩的活动、自己的优点及不足等，你可以适当发挥。
要求；字数在80词左右，第一句已经给出，不记入总数。文中不得出现真实姓名及校名。
I’m lucky to study in this beautiful school.
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Jack from Class 3
参考范文******One possible version:
I’ m lucky to study in this beautiful school. The teachers are great. They always try to make their lessons lively and interesting. The classmates are lovely and friendly. The school life is rich and colorful. They make me happy every day.
In the past three years, I am hardworking and have made great progress. I do well in the exams. I am good at communicating and I like to make friends with others.
However, I have problems, too. I will spend less time online. I will do more sports and become stronger.
Thank you my teachers and classmates. Wish my school more beautiful, my teachers and classmates a happy life!
Jack from Class 3
评分说明：
要求考生用适当的时态、语态、句式和词语，完整准确地表述所提示的内容，书写工整。分四档评分：
1. 短文通顺完整，表达清楚, 语言基本无误，9－10分;
2. 短文较通顺完整，表达基本清楚，语言有少量错误，6－8分;
3. 能写明基本要点，短文不够通顺完整，语言有较多错误，但尚能达意，3－5分;
4. 仅能写明部分要点，短文不完整，语言错误多，影响意思表达，0－2分。
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今天对于Tom来说是个糟糕的日子。他遇到几个问题：上学迟到, 老师很生气；数学课本丢失了；由于昨天晚上熬夜，所以上课睡着了，没有听老师讲课；晚上有足球赛，可是妈妈可能不给他看，所以他心情很不好。他向他的英国笔友Betty讲述了他的问题，假如你是Betty, 请你针对这几个问题给他写一封电子邮件提一些建议。
要求：1. 语言通顺，语法正确；2. 100词左右。
Dear Tom,
I’m very sorry to hear that you have some problems today.
Yours
Betty
参考范文******One possible version:
Dear Tom,
I’m very sorry to hear that you have some problems today. Here is some advice for you. I think there are lots of things you could do. You should say sorry to your teacher for being late for school. You should try to be at school on time. You can borrow a math book from your friend or buy a new one. You should go to bed early to get enough sleep. Then you won’t fall asleep in the daytime, and you can listen to the teachers carefully. I think your mother will allow you to watch the football match tonight if you finish your homework in time and study hard.
Good Luck!
Yours,
Betty
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请从90后初中生的优点和缺点两个方面进行客观的描述，然后制定个人将来的目标和计划。
优点
缺点
目标和计划
1. 当别人遇到麻烦时经常乐于助人；
2. 活跃，对新鲜的事物感兴趣；
3. 喜欢做事与众不同。
1. 易激动、发怒；
2. 因粗心而常犯同样的错误；
3. 有时只考虑自己的感受。
1. 理想是成为……；
2. 我已努力……；
3. 我相信……。
具体要求：
1. 目标和计划需用３句话展开合理想象并作适当发挥。
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，字迹工整。
3. 开头已给出，不计入总词数, 80词左右。
As post-90 students, we ___________________________________________________
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参考范文
仅作参考
As post-90 students, we are often willing to help others when they are in trouble. We are active and very interested in something new. We like to do things differently. We are easy to get excited and angry. We often make the same mistakes because we are very careless. Sometimes we only think about our own feelings. My dream is to be a teacher. I have tried my best to keep a balance between study and hobbies. I believe my dream will come true.
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假设你是李华，刚到英国学习、生活了两个月。在英国期间，你住在大卫(David)家中。请在答题卡指定的位置上，用英语给他写一封感谢信，内容要点如下：
表达谢意
感谢大卫及其家人对你的悉心照顾。
难忘的事
大卫很耐心地帮助你学习英语；
大卫带你去游览了伦敦；
大卫的母亲在你生病时送你去医院，给你做好吃的食物。
学习收获
提高了英语水平，更多地了解了英国的文化。
发出邀请
邀请大卫及其家人到你家作客。你会……
注意：1.信件要包含所给的内容要点，其中最后一个要点应用2句话作适当发挥；
2.词数80个左右，信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3.信中不得出现真实的人名与校名。
参考词汇：文化 culture
Dear David,
I’ve just got back home. I want to say thanks to you and your family because _________
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Yours,
Li Hua
参考范文******One possible version:
Dear David,
I’ve just got back home. I want to say thanks to you and your family because you took good care of me during my stay in the UK. You were patient enough to help me with my English. You showed me around London. Your mother sent me to hospital when I felt sick and cooked delicious food for me. Now, I have improved my English and learnt more about British culture. I would like to invite you and your family to my home. I will cook Chinese food for you. I’m sure you can have a good time visiting China.
Yours,
Li Hua
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学校英语社团在举办英语征文比赛。请你根据下表所列要点，用英语以“Learn to smile”为题写一篇短文参赛。
对自己微笑
1、使你自信；2、使你忘掉烦恼；生活中会有不愉快的事，如考试不及格……（须有两个例子）
对他人微笑
1、使人与人更亲近；2、能带来友谊；
微笑是一种语言……（至少用两句话再谈你对微笑的理解）
注意：-
词数80左右。短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；
短文须包括所有内容要点，不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Learn to smile
We should often wear a smile. ______________________________________________
参考范文******Version 1:?
Learn to smile
We should often wear a smile Smiling to ourselves can bring back our confidence (make us feel confident). As in our life, there may be something unpleasant. For example, we fail (in) an exam or we may be misunderstood. These unpleasant things may make us feel bad. Why not learn to smile? It can also make us forget our worries (trouble).We can smile to others because it will help us to get closer to them and bring us friendship. I think smile is a helpful language and it’s necessary in our life.
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请仔细观看下面图画，结合自己的实际生活，写一篇关于“节能环保”的英语短文，：词数80-100 ，开头已给出。
要求：
简要描述图中的现象
分析产生这种现象的原因（如：没有良好的习惯,没有节能环保的意识等等）
提出相对应的建议（至少两点）
提示：图中睡觉的是小明，妇女是小明的母亲。
节能 save energy 有…的意识 have the sense of
It was midnight ._________________________________________________
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作文范文：
It was midnight . Xiaoming was sleeping soundly in the sofa, with the TV on ,when his mother came in and turned it off for him ,complaining that he didn’t turn it off again.
It often happens in our daily life .Many people are used to doing everything with the TV on, even though they don’t watch it at all. And, they don’t have the sense of energy –saving and environment protection. Such a habit can cause a waste of much energy ,and do harm to our environment.
To have a eco-friendly life , we should strengthen the sense of energy-saving .It’s our duty to protect the environment. We should also pay attention to every detail in our daily life .For example ,before sleeping ,we should turn off the TV in time . In this way, we can live a happier and healthier life .
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2012中考英语：五月冲刺（书面表达第3集共23页--作文高分秘诀、预测）
该精品1、介绍了初中英语作文高分秘诀 2、2012书面表达预测（10篇）--电子邀请函、回复求助、询问旅行事宜、中华美德（演讲稿）、爱护动物志愿者（面试稿）、“低碳”生活、旅游感受、为笔友排忧解难、网上交友、升上高中的设想。 3、2012书面表达实战训练题及参考范文
我为大家准备了英语作文考试的一些方法，供大家参考。
初中英语作文高分秘诀
***书面表达的方法介绍：
书面表达是每年中考必考题型，是考查学生交际能力的一个重要组成部分。书面表达通常有三种形式：
1、书信、日记、通知、留言、假条；
2、看图作文；
3、根据汉语提示作文。
??? 无论是那一种书面表达形式，考生所写的短文都要紧扣主题、文理通顺，要素完整，语言准确、得当、格式正确、无大、小写和拼写错误，标点符号正确，能达到交际目的。
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【名师解难】
一. 训练方法
1. 记。认真系统复习和背诵基础知识和优美的句子、句型。中国有句古话，叫“熟读唐诗三百首，不会吟诗也会作”。同样，要使自己具有较强的写作能力，首先应该熟读和背诵一些句型和短文。许多同学写出来的语言根本不符合英语的语言习惯，相当一部分人有对照中文逐字翻译的不良习惯，不去理会中英文的差异。大量的背诵和阅读是提高写作能力的有效办法，同学们若有大量的现成语言积累在脑海里，自己写起文段来，就可以做到脱口而出，或是模仿、套用，甚至发挥。
2. 练。每练一篇书面表达题，都要真正学到一点东西，不可贪多而边学边忘。平时可以采用循序渐进、灵活多样的练习方式。从根据提示词写单句开始，到写单句，然后到写几句话，最后到写流利的文段。尽量尝试多种形式的写作，如短信、说明、通知、便条、明信片、看图写作、根据表格或记录写短文等。
3. 写。要进行实战写作。要求自己在20分钟内写出100个词的短文，并且质量高、内容全、形式正确。这样形成习惯，考试时就能得心应手。?
二. 应试策略
1. 审题目：要切中题意。《中考考试说明》指出，书面表达要切中题意。怎样才能切中题意？就是要认真审题，看到考题后，先不要急于动笔，要仔细看清题目要求的内容。在自己的头脑中构思出一个框架或画面，确定短文的中心思想，不要匆匆下笔，看懂题意，根据图画、图表、提纲或短文提供的资料和信息来审题。审题要审格式、体裁、人物关系、故事情节、主体时态、活动时间、地点等。
2. 圈要点：防止遗漏要点。要点是给分的一个重要因素。为了防止写作过程中遗漏要点，同学们要充分发挥自己的观察力，把情景中给出的各个要点逐条列出。
3. 列提纲：为写作做好准备。根据文章要点短文的中心思想将主要句型、关键词语记下，形成提纲。
4. 定基调：定出时态、人称、顺序、开头、结尾。
5. 写全文：写短文时要做到以下六个方面：
(1)避免使用汉语式英语，尽量使用自己熟悉的句型。几种句型可交替使用，以避免重复和呆板。
(2)多用简单句型，记事、写人一般都不需要复杂的句型。可适当多使用陈述句、一般疑问句、祈使句和感叹句。不用或少用非谓语或情态动词等较复杂的句型。
(3)注意语法、句法知识的灵活运用。
1）语态、时态要准确无误。
2）主谓语要一致，主语的人称和数要和谓语一致。
3）注意人称代词的宾格形式。
4）注意冠词用法，例如： He is an honest student.中的an不能写成a。
5）注意拼写、标点符号和大小写，例如：receive, believe, fourteen, forty, ninth, restaurant等。
(4)描写人物时，要生动具体，例如：
1）外表特征：tall, short, fat, thin, strong, weak, ordinary-looking 等。
2）服饰颜色：red, yellow, blue, white, green, brown, black 等。
3）内心境界：glad, happy, sad, excited, anxious, interested 等。
4）感情描写：love, like, hate, feel, laugh, cry, smile, shout 等。
5）动作描写：come, go, get, have, take, bring, fetch 等。
(5)上下文要连贯。上下文的连贯性也是评分的一条原则，因此同学们应把写好的句子，根据故事情节，事情发生的先后次序（时间或空间），使用一些表示并列、递进等过渡词进行加工整理，使文章连贯、自然、流畅。同学们应注意下面过渡的用法：
1）表示并列关系的：and, as well as, or… 2）表示转折关系的：but, yet, however… 3）表示时间关系的：when, while, after, before, then, after that… 4）表示因果关系的：so, therefore ,as a result… 5）表示目的的：in order to, in order that , so as to, so that… 6）表示列举的：for example , such as… 7）表示总结性的：in general, in all, in a word, generally speaking…
(6)不会表达，另辟蹊径。中考作文给分是以要点和语言准确度而定，不以文采打分。造句越简单准确越好，造复合句容易出错，容易被扣分，阅卷场上有句话：“错误面前人人平等，文采好不加分”。如遇到个别要点表达不出来或难以表达，可采用变通的办法，化难为易，化繁为简。总之，所造句子要正确、得体、符合英语表达习惯。
6.改病句：认真检查，改正错误。中考作文时，由于时间紧、内容多，同学们出错在所难免。因此，改错这一环节必不可少。中考作文评卷是根据要点、语言准确性、上下文的连贯性来给分，根据错误多少来扣分。因此，中考时花几分钟时间用来检查错误显得尤为重要。检查错误应从以下几个方面入手：
1）格式是否有错。
2）拼写有无错误。
3）语言是否用错。
4）时态、语态错误。
5）标点错误。
6）人称是否用错。
三. 注意事项
书面表达要特别注意书写工整，卷面整洁。每年阅卷老师在十来天的时间里要看十几万考生的作文，工作量之大，时间之紧，可想而知。书写是否工整，卷面是否整洁与得分高低直接有关。
分析实例：
假如你叫张强。请根据下面美国朋友Bob的来信内容，结合你自己的情况写一篇语言连惯、符合逻辑的英文回信。?
