2022高考英语读后续写精读精炼（十四）含答案解析

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2022高考英语读后续写精读精炼（十四）
一：原文重现
Bales
_left_t_he
pavement
of
Base
Road
and
stepped
onto
snow-covered
Jewell
Trail.
She
planned
a
six-hour
hike
through
New
Hampshire’s
Mount
Washington
State
Park.
She
had
packed
for
almost
every
emergency
and
intended
to
walk
alone.
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eckedthe
weather
forecast
posted
by
the
Mount
Washington
Observatory
before
she
left.
Based
on
her
experience,
Bales
knew
that
her
hike
was
realistic.
Besides,
she
had
two
emergency
plans
and
extra
layers
of
clothing
to
better
adjust
her
body
temperature
as
conditions
changed.
The
hik_e_up_t_he
lower
part
of
Jewell
Trail
was
pleasant.
Bales
felt
excited
as
she
walked
up
into
snowy
paths.
The
sun
shone
through
the
trees
and
cast
a
shadow
over
her
smiling
face.
Less
than
an
hour
later,
loads
of
dark
clouds
had
replaced
the
sunshine,
and
snow
covered
the
surrounding
trees.
She
still
smiled_._Howe_ver,
the
weather
was
showing
its
teeth.
Bales
added
even
more
layers
to
shelter
herself
from
the
cold
winds
and
thick
fog.
She
made
her
way
across
the
snow-covered
ridge
(山脊toward
Mount
Washington
and
began
to
think
about
calling
it
a
day.
Suddenly,
she
noticed
something:
a
single
set
of
footprints
in
the
snow
ahead
of
her,
which
had
been
made
by
a
pair
of
sneakers-typically
not
the
type
for
hiking.
Meanwhile,
B_ales_w_as
getting
colder,
even
though
she
was
moving
fast
and
generating
some
body
heat.
With
strong
gusts
of
wind
screaming
and
attacking
her
back
and
left
side,
she
decided
to
abandon
her
plan.
The
only
thing,
however,
kept
her
on
the
trail
was
the
sneaker
tracks
in
the
snow.
Paragraph
1:
Bales
faced
a
dilemma
about
whether
to
follow
the
tracks
or
not.
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Paragraph
2:
Her
searching
now
turned
into
rescuing
the
man.
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二：文本解析
【详解】1.认真读懂所_??????????????????_：通过文章描述可知，Bales是一个很有经验的远足者。她计划在新罕布什尔州的华盛顿山州立公园徒步旅行6个小时。当她穿过白雪覆盖的山脊向华盛顿山走去时，突然，她注意到一件事：她前面的雪地上有一串脚印，是一双运动鞋留下的——通常不适合徒步旅行。狂风呼啸着袭击她的背部和左侧，她决定放弃她的计划。然而，唯一能让她坚持下去的是雪地上的运动鞋留下的痕迹。21·cn·jy·com
2.续写部分和前面的文章要衔接得当，并且与原文情节发展和人物性格相一致，故事情节的向后延续发展要合乎情理。【出处：21教育名师】
3.根据第一段首_???Bales_
faced
a
dilemma
about
whether
to
follow
the
tracks
or
not.(
Bales面临着是否跟随这些足迹的两难境地)及第二段首句Her
searching
now
turned
into
rescuing
the
man.(她的搜寻现在变成了营救那个人)，第一段可以描写Bales面临两难境地时的思想斗争和最终确定去搜寻那个人。第二段则可以描述Bales搜寻到了那个人，那个人应该身处困境，所以她对他展开了营救。21教育名师原创作品
4.续写的语言要尽可能与原文的_è??è¨???????é?????_上的一致。文章时态以一般过去时为主。应使用自己熟悉的句型和短语进行写作，考生要注意尽可能使句子的表达形式多样化，适当的使用一些高级句式和高级词汇，以提高书面表达的档次和可读性。作文要层次清晰，要点全面，表达流畅，切合题干要求，句子结构准确，适当补充信息，使篇章结构连贯。
三：续写单句训练
Bales面临着一个两难的问题，是否遵循轨道。
如果她选择沿着走，她会增加徒步旅行增加时间和风险。
但前面的轨道表明有人可能有危险。她不能放弃这一切。
她在冰冻的雾中喊道：“外面有人吗？”你需要帮助吗？强风把她的声音带走了。
然后，她小心翼翼地朝铁轨的方向走去。
她绕过一个角落，发现一个男人一动不动地坐着。
她的搜寻现在变成了救了那个人。
她立刻走近他，发现他的脚被冻伤了。
她毫不犹豫地用暖和的衣服盖住他的身体，然后给他倒了一些含糖饮料。
风呼啸而过，如果他们不离开，他们很快就会死去。
她扶着那个人，沿着小路蜿蜒前进。
经过巨大的努力，Bales设法救了这个人的命。
她筋疲力尽了，她觉得这一切都是值得的。
四：佳作展现
Bales
faced
a
dilemma
about
whether
to
follow
the
tracks
or
not.2·1·c·n·j·y
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2:【来源：21·世纪·教育·网】
Her
searching
now
turned
into
rescuing
the
man.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
五：课后练笔
I
was
doing
a
_big_cl_ean-up
recently
and
my
kids
were
helping
when
my
son,Freddo,came
across
a
knotted
handkerchief
with
an
old
dark
brown
coin
inside.揗um,can
I
have
this?Can
I
play
with
this
coin?
