中考满分——第4讲 书面表达
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第4讲 书面表达
解题策略
1．测试目标
“书面表达”是中考英语试题中检测同学们写作能力的综合主观试题，它主要考查同学们的观察力及想象力、语言组织能力及想象发散思维能力。其主要目的是加强同学们写的要求，不仅是对英语知识和能力的综合测试，也是对英语运用能力的测试。其要求是：能紧扣题目，覆盖所有内容要点，没有语法和词汇错误，具备较强的语言运用能力，格式正确，标点符号准确，符合英语的表达习惯，词数基本符合要求。根据新课标要求，初中英语作文一般有以下目标：
(1)能正确使用大小写、字母和标点符号。
(2)能根据要求写简单的短文、书信、日记等。
(3)能简单描述人物或事件。
(4)能使用常见的连词表示顺序和逻辑关系。
(5)能根据所给图片或表格写出简单的段落，并能
表达自己的观点。
2．解题技巧
(1)认真审题，紧扣内容
首先应仔细阅读写作要求，根据所提供的中英文提示或图片(表)、插图，确认目的、要求及中心内容，从而确定所写的文体和格式，明确是写记叙文还是应用文。
(2)依据提示，列出要点
对于“控制性作文”，可依据提示短语，将其扩展为符合所写文章的句子，或根据每幅图片的意思，适当添加必要的材料，以使文章内容完整，语意连贯，时态、人称正确。对于“情景作文”，可先根据主题内容，拟好提纲，必要时写出中心句、关键句。
(3)默读检查，确保无误
仔细默读所写短文草稿，检查各个句子的结构是否正确，句子是否通顺，待确定无误再将短文写在答卷上。要注意单词拼写、标点符号及大小写的正确，并对时态、语态、单复数等方面进行详细检查。
此外，在做书面表达题时，要注意使用必要的过渡词；开头、结尾要丰富多彩，增强可读性。再者一定要注意书写端正、卷面整洁，给评卷人一个良好的印象。
名师预测
一、话题作文
1．假设你是Dale，你的网友Cindy发来邮件，希望知道你最感谢的人是谁，现在请你给她回邮件，邮件内容包括：
(1)他／她的外表、兴趣、爱好和职业等；
(2)感谢的理由。
要求：(1)短文应包括所有要点，可适当发挥；
(2)语句通顺、意思连贯；
(3)字数80词左右，邮件开头和结尾已经给出，不计人总词数。
Dear Cindy，
Thank you for sending me your photos．You wonder who the person I thank most is．Now let me tell you．
Best wishes!
Dale
2．假设你是张林，即将初中毕业，你的美国笔友BOb来信询问你的暑假计划，现在请你写一封回信，告诉他你将在爷爷奶奶家度过这个假期。
注意：(1)至少写出你将要做的三件事；
(2)回信不少于80词，信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
(3)所给英语词汇仅供参考。
参考词汇：summer；grandparents；relax oneself；housework；visit；old friends and relatives
Hi Bob，
The summer vacation is coming soon．
How will you spend your holiday?
Best wishes!
Yours，
Zhang Lin
3．越来越多的汽车进入我们的家庭生活，改善了我们的生活，但同时也带来了很多问题，如塞车和车祸，给家庭和社会带来极大的危害。作为中学生，我们应该怎样做呢?
请写一篇有关交通安全的短文(80词左右)，内容包含：
(1)遵守交通规则，如走人行道／过斑马线。
(2)别在街道上或马路上玩耍和踢球。
(3)劝父母不能酒后驾车。
你可以适当增加内容，让短文通顺，过渡自然。
参考词汇：sidewalk人行道 zebra-crossing斑马线
注：第一段已给出，不计入总词数。
With more and more cars coming into our families，we are happy that it has greatly improved our life．But unluckily，it has also brought many proplems，such as heavy traffic and traffic accidents．
二、看图作文
根据下面的图画，请你用英语写一篇短文。包
括6～9个句子。短文要求达意、正确、连贯。
三、应用性作文
学校决定本周星期六(2011年5月14日)晚上以班为单位召开家长座谈会，会议将于七点半开始，地点是本班教室。届时将通报孩子在校学习情况，并就如何促使孩子学好功课征求家长意见。请你代替八年级(4)班班主任杨老师用英语向林涛的家长写一份邀请书。
要求：(1)格式正确，语言流畅，表达清楚；
(2)书写规范，字迹清楚；
(3)词数：70～80。
同步训练34书面表达
一、话题作文
1．(2011·泰安)
假如你是李明，在网上看到一则美国某大学孔子学院招聘汉语老师的广告，请你根据信息内容，用英语给Mr．Smith写一封email，向他推荐一位符合条件的老师。
注意：(1)词数：80～100词，信的开头和结尾已给出，不计人总词数。
(2)可适当增加细节，说明他／她的优势，文中不要提及真实的校名和人名。
(3)参考词汇：fluent(n西．)流利的；familiar(adj．)熟知的；standard(n／adj．)标准(的)；Confucius(n．)孔子；suitable(adj．)合适的；healthy(adj．)；introduce(v．)；
get along well with．．．
Dear Smith，
How are you? I’m very glad to introduce
I’m looking forward to your reply．
Yours sincerely，
Li Ming
2．(2011·齐齐哈尔)
世界在发展，文化在交融，英语已经成为人们沟通的桥梁。怎样学好英语是我们一直在求索的问题。几年的学习经历你一定积累了许多成功的经验，请从听、说、读、写四方面谈谈你的建议。
要求：(1)词数：80～100词(开头已给出，不计人总词数)。
(2)字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确，逻辑清晰。
How to learn English well.
3．(2011·常州)
假如上周一你班举行了“爱护水、节约水”的主题活动，请你根据以下要点为你校校报写一篇活动报道。
活动内容
邀请王老师作报告；全班讨论如何节水和爱护水。
活动收获
我们知道我国一些地方水源受到污染；我市虽有一些河流和湖泊，但也缺水。所以……(节水和爱护水的方法至少各发挥一点。)
活动感受
……
注意：(1)词数不少于90。文章的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。
(2)要点完整，层次清晰，语法正确，上下文连贯。
(3)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
Last Monday we held an activity
4．(2011·永州)
每个人都有不同的生活习惯。养成良好的生活习惯，会使我们拥有健康的体魄。良好的生活习惯有哪些呢?例如：每天按时起床和睡觉；饭前洗手；多吃水果和蔬菜，不吃垃圾食品；多参加体育锻炼；不乱扔垃圾和随地吐痰；不要在马路上玩耍，横过马路注意交通安全等。根据以下提示词，以“How to Develop Good Living Habits”为题写一篇英语短文。
要求：意思连贯、表达准确，词数60～80。
注意：短文的题目、开头和结尾已给出，不计人总浏数。
提示词：before meals(饭前)；rubbish(垃圾)；spit(吐痰)；cross tile road(横过马路)；traffic ligtits (交通灯)。
How to develop Good Living t Habits
Everyone has different living habits．Good habits can make us keep healthy．As teenagers，what should we do?
