中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
专题22
读后续写
【2021年】
1.（2021·全国高考新高考Ⅰ卷）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A
MOTHER’S
DAY
SURPRISE
The
twins
were
f
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)illed
with
excitement
as
they
thought
of
the
surprise
they
were
planning
for
Mother’s
Day.
How
pleased
and
proud
Mother
would
be
when
they
brought
her
breakfast
in
bed.
They
planned
to
make
French
toast
and
chicken
porridge.
They
had
watched
their
mother
in
the
kitchen.
There
was
nothing
to
it.
Jenna
and
Jeff
knew
exactly
what
to
do.【来源：21·世纪·教育·网】
The
big
day
ca
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)me
at
last.
The
alarm
rang
at
6
a.m.
The
pair
went
down
the
stairs
quietly
to
the
kitchen.
They
decided
to
boil
the
porridge
first.
They
put
some
rice
into
a
pot
of
water
and
left
it
to
boil
while
they
made
the
French
toast.
Jeff
broke
two
eggs
into
a
plate
and
added
in
some
milk.
Jenna
found
the
bread
and
put
two
slices
into
the
egg
mixture.
Next,
Jeff
turned
on
the
second
stove
burner
to
heat
up
the
frying
pan.
Everything
was
going
smoothly
until
Jeff
started
frying
the
bread.
The
pan
was
too
hot
and
the
bread
turned
black
within
seconds.
Jenna
threw
the
burnt
piece
into
the
sink
and
put
in
the
other
slice
of
bread.
This
time,
she
turned
down
the
fire
so
it
cooked
nicely.2-1-c-n-j-y
Then
Jeff
noticed
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)steam
shooting
out
of
the
pot
and
the
lid
starting
to
shake.
The
next
minute,
the
porridge
boiled
over
and
put
out
the
fire.
Jenna
panicked.
Thankfully,
Jeff
stayed
calm
and
turned
off
the
gas
quickly.
But
the
stove
was
a
mess
now.
Jenna
told
Jeff
to
clean
it
up
so
they
could
continue
to
cook
the
rest
of
the
porridge.
But
Jeff’s
hand
touched
the
hot
burner
and
he
gave
a
cry
of
pain.
Jenna
made
him
put
his
hand
in
cold
water.
Then
she
caught
the
smell
of
burning.
Oh
dear!
The
piece
of
bread
in
the
pan
had
turned
black
as
well.
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右。
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
As
the
twins
looked
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)around
them
in
disappointment,
their
father
appeared.21
cnjy
com
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The
twins
carried
the
breakfast
upstairs
and
woke
their
mother
up.21教育网
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2.（2021·浙江6月卷）
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事，
My
dad,
Georg
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)e,
only
had
an
eighth
grade
education.
A
quiet
man,
he
didn't
understand
my
world
of
school
activities.
From
age
14,
he
worked.
And
his
dad,
Albert,
took
the
money
my
dad
earned
and
used
it
to
pay
family
expenses.
I
didn't
rea
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)lly
understand
his
world
either:
He
was
a
livestock
trucker,
and
I
thought
that
I
would
surpass
(超过)
anything
he
had
accomplished
by
the
time
I
walked
across
the
stage
at
high
school
graduation.
Summers
in
t
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)he
mid-70s
were
spent
at
home
shooting
baskets,
hitting
a
baseball,
or
throwing
a
football,
preparing
for
my
future
as
a
quarterback
on
a
football
team.
In
poor
weather,
I
read
about
sports
or
practiced
my
trombone
(长号).
21世纪教育网版权所有
The
summer
be
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)fore
my
eighth
grade
I
was
one
of
a
group
of
boys
that
a
neighboring
farmer
hired
to
work
in
his
field.
He
explained
our
basic
task,
the
tractor
fired
up
and
we
were
off,
riding
down
the
field
looking
for
weeds
to
spray
with
chemicals.
After
a
short
way,
the
farmer
stopped
and
pointed
at
a
weed
which
we
missed.
Then
we
began
again.
This
happened
over
and
over,
but
we
soon
learned
to
identify
different
grasses
like
cockleburs,
lamb's-quarters,
foxtails,
and
the
king
of
weeds,
the
pretty
purple
thistle.
It
was
tiring
work,
but
I
looked
forward
to
the
pay,
even
though
I
wasn't
sure
how
much
it
would
amount
to.
At
home,
my
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)dad
said,
"A
job's
a
big
step
to
growing
up.
I'm
glad
you
will
be
contributing
to
the
household."
My
dad's
words
made
me
realize
that
my
earnings
might
not
be
mine
to
do
with
as
I
wished.
My
labors
lasted
ab
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)out
two
weeks,
and
the
farmer
said
there
might
be
more
work,
but
I
wasn't
interested.
I
decided
it
was
not
fair
that
I
had
to
contribute
my
money.
注意：
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph
1：The
pay
arrived
at
last.
Paragraph
2：I
u
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)nderstood
immediately
what
my
parents
were
worried
about.
3.（2021·浙江1月卷）
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Pumpkin
(南瓜)
carv
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)ing
at
Halloween
is
a
family
tradition.
We
visit
a
local
farm
every
October.
In
the
pumpkin
field,
I
compete
with
my
three
brothers
and
sister
to
seek
out
the
biggest
pumpkin.
My
dad
has
a
rule
that
we
have
to
carry
our
pumpkins
back
home,
and
as
the
eldest
child
I
have
an
advantage-I
carried
an
85-pounder
back
last
year.
This
year,
it
was
hard
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)
to
tell
whether
my
prize
or
the
one
chosen
by
my
14-year-old
brother,
Jason,
was
the
winner.
Unfortunately
we
forgot
to
weigh
them
before
taking
out
their
insides,
but
I
was
determined
to
prove
my
point.
All
of
us
were
hard
at
work
at
the
kitchen
table,
with
my
mom
filming
the
annual
event.
I’m
unsure
now
why
I
thought
forcing
my
head
inside
the
pumpkin
would
settle
the
matter,
but
it
seemed
to
make
perfect
sense
at
the
time.
With
the
pumpkin
re
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)sting
on
the
table,
hole
uppermost,
I
bent
over
and
pressed
my
head
against
the
opening.
At
first
I
got
jammed
just
above
my
eyes
and
then,
as
I
went
on
with
my
task,
unwilling
to
quit,
my
nose
briefly
prevented
entry.
Finally
I
managed
to
put
my
whole
head
into
it,
like
a
cork
(软木塞)
forced
into
a
bottle.
I
was
able
to
straighten
up
with
the
huge
pumpkin
resting
on
my
shoulders.
My
excitement
w
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)as
short-lived.
The
pumpkin
was
heavy.
“I’m
going
to
set
it
down,
now,”
I
said,and
with
Jason
helping
to
support
its
weight，I
bent
back
over
the
table
to
give
it
somewhere
to
rest.
It
was
only
when
I
tried
to
remove
my
head
that
I
realized
getting
out
was
going
to
be
less
straightforward
than
getting
in.
When
I
pulled
hard,
my
nose
got
in
the
way.
I
got
into
a
panic
as
I
pressed
firmly
against
the
table
and
moved
my
head
around
trying
to
find
the
right
angle,
but
it
was
no
use.
“I
can’t
get
it
out!”
I
shouted,
my
voice
sounding
unnaturally
loud
in
the
enclosed
space.
注意：
1.
所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.
至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.
续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4.
续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph
1
It
was
five
or
six
minutes
though
it
felt
much
longer.
21
cnjy
com
Paragraph
2
The
video
was
posted
the
Monday
before
Halloween.
【2020年】
1.（2020年7月，浙江高考）
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
One
fall，my
wife
Elli
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)
and
I
had
a
single
goal:to
photograph
polar
bears.
We
were
staying
at
a
research
camp
outside
“the
polar
bear
capital
of
the
world”-the
town
of
Churchill
in
Manitoba，Canada.【来源：21cnj
y.co
m】
Taking
pictures
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)of
polar
bears
is
amazing
but
also
dangerous.
Polar
bears-like
all
wild
animals-should
be
photographed
from
a
safe
distance.
When
I'm
face
to
face
with
a
polar
bear，I
like
it
to
be
through
a
camera
with
a
telephoto
lens.
But
sometimes，that
is
easier
said
than
done.
This
was
one
of
those
times.21·cn·jy·com
As
Elli
and
I
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)
cooked
dinner，a
young
male
polar
bear
who
was
playing
in
a
nearby
lake
sniffed，and
smelled
our
garlic
bread.
The
hungry
bear
follo
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)wed
his
nose
to
our
camp，which
was
surrounded
by
a
high
wire
fence.
He
pulled
and
bit
the
wire.
He
stood
on
his
back
legs
and
pushed
at
the
wooden
fence
posts.
Terrified，Elli
and
I
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)
tried
all
the
bear
defense
actions
we
knew.
We
yelled
at
the
bear，hit
pots
hard，and
fired
blank
shotgun
shells
into
the
air.
Sometimes
loud
noises
like
these
will
scare
bears
off.
Not
this
polar
bear
though-he
just
kept
trying
to
tear
down
the
fence
with
his
massive
paws(爪子).
I
radioed
the
c
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)amp
manager
for
help.
He
told
me
a
helicopter
was
on
its
way，but
it
would
be
30
minutes
before
it
arrived.
Making
the
best
of
this
close
encounter(相遇)，I
took
some
pictures
of
the
bear.
