中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
专题08
短文改错
【2021年】
1.
（2021年全国甲
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)卷）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作业，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last
week
our
teac
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)her
asked
us
to
fill
in
a
questionnaire.
One
of
the
questions
are：Who
will
you
go
in
times
of
trouble?
Here
are
the
results.
Many
students
say
they
will
talk
to
their
friend
or
classmates
because
they're
of
the
same
age
and
can
understand
each
other.
Some
will
turn
out
to
their
parents
or
teachers
for
help.
Only
a
little
choose
to
deal
with
the
problems
on
our
own.
Their
answers
also
show
that
they
dislike
talk
to
others.
They
kept
very
much
to
themselves.
In
my
opinion,
where
in
trouble,
we
should
seek
help
from
those
we
trust
mostly.
2.
（2021年全国乙卷
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.
每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.
只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I
love
doing
house
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)work.
I
always
assist
my
parents
in
doing
the
dish
after
meals.
I
also
water
the
flowers
in
the
yard
and
tidying
up
my
own
bedroom
whatever
necessary.
In
my
opinion,
students
can
benefit
a
lot
doing
some
housework.
Firstly,
doing
housework
was
helpful
for
us
to
be
a
responsible
person.
Also,
it
gives
our
parents
more
time
to
do
what
they
are
like
and
it
improves
the
family
relationship.
What’s
most,
doing
housework
can
be
a
form
of
mentally
relaxation
from
study.
That’s
our
view
on
housework.
And
hopes
this
can
inspire
more
thinking
on
the
topic!21·cn·jy·com
【2020年】
1.（2020·新课标Ⅰ）假定英
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.
每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.
只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Today
I
tried
cook
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)ing
a
simply
dish
myself.
I
like
eating
frying
tomatoes
with
eggs,
and
I
thought
it
must
to
be
easy
to
cook.
My
mom
told
me
how
to
preparing
it.
First
I
cut
the
tomatoes
into
pieces
but
put
them
aside.
Next
I
broke
the
eggs
into
a
bowl
and
beat
them
quickly
with
chopstick.
After
that
I
poured
oil
into
a
pan
and
turned
off
the
stove，
I
waited
patiently
unless
the
oil
was
hot.
Then
I
put
the
tomatoes
and
the
beaten
eggs
into
pan
together.
＂Not
that
way，＂
my
mom
tried
to
stop
us
but
failed.
She
was
right.
It
didn’t
tum
out
as
I
had
wished.21·世纪
教育网
2.（2020·新课标Ⅱ）假
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.
每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.
只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Thank
you
for
your
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)
letter,
what
really
made
me
happy.
I’m
glad
to
know
that
you’ve
come
China
to
learn
kung
fu
in
a
school
in
my
hometown.
I’m
surely
you’ll
have
a
good
time.
Actually,
I
start
to
learn
kung
fu
when
I
was
seven
years
old,
for
I
have
long
been
out
of
practice.
Luckily,
I
will
go
home
in
two
weeks
for
summer
vacations.
Then
I
can
spare
some
time
to
learn
it
again,
such
that
we
can
practice
together
on
every
day.
Best
of
luck
with
yours
learning
kung
fu
in
China.
See
you
sooner.2-1-c-n-j-y
3.（2020·新课标Ⅲ）假定英语课
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.
每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.
只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My
mom
is
real
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)ly
concerning
with
the
health
of
everyone
in
our
families.
In
order
to
make
surely
all
of
us
are
in
good
health,
and
she
makes
specific
plans
for
us.
For
example,
every
morning,
my
dad
has
to
have
the
bowl
of
egg
soup
while
I
had
to
eat
an
apple.
My
dad
don’t
like
the
soup
and
I
don’t
enjoy
apples.
I
tell
my
mom
that
if
we’re
forced
eat
things,
we
may
become
ill.21
cnjy
com
But
he
insists
on
u
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)s
eating
healthy
food.
Understanding
her
good
intentions,
I
eat
all
the
food
what
is
provided
by
Mom
with
appreciation.21教育名师原创作品
【2019年】
1.
【2019·全国卷I】
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。21
cnjy
com
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I
became
interesti
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)ng
in
playing
football
thanks
to
a
small
accident.
One
afternoon
where
I
was
in
primary
school,
I
was
walking
by
the
school
playground.
Suddenly
football
fell
just
in
front
of
me
but
almost
hit
me.
I
stopped
the
ball
and
kicked
it
hardly
back
to
the
playground.
To
everyone`s
surprising,
the
ball
went
into
the
net.
All
the
football
player
on
the
playground
cheered
loudly,
say
that
I
had
a
talent
for
football.
From
now
on,
I
started
to
play
my
football
with
classmates
after
school.
I
am
a
good
player
now.
2.
【2019·全国卷II】
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Since
I
was
a
k
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)id,
I`ve
considered
different
job
I
would
like
to
do.
First,
I
wanted
to
be
a
fireman,
whose
uniform
looked
so
coolly.
Then,
when
I
was
in
the
five
grade,
I
wanted
to
be
a
teacher
because
I
liked
my
English
teacher
too
much.
When
I
studied
chemistry
high
school,
I
reconsidered
mg
goal
or
decided
to
be
a
doctor.
They
were
two
reasons
for
the
decision.
One
was
that
I
was
amazing
at
the
fact
that
a
sick
person
could
feel
much
more
better
after
seeing
a
doctor.
And
the
other
is
that
I
wanted
to
help
people
in
need.
3.
【2019·全国卷III】
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。【版权所有：21教育】
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I've
had
many
dreams
s
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)ince
I
was
a
child.
Now
my
dream
is
to
opens
a
cafe.
Though
it
may
appear
simple,
it
required
a
lot
of
ideas
and
efforts.
What
I
want
is
not
just
an
ordinarily
cafe
but
a
very
special
one.
I
want
my
cafe
have
a
special
theme
such
as
like
"Tang
Dynasty".
In
the
cafe,
customers
will
enjoy
yourselves
in
the
historical
environment
what
is
created
for
them.
If
I
succeed
in
manage
one,
I
will
open
more.
I
wish
to
have
a
chain
of
cafes
in
many
different
city.
Each
of
my
cafes
will
have
a
different
theme
and
an
unique
style.
【2018年】
1.【2018·全国卷I】
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。www.21-cn-jy.com
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
During
my
last
wint
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)er
holiday,
I
went
to
countryside
with
my
father
to
visit
my
grandparents.
I
find
a
big
change
there.
The
first
time
I
went
there,
they
were
living
in
a
small
house
with
dogs,
ducks,
and
another
animals.
Last
winter
when
I
went
here
again,
they
had
a
big
separate
house
to
raise
dozens
of
chicken.
They
also
had
a
small
pond
which
they
raised
fish.
My
grandpa
said
last
summer
they
earned
quite
a
lot
by
sell
the
fish.