In my opinion．
In a word,if we want to keep"．healthy and happy，we must develop good living habits．
5．(2011·凉山)
保护环境是每，一个人的职责。请你写一篇以“Lower Carbon(低碳)，Happier Life”为题的英语短文。短文要点如下：
(1)自己走路或骑自行车上学，父母骑车上班。(ride a bike，on foot)
(2)节约用水，用电。(save，turn off，electricity)
(3)将用过的课本留给低年级学生。(old books，next grade students)
(4)购物时带上篮子，别用塑料袋。(basket，plastic bags)
要求：(1)词数：80个左右。文章开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
(2)必须包括全部要点，但不能逐词翻译。
(3)在文中不要提及真实的校名和姓名。
Lower Carbon，Happier Life
It’s our duty to protect the environment．
Lower carbon，happier life．Let’s take actions．
6．(2011·泸州)
假如上周末你和班上的同学到方山玩得很快乐。请以“My happy weekend”为题，根据下面的提示写一篇短文。
要点提示：
*时间是星期天早上8点；
*学校门口集合，人到齐后就出发；
*骑自行车到达目的地大约30分钟；
*有拍照、游戏、野餐等活动；
*大家都度过了一个快乐的周末。
要求：同数为80同左右(已给出的短文开头部分不计人总词数)；所有要点提示必须用完，不得逐字翻译；字迹工整，卷面整洁；不得用真实姓名和学校名称。
参考词汇：gel together，ride，photo，games，picnic
My happy weekend
Last weekend。my classmates and l went to Fangshan．It was interesting．
7．(2011·恩施)
“两路”的开通，为恩施旅游业带来了新的发展机遇。许多外国人也来到恩施参观旅游，假如你是一位导游，请根据写作要点，向外国客人简介一下恩施的情况。
写作要点：
(1)位于湖北省西南部，人口约385万，恩施人质朴善良。
(2)气候宜人，空气新鲜，是最适合人类居住的地方。
(3)“两路”建成，交通更便利，山水洞齐美，名胜很多。
参考词汇：恩施大峡谷Enshi Grand Canyon；腾龙洞Tenglong Cave；两路the Hurongxi Expressway and Yiwan Railway；方便的convenient；适宜的suitable
温馨提示：
(1)短文内容应包含所提示的要点，语言流畅，不要逐字翻译，可适当发挥。
(2)短文字数不少于80词，短文开头和结尾已替你写好，不计入总词数。
(3)文中不得出现与考生本人相关的真实的人名、校名和地名。
Hello，everyone!Welcome to Enshi．I’m your tour guide．Now let me introduce my hometown-Enshi to you．
I hope you’ll have a good time．
8．(2011·荆门)
假设你校要举办一期英语墙报，交流学习英语的感受。请你按下面表格中的内容要点提示写一篇题为“Find Your Own Way to Learn English”，80个词左右的稿件向其投稿，介绍你学习英语的体会。
文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
最新情况
现在的情况
学习体会
学
习
困
难
单词拼写
学
习
方
法
记单元词汇表
(vocabulary list)
学好英语的关键
专心致志
自有方法
听力差
多听磁带
语法错误
阅读速度慢
借书阅读
Find Your Own Way to Learn English
There are many ways to learn English，but everyone should have his or her own way．
9．(2011·本溪)
在日常学习和生活中，你一定得到过很多人的帮助和关爱，此时此刻你会有很多感谢的话要说。请根据下面所给的提示用英语写一篇短文。
提示：(1)感谢的人：亲人、老师、同学……
(2)感谢他们的原因：生活方面、学习方面……
(3)对他们的美好祝福。
要求：(1)内容包括所给提示。
(2)写作中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
(3)语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；
(4)文章开头已给出，不计人总词数。
In my life，I get lots of help and love from many people．Now，I want to express my thanks to them．First，
10．(2011·贵阳)
随着“创建全国文明城市”的开展。《贵阳中学生英语报》正在开展校规校纪大讨论。该报正在向各校学生征文。请你以“Rules of My School”为题，写一篇征文，谈谈你对校规的了解和认识。
要点如下：
(1)你所知道的校规(列举3条)。
(2)你对这些校规的认识。
(3)请你对改善校规提意见。
注意：
(1)文中不得出现真实的校名及姓名。
(2)词数不少于80词。
Rules of My School
11．(2011·福州)
目前中学生早餐问题已经引起社会关注，你所在学校的学生会在5月20日“全国学生营养日”开展问卷调查，其结果令人担忧。请你根据调查结果写一篇短文，倡导营养早餐。
学生比例
早餐情况
健康状况
55％
有规律地吃早餐
身体健康，精力充沛
25％
吃垃圾食品
营养不均衡
20％
没有吃早餐
感到饥饿，上课无法
认真听讲，容易生病
提示词：regularly．active，junk food(垃圾食品)，a balanced diet，as a result
要求：(1)所写内容必须包括表格中所提供的信息，并发表白己的看法。
(2)所给的提示词必须全部用上，可适当发挥。
(3)字数80词左右。文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Breakfast Is Important
Breakfast is important．But not all the students have realized its importance．Here’s the result of our survey．About 55 percent of the students
12．(2011·清远)
现在，食品安全是人们关注和担心的一个问题，我们怎样才可以确保安全饮食呢?请你以“Eating Safely”为题就以下问题发表你的见解：
(1)在哪里就餐?
(2)如何烹饪食物?
(3)购买怎样的食品?
写作要求：全文80词左右，文中至少列举2～3点建议。
Eating Safely
二、看图作文
1．(2011·黑龙江)
这是刘明上周日在公园发生的事情，请根据图片内容写一篇文章。
提示词：run after a goat； get lost
作文要求：
(1)要求字迹工整，语法正确，意思连贯，合乎逻辑，可适当发挥。
(2)字数要求为80词左右。
2．(2011·百色)
父亲节即将来临，学校广播室正在开展有关“父子(女)亲情”的征文活动。假如你叫李华(Li Hua)，下列三幅图片描述的是你和父亲之间发生的一件往事，请你根据图片及所给文字提示，展开合理想象，写一篇短文，并谈谈你现在对此事的感想。
要求：
(1)语句通顺，行文连贯，书写整洁。
(2)字数约70～80词。
(3)开头已给出，不计入总词数。
提示词：ask sb．for sth．，tell sb．to do sth．，net bar，think of，feel sorry
Father’s Day is coming．I’m going to tell a story between my father and me．One day
3．(2011·湘潭)
假如你是图片中的人物，请你根据图域内容及所
给提示，完成下面的日记。字数不少于60．
J une 7th Tuesday Sunny
I got up late this moming．My alarm clock didn’t work．
4．(2011·乐山)
据世界卫生组织(WHO)统计，每年有200万人死于吸烟，60万人死于二手烟。为此，我国规定．从今年5月1日起，严禁在公共场所吸烟。请你结合图片和下面所给要点，以“Saying No to Smoking”为题，谈谈吸烟的危害。
要点：
(1)吸烟有害；
(2)吸烟导致咳嗽、肺癌等疾病；
(3)吸烟影响青少年成长；
(4)二手烟同样有害；
(5)你的态度：面对别人吸烟、给烟怎么办?
