提高英语写作课件

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中考英语作文复习
怎样才能写出一篇优秀作文，在中考中获取高分呢？
一、写作要点
“一审”即审题。
“二写”即列纲。
“三连”即连句成文。
“四改”即修改润色全文。
审题：做到三审
体裁看清楚题目要求，读懂题目所表达的含义，抓住要点，注意文体是什么
时态、人称如果是日记和故事，宜采用过去时态；如是简介之类的，宜采用现在时态。
列纲：做到三思
词汇—>短语—>句式
列个提纲，考虑所要选用的单词、词组、句型，要能根据自己的英语水平，尽量扬长避短，避难就易。遇到想不起的词、句时，就用同（近）义词或同义句代替，不要使用没有把握的词句，并且要综合考虑所涉及到的情景、场合，语言要地道。
连句成文
根据短文的内容要求，确定先写什么，后写什么，按照表述内容的情节发展和实际需要，重新排列组合已写成的 句子，划分必要的段落，一般分成三段。但要注意句式的灵活运用，长、短句，简单句，复合句要搭配运用。
文章分3段：
综述：概括性强，最多2句话引入主题
正文——主要内容：层次性强，一定要有过渡型连接词。最多展开3个方面，每个方面最多2句话
结尾：紧扣主题，2句话内结束，尽量升华
修改润色全文做到三查
要点、拼写、语法是否连贯
看全文符不符合题目要求，行文是否流畅，有没有遗漏要点；语法是不是正确，包括单词的拼写、大小写、标点符号、时态、语态、单复数、主谓一致、冠词等。
开头用语：
A. Just as every coin has two sides, cars have both
advantages and disadvantages． B. Compared to letters, e-mails are more convenient. C. Opinions are divided on the advantages and
disadvantages of living in the city and in the
countryside. D. As we all know, computers have played an
important role/part in our daily life. E. Why do you go to university Different people have
different points of view. F．With the development of internet… more and more
popular…
G. As a student
K. As an old saying goes….
句式：
1.too...to...
He is very young. he can’t go to school.
He is too young to go to school.
2.so...that...
He is very clever. He can work out the problem.
He is so clever that he can work it out the problem.
He is clever enough to work out the problem.
3.not only...but also...
4.It has many advantages . First, … Besides, …
5.However, every coin has two sides. It also brings
us bad influences. On the one hand, … On
the other hand, …
连词： 连贯句子
1)表层次
first, firstly, second, secondly, third,thirdly, to begin with, to start with, what is more, last, also, and then, next, besides At first; at last; in the end… then/next/after that…
when/while/as soon as/not… until…
in addtion finally On one hand ....on the other hand， each/one coin has two sides，
连词： 连贯句子
2)表转折；but, however, though, although, after all, in spite of， fortunately，unfortunately，at the same time…
3)表递近：in addition, besides, moreover, what`s more
4)因果 because, so, because of, thanks to, due to, for, since, owing to, as a result (of), hence, thus
5)例证 for example, for instance, such as
连词： 连贯句子
6)表示利弊的：be good/bad for sb.; be harmful to sb.; do harm to sb.; …have great/much influence on sb.; sth. benefit sb.; sb benefit from sth.; affect; have an effect on sb.;
表示喜爱的：love/like/enjoy…; be fond of…; be interested in…; show great interest in…; lose oneself in…; put one’s heart into…;
7)总结 As I see, As for me ，As we all know, in general, generally speaking, I think..., in fact , in a word, in brief, in conclusion, in short, in summary, to sum up,
二、各类作文常用框架
1、话题作文，演讲
总-分-总
It’s adj for us to…..
On the one hand,…On the other hand,…
What’s more,…
In a word,/In short,….
2、讨论报告，列举不同观点
总-A方-B方-我方-总
Recently, we have a discussion about….
Different people have different opinions.
A thinks….
B thinks differently.….
As for me,/In my opinion, ….
All roads lead to Rome, we can choose the way we like to….
3、写信，建议
总-分-总
I’m adj to hear that you… Here is some advice for you.
Firstly,….
Secondly,….
Finally,….
In a word,…If you…, you will…
习作点评
Choose one of your hobbies and write an article for the school magazine about it. Tell the magazine readers.
　　 What exactly your hobby is;
　　 When and how you became interested in this hobby;
　　 Why you enjoy your hobby;
　　 About your hopes and plans for the future.
　　写作要求：
　　1.根据所提供的内容，适当拓展想象空间，灵活地将提供的信息体现在文章中。
　　2.条理清楚，语句通顺，书写清晰、规范。
　　3.词数60-80.
[学生习作A]
　　My hobby is read books. When I was seven years old. I became interested in reading books. I like reading books because there are a lot of useful things in books. I can learn a lot of knowledge from books. Books also can teach me how to be a good person. Books even can solve many problems for me. I will read more good books to improve myself.
①改为reading books，动词作表语时应该用动名词。
②also的位置应放在can之后。
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[点评]：档次9-11分。
①要点不全，漏掉最后一个要点。
②句子基本无误，能正确传递信息给读者
但文章不流畅，句子与句子之间过渡不自
然，给读者感觉在回答上述问题。
③有少量错误。
[学生习作B]
　　My hobby is reading. Reading books is very enjoyable. When I was young ,my mother used to tell me a story before. I went to bed every night. The stories were so interesting that I always felt they weren’t enough. So I began to read books by myself. Little by little I became interested in reading. I can learn much knowledge and many interesting things all over the world. When I read books, I can enjoy the beautiful sentences. At the same time I can improve my writing. I want to be a writer in the future, so I must study hard and read more books so that my dream can come true.