he
asked.I
took
one
look
and
was
immediately
transported
to
another
time.In
1991,here
was
a
time
when
my
friend
and
I
worked
in
a
backward
African
country,Niger,hit
by
sandstorms
and
burning
heat.There
were
many
things
I
found
difficult
about
this
place梩he
climate
and
beggars
were
my
biggest
headaches.So
after
finishing
five
months
of
nursing
work
there,we
moved
on
to
work
at
a
health
clinic
in
the
neighboring
country,Burkina
Faso.揑t抯
much
greener
in
Burkina.Even
the
Coke
tastes
better,
the
locals
assured
us.www-2-1-cnjy-com
Yet
the
fact
w_as_qui_te
the
opposite.Arriving
by
taxi
at
our
destination
in
Burkina,we
began
to
unload.I
was
reaching
for
my
larger
piece
of
luggage
when,out
of
the
darkness,a
motorbike
with
two
men
approached
slowly.Without
warning,one
of
the
men
grabbed
my
daypack
as
the
motorbike
swept
close
by.Within
seconds,the
pair
were
out
of
sight,swallowed
up
by
the
night.
With
my
_passpo_rt,money,traveler抯
cheques
all
in
the
bag,I
was
in
deep
trouble.How
frustrating!2-1-c-n-j-y
All
I
wa_nted_w_as
to
leave
this
hellhole!Then,walking
through
Burkina抯
streets
one
day,I
was
stopped
by
an
old
woman
who
thrust
her
hand
in
my
face.揅adeau(gift
in
French)!Cadeau!
she
cried.I抎
had
enough!I
was
extremely
tired
of
the
country:its
poverty,its
thieves,the
heat,the
dust
and...everything!I
told
her
angrily
and
firmly
in
French,揑
have
no
慶adeau.I
have
no
money.A
thief
stole
all
my
money
two
weeks
ago
and
now
I
can抰
get
out
of
your
country.I
cannot
give
you
anything.NOTHING!
The
beggar
woman
listened
attentively.To
my
great
surprise,after
hearing
my
words,she
gave
me
a
broad
smile.【版权所有：21教育】
Paragraph
1:
She
reached
into
the
pocket
of
her
dress.?
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Paragraph
2:
There
was
a__sligh_t
touch
on
my
hand;looking
down,I
saw
my
son
looking
at
me,curious.
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六：单句训练
她把手伸进衣服口袋，“那我给你一个硬币，”她说。
幸好，她把一枚深棕色的旧硬币放在我手里。
我惊讶地看着硬币，然后又看了看那个女人。
这时，我对老妇人的可怕态度感到相当羞愧。
尽管她很贫穷，但她还是能给我一些无价的东西。
我理所当然地认为乞丐只会从别人那里得到一些东西，但布基那那个女乞丐的硬币确实改变了我对他们的看法，她的微笑深深地打动了我的心。21cnjy.com
我的手轻轻碰了一下，我低头一看，看见儿子好奇地看着我。
“妈妈，我能得到这个吗？”我能玩这枚硬币吗？他重复道。
“你不能玩，亲爱的，”我碰了碰儿子的头，慢慢地说，“这个很特别。”
这对我来说是一段令人难忘的珍贵的记忆。
来吧，让我给你讲一个故事吧。”
参考答案
三：单句训练
Bales
faced
a
dilemma
about
whether
to
follow
the
tracks
or
not.21世纪教育网版权所有
If
she__chose_
to
follow
the
tracks,
she’d
add
time
and
risk
to
her
hiking.