注意：
(1)词数：80词左右；标题和开头已给出，不计人总词数。
(2)应覆盖所有要点；可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
(3)参考词汇：lung cancer肺癌；secondhand smoke二手烟。
Saying No to Smoking
According to the WHO，2 million people died from smoking and 600 thousand from secondhand smoke every year．So smoking is banned in China in all public places both inside and out from May l on．
5．(2010·连云港)
实施规范办学以后，学生自主学习的时间多了。假设学校英语俱乐部委托你做一项关于“实施规范办学以后，学生怎样利用双休日”的问卷调查，请根据下列图表中的调查数据，以“A Report on Weekend Activities”为题，用英语写一篇短文，简单介绍调查情 况并发表自己的看法(至少两点)。
注意：
(1)短文应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯。
(2)词数l00左右，短文开头已给出，不计人总词数。
(3)文中不得提及考生所在的学校及自己的姓名。
参考词汇：对……做调查：do an investigation on…
A Report on Weekend Activities
Since the regular school-running policy was performed，the students now have more free time on Saturdays and Sundays．So the English Club in our school invited me to
三、应用性作文
1．(2011·齐齐哈尔)
假如你叫张强，在昨天下午的篮球比赛中不小心伤了左臂，医生建议你在家休息两天，因此你要向班主任赵老师请假。请根据以上信息写一则40词左右的请假条。
Asking for Leave
May 10th
Dear Miss Zhao，
I’m sorry to tell you that I can’t go to school today．
Thank you!
Your student，
Zhang Qiang
2．(2011·黑龙江)
今天是2011年6月5日，你是九年级(6)班的林浩，在学校操场拾到了一个钱包，里面有l00元现金和一部手机。请根据以上提示，用英语写一则招领启事。
3．(2010·荆门)
暑假即将到来，李丽将到英国参加夏令营活动。请你根据她的个人介绍，帮她做一张信息卡片。
嗨，大家好!
我叫李丽，今年l5岁了。与大家一样，我也是来自美丽的湖北省荆门市。你们知道吗?我不仅语文学得好，英语也学得特棒。去年，我还获得了学校的英语演讲大赛一等奖呢。我的业余爱好也很多，我喜欢唱歌和跳舞，不过，阅读可是我的最爱哟。
今年暑假，我要去英国参加夏令营活动，我好高兴!可我现在却很忙，你们能帮我制作一张简单的个人信息卡吗?谢谢你们了
4．(2011·本溪)
根据要求完成小作文，词数：约30个。
假如你叫Mike，你的同学Tony生病了，你给他送去鲜花和慰问卡。请你在卡上写几句慰问的话。
内容：(1)表达心情；
(2)提出建议(多喝水、休息……)；
(3)送上祝愿。
答案
【名师预测】
一、l．One possible version：
Dear Cindy，
Thank you for sending me your photos．You wonder who the person I thank most is．Now let me tell you．
My mother is the person who I should thank most．She is an English teacher in a middle school．She is of medium height，and wear a pair of glasses．She likes reading and playing ping-pong．She is a good teacher and she is also a good mother．She is
very busy every day．But she tries to do what she can to make me study at school．When I am ill，she often takes me to the hospital and stays with me all the time．But sometimes when she falls ill，she never goes to see a doctor．
For my mother，I’ll do my best to be a good child．I’ll love her forever．
Best wishes!
Dale
2．One possible version：
Hi，Bob，
The summer vacation is coming soon．
After a tiring school year，I’m going to relax myself．I will spend my vacation with my grandparents．I will stay with them for about three weeks．0f course，I am going to help them do some housework．Perhaps we will take some short trips．Besides，I am going to visit some of my friends and relatives．I think we will have a happy time together．What’s more，I will be a senior student in a new term，so I am going to make some preparations．
How will you spend your holiday?
Best wishes!
Yours，
Zhang lin
3．One possible version：
With more and more cars coming into our families，we are happy that it has greatly improved our life．But unluckily，it has also brought many problems，such as heavy traffic and traffic accidents．
Traffic safety is everybody’s business．We must obey the rules．For example，we must walk on sidewalks．When we cross zebra-crossing．stop and look right and left，then go across fast．Don’t play football on the road．We can tell our parents not to drink before they drive，not to run through red lights，not to talk and laugh while driving，etc．
We can say cars are coming into our life，but only when everybody thinks traffic safety is evervbody’s business can we be safe driving on roads and walking on sidewalks．
二、One possible version．
New Year’s Day is coming．Some students are going to hold a party on New Year’s Eve．Now they are busy getting ready for it．A boy is carrying some food and a box of drinks into the classroom while others are working hard to make the classroom nice and clean for the party．Look，a girl is making some paper flowers and a boy is writing“Happy New Year”and drawing some pictures on the blackboard．Over there two students are cleaning the windows and desks．I think they will have a wonderful party and enjoy themselves a lot．
三、One possible version：
INVITATION
Dear Mr／Mrs lin，
I’m glad to invite you to come to our parents’meeting in our school at 7：30 P．m．on Saturday，May 14th．We will hold the parents’meeting in the classroom of Class 4，Grade 8．At the meeting we will tell you something about your son’s study．We will also listen to your advice on how to improve all his lessons．We hope you can come on time．
Hope to see you then!
Sincerely，
Mr Yang
【同步训练34】
一、1．One possible version:
Dear Smith，
How are you?I’m very glad to introduce an English teacher to you．He is at the age of thirty. Though quite young，he has been teaching English for ten years：He can not only speak fluent English but also standard Chinese．What’s more，he is healthy，full of energy and is easy to get along with . Above all，he lives in the Confucius hometown．He is so familiar with the Confucius ideas that he can do well in his new work there．I’m sure that he is the most suitable Chinese teacher．
I'm looking forward to your reply．
Yours sincerely，
Li Ming
2．One possible version：
How to learn English well．English is important and useful to us．How can we learn it well? Here are my suggestions．First，we should often listen to the tapes，English songs and programs．Watching English movies is also helpful to us．Second，we should speak English in class as much as possible．Don’t be afraid of making mistakas．The more you speak，the fewer mistakes you’ll make．We’d better join the English club and practice with others．Third，we can read more English newspapers and magazines. It’s good for us．At last，we should recite some good passages and keep diaries．
In a word，as long as we do more listening，speaking，reading and writing，we will learn English well．
3．One possible version：
Last Monday we held an activity about saving and protecting water．
Mr Wang was invited to give us a talk．After his speech，we had a discussion about how to save and protect water．
Now we know that some of the rivers are polluted in our country and that we are short of water although there are some rivers and lakes in our city．As a result，we need to protect and save water．For example，we shouldn’t leave water running after using it．Besides，we mustn’t throw rubbish into the rivers．
After taking part in the activity，we had a better understanding of the importance of protecting the environment and saving water．
4．One possible version:
How to Develop Good Living Habits
Everyone has different living habits．Good habits can make us keep healthy．As teenagers，what should we do?
