2022高考英语读后续写精读精炼（六）含答案解析
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2022高考英语读后续写精读精炼（六）
一：原文重现
That night, I _quarre_led with my mother, and then stormed out of the house. While on the road, I remembered that I did not have any money in my pocket, I did not even take my cell phone with me to make a call home．
At the sa_me_tim_e, I went through a noodle shop, and I suddenly felt very hungry. I wished for a bowl of noodles, but I had no money!
The seller sa_w_me_s_tanding before the counter and asked, “Hey little girl, you want to eat a bowl？” “But …but I do not carry money …” I shyly replied．
“Okay, I’l_l_trea_t you．” the seller said, “come in, I will cook you a bowl．”
A few m_inutes_ later the owner brought me a steaming bowl of noodles. After eating some pieces, I cried．
“What is it？” He asked．
“Nothing. I am__just__touched by your kindness!” I said as I wiped my tears. “Even a stranger on the street gives me a bowl of noodles, and my mother, after a quarrel, chased me out of the house. She is cruel （残忍的）!”21cnjy.com
The seller si_ghed,__“Girl, why did you think so? Think again. I only gave you a bowl of noodles and you felt that way. Your mother has been taking care of you since you were little, why were you not grateful and why did you hurt your mom? You should say sorry to your mom.”
I was really surprised after hearing that．
Why did I no_t_thin_k of that? A bowl of noodles from a stranger made me feel grateful, and my mother has raised me since I was little and I have never felt so, not even a little．
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右；
2. 续写部分为两段，开头语已为你写好；
Paragraph 1：
Just at that moment, many memories came back into my mind．【来源：21·世纪·教育·网】
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Paragraph 2：
Before I could apologize, my mother saw me and rushed to me
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________21*cnjy*com
二：文本解析
【分析】本文以故事发展_???é??????????????_展开，讲述了作者和妈妈吵了一架，然后冲出了房子,也没有给家里打电话。作者走过一家面馆，突然觉得很饿，想要一碗面条，但是没有钱，面馆老板免费请作者吃了一碗面。作者感悟到一个陌生人一碗面条都能让他心怀感激，从小妈妈就把他养大，但却从来没有这样的感觉，作者对此进行反思。
【详解】1.段落续写：
由续写段落的首句“Ju_st_at__that moment, many memories came back into my mind．(就在那一刻，许多回忆涌上了我的脑海。)”及前文“Why did I not think of that? A bowl of noodles from a stranger made me feel grateful, and my mother has raised me since I was little and I have never felt so, not even a little.( 我以前怎么从来没有感受到呢?一个陌生人给我的一碗面条让我心怀感激，从小妈妈就把我养大，我从来没有这样的感觉，一点也没有。)”可知，本段续写内容主要写作者经过反思，意识到母亲对自己的好，然后回家以及回家后母亲对他的宽容态度。
2.续写线索：反思——回忆——生活细节——回家——款待——感动、羞愧
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.到达：arrive/get to/reach
②.回家：go back home/return home
情绪类
①.感谢：be grateful/show my appreciation/show my gratitude21教育网
②.羞愧：ashamed / blush for
[高分句型
1. When arr_iving__home, I saw my mother sitting at the dinner table, worried and tired.（此句运用了状语从句中的省略，从句的主语与主句一致，且从句中含有be动词时，从句中可将主语与be动词省略。）
2. Before I c_ould_a_pologize, my mother saw me and rushed to me “Oh, honey, you’re back! I have prepared your favorite noodles.”（本句中运用了before引导的时间状语从句。）
三：续写单句训练
就在这时，我又想起了许多记忆。
当我生病的时候，她总是照顾我。
当我回到家时，她总是准备我最喜欢的食物。
她所有的善良都回到了我身上。
我应该感激她为我所做的一切，我意识到我应该立即回家，向她说对不起。
回到家，我看到母亲坐在餐桌旁，担心又累。
我还没来得及道歉，妈妈就看见了我，冲向我说：“哦，亲爱的，你回来了！”
我准备好了你最喜欢的面条。
听到这话，我忍不住倒在她的怀里。
“对不起，妈妈，请原谅我，”我低声对她说，眼泪流下来，为自己感到羞愧。
四：佳作展现
Just at that moment, many memories came back into my mind．www.21-cn-jy.com