要求：1. 认真阅读来信的内容，从中获得你需要的信息。?
2. 词数：80左右。回信的开头、结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。
注意：回信中不得出现你的真实地址和所在学校的名称。?
Dear friend,?
Hello！I’m your new friend. My name is Bob. I’m fifteen. I’m American. I live in New York.?
I am a middle school student. I’m good at maths. It is very interesting. My favourite sport is basketball. And I am not only a basketball fan but also a good player. I like pop music. My friends and I often sing pop songs together.?
After school, I am interested in getting on-line. I have known a lot about China from the Internet. Now I’m learning Chinese. I hope I will visit your country one day.?
Please write to me and tell me something about your life. I’m looking forward to hearing from you.?
Yours,?
Bob?
Dear Bob,
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???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? Yours,
????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? Zhang Qiang
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【解析】根据前面提到第六个步骤，我们来写一下这篇书面表达。
1.审题目：通过审题目我们可以知道：本篇书面表达应是写一封回信，写信人是张强，收信人是Bob，信的内容应是介绍张强自己的情况。
2. 圈要点：根据来信判断，写回信必须包括以下要点：1、收到对方的来信；2、愿意和对方交朋友；3、自己的姓名、年龄和住址；4、自己的身份、特长和爱好； 5、自己的希望。
3、列提纲：1. got your letter 2. glad to be your friend 3. name, zhang Qiang, fifteen, live in Shaanxi 4. a middle school student, like English, like sports, good at drawing, 5. hope we’ll meet in China
4、定基调：1. 时态：收到来信用一般过去时，介绍情况用一般现在时，希望用一般将来时。2. 人称用第一人称。3.可按提纲的顺序来写。4. 开头和结尾题目已经给出。
5、写全文：
Dear Bob,
??? I got your letter yesterday. I’m very glad to be your pen friend. My name is Zhang Qiang. I’m fifteen years old, too. I live in Shaanxi.
?I’m a middle school student, too. I like English and physics very much. I also like sports, but I’m good at drawing. I know a little about America. Could you tell me something more about your country in your next letter?
I hope we’ll meet in China some day. I’m sure we’ll have a good time together.
Please write (to) me soon.
Yours,
Zhang Qiang
6、改病句：认真复查一边，如有错误，加以改正。
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1.电子邀请函:
假如你是张文，八年级四班的班长。你们班排练了一部英文课本剧（an English textbook play），准备本周六下午4:00在学校礼堂（the school hall）演出。请你用英语给学校的外籍教师Terry写一封80字左右的E-mail，邀请他来观看演出，并在演出结束时发言。
注意：1. 可增加细节，使文章连贯完整；2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Terry,
Hi, I’m Zhang Wen, monitor of Class 4, Grade 8.
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We are all looking forward to your coming.
Zhang Wen
Dear Terry,
Hi, I’m Zhang Wen, monitor of Class 4, Grade 8. I’m writing to ask if you will be free on Saturday. Our class have made an English textbook play. We are going to put it on at the school hall on Saturday. Time is 4:00 p.m. The play is about a famous English story. I’m sure you will enjoy it. We hope you can come, and we do hope you can give a speech at he end of the performance. We’d like you to give us some tips about English learning. If you can come, please let me know.
We are all looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Zhang Wen
2.回复求助
假设你是某英文杂志的“知心姐姐”（Agony Sister），Helen. 请阅读下面的这封求助信，并根据信的内容写一封回信。
要求：1. 80词左右；2. 文中不要出现作者本人的真实信息。
Dear Helen,
Last Sunday, my classmates and I went to the park. I wanted to take some photos. My father was out at that time, so I took his camera without telling her. Unfortunately, the camera went out of my bag and dropped on the ground when I was climbing the hill. It didn’t work at all. I put it back quietly after I returned home. And I haven’t told him till now. when I face my father, I feel terrible. What should I do?
Yours, David
Dear David,
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Best wishes,
Helen
One possible version:
Dear David,
First, I think you'd better tell your father immediately. It you tell him the truth, he'll be
angry with you. But at least you'll prove how honest you are. Then I think you should offer to pay. But you shouldn't use your pocket money. Yes, a camera is expensive, maybe you can't afford it. If you offer to do some jobs around the house, he'll realize that you're truly sorry.
Oh, remember to be careful next tune.
Best wishes,
3. 询问旅行事宜
假如你叫李华，是杭州市某中学初三学生。你计划于毕业考试后去英格兰旅行。信中要包括自己的行程安排；询问风俗习惯和苏格兰的旅游地点。词数60左右。
列举写作要点
1.旅游安排；plan
?2. 风俗习惯；culture and customs
?3. 名胜：places of interest
三、列出关键短语和句型
be away 离开 provide…with 提供… would like to do 想要做某事
Dear Ben,
How is everything? I am going to travel to England with my parents after finishing the final exam. We’d like to be away for about ten days. But I don’t know about England. I hope you can provide me with some information about the customs of England. I would like to travel to exciting places in England. Please introduce some interesting places to me.
Yours.
Li Hua
4：中华美德（演讲稿）
假如你是王明，你将代表学校参加杭州市屮学生英诂演讲比赛。演讲的题目是 We should help parents do housework. 请你用英诰写一篇演讲稿。
要点提示：
现 象
你常做的家务
你的体会和看法
许多学生懒惰，不愿做家务。
◆ 修理床铺
◆ 浇花
◆ 打扫房间
◆ 倒垃圾
◆……
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(至少两点）
参考词汇: lazy, chores, make the bed, water flowers, clean the room, take out the trash, relaxing, interesting, proud, pleased, duty
要求：1.短文须包含要点提示中的所有信息，并可适当发挥； 2. 80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 3.文中不得出现自己的真实姓名、校名和地名。
Ladies and gentlemen,
Good morning! I'm Wang Ming. It's my honor to give you a speech. My topic is We should help parents do housework.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That's all. Thanks for your listening!
One possible version:
Ladies and gentlemen,
Good morning! I'm Wang Ming It's my honor to give you a speech. My topic is We should help parents do housework. Now many students are too lazy to do housework. But I think we should help parents do some housework because they are busy with their work and tired after work. 1 often help my parents do many chores. In the morning, I will make the bed and water flowers. They are relaxing and interesting In the evening, I often clean the room and take out the trash. When 1 see the tidy room, 1 feel proud of myself. My parents are pleased with me. 1 think it's our duty to help our parents with some chores.
5.爱护动物志愿者（面试稿）
十月四日是世界动物日，你校组织以“I want to be a volunteer of protecting animals”为题的志愿者选拔比赛。假如李明参加比赛，请你以“李明”的名义写一篇英语面试材料推荐自己，内容如下：
品质
善良，善待动物；
勤劳，做额外事；
爱好
……（至少两点）
事迹
组织慈善义演，为Save China’s Tigers筹款；
……（至少一点）
感悟
动物是人类的朋友；
保护动物就是保护我们自己；
打算
……（至少两点）
要求：
1.词数100个左右。面试材料的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
2.所写短文必须包括以上内容，自由发挥的内容必须围绕主题。
3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。
（参考词汇：额外的extra）
I want to be a volunteer of protecting animals
Hello, everyone. I’m Li Ming. I want to be a volunteer of protecting animals. _______________________________________________________________________________
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If I can be a volunteer,___________________________________________________________
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Thank you for listening!
I want to be a volunteer of protecting animals
Hello, everyone. I’m Li Ming. I want to be a volunteer of protecting animals I’m glad to make a speech here. I am kind to others. I am good with animals. I like playing football and the guitar. I have ever organized raising money for Save China’s Tigers. And I keep some homeless little animals.
Animals are our friends. We should love each other. I am always thinking protecting animals is protecting ourselves. If I can be a volunteer, I will work harder and do more meaningful things to protect animals. I will announce more people love animals like me. I must try my best to make the world more united.
Thanks for listening!
猜题6、“低碳”生活
我国是一个发展中国家，我们应该勤俭节约，使我国成为一个节约型的社会。我们中学生应该从身边的点滴做起，节约能源。 你是如何做的？请你就这一个话题写一篇小短文，要求语句通顺，语法正确，意思完整，70词左右。下列词语仅供参考 （don’t take ---, recycle books and paper, turn off--,take your own bags,
don’t use plastic bags ，cut down ,take care of---------------)
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范文：
How to save environment? I think we should do the followings: First, it’s best to ride a bike to school, don’t take a bus or a taxi. Second, I will remember to turn off the lights when I leave the classroom. Third, in my free time, I will collect the empty bottles and waste paper for recycling. The fourth idea is turning off the shower when
I ‘m not using it. Fifth, it is imporment to save water and money. Also, I won’t spend too much money on expensive things. Last, we had better not cut down the trees, we have to take care of the trees . I’ll try my best to save the energy, I hope I can do something for our country.
猜题7、旅游感受
假设你2012年五一期间刚刚从桂林旅游回来。请根据自己的想象及所给的信息，给你的一位朋友Tony写一封信，介绍你对桂林之旅的感受。
注意：（1）词数70-80，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）注意书信格式，信中不得出现真实姓名。
location
in the northeast of Guangxi
history
more than 2,000 years
total size (总面积)
about 27,800 square kilometers
characters
green mountains, clear waters, unique caves and beautiful stones
The most famous tourist attractions (旅游胜地)
Elephant Trunk Hill, Li River, Reed Flute Cave and Seven-star Park
the city symbol (象征)
Elephant Trunk Hill
transportation
by air, by train or by bus; get around on free buses in the city
may 9th, 2012
Dear Tony,
I had a wonderful trip to Guilin with my parents this summer holiday.