Elli
and
I
feared
the
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)fence
wouldn't
last
through
30
more
minutes
of
the
bear's
punishment.
The
camp
manager
suggested
I
use
pepper
spray.
The
spray
burns
the
bears'
eyes，but
doesn't
hurt
them.
So
I
approached
our
uninvited
guest
slowly
and，through
the
fence，sprayed
him
in
the
face.
With
an
angry
roar(吼叫)，the
bear
ran
to
the
lake
to
wash
his
eyes.21cnjy.com
注意:1.
所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.
至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.
续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4.
续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph1:
A
few
minutes
later,
the
bear
headed
back
to
our
camp.www-2-1-cnjy-com
_____________________________________________________________________________________________21·世纪
教育网
Paragraph2:
At
that
very
moment,
the
helicopter
arrived.
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2.（2020年1月，浙江高考）
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
“I'm
going
to
mis
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)s
you
so
much,
Poppy,
"said
the
tall,
thin
teenager.
He
bent
down
to
hug
his
old
friend
goodbye.
He
stood
up,
hugged
his
parents,
and
smiled,
trying
not
to
let
his
emotions(情绪)get
the
better
of
him.
His
parents
we
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)re
not
quite
able
to
keep
theirs
under
control.
They
had
driven
their
son
several
hours
out
of
town
to
the
university
where
he
would
soon
be
living
and
studying.
It
was
time
to
say
goodbye
for
now
at
least.
The
family
hugged
and
smiled
through
misty
eyes
and
then
laughed.21教育名师原创作品
The
boy
lifted
the
las
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)t
bag
onto
his
shoulder,
and
flashed
a
bright
smile.”
I
guess
this
is
it,
“he
said.”
I'll
see
you
back
home
in
a
month,
okay？"His
parents
nodded,
and
they
watched
as
he
walked
out
of
sight
into
the
crowds
of
hundreds
of
students
and
parents.
The
boy's
mother
turned
to
the
dog,
“Okay,
Poppy,
time
to
go
back
home.”
The
house
seemed
quie
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)t
as
a
tomb
without
the
boy
living
there.
All
that
week,
Poppy
didn't
seem
interested
in
her
dinner,
her
favorite
toy,
or
even
in
her
daily
walk.
Her
owners
were
sad
too,
but
they
knew
their
son
would
be
back
to
visit.
Poppy
didn't.
They
offered
the
dog
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)
some
of
her
favorite
peanut
butter
treats.
They
even
let
her
sit
on
the
sofa,
but
the
old
girl
just
wasn't
her
usual
cheerful
self.
Her
owners
started
to
get
worried.
"What
should
we
do
to
cheer
Poppy
up？"asked
Dad.
“We've
tried
everything.”
“I
have
an
i
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)dea,
but
it
might
be
a
little
crazy,
“smiled
Mom.”
Without
anybody
left
in
the
house
but
us,
this
place
could
use
a
bit
of
fun.
Let's
get
a
little
dog
for
Poppy."
It
didn't
take
lo
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)ng
before
they
walked
through
the
front
door
carrying
a
big
box.
Poppy
welcomed
them
home
as
usual,
but
when
she
saw
the
box,
she
stopped.
She
put
her
nose
on
it.
Her
tail
began
wagging(摆动)ever
so
slowly,
then
faster
as
she
caught
the
smell.
注意:
1.
所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.
至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.
续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4.
续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Para
1.
Dad
opened
the
box
and
a
sweet
little
dog
appeared.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Para
2.
A
few
weeks
later,
the
boy
arrived
home
from
university.【出处：21教育名师】
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【版权所有：21教育】
【2019年】
1.（2019年6月，浙江高考）
阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Parents
everywhe
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)re
praise
their
kids.
Jenn
Berman,
author
of
The
A
to
Z
Guide
to
Raising
Happy
and
Confident
Kids,
says,
“We’ve
gone
to
the
opposite
extreme
of
a
few
decades
ago
when
parents
tended
to
be
more
strict.”
By
giving
kids
a
lot
of
praise,
parents
think
they’re
building
their
children’s
confidence,
when,
in
fact,
it
may
be
just
the
opposite.
Too
much
praise
can
backfire
and,
when
given
in
a
way
that’s
insincere,
make
kids
afraid
to
try
new
things
or
take
a
risk
for
fear
of
not
being
able
to
stay
on
top
where
their
parents’
praise
has
put
them.
Still,
don’t
go
to
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)o
far
in
the
other
direction.
Not
giving
enough
praise
can
be
just
as
damaging
as
giving
too
much.
Kids
will
feel
like
they’re
not
good
enough
or
that
you
don’t
care
and,
as
a
result,
may
see
no
point
in
trying
hard
for
their
accomplishments.www.21-cn-jy.com
So
what
is
the
right
a
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)mount
of
praise?
Experts
say
that
the
quality
of
praise
is
more
important
than
the
quantity.
If
praise
is
sincere
and
focused
on
the
effort
not
the
outcome,
you
can
give
it
as
often
as
your
child
does
something
that
deserves
a
verbal
reward.
“We
should
especially
recognize
our
children’s
efforts
to
push
themselves
and
work
hard
to
achieve
a
goal,”
says
Donahue,
author
of
Parenting
Without
Fear:
Letting
Go
of
Worry
and
Focusing
on
What
Really
Matters.
“One
thing
to
remember
is
that
it’s
the
process
not
the
end
product
that
matters.”
Your
son
may
n
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be
the
best
basketball
player
on
his
team.
But
if
he’s
out
there
every
day
and
playing
hard,
you
should
praise
his
effort
regardless
of
whether
his
team
wins
or
loses.
Praising
the
effort
and
not
the
outcome
can
also
mean
recognizing
your
child
when
she
has
worked
hard
to
clean
the
yard,
cook
dinner,
or
finish
a
book
report.
But
whatever
it
is,
praise
should
be
given
on
a
case-by-case
basis
and
be
proportionate(相称的)
to
the
amount
of
effort
your
child
has
put
into
it.
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【2018年】
1.（2018年11月，浙江高考）
阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
It’s
a
really
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)good
idea
to
visit
colleges
before
you
apply
because
their
websites
can
all
start
to
look
and
sound
the
same.
Nothing
will
give
you
the
sense
of
what
it
will
actually
be
like
to
live
on
a
college
campus(校园)
like
visiting
and
seeing
for
yourself
the
dorms,
classrooms
and
athletic
equipment
and,
of
course,
the
students.
It
seems
a
little
crazy
once
senior
year
hits
to
find
the
time
to
visit
college
campuses,
and
it
can
also
be
pricey
if
the
schools
you
are
applying
to
happen
to
be
more
than
a
car
ride
away.
But
keep
in
mind
that
you
are
making
a
decision
about
the
next
four
years
of
your
life,
and
do
all
the
research
you
can
to
make
sure
you
are
making
the
right
one.
There’s
no
excuse
not
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)to
visit
the
schools
in
your
local
area.
In
fact,
a
lot
of
college
applications
even
ask
if
you
have
visited
campus,
and
obviously,
if
you
live
across
the
country
that
won’t
be
as
much
of
a
possibility,
but
if
you
live
nearby,
go
check
it
out!2·1·c·n·j·y
If
campus
visits
ar
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)en’t
going
to
happen
before
you
apply,
at
the
very
least
you
should
find
some
time
between
applying
and
getting
your
acceptance
letters
to
visit
the
schools
you’d
like
to
attend.
It
can
save
you
a
lot
of
heartache
if
you
rule
out
now
the
things
that
you
don’t
like
about
certain
campuses,
things
that
you
wouldn’t
know
unless
you
actually
visit.
Now,
if
time
and
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)
money
are
making
it
impossible,
then
check
out
the
online
college
fairs
at
CollegeWeekLive.
It’s
a
chance
to
chat
online
with
admissions
officers,
students,
and
college
counselors
(顾问),
and
it
won’t
cost
you
a
penny!
You
can
register
for
its
online
college
fair
at
.
While
visiting
an
online
college
fair
can’t
take
the
place
of
an
actual
campus
visit,
it
can
be
a
very
useful
tool
that
along
with
all
your
other
research
will
help
you
make
an
informed
decision
about
which
colleges
or
universities
you’d
like
to
attend.
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2.（2018年6月，浙江高考）
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
It
was
summer,
and
m
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)y
dad
wanted
to
treat
me
to
a
vacation
like
never
before.
He
decided
to
take
me
on
a
trip
to
the
Wild
West.
We
took
a
plane
t
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Albuquerque,
a
big
city
in
the
state
of
New
Mexico.
We
reached
Albuquerque
in
the
late
afternoon.
Uncle
Paul,
my
dad’s
friend,
picked
us
up
from
the
airport
and
drove
us
up
to
his
farm
in
Pecos.
His
wife
Tina
c
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)ooked
us
a
delicious
dinner
and
we
got
to
know
his
sons
Ryan
and
Kyle.
My
dad
and
I
spent
the
night
in
the
guestroom
of
the
farm
house
listening
to
the
frogs
and
water
rolling
down
the
river
nearby.
Very
early
in
the
morning,
Uncle
Paul
woke
us
up
to
have
breakfast.
"The
day
starts
at
dawn
on
my
farm,"
he
said.
After
breakfast,
I
went
to
help
Aunt
Tina
feed
the
chickens,
while
my
dad
went
with
Uncle
Paul
to
take
the
sheep
out
to
graze(吃草).