I
felt
happily
that
their
life
had
improved.
At
the
end
of
21教育网
our
trip,
I
told
my
f
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)ather
that
I
planned
to
return
for
every
two
years,
but
he
agreed.
2.【2018·全国卷I
I】
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文，文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删改或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（Λ），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：（1）.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
(2).只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
When
I
was
little,
F
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)riday’s
night
was
our
family
game
night.
After
supper,
we
would
play
card
games
of
all
sort
in
the
sitting
room.
As
the
kid,
I
loved
to
watch
cartoons,
but
no
matter
how
many
times
I
asked
to
watching
them,
my
parents
would
not
to
let
me.
They
would
say
to
us
that
playing
card
games
would
help
my
brain.
Still
I
unwilling
to
play
the
games
for
them
sometimes.
I
didn’t
realize
how
right
my
parents
are
until
I
entered
high
school.
The
games
my
parents
taught
me
where
I
was
a
child
turned
out
to
be
very
useful
later
in
my
life.
3.【2018·全国卷III】
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)请你修改你同桌写的以下作文，文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删改或修改。【来源：21·世纪·教育·网】
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（Λ），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
It
was
Monday
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)morning,
and
the
writing
class
had
just
begin.
Everyone
was
silent,
wait
to
see
who
would
be
called
upon
to
read
his
and
her
paragraph
aloud.
Some
of
us
were
confident
and
eager
take
part
in
the
class
activity,
others
were
nervous
and
anxious.
I
had
done
myself
homework
but
I
was
shy.
I
was
afraid
that
to
speak
in
front
of
a
larger
group
of
people.
At
that
moment,
I
remembered
that
my
father
once
said,
"The
classroom
is
a
place
for
learning
and
that
include
leaning
from
textbooks,
and
mistake
as
well."
Immediate,
I
raised
my
hand.
【2017年】
1.【2017·全国卷I】
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。21cnjy.com
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1.
每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.
只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
In
the
summer
hol
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)iday
following
my
eighteen
birthday,
I
took
driving
lessons.
I
still
remember
how
hard
first
day
was.
Before
getting
into
the
car,
I
thought
I
had
learned
the
instructor’s
orders,
so
once
I
started
the
car,
my
mind
goes
blank,
I
forgot
what
he
had
said
to
me
altogether.
The
instructor
kept
repeating
the
word,
“Speed
up!”
“Slow
down!”
“Turning
left!”
I
was
so
much
nervous
that
I
could
hardly
tell
which
direction
was
left.
A
few
minutes
late,
the
instructor
asked
me
to
stop
the
car.
It
was
a
relief
and
I
came
to
a
suddenly
stop
just
in
the
middle
on
the
road.www-2-1-cnjy-com
2.【2017·全国卷I
I】
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处；每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。【来源：21cnj
y.co
m】
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Mr.
and
Mrs.
Zhang
all
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)
work
in
our
school.
They
live
far
from
the
school,
and
it
takes
them
about
a
hour
and
a
half
to
go
to
work
every
day.
In
their
spare
time,
they
are
interesting
in
planting
vegetables
in
their
garden,
that
is
on
the
rooftop
of
their
house.
They
often
get
up
earlier
and
water
the
vegetables
together.
They
have
also
bought
for
some
gardening
tools.
beside,
they
often
get
some
useful
informations
from
the
internet.
When
summer
came,
they
will
invite
their
students
pick
the
vegetables！【出处：21教育名师】
3.【2017·全国卷III】
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。21世纪教育网版权所有
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.
每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.
只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
When
I
look
at
this
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)picture
of
myself.
I
realize
of
how
fast
time
flies.
I
had
grown
not
only
physically,
and
also
mentally
in
the
past
few
years.
About
one
month
after
this
photo
was
took,
I
entered
my
second
year
of
high
school
and
become
a
new
member
of
the
school
music
club.
Around
me
in
picture
are
the
things
they
were
very
important
in
my
life
at
that
time:
car
magazines
and
musical
instruments.
I
enjoyed
studying
difference
kinds
of
cars
and
planes,
playing
pop
music,
and
collecting
the
late
music
albums.
This
picture
often
brings
back
to
me
many
happy
memories
of
your
high
school
days.2·1·c·n·j·y
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短文改错
【2021年】
1.
（2021年全国甲卷）假
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作业，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last
week
our
teach
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)er
asked
us
to
fill
in
a
questionnaire.
One
of
the
questions
are：Who
will
you
go
in
times
of
trouble?
Here
are
the
results.
Many
students
say
they
will
talk
to
their
friend
or
classmates
because
they're
of
the
same
age
and
can
understand
each
other.
Some
will
turn
out
to
their
parents
or
teachers
for
help.
Only
a
little
choose
to
deal
with
the
problems
on
our
own.
Their
answers
also
show
that
they
dislike
talk
to
others.
They
kept
very
much
to
themselves.
In
my
opinion,
where
in
trouble,
we
should
seek
help
from
those
we
trust
mostly.
【答案】1.are→is
2.go后
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)加to
3.friend→friends
4.删除turn后的out
5.little→few
6.our→their
7.talk→talking
8.kept→keep
9.where→when/whenever
10.mostly→most【出处：21教育名师】
【解析】
【分析】这是一篇说明文。文章介绍了关于学生在碰到问题后的解决方式的问卷调查结果。
1.考查主谓一致。句意：
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)其中的一个问题是：你遇到麻烦时会去找谁？one
of
the
+名词复数，意为“……之一”，为单数含义，所以其后的系动词应用单数。结合句意，此处指问卷调查中的一个问题，所以为客观事实，时态用一般现在时。故are改为is。
2.考查固定结构。句意同上。短语go
to
sb.“求助于某人”相当于短语turn
to
sb.
for
help。故go后加to。
3.考查名词复数。句意：许多同学说
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)他们会和他们的朋友说或同学讲，因为他们是同龄人，能彼此理解。friend“朋友”为可数名词，结合句中their，所以此处要用复数。故friend改为friends。
4.考查固定短语。句意：一些说他们会
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)向他们的父母或老师求助。固定短语turn
to
sb.
for
help，意为“向某人求助”，所以此处删除介词out。故删除turn后的out。
5.考查代词。句意：只有一些人
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)选择自己解决问题。结合上文“Many
students
say...”及“Some
will
turn...”可知，此处指一些学生。student为可数名词，应用a
few代指。a
little通常代指不可数名词。故little改为few。
6.考查代词。句意同上。短语on
one’s
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)
own，意为“独自”，结合句意可知，此处指学生们独自完成，所以要用代词their。故our改为their。
7.考查非谓语动词。句意：他们的答案也表
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)明他们不喜欢和其他人说。固定短语dislike
doing
sth.，意为“不喜欢做某事”，doing为动名词作宾语。故talk改为talking。
8.考查时态。句意：他们很自闭。结合前文可知，文章的时态用一般现在时。所以此处的kept改为keep。故kept改为keep。
9.考查连词。句意：在我看来
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)，当我们有麻烦时（无论什么时候我们有麻烦时），我们应该从我们最相信的人们那里寻求帮助。分析可知，本句为含有状语从句的复合句。主句为we
should
seek
help...，从句表示的含义为无论什么时候我们有麻烦或者当我们有麻烦时，所以应用when/whenever引导。故where改为when/whenever。
10.考查副词。句意同上。副词mostly，意为“大多数”；most意为“最”，此处指最相信的人，指程度。故mostly改为most。
2.