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范文：
Dear Tony,
I had a wonderful trip to Guilin with my parents this summer holiday. It is a small city in the northeast of Guangxi. It is more than 2,000 years old and the whole city is about 27,800 square kilometers. There are green mountains, clear waters, unique caves and beautiful stones there. The most famous tourist attractions are Elephant Trunk Hill, Li River, Reed Flute Cave and Seven-star Park. Elephant Trunk Hill is the symbol of the city. It is really a fantastic hill. It looks like a huge elephant drinking water by the Li River!
Ask your parents to bring you to Guilin next time. You can go there by air, by train or by bus and get around on free buses in the city. If you go, I can go with you. I would like to visit it again! I am sure we will have a great time there.
Yours,
Lily
猜题8、为笔友排忧解难
假如你是韩梅，下面是一封你的笔友Alice 给你发来的e-mail, 请根据e-mail的内容，给他写一封回信。与她交流看法，并帮她排忧解难。
提示词语：listen to, mother’s love, care about, communicate with, get along with, smile
Dear Han Mei ,
I’m afraid I’ve got a big problem recently. My mother talks too much to me. She always tells me, “Be careful while crossing the street.” “Put on more clothes.” “Did you do a good job at school?” and so on. I’m annoyed(烦恼). What shall I do? Can you give me some ideas?
Alice
Dear Alice,
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范文：
Dear Alice,
As a teenager, I met the same problem as you. But now I can get on/ along better with my mother. Here are some ideas for you.
Your mother talks much, because she cares about you. Maybe it shows your mother’s love. So I think you should listen to her. If your opinions are different from your mother’s, you can communicate with her, and tell her what you’re thinking about. If your mother doesn’t take your advice, just keep silent and give her a smile.
I hope what I say here can help you a lot.
Han Mei
猜题9、网上交友
网上交友已成为当代青年生活的一部分。它有助于青年人认识和了解世界，方便朋友之间相互了解，相互帮助。同时也存在一些危险，令人担心。请以Is making friends online bad or good?为题写一篇80字左右的短文，谈谈你对网上交友的观点。开头已给出。（10分）
参考词：分享，分担share 欺骗cheat
Is making friends online bad or good?
Life without friends must be boring. __________________________________________________
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范文：
Life without friends must be boring. More and more young people enjoy making friends online, so it has become a part of their lives.
It is true that making friends online helps us a lot. The more friends we have, the more information we get. That means we can know and understand the world better. What’s more, friends can help each other when they are in trouble, and share their happiness and sadness when they are happy or sad.
Of course, making friends online may bring danger and trouble, too. Some bad and harmful things have happened to some people. There have been many people who are cheated online.
So I think making friends online is good and helpful, but we must be careful.
猜题10、升上高中的设想
2012年九月，我们每一位同学即将进入新的学校。请你根据下列提示，以“New School, New Life” 为题，用英文写一篇80词左右的短文，谈一谈你的新学校、新生活、新打算，（注：文章的开头已给出，不计入词数）
What kind of new friends and teachers would you like to have?
What do you think your new school life will be like?
How will you improve yourself in the future?
New School, New Life
I’m a student in a secondary school and will graduate in two months. I hope to ____________
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范文：
I’m a student in a secondary school and will graduate in two months. I hope to study in a beautiful high school. I want to have lots of good friends. My new teachers will be very friendly to me and I can learn a lot from them. In the new school, we will have enough time to do after-school activities. The life will be very colourful. If I have some problems in the new school, I can go to a ‘buddy club’ for help. In the future, I will do my best to improve myself. I believe I will be better and better.
******2012书面表达实战训练题******
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根据要求完成下列短文写作，把答案写在答题卡指定的位置上。
你喜欢阅读吗？请你以 “Reading---A good Habit” 为题写一篇有关阅读的短文。
内容包括：
1. 你的阅读习惯（喜欢的书籍、阅读的时间地点、购书方式等等）。
2. 阅读带给你什么益处（至少两点）。
3. 号召大家都读书。
作文要求：
1. 不能照抄原文，不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。如需使用学校名
称或学生的姓名，一律使用Shantou Middle School 和Jenny.
2. 语句连贯，词数80词左右。
Reading---A good Habit
Reading is a very good habit. I like reading very much. ________________________________
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参考范文******One possible vision:
Reading---A good Habit
Reading is a very good habit. I like reading very much. In my eyes, I think that forming a good reading habit is necessary for us. It can not only improve our knowledge but also make us to think over more different things efficiently.
Besides, we can do some reading every time when we are free. For example, I often read some of my favorite books in my spare time both at home or in the library. What I like most are story books because most of them are quite interesting. Now I often buy my favorite books on line for its big discount.
Finally, I like to share my favorite books with our family or my classmates. Since reading can benefits us a lot, it’s time for us to have our good reading habit now!
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书面表达
初中三年的学校生活就要结束了，回顾三年的学校生活，你(Jack)感慨万分。校园网的英语论坛开辟了“My School Life”专栏，供同学们发表感言。请你为该专栏写一篇短文，回顾自己三年的学校生活。
短文主要包括：回顾、感谢、祝愿等。回顾应涉及到生动有趣的课堂、活泼可爱的同学、丰富多彩的活动、自己的优点及不足等，你可以适当发挥。
要求；字数在80词左右，第一句已经给出，不记入总数。文中不得出现真实姓名及校名。
I’m lucky to study in this beautiful school.
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Jack from Class 3
参考范文******One possible version:
I’ m lucky to study in this beautiful school. The teachers are great. They always try to make their lessons lively and interesting. The classmates are lovely and friendly. The school life is rich and colorful. They make me happy every day.
In the past three years, I am hardworking and have made great progress. I do well in the exams. I am good at communicating and I like to make friends with others.
However, I have problems, too. I will spend less time online. I will do more sports and become stronger.
Thank you my teachers and classmates. Wish my school more beautiful, my teachers and classmates a happy life!
Jack from Class 3
评分说明：
要求考生用适当的时态、语态、句式和词语，完整准确地表述所提示的内容，书写工整。分四档评分：
1. 短文通顺完整，表达清楚, 语言基本无误，9－10分;
2. 短文较通顺完整，表达基本清楚，语言有少量错误，6－8分;
3. 能写明基本要点，短文不够通顺完整，语言有较多错误，但尚能达意，3－5分;
4. 仅能写明部分要点，短文不完整，语言错误多，影响意思表达，0－2分。
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今天对于Tom来说是个糟糕的日子。他遇到几个问题：上学迟到, 老师很生气；数学课本丢失了；由于昨天晚上熬夜，所以上课睡着了，没有听老师讲课；晚上有足球赛，可是妈妈可能不给他看，所以他心情很不好。他向他的英国笔友Betty讲述了他的问题，假如你是Betty, 请你针对这几个问题给他写一封电子邮件提一些建议。
要求：1. 语言通顺，语法正确；2. 100词左右。
Dear Tom,
I’m very sorry to hear that you have some problems today.
Yours
Betty
参考范文******One possible version:
Dear Tom,
I’m very sorry to hear that you have some problems today. Here is some advice for you. I think there are lots of things you could do. You should say sorry to your teacher for being late for school. You should try to be at school on time. You can borrow a math book from your friend or buy a new one. You should go to bed early to get enough sleep. Then you won’t fall asleep in the daytime, and you can listen to the teachers carefully. I think your mother will allow you to watch the football match tonight if you finish your homework in time and study hard.
Good Luck!
Yours,
Betty
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请从90后初中生的优点和缺点两个方面进行客观的描述，然后制定个人将来的目标和计划。
优点
缺点
目标和计划
1. 当别人遇到麻烦时经常乐于助人；
2. 活跃，对新鲜的事物感兴趣；
3. 喜欢做事与众不同。
1. 易激动、发怒；
2. 因粗心而常犯同样的错误；
3. 有时只考虑自己的感受。
1. 理想是成为……；
2. 我已努力……；
3. 我相信……。
具体要求：
1. 目标和计划需用３句话展开合理想象并作适当发挥。
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，字迹工整。
3. 开头已给出，不计入总词数, 80词左右。
As post-90 students, we ___________________________________________________
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参考范文
仅作参考
As post-90 students, we are often willing to help others when they are in trouble. We are active and very interested in something new. We like to do things differently. We are easy to get excited and angry. We often make the same mistakes because we are very careless. Sometimes we only think about our own feelings. My dream is to be a teacher. I have tried my best to keep a balance between study and hobbies. I believe my dream will come true.
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假设你是李华，刚到英国学习、生活了两个月。在英国期间，你住在大卫(David)家中。请在答题卡指定的位置上，用英语给他写一封感谢信，内容要点如下：
表达谢意
感谢大卫及其家人对你的悉心照顾。
难忘的事
大卫很耐心地帮助你学习英语；
大卫带你去游览了伦敦；
大卫的母亲在你生病时送你去医院，给你做好吃的食物。
学习收获
提高了英语水平，更多地了解了英国的文化。
发出邀请
邀请大卫及其家人到你家作客。你会……
注意：1.信件要包含所给的内容要点，其中最后一个要点应用2句话作适当发挥；
2.词数80个左右，信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3.信中不得出现真实的人名与校名。
参考词汇：文化 culture
Dear David,
I’ve just got back home. I want to say thanks to you and your family because _________
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Yours,
Li Hua
参考范文******One possible version:
Dear David,
I’ve just got back home. I want to say thanks to you and your family because you took good care of me during my stay in the UK. You were patient enough to help me with my English. You showed me around London. Your mother sent me to hospital when I felt sick and cooked delicious food for me. Now, I have improved my English and learnt more about British culture. I would like to invite you and your family to my home. I will cook Chinese food for you. I’m sure you can have a good time visiting China.
Yours,
Li Hua
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学校英语社团在举办英语征文比赛。请你根据下表所列要点，用英语以“Learn to smile”为题写一篇短文参赛。
对自己微笑
1、使你自信；2、使你忘掉烦恼；生活中会有不愉快的事，如考试不及格……（须有两个例子）
对他人微笑
1、使人与人更亲近；2、能带来友谊；
微笑是一种语言……（至少用两句话再谈你对微笑的理解）
注意：-
词数80左右。短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；
短文须包括所有内容要点，不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Learn to smile
We should often wear a smile. ______________________________________________
参考范文******Version 1:?
Learn to smile
We should often wear a smile Smiling to ourselves can bring back our confidence (make us feel confident). As in our life, there may be something unpleasant. For example, we fail (in) an exam or we may be misunderstood. These unpleasant things may make us feel bad. Why not learn to smile? It can also make us forget our worries (trouble).We can smile to others because it will help us to get closer to them and bring us friendship. I think smile is a helpful language and it’s necessary in our life.
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请仔细观看下面图画，结合自己的实际生活，写一篇关于“节能环保”的英语短文，：词数80-100 ，开头已给出。
要求：
简要描述图中的现象
分析产生这种现象的原因（如：没有良好的习惯,没有节能环保的意识等等）
提出相对应的建议（至少两点）
提示：图中睡觉的是小明，妇女是小明的母亲。
节能 save energy 有…的意识 have the sense of
It was midnight ._________________________________________________
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作文范文：
It was midnight . Xiaoming was sleeping soundly in the sofa, with the TV on ,when his mother came in and turned it off for him ,complaining that he didn’t turn it off again.