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Before I could apologize, my mother saw me and rushed to me21·世纪*教育网
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
五：课后练笔
It was one of th_e_hott_est days of the dry season.We had not seen rain in almost a month.The crops were dying.Cows had stopped giving milk.The streams were long gone back into the earth.If we didn抰 see some rain soon we would lose everything.21c穘穓穣
I was _in_the_ kitchen making lunch for the family when I saw my six-year-old son,Billy,walking toward the woods.I could only see his back.He wasn抰 walking in his usual way.He was obviously walking with a great effort,trying to be as still as possible.Minutes after he disappeared into the woods,he came running out again,toward the house.【出处：21教育名师】
Moments lat_er,how_ever,he was once again walking in that slow purposeful long step toward the woods.This activity went on for over an hour—walking cautiously to the woods,then running back to the house.Finally,my curiosity got the best of me.I crept out of the house and followed him on his journey.21教育名师原创作品
He was cupp_ing_bo_th hands in front of him as he walked; being very careful not to spill the water he carried.Branches and thorns slapped(拍打) his little face but he did not try to avoid them.He had a much greater purpose.As I leaned in to spy on him,I saw the most amazing site.
Several l_arge_d_eer appeared threatening in front of him.But Billy walked right up to them.I almost screamed for him to get away.And I saw a baby deer laying on the ground,obviously suffering from heavy loss of water and heat exhaustion,lifte its head with great effort to lap(舔)up the water in my beautiful boy’s hand.
Paragraph 1:
When the water was gone,Billy jumped up to run back to the house.?2-1-c-n-j-y
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Paragraph 2:
And later I knew what was going on.
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六：单句训练
水没了后，比利跳起来跑回屋里。
我的好奇心再次驱使我跟着他回来。
他到达厨房后，打开了水龙头。
当他努力用双手喝水来接水时，水还在通过他的手指跑开。
他也很难把手关掉水龙头。
他似乎为浪费水而感到难过，自判有罪。
他脸上带着一种不安的表情，小心翼翼地把它朝树林走去。
后来我知道了发生了什么。
我开始明白他为什么不按照他平常的方式走路。
我站在树林边，看着这颗最美丽的心如此努力地努力拯救生命。
当我的眼泪开始落在地上，他们突然加入了其他多滴。
我抬头看着天空。就好像上帝自己也被我儿子的巨大努力感动了，开始骄傲地哭泣。
参考答案
三：单句训练
Just at that moment, many memories came back into my mind. 21世纪教育网版权所有
When I was ill, she always took care of me .
When I arrived home, she always prepared my favorite food. 【来源：21cnj*y.co*m】
All her kindness came back to me.
I should be gr_ateful_ for all she had done for me, I realized I should go back home immediately and say sorry to her. 【版权所有：21教育】
When arriv_ing_ho_me, I saw my mother sitting at the dinner table, worried and tired.
Before I coul_d_apol_ogize, my mother saw me and rushed to me “Oh, honey, you’re back!
I have prepared your favorite noodles.”
Hearing this，I couldn’t help throwing myself into her arms. 21·cn·jy·com
“Sorry,__Mom,__please forgive me, ” I whispered to her with tears streaming down my cheeks, ashamed of myself.21*cnjy*com
六：单句训练
When the water was gone,Billy jumped up to run back to the house.
My curiosity once again drove me to follow him back.
After he reached the kitchen,he turned on the tap.
As he was try_ing_ha_rd to cup both hands to receive the water,it was still running away through his fingers.www-2-1-cnjy-com
And he a_lso_ha_d great difficulty turning off the tap with hands occupied.