（2021年全国乙卷
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.
每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.
只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I
love
doing
hou
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)sework.
I
always
assist
my
parents
in
doing
the
dish
after
meals.
I
also
water
the
flowers
in
the
yard
and
tidying
up
my
own
bedroom
whatever
necessary.
In
my
opinion,
students
can
benefit
a
lot
doing
some
housework.
Firstly,
doing
housework
was
helpful
for
us
to
be
a
responsible
person.
Also,
it
gives
our
parents
more
time
to
do
what
they
are
like
and
it
improves
the
family
relationship.
What’s
most,
doing
housework
can
be
a
form
of
mentally
relaxation
from
study.
That’s
our
view
on
housework.
And
hopes
this
can
inspire
more
thinking
on
the
topic!
【答案】1.
dish→dishes
2.
tidying→tidy
3.
whatever→whenever
4.
doing前加from
5.
was→is
6.
去掉are
7.
most→more
8.
mentally→mental
9.
our→my
10.
hopes→hope
【解析】
【分析】本文是一篇记叙文。主要讲述了作者对于做家务这件事的看法以及做家务会带来的好处。
1.
考查名词单复数。句意：饭后我总是帮助父母洗碗。固定短语“do
the
dishes”译为“洗餐具”。故将dish改为dishes。【来源：21cnj
y.co
m】
2.
考查动词。句意：我也给院子
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)里的花浇水，必要时打扫我自己的卧室。分析句子结构以及并列连词and可知，此处tidy
up是并列谓语。根据上文的“water
the
flowers”可知，句子要使用一般现在时。主语第一人称I，谓语动词用原型。故将tidying改为tidy。
3.
考查连词。句意：我也给
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)院子里的花浇水，必要时打扫我自己的卧室。根据句意可知，此处表达“有必要时我也会打扫自己的卧室”，所以用whenever(无论何时)引导让步状语从句。故将whatever改为whenever。
4.
考查介词。句意：在我看来，学生可
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)以从做家务中受益很多。固定短语“benefit......from......
”译为“从……中获益”。故在doing前加from。
5.
考查时态。句意：首先
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)，做家务有助于我们成为一个负责任的人。根据全文时态可知，本文陈述客观事实需要用一般现在时。主语doing
housework为单数，谓语也用单数。故将was改为is。
6.
考查动词。句意：同时，这也给了我们的父
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)母更多的时间去做他们喜欢的事情，改善了家庭关系。根据句意可知，此处表达“去做他们喜欢的事情”，动词like译为“喜欢”满足句意；所以动词like前的系动词are多余。故删去are。
7.
考查固定搭配。句意：此外，做家务可以是
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)一种从学习中获得精神放松的方式。固定短语“what’s
more”译为“此外”。故将most改为more。
8.
考查形容词。句意：同时，这也给了我们的
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)父母更多的时间去做他们喜欢的事情，改善了家庭关系。修饰名词relaxation(放松)需要用形容词。故将mentally改为mental。21教育名师原创作品
9.
考查人称代词。句意：这是我对家务的看法。根据全文内容以及句意可知，此处表达“这是我对家务的看法”。故将our改为my。
10.
考查祈使句。句意：希望这能激
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)发更多关于这个话题的思考！分析句子结构可知，此处为祈使句，所以动词hope需要用动词原形。故将hopes改为hope。
【2020年】
1.（2020·新课标Ⅰ）假定
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.
每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.
只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Today
I
tried
cookin
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)g
a
simply
dish
myself.
I
like
eating
frying
tomatoes
with
eggs,
and
I
thought
it
must
to
be
easy
to
cook.
My
mom
told
me
how
to
preparing
it.
First
I
cut
the
tomatoes
into
pieces
but
put
them
aside.
Next
I
broke
the
eggs
into
a
bowl
and
beat
them
quickly
with
chopstick.
After
that
I
poured
oil
into
a
pan
and
turned
off
the
stove，
I
waited
patiently
unless
the
oil
was
hot.
Then
I
put
the
tomatoes
and
the
beaten
eggs
into
pan
together.
＂Not
that
way，＂
my
mom
tried
to
stop
us
but
failed.
She
was
right.
It
didn’t
tum
out
as
I
had
wished.
【答案】
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)
【解析】这是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲述了作者做西红柿炒鸡蛋的过程。
1.考查形容词。句意：今天我自己尝试做一道简单的菜。根据名词dish可知，此处应用形容词作定语，故将simply改为simple。
2.考查非谓语动词。句意：
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)我喜欢吃西红柿炒鸡蛋。动词fry与tomatoes之间是动宾关系，所以此处应用过去分词作定语，故将frying改为fried。
3.考查情态动词用法。句意：并且我认为它一定很简单。must是情态动词，后接动词原形，to多余，故将to去掉。
4.考查非谓语动词。句意：我妈妈告诉我
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)如何准备这道菜。分析句子可知，“how+不定式”作told的宾语，to是不定式符号，后应接动词原形，故将preparing改为prepare。
5.考查连词。句意：首先我把西
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)红柿切成块，并把它们放在一边。I
cut
the
tomatoes
into
pieces与put
them
aside之间是并列关系，应使用and连接，故将but改为and。
6.考查名词复数。句意：下一步我把鸡
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)蛋打到一个碗里，然后用筷子快速搅拌。chopstick是可数名词，意为“筷子”，通常以复数形式出现，故将chopstick改为chopsticks。
7.考查介词。句意：之后
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)我把油倒进一个平底锅，然后开火。根据I
poured
oil
into
a
pan及常识可知，把油倒进锅里后应是打开炉子，所以此处应使用短语turn
on，故将off改为n。
8.考查连词。句意：我耐心等待，直到油烧热。
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)此处是指“直到”油烧热，应使用until/till引导时间状语从句，故将unless改为until/till。
9.考查冠词。句意：然后我把西红柿和打好的鸡蛋一起放进平底锅。此处特指上文提到的pan，所以其前应加定冠词the，故在pan前the。
10.考查代词。句意：“不
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)是那样。”我的妈妈尽力阻止我，但是失败了。根据上文可知，是作者一个人做菜，此处指妈妈尽力阻止“我”，应使用第一人称单数的宾格，故将us改为me。
2.（2020·新课标Ⅱ）假定英
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.