It often happens in our daily life .Many people are used to doing everything with the TV on, even though they don’t watch it at all. And, they don’t have the sense of energy –saving and environment protection. Such a habit can cause a waste of much energy ,and do harm to our environment.
To have a eco-friendly life , we should strengthen the sense of energy-saving .It’s our duty to protect the environment. We should also pay attention to every detail in our daily life .For example ,before sleeping ,we should turn off the TV in time . In this way, we can live a happier and healthier life .
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该精品1、介绍了初中英语作文高分秘诀 2、2012书面表达预测（10篇）--电子邀请函、回复求助、询问旅行事宜、中华美德（演讲稿）、爱护动物志愿者（面试稿）、“低碳”生活、旅游感受、为笔友排忧解难、网上交友、升上高中的设想。 3、2012书面表达实战训练题及参考范文
我为大家准备了英语作文考试的一些方法，供大家参考。
初中英语作文高分秘诀
***书面表达的方法介绍：
书面表达是每年中考必考题型，是考查学生交际能力的一个重要组成部分。书面表达通常有三种形式：
1、书信、日记、通知、留言、假条；
2、看图作文；
3、根据汉语提示作文。
??? 无论是那一种书面表达形式，考生所写的短文都要紧扣主题、文理通顺，要素完整，语言准确、得当、格式正确、无大、小写和拼写错误，标点符号正确，能达到交际目的。
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【名师解难】
一. 训练方法
1. 记。认真系统复习和背诵基础知识和优美的句子、句型。中国有句古话，叫“熟读唐诗三百首，不会吟诗也会作”。同样，要使自己具有较强的写作能力，首先应该熟读和背诵一些句型和短文。许多同学写出来的语言根本不符合英语的语言习惯，相当一部分人有对照中文逐字翻译的不良习惯，不去理会中英文的差异。大量的背诵和阅读是提高写作能力的有效办法，同学们若有大量的现成语言积累在脑海里，自己写起文段来，就可以做到脱口而出，或是模仿、套用，甚至发挥。
2. 练。每练一篇书面表达题，都要真正学到一点东西，不可贪多而边学边忘。平时可以采用循序渐进、灵活多样的练习方式。从根据提示词写单句开始，到写单句，然后到写几句话，最后到写流利的文段。尽量尝试多种形式的写作，如短信、说明、通知、便条、明信片、看图写作、根据表格或记录写短文等。
3. 写。要进行实战写作。要求自己在20分钟内写出100个词的短文，并且质量高、内容全、形式正确。这样形成习惯，考试时就能得心应手。?
二. 应试策略
1. 审题目：要切中题意。《中考考试说明》指出，书面表达要切中题意。怎样才能切中题意？就是要认真审题，看到考题后，先不要急于动笔，要仔细看清题目要求的内容。在自己的头脑中构思出一个框架或画面，确定短文的中心思想，不要匆匆下笔，看懂题意，根据图画、图表、提纲或短文提供的资料和信息来审题。审题要审格式、体裁、人物关系、故事情节、主体时态、活动时间、地点等。
2. 圈要点：防止遗漏要点。要点是给分的一个重要因素。为了防止写作过程中遗漏要点，同学们要充分发挥自己的观察力，把情景中给出的各个要点逐条列出。
3. 列提纲：为写作做好准备。根据文章要点短文的中心思想将主要句型、关键词语记下，形成提纲。
4. 定基调：定出时态、人称、顺序、开头、结尾。
5. 写全文：写短文时要做到以下六个方面：
(1)避免使用汉语式英语，尽量使用自己熟悉的句型。几种句型可交替使用，以避免重复和呆板。
(2)多用简单句型，记事、写人一般都不需要复杂的句型。可适当多使用陈述句、一般疑问句、祈使句和感叹句。不用或少用非谓语或情态动词等较复杂的句型。
(3)注意语法、句法知识的灵活运用。
1）语态、时态要准确无误。
2）主谓语要一致，主语的人称和数要和谓语一致。
3）注意人称代词的宾格形式。
4）注意冠词用法，例如： He is an honest student.中的an不能写成a。
5）注意拼写、标点符号和大小写，例如：receive, believe, fourteen, forty, ninth, restaurant等。
(4)描写人物时，要生动具体，例如：
1）外表特征：tall, short, fat, thin, strong, weak, ordinary-looking 等。
2）服饰颜色：red, yellow, blue, white, green, brown, black 等。
3）内心境界：glad, happy, sad, excited, anxious, interested 等。
4）感情描写：love, like, hate, feel, laugh, cry, smile, shout 等。
5）动作描写：come, go, get, have, take, bring, fetch 等。
(5)上下文要连贯。上下文的连贯性也是评分的一条原则，因此同学们应把写好的句子，根据故事情节，事情发生的先后次序（时间或空间），使用一些表示并列、递进等过渡词进行加工整理，使文章连贯、自然、流畅。同学们应注意下面过渡的用法：
1）表示并列关系的：and, as well as, or… 2）表示转折关系的：but, yet, however… 3）表示时间关系的：when, while, after, before, then, after that… 4）表示因果关系的：so, therefore ,as a result… 5）表示目的的：in order to, in order that , so as to, so that… 6）表示列举的：for example , such as… 7）表示总结性的：in general, in all, in a word, generally speaking…
(6)不会表达，另辟蹊径。中考作文给分是以要点和语言准确度而定，不以文采打分。造句越简单准确越好，造复合句容易出错，容易被扣分，阅卷场上有句话：“错误面前人人平等，文采好不加分”。如遇到个别要点表达不出来或难以表达，可采用变通的办法，化难为易，化繁为简。总之，所造句子要正确、得体、符合英语表达习惯。
6.改病句：认真检查，改正错误。中考作文时，由于时间紧、内容多，同学们出错在所难免。因此，改错这一环节必不可少。中考作文评卷是根据要点、语言准确性、上下文的连贯性来给分，根据错误多少来扣分。因此，中考时花几分钟时间用来检查错误显得尤为重要。检查错误应从以下几个方面入手：
1）格式是否有错。
2）拼写有无错误。
3）语言是否用错。
4）时态、语态错误。
5）标点错误。
6）人称是否用错。
三. 注意事项
书面表达要特别注意书写工整，卷面整洁。每年阅卷老师在十来天的时间里要看十几万考生的作文，工作量之大，时间之紧，可想而知。书写是否工整，卷面是否整洁与得分高低直接有关。
分析实例：
假如你叫张强。请根据下面美国朋友Bob的来信内容，结合你自己的情况写一篇语言连惯、符合逻辑的英文回信。?
要求：1. 认真阅读来信的内容，从中获得你需要的信息。?
2. 词数：80左右。回信的开头、结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。
注意：回信中不得出现你的真实地址和所在学校的名称。?
Dear friend,?
Hello！I’m your new friend. My name is Bob. I’m fifteen. I’m American. I live in New York.?
I am a middle school student. I’m good at maths. It is very interesting. My favourite sport is basketball. And I am not only a basketball fan but also a good player. I like pop music. My friends and I often sing pop songs together.?
After school, I am interested in getting on-line. I have known a lot about China from the Internet. Now I’m learning Chinese. I hope I will visit your country one day.?
Please write to me and tell me something about your life. I’m looking forward to hearing from you.?
Yours,?
Bob?
Dear Bob,
_______________________________________________________________________________________
???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? Yours,
????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? Zhang Qiang
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【解析】根据前面提到第六个步骤，我们来写一下这篇书面表达。
1.审题目：通过审题目我们可以知道：本篇书面表达应是写一封回信，写信人是张强，收信人是Bob，信的内容应是介绍张强自己的情况。
2. 圈要点：根据来信判断，写回信必须包括以下要点：1、收到对方的来信；2、愿意和对方交朋友；3、自己的姓名、年龄和住址；4、自己的身份、特长和爱好； 5、自己的希望。
3、列提纲：1. got your letter 2. glad to be your friend 3. name, zhang Qiang, fifteen, live in Shaanxi 4. a middle school student, like English, like sports, good at drawing, 5. hope we’ll meet in China
4、定基调：1. 时态：收到来信用一般过去时，介绍情况用一般现在时，希望用一般将来时。2. 人称用第一人称。3.可按提纲的顺序来写。4. 开头和结尾题目已经给出。
5、写全文：
Dear Bob,
??? I got your letter yesterday. I’m very glad to be your pen friend. My name is Zhang Qiang. I’m fifteen years old, too. I live in Shaanxi.
?I’m a middle school student, too. I like English and physics very much. I also like sports, but I’m good at drawing. I know a little about America. Could you tell me something more about your country in your next letter?
I hope we’ll meet in China some day. I’m sure we’ll have a good time together.
Please write (to) me soon.
Yours,
Zhang Qiang
6、改病句：认真复查一边，如有错误，加以改正。
******2012书面表达预测******
1.电子邀请函:
假如你是张文，八年级四班的班长。你们班排练了一部英文课本剧（an English textbook play），准备本周六下午4:00在学校礼堂（the school hall）演出。请你用英语给学校的外籍教师Terry写一封80字左右的E-mail，邀请他来观看演出，并在演出结束时发言。
注意：1. 可增加细节，使文章连贯完整；2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Terry,
Hi, I’m Zhang Wen, monitor of Class 4, Grade 8.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
We are all looking forward to your coming.
Zhang Wen
Dear Terry,
Hi, I’m Zhang Wen, monitor of Class 4, Grade 8. I’m writing to ask if you will be free on Saturday. Our class have made an English textbook play. We are going to put it on at the school hall on Saturday. Time is 4:00 p.m. The play is about a famous English story. I’m sure you will enjoy it. We hope you can come, and we do hope you can give a speech at he end of the performance. We’d like you to give us some tips about English learning. If you can come, please let me know.
We are all looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Zhang Wen
2.回复求助
假设你是某英文杂志的“知心姐姐”（Agony Sister），Helen. 请阅读下面的这封求助信，并根据信的内容写一封回信。
要求：1. 80词左右；2. 文中不要出现作者本人的真实信息。
Dear Helen,
Last Sunday, my classmates and I went to the park. I wanted to take some photos. My father was out at that time, so I took his camera without telling her. Unfortunately, the camera went out of my bag and dropped on the ground when I was climbing the hill. It didn’t work at all. I put it back quietly after I returned home. And I haven’t told him till now. when I face my father, I feel terrible. What should I do?
Yours, David
Dear David,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes,
Helen
One possible version:
Dear David,
First, I think you'd better tell your father immediately. It you tell him the truth, he'll be
angry with you. But at least you'll prove how honest you are. Then I think you should offer to pay. But you shouldn't use your pocket money. Yes, a camera is expensive, maybe you can't afford it. If you offer to do some jobs around the house, he'll realize that you're truly sorry.
Oh, remember to be careful next tune.