I
was
impressed
to
see
my
dad
and
Uncle
Paul
riding
horses.
They
looked
really
cool.
In
the
after
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)noon,
I
asked
Uncle
Paul
if
I
could
take
a
horse
ride,
and
he
said
yes,
as
long
as
my
dad
went
with
me.
I
wasn’t
going
to
take
a
horse
ride
by
myself
anyway.
So,
my
dad
and
I
put
on
our
new
cowboy
hats,
got
on
our
horses,
and
headed
slowly
towards
the
mountains.
"Don’t
be
late
for
supper,"
Uncle
Paul
cried,
"and
keep
to
the
track
so
that
you
don’t
get
lost!"
"OK!
"
my
dad
cried
back.
After
a
while
Uncle
Paul
and
his
farm
house
were
out
of
sight.
It
was
so
peaceful
and
quiet
and
the
colors
of
the
brown
rocks,
the
deep
green
pine
trees,
and
the
late
afternoon
sun
mixed
to
create
a
magic
scene.
It
looked
like
a
beautiful
woven(编织的)
blanket
spread
out
upon
the
ground
just
for
us.
Suddenly
a
little
rabbit
jumped
out
in
front
of
my
horse.
注意：
（1）所续写短文的词数应为l50左右；
（2）至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语：
（3）续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
（4）续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph
1:
Su
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)ddenly
a
little
rabbit
jumped
out
in
front
of
my
horse.
____________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph
2:
We
had
n
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idea
where
we
were
and
it
was
getting
dark.
_____________
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【2017年】
1.（2017年11月，浙江高考）
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
A
Vacation
with
My
Mother
I
had
an
intere
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)sting
childhood.
It
was
filled
with
surprises
and
amusements,
all
because
of
my
mother---loving,
sweet,
yet
absent-minded
and
forgetful.
One
strange
family
trip
we
took
when
I
was
eleven
tells
a
lot
about
her.
My
two
sets
of
g
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)randparents
lived
in
Colorado
and
North
Dakota,
and
my
parents
decided
to
spend
a
few
weeks
driving
to
those
states
and
seeing
all
the
sights
along
the
way.
As
the
first
day
of
our
trip
approached,
David,
my
eight-year-old
brother,
and
I
unwillingly
said
good-bye
to
all
of
our
friends.
Who
knew
if
we’d
ever
see
them
again?
Finally,
the
moment
of
our
departure
arrived,
and
we
loaded
suitcases,
books,
games,
camping
equipment,
and
a
tent
into
the
car
and
bravely
drove
off.
We
bravely
drove
off
again
two
hours
later
after
we’d
returned
home
to
get
the
purse
and
traveler’s
checks
Mom
had
forgotten.
David
and
I
were
alw
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)ays
a
little
nervous
when
using
gas
station
bathrooms
if
Mom
was
driving
while
Dad
slept:
“You
stand
outside
the
door
and
play
lookout(放哨)
while
I
go,
and
I’ll
stand
outside
the
door
and
play
lookout
while
you
go.”
I
had
terrible
pictures
in
my
mind:
“Honey,
where
are
the
kids?”
“What?!
Oh,
Gosh…I
thought
they
were
being
awfully
quiet.”
We
were
never
actually
left
behind
in
a
strange
city,
but
we
weren’t
about
to
take
any
chances.
On
the
fourth
or
fif
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night,
we
had
trouble
finding
a
hotel
with
a
vacancy.
After
driving
in
vain
for
some
time,
Mom
suddenly
got
a
great
idea:
Why
didn’t
we
find
a
house
with
a
likely-looking
backyard
and
ask
if
we
could
set
up
tent
there?
David
and
I
became
nervous.
To
our
great
relief,
Dad
turned
down
the
idea.
Mom
never
could
understand
our
objections(反对).
If
a
strange
family
showed
up
on
her
front
doorstep,
Mom
would
have
been
delighted.
She
thinks
everyone
in
the
world
is
as
nice
as
she
is.
We
finally
found
a
vacancy
in
the
next
town.
注意：
1.
所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.
至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.
续写部分分为两段，每段的开头已为你写好；
4.
续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph
1:
The
next
day
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we
remembered
the
brand-new
tent
we
had
brought
with
us.
______________
Paragraph
2:
We
drove
through
seve
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)ral
states
and
saw
lots
of
great
sights
along
the
way.
______________
2.（2017年6月，浙江高考）
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
On
a
bright,
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)warm
July
afternoon,
Mac
Hollan,
a
primary
school
teacher,
was
cycling
from
his
home
to
Alaska
with
his
friends.
One
of
his
friends
had
stopped
to
make
a
bicycle
repair,
but
they
had
encouraged
Mac
to
carry
on,
and
they
would
catch
up
with
him
soon.
As
Mac
pedaled
(骑行)
along
alone,
he
thought
fondly
of
his
wife
and
two
young
daughters
at
home.
He
hoped
to
show
them
this
beautiful
place
someday.
Then
Mac
heard
quick
a
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loud
breathing
behind
him.
“Man,
that's
a
big
dog!”
he
thought.
But
when
he
looked
to
the
side,
he
saw
instantly
that
it
wasn’t
a
dog
at
all,
but
a
wolf,
quickly
catching
up
with
him.
Mac’s
heart
jumped.
He
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)
found
out
his
can
of
hear
spray.
With
one
hand
on
the
bars,
he
fired
the
spray
at
the
wolf.
A
bright
red
cloud
enveloped
the
animal,
and
to
Mac's
relief,
it
fell
back,
shaking
its
head.
But
a
minute
later,
it
was
by
his
side
again.
Then
it
attacked
the
back
of
Mac's
bike,
tearing
open
his
tent
bag.
He
fired
at
the
wolf
a
second
time,
and
again,
it
fell
back
only
to
quickly
restart
the
chase（追赶）。
Mac
was
pedaling
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)hard
now.
He
waved
and
yelled
at
passing
cars
but
was
careful
not
to
show
down.
He
saw
a
steep
uphill
climb
before
him.
He
knew
that
21世纪教育网
once
he
hit
the
hill,
he’d
be
easy
caught
up
and
the
wolf’s
teeth
would
be
tearing
into
his
flesh.
At
this
moment,
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)Paul
and
Beeky
were
driving
their
car
on
their
way
to
Alaska.
They
didn’t
think
much
of
it
when
they
saw
two
cyclists
repairing
their
bike
on
the
side
of
the
road.
A
bit
later,
they
spotted
what
they,
too,
assumed
was
a
dog
running
alongside
a
man
on
a
bike.
As
they
got
closer,
they
realized
that
the
dog
was
a
wolf.
Mac
heard
a
large
vehicle
behind
him.
He
pulled
in
front
of
it
as
the
wolf
was
catching
up
fast,
just
a
dozen
yards
away
now.
注意：
1.
所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.
应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.
续写部分分为两段，每段开头语已为你写好；
4.
续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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【2021年】
1.（2021·全国高考新高考Ⅰ卷）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A
MOTHER’S
DAY
SURPRISE
The
twins
were
filled
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with
excitement
as
they
thought
of
the
surprise
they
were
planning
for
Mother’s
Day.
How
pleased
and
proud
Mother
would
be
when
they
brought
her
breakfast
in
bed.
They
planned
to
make
French
toast
and
chicken
porridge.
They
had
watched
their
mother
in
the
kitchen.
There
was
nothing
to
it.
Jenna
and
Jeff
knew
exactly
what
to
do.21cnjy.com
The
big
day
came
a
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last.
The
alarm
rang
at
6
a.m.
The
pair
went
down
the
stairs
quietly
to
the
kitchen.
They
decided
to
boil
the
porridge
first.
They
put
some
rice
into
a
pot
of
water
and
left
it
to
boil
while
they
made
the
French
toast.
Jeff
broke
two
eggs
into
a
plate
and
added
in
some
milk.
Jenna
found
the
bread
and
put
two
slices
into
the
egg
mixture.
Next,
Jeff
turned
on
the
second
stove
burner
to
heat
up
the
frying
pan.
Everything
was
going
smoothly
until
Jeff
started
frying
the
bread.
The
pan
was
too
hot
and
the
bread
turned
black
within
seconds.
Jenna
threw
the
burnt
piece
into
the
sink
and
put
in
the
other
slice
of
bread.
This
time,
she
turned
down
the
fire
so
it
cooked
nicely.
Then
Jeff
noticed
st
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shooting
out
of
the
pot
and
the
lid
starting
to
shake.
The
next
minute,
the
porridge
boiled
over
and
put
out
the
fire.
Jenna
panicked.
Thankfully,
Jeff
stayed
calm
and
turned
off
the
gas
quickly.
But
the
stove
was
a
mess
now.
Jenna
told
Jeff
to
clean
it
up
so
they
could
continue
to
cook
the
rest
of
the
porridge.
But
Jeff’s
hand
touched
the
hot
burner
and
he
gave
a
cry
of
pain.
Jenna
made
him
put
his
hand
in
cold
water.
Then
she
caught
the
smell
of
burning.
Oh
dear!
The
piece
of
bread
in
the
pan
had
turned
black
as
well.
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右。
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
As
the
twins
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looked
around
them
in
disappointment,
their
father
appeared.
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The
twins
carried
the
breakfast
upstairs
and
woke
their
mother
up.
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【答案】As
the
twi
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looked
around
them
in
disappointment,
their
father
appeared.
Father’s
appearing
was
like
a
savior
to
the
two
children.