每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.
只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Thank
you
for
you
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)r
letter,
what
really
made
me
happy.
I’m
glad
to
know
that
you’ve
come
China
to
learn
kung
fu
in
a
school
in
my
hometown.
I’m
surely
you’ll
have
a
good
time.
Actually,
I
start
to
learn
kung
fu
when
I
was
seven
years
old,
for
I
have
long
been
out
of
practice.
Luckily,
I
will
go
home
in
two
weeks
for
summer
vacations.
Then
I
can
spare
some
time
to
learn
it
again,
such
that
we
can
practice
together
on
every
day.
Best
of
luck
with
yours
learning
kung
fu
in
China.
See
you
sooner.
【答案】1.what→which
2.come后加to
3.surely→sure
4.start→started
5.for→but
/
yet
6.vacations→vacation
7.such→so
8.去掉on
9.yours→your
/
you
10.sooner→soon
【解析】这是一篇记叙文。文章作者给
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)他的朋友回信。很高兴听说他的朋友在学功夫，也很期待能和他一起学习中国功夫。1.考查非限制性定语从句。句意：谢谢你的来信，你的信真正让我开心。分析句子，逗号后的从句为非限制性定语从句，修饰先行词your
letter，关系词在从句中作主语，指物，that不能引导非限制性定语从句。故将what改为which.21世纪教育网版权所有
2.
考查固定搭配。句意：我
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)很高兴知道你来中国在我家乡的一所学校学习功夫。分析句子，此处come为不及物动词，后接宾语是需加相应介词。come
to
译为“来到”是故定短语。故在come
和China之间加to。
3.
考查形容词。句意：我相信你会玩得很开心的。分析句子，此处be动词am后面需用形容词作表语。故将surely改为sure。
4.考查时态。句意：事实上，我七岁时就
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)开始学功夫了。分析句子，此处动词start讲述的是7岁的时候，动词应该用过去时。故将start改为started。
5.考查连词。句意：但我早就不练
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)习了。分析句子，此处前句提到“我7岁开始学功夫”，后句提到“很久没有练习了”。此处前后应是转折关系。故将for改为but
/
yet。
6.考查不可数名词。句意：
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)幸运的是，两周后我就要回家过暑假。分析句子，vacation译为“假期”是个不可数名词，后面不可加s表示复数。Summer
vacation
译为“暑期”是固定搭配。故将vacations改为vacation。
7.考查副词。句意：然后我就可以抽出时间重新学习它，这样我们就可以每天一起练习。分析句子，此处应表示“以便；所以”。故将such改为so.
8.考查介词。句意：我们就可以每天一
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)起练习。介词on后接的是具体时间。every
day
译为“每一天”，前不能用有任何介词修饰。故on多余，应去掉。
9.考查代词。句意：祝你在中国学习功夫
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)好运。分析句子，best
luck
of
you
译为“祝你好运”是固定短语。故将your改为you。/句中的yours为名词性物主代词，不可修饰后面的动名词。故将yours改为your。
10.考查固定短语。句意
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)：希望尽快见到你。See
you
soon
译为“希望尽快见到你”，是固定短语。此处不需用比较级。故将sooner改为soon。
3.（2020·新课标Ⅲ）假定英语课上老师
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.
每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.
只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My
mom
is
really
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)concerning
with
the
health
of
everyone
in
our
families.
In
order
to
make
surely
all
of
us
are
in
good
health,
and
she
makes
specific
plans
for
us.
For
example,
every
morning,
my
dad
has
to
have
the
bowl
of
egg
soup
while
I
had
to
eat
an
apple.
My
dad
don’t
like
the
soup
and
I
don’t
enjoy
apples.
I
tell
my
mom
that
if
we’re
forced
eat
things,
we
may
become
ill.
But
he
insists
on
us
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)eating
healthy
food.
Understanding
her
good
intentions,
I
eat
all
the
food
what
is
provided
by
Mom
with
appreciation.
【答案】
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)
【解析】
这是一篇记叙文。文章主要
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)讲了作者的妈妈坚持让全家人吃健康食物，确保每个人身体好。一开始，家人有些排斥。在母亲的坚持下，我充满感激地接受了母亲的好意。第一处：考查固定短语。句意：我的妈妈真的关心我们家庭里每个人的健康。be
concerned
with关心，该短语是固定短语，所以concerning改成concerned。21·cn·jy·com
第二处：考查名词单复数。句意同上
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)。family当“家庭”讲时，是集合名词，这里表示“我们一个家庭”，所以用单数，families改成family。
第三处：考查固定短语。句
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)意：为了确保我们所有人身体好，她为我们制定了特殊的计划。
make
sure确保，该短语是固定短语，所以surely改成sure。
第四处：考查简单句。句意同上。这是一个简单句，前面in
order
to…作目状语，不用连词and，所以去掉and。
第五处：考查冠词。句意：例如：每天早晨
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)，我的父亲不得不喝一碗鸡蛋汤，然而，我不得不吃一个苹果。泛指“一碗鸡蛋汤”，bowl以辅音音素开头，用不定冠词a，所以the改成a。
第六处：考查时态。根据时间状语every
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)
morning，可知这里表示经常或反复发生的事情，用一般现在时，主语为I，谓语动词要用原形。所以had改成have。
第七处：考查主谓一致。句意：我爸
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)爸不喜欢汤，我也不喜欢苹果。表示经常或反复发生的事情，用一般现在时。主语my
dad是第三人称单数，谓语动词用单数，所以don’t改成doesn’t。
第八处：考查固定句型。句意：我告诉我妈
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)妈，如果我们被迫吃东西，我们可能会生病。be
forced
to
do
sth.被迫做某事，所以forced
后面加to。21
cnjy
com
第九处：考查代词。句意：但是她坚持让我们吃健康的食物。文中指“我的妈妈”，是女性，所以he改成she。
第十处：考查定语从句。句意：出于对
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)妈妈好意的理解，我满怀感激地吃着妈妈提供的所有食物。这里含有一个定语从句，先行词是all
the
food，关系词在从句中作主语，指物，可用that或which，先行词被all所修饰，只能使用that，不能使用which，且what不能引导定语从句，所以what改成that。
【2019年】
1.
【2019·全国卷I】
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I
became
interestin
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)g
in
playing
football
thanks
to
a
small
accident.
One
afternoon
where
I
was
in
primary
school,
I
was
walking
by
the
school
playground.
Suddenly
football
fell
just
in
front
of
me
but
almost
hit
me.
I
stopped
the
ball
and
kicked
it
hardly
back
to
the
playground.
To
everyone`s
surprising,
the
ball
went
into
the
net.
All
the
football
player
on
the
playground
cheered
loudly,
say
that
I
had
a
talent
for
football.