He seemed to__be_so_ sorry and self-condemned for his wasting of water.Wearing a note of upset on his face,he carried it carefully towards the woods.
And later I knew what was going on.
And it began _to_mak_e sense to me why he wasn’t walking in his usual way.
I stood on the__edge__of the woods watching the most beautiful heart working so hard to save a life.
As my tears _began__to hit the ground,they were suddenly joined by other drops...and more drops.
I looked up into the sky.
It was as if God__himse_lf was moved by the great effort made by my son and began to weep with pride.
四：佳作展现
（一）
Just at t_hat_mo_ment, many memories came back into my mind. When I was ill, she always took care of me .When I arrived home, she always prepared my favorite food. All her kindness came back to me. I should be grateful for all she had done for me, I realized I should go back home immediately and say sorry to her. When arriving home, I saw my mother sitting at the dinner table, worried and tired.
Before I could a_pologi_ze, my mother saw me and rushed to me “Oh, honey, you’re back! I have prepared your favorite noodles.” Hearing this，I couldn’t help throwing myself into her arms. “Sorry, Mom, please forgive me, ” I whispered to her with tears streaming down my cheeks, ashamed of myself.
（二）
When the water _was_go_ne,Billy jumped up to run back to the house.My curiosity once again drove me to follow him back.After he reached the kitchen,he turned on the tap.As he was trying hard to cup both hands to receive the water,it was still running away through his fingers.And he also had great difficulty turning off the tap with hands occupied.He seemed to be so sorry and self-condemned for his wasting of water.Wearing a note of upset on his face,he carried it carefully towards the woods.
And later I knew__what__was going on.And it began to make sense to me why he wasn’t walking in his usual way.I stood on the edge of the woods watching the most beautiful heart working so hard to save a life.As my tears began to hit the ground,they were suddenly joined by other drops...and more drops.I looked up into the sky.It was as if God himself was moved by the great effort made by my son and began to weep with pride.
_21?????????è?????(www.21cnjy.com)_
2022高考英语读后续写精读精炼（六）
一：原文重现
That night, I _quarre_led with my mother, and then stormed out of the house. While on the road, I remembered that I did not have any money in my pocket, I did not even take my cell phone with me to make a call home．
At the sa_me_tim_e, I went through a noodle shop, and I suddenly felt very hungry. I wished for a bowl of noodles, but I had no money!
The seller sa_w_me_s_tanding before the counter and asked, “Hey little girl, you want to eat a bowl？” “But …but I do not carry money …” I shyly replied．
“Okay, I’l_l_trea_t you．” the seller said, “come in, I will cook you a bowl．”
A few m_inutes_ later the owner brought me a steaming bowl of noodles. After eating some pieces, I cried．
“What is it？” He asked．
“Nothing. I am__just__touched by your kindness!” I said as I wiped my tears. “Even a stranger on the street gives me a bowl of noodles, and my mother, after a quarrel, chased me out of the house. She is cruel （残忍的）!”21cnjy.com
The seller si_ghed,__“Girl, why did you think so? Think again. I only gave you a bowl of noodles and you felt that way. Your mother has been taking care of you since you were little, why were you not grateful and why did you hurt your mom? You should say sorry to your mom.”