Under
the
guidance
of
their
father,
they
took
positive
actions
and
started
all
over
again.
They
made
the
bread
and
then
went
on
cooking
porridge.
Father
helped
them
adjust
the
fire,
which
was
the
key
to
success.
It
was
all
right
this
time.
Delicious
breakfast
was
ready.
How
happy
they
were!
The
twins
ca
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)rried
the
breakfast
upstairs
and
woke
their
mother
up.
When
their
mother
saw
the
delicious
and
perfect
breakfast
in
front
of
her,
she
was
very
surprised.
It
was
not
only
the
gift,
but
the
love
of
the
children
for
her
that
moved
her
very
much.
The
two
children
could
finish
cooking
a
breakfast,
which
she
didn’t
expect.
The
children
said
loudly,
“Happy
Mother’s
Day!”
Mother
hugged
them
tightly
and
kissed
them
again
and
again.
【分析】本文以母亲节为线索展开，讲述
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)了双胞胎Jenna和Jeff为了献给母亲一份美味的早餐，自己动手，做起饭餐来，但是不幸的是，他们连连失败，后来在父亲的帮助下，获得成功，他们把早餐献给亲爱的母亲，妈妈非常感动的故事。www-2-1-cnjy-com
【解析】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“当双胞
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)胎失望地环顾四周时，他们的父亲出现了。”可知，第一段可描写他们的父亲指导帮助他们准备早餐。
②由第二段首句内容“这对双胞胎把早餐端到楼上，叫醒了他们的母亲。”可知，第二段可描写母亲收到孩子们的礼物早餐，非常感动。
2.续写线索：帮助——指导——积极——献礼——感动
3.词汇激活
行为类
①帮助：help/assist
②.指导：guide/conduct
③.献礼：present
a
gift/give
a
gift
情绪类
①.积极：posit
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)ive/positively/take
positive
actions
②.感动：moved/touched
【点睛】
[高分句型1].
Father
helped
them
adjust
the
fire,
which
was
the
key
to
success.
(which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2].
It
was
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)
not
only
the
breakfast,
but
the
love
of
the
children
for
her
that
moved
her
very
much.
(使用not
only…but
(also)句型及强调句型)
2.（2021·浙江6月卷）
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事，
My
dad,
George,
only
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)had
an
eighth
grade
education.
A
quiet
man,
he
didn't
understand
my
world
of
school
activities.
From
age
14,
he
worked.
And
his
dad,
Albert,
took
the
money
my
dad
earned
and
used
it
to
pay
family
expenses.
【来源：21cnj
y.co
m】
I
didn't
really
unders
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)tand
his
world
either:
He
was
a
livestock
trucker,
and
I
thought
that
I
would
surpass
(超过)
anything
he
had
accomplished
by
the
time
I
walked
across
the
stage
at
high
school
graduation.
Summers
in
the
mi
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)d-70s
were
spent
at
home
shooting
baskets,
hitting
a
baseball,
or
throwing
a
football,
preparing
for
my
future
as
a
quarterback
on
a
football
team.
In
poor
weather,
I
read
about
sports
or
practiced
my
trombone
(长号).
The
summer
befor
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)e
my
eighth
grade
I
was
one
of
a
group
of
boys
that
a
neighboring
farmer
hired
to
work
in
his
field.
He
explained
our
basic
task,
the
tractor
fired
up
and
we
were
off,
riding
down
the
field
looking
for
weeds
to
spray
with
chemicals.
After
a
short
way,
the
farmer
stopped
and
pointed
at
a
weed
which
we
missed.
Then
we
began
again.
This
happened
over
and
over,
but
we
soon
learned
to
identify
different
grasses
like
cockleburs,
lamb's-quarters,
foxtails,
and
the
king
of
weeds,
the
pretty
purple
thistle.
It
was
tiring
work,
but
I
looked
forward
to
the
pay,
even
though
I
wasn't
sure
how
much
it
would
amount
to.
At
home,
my
d
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)ad
said,
"A
job's
a
big
step
to
growing
up.
I'm
glad
you
will
be
contributing
to
the
household."
My
dad's
words
made
me
realize
that
my
earnings
might
not
be
mine
to
do
with
as
I
wished.
My
labors
lasted
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)
about
two
weeks,
and
the
farmer
said
there
might
be
more
work,
but
I
wasn't
interested.
I
decided
it
was
not
fair
that
I
had
to
contribute
my
money.
注意：
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph
1：The
pay
arrived
at
last.
Paragraph
2：I
unders
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)tood
immediately
what
my
parents
were
worried
about.
【答案】The
pay
a
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)rrived
at
last.
Although
the
job
was
very?tiring,
I
was
very
happy
in
my
heart
for
I
got
something
from
my
work.
The
toil
of
labor
was
forgotten
for
the
time
being.
I
thought
I
should
have
my
own
money
and
planned
how
to
spend
it.
“How
much
money
have
you
earned?”
Dad
asked.
I
was
surprised,
reluctant
to
say
my
income.
The
next
morning,
my
dad’s
livestock
truck
started
running.
I
saw
my
father’s
hard-working
figure
and
thought
of
his
words
“A
job’s
a
big
step
to
growing
up”.21
cnjy
com
I
understood
immediate
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)ly
what
my
parents
were?worried
about.
They
were
worried
that
I
was
too
selfish
to
give.
I
realized
that
my
labor
was
very
hard,
but
my
growth
and
our
whole
family
had
been
depending
on
the
hard
work
of
my
parents!
Dad
never
complained
about
unfairness!
He
even
seemed
to
think
that
was
fair.
I
thought,
“I’ve
only
worked
for
two
weeks,
but
how
many
years
my
father
has
worked!”
In
the
evening,
Dad
came
back.
I
proudly
took
out
my
own
money
and
handed
it
to
Dad.
【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)者高中毕业后，参加农场工作，辛辛苦苦挣到的钱，不情愿贡献给家庭，后来在看到父亲的辛劳之后，理解了父母担心的是自己太过自私而不知奉献，终于想通，并自豪地将自己劳动所得交给父亲的故事。
【解析】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“工资终于到了。”可
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)知，第一段可描写作者的工资到手后，高兴地计划自己用这笔钱，不愿意交给父亲，然后看到父亲的辛劳。
②由第二段首句内容“我立刻明白了父母的担心。”可知，第二段可描写作者明白了父母担心自己不懂得奉献，想通了，然后自豪地把钱交给了父亲。
2.
续写线索：高兴——计划——不情愿——发现——奉献——自豪
3.词汇激活
行为类
①计划：programme/plan
②.奉献：give/devote
③发现：see/find
情绪类
①.不情愿的：unwilling/reluctant
②.自豪地：proudly/with
pride
【点睛】
[高分句型1].
I
thought
I
s
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)hould
have
my
own
money
and
planned
how
to
spend
it.
(运用了疑问词加动词不定式作宾语)
[高分句型2].
I?realized?that
my
labor
was
very
hard,
but
my
growth
and
our
whole?family?had
(that引导的宾语从句以及过去完成进行时)
3.（2021·浙江1月卷）
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Pumpkin
(南瓜)
carv
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)ing
at
Halloween
is
a
family
tradition.
We
visit
a
local
farm
every
October.
In
the
pumpkin
field,
I
compete
with
my
three
brothers
and
sister
to
seek
out
the
biggest
pumpkin.
My
dad
has
a
rule
that
we
have
to
carry
our
pumpkins
back
home,
and
as
the
eldest
child
I
have
an
advantage-I
carried
an
85-pounder
back
last
year.
This
year,
it
was
har
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)d
to
tell
whether
my
prize
or
the
one
chosen
by
my
14-year-old
brother,
Jason,
was
the
winner.
Unfortunately
we
forgot
to
weigh
them
before
taking
out
their
insides,
but
I
was
determined
to
prove
my
point.
All
of
us
were
hard
at
work
at
the
kitchen
table,
with
my
mom
filming
the
annual
event.
I’m
unsure
now
why
I
thought
forcing
my
head
inside
the
pumpkin
would
settle
the
matter,
but
it
seemed
to
make
perfect
sense
at
the
time.
With
the
pump
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)kin
resting
on
the
table,
hole
uppermost,
I
bent
over
and
pressed
my
head
against
the
opening.
At
first
I
got
jammed
just
above
my
eyes
and
then,
as
I
went
on
with
my
task,
unwilling
to
quit,
my
nose
briefly
prevented
entry.
Finally
I
managed
to
put
my
whole
head
into
it,
like
a
cork
(软木塞)
forced
into
a
bottle.
I
was
able
to
straighten
up
with
the
huge
pumpkin
resting
on
my
shoulders.
My
excitemen
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)t
was
short-lived.
The
pumpkin
was
heavy.
“I’m
going
to
set
it
down,
now,”
I
said,and
with
Jason
helping
to
support
its
weight，I
bent
back
over
the
table
to
give
it
somewhere
to
rest.
It
was
only
when
I
tried
to
remove
my
head
that
I
realized
getting
out
was
going
to
be
less
straightforward
than
getting
in.
When
I
pulled
hard,
my
nose
got
in
the
way.
I
got
into
a
panic
as
I
pressed
firmly
against
the
table
and
moved
my
head
around
trying
to
find
the
right
angle,
but
it
was
no
use.
“I
can’t
get
it
out!”
I
shouted,
my
voice
sounding
unnaturally
loud
in
the
enclosed
space.
注意：
1.
所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.
至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.
续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4.