From
now
on,
I
started
to
play
my
football
with
classmates
after
school.
I
am
a
good
player
now.
【答案】
I
became
in
playing
football
thanks
to
a
small
accident.
One
afternoon
I
was
in
primary
school,
I
was
walking
by
the
school
playground.
Suddenly
football
fell
just
in
front
of
me
almost
hit
me.
I
stopped
the
ball
and
kicked
it
back
to
the
playground.
To
everyone’s
,
the
ball
went
into
the
net.
All
the
football
on
the
playground
cheered
loudly,
that
I
had
a
talent
for
football.
From
on,
I
started
to
play
football
with
classmates
after
school.
I
am
a
good
player
now.
【语篇解读】这是一篇记叙文。作者讲述了由于一次偶然的经历，自己喜欢上了踢足球。从此成了一名优秀球员。
第一处：【解析】考查形容词
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)用法。“interest（使感兴趣；使关注）”的形容词有interesting（使人感兴趣的）常修饰物；与interested（表现出兴趣的）常修饰人。本句的意思为：多亏一个偶然的事件，我对踢足球产生了兴趣。主语是I，故将interesting改为interested。
第二处：【解析】考查定语从句。先行词on
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)e
afternoon表示时间在定语从句中作状语，所以关系词使用when。故将where改为when。
第三处：【解析】考查冠词。名词football为可数名词，前边需要有限定词。这里football第一次出现，故在football前加a。
第四处：【解析】考查连词。句意：突然一个足球
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)落在我前边并且差点打到我。“足球落下来”与“打到我”两个动作是顺承关系，不是转折关系。故将but改为and。
第五处：【解析】考查副词。“hard（努力
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)地；费力地）”与“hardly（几乎不；几乎没有）”都为副词，但是词义不同。本句意思为：我挡住足球，并使劲地将它踢回操场。故将hardly改为hard。
第六处：【解析】考查固定搭配。“to
one
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)’s
+
名词”在句中表示结果，“to
one’s
surprise”意思为“使某人惊讶的是…”。故将surprising改为surprise。
第七处：【解析】考查名词的数。“playe
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)r（运动员）”为可数名词，所以all（所有的）后需要用player的复数形式。故将player改为players。
第八处：【解析】考查现在分词。
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)本句句意：操场上所有的足球运动员大声欢呼，说我有足球天赋。句中谓语动词为cheered，say在这里作伴随状语。与主语players是主动关系，故将say改为saying。
第九处：【解析】考查固定搭配。句意：从那时开始，我放学后跟同学一起踢足球。且“from
now
on（从现在开始）”后边句子应该表示从现在开始所发生动作或存在的情况，不能用一般过去时。此处后面是一般过去时，表示“从那时起”是from
then
on，故将now改为then。
第十处：【解析】考查固定搭配。“踢足球”的英语表达为“play
football”，中间不能加冠词或者代词。故将my去掉。
2.
【2019·全国卷II】
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Since
I
was
a
k
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)id,
I`ve
considered
different
job
I
would
like
to
do.
First,
I
wanted
to
be
a
fireman,
whose
uniform
looked
so
coolly.
Then,
when
I
was
in
the
five
grade,
I
wanted
to
be
a
teacher
because
I
liked
my
English
teacher
too
much.
When
I
studied
chemistry
high
school,
I
reconsidered
mg
goal
or
decided
to
be
a
doctor.
They
were
two
reasons
for
the
decision.
One
was
that
I
was
amazing
at
the
fact
that
a
sick
person
could
feel
much
more
better
after
seeing
a
doctor.
And
the
other
is
that
I
wanted
to
help
people
in
need.【来源：21·世纪·教育·网】
【答案】
Since
I
was
a
kid,
I’ve
considered
different
I
would
like
to
do.
First,
I
wanted
to
be
a
fireman,
whose
uniform
looked
so
.
Then,
when
I
was
in
the
grade,
I
wanted
to
be
a
teacher
because
I
liked
my
English
teacher
much.
When
I
studied
chemistry
high
school,
I
reconsidered
my
goal
decided
to
be
a
doctor.
were
two
reasons
for
the
decision.
One
was
that
I
was
at
the
fact
that
a
sick
person
could
feel
much
better
after
seeing
a
doctor.
And
the
other
that
I
wanted
to
help
people
in
need.
21
cnjy
com
【语篇解读】这是一篇记叙文。作者讲述了从小到大自己的职业梦想随着求学经历不断改变的过程。
第一处：【解析】考查名词的数。“job
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)（工作；职业）”为可数名词，用different（不同的）修饰时意思为不同种类的工作，应该用名词的复数形式。故将job改为jobs。
第二处：【解析】考查形容词的用法。句中的“looked（看起来…样）”为系动词，系动词后需用形容词作表语。故将coolly改为cool。
第三处：【解析】考查序数词。年级、班级是按数字顺序排列的，所以“在几年级”中的数词需要用序数词。故将five改为fifth。
第四处：【解析】考查副词。句意：在五
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)年级的时候，因为我非常喜欢我的英语老师，所以我想变成一名老师。“so
much”在句中一般表达肯定意思，可与that连用表示“如此…以至于”。而“too
much”表太多，一般与to搭配，表达否定意思“太…以至于不能…”。本句话表达肯定意思，非常so
much
或very
much，故将too改为very/so。
第五处：【解析】考查介词。“在高中”需要用介词in或者at，故在high
school前加in/at。
第六处：【解析】考查连词
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)。句意：在高中学化学的时候，我重新考虑了自己的目标并决定变成一名医生。
“重新考虑”与“决定变成一名医生”之间是顺承关系，不是选择关系。故将or改为and。
第七处：【解析】考查there
be句
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)型。句意：有两个原因可以解释这个决定。句中的they在前边句中找不到指代关系，且后边句子中的one与the
other是对这两个原因的解释。故将they改为there。
第八处：【解析】考查形容词
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)用法。“amaze（使惊奇；使惊愕）”形容词形式有amazed（大为惊奇）与amazing（令人大为惊奇的）。本句话中主语为I，句意:病人看完医生就会感觉好很多，对此我感到惊奇，而不是我令别人惊奇。故将amazing改为amazed。
第九处：【解析】考查形容词比较级。句中bet
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)ter为well（健康；身体好）的比较级形式，多音节的形容词或副词构成比较级用more
加形容词或副词，即more不能与berrer连用。故将more去掉。
第十处：【解析】考查一般过去
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)时。本篇文章使用的全是一般过去时，且与最后一句并列的“one
was
that…”用的也是一般过去时，所以最后一句话时态应为一般过去时。讲述当时做决定时的原因。故将is改为was。
3.
【2019·全国卷III】
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I've
had
many
dreams
s
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)ince
I
was
a
child.
Now
my
dream
is
to
opens
a
cafe.