In my opinion，everyone should get up and sleep on time every day．Don’t play or watch TV all night．That is bad for healthy and affect our work．We should eat more vegetables and fruit，and eat less meat．I advise everybody to take more physical exercises．Don’t eat junk food，for example instant noodles．Don’t litter and spit．Don’t play on the road．Remember to obey the traffic rules．No jaywalking．
In a word，if we want to keep healthy and happy，we must develop good living habits．
5．One possible version：
Lower Carbon，Happier Life
It’s our duty to protect the environment．The environment is becoming worse and worse，we must do something to prevent people from polluting the environment．First，we can ride to sehool or go to school on foot and tell our parents to walk to work instead of driving the car．Second，we should save water and electricity by turning off the taps and lights in time when we don’t need them．Third，give the old books to the next grade students if we don’t use them any more．By doing this，we can save many trees．At last，remember to go shopping with basket rather than plastic bags．I believe our life will become better and better if we can do these things．
Lower carbon，happier life．Let’s take actions．
6．One possible version：
My happy weekend
Last weekend，my classmates and I went to Fangshan．It was interesting．
At 8：00 on Sunday morning，we got together at the school gate．When everyone arrived，we started．We liked riding，so we went there by bike．After about 30 minutes’ride，we got there．We found a beautiful place to have a rest．And we took many beautiful photos and played games together．When we felt a little hungry，we took out our food to have a picnic．Everyone ate a lot．We all had a happy weekend．
7．One possible version：
Hello，everyone!Welcome to Enshi．I’m your tour guide．Now let me introduce my hometown — Enshi to you．
It is a mountain city which lies in the southwest of Huibei Province．It has a population of 3，850，000 and people here are very kind and brave．The air is fresh and the climate is neither too hot nor too cold．It’s the most suitable place for people to live in．
In recent years，many great changes have taken place here．The Hurongxi Expressway and Yiwan Railway have been built，they make the traffic much more convenient．
There are a lot of beautiful mountains，rivers and caves．You can enjoy many places of interest，such as Enshi Grand Canyon，Tenglong Cave and so on.
I hope you’ll have a good time．
8．One possible version：
Find Your Own Way to Learn English
There are many ways to learn English，but everyone should have his or her own way．
At first，I had many difficulties in learning English．For example，I couldn’t spell some English words，and couldn’t understand what people said when they were talking fast．I often made mistakes in grammar and read very slowly．
Now I have found some ways to improve my English．I copy down the vocabulary lists for each unit and keep them in my mind．I listen to English tapes every day and I can understand mostly what people talk about．I often borrow English books and read them after class．
The most important thing to learn English well，I think，is to keep your mind on it，so that you can find your own ways to improve your English．
9．One possible version：
In my life，I get lots of help and love from many people．Now I want to express my thanks to them．First，I want to thank my parents．They provide a happy life for me．They do much for me and give me so much love．Second，I want to thank my teachers．
They are do hard-working．When I have problems with my study，they are so patient and helpful．Third，I want to thank my classmates．They make me feel less lonely．I will remember the days we play and study together．
Thank you，my parents，my teacher and my classmates．I hope you are in good health and have a better future．
10．One possible version：
Rules of My School
There are lots of rules in my school．For example，we must clean our classroom every morning．I think it’s very necessary for us to keep it clean．And it's good for our health．We have to wear school unifoms every day．I think the uniforms are ugly．In my opinion，we should be allowed to choose our ownclothes．We can’t talk in the classroom．As far as I am concerned．keeping quiet is good for studying．
11．One possible version：
Breakfast Is Important
Breakfast is important．But not all the students have realized its importance．Here’s the result of our survey．About 55 percent of the students have breakfast regularly every day．They keep healthy and look active．25 percent of them just have junk food instead. They don't have a balanced diet．(It is bad for their health．)20 percent(of the students)go to school without breakfast．As a result，these students often fell hungry in class and can’t listen to teachers carefully．What’s worse，they get ill easily．
It’s necessary／important(for us)to have breakfast and we should also have the right kinds of food for breakfast．
12．One possible version：
Eating Safely
Food safety is very important to us．How can we make food safe? Here’s some advice．
First，we shouldn’t go out to eat fast food often．At the restaurant there is also some food that isn’t safe，such as unhealthy oil．
Second，we should make food clean before cooking．Remember to boil food．
Third，we should buy and eat food carefully．If the food is in bags，we should read instructions and dates carefully．Make sure the food is safe．
二、1．One possible version：
Last Sunday，Liu Ming and his friends went for a picnic at the foot of the mountain．Some of them were playing games，some were dancing，they felt very relaxed．Suddenly，Liu Ming saw a goat running．He was interested in it and began to run after it for a long time．When he thought of his friends，he didn’t know where he was．He got lost．At that time，a farmer came．With his help，Liu Ming found his friends again．He thanked the farmer and said“Goodbye”to him．
2．One possible version：
Father’s Day is coming．I’m going to tell a story between my father and me．One day I asked my father for some money．He asked me what I wanted to do．I said I wanted to buy some books．Then he gave me some．He told me to read more books and study
hard at school．But I didn’t buy any books at all．Instead I went to the Youth Net Bar and played cornputer games there．My father scolded me when he heard this．And I felt very sorry about it．From then on I haven’t been to the Net Bar any more．
3．One possible version：
I got up late this morning．My alarm clock didn’t work．When I woke up，it was 7：00．So I washed my face quickly and run to the bus stop without breakfast．By the time I got there，I missed the school bus because it had already gone．So I had to walk to school．Finally，when I got to school,it was already 9：10．I was late for class．When the teacher asked for my homework．I found I had left it at home．What a bad day it was!
4．One possible version：
Saying No to Smoking
According to the WHO，2 million people died from smoking and 600 thousand from secondhand smoke every year．So smoking is banned in China in all public places both inside and out from May l on．
As is shown in the picture，smoking is bad for people’s health．It may cause many diseases such as cough，lung cancer and so on．Smoking is especially harmful to us teenagers because our bodies are still growing．Secondhand smoke does harm to us as well．So we must do something to keep away from smoking．If someone offers a cigarette，we should refuse it．And if anyone smokes nearby，we should try to stop it．From now on，each of us should follow the law and say no to smoking．
5．One possible version：
A Report on Weekend Activities
Since the regular school-running policy was performed，the students now have more free time on Saturdays and Sundays．So the English Club in our school invited me to do an investigation on how the students spend their weekends．I find that almost half of the students study by themselves at home．About 25％ of them prefer to watch TV or listen to music．20％ of them like to chat online or play computer games，while l0％ of them often help their parents do housework．Only a small number of them go in for sports or travelling.
In my opinion，all of us students should have a proper plan for our weekends．We should make good use of our time，learning more knowledge，developing our interests…We should also learn to relax，but I don’t think it’s a good idea to spend too much time watching TV，chatting online or playing computer games．
三、1．One possible version：
Asking for Leave
May 10th
Dear Miss Zhao，
I’m sorry to tell you that I can’t go to school today．I hurt my left arm in the basketball match yesterday afternoon．The doctor told me to have a rest at
home for two days，so I will／have to ask for two days’leave．I hope I’ll get well and return to school soon．
Thank you!