Best wishes,
3. 询问旅行事宜
假如你叫李华，是杭州市某中学初三学生。你计划于毕业考试后去英格兰旅行。信中要包括自己的行程安排；询问风俗习惯和苏格兰的旅游地点。词数60左右。
列举写作要点
1.旅游安排；plan
?2. 风俗习惯；culture and customs
?3. 名胜：places of interest
三、列出关键短语和句型
be away 离开 provide…with 提供… would like to do 想要做某事
Dear Ben,
How is everything? I am going to travel to England with my parents after finishing the final exam. We’d like to be away for about ten days. But I don’t know about England. I hope you can provide me with some information about the customs of England. I would like to travel to exciting places in England. Please introduce some interesting places to me.
Yours.
Li Hua
4：中华美德（演讲稿）
假如你是王明，你将代表学校参加杭州市屮学生英诂演讲比赛。演讲的题目是 We should help parents do housework. 请你用英诰写一篇演讲稿。
要点提示：
现 象
你常做的家务
你的体会和看法
许多学生懒惰，不愿做家务。
◆ 修理床铺
◆ 浇花
◆ 打扫房间
◆ 倒垃圾
◆……
……
(至少两点）
参考词汇: lazy, chores, make the bed, water flowers, clean the room, take out the trash, relaxing, interesting, proud, pleased, duty
要求：1.短文须包含要点提示中的所有信息，并可适当发挥； 2. 80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 3.文中不得出现自己的真实姓名、校名和地名。
Ladies and gentlemen,
Good morning! I'm Wang Ming. It's my honor to give you a speech. My topic is We should help parents do housework.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That's all. Thanks for your listening!
One possible version:
Ladies and gentlemen,
Good morning! I'm Wang Ming It's my honor to give you a speech. My topic is We should help parents do housework. Now many students are too lazy to do housework. But I think we should help parents do some housework because they are busy with their work and tired after work. 1 often help my parents do many chores. In the morning, I will make the bed and water flowers. They are relaxing and interesting In the evening, I often clean the room and take out the trash. When 1 see the tidy room, 1 feel proud of myself. My parents are pleased with me. 1 think it's our duty to help our parents with some chores.
5.爱护动物志愿者（面试稿）
十月四日是世界动物日，你校组织以“I want to be a volunteer of protecting animals”为题的志愿者选拔比赛。假如李明参加比赛，请你以“李明”的名义写一篇英语面试材料推荐自己，内容如下：
品质
善良，善待动物；
勤劳，做额外事；
爱好
……（至少两点）
事迹
组织慈善义演，为Save China’s Tigers筹款；
……（至少一点）
感悟
动物是人类的朋友；
保护动物就是保护我们自己；
打算
……（至少两点）
要求：
1.词数100个左右。面试材料的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
2.所写短文必须包括以上内容，自由发挥的内容必须围绕主题。
3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。
（参考词汇：额外的extra）
I want to be a volunteer of protecting animals
Hello, everyone. I’m Li Ming. I want to be a volunteer of protecting animals. _______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
If I can be a volunteer,___________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
Thank you for listening!
I want to be a volunteer of protecting animals
Hello, everyone. I’m Li Ming. I want to be a volunteer of protecting animals I’m glad to make a speech here. I am kind to others. I am good with animals. I like playing football and the guitar. I have ever organized raising money for Save China’s Tigers. And I keep some homeless little animals.
Animals are our friends. We should love each other. I am always thinking protecting animals is protecting ourselves. If I can be a volunteer, I will work harder and do more meaningful things to protect animals. I will announce more people love animals like me. I must try my best to make the world more united.
Thanks for listening!
猜题6、“低碳”生活
我国是一个发展中国家，我们应该勤俭节约，使我国成为一个节约型的社会。我们中学生应该从身边的点滴做起，节约能源。 你是如何做的？请你就这一个话题写一篇小短文，要求语句通顺，语法正确，意思完整，70词左右。下列词语仅供参考 （don’t take ---, recycle books and paper, turn off--,take your own bags,
don’t use plastic bags ，cut down ,take care of---------------)
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
范文：
How to save environment? I think we should do the followings: First, it’s best to ride a bike to school, don’t take a bus or a taxi. Second, I will remember to turn off the lights when I leave the classroom. Third, in my free time, I will collect the empty bottles and waste paper for recycling. The fourth idea is turning off the shower when
I ‘m not using it. Fifth, it is imporment to save water and money. Also, I won’t spend too much money on expensive things. Last, we had better not cut down the trees, we have to take care of the trees . I’ll try my best to save the energy, I hope I can do something for our country.
猜题7、旅游感受
假设你2012年五一期间刚刚从桂林旅游回来。请根据自己的想象及所给的信息，给你的一位朋友Tony写一封信，介绍你对桂林之旅的感受。
注意：（1）词数70-80，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）注意书信格式，信中不得出现真实姓名。
location
in the northeast of Guangxi
history
more than 2,000 years
total size (总面积)
about 27,800 square kilometers
characters
green mountains, clear waters, unique caves and beautiful stones
The most famous tourist attractions (旅游胜地)
Elephant Trunk Hill, Li River, Reed Flute Cave and Seven-star Park
the city symbol (象征)
Elephant Trunk Hill
transportation
by air, by train or by bus; get around on free buses in the city
may 9th, 2012
Dear Tony,
I had a wonderful trip to Guilin with my parents this summer holiday.
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范文：
Dear Tony,
I had a wonderful trip to Guilin with my parents this summer holiday. It is a small city in the northeast of Guangxi. It is more than 2,000 years old and the whole city is about 27,800 square kilometers. There are green mountains, clear waters, unique caves and beautiful stones there. The most famous tourist attractions are Elephant Trunk Hill, Li River, Reed Flute Cave and Seven-star Park. Elephant Trunk Hill is the symbol of the city. It is really a fantastic hill. It looks like a huge elephant drinking water by the Li River!
Ask your parents to bring you to Guilin next time. You can go there by air, by train or by bus and get around on free buses in the city. If you go, I can go with you. I would like to visit it again! I am sure we will have a great time there.
Yours,
Lily
猜题8、为笔友排忧解难
假如你是韩梅，下面是一封你的笔友Alice 给你发来的e-mail, 请根据e-mail的内容，给他写一封回信。与她交流看法，并帮她排忧解难。
提示词语：listen to, mother’s love, care about, communicate with, get along with, smile
Dear Han Mei ,
I’m afraid I’ve got a big problem recently. My mother talks too much to me. She always tells me, “Be careful while crossing the street.” “Put on more clothes.” “Did you do a good job at school?” and so on. I’m annoyed(烦恼). What shall I do? Can you give me some ideas?
Alice
Dear Alice,
___________________________________________________________________________
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Han Mei
范文：
Dear Alice,
As a teenager, I met the same problem as you. But now I can get on/ along better with my mother. Here are some ideas for you.
Your mother talks much, because she cares about you. Maybe it shows your mother’s love. So I think you should listen to her. If your opinions are different from your mother’s, you can communicate with her, and tell her what you’re thinking about. If your mother doesn’t take your advice, just keep silent and give her a smile.
I hope what I say here can help you a lot.
Han Mei
猜题9、网上交友
网上交友已成为当代青年生活的一部分。它有助于青年人认识和了解世界，方便朋友之间相互了解，相互帮助。同时也存在一些危险，令人担心。请以Is making friends online bad or good?为题写一篇80字左右的短文，谈谈你对网上交友的观点。开头已给出。（10分）
参考词：分享，分担share 欺骗cheat
Is making friends online bad or good?
Life without friends must be boring. __________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
范文：
Life without friends must be boring. More and more young people enjoy making friends online, so it has become a part of their lives.
It is true that making friends online helps us a lot. The more friends we have, the more information we get. That means we can know and understand the world better. What’s more, friends can help each other when they are in trouble, and share their happiness and sadness when they are happy or sad.
Of course, making friends online may bring danger and trouble, too. Some bad and harmful things have happened to some people. There have been many people who are cheated online.
So I think making friends online is good and helpful, but we must be careful.
猜题10、升上高中的设想
2012年九月，我们每一位同学即将进入新的学校。请你根据下列提示，以“New School, New Life” 为题，用英文写一篇80词左右的短文，谈一谈你的新学校、新生活、新打算，（注：文章的开头已给出，不计入词数）
What kind of new friends and teachers would you like to have?
What do you think your new school life will be like?
How will you improve yourself in the future?
New School, New Life
I’m a student in a secondary school and will graduate in two months. I hope to ____________
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范文：
I’m a student in a secondary school and will graduate in two months. I hope to study in a beautiful high school. I want to have lots of good friends. My new teachers will be very friendly to me and I can learn a lot from them. In the new school, we will have enough time to do after-school activities. The life will be very colourful. If I have some problems in the new school, I can go to a ‘buddy club’ for help. In the future, I will do my best to improve myself. I believe I will be better and better.
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根据要求完成下列短文写作，把答案写在答题卡指定的位置上。
你喜欢阅读吗？请你以 “Reading---A good Habit” 为题写一篇有关阅读的短文。
内容包括：
1. 你的阅读习惯（喜欢的书籍、阅读的时间地点、购书方式等等）。
2. 阅读带给你什么益处（至少两点）。
3. 号召大家都读书。
作文要求：
1. 不能照抄原文，不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。如需使用学校名
称或学生的姓名，一律使用Shantou Middle School 和Jenny.
2. 语句连贯，词数80词左右。
Reading---A good Habit
Reading is a very good habit. I like reading very much. ________________________________
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参考范文******One possible vision:
Reading---A good Habit
Reading is a very good habit. I like reading very much. In my eyes, I think that forming a good reading habit is necessary for us. It can not only improve our knowledge but also make us to think over more different things efficiently.
Besides, we can do some reading every time when we are free. For example, I often read some of my favorite books in my spare time both at home or in the library. What I like most are story books because most of them are quite interesting. Now I often buy my favorite books on line for its big discount.
Finally, I like to share my favorite books with our family or my classmates. Since reading can benefits us a lot, it’s time for us to have our good reading habit now!
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书面表达
初中三年的学校生活就要结束了，回顾三年的学校生活，你(Jack)感慨万分。校园网的英语论坛开辟了“My School Life”专栏，供同学们发表感言。请你为该专栏写一篇短文，回顾自己三年的学校生活。
短文主要包括：回顾、感谢、祝愿等。回顾应涉及到生动有趣的课堂、活泼可爱的同学、丰富多彩的活动、自己的优点及不足等，你可以适当发挥。
要求；字数在80词左右，第一句已经给出，不记入总数。文中不得出现真实姓名及校名。
I’m lucky to study in this beautiful school.
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Jack from Class 3
参考范文******One possible version:
I’ m lucky to study in this beautiful school. The teachers are great. They always try to make their lessons lively and interesting. The classmates are lovely and friendly. The school life is rich and colorful. They make me happy every day.
In the past three years, I am hardworking and have made great progress. I do well in the exams. I am good at communicating and I like to make friends with others.
However, I have problems, too. I will spend less time online. I will do more sports and become stronger.
Thank you my teachers and classmates. Wish my school more beautiful, my teachers and classmates a happy life!