Though
it
may
appear
simple,
it
required
a
lot
of
ideas
and
efforts.
What
I
want
is
not
just
an
ordinarily
cafe
but
a
very
special
one.
I
want
my
cafe
have
a
special
theme
such
as
like
"Tang
Dynasty".
In
the
cafe,
customers
will
enjoy
yourselves
in
the
historical
environment
what
is
created
for
them.
If
I
succeed
in
manage
one,
I
will
open
more.
I
wish
to
have
a
chain
of
cafes
in
many
different
city.
Each
of
my
cafes
will
have
a
different
theme
and
an
unique
style.
【答案】
I’ve?had?many?dreams?since?I?was?a?child.?Now?my?dream?is?to??a?cafe.?Though?it?may?appear?simple,?it??a?lot?of?ideas?and?efforts.?What?I?want?is?not?just?an??cafe?but?a?very?special?one.?I?want?my?cafehave?a?special?theme?such?as??"Tang?Dynasty".?In?the?cafe,?customers?will?enjoy??in?the?historical?environment??is?created?for?them.?If?I?succeed?in??one,?I?will?open?more.?I?wish?to?have?a?chain?of?cafes?in?many?different?.?Each?of?my?cafes?will?have?a?different?theme?and??unique?style.
【详解】
第一处：【解析】考查不定式的用法。不定式做表语，to后用动词原形。故把
opens改为
open。
第二处：【解析】考查动词的时态。短文的主体时态都是现代时。故把
required改为
requires。
第三处：【解析】考查形容词的用
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)法。修饰名词cafe，应用形容词。ordinarily
是副词。故把
ordinarily改为
ordinary。
第四处：【解析】考查动词的固定搭配。want
sb
to
do
sth“
想要某人做某事”。故在have前加to。
第五处：【解析】考查介词的用法。such
as和like都是用来举例子，重复了。故把like删除。
第六处：【解析】考查代词的用法。customers是句子的主语，故把
yourselves改为
themselves。
第七处：【解析】考查定语从句。先行词en
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)vironment
在从句中做主语，指物，关系代词用that/which。故
把what改为that/which。
第八处：【解析】考查动词的固定搭配。suc
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)ceed
in
doing
something“成功的做了某事”。故把manage
改为managing。
第九处：【解析】考查名词的用法。many
different后跟可数名词的复数形式。故把city改为cities。
第十处：【解析】考查冠词的用法。an用在元音音素前，a用在辅音因素前。unique是以辅音音素开头的单词，前用a。故把an改为a。2-1-c-n-j-y
【2018年】
1.【2018·全国卷I】
假定英语课上老师要求同桌
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
During
my
la
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)st
winter
holiday,
I
went
to
countryside
with
my
father
to
visit
my
grandparents.
I
find
a
big
change
there.
The
first
time
I
went
there,
they
were
living
in
a
small
house
with
dogs,
ducks,
and
another
animals.
Last
winter
when
I
went
here
again,
they
had
a
big
separate
house
to
raise
dozens
of
chicken.
They
also
had
a
small
pond
which
they
raised
fish.
My
grandpa
said
last
summer
they
earned
quite
a
lot
by
sell
the
fish.
I
felt
happily
that
their
life
had
improved.
At
the
end
of
our
trip,
I
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)told
my
father
that
I
planned
to
return
for
every
two
years,
but
he
agreed.
【答案】
During
my
last
winter
holiday,
I
went
to
countryside
with
my
father
to
visit
my
grandparents.
I
a
big
change
there.
The
first
time
I
went
there,
they
were
living
in
a
small
house
with
dogs,
ducks,
and
animals.
Last
winter
when
I
went
again,
they
had
a
big
separate
house
to
raise
dozens
of
.
They
also
had
a
small
pond
they
raised
fish.
My
grandpa
said
last
summer
they
earned
quite
a
lot
by
the
fish.
I
felt
that
their
life
had
improved.
At
the
end
of
our
trip,
I
told
my
father
that
I
planned
to
return
every
two
years,
he
agreed.www-2-1-cnjy-com
【文章大意】
本文是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲述了作者在去年寒假期间和父亲去乡下拜访爷爷奶奶过程中的所见所闻，由此讲述了乡下的巨大变化。
第一处：countryside前加the 考查冠词。去年寒假，我和父亲去乡下拜访爷爷奶奶。此处特指去的是乡下，故加定冠词the。
第二处：find改成found 考
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)查动词时态。根据文章中的During
my
last
winter
holiday可知，事件发生在过去，故用一个过去时。故将find改成found。
第三处：another改成other
考查
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)形容词的用法。他们住在一个小房子里，院子里有狗、鸭子和其他牲畜。根据句意可知，将another改成other。【版权所有：21教育】
第四处：here改成there
考查副词及语意理解。去年冬天我又一次去了那里。故将here改成there。
第五处：chicken改
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)成chickens
考查名词复数。他们拥有一个大的独立住宅，还养了许多只鸡。根据前文的dozens
of可知，其后用名词复数形式。
第六处：which改成in
which或wh
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)ere
考查定语从句的关系词。他们还有一个小池塘，里面养着鱼。此处a
small
pond是先行词，其在后面的定语从句中作地点状语，故用in
which或where。
第七处：sell改成selling
考查动名词。去年夏天他们通过卖鱼挣了一大笔钱。此处介词by后用动名词，故用selling。
第八处：happily改成ha
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)ppy
考查形容词作表语。他们的生活有了很大提高，我感到很高兴。此处形容词作表语，故将happily改成happy。
第九处：删除for
考查介词的用法。时间名词有every，each，last等词修饰时，其前不用介词。故删除for。
第十处：but改成and
考查并列连词的用法。我计划每两年回来一次，他同意了。此处是并列关系，故将but改成and。
2.【2018·全国卷I
I】
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)请你修改你同桌写的以下作文，文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删改或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（Λ），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：（1）.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
(2).只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
When
I
was
little,
Fr
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)iday’s
night
was
our
family
game
night.
After
supper,
we
would
play
card
games
of
all
sort
in
the
sitting
room.
As
the
kid,
I
loved
to
watch
cartoons,
but
no
matter
how
many
times
I
asked
to
watching
them,
my
parents
would
not
to
let
me.
They
would
say
to
us
that
playing
card
games
would
help
my
brain.
Still
I
unwilling
to
play
the
games
for
them
sometimes.
I
didn’t
realize
how
right
my
parents
are
until
I
entered
high
school.
The
games
my
parents
taught
me
where
I
was
a
child
turned
out
to
be
very
useful
later
in
my
life.
【答案】
When
I
was
little,
night
was
our
family
game
night.
After
supper,
we
would
play
card
games
of
all
in
the
sitting
room.
As
kid,
I
loved
to
watch
cartoons,
but
no
matter
how
many
times
I
asked
to
them,
my
parents
would
not
let
me.