续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph
1
It
was
five
or
six
minutes
though
it
felt
much
longer.
Paragraph
2
The
video
was
posted
the
Monday
before
Halloween.
【答案】Paragraph
1
It
was
five
or
six
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)
minutes
though
it
felt
much
longer.
Dad
was
summoned
–
less,
it
seemed,
in
expectation
of
practical
help
than
to
make
sure
he
didn’t
miss
out
on
the
spectacle.
I
heard
him
propose
calling
the
fire
department.
“Stay
tuned,”
said
Mom;
she’d
mentioned
she
was
going
to
upload
the
video
to
Facebook,
but
it
was
only
then
I
realized
she’d
been
filming
the
whole
time.
The
video
cuts
before
my
rescue
—Dad
got
me
to
push
my
head
farther
into
the
pumpkin
so
Mom
could
reach
in
and
undo
the
rubber
band
round
my
ponytail.
I
emerged
with
squash-conditioned
hair,
a
sore
chin
and
my
nose
plugged
with
pulp.21世纪教育网版权所有
Paragraph
2
The
video
was
poste
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)d
the
Monday
before
Halloween.
By
the
end
of
that
day,
it
had
over
1,000
views.
People
asked
Mom
to
put
it
on
YouTube,
and
by
Wednesday
morning
we
were
getting
5:00
am
calls
from
TV
breakfast
shows
and
then
the
international
media
–
the
video
started
racking
up
hundreds
of
thousands
of
views.
When
I
went
on
a
youth
camp,
I
was
recognized
by
children
I’d
never
met.
The
pumpkin
also
became
a
minor
celebrity.
Passersby
and
trick-or-treaters
would
knock
and
ask,
“Which
is
Rachel’s
pumpkin?”
before
taking
selfies
with
it.
【分析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)家有在万圣节雕刻南瓜的传统，今年也不例外，家里所有人都在厨房的餐桌上辛勤地工作着，而作者的妈妈则在拍摄一年一度的活动。结果作者将头伸进了南瓜里，被卡住了，无论如何也无法挣脱出来，妈妈却趁机拍下了这一幕，后来作者得救，视频也被上传到网上走红，这段视频开始获得数十万的点击量。
【解析】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“虽然时间只过去了五、六分钟，但还是感觉要长得多。”可知，第一段可描写作者是如何在爸爸的帮助下得救的。
②由第二段首句内容“这段视
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)频是在万圣节前的周一发布的。”可知，第二段可描写作者头被卡在南瓜里这段视频在网上的走红情况，以及视频走红对作者家和作者的影响。
2.续写线索：爸爸被喊来帮忙——妈妈拍下了全过程——作者得救——视频被上传——视频走红——视频对作者家和作者的影响
3.词汇激活
行为类
确保：make
sure
/
guarantee
打算做某事：be
going
to
do
sth./
intend
to
do
sth.
出来：emerge
/
come
out
情绪类
实际：practical
/
useful
出名：become
a
minor
celebrity
/
be
famous
【点睛】
[高分句型1]
When
I
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)went
on
a
youth
camp,
I
was
recognized
by
children
I’d
never
met.
(运用了when引导时间状语从句)
21·cn·jy·com
[高分句型2]Passersby
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)
and
trick-or-treaters
would
knock
and
ask,
“Which
is
Rachel’s
pumpkin?”
before
taking
selfies
with
it.
(运用了动名词作宾语)
【2020年】
1.（2020年7月，浙江高考）
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
One
fall，my
wife
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)Elli
and
I
had
a
single
goal:to
photograph
polar
bears.
We
were
staying
at
a
research
camp
outside
“the
polar
bear
capital
of
the
world”-the
town
of
Churchill
in
Manitoba，Canada.
Taking
picture
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)s
of
polar
bears
is
amazing
but
also
dangerous.
Polar
bears-like
all
wild
animals-should
be
photographed
from
a
safe
distance.
When
I'm
face
to
face
with
a
polar
bear，I
like
it
to
be
through
a
camera
with
a
telephoto
lens.
But
sometimes，that
is
easier
said
than
done.
This
was
one
of
those
times.
As
Elli
and
I
cooked
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)
dinner，a
young
male
polar
bear
who
was
playing
in
a
nearby
lake
sniffed，and
smelled
our
garlic
bread.
The
hungry
bear
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)followed
his
nose
to
our
camp，which
was
surrounded
by
a
high
wire
fence.
He
pulled
and
bit
the
wire.
He
stood
on
his
back
legs
and
pushed
at
the
wooden
fence
posts.
Terrified，Elli
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)and
I
tried
all
the
bear
defense
actions
we
knew.
We
yelled
at
the
bear，hit
pots
hard，and
fired
blank
shotgun
shells
into
the
air.
Sometimes
loud
noises
like
these
will
scare
bears
off.
Not
this
polar
bear
though-he
just
kept
trying
to
tear
down
the
fence
with
his
massive
paws(爪子).
I
radioed
the
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)
camp
manager
for
help.
He
told
me
a
helicopter
was
on
its
way，but
it
would
be
30
minutes
before
it
arrived.
Making
the
best
of
this
close
encounter(相遇)，I
took
some
pictures
of
the
bear.
Elli
and
I
feared
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)the
fence
wouldn't
last
through
30
more
minutes
of
the
bear's
punishment.
The
camp
manager
suggested
I
use
pepper
spray.
The
spray
burns
the
bears'
eyes，but
doesn't
hurt
them.
So
I
approached
our
uninvited
guest
slowly
and，through
the
fence，sprayed
him
in
the
face.
With
an
angry
roar(吼叫)，the
bear
ran
to
the
lake
to
wash
his
eyes.
注意:1.
所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.
至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.
续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4.
续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph1:
A
few
minutes
later,
the
bear
headed
back
to
our
camp.21教育名师原创作品
_____________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph2:
At
that
very
moment,
the
helicopter
arrived.
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cnjy
com
【解析】
本文主要讲述了人与熊对抗，之后成功脱险的故事。主人公的感情线变化为：兴奋渴望→惊恐→放松。剧情线以主人公如何与北极熊周旋并成功摆脱它展开。
由第一段的段首提示句可知：几分
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)钟后，熊又回到营地。接下来可通过场景渲染，描写当时令人颤栗惊恐的画面，例如“Roars
and
screams
pierced
the
silence
with
needle-like
shrillness.”这不仅合理地描写了熊的反应，也描绘出让人战栗的场景。
由第二段的段首提示句可知：此时，直升机
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)到了。如果想要进行续写两段的合理衔接，第一段的结尾可描写成“After
thoroughly
scrutinizing
the
area,
the
bear
trotted
forward
a
few
steps.”这样可以营造出危急的场景。“我们”看到直升机的到来，感到绝处逢生的喜悦，可以以人物心理描写作为第二段的开头，重点描写喜极而泣的状态，例如“My
heart
leaped
with
joy
as
I
knew
we
were
likely
to
be
saved.”
最后，结尾部分需要迅速收束，并说明成功逃脱的结局。
关于画线词：Elli作为女主
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)人公，是续写内容中应该出现的画线词，noises,
pictures,
fence,
spray与熊有关，也在两段续写内容中出现。最终，两人回归安全状态，因此画线词safe也可自然而然地出现在续写内容中。由此划分画线词，可迅速锁定需使用的画线词范围，辅助构思。
【范文】
A
few
minutes
later,
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)the
bear
headed
back
to
our
camp.
Roars
and
screams
pierced
the
silence
with
needle-like
shrillness.
The
noises
turned
Elli
and
I
pale
with
horror.
I
feared
that
the
giant
would
destroy
our
whole
fence.
He
roared
repeatedly,
shattering
what
was
left
of
the
silence.
Elli
seized
this
opportunity
to
take
some
pictures
of
the
bear.
The
animal’s
noises
echoed
all
around
us.
We
betrayed
our
feelings
by
huddling
together,
shivering
with
fear.
After
thoroughly
scrutinizing
the
area,
he
trotted
forward
a
few
steps.
At
that
very
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)moment,
the
helicopter
arrived.
My
heart
leaped
with
joy
as
I
knew
we
were
likely
to
be
saved.
Elli
used
pepper
spray
again
to
buy
us
enough
time.
But
this
time
the
bear
became
more
alert.
He
regarded
us
with
the
merciless
necessity
of
hunger,
so
we
throw
all
the
food
we
have.
He
then
turned
away
and
started
devouring.
As
we
were
climbing
the
rope
ladder,
Elli
prayed
like
thousand
times
to
show
thankfulness
of
being
safe
and
sound.
2.（2020年1月，浙江高考）
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
“I'm
going
to
miss
you
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)
so
much,
Poppy,
"said
the
tall,
thin
teenager.
He
bent
down
to
hug
his
old
friend
goodbye.
He
stood
up,
hugged
his
parents,
and
smiled,
trying
not
to
let
his
emotions(情绪)get
the
better
of
him.
His
parents
w
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)ere
not
quite
able
to
keep
theirs
under
control.
They
had
driven
their
son
several
hours
out
of
town
to
the
university
where
he
would
soon
be
living
and
studying.
It
was
time
to
say
goodbye
for
now
at
least.
The
family
hugged
and
smiled
through
misty
eyes
and
then
laughed.【出处：21教育名师】
The
boy
lifte
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)d
the
last
bag
onto
his
shoulder,
and
flashed
a
bright
smile.”
I
guess
this
is
it,
“he
said.”