I was really surprised after hearing that．
Why did I no_t_thin_k of that? A bowl of noodles from a stranger made me feel grateful, and my mother has raised me since I was little and I have never felt so, not even a little．
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右；
2. 续写部分为两段，开头语已为你写好；
Paragraph 1：
Just at that moment, many memories came back into my mind．【来源：21·世纪·教育·网】
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph 2：
Before I could apologize, my mother saw me and rushed to me
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________21*cnjy*com
二：文本解析
【分析】本文以故事发展_???é??????????????_展开，讲述了作者和妈妈吵了一架，然后冲出了房子,也没有给家里打电话。作者走过一家面馆，突然觉得很饿，想要一碗面条，但是没有钱，面馆老板免费请作者吃了一碗面。作者感悟到一个陌生人一碗面条都能让他心怀感激，从小妈妈就把他养大，但却从来没有这样的感觉，作者对此进行反思。
【详解】1.段落续写：
由续写段落的首句“Ju_st_at__that moment, many memories came back into my mind．(就在那一刻，许多回忆涌上了我的脑海。)”及前文“Why did I not think of that? A bowl of noodles from a stranger made me feel grateful, and my mother has raised me since I was little and I have never felt so, not even a little.( 我以前怎么从来没有感受到呢?一个陌生人给我的一碗面条让我心怀感激，从小妈妈就把我养大，我从来没有这样的感觉，一点也没有。)”可知，本段续写内容主要写作者经过反思，意识到母亲对自己的好，然后回家以及回家后母亲对他的宽容态度。
2.续写线索：反思——回忆——生活细节——回家——款待——感动、羞愧
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.到达：arrive/get to/reach
②.回家：go back home/return home
情绪类
①.感谢：be grateful/show my appreciation/show my gratitude21教育网
②.羞愧：ashamed / blush for
[高分句型
1. When arr_iving__home, I saw my mother sitting at the dinner table, worried and tired.（此句运用了状语从句中的省略，从句的主语与主句一致，且从句中含有be动词时，从句中可将主语与be动词省略。）
2. Before I c_ould_a_pologize, my mother saw me and rushed to me “Oh, honey, you’re back! I have prepared your favorite noodles.”（本句中运用了before引导的时间状语从句。）
三：续写单句训练
就在这时，我又想起了许多记忆。
当我生病的时候，她总是照顾我。
当我回到家时，她总是准备我最喜欢的食物。
她所有的善良都回到了我身上。
我应该感激她为我所做的一切，我意识到我应该立即回家，向她说对不起。
回到家，我看到母亲坐在餐桌旁，担心又累。
我还没来得及道歉，妈妈就看见了我，冲向我说：“哦，亲爱的，你回来了！”
我准备好了你最喜欢的面条。
听到这话，我忍不住倒在她的怀里。
“对不起，妈妈，请原谅我，”我低声对她说，眼泪流下来，为自己感到羞愧。
四：佳作展现
Just at that moment, many memories came back into my mind．www.21-cn-jy.com
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Before I could apologize, my mother saw me and rushed to me21·世纪*教育网
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
五：课后练笔
It was one of th_e_hott_est days of the dry season.We had not seen rain in almost a month.The crops were dying.Cows had stopped giving milk.The streams were long gone back into the earth.If we didn抰 see some rain soon we would lose everything.21c穘穓穣
I was _in_the_ kitchen making lunch for the family when I saw my six-year-old son,Billy,walking toward the woods.I could only see his back.He wasn抰 walking in his usual way.He was obviously walking with a great effort,trying to be as still as possible.Minutes after he disappeared into the woods,he came running out again,toward the house.【出处：21教育名师】
Moments lat_er,how_ever,he was once again walking in that slow purposeful long step toward the woods.This activity went on for over an hour—walking cautiously to the woods,then running back to the house.Finally,my curiosity got the best of me.I crept out of the house and followed him on his journey.21教育名师原创作品
He was cupp_ing_bo_th hands in front of him as he walked; being very careful not to spill the water he carried.Branches and thorns slapped(拍打) his little face but he did not try to avoid them.He had a much greater purpose.As I leaned in to spy on him,I saw the most amazing site.
Several l_arge_d_eer appeared threatening in front of him.But Billy walked right up to them.I almost screamed for him to get away.And I saw a baby deer laying on the ground,obviously suffering from heavy loss of water and heat exhaustion,lifte its head with great effort to lap(舔)up the water in my beautiful boy’s hand.
Paragraph 1:
When the water was gone,Billy jumped up to run back to the house.?2-1-c-n-j-y
?______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph 2:
And later I knew what was going on.