They
would
say
to
that
playing
card
games
would
help
my
brain.
Still
I
unwilling
to
play
the
games
them
sometimes.
I
didn’t
realize
how
right
my
parents
until
I
entered
high
school.
The
games
my
parents
taught
me
I
was
a
child
turned
out
to
be
very
useful
later
in
my
life.
【解析】这是一篇记叙文。文章讲述
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)了作者的个人经历。小时候周五夜晚家长不允许作者看卡通片，而是让他和他们一块儿玩扑克牌游戏。长大后作者才明白，这些纸牌游戏在后来的生活中很有用。
第一处：考查名词。名词作定语，往往表明
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)被修饰名词的时间、地点、类别、目的或用途、材料或来源等。名词所有格作定语则强调与被修饰的词的所有关系或表示逻辑上的谓语关系。此处表示“星期五晚上”，并不是所有关系，故把Friday’s改为Friday。
第二处：考查名词单复数。all表示三者或三者以上，后用名词复数。故把sort改为sorts。
第三处：考查冠词。这里表示“作为一个孩子”，a用在表示泛指的单数名词前，the表示特指。故把the改为a。
第四处：考查动词不定式。句意：无论我要求多少次要去看（卡通片）。用不定式表示目的。故把watching改为watch。
第五处：考查情态动词。would后跟动词原形，故把to删除。
第六处：考查代词。句意：他们会对我说玩纸牌有助于大脑。偷换人称代词，是对“我”说，前面提到的I，而不是we。故把us改为me。
第七处：考查固定搭配。be
unw
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)illing
to
do
sth.意为“不愿意做某事，不情愿做某事”。本文介绍的是过去的情况，故用过去时。所以在unwilling前加was。
第八处：考查介词。play
the
games
with
sb.表示“和某人一块玩游戏”，故把for改为with。
第九处：考查时态。根据上下文语境可知此处要用一般过去时。故把are改为were。
第十处：考查宾语从句的连接词。句意：当我
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)是个孩子的时候我父母教给我的纸牌游戏在我日后的生活中证明非常有用。宾语从句连接词并不是表示地点状语，而是时间状语。故把where改为when。
3.【2018·全国卷III】
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文，文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删改或修改。www.21-cn-jy.com
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（Λ），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
It
was
Monday
morning,
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)
and
the
writing
class
had
just
begin.
Everyone
was
silent,
wait
to
see
who
would
be
called
upon
to
read
his
and
her
paragraph
aloud.
Some
of
us
were
confident
and
eager
take
part
in
the
class
activity,
others
were
nervous
and
anxious.
I
had
done
myself
homework
but
I
was
shy.
I
was
afraid
that
to
speak
in
front
of
a
larger
group
of
people.
At
that
moment,
I
remembered
that
my
father
once
said,
"The
classroom
is
a
place
for
learning
and
that
include
leaning
from
textbooks,
and
mistake
as
well."
Immediate,
I
raised
my
hand.
【答案】
It
was
Monday
morning,
and
the
writing
class
had
just
.
Everyone
was
silent,
to
see
who
would
be
called
upon
to
read
his
her
paragraph
aloud.
Some
of
us
were
confident
and
eager
take
part
in
the
class
activity,
others
were
nervous
and
anxious.
I
had
done
homework
but
I
was
shy.
I
was
afraid
to
speak
in
front
of
a
group
of
people.
At
that
moment,
I
remembered
that
my
father
once
said,
"The
classroom
is
a
place
for
learning
and
that
leaning
from
textbooks,
and
as
well."
,
I
raised
my
hand.
【文章大意】本文为记叙文。文章主要介绍了写作课上作者克服恐惧心理主动回答问题的故事。
第一处：考查时态构成。根据语境可知，句子用过去完成时，过去完成时的构成是had
done，所以begin要改为begun。
第二处：考查非谓语动词。根据句子成分分析
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)，本句有谓语为was，而且没有连词，与主语是主动关系，所以wait
要用非谓语waiting，表伴随。
第三处：考查连词。句意：每个人都沉默了，等着看谁会被要求朗读他或她的段落。一次只能叫一个人，男女两者是选择关系，故把and改为or。
第四处：考查固定搭配。be
eager
to
do
sth渴望做某事，故eager后加to。
第五处：考查代词。句意：我已经完成了自己的作业。表示“我的”用my不用myself，或改为定冠词the也可以。
第六处：考查固定结构。be
afraid
to
do害怕做某事，所以that为多余，删掉。
第七处：考查比较级。句意：我不敢在一大群人面前说话。这里没有比较的意思，故把larger改为large。
第八处：考查主谓一致。that作主语，谓语动词用第三人称单数includes。
第九处：考查名词单复数。错误不是一个，所以要用复数。
第十处：考查副词。此处要用副词在句中做状语修饰整个句子，故把immediate改为immediately。
【2017年】
1.【2017·全国卷I】
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。21cnjy.com
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1.
每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.
只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
In
the
summer
holiday
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)
following
my
eighteen
birthday,
I
took
driving
lessons.
I
still
remember
how
hard
first
day
was.
Before
getting
into
the
car,
I
thought
I
had
learned
the
instructor’s
orders,
so
once
I
started
the
car,
my
mind
goes
blank,
I
forgot
what
he
had
said
to
me
altogether.
The
instructor
kept
repeating
the
word,
“Speed
up!”
“Slow
down!”
“Turning
left!”
I
was
so
much
nervous
that
I
could
hardly
tell
which
direction
was
left.
A
few
minutes
late,
the
instructor
asked
me
to
stop
the
car.
It
was
a
relief
and
I
came
to
a
suddenly
stop
just
in
the
middle
on
the
road.21教育网
In
the
summer
holiday
following
my
birthday,
I
took
driving
lessons.
I
still
remember
how
hard
first
day
was.
Before
getting
into
the
car,
I
thought
I
had
learned
the
instructor’s
orders,
once
I
started
the
car,
my
mind
blank.
I
forgot
what
he
had
said
to
me
altogether.
The
instructor
kept
repeating
the
,
“Speed
up!”
“Slow
down!”
“
left!”
I
was
so
nervous
that
I
could
hardly
tell
which
direction
was
left.
A
few
minutes
,
the
instructor
asked
me
to
stop
the
car.
It
was
a
relief
and
I
came
to
a
stop
just
in
the
middle
the
road.