I'll
see
you
back
home
in
a
month,
okay？"His
parents
nodded,
and
they
watched
as
he
walked
out
of
sight
into
the
crowds
of
hundreds
of
students
and
parents.
The
boy's
mother
turned
to
the
dog,
“Okay,
Poppy,
time
to
go
back
home.”
The
house
see
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)med
quiet
as
a
tomb
without
the
boy
living
there.
All
that
week,
Poppy
didn't
seem
interested
in
her
dinner,
her
favorite
toy,
or
even
in
her
daily
walk.
Her
owners
were
sad
too,
but
they
knew
their
son
would
be
back
to
visit.
Poppy
didn't.
They
offered
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)the
dog
some
of
her
favorite
peanut
butter
treats.
They
even
let
her
sit
on
the
sofa,
but
the
old
girl
just
wasn't
her
usual
cheerful
self.
Her
owners
started
to
get
worried.
"What
should
we
do
to
cheer
Poppy
up？"asked
Dad.
“We've
tried
everything.”
“I
have
an
i
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)dea,
but
it
might
be
a
little
crazy,
“smiled
Mom.”
Without
anybody
left
in
the
house
but
us,
this
place
could
use
a
bit
of
fun.
Let's
get
a
little
dog
for
Poppy."www.21-cn-jy.com
It
didn't
take
long
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)before
they
walked
through
the
front
door
carrying
a
big
box.
Poppy
welcomed
them
home
as
usual,
but
when
she
saw
the
box,
she
stopped.
She
put
her
nose
on
it.
Her
tail
began
wagging(摆动)ever
so
slowly,
then
faster
as
she
caught
the
smell.【来源：21·世纪·教育·网】
注意:
1.
所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.
至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.
续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4.
续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Para
1.
Dad
opened
the
box
and
a
sweet
little
dog
appeared.2-1-c-n-j-y
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Para
2.
A
few
weeks
later,
the
boy
arrived
home
from
university.
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【答案】
Para
1.
Dad
put
the
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)box
on
the
ground
and
opened
the
top.
A
shiny
little
wet
nose
popped
up.
Then
two
fluffy
paws.
Next
the
box
tipped
over
sideways,
and
out
tumbled
a
mass
of
wiggly
golden
silliness.?Poppy
was
amazed.
She
wagged
furiously.
She
barked
with
joy.
She
smiled,
her
tongue
lolling
out
as
she
investigated
the
surprise.
The
little
pup
was
not
shy
and
immediately
starting
yipping
and
jumping
around
the
older
dog.?“That
didn’t
take
long,”
remarked
Mom,
as
both
dogs
went
roaring
around
the
house
in
an
impromptu
game
of
chase.
Dad
laughed.?
Para
2.
A
fe
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)w
weeks
later,
the
boy
arrived
home
from
university.
He
had
missed
Poppy
and
was
looking
forward
to
seeing
her.
When
he
bent
down
to
give
her
a
big
hug,
he
fell
over
in
surprise
as
a
small
golden
cloud
came
racing
up
to
lick
his
face
too.?“Oh
my
gosh,
who
is
this?”
he
exclaimed.
His
parents
laughed
at
the
look
of
shock
on
his
face.?“That’s
Pee-wee,”
said
Dad.?“I
can’t
believe
you
got
yourselves
a
puppy!”?“We
didn’t,”
replied
Mom.
“This
puppy
is
for
Poppy!”
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇读后续写作文。
【详解】
通过阅读所给文章可知，文
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)章讲述了男孩要去上大学，和自己的狗Poppy道别。而没有了男孩在家里，Poppy也非常想念男孩，于是男孩父母决定给Poppy买一条小狗作伴。
续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：爸爸打开盒子
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)，一条可爱的小狗出现了。所以后文应该是描写买来的小狗的样子以及这两只狗的相处情况；第二段开头是：几个星期后，男孩从大学回到家里。本段应该写男孩回到家以后看到两条狗的反应，以及父母告诉男孩这条狗是买给Poppy的。
续写时要求使用5个以上短
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)文中标有下划线的关键词语增加了写作难度，我们要熟悉所给划线词语，恰当的时候加以运用。最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右；续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。按要求完成写作任务。
【点睛】
本文描写详略得当，使用了
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)高级词汇和高级句子。如：a
mass
of，with
joy，look
forward
to等高级词汇；非谓语动词的运用The
little
pup
was
not
shy
and
immediately
starting
yipping
and
jumping
around
the
older
dog.；时间状语从句When
he
bent
down
to
give
her
a
big
hug,
he
fell
over
in
surprise
as
a
small
golden
cloud
came
racing
up
to
lick
his
face
too.等高级句式。
【2019年】
1.（2019年6月，浙江高考）
阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Parents
everyw
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)here
praise
their
kids.
Jenn
Berman,
author
of
The
A
to
Z
Guide
to
Raising
Happy
and
Confident
Kids,
says,
“We’ve
gone
to
the
opposite
extreme
of
a
few
decades
ago
when
parents
tended
to
be
more
strict.”
By
giving
kids
a
lot
of
praise,
parents
think
they’re
building
their
children’s
confidence,
when,
in
fact,
it
may
be
just
the
opposite.
Too
much
praise
can
backfire
and,
when
given
in
a
way
that’s
insincere,
make
kids
afraid
to
try
new
things
or
take
a
risk
for
fear
of
not
being
able
to
stay
on
top
where
their
parents’
praise
has
put
them.
Still,
don’t
go
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)
too
far
in
the
other
direction.
Not
giving
enough
praise
can
be
just
as
damaging
as
giving
too
much.
Kids
will
feel
like
they’re
not
good
enough
or
that
you
don’t
care
and,
as
a
result,
may
see
no
point
in
trying
hard
for
their
accomplishments.
So
what
is
the
ri
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)ght
amount
of
praise?
Experts
say
that
the
quality
of
praise
is
more
important
than
the
quantity.
If
praise
is
sincere
and
focused
on
the
effort
not
the
outcome,
you
can
give
it
as
often
as
your
child
does
something
that
deserves
a
verbal
reward.
“We
should
especially
recognize
our
children’s
efforts
to
push
themselves
and
work
hard
to
achieve
a
goal,”
says
Donahue,
author
of
Parenting
Without
Fear:
Letting
Go
of
Worry
and
Focusing
on
What
Really
Matters.
“One
thing
to
remember
is
that
it’s
the
process
not
the
end
product
that
matters.”
Your
son
may
not
b
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)e
the
best
basketball
player
on
his
team.
But
if
he’s
out
there
every
day
and
playing
hard,
you
should
praise
his
effort
regardless
of
whether
his
team
wins
or
loses.
Praising
the
effort
and
not
the
outcome
can
also
mean
recognizing
your
child
when
she
has
worked
hard
to
clean
the
yard,
cook
dinner,
or
finish
a
book
report.
But
whatever
it
is,
praise
should
be
given
on
a
case-by-case
basis
and
be
proportionate(相称的)
to
the
amount
of
effort
your
child
has
put
into
it.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Parents
tend
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)
to
go
to
extremes
when
it
comes
to
praising
their
kids.
(要点一)
Yet,
both
too
much
and
too
little
praise
can
be
equally
damaging.
(要点二)
When
giving
praise,
parents
should
be
sincere
and
concentrate
on
the
process
instead
of
the
result.
(要点三)
Similarly,
they
ought
to
give
praise
for
how
much
effort
their
kids
have
invested
in
the
work
they’re
involved
in.
(要点四)
【解析】本次浙江高考书面
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)表达采用了概要写作题型。概要写作是阅读理解和书面表达的沟通桥梁，考查的是学生在实现自由的思维表达之前，对他人的信息在理解的基础上进行概括表达的能力。选材上，提供一篇350词以内的短文，题材不限，要求考生写出一篇60词左右的内容概要。
【详解】
完成一篇概要写作，需要经过三个步骤，
1.
读懂原文，抓住段落主题句。在阅读
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)过程中，需要准确把握文章的段落大意，学会剔除非重要信息，弄清楚不同体裁的文章的内部逻辑关系以及文章的篇章结构。
2.
组织语言，转换表达。在找到主
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)题句明确全文中心的基础上，组织好语言，注重语言表达的独立性和准确性以及高级性，不全盘照抄原文句子，尽量用自己的语言转换表达，同时要注意篇幅的比例安排，用较多的文字去表达重要的内容。
3.
通读全文，逻辑连贯。要牢记各段落要点之间的逻辑关系和自然衔接，用恰当的关联词去连贯全文。
【2018年】
1.（2018年11月，浙江高考）
阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
It’s
a
really
good
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)idea
to
visit
colleges
before
you
apply
because
their
websites
can
all
start
to
look
and
sound
the
same.
Nothing
will
give
you
the
sense
of
what
it
will
actually
be
like
to
live
on
a
college
campus(校园)
like
visiting
and
seeing
for
yourself
the
dorms,
classrooms
and
athletic
equipment
and,
of
course,
the
students.
It
seems
a
little
crazy
once
senior
year
hits
to
find
the
time
to
visit
college
campuses,
and
it
can
also
be
pricey
if
the
schools
you
are
applying
to
happen
to
be
more
than
a
car
ride
away.
But
keep
in
mind
that
you
are
making
a
decision
about
the
next
four
years
of
your
life,
and
do
all
the
research
you
can
to
make
sure
you
are
making
the
right
one.
There’s
no
excus
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)e
not
to
visit
the
schools
in
your
local
area.