Jack from Class 3
评分说明：
要求考生用适当的时态、语态、句式和词语，完整准确地表述所提示的内容，书写工整。分四档评分：
1. 短文通顺完整，表达清楚, 语言基本无误，9－10分;
2. 短文较通顺完整，表达基本清楚，语言有少量错误，6－8分;
3. 能写明基本要点，短文不够通顺完整，语言有较多错误，但尚能达意，3－5分;
4. 仅能写明部分要点，短文不完整，语言错误多，影响意思表达，0－2分。
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今天对于Tom来说是个糟糕的日子。他遇到几个问题：上学迟到, 老师很生气；数学课本丢失了；由于昨天晚上熬夜，所以上课睡着了，没有听老师讲课；晚上有足球赛，可是妈妈可能不给他看，所以他心情很不好。他向他的英国笔友Betty讲述了他的问题，假如你是Betty, 请你针对这几个问题给他写一封电子邮件提一些建议。
要求：1. 语言通顺，语法正确；2. 100词左右。
Dear Tom,
I’m very sorry to hear that you have some problems today.
Yours
Betty
参考范文******One possible version:
Dear Tom,
I’m very sorry to hear that you have some problems today. Here is some advice for you. I think there are lots of things you could do. You should say sorry to your teacher for being late for school. You should try to be at school on time. You can borrow a math book from your friend or buy a new one. You should go to bed early to get enough sleep. Then you won’t fall asleep in the daytime, and you can listen to the teachers carefully. I think your mother will allow you to watch the football match tonight if you finish your homework in time and study hard.
Good Luck!
Yours,
Betty
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请从90后初中生的优点和缺点两个方面进行客观的描述，然后制定个人将来的目标和计划。
优点
缺点
目标和计划
1. 当别人遇到麻烦时经常乐于助人；
2. 活跃，对新鲜的事物感兴趣；
3. 喜欢做事与众不同。
1. 易激动、发怒；
2. 因粗心而常犯同样的错误；
3. 有时只考虑自己的感受。
1. 理想是成为……；
2. 我已努力……；
3. 我相信……。
具体要求：
1. 目标和计划需用３句话展开合理想象并作适当发挥。
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，字迹工整。
3. 开头已给出，不计入总词数, 80词左右。
As post-90 students, we ___________________________________________________
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参考范文
仅作参考
As post-90 students, we are often willing to help others when they are in trouble. We are active and very interested in something new. We like to do things differently. We are easy to get excited and angry. We often make the same mistakes because we are very careless. Sometimes we only think about our own feelings. My dream is to be a teacher. I have tried my best to keep a balance between study and hobbies. I believe my dream will come true.
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假设你是李华，刚到英国学习、生活了两个月。在英国期间，你住在大卫(David)家中。请在答题卡指定的位置上，用英语给他写一封感谢信，内容要点如下：
表达谢意
感谢大卫及其家人对你的悉心照顾。
难忘的事
大卫很耐心地帮助你学习英语；
大卫带你去游览了伦敦；
大卫的母亲在你生病时送你去医院，给你做好吃的食物。
学习收获
提高了英语水平，更多地了解了英国的文化。
发出邀请
邀请大卫及其家人到你家作客。你会……
注意：1.信件要包含所给的内容要点，其中最后一个要点应用2句话作适当发挥；
2.词数80个左右，信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3.信中不得出现真实的人名与校名。
参考词汇：文化 culture
Dear David,
I’ve just got back home. I want to say thanks to you and your family because _________
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Yours,
Li Hua
参考范文******One possible version:
Dear David,
I’ve just got back home. I want to say thanks to you and your family because you took good care of me during my stay in the UK. You were patient enough to help me with my English. You showed me around London. Your mother sent me to hospital when I felt sick and cooked delicious food for me. Now, I have improved my English and learnt more about British culture. I would like to invite you and your family to my home. I will cook Chinese food for you. I’m sure you can have a good time visiting China.
Yours,
Li Hua
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学校英语社团在举办英语征文比赛。请你根据下表所列要点，用英语以“Learn to smile”为题写一篇短文参赛。
对自己微笑
1、使你自信；2、使你忘掉烦恼；生活中会有不愉快的事，如考试不及格……（须有两个例子）
对他人微笑
1、使人与人更亲近；2、能带来友谊；
微笑是一种语言……（至少用两句话再谈你对微笑的理解）
注意：-
词数80左右。短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；
短文须包括所有内容要点，不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Learn to smile
We should often wear a smile. ______________________________________________
参考范文******Version 1:?
Learn to smile
We should often wear a smile Smiling to ourselves can bring back our confidence (make us feel confident). As in our life, there may be something unpleasant. For example, we fail (in) an exam or we may be misunderstood. These unpleasant things may make us feel bad. Why not learn to smile? It can also make us forget our worries (trouble).We can smile to others because it will help us to get closer to them and bring us friendship. I think smile is a helpful language and it’s necessary in our life.
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请仔细观看下面图画，结合自己的实际生活，写一篇关于“节能环保”的英语短文，：词数80-100 ，开头已给出。
要求：
简要描述图中的现象
分析产生这种现象的原因（如：没有良好的习惯,没有节能环保的意识等等）
提出相对应的建议（至少两点）
提示：图中睡觉的是小明，妇女是小明的母亲。
节能 save energy 有…的意识 have the sense of
It was midnight ._________________________________________________
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作文范文：
It was midnight . Xiaoming was sleeping soundly in the sofa, with the TV on ,when his mother came in and turned it off for him ,complaining that he didn’t turn it off again.
It often happens in our daily life .Many people are used to doing everything with the TV on, even though they don’t watch it at all. And, they don’t have the sense of energy –saving and environment protection. Such a habit can cause a waste of much energy ,and do harm to our environment.
To have a eco-friendly life , we should strengthen the sense of energy-saving .It’s our duty to protect the environment. We should also pay attention to every detail in our daily life .For example ,before sleeping ,we should turn off the TV in time . In this way, we can live a happier and healthier life .
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2012中考英语：五月冲刺（书面表达第3集共23页--作文高分秘诀、预测）
该精品1、介绍了初中英语作文高分秘诀 2、2012书面表达预测（10篇）--电子邀请函、回复求助、询问旅行事宜、中华美德（演讲稿）、爱护动物志愿者（面试稿）、“低碳”生活、旅游感受、为笔友排忧解难、网上交友、升上高中的设想。 3、2012书面表达实战训练题及参考范文
我为大家准备了英语作文考试的一些方法，供大家参考。
初中英语作文高分秘诀
***书面表达的方法介绍：
书面表达是每年中考必考题型，是考查学生交际能力的一个重要组成部分。书面表达通常有三种形式：
1、书信、日记、通知、留言、假条；
2、看图作文；
3、根据汉语提示作文。
??? 无论是那一种书面表达形式，考生所写的短文都要紧扣主题、文理通顺，要素完整，语言准确、得当、格式正确、无大、小写和拼写错误，标点符号正确，能达到交际目的。
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【名师解难】
一. 训练方法
1. 记。认真系统复习和背诵基础知识和优美的句子、句型。中国有句古话，叫“熟读唐诗三百首，不会吟诗也会作”。同样，要使自己具有较强的写作能力，首先应该熟读和背诵一些句型和短文。许多同学写出来的语言根本不符合英语的语言习惯，相当一部分人有对照中文逐字翻译的不良习惯，不去理会中英文的差异。大量的背诵和阅读是提高写作能力的有效办法，同学们若有大量的现成语言积累在脑海里，自己写起文段来，就可以做到脱口而出，或是模仿、套用，甚至发挥。
2. 练。每练一篇书面表达题，都要真正学到一点东西，不可贪多而边学边忘。平时可以采用循序渐进、灵活多样的练习方式。从根据提示词写单句开始，到写单句，然后到写几句话，最后到写流利的文段。尽量尝试多种形式的写作，如短信、说明、通知、便条、明信片、看图写作、根据表格或记录写短文等。
3. 写。要进行实战写作。要求自己在20分钟内写出100个词的短文，并且质量高、内容全、形式正确。这样形成习惯，考试时就能得心应手。?
二. 应试策略
1. 审题目：要切中题意。《中考考试说明》指出，书面表达要切中题意。怎样才能切中题意？就是要认真审题，看到考题后，先不要急于动笔，要仔细看清题目要求的内容。在自己的头脑中构思出一个框架或画面，确定短文的中心思想，不要匆匆下笔，看懂题意，根据图画、图表、提纲或短文提供的资料和信息来审题。审题要审格式、体裁、人物关系、故事情节、主体时态、活动时间、地点等。
2. 圈要点：防止遗漏要点。要点是给分的一个重要因素。为了防止写作过程中遗漏要点，同学们要充分发挥自己的观察力，把情景中给出的各个要点逐条列出。
3. 列提纲：为写作做好准备。根据文章要点短文的中心思想将主要句型、关键词语记下，形成提纲。
4. 定基调：定出时态、人称、顺序、开头、结尾。
5. 写全文：写短文时要做到以下六个方面：
(1)避免使用汉语式英语，尽量使用自己熟悉的句型。几种句型可交替使用，以避免重复和呆板。
(2)多用简单句型，记事、写人一般都不需要复杂的句型。可适当多使用陈述句、一般疑问句、祈使句和感叹句。不用或少用非谓语或情态动词等较复杂的句型。
(3)注意语法、句法知识的灵活运用。
1）语态、时态要准确无误。
2）主谓语要一致，主语的人称和数要和谓语一致。
3）注意人称代词的宾格形式。
4）注意冠词用法，例如： He is an honest student.中的an不能写成a。
5）注意拼写、标点符号和大小写，例如：receive, believe, fourteen, forty, ninth, restaurant等。
(4)描写人物时，要生动具体，例如：
1）外表特征：tall, short, fat, thin, strong, weak, ordinary-looking 等。
2）服饰颜色：red, yellow, blue, white, green, brown, black 等。
3）内心境界：glad, happy, sad, excited, anxious, interested 等。
4）感情描写：love, like, hate, feel, laugh, cry, smile, shout 等。
5）动作描写：come, go, get, have, take, bring, fetch 等。
(5)上下文要连贯。上下文的连贯性也是评分的一条原则，因此同学们应把写好的句子，根据故事情节，事情发生的先后次序（时间或空间），使用一些表示并列、递进等过渡词进行加工整理，使文章连贯、自然、流畅。同学们应注意下面过渡的用法：
1）表示并列关系的：and, as well as, or… 2）表示转折关系的：but, yet, however… 3）表示时间关系的：when, while, after, before, then, after that… 4）表示因果关系的：so, therefore ,as a result… 5）表示目的的：in order to, in order that , so as to, so that… 6）表示列举的：for example , such as… 7）表示总结性的：in general, in all, in a word, generally speaking…
(6)不会表达，另辟蹊径。中考作文给分是以要点和语言准确度而定，不以文采打分。造句越简单准确越好，造复合句容易出错，容易被扣分，阅卷场上有句话：“错误面前人人平等，文采好不加分”。如遇到个别要点表达不出来或难以表达，可采用变通的办法，化难为易，化繁为简。总之，所造句子要正确、得体、符合英语表达习惯。
6.改病句：认真检查，改正错误。中考作文时，由于时间紧、内容多，同学们出错在所难免。因此，改错这一环节必不可少。中考作文评卷是根据要点、语言准确性、上下文的连贯性来给分，根据错误多少来扣分。因此，中考时花几分钟时间用来检查错误显得尤为重要。检查错误应从以下几个方面入手：
1）格式是否有错。
2）拼写有无错误。
3）语言是否用错。
4）时态、语态错误。
5）标点错误。
6）人称是否用错。
三. 注意事项
书面表达要特别注意书写工整，卷面整洁。每年阅卷老师在十来天的时间里要看十几万考生的作文，工作量之大，时间之紧，可想而知。书写是否工整，卷面是否整洁与得分高低直接有关。
分析实例：
假如你叫张强。请根据下面美国朋友Bob的来信内容，结合你自己的情况写一篇语言连惯、符合逻辑的英文回信。?