Your student,
Zhang Qiang
2．One possible version：
Found
I found a wallet on the playground on June 5th，2011．There is 100 yuan and a mobile phone in it．I hope the loser will come to my classroom to take it
back．
Lin Hao，Class Six，Grade Nine
3．One possible version：
4．One possible version：
Dear Tony，
I’m sorry to hear that you’re ill．How are you feeling now? I think you should drink more water and have a good rest．I hope you can be better soon．
Yours，
Mike
解题策略
1．测试目标
“书面表达”是中考英语试题中检测同学们写作能力的综合主观试题，它主要考查同学们的观察力及想象力、语言组织能力及想象发散思维能力。其主要目的是加强同学们写的要求，不仅是对英语知识和能力的综合测试，也是对英语运用能力的测试。其要求是：能紧扣题目，覆盖所有内容要点，没有语法和词汇错误，具备较强的语言运用能力，格式正确，标点符号准确，符合英语的表达习惯，词数基本符合要求。根据新课标要求，初中英语作文一般有以下目标：
(1)能正确使用大小写、字母和标点符号。
(2)能根据要求写简单的短文、书信、日记等。
(3)能简单描述人物或事件。
(4)能使用常见的连词表示顺序和逻辑关系。
(5)能根据所给图片或表格写出简单的段落，并能
表达自己的观点。
2．解题技巧
(1)认真审题，紧扣内容
首先应仔细阅读写作要求，根据所提供的中英文提示或图片(表)、插图，确认目的、要求及中心内容，从而确定所写的文体和格式，明确是写记叙文还是应用文。
(2)依据提示，列出要点
对于“控制性作文”，可依据提示短语，将其扩展为符合所写文章的句子，或根据每幅图片的意思，适当添加必要的材料，以使文章内容完整，语意连贯，时态、人称正确。对于“情景作文”，可先根据主题内容，拟好提纲，必要时写出中心句、关键句。
(3)默读检查，确保无误
仔细默读所写短文草稿，检查各个句子的结构是否正确，句子是否通顺，待确定无误再将短文写在答卷上。要注意单词拼写、标点符号及大小写的正确，并对时态、语态、单复数等方面进行详细检查。
此外，在做书面表达题时，要注意使用必要的过渡词；开头、结尾要丰富多彩，增强可读性。再者一定要注意书写端正、卷面整洁，给评卷人一个良好的印象。
名师预测
一、话题作文
1．假设你是Dale，你的网友Cindy发来邮件，希望知道你最感谢的人是谁，现在请你给她回邮件，邮件内容包括：
(1)他／她的外表、兴趣、爱好和职业等；
(2)感谢的理由。
要求：(1)短文应包括所有要点，可适当发挥；
(2)语句通顺、意思连贯；
(3)字数80词左右，邮件开头和结尾已经给出，不计人总词数。
Dear Cindy，
Thank you for sending me your photos．You wonder who the person I thank most is．Now let me tell you．
Best wishes!
Dale
2．假设你是张林，即将初中毕业，你的美国笔友BOb来信询问你的暑假计划，现在请你写一封回信，告诉他你将在爷爷奶奶家度过这个假期。
注意：(1)至少写出你将要做的三件事；
(2)回信不少于80词，信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
(3)所给英语词汇仅供参考。
参考词汇：summer；grandparents；relax oneself；housework；visit；old friends and relatives
Hi Bob，
The summer vacation is coming soon．
How will you spend your holiday?
Best wishes!
Yours，
Zhang Lin
3．越来越多的汽车进入我们的家庭生活，改善了我们的生活，但同时也带来了很多问题，如塞车和车祸，给家庭和社会带来极大的危害。作为中学生，我们应该怎样做呢?
请写一篇有关交通安全的短文(80词左右)，内容包含：
(1)遵守交通规则，如走人行道／过斑马线。
(2)别在街道上或马路上玩耍和踢球。
(3)劝父母不能酒后驾车。
你可以适当增加内容，让短文通顺，过渡自然。
参考词汇：sidewalk人行道 zebra-crossing斑马线
注：第一段已给出，不计入总词数。
With more and more cars coming into our families，we are happy that it has greatly improved our life．But unluckily，it has also brought many proplems，such as heavy traffic and traffic accidents．
二、看图作文
根据下面的图画，请你用英语写一篇短文。包
括6～9个句子。短文要求达意、正确、连贯。
三、应用性作文
学校决定本周星期六(2011年5月14日)晚上以班为单位召开家长座谈会，会议将于七点半开始，地点是本班教室。届时将通报孩子在校学习情况，并就如何促使孩子学好功课征求家长意见。请你代替八年级(4)班班主任杨老师用英语向林涛的家长写一份邀请书。
要求：(1)格式正确，语言流畅，表达清楚；
(2)书写规范，字迹清楚；
(3)词数：70～80。
同步训练34书面表达
一、话题作文
1．(2011·泰安)
假如你是李明，在网上看到一则美国某大学孔子学院招聘汉语老师的广告，请你根据信息内容，用英语给Mr．Smith写一封email，向他推荐一位符合条件的老师。
注意：(1)词数：80～100词，信的开头和结尾已给出，不计人总词数。
(2)可适当增加细节，说明他／她的优势，文中不要提及真实的校名和人名。
(3)参考词汇：fluent(n西．)流利的；familiar(adj．)熟知的；standard(n／adj．)标准(的)；Confucius(n．)孔子；suitable(adj．)合适的；healthy(adj．)；introduce(v．)；
get along well with．．．
Dear Smith，
How are you? I’m very glad to introduce
I’m looking forward to your reply．
Yours sincerely，
Li Ming
2．(2011·齐齐哈尔)
世界在发展，文化在交融，英语已经成为人们沟通的桥梁。怎样学好英语是我们一直在求索的问题。几年的学习经历你一定积累了许多成功的经验，请从听、说、读、写四方面谈谈你的建议。
要求：(1)词数：80～100词(开头已给出，不计人总词数)。
(2)字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确，逻辑清晰。
How to learn English well.
3．(2011·常州)
假如上周一你班举行了“爱护水、节约水”的主题活动，请你根据以下要点为你校校报写一篇活动报道。
活动内容
邀请王老师作报告；全班讨论如何节水和爱护水。
活动收获
我们知道我国一些地方水源受到污染；我市虽有一些河流和湖泊，但也缺水。所以……(节水和爱护水的方法至少各发挥一点。)
活动感受
……
注意：(1)词数不少于90。文章的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。
(2)要点完整，层次清晰，语法正确，上下文连贯。
(3)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
Last Monday we held an activity
4．(2011·永州)
每个人都有不同的生活习惯。养成良好的生活习惯，会使我们拥有健康的体魄。良好的生活习惯有哪些呢?例如：每天按时起床和睡觉；饭前洗手；多吃水果和蔬菜，不吃垃圾食品；多参加体育锻炼；不乱扔垃圾和随地吐痰；不要在马路上玩耍，横过马路注意交通安全等。根据以下提示词，以“How to Develop Good Living Habits”为题写一篇英语短文。
要求：意思连贯、表达准确，词数60～80。
注意：短文的题目、开头和结尾已给出，不计人总浏数。
提示词：before meals(饭前)；rubbish(垃圾)；spit(吐痰)；cross tile road(横过马路)；traffic ligtits (交通灯)。
How to develop Good Living t Habits
Everyone has different living habits．Good habits can make us keep healthy．As teenagers，what should we do?