In
fact,
a
lot
of
college
applications
even
ask
if
you
have
visited
campus,
and
obviously,
if
you
live
across
the
country
that
won’t
be
as
much
of
a
possibility,
but
if
you
live
nearby,
go
check
it
out!
If
campus
visits
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)
aren’t
going
to
happen
before
you
apply,
at
the
very
least
you
should
find
some
time
between
applying
and
getting
your
acceptance
letters
to
visit
the
schools
you’d
like
to
attend.
It
can
save
you
a
lot
of
heartache
if
you
rule
out
now
the
things
that
you
don’t
like
about
certain
campuses,
things
that
you
wouldn’t
know
unless
you
actually
visit.
Now,
if
time
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and
money
are
making
it
impossible,
then
check
out
the
online
college
fairs
at
CollegeWeekLive.
It’s
a
chance
to
chat
online
with
admissions
officers,
students,
and
college
counselors
(顾问),
and
it
won’t
cost
you
a
penny!
You
can
register
for
its
online
college
fair
at
.
While
visiting
an
online
college
fair
can’t
take
the
place
of
an
actual
campus
visit,
it
can
be
a
very
useful
tool
that
along
with
all
your
other
research
will
help
you
make
an
informed
decision
about
which
colleges
or
universities
you’d
like
to
attend.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2·1·c·n·j·y
【答案】
It’s
really
worthw
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)hile
to
pay
a
visit
to
their
desired
colleges
personally
before
applying.
Undoubtedly,
students
should
visit
their
local
colleges,
which
may
be
included
in
applications.
At
least,
they
should
visit
the
school
and
figure
out
its
real
conditions
in
advance.
For
students
who
are
short
of
money
and
time,
registering
for
the
online
college
fair
is
a
good
alternative
to
help
them
better
understand
schools.
【解析】本文要求阅读短文，根据其
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要，即用尽可能少的词汇集中展现原材料的主要思想和观点。这主要是考查学生把握文章主旨大意和段落大意的能力以及总结概括能力，熟练掌握从句、非谓语动词等语法知识和遣词造句的能力。【版权所有：21教育】
【详解】
1.
要先读懂、读透原作。这是准确再现原文、写好概要的前提。动笔前多读两遍原文，直至弄懂读透。
2.
抓住文中的关键句，确定写作主题。
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)开头It's
a
really
good
idea
to
visit
colleges
before
you
apply点明了本文主题；But
keep
in
mind
that
you
are
making
a
decision
about
the
next
four
years
of
your
life,
and
do
all
the
research
you
can
to
make
sure
you
are
making
the
right
one.
There’s
no
excuse
not
to
visit
the
schools
in
your
local
area.说明了去大学看看的必要性和可行性；If
campus
visits
aren’t
going
to
happen
before
you
apply,
at
the
very
least
you
should
find
some
time
between
applying
and
getting
your
acceptance
letters
to
visit
the
schools
you’d
like
to
attend.在时间上提供了更多选择；if
time
and
money
are
making
it
impossible,
then
check
out
the
online
college
fairs
at
CollegeWeekLive.为不能亲自去大学看的学生提供了另外一种方法。
3.拟好提纲。有了提纲，写概要时就会有章法，也不会遗漏原作中的要点。
4.快速成文，反复推敲。按照文章要求和拟好的提纲一气呵成，写完初稿。
5.对照修改润色，再读原文，查看是否漏掉了重要信息或主要内容。用词是否恰当，可有可无的删掉。注意词类、时态、语态的适当调整。
【点睛】
范文观点明确，重点突出，
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)语言简练，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如定语从句which
may
be
included
in
applications.和who
are
short
of
money
and
time.动名词registering
online作主语，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。
2.（2018年6月，浙江高考）
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
It
was
summer,
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)and
my
dad
wanted
to
treat
me
to
a
vacation
like
never
before.
He
decided
to
take
me
on
a
trip
to
the
Wild
West.
We
took
a
plane
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to
Albuquerque,
a
big
city
in
the
state
of
New
Mexico.
We
reached
Albuquerque
in
the
late
afternoon.
Uncle
Paul,
my
dad’s
friend,
picked
us
up
from
the
airport
and
drove
us
up
to
his
farm
in
Pecos.
His
wife
Tina
cooke
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)d
us
a
delicious
dinner
and
we
got
to
know
his
sons
Ryan
and
Kyle.
My
dad
and
I
spent
the
night
in
the
guestroom
of
the
farm
house
listening
to
the
frogs
and
water
rolling
down
the
river
nearby.
Very
early
in
the
morning,
Uncle
Paul
woke
us
up
to
have
breakfast.
"The
day
starts
at
dawn
on
my
farm,"
he
said.
After
breakfast,
I
went
to
help
Aunt
Tina
feed
the
chickens,
while
my
dad
went
with
Uncle
Paul
to
take
the
sheep
out
to
graze(吃草).
I
was
impressed
to
see
my
dad
and
Uncle
Paul
riding
horses.
They
looked
really
cool.
In
the
afternoon,
I
a
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)sked
Uncle
Paul
if
I
could
take
a
horse
ride,
and
he
said
yes,
as
long
as
my
dad
went
with
me.
I
wasn’t
going
to
take
a
horse
ride
by
myself
anyway.
So,
my
dad
and
I
put
on
our
new
cowboy
hats,
got
on
our
horses,
and
headed
slowly
towards
the
mountains.
"Don’t
be
late
for
supper,"
Uncle
Paul
cried,
"and
keep
to
the
track
so
that
you
don’t
get
lost!"
"OK!
"
my
dad
cried
back.
After
a
while
Uncle
Paul
and
his
farm
house
were
out
of
sight.
It
was
so
peaceful
and
quiet
and
the
colors
of
the
brown
rocks,
the
deep
green
pine
trees,
and
the
late
afternoon
sun
mixed
to
create
a
magic
scene.
It
looked
like
a
beautiful
woven(编织的)
blanket
spread
out
upon
the
ground
just
for
us.
Suddenly
a
little
rabbit
jumped
out
in
front
of
my
horse.
注意：
（1）所续写短文的词数应为l50左右；
（2）至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语：
（3）续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
（4）续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph
1:
Suddenly
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)a
little
rabbit
jumped
out
in
front
of
my
horse.
____________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph
2:
We
had
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)no
idea
where
we
were
and
it
was
getting
dark.
_____________21·世纪
教育网
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Suddenly
a
little
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)rabbit
jumped
out
in
front
of
my
horse.
My
horse
turned
to
the
left
to
avoid
the
little
rabbit
as
I
held
on
tightly
and
tried
not
to
fall.
Then
my
dad
turned
around
and
shouted,
“Hold
on!”
All
of
a
sudden
the
horse
began
to
run.
My
dad
tried
to
keep
up
behind
us.
For
a
few
minutes
my
horse
slowed
down
to
a
trot
and
then
stopped
beside
a
river.
I
looked
around
and
realized
that
we
were
way
off
the
track.
We
had
no
id
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)ea
where
we
were
and
it
got
dark.
Luckily
the
stars
came
out
and
gave
us
a
little
light
when
we
were
looking
for
the
way
to
the
farm
house.
After
what
must
have
been
several
hours,
we
suddenly
heard
the
sound
of
sheep
in
the
distance.
My
dad
and
I
both
rode
our
horses
towards
the
sound
of
the
sheep.
As
we
got
closer
we
saw
Uncle
Paul
with
a
flashlight
waving
us
over.
What
a
night!
【解析】
读后续写要求考生首先要读懂已有信息，不
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)仅能读懂字面含义，还要理清文章的脉络。续篇这篇短文时，考生要搞清楚故事的发展进程、前因后果、地理位置、人物思想情感的变化等。在此基础上，考生要顺着文章的思路，根据线索，发挥想象，对其后的情节进行合理预测，并用语言表达出来。
通过阅读所给文章可知，父亲带儿子去西部荒野的一个朋友家体验农场生活，见父亲和叔叔骑马，儿子也很想骑，于是亲身上马体验。
根据第一段所给首句Sudd
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)enly
a
little
rabbit
jumped
out
in
front
of
my
horse.这一句是故事发展的转折点，可从rabbit出现后带来的反应扩展开，可以写马的反应，也可以写人的反应，但要注意与第二段首句相呼应。
第二段首句是We
had
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)no
idea
where
we
were
and
it
was
getting
dark.这一句呼应前文Uncle
Paul的叮嘱——不要误吃晚饭，可从如何寻路返回农场去写。
续写时注意要使用5个以上
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)短文中标有下划线的关键词语，我们要熟悉所给划线词语，恰当的时候加以运用。最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右；续写完成后要用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
【2017年】
1.（2017年11月，浙江高考）
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
A
Vacation
with
My
Mother
I
had
an
interesti
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)ng
childhood.
It
was
filled
with
surprises
and
amusements,
all
because
of
my
mother---loving,
sweet,
yet
absent-minded
and
forgetful.
One
strange
family
trip
we
took
when
I
was
eleven
tells
a
lot
about
her.
My
two
sets
of
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)
grandparents
lived
in
Colorado
and
North
Dakota,
and
my
parents
decided
to
spend
a
few
weeks
driving
to
those
states
and
seeing
all
the
sights
along
the
way.
As
the
first
day
of
our
trip
approached,
David,
my
eight-year-old
brother,
and
I
unwillingly
said
good-bye
to
all
of
our
friends.