要求：1. 认真阅读来信的内容，从中获得你需要的信息。?
2. 词数：80左右。回信的开头、结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。
注意：回信中不得出现你的真实地址和所在学校的名称。?
Dear friend,?
Hello！I’m your new friend. My name is Bob. I’m fifteen. I’m American. I live in New York.?
I am a middle school student. I’m good at maths. It is very interesting. My favourite sport is basketball. And I am not only a basketball fan but also a good player. I like pop music. My friends and I often sing pop songs together.?
After school, I am interested in getting on-line. I have known a lot about China from the Internet. Now I’m learning Chinese. I hope I will visit your country one day.?
Please write to me and tell me something about your life. I’m looking forward to hearing from you.?
Yours,?
Bob?
Dear Bob,
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???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? Yours,
????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? Zhang Qiang
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【解析】根据前面提到第六个步骤，我们来写一下这篇书面表达。
1.审题目：通过审题目我们可以知道：本篇书面表达应是写一封回信，写信人是张强，收信人是Bob，信的内容应是介绍张强自己的情况。
2. 圈要点：根据来信判断，写回信必须包括以下要点：1、收到对方的来信；2、愿意和对方交朋友；3、自己的姓名、年龄和住址；4、自己的身份、特长和爱好； 5、自己的希望。
3、列提纲：1. got your letter 2. glad to be your friend 3. name, zhang Qiang, fifteen, live in Shaanxi 4. a middle school student, like English, like sports, good at drawing, 5. hope we’ll meet in China
4、定基调：1. 时态：收到来信用一般过去时，介绍情况用一般现在时，希望用一般将来时。2. 人称用第一人称。3.可按提纲的顺序来写。4. 开头和结尾题目已经给出。
5、写全文：
Dear Bob,
??? I got your letter yesterday. I’m very glad to be your pen friend. My name is Zhang Qiang. I’m fifteen years old, too. I live in Shaanxi.
?I’m a middle school student, too. I like English and physics very much. I also like sports, but I’m good at drawing. I know a little about America. Could you tell me something more about your country in your next letter?
I hope we’ll meet in China some day. I’m sure we’ll have a good time together.
Please write (to) me soon.
Yours,
Zhang Qiang
6、改病句：认真复查一边，如有错误，加以改正。
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1.电子邀请函:
假如你是张文，八年级四班的班长。你们班排练了一部英文课本剧（an English textbook play），准备本周六下午4:00在学校礼堂（the school hall）演出。请你用英语给学校的外籍教师Terry写一封80字左右的E-mail，邀请他来观看演出，并在演出结束时发言。
注意：1. 可增加细节，使文章连贯完整；2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Terry,
Hi, I’m Zhang Wen, monitor of Class 4, Grade 8.
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We are all looking forward to your coming.
Zhang Wen
Dear Terry,
Hi, I’m Zhang Wen, monitor of Class 4, Grade 8. I’m writing to ask if you will be free on Saturday. Our class have made an English textbook play. We are going to put it on at the school hall on Saturday. Time is 4:00 p.m. The play is about a famous English story. I’m sure you will enjoy it. We hope you can come, and we do hope you can give a speech at he end of the performance. We’d like you to give us some tips about English learning. If you can come, please let me know.
We are all looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Zhang Wen
2.回复求助
假设你是某英文杂志的“知心姐姐”（Agony Sister），Helen. 请阅读下面的这封求助信，并根据信的内容写一封回信。
要求：1. 80词左右；2. 文中不要出现作者本人的真实信息。
Dear Helen,
Last Sunday, my classmates and I went to the park. I wanted to take some photos. My father was out at that time, so I took his camera without telling her. Unfortunately, the camera went out of my bag and dropped on the ground when I was climbing the hill. It didn’t work at all. I put it back quietly after I returned home. And I haven’t told him till now. when I face my father, I feel terrible. What should I do?
Yours, David
Dear David,
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Best wishes,
Helen
One possible version:
Dear David,
First, I think you'd better tell your father immediately. It you tell him the truth, he'll be
angry with you. But at least you'll prove how honest you are. Then I think you should offer to pay. But you shouldn't use your pocket money. Yes, a camera is expensive, maybe you can't afford it. If you offer to do some jobs around the house, he'll realize that you're truly sorry.
Oh, remember to be careful next tune.
Best wishes,
3. 询问旅行事宜
假如你叫李华，是杭州市某中学初三学生。你计划于毕业考试后去英格兰旅行。信中要包括自己的行程安排；询问风俗习惯和苏格兰的旅游地点。词数60左右。
列举写作要点
1.旅游安排；plan
?2. 风俗习惯；culture and customs
?3. 名胜：places of interest
三、列出关键短语和句型
be away 离开 provide…with 提供… would like to do 想要做某事
Dear Ben,
How is everything? I am going to travel to England with my parents after finishing the final exam. We’d like to be away for about ten days. But I don’t know about England. I hope you can provide me with some information about the customs of England. I would like to travel to exciting places in England. Please introduce some interesting places to me.
Yours.
Li Hua
4：中华美德（演讲稿）
假如你是王明，你将代表学校参加杭州市屮学生英诂演讲比赛。演讲的题目是 We should help parents do housework. 请你用英诰写一篇演讲稿。
要点提示：
现 象
你常做的家务
你的体会和看法
许多学生懒惰，不愿做家务。
◆ 修理床铺
◆ 浇花
◆ 打扫房间
◆ 倒垃圾
◆……
……
(至少两点）
参考词汇: lazy, chores, make the bed, water flowers, clean the room, take out the trash, relaxing, interesting, proud, pleased, duty
要求：1.短文须包含要点提示中的所有信息，并可适当发挥； 2. 80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 3.文中不得出现自己的真实姓名、校名和地名。
Ladies and gentlemen,
Good morning! I'm Wang Ming. It's my honor to give you a speech. My topic is We should help parents do housework.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That's all. Thanks for your listening!
One possible version:
Ladies and gentlemen,
Good morning! I'm Wang Ming It's my honor to give you a speech. My topic is We should help parents do housework. Now many students are too lazy to do housework. But I think we should help parents do some housework because they are busy with their work and tired after work. 1 often help my parents do many chores. In the morning, I will make the bed and water flowers. They are relaxing and interesting In the evening, I often clean the room and take out the trash. When 1 see the tidy room, 1 feel proud of myself. My parents are pleased with me. 1 think it's our duty to help our parents with some chores.
5.爱护动物志愿者（面试稿）
十月四日是世界动物日，你校组织以“I want to be a volunteer of protecting animals”为题的志愿者选拔比赛。假如李明参加比赛，请你以“李明”的名义写一篇英语面试材料推荐自己，内容如下：
品质
善良，善待动物；
勤劳，做额外事；
爱好
……（至少两点）
事迹
组织慈善义演，为Save China’s Tigers筹款；
……（至少一点）
感悟
动物是人类的朋友；
保护动物就是保护我们自己；
打算
……（至少两点）
要求：
1.词数100个左右。面试材料的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
2.所写短文必须包括以上内容，自由发挥的内容必须围绕主题。
3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。
（参考词汇：额外的extra）
I want to be a volunteer of protecting animals
Hello, everyone. I’m Li Ming. I want to be a volunteer of protecting animals. _______________________________________________________________________________
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If I can be a volunteer,___________________________________________________________
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Thank you for listening!
I want to be a volunteer of protecting animals
Hello, everyone. I’m Li Ming. I want to be a volunteer of protecting animals I’m glad to make a speech here. I am kind to others. I am good with animals. I like playing football and the guitar. I have ever organized raising money for Save China’s Tigers. And I keep some homeless little animals.
Animals are our friends. We should love each other. I am always thinking protecting animals is protecting ourselves. If I can be a volunteer, I will work harder and do more meaningful things to protect animals. I will announce more people love animals like me. I must try my best to make the world more united.
Thanks for listening!
猜题6、“低碳”生活
我国是一个发展中国家，我们应该勤俭节约，使我国成为一个节约型的社会。我们中学生应该从身边的点滴做起，节约能源。 你是如何做的？请你就这一个话题写一篇小短文，要求语句通顺，语法正确，意思完整，70词左右。下列词语仅供参考 （don’t take ---, recycle books and paper, turn off--,take your own bags,
don’t use plastic bags ，cut down ,take care of---------------)
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范文：
How to save environment? I think we should do the followings: First, it’s best to ride a bike to school, don’t take a bus or a taxi. Second, I will remember to turn off the lights when I leave the classroom. Third, in my free time, I will collect the empty bottles and waste paper for recycling. The fourth idea is turning off the shower when
I ‘m not using it. Fifth, it is imporment to save water and money. Also, I won’t spend too much money on expensive things. Last, we had better not cut down the trees, we have to take care of the trees . I’ll try my best to save the energy, I hope I can do something for our country.
猜题7、旅游感受
假设你2012年五一期间刚刚从桂林旅游回来。请根据自己的想象及所给的信息，给你的一位朋友Tony写一封信，介绍你对桂林之旅的感受。
注意：（1）词数70-80，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）注意书信格式，信中不得出现真实姓名。
location
in the northeast of Guangxi
history
more than 2,000 years
total size (总面积)
about 27,800 square kilometers
characters
green mountains, clear waters, unique caves and beautiful stones
The most famous tourist attractions (旅游胜地)
Elephant Trunk Hill, Li River, Reed Flute Cave and Seven-star Park
the city symbol (象征)
Elephant Trunk Hill
transportation
by air, by train or by bus; get around on free buses in the city
may 9th, 2012
Dear Tony,
I had a wonderful trip to Guilin with my parents this summer holiday.
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范文：
Dear Tony,
I had a wonderful trip to Guilin with my parents this summer holiday. It is a small city in the northeast of Guangxi. It is more than 2,000 years old and the whole city is about 27,800 square kilometers. There are green mountains, clear waters, unique caves and beautiful stones there. The most famous tourist attractions are Elephant Trunk Hill, Li River, Reed Flute Cave and Seven-star Park. Elephant Trunk Hill is the symbol of the city. It is really a fantastic hill. It looks like a huge elephant drinking water by the Li River!
Ask your parents to bring you to Guilin next time. You can go there by air, by train or by bus and get around on free buses in the city. If you go, I can go with you. I would like to visit it again! I am sure we will have a great time there.