①开门见山、点题。
　　②真情流露，理由充分。
　　③文中带圈的连词使用得恰当，使文章过渡
自然、
　　④巧妙使用句型以表决心。
　　 [点评]：档次13-14分。
　　①清楚表达写作目的，要点齐全。
　　②语言表达灵活多样，字里行间流露出真情实
感，文章有感染力。
　　③恰当使用连词和从句，语言流畅，且无错
误，是一 篇高质量的作文。
高分突破
①文体：记叙文。
　　②要点：what → when →how → why → hope and plan for the future.
　　③时态：一般现在时，一般过去时，一般将来时的自然变化。
三、提高写作的方法
1、造句
Let life be beautiful like summer flowers and death like autumn leaves.
使生如夏花之绚烂，死如秋叶之静美
2、摘录好句、积累名言谚语
学习
A good beginning is half done.良好的开端是成功的一半。 A good book is a good friend.好书如挚友。 All roads lead to Rome.条条大路通罗马。 All things are difficult before they are easy.凡事总是由难而易。
All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.只会用功不玩耍，聪明孩子也变傻。
An hour in the morning is worth two in the evening.一日之计在于晨。
Confidence in yourself is the first step on the road to success.自信是走向成功的第一步。。
Doing is better than saying.与其挂在嘴上，不如落实在行动上。 Don't put off till tomorrow what should be done today.今日事，今日毕。
Every minute counts.分秒必争。 Easier said than done.说得容易，做得难。
Failure is the mother of success.失败是成功之母。
Great hopes make great man.伟大的抱负造就伟大的人物。
Knowledge is power.知识就是力量。
It is never too old to learn.活到老，学到老。
Never say die.永不言败。
No pains, no gains.没有付出就没有收获。
Nothing in the world is difficult for one who sets his mind to it.世上无难事，只怕有心人。 One cannot put back the clock.时钟不能倒转。
One hour today is worth two tomorrow.争分夺秒效率高。 Practice makes perfect.熟能生巧。 Reading enriches the mind.开卷有益。 Rome is not built in a day.冰冻三尺，非一日之寒。 The early bird catches the worm.早起的鸟儿有虫吃。
Where there is a will, there is a way.有志者事竟成。
健康 An apple a day keeps the doctor away.一天一苹果，不用请医生。 Early to bed and early to rise makes a man healthy, wealthy and wise.早睡早起身体好。 Health is better than wealth.健康胜过财富。
Health is happiness.健康就是幸福。
议论文 Every coin has two sides.事物有两面性
Do as the Romans do.入乡随俗。
Money isn't everything.钱不是万能的。 Many heads are better than one.三个臭皮匠，赛过诸葛亮。 You cannot eat your cake and have it.鱼与熊掌，不可得兼。
Unity is strength.团结就是力量。
Think twice before you do.三思而后行。
句型转换，句式多样性
Tom is a student.
He is 16 years old.
He likes running
Tom, a 16-year-old student, likes running.
多使用短语
I got up quickly.
I got up as quickly as possible.
He studies English well.
He is good at English.
He does well in English.
The girl likes reading.
The pretty girl likes reading novels.
The pretty girl likes reading novels carefully.
The pretty girl who I talked to just now likes reading novels carefully.
扩写
句子的衔接词
并列关系：and，or，either ... or，both ...
and，not only ... but also. as well as
转折关系：but，however，yet，although
条件关系：if, whether，unless
时间关系：when，as，before，after，
while，until，since，as soon as
因果关系：because，as，since，for，so
（一）表示“起”的词/词组：用于开篇引出扩展句。
at first
at present
first（ly）in general
in the beginning
one the one hand…（on the other hand）
to begin with
first of all
generally speaking
in the first place
on the whole
（二）有关“承”的常用词语：用来承接上文。
after/after that/ by this time
after a few days
certainly
after a while
therefore
also/too
for example /for instance
at the same time
Besides/what’s more
from now on
in addition
second /secondly
in fact
similarly
in other words
so in particular
soon
in the same way
still
then
third /thirdly
meanwhile
moreover
for another no doubt
such as
obviously
later
of course
truly
Particularly
unlike …
what is more
（三）有关“转”的常用词语：用来表示不同或相反的意见。
after all
fortunately
all the same
however
anyway
in spite of
at the same time
Luckily
but
by this time
though/although
no doubt
on the contrary
even though
otherwise
still
unfortunately
in fact
unlike
as a matter of fact
yet
especially
（四）有关“合”的常用词语：用于小结上文或结束本段落的内容。
above all
as a result
in sum
as has been noted
in summary
as I have said
on the whole
at last
therefore
Thus
eventually
surely
finally
to conclude
in brief
no doubt
in conclusion
undoubtedly
in short
truly
in a word
so certainly
obviously
all in all
In my life, I will thank my mother forever. My mother is busy everyday. she does housework and works hard in the factory. I am in trouble, she always encourages me to overcome difficulties. I am ill, she looks after me carefully. I will thank my mother for giving me life. I will thank her for helping me. I love my mother very much.
In my life, I will thank my mother forever. My mother is busy everyday. (But) she does housework and works hard in the factory. (When) I am in trouble, she always encourages me to overcome difficulties. (When) I am ill, she looks after me carefully. (In a word), I will (not only) thank my mother for giving me life, (but also) thank her for helping me. (So) I love my mother very much.
卷面、书写