In my opinion．
In a word,if we want to keep"．healthy and happy，we must develop good living habits．
5．(2011·凉山)
保护环境是每，一个人的职责。请你写一篇以“Lower Carbon(低碳)，Happier Life”为题的英语短文。短文要点如下：
(1)自己走路或骑自行车上学，父母骑车上班。(ride a bike，on foot)
(2)节约用水，用电。(save，turn off，electricity)
(3)将用过的课本留给低年级学生。(old books，next grade students)
(4)购物时带上篮子，别用塑料袋。(basket，plastic bags)
要求：(1)词数：80个左右。文章开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
(2)必须包括全部要点，但不能逐词翻译。
(3)在文中不要提及真实的校名和姓名。
Lower Carbon，Happier Life
It’s our duty to protect the environment．
Lower carbon，happier life．Let’s take actions．
6．(2011·泸州)
假如上周末你和班上的同学到方山玩得很快乐。请以“My happy weekend”为题，根据下面的提示写一篇短文。
要点提示：
*时间是星期天早上8点；
*学校门口集合，人到齐后就出发；
*骑自行车到达目的地大约30分钟；
*有拍照、游戏、野餐等活动；
*大家都度过了一个快乐的周末。
要求：同数为80同左右(已给出的短文开头部分不计人总词数)；所有要点提示必须用完，不得逐字翻译；字迹工整，卷面整洁；不得用真实姓名和学校名称。
参考词汇：gel together，ride，photo，games，picnic
My happy weekend
Last weekend。my classmates and l went to Fangshan．It was interesting．
7．(2011·恩施)
“两路”的开通，为恩施旅游业带来了新的发展机遇。许多外国人也来到恩施参观旅游，假如你是一位导游，请根据写作要点，向外国客人简介一下恩施的情况。
写作要点：
(1)位于湖北省西南部，人口约385万，恩施人质朴善良。
(2)气候宜人，空气新鲜，是最适合人类居住的地方。
(3)“两路”建成，交通更便利，山水洞齐美，名胜很多。
参考词汇：恩施大峡谷Enshi Grand Canyon；腾龙洞Tenglong Cave；两路the Hurongxi Expressway and Yiwan Railway；方便的convenient；适宜的suitable
温馨提示：
(1)短文内容应包含所提示的要点，语言流畅，不要逐字翻译，可适当发挥。
(2)短文字数不少于80词，短文开头和结尾已替你写好，不计入总词数。
(3)文中不得出现与考生本人相关的真实的人名、校名和地名。
Hello，everyone!Welcome to Enshi．I’m your tour guide．Now let me introduce my hometown-Enshi to you．
I hope you’ll have a good time．
8．(2011·荆门)
假设你校要举办一期英语墙报，交流学习英语的感受。请你按下面表格中的内容要点提示写一篇题为“Find Your Own Way to Learn English”，80个词左右的稿件向其投稿，介绍你学习英语的体会。
文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
最新情况
现在的情况
学习体会
学
习
困
难
单词拼写
学
习
方
法
记单元词汇表
(vocabulary list)
学好英语的关键
专心致志
自有方法
听力差
多听磁带
语法错误
阅读速度慢
借书阅读
Find Your Own Way to Learn English
There are many ways to learn English，but everyone should have his or her own way．
9．(2011·本溪)
在日常学习和生活中，你一定得到过很多人的帮助和关爱，此时此刻你会有很多感谢的话要说。请根据下面所给的提示用英语写一篇短文。
提示：(1)感谢的人：亲人、老师、同学……
(2)感谢他们的原因：生活方面、学习方面……
(3)对他们的美好祝福。
要求：(1)内容包括所给提示。
(2)写作中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
(3)语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；
(4)文章开头已给出，不计人总词数。
In my life，I get lots of help and love from many people．Now，I want to express my thanks to them．First，
10．(2011·贵阳)
随着“创建全国文明城市”的开展。《贵阳中学生英语报》正在开展校规校纪大讨论。该报正在向各校学生征文。请你以“Rules of My School”为题，写一篇征文，谈谈你对校规的了解和认识。
要点如下：
(1)你所知道的校规(列举3条)。
(2)你对这些校规的认识。
(3)请你对改善校规提意见。
注意：
(1)文中不得出现真实的校名及姓名。
(2)词数不少于80词。
Rules of My School
11．(2011·福州)
目前中学生早餐问题已经引起社会关注，你所在学校的学生会在5月20日“全国学生营养日”开展问卷调查，其结果令人担忧。请你根据调查结果写一篇短文，倡导营养早餐。
学生比例
早餐情况
健康状况
55％
有规律地吃早餐
身体健康，精力充沛
25％
吃垃圾食品
营养不均衡
20％
没有吃早餐
感到饥饿，上课无法
认真听讲，容易生病
提示词：regularly．active，junk food(垃圾食品)，a balanced diet，as a result
要求：(1)所写内容必须包括表格中所提供的信息，并发表白己的看法。
(2)所给的提示词必须全部用上，可适当发挥。
(3)字数80词左右。文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Breakfast Is Important
Breakfast is important．But not all the students have realized its importance．Here’s the result of our survey．About 55 percent of the students
12．(2011·清远)
现在，食品安全是人们关注和担心的一个问题，我们怎样才可以确保安全饮食呢?请你以“Eating Safely”为题就以下问题发表你的见解：
(1)在哪里就餐?
(2)如何烹饪食物?
(3)购买怎样的食品?
写作要求：全文80词左右，文中至少列举2～3点建议。
Eating Safely
二、看图作文
1．(2011·黑龙江)
这是刘明上周日在公园发生的事情，请根据图片内容写一篇文章。
提示词：run after a goat； get lost
作文要求：
(1)要求字迹工整，语法正确，意思连贯，合乎逻辑，可适当发挥。
(2)字数要求为80词左右。
2．(2011·百色)
父亲节即将来临，学校广播室正在开展有关“父子(女)亲情”的征文活动。假如你叫李华(Li Hua)，下列三幅图片描述的是你和父亲之间发生的一件往事，请你根据图片及所给文字提示，展开合理想象，写一篇短文，并谈谈你现在对此事的感想。
要求：
(1)语句通顺，行文连贯，书写整洁。
(2)字数约70～80词。
(3)开头已给出，不计入总词数。
提示词：ask sb．for sth．，tell sb．to do sth．，net bar，think of，feel sorry
Father’s Day is coming．I’m going to tell a story between my father and me．One day
3．(2011·湘潭)
假如你是图片中的人物，请你根据图域内容及所
给提示，完成下面的日记。字数不少于60．
J une 7th Tuesday Sunny
I got up late this moming．My alarm clock didn’t work．
4．(2011·乐山)
据世界卫生组织(WHO)统计，每年有200万人死于吸烟，60万人死于二手烟。为此，我国规定．从今年5月1日起，严禁在公共场所吸烟。请你结合图片和下面所给要点，以“Saying No to Smoking”为题，谈谈吸烟的危害。
要点：
(1)吸烟有害；
(2)吸烟导致咳嗽、肺癌等疾病；
(3)吸烟影响青少年成长；
(4)二手烟同样有害；
(5)你的态度：面对别人吸烟、给烟怎么办?