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
六：单句训练
水没了后，比利跳起来跑回屋里。
我的好奇心再次驱使我跟着他回来。
他到达厨房后，打开了水龙头。
当他努力用双手喝水来接水时，水还在通过他的手指跑开。
他也很难把手关掉水龙头。
他似乎为浪费水而感到难过，自判有罪。
他脸上带着一种不安的表情，小心翼翼地把它朝树林走去。
后来我知道了发生了什么。
我开始明白他为什么不按照他平常的方式走路。
我站在树林边，看着这颗最美丽的心如此努力地努力拯救生命。
当我的眼泪开始落在地上，他们突然加入了其他多滴。
我抬头看着天空。就好像上帝自己也被我儿子的巨大努力感动了，开始骄傲地哭泣。
参考答案
三：单句训练
Just at that moment, many memories came back into my mind. 21世纪教育网版权所有
When I was ill, she always took care of me .
When I arrived home, she always prepared my favorite food. 【来源：21cnj*y.co*m】
All her kindness came back to me.
I should be gr_ateful_ for all she had done for me, I realized I should go back home immediately and say sorry to her. 【版权所有：21教育】
When arriv_ing_ho_me, I saw my mother sitting at the dinner table, worried and tired.
Before I coul_d_apol_ogize, my mother saw me and rushed to me “Oh, honey, you’re back!
I have prepared your favorite noodles.”
Hearing this，I couldn’t help throwing myself into her arms. 21·cn·jy·com
“Sorry,__Mom,__please forgive me, ” I whispered to her with tears streaming down my cheeks, ashamed of myself.21*cnjy*com
六：单句训练
When the water was gone,Billy jumped up to run back to the house.
My curiosity once again drove me to follow him back.
After he reached the kitchen,he turned on the tap.
As he was try_ing_ha_rd to cup both hands to receive the water,it was still running away through his fingers.www-2-1-cnjy-com
And he a_lso_ha_d great difficulty turning off the tap with hands occupied.
He seemed to__be_so_ sorry and self-condemned for his wasting of water.Wearing a note of upset on his face,he carried it carefully towards the woods.
And later I knew what was going on.
And it began _to_mak_e sense to me why he wasn’t walking in his usual way.
I stood on the__edge__of the woods watching the most beautiful heart working so hard to save a life.
As my tears _began__to hit the ground,they were suddenly joined by other drops...and more drops.
I looked up into the sky.
It was as if God__himse_lf was moved by the great effort made by my son and began to weep with pride.
四：佳作展现
（一）
Just at t_hat_mo_ment, many memories came back into my mind. When I was ill, she always took care of me .When I arrived home, she always prepared my favorite food. All her kindness came back to me. I should be grateful for all she had done for me, I realized I should go back home immediately and say sorry to her. When arriving home, I saw my mother sitting at the dinner table, worried and tired.
Before I could a_pologi_ze, my mother saw me and rushed to me “Oh, honey, you’re back! I have prepared your favorite noodles.” Hearing this，I couldn’t help throwing myself into her arms. “Sorry, Mom, please forgive me, ” I whispered to her with tears streaming down my cheeks, ashamed of myself.
（二）
When the water _was_go_ne,Billy jumped up to run back to the house.My curiosity once again drove me to follow him back.After he reached the kitchen,he turned on the tap.As he was trying hard to cup both hands to receive the water,it was still running away through his fingers.And he also had great difficulty turning off the tap with hands occupied.He seemed to be so sorry and self-condemned for his wasting of water.Wearing a note of upset on his face,he carried it carefully towards the woods.
And later I knew__what__was going on.And it began to make sense to me why he wasn’t walking in his usual way.I stood on the edge of the woods watching the most beautiful heart working so hard to save a life.As my tears began to hit the ground,they were suddenly joined by other drops...and more drops.I looked up into the sky.It was as if God himself was moved by the great effort made by my son and began to weep with pride.
_21?????????è?????(www.21cnjy.com)_