【文章大意】本文是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲述了作者在暑假期间考驾照第一天发生的故事。
第一处：eighteen改为eight
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)eenth
考查数词。句意：在我十八岁生日后的那个暑假。eighteen意思为“十八，十八个”，表示数量，eighteenth表示“第十八个的”，故将eighteen改为eighteenth。
第二处：first前加the/my
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)
考查冠词。句意：我依然记得第一天是多么艰难。句中特指开始学驾照的第一天，所以在first前加上the。也可以加上my，my
first
day表示“我（学驾照）的第一天”，故在first前加the或my。
第三处：so改为but/ye
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)t
考查连词。根据句意可知作者本以为自己已经掌握了教练的话，结果一发动车，脑中一片空白，前后文为转折关系，故将so改为but或yet。
第四处：goes改为went
考查时态。根据前文中的started可知时态为一般过去时，故将goes改为went。
第五处：word改为words
考查单复数。
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)句意：教练一直喊“加速！”“减速！”“左转！”。word“单词，消息”，words
可以表示为word的复数，也表示某人说的话，这里指教练说的那些话，故将word改为words。
第六处：Turning改为Turn
考
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)查非谓语动词。分析语境可知教练的话“加速”，“减速”，“左转”都是祈使句，根据前文“Speed
up!”
“Slow
down!”也可以看得出来。祈使句应该用动词原形，故将Turning改为Turn。
第七处：much去掉
考查固定句型。句意：我
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)如此紧张以至于无法分辨哪个方向是左。固定句型so...that…表示“如此……以至于……”，much为多余成分，故将much去掉。
第八处：late改为later
考查
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)副词。late在此作副词，late“迟地”，later“稍后、随后”。此处表示“几分钟之后”，故将late改为later。21·世纪
教育网
第九处：suddenly改为sudd
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)en
考查形容词。句意：我来了个紧急刹车。suddenly是副词，表示“意外地，忽然地”。sudden为形容词，表示“突然的；迅速的”，修饰名词stop用形容词，故将suddenly改为sudden。a
sudden
stop表示“急刹车”。
第十处：on改为of
考查介词。
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)分析语境可知此处表示“在路中间急刹车”，on
the
road表示“在路上”，the
middle
of
the
road表示“路的中央”，强调的是“the
middle”，故将on改为of。
2.【2017·全国卷I
I】
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处；每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Mr.
and
Mrs.
Zh
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)ang
all
work
in
our
school.
They
live
far
from
the
school,
and
it
takes
them
about
a
hour
and
a
half
to
go
to
work
every
day.
In
their
spare
time,
they
are
interesting
in
planting
vegetables
in
their
garden,
that
is
on
the
rooftop
of
their
house.
They
often
get
up
earlier
and
water
the
vegetables
together.
They
have
also
bought
for
some
gardening
tools.
beside,
they
often
get
some
useful
informations
from
the
internet.
When
summer
came,
they
will
invite
their
students
pick
the
vegetables！
【答案】
Mr.
and
Mrs.
Zhang
work
in
our
school.
They
live
far
from
the
school,
and
it
takes
them
about
hour
and
a
half
to
go
to
work
every
day.
In
their
spare
time,
they
are
in
planting
vegetables
in
their
garden,
is
on
the
rooftop
of
their
house.
They
often
get
up
and
water
the
vegetables
together.
They
have
also
bought
some
gardening
tools.
,
they
often
get
some
useful
from
the
internet.
When
summer
,
they
will
invite
their
students
pick
the
vegetables！
【文章大意】本文主要讲了张先生和张太太的日常工作和生活。
第一处：all改为both：考查both和all的用法，both的主语是两个，而all的主语是三个或者三个以上，故将all改为both。
第二处：a改为an或one：考查冠词，因为hour音标的首字母是元音，所以应用an,故将a改为an或者one。
第三处：interesting改为
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)interested：考查形容词，由于此句的主语是人，而interesting的主语是物，故将interesting改为interested。
第四处：that改为which:考查非限制性定语从句，非限制性定语从句需要用which引导，故将that改为which。
第五处：earlier改为early
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)：考查副词，earlier是形容词比较级，不能修饰动词get
up,
故将earlier改为early。
第六处：将for去掉：考查动词，bought是及物动词，后无需跟介词，故将for去掉。
第七处：beside改为besides：考查
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)连接词，beside是介词，“在……旁边”，而这里需要一个连接词，故将beside改为besides。2·1·c·n·j·y
第八处：informations
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)改为information：考查名词，information是不可数名词，故将informations改为information.
第九处：came改为comes：考查时态，本文全篇为一般现在时，故将came改为comes。
第十处：pick改为to
pick：考查动词
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)，本句出现了两个动词，所以要将第二个动词变为非谓语动词，又根据句意：摘新鲜的蔬菜是目的，所以把第二个动词变为to
do不定式的形式表目的，故将pick前加上to。
3.【2017·全国卷III】
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.
每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.
只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
When
I
look
at
th
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)is
picture
of
myself.
I
realize
of
how
fast
time
flies.
I
had
grown
not
only
physically,
and
also
mentally
in
the
past
few
years.
About
one
month
after
this
photo
was
took,
I
entered
my
second
year
of
high
school
and
become
a
new
member
of
the
school
music
club.
Around
me
in
picture
are
the
things
they
were
very
important
in
my
life
at
that
time:
car
magazines
and
musical
instruments.
I
enjoyed
studying
difference
kinds
of
cars
and
planes,
playing
pop
music,
and
collecting
the
late
music
albums.
This
picture
often
brings
back
to
me
many
happy
memories
of
your
high
school
days.
【答案】
When
I
look
at
this
picture
of
myself.
I
realize
how
fast
time
flies.
I
grown
not
only
physically,
also
mentally
in
the
past
few
years.
About
one
month
after
this
photo
was
,
I
entered
my
second
year
of
high
school
and
a
new
member
of
the
school
music
club.
Around
me
in
picture
are
the
things
were
very
important
in
my
life
at
that
time:
car
magazines
and
musical
instruments.
I
enjoyed
studying
kinds
of
cars
and
planes,
playing
pop
music,
and
collecting
the
music
albums.
This
picture
often
brings
back
to
me
many
happy
memories
of
high
school
days.
【解析】
第一处：删除realize后的of
考查介词。realize是及物动词，后面接宾语时不需要介词。
第二处：
had→have
考查动词时态。根据时间状语in
the
past
few
years判断用现在完成时。
第三处：
and→but
考查连词。固定短语not
only…but
also…意为＂不但……而且……＂。
第四处：
took→taken
考查动词。根据句意可知此处表示被动含义，故把took改为taken。
第五处：
become→became
考查动词时态。根据and前面的动词entered判断该句应该用一般过去时。
第六处：在picture前加t
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)he/
this
考查限定词的用法。单数可数名词前应该有限定词，根据句意可知在picture前加the或者this。
第七处：they→that/wh
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)ich
考查定语从句。they不能引导定语从句，因为指代things，所以把they改为that或者which。
第八处：difference→different
考查形容词。修饰名词kinds应该用形容词形式。
第九处：
late→latest
考查形容词最高级。根据句意可知此处指最新的音乐唱片，故把late改为latest。
第十处：your→my
考查代词。根据句意可知此处是我高中时代生活的美好回忆，故把your改为my。
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