中考书面表达指导

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1.下星期他将离开去澳大利亚了。
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He will leave Australia next week.
to
for
2.他三年前来我校教英语。
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wrong phrase
He to teach English in our school three years ago.
has come
came
wrong tense
3.我们的英语口语进步不少。
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Our English has made great progress.
speaking
spoken
a
We have made great progress in our spoken English .
wrong order/sentence pattern
How to write correct sentences
1.Think of correct ________
2.Think of correct ________
3.Think of correct _____________________
phrases
tense
order/ sentence pattern
2011年盐城市中考翻译句子
1. Amy擅长游泳。Amy is ▲ .
2. 为什么不尽你最大的努力去帮助需要帮助的人
▲ try your best to help people ▲
3. ORBIS医生们几乎没有空闲时间与家人团聚。
ORBIS doctors ▲ have any ▲ to get together with their families.
4. 因为公共场所禁止吸烟，我相信越来越多的人将会戒烟。
I guess more and more people will ▲ smoking because it’s not allowed in ▲ .
5. 最近，盐城已经成功地举办了两场为贫困儿童筹款的慈善演出。
Recently two charity shows ▲ successfully in Yancheng to raise money for ▲ .
good at swimming
Why not
in need
hardly
Why don't you
free time/spare time
give up/stop
public places
has been held
poor children
How to write a good composition
Before-writing
While-writing
After-writing
1. To _____ all the information given carefully
2. To write _______ well
3.To _________ sentences well
4. To _______ your composition carefully
read
sentences
join
check
抄
组
集
连
抓
审
作文
集句成段
组段成篇
审清题意
连词成句
抓住要点
抄写规范
如何写作
初中三年的英语学习中，我们与北京阳光中学的同学成了朝夕相处的朋友，其中Daniel的善良和助人为乐等优秀品质给我们留下了深刻的印象。请根据课本内容及下表提示，用英语写一篇题为“My Friend Daniel”的 短文。(2011盐城中考）
注意事项：
1. 词数：80词左右（已给出的文章开头不计入总词数）；
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
3. 文章必须包含表格所提供的主要信息，并作适当发挥。
字数
结构
体裁
人称
主题
时态
以一般现在时、一般过去时和一般将来时为主
Daniel
Appearance Likes
Dislikes sports
Personality helpful——help an old woman cross the road
kind——work at the Helping Hands Club
creative——create a TV programme
…
What can you learn from him
已知信息
未知信息
List some keywords about appearance and hobbies.
Phrases: ____________________________________
hobbies : ____________________________________
2. List some keywords about Personality.
Phrases: ____________________________________
____________________________________
3. List some keywords about what to learn from him.
Phrases: _ __________________________________
____________________________________
抓住要点，列关键词
wears glasses.
helpful——help an old woman cross the road
kind—— work at the Helping Hands Club
…
like playing computer games
dislikes doing sports.
_help each other
get along well with others
Make sentences with the keywords about appearance and hobbies.
Sentences: _________________________________
_________________________________
2. Make sentences with the keywords about Personality.
Sentences: _________________________________
_________________________________
3. Make sentences with the keywords about what to learn from him.
Sentences: _________________________________
_________________________________
连词成句、成段、成篇
He wears glasses. He likes playing
computer games but dislikes doing sports.
Daniel is helpful and kind. Once he helped an old woman cross the road.------------
We will try our best to help each other and get along well with others -------------
My Friend Daniel
My friend Daniel comes from Beijing Sunshine Secondary School. He wears glasses. He likes playing computer games but dislikes doing sports.
Daniel is helpful and kind. Once he helped an old woman cross the road. He spends much of his spare time working at the Helping Hands Club. He is such a creative boy that he created a TV programme for a competition. Daniel is also polite and everyone likes him.
Daniel is so great that we must learn from him. We will try our best to help each other and get along well with others to create a happy home for both you and me.
范文展示
Use advanced sentence structures
say something more
to explain and support.
Use conjunctions and transitional words.
and, but, or, however, besides, what’s more, otherwise, so , therefore, in a word, etc.
Use conjunctions and transitional words.
4.Use advanced sentence structures 　
.
so/such……that…… 定语从句
…. so that…../too…...to……. 宾语从句
not……until…./It is….. to do sth… 等等。。。
连接（过渡）词
3.Diversify(多样化)your sentence structures.
Tips
2.Say something more to explain and support.
中考英语写作评分标准
一档文（15-13分）
写出全部内容要点，层次清楚，
语言流畅，有句式变化，
有复杂结构，至少2-3个，
基本无语法错误，只有1-2个，
或有少量由于使用复杂结构
而引起的语法或拼写错误，
但不影响意义理解。
作文中应避免的几种常见语言错误：
时态错误（扣分多，一个时态错误扣分在1分左右）。
中国式的英语（不正确的英文表达会让整句不得分）。
单词拼写错误及大小写（单词拼写一定要过关）。
介词, 代词，非谓语动词或形容词副词的不正确使用（对单词的词性要熟悉）。
名词单复数（细心就可以避免的错）。
另外作文中书写不规范，卷面不整洁也是要失分的（中考中有1—2分的卷面整洁分，这两分不能丢！）。
解决方法：平时认真规范书写，少用或不用胶带或修正液，尽量减少涂改。
Let’s practice!
在家庭里、在社会中，只要我们从自身做起，我们的行为就可以为实现和谐社会（harmonious society）起到推进作用。你们学校的English Newsletter正在以Doing Our Part（从自身做起）为题举行征文活动，请根据下列表格提示的内容，用英语写一篇征文 （2011扬州中考试题）
行 为 作 用
在家庭里 ⑴ 帮助父母做家务事
⑵ 和父母多交流 ⑴ 让父母不太累
⑵ ……
在社会中 ⑴ 不乱扔垃圾
⑵ ……
⑶ …… ⑴ 使环境美化
⑵ ……
⑶ ……
展望：如果我们每个人……
要求：1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2）必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥；
3）词数：100词左右（征文的开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Doing Our Part
We have grown up and it’s time for us to do something for our family and society.At home, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
失分
原因 书写随意性
字数未限定
拼写错误多
句式有毛病
Doing Our Part
We have grown up and it’s time for us to do something for our family and society.
At home, we should help our parents do the housework. They go to work during the daytime and they must be tired after a full day’s work. We do the house in order to let them have a rest. We should also talk with them more, it can help us understand each other better.
In society, do not throw rubbish everywhere, we should throw it into the dustbin. It can make our environment more beautiful. Don’t use plastic bags when going shopping, we’d better use shopping baskets. If we use them too often, it will become white pollution.
In a word, if each of us do our part from now on, our world will become a harmonious society.
范文展示
The structure of the article
Introduction
Main body
Conclusion
Summary
at home
your own ideas
In society
抄
组
集
连
抓
审
作文
集句成段
组段成篇
审清题意
连词成句
抓住要点
抄写规范
如何写作
Summary
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