注意：
(1)词数：80词左右；标题和开头已给出，不计人总词数。
(2)应覆盖所有要点；可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
(3)参考词汇：lung cancer肺癌；secondhand smoke二手烟。
Saying No to Smoking
According to the WHO，2 million people died from smoking and 600 thousand from secondhand smoke every year．So smoking is banned in China in all public places both inside and out from May l on．
5．(2010·连云港)
实施规范办学以后，学生自主学习的时间多了。假设学校英语俱乐部委托你做一项关于“实施规范办学以后，学生怎样利用双休日”的问卷调查，请根据下列图表中的调查数据，以“A Report on Weekend Activities”为题，用英语写一篇短文，简单介绍调查情 况并发表自己的看法(至少两点)。
注意：
(1)短文应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯。
(2)词数l00左右，短文开头已给出，不计人总词数。
(3)文中不得提及考生所在的学校及自己的姓名。
参考词汇：对……做调查：do an investigation on…
A Report on Weekend Activities
Since the regular school-running policy was performed，the students now have more free time on Saturdays and Sundays．So the English Club in our school invited me to
三、应用性作文
1．(2011·齐齐哈尔)
假如你叫张强，在昨天下午的篮球比赛中不小心伤了左臂，医生建议你在家休息两天，因此你要向班主任赵老师请假。请根据以上信息写一则40词左右的请假条。
Asking for Leave
May 10th
Dear Miss Zhao，
I’m sorry to tell you that I can’t go to school today．
Thank you!
Your student，
Zhang Qiang
2．(2011·黑龙江)
今天是2011年6月5日，你是九年级(6)班的林浩，在学校操场拾到了一个钱包，里面有l00元现金和一部手机。请根据以上提示，用英语写一则招领启事。
3．(2010·荆门)
暑假即将到来，李丽将到英国参加夏令营活动。请你根据她的个人介绍，帮她做一张信息卡片。
嗨，大家好!
我叫李丽，今年l5岁了。与大家一样，我也是来自美丽的湖北省荆门市。你们知道吗?我不仅语文学得好，英语也学得特棒。去年，我还获得了学校的英语演讲大赛一等奖呢。我的业余爱好也很多，我喜欢唱歌和跳舞，不过，阅读可是我的最爱哟。
今年暑假，我要去英国参加夏令营活动，我好高兴!可我现在却很忙，你们能帮我制作一张简单的个人信息卡吗?谢谢你们了
4．(2011·本溪)
根据要求完成小作文，词数：约30个。
假如你叫Mike，你的同学Tony生病了，你给他送去鲜花和慰问卡。请你在卡上写几句慰问的话。
内容：(1)表达心情；
(2)提出建议(多喝水、休息……)；
(3)送上祝愿。
答案
【名师预测】
一、l．One possible version：
Dear Cindy，
Thank you for sending me your photos．You wonder who the person I thank most is．Now let me tell you．
My mother is the person who I should thank most．She is an English teacher in a middle school．She is of medium height，and wear a pair of glasses．She likes reading and playing ping-pong．She is a good teacher and she is also a good mother．She is
very busy every day．But she tries to do what she can to make me study at school．When I am ill，she often takes me to the hospital and stays with me all the time．But sometimes when she falls ill，she never goes to see a doctor．
For my mother，I’ll do my best to be a good child．I’ll love her forever．
Best wishes!
Dale
2．One possible version：
Hi，Bob，
The summer vacation is coming soon．
After a tiring school year，I’m going to relax myself．I will spend my vacation with my grandparents．I will stay with them for about three weeks．0f course，I am going to help them do some housework．Perhaps we will take some short trips．Besides，I am going to visit some of my friends and relatives．I think we will have a happy time together．What’s more，I will be a senior student in a new term，so I am going to make some preparations．
How will you spend your holiday?
Best wishes!
Yours，
Zhang lin
3．One possible version：
With more and more cars coming into our families，we are happy that it has greatly improved our life．But unluckily，it has also brought many problems，such as heavy traffic and traffic accidents．
Traffic safety is everybody’s business．We must obey the rules．For example，we must walk on sidewalks．When we cross zebra-crossing．stop and look right and left，then go across fast．Don’t play football on the road．We can tell our parents not to drink before they drive，not to run through red lights，not to talk and laugh while driving，etc．
We can say cars are coming into our life，but only when everybody thinks traffic safety is evervbody’s business can we be safe driving on roads and walking on sidewalks．
二、One possible version．
New Year’s Day is coming．Some students are going to hold a party on New Year’s Eve．Now they are busy getting ready for it．A boy is carrying some food and a box of drinks into the classroom while others are working hard to make the classroom nice and clean for the party．Look，a girl is making some paper flowers and a boy is writing“Happy New Year”and drawing some pictures on the blackboard．Over there two students are cleaning the windows and desks．I think they will have a wonderful party and enjoy themselves a lot．
三、One possible version：
INVITATION
Dear Mr／Mrs lin，
I’m glad to invite you to come to our parents’meeting in our school at 7：30 P．m．on Saturday，May 14th．We will hold the parents’meeting in the classroom of Class 4，Grade 8．At the meeting we will tell you something about your son’s study．We will also listen to your advice on how to improve all his lessons．We hope you can come on time．
Hope to see you then!
Sincerely，
Mr Yang
【同步训练34】
一、1．One possible version:
Dear Smith，
How are you?I’m very glad to introduce an English teacher to you．He is at the age of thirty. Though quite young，he has been teaching English for ten years：He can not only speak fluent English but also standard Chinese．What’s more，he is healthy，full of energy and is easy to get along with . Above all，he lives in the Confucius hometown．He is so familiar with the Confucius ideas that he can do well in his new work there．I’m sure that he is the most suitable Chinese teacher．
I'm looking forward to your reply．
Yours sincerely，
Li Ming
2．One possible version：
How to learn English well．English is important and useful to us．How can we learn it well? Here are my suggestions．First，we should often listen to the tapes，English songs and programs．Watching English movies is also helpful to us．Second，we should speak English in class as much as possible．Don’t be afraid of making mistakas．The more you speak，the fewer mistakes you’ll make．We’d better join the English club and practice with others．Third，we can read more English newspapers and magazines. It’s good for us．At last，we should recite some good passages and keep diaries．
In a word，as long as we do more listening，speaking，reading and writing，we will learn English well．
3．One possible version：
Last Monday we held an activity about saving and protecting water．
Mr Wang was invited to give us a talk．After his speech，we had a discussion about how to save and protect water．
Now we know that some of the rivers are polluted in our country and that we are short of water although there are some rivers and lakes in our city．As a result，we need to protect and save water．For example，we shouldn’t leave water running after using it．Besides，we mustn’t throw rubbish into the rivers．
After taking part in the activity，we had a better understanding of the importance of protecting the environment and saving water．
4．One possible version:
How to Develop Good Living Habits
Everyone has different living habits．Good habits can make us keep healthy．As teenagers，what should we do?