Who
knew
if
we’d
ever
see
them
again?
Finally,
the
moment
of
our
departure
arrived,
and
we
loaded
suitcases,
books,
games,
camping
equipment,
and
a
tent
into
the
car
and
bravely
drove
off.
We
bravely
drove
off
again
two
hours
later
after
we’d
returned
home
to
get
the
purse
and
traveler’s
checks
Mom
had
forgotten.
David
and
I
were
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)
always
a
little
nervous
when
using
gas
station
bathrooms
if
Mom
was
driving
while
Dad
slept:
“You
stand
outside
the
door
and
play
lookout(放哨)
while
I
go,
and
I’ll
stand
outside
the
door
and
play
lookout
while
you
go.”
I
had
terrible
pictures
in
my
mind:
“Honey,
where
are
the
kids?”
“What?!
Oh,
Gosh…I
thought
they
were
being
awfully
quiet.”
We
were
never
actually
left
behind
in
a
strange
city,
but
we
weren’t
about
to
take
any
chances.
On
the
fourth
or
fif
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)th
night,
we
had
trouble
finding
a
hotel
with
a
vacancy.
After
driving
in
vain
for
some
time,
Mom
suddenly
got
a
great
idea:
Why
didn’t
we
find
a
house
with
a
likely-looking
backyard
and
ask
if
we
could
set
up
tent
there?
David
and
I
became
nervous.
To
our
great
relief,
Dad
turned
down
the
idea.
Mom
never
could
understand
our
objections(反对).
If
a
strange
family
showed
up
on
her
front
doorstep,
Mom
would
have
been
delighted.
She
thinks
everyone
in
the
world
is
as
nice
as
she
is.
We
finally
found
a
vacancy
in
the
next
town.
注意：
1.
所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.
至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.
续写部分分为两段，每段的开头已为你写好；
4.
续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph
1:
The
next
day
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)we
remembered
the
brand-new
tent
we
had
brought
with
us.
______________
Paragraph
2:
We
drove
through
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several
states
and
saw
lots
of
great
sights
along
the
way.
______________
【答案】
The
next
day
we
r
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)emembered
the
brand-new
tent
we
had
brought
with
us.
Thinking
of
this
tent,
Mom
suggested
that
we
go
camping
in
the
next
village
in
excitement,
with
her
eyes
glittering.
Considering
her
enthusiasm,
we
all
agreed.
When
the
door
of
our
car
opened,
Mom
stormed
out
instantly
and
urged
us
to
put
up
the
tent.
David
and
I
were
asked
to
pick
up
some
branches
to
build
a
fire.
And
when
we
came
back,
Dad
and
Mom
had
already
lain
down
the
grass
comfortably
in
front
of
the
tent,
talking
merrily
with
a
local
boy
at
our
age,
who
kept
glancing
at
this
tent
curiously.
Soon
we
learnt
that
the
boy
in
rags
even
didn’t
have
a
home
to
live
in.
Of
course,
Mom
“forgot”
to
take
this
tent
with
us
again.
We
drove
through
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)
several
states
and
saw
lots
of
great
sights
along
the
way.
And
we
also
had
a
nice
time
living
with
my
grandparents
during
that
trip.
But
what
impressed
me
most
was
that
tent,
which
was
forgotten
deliberately
by
Mom.
Though
she
did
love
going
camping,
she
presented
that
poor
boy
with
this
tent
out
of
sympathy.
It
was
Mom
that
made
my
childhood
colorful.
And
it
was
also
she
that
showed
me
the
true
meaning
of
giving.
【解析】这是一篇读后续写。短文叙述了作者的母亲很健忘，一家四口自驾旅游去祖父母所居住的地方，途中发生了有趣的事情。
首先，根据文章当中第二段内容比较开心
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)的基调，第一段的故事情节应该比较偏向正面感彩，例如：我们在露营过程中一起搭建帐篷的开心时光或露营过程中的趣事(尤其是前文有铺垫妈妈是个forgetful的人，这一点也可以埋下伏笔来表达后面过程中由于妈妈健忘而带来的趣事)(也有同学在此处描述了露营过程中对其他陌生人提供帮助，来集中体现nice这一个点);
其次，第二段开头说来描述欣赏风景：
此处可
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)以用一些描述景色环境的表达来烘托下氛围，但是第二段不能仅仅只能有景色描述；例如：这里可以实写和虚写结合的方式，看到景色(同时回忆往事)，最终把故事的落脚点放在“家人的感情”“亲情”“生活的乐趣”“与妈妈一起的趣事”等等角度都可以的;当然也有同学描述与陌生人的相遇，引出了陌生人的善意这个主题;总之这次的话题比较开放，情节可以写的角度比较多;
再次，除了情节方面的内容以外，以下几个方面
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)是考生需要着重关注的得分点：字迹清晰程度，语法多样性和句式丰富性，衔接成分的使用，语言的场景恰当程度;高考英语写作中，考生所采用的句型结构一定程度上影响了老师对考生写作水平的判断;说到语法丰富性方面，例如在作文中用到从句结构、强调句、非谓语结构等。尤其应该注意的是：避免句型单一化，如通篇使用定语从句，这样反而使阅卷老师觉得该考生对句型掌握的不够充分。应该在文章写作中有意识地多使用不同的句型结构。
【点睛】
文章思路清晰，语言规范，段落整齐，语
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)篇连贯，层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式:
虚
拟
语
气
和
with
复
合
结
构
Mom
suggested
that
we
go
camping
in
the
next
village
in
excitement,
with
her
eyes
glittering.
Considering
her
enthusiasm,
we
all
agreed.
what引导的主语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句But
what
impressed
me
most
was
that
tent,
which
was
forgotten
deliberately
by
Mom.
高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次，整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。
2.（2017年6月，浙江高考）
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
On
a
bright,
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July
afternoon,
Mac
Hollan,
a
primary
school
teacher,
was
cycling
from
his
home
to
Alaska
with
his
friends.
One
of
his
friends
had
stopped
to
make
a
bicycle
repair,
but
they
had
encouraged
Mac
to
carry
on,
and
they
would
catch
up
with
him
soon.
As
Mac
pedaled
(骑行)
along
alone,
he
thought
fondly
of
his
wife
and
two
young
daughters
at
home.
He
hoped
to
show
them
this
beautiful
place
someday.
Then
Mac
heard
q
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and
loud
breathing
behind
him.
“Man,
that's
a
big
dog!”
he
thought.
But
when
he
looked
to
the
side,
he
saw
instantly
that
it
wasn’t
a
dog
at
all,
but
a
wolf,
quickly
catching
up
with
him.
Mac’s
heart
jumped.
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found
out
his
can
of
hear
spray.
With
one
hand
on
the
bars,
he
fired
the
spray
at
the
wolf.
A
bright
red
cloud
enveloped
the
animal,
and
to
Mac's
relief,
it
fell
back,
shaking
its
head.
But
a
minute
later,
it
was
by
his
side
again.
Then
it
attacked
the
back
of
Mac's
bike,
tearing
open
his
tent
bag.
He
fired
at
the
wolf
a
second
time,
and
again,
it
fell
back
only
to
quickly
restart
the
chase（追赶）。
Mac
was
pedaling
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now.
He
waved
and
yelled
at
passing
cars
but
was
careful
not
to
show
down.
He
saw
a
steep
uphill
climb
before
him.
He
knew
that
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once
he
hit
the
hill,
he’d
be
easy
caught
up
and
the
wolf’s
teeth
would
be
tearing
into
his
flesh.
At
this
moment,
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Paul
and
Beeky
were
driving
their
car
on
their
way
to
Alaska.
They
didn’t
think
much
of
it
when
they
saw
two
cyclists
repairing
their
bike
on
the
side
of
the
road.
A
bit
later,
they
spotted
what
they,
too,
assumed
was
a
dog
running
alongside
a
man
on
a
bike.
As
they
got
closer,
they
realized
that
the
dog
was
a
wolf.
Mac
heard
a
large
vehicle
behind
him.
He
pulled
in
front
of
it
as
the
wolf
was
catching
up
fast,
just
a
dozen
yards
away
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注意：
1.
所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.
应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.
续写部分分为两段，每段开头语已为你写好；
4.
续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
【答案】
The
car
abru
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stopped
in
front
of
him.
Paul
and
Becky
got
out
of
the
car
immediately
to
give
the
help.
With
nothing
on
the
hand,
they
didn't
dare
to
fight
against
the
wolf.
However,
they
still
approached
to
the
wolf
bravely.
At
the
same
time,
the
wolf
also
noticed
them
and
turned
its
head
back,
howling
angrily
towards
Paul
and
Becky.
Mac
then
jumped
off
the
bicycle
and
was
ready
to
fight
against
the
wolf.
Then
came
the
deadlock.
A
few
minutes
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the
other
two
cyclists
arrived.
They
found
the
dangerous
situation,
where
three
men
circled
the
wolf.
Mac's
friends
also
jumped
off
their
bicycles
and
joined
the
fight
with
the
wolf.
More
and
more
cars
stopped.
Some
drivers
took
out
the
sticks
from
the
cars,
and
some
took
out
the
knives,
even
the
guns
towards
the
wolf.
In
the
meanwhile,
the
wolf
might
feel
the
people's
threats
around,
so
it
began
to
step
back
slowly.
Soon,
it
ran
away
off
the
road
and
disappeared
in
the
distance.
【解析】本文主要讲述了Mac在骑自
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