Yours,
Lily
猜题8、为笔友排忧解难
假如你是韩梅，下面是一封你的笔友Alice 给你发来的e-mail, 请根据e-mail的内容，给他写一封回信。与她交流看法，并帮她排忧解难。
提示词语：listen to, mother’s love, care about, communicate with, get along with, smile
Dear Han Mei ,
I’m afraid I’ve got a big problem recently. My mother talks too much to me. She always tells me, “Be careful while crossing the street.” “Put on more clothes.” “Did you do a good job at school?” and so on. I’m annoyed(烦恼). What shall I do? Can you give me some ideas?
Alice
Dear Alice,
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Han Mei
范文：
Dear Alice,
As a teenager, I met the same problem as you. But now I can get on/ along better with my mother. Here are some ideas for you.
Your mother talks much, because she cares about you. Maybe it shows your mother’s love. So I think you should listen to her. If your opinions are different from your mother’s, you can communicate with her, and tell her what you’re thinking about. If your mother doesn’t take your advice, just keep silent and give her a smile.
I hope what I say here can help you a lot.
Han Mei
猜题9、网上交友
网上交友已成为当代青年生活的一部分。它有助于青年人认识和了解世界，方便朋友之间相互了解，相互帮助。同时也存在一些危险，令人担心。请以Is making friends online bad or good?为题写一篇80字左右的短文，谈谈你对网上交友的观点。开头已给出。（10分）
参考词：分享，分担share 欺骗cheat
Is making friends online bad or good?
Life without friends must be boring. __________________________________________________
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范文：
Life without friends must be boring. More and more young people enjoy making friends online, so it has become a part of their lives.
It is true that making friends online helps us a lot. The more friends we have, the more information we get. That means we can know and understand the world better. What’s more, friends can help each other when they are in trouble, and share their happiness and sadness when they are happy or sad.
Of course, making friends online may bring danger and trouble, too. Some bad and harmful things have happened to some people. There have been many people who are cheated online.
So I think making friends online is good and helpful, but we must be careful.
猜题10、升上高中的设想
2012年九月，我们每一位同学即将进入新的学校。请你根据下列提示，以“New School, New Life” 为题，用英文写一篇80词左右的短文，谈一谈你的新学校、新生活、新打算，（注：文章的开头已给出，不计入词数）
What kind of new friends and teachers would you like to have?
What do you think your new school life will be like?
How will you improve yourself in the future?
New School, New Life
I’m a student in a secondary school and will graduate in two months. I hope to ____________
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范文：
I’m a student in a secondary school and will graduate in two months. I hope to study in a beautiful high school. I want to have lots of good friends. My new teachers will be very friendly to me and I can learn a lot from them. In the new school, we will have enough time to do after-school activities. The life will be very colourful. If I have some problems in the new school, I can go to a ‘buddy club’ for help. In the future, I will do my best to improve myself. I believe I will be better and better.
******2012书面表达实战训练题******
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根据要求完成下列短文写作，把答案写在答题卡指定的位置上。
你喜欢阅读吗？请你以 “Reading---A good Habit” 为题写一篇有关阅读的短文。
内容包括：
1. 你的阅读习惯（喜欢的书籍、阅读的时间地点、购书方式等等）。
2. 阅读带给你什么益处（至少两点）。
3. 号召大家都读书。
作文要求：
1. 不能照抄原文，不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。如需使用学校名
称或学生的姓名，一律使用Shantou Middle School 和Jenny.
2. 语句连贯，词数80词左右。
Reading---A good Habit
Reading is a very good habit. I like reading very much. ________________________________
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参考范文******One possible vision:
Reading---A good Habit
Reading is a very good habit. I like reading very much. In my eyes, I think that forming a good reading habit is necessary for us. It can not only improve our knowledge but also make us to think over more different things efficiently.
Besides, we can do some reading every time when we are free. For example, I often read some of my favorite books in my spare time both at home or in the library. What I like most are story books because most of them are quite interesting. Now I often buy my favorite books on line for its big discount.
Finally, I like to share my favorite books with our family or my classmates. Since reading can benefits us a lot, it’s time for us to have our good reading habit now!
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书面表达
初中三年的学校生活就要结束了，回顾三年的学校生活，你(Jack)感慨万分。校园网的英语论坛开辟了“My School Life”专栏，供同学们发表感言。请你为该专栏写一篇短文，回顾自己三年的学校生活。
短文主要包括：回顾、感谢、祝愿等。回顾应涉及到生动有趣的课堂、活泼可爱的同学、丰富多彩的活动、自己的优点及不足等，你可以适当发挥。
要求；字数在80词左右，第一句已经给出，不记入总数。文中不得出现真实姓名及校名。
I’m lucky to study in this beautiful school.
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Jack from Class 3
参考范文******One possible version:
I’ m lucky to study in this beautiful school. The teachers are great. They always try to make their lessons lively and interesting. The classmates are lovely and friendly. The school life is rich and colorful. They make me happy every day.
In the past three years, I am hardworking and have made great progress. I do well in the exams. I am good at communicating and I like to make friends with others.
However, I have problems, too. I will spend less time online. I will do more sports and become stronger.
Thank you my teachers and classmates. Wish my school more beautiful, my teachers and classmates a happy life!
Jack from Class 3
评分说明：
要求考生用适当的时态、语态、句式和词语，完整准确地表述所提示的内容，书写工整。分四档评分：
1. 短文通顺完整，表达清楚, 语言基本无误，9－10分;
2. 短文较通顺完整，表达基本清楚，语言有少量错误，6－8分;
3. 能写明基本要点，短文不够通顺完整，语言有较多错误，但尚能达意，3－5分;
4. 仅能写明部分要点，短文不完整，语言错误多，影响意思表达，0－2分。
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今天对于Tom来说是个糟糕的日子。他遇到几个问题：上学迟到, 老师很生气；数学课本丢失了；由于昨天晚上熬夜，所以上课睡着了，没有听老师讲课；晚上有足球赛，可是妈妈可能不给他看，所以他心情很不好。他向他的英国笔友Betty讲述了他的问题，假如你是Betty, 请你针对这几个问题给他写一封电子邮件提一些建议。
要求：1. 语言通顺，语法正确；2. 100词左右。
Dear Tom,
I’m very sorry to hear that you have some problems today.
Yours
Betty
参考范文******One possible version:
Dear Tom,
I’m very sorry to hear that you have some problems today. Here is some advice for you. I think there are lots of things you could do. You should say sorry to your teacher for being late for school. You should try to be at school on time. You can borrow a math book from your friend or buy a new one. You should go to bed early to get enough sleep. Then you won’t fall asleep in the daytime, and you can listen to the teachers carefully. I think your mother will allow you to watch the football match tonight if you finish your homework in time and study hard.
Good Luck!
Yours,
Betty
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请从90后初中生的优点和缺点两个方面进行客观的描述，然后制定个人将来的目标和计划。
优点
缺点
目标和计划
1. 当别人遇到麻烦时经常乐于助人；
2. 活跃，对新鲜的事物感兴趣；
3. 喜欢做事与众不同。
1. 易激动、发怒；
2. 因粗心而常犯同样的错误；
3. 有时只考虑自己的感受。
1. 理想是成为……；
2. 我已努力……；
3. 我相信……。
具体要求：
1. 目标和计划需用３句话展开合理想象并作适当发挥。
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，字迹工整。
3. 开头已给出，不计入总词数, 80词左右。
As post-90 students, we ___________________________________________________
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参考范文
仅作参考
As post-90 students, we are often willing to help others when they are in trouble. We are active and very interested in something new. We like to do things differently. We are easy to get excited and angry. We often make the same mistakes because we are very careless. Sometimes we only think about our own feelings. My dream is to be a teacher. I have tried my best to keep a balance between study and hobbies. I believe my dream will come true.
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假设你是李华，刚到英国学习、生活了两个月。在英国期间，你住在大卫(David)家中。请在答题卡指定的位置上，用英语给他写一封感谢信，内容要点如下：
表达谢意
感谢大卫及其家人对你的悉心照顾。
难忘的事
大卫很耐心地帮助你学习英语；
大卫带你去游览了伦敦；
大卫的母亲在你生病时送你去医院，给你做好吃的食物。
学习收获
提高了英语水平，更多地了解了英国的文化。
发出邀请
邀请大卫及其家人到你家作客。你会……
注意：1.信件要包含所给的内容要点，其中最后一个要点应用2句话作适当发挥；
2.词数80个左右，信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3.信中不得出现真实的人名与校名。
参考词汇：文化 culture
Dear David,
I’ve just got back home. I want to say thanks to you and your family because _________
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Yours,
Li Hua
参考范文******One possible version:
Dear David,
I’ve just got back home. I want to say thanks to you and your family because you took good care of me during my stay in the UK. You were patient enough to help me with my English. You showed me around London. Your mother sent me to hospital when I felt sick and cooked delicious food for me. Now, I have improved my English and learnt more about British culture. I would like to invite you and your family to my home. I will cook Chinese food for you. I’m sure you can have a good time visiting China.
Yours,
Li Hua
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学校英语社团在举办英语征文比赛。请你根据下表所列要点，用英语以“Learn to smile”为题写一篇短文参赛。
对自己微笑
1、使你自信；2、使你忘掉烦恼；生活中会有不愉快的事，如考试不及格……（须有两个例子）
对他人微笑
1、使人与人更亲近；2、能带来友谊；
微笑是一种语言……（至少用两句话再谈你对微笑的理解）
注意：-
词数80左右。短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；
短文须包括所有内容要点，不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Learn to smile
We should often wear a smile. ______________________________________________
参考范文******Version 1:?
Learn to smile
We should often wear a smile Smiling to ourselves can bring back our confidence (make us feel confident). As in our life, there may be something unpleasant. For example, we fail (in) an exam or we may be misunderstood. These unpleasant things may make us feel bad. Why not learn to smile? It can also make us forget our worries (trouble).We can smile to others because it will help us to get closer to them and bring us friendship. I think smile is a helpful language and it’s necessary in our life.
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请仔细观看下面图画，结合自己的实际生活，写一篇关于“节能环保”的英语短文，：词数80-100 ，开头已给出。
要求：
简要描述图中的现象
分析产生这种现象的原因（如：没有良好的习惯,没有节能环保的意识等等）
提出相对应的建议（至少两点）
提示：图中睡觉的是小明，妇女是小明的母亲。
节能 save energy 有…的意识 have the sense of
It was midnight ._________________________________________________
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作文范文：
It was midnight . Xiaoming was sleeping soundly in the sofa, with the TV on ,when his mother came in and turned it off for him ,complaining that he didn’t turn it off again.
It often happens in our daily life .Many people are used to doing everything with the TV on, even though they don’t watch it at all. And, they don’t have the sense of energy –saving and environment protection. Such a habit can cause a waste of much energy ,and do harm to our environment.
To have a eco-friendly life , we should strengthen the sense of energy-saving .It’s our duty to protect the environment. We should also pay attention to every detail in our daily life .For example ,before sleeping ,we should turn off the TV in time . In this way, we can live a happier and healthier life .
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