In my opinion，everyone should get up and sleep on time every day．Don’t play or watch TV all night．That is bad for healthy and affect our work．We should eat more vegetables and fruit，and eat less meat．I advise everybody to take more physical exercises．Don’t eat junk food，for example instant noodles．Don’t litter and spit．Don’t play on the road．Remember to obey the traffic rules．No jaywalking．
In a word，if we want to keep healthy and happy，we must develop good living habits．
5．One possible version：
Lower Carbon，Happier Life
It’s our duty to protect the environment．The environment is becoming worse and worse，we must do something to prevent people from polluting the environment．First，we can ride to sehool or go to school on foot and tell our parents to walk to work instead of driving the car．Second，we should save water and electricity by turning off the taps and lights in time when we don’t need them．Third，give the old books to the next grade students if we don’t use them any more．By doing this，we can save many trees．At last，remember to go shopping with basket rather than plastic bags．I believe our life will become better and better if we can do these things．
Lower carbon，happier life．Let’s take actions．
6．One possible version：
My happy weekend
Last weekend，my classmates and I went to Fangshan．It was interesting．
At 8：00 on Sunday morning，we got together at the school gate．When everyone arrived，we started．We liked riding，so we went there by bike．After about 30 minutes’ride，we got there．We found a beautiful place to have a rest．And we took many beautiful photos and played games together．When we felt a little hungry，we took out our food to have a picnic．Everyone ate a lot．We all had a happy weekend．
7．One possible version：
Hello，everyone!Welcome to Enshi．I’m your tour guide．Now let me introduce my hometown — Enshi to you．
It is a mountain city which lies in the southwest of Huibei Province．It has a population of 3，850，000 and people here are very kind and brave．The air is fresh and the climate is neither too hot nor too cold．It’s the most suitable place for people to live in．
In recent years，many great changes have taken place here．The Hurongxi Expressway and Yiwan Railway have been built，they make the traffic much more convenient．
There are a lot of beautiful mountains，rivers and caves．You can enjoy many places of interest，such as Enshi Grand Canyon，Tenglong Cave and so on.
I hope you’ll have a good time．
8．One possible version：
Find Your Own Way to Learn English
There are many ways to learn English，but everyone should have his or her own way．
At first，I had many difficulties in learning English．For example，I couldn’t spell some English words，and couldn’t understand what people said when they were talking fast．I often made mistakes in grammar and read very slowly．
Now I have found some ways to improve my English．I copy down the vocabulary lists for each unit and keep them in my mind．I listen to English tapes every day and I can understand mostly what people talk about．I often borrow English books and read them after class．
The most important thing to learn English well，I think，is to keep your mind on it，so that you can find your own ways to improve your English．
9．One possible version：
In my life，I get lots of help and love from many people．Now I want to express my thanks to them．First，I want to thank my parents．They provide a happy life for me．They do much for me and give me so much love．Second，I want to thank my teachers．
They are do hard-working．When I have problems with my study，they are so patient and helpful．Third，I want to thank my classmates．They make me feel less lonely．I will remember the days we play and study together．
Thank you，my parents，my teacher and my classmates．I hope you are in good health and have a better future．
10．One possible version：
Rules of My School
There are lots of rules in my school．For example，we must clean our classroom every morning．I think it’s very necessary for us to keep it clean．And it's good for our health．We have to wear school unifoms every day．I think the uniforms are ugly．In my opinion，we should be allowed to choose our ownclothes．We can’t talk in the classroom．As far as I am concerned．keeping quiet is good for studying．
11．One possible version：
Breakfast Is Important
Breakfast is important．But not all the students have realized its importance．Here’s the result of our survey．About 55 percent of the students have breakfast regularly every day．They keep healthy and look active．25 percent of them just have junk food instead. They don't have a balanced diet．(It is bad for their health．)20 percent(of the students)go to school without breakfast．As a result，these students often fell hungry in class and can’t listen to teachers carefully．What’s worse，they get ill easily．
It’s necessary／important(for us)to have breakfast and we should also have the right kinds of food for breakfast．
12．One possible version：
Eating Safely
Food safety is very important to us．How can we make food safe? Here’s some advice．
First，we shouldn’t go out to eat fast food often．At the restaurant there is also some food that isn’t safe，such as unhealthy oil．
Second，we should make food clean before cooking．Remember to boil food．
Third，we should buy and eat food carefully．If the food is in bags，we should read instructions and dates carefully．Make sure the food is safe．
二、1．One possible version：
Last Sunday，Liu Ming and his friends went for a picnic at the foot of the mountain．Some of them were playing games，some were dancing，they felt very relaxed．Suddenly，Liu Ming saw a goat running．He was interested in it and began to run after it for a long time．When he thought of his friends，he didn’t know where he was．He got lost．At that time，a farmer came．With his help，Liu Ming found his friends again．He thanked the farmer and said“Goodbye”to him．
2．One possible version：
Father’s Day is coming．I’m going to tell a story between my father and me．One day I asked my father for some money．He asked me what I wanted to do．I said I wanted to buy some books．Then he gave me some．He told me to read more books and study
hard at school．But I didn’t buy any books at all．Instead I went to the Youth Net Bar and played cornputer games there．My father scolded me when he heard this．And I felt very sorry about it．From then on I haven’t been to the Net Bar any more．
3．One possible version：
I got up late this morning．My alarm clock didn’t work．When I woke up，it was 7：00．So I washed my face quickly and run to the bus stop without breakfast．By the time I got there，I missed the school bus because it had already gone．So I had to walk to school．Finally，when I got to school,it was already 9：10．I was late for class．When the teacher asked for my homework．I found I had left it at home．What a bad day it was!
4．One possible version：
Saying No to Smoking
According to the WHO，2 million people died from smoking and 600 thousand from secondhand smoke every year．So smoking is banned in China in all public places both inside and out from May l on．
As is shown in the picture，smoking is bad for people’s health．It may cause many diseases such as cough，lung cancer and so on．Smoking is especially harmful to us teenagers because our bodies are still growing．Secondhand smoke does harm to us as well．So we must do something to keep away from smoking．If someone offers a cigarette，we should refuse it．And if anyone smokes nearby，we should try to stop it．From now on，each of us should follow the law and say no to smoking．
5．One possible version：
A Report on Weekend Activities
Since the regular school-running policy was performed，the students now have more free time on Saturdays and Sundays．So the English Club in our school invited me to do an investigation on how the students spend their weekends．I find that almost half of the students study by themselves at home．About 25％ of them prefer to watch TV or listen to music．20％ of them like to chat online or play computer games，while l0％ of them often help their parents do housework．Only a small number of them go in for sports or travelling.
In my opinion，all of us students should have a proper plan for our weekends．We should make good use of our time，learning more knowledge，developing our interests…We should also learn to relax，but I don’t think it’s a good idea to spend too much time watching TV，chatting online or playing computer games．
三、1．One possible version：
Asking for Leave
May 10th
Dear Miss Zhao，
I’m sorry to tell you that I can’t go to school today．I hurt my left arm in the basketball match yesterday afternoon．The doctor told me to have a rest at
home for two days，so I will／have to ask for two days’leave．I hope I’ll get well and return to school soon．
Thank you!
Your student,
Zhang Qiang
2．One possible version：
Found
I found a wallet on the playground on June 5th，2011．There is 100 yuan and a mobile phone in it．I hope the loser will come to my classroom to take it
back．
Lin Hao，Class Six，Grade Nine
3．One possible version：
4．One possible version：
Dear Tony，
I’m sorry to hear that you’re ill．How are you feeling now? I think you should drink more water and have a good rest．I hope you can be better soon．
Yours，
Mike
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