But
the
tracks
ahead
suggested
someone
might
be
in
danger.
21教育网
She
could_n???t_le_t
this
go.
She
called
out
into
the
frozen
fog,
“Is
anybody
out
there?
Do
you
need
help?”
The
strong
winds
carried
her
voice
away.
www.21-cn-jy.com
Then
she
walked
cautiously
in
the
direction
of
the
tracks.
21
cnjy
com
She
rounded
a
corner
and
spotted
a
man
sitting
motionlessly.
Her
searching
now
turned
into
rescuing
the
man.
She
ap_proach_ed
him
instantly
and
found
he
was
suffering
from
frostbite
on
his
feet.
Withou_t_any__hesitation,
she
covered
his
body
with
warm
clothes,
and
then
poured
him
some
sugary
drink.21·世纪
教育网
The
wind
roare_d_over_
and
they
would
die
soon
if
they
didn’t
get
out
of
there.
She
supported
the
man
and
inched
along
the
trail.
21
cnjy
com
With
great
efforts,
Bales
managed
to
save
the
man’s
life.
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y.co
m】
Exhausted,
she
felt
that
it
was
all
worth
it.
六：单句训练
She
reach_ed_int_o
the
pocket
of
her
dress.“Then
I
will
give
you
a
cadeau,”
she
announced.
Kindly,she
placed
an
old
dark
brown
coin
in
my
hand.
In
surprise,I
looked
at
the
coin,and
then
at
the
woman.
At
that__momen_t,I
felt
rather
ashamed,ashamed
of
my
terrible
attitude
towards
the
old
woman.
In
spite
of
her
poverty,she
was
able
to
give
me
something
priceless.
I
had
_taken__it
for
granted
that
beggars
would
only
receive
something
from
others,yet
the
coin
from
the
beggar
woman
in
Burkina
truly
changed
my
view
towards
them,and
her
smile
hit
the
deepest
of
my
heart.
There
wa_s_a_sl_ight
touch
on
my
hand;looking
down,I
saw
my
son
looking
at
me,curious.
“Mum,can
I
have
this?Can
I
play
with
this
coin?”
he
repeated.
“You
can’t
pl_ay_wit_h
it,honey,”
I
touched
my
son
on
the
head
and
said
slowly,
“This
one
is
special.It
is
an
unforgettable
precious
memory
to
me.
Come
and
let
me
tell
you
a
story.”
四：佳作展现
（一）
Bales
fa_ced_a__dilemma
about
whether
to
follow
the
tracks
or
not.
If
she
chose
to
follow
the
tracks,
she’d
add
time
and
risk
to
her
hiking.
But
the
tracks
ahead
suggested
someone
might
be
in
danger.
She
couldn’t
let
this
go.
She
called
out
into
the
frozen
fog,
“Is
anybody
out
there?
Do
you
need
help?”
The
strong
winds
carried
her
voice
away.
Then
she
walked
cautiously
in
the
direction
of
the
tracks.
She
rounded
a
corner
and
spotted
a
man
sitting
motionlessly.
Her
sear_ching__now
turned
into
rescuing
the
man.
She
approached
him
instantly
and
found
he
was
suffering
from
frostbite
on
his
feet.
Without
any
hesitation,
she
covered
his
body
with
warm
clothes,
and
then
poured
him
some
sugary
drink.
The
wind
roared
over
and
they
would
die
soon
if
they
didn’t
get
out
of
there.
She
supported
the
man
and
inched
along
the
trail.
With
great
efforts,
Bales
managed
to
save
the
man’s
life.
Exhausted,
she
felt
that
it
was
all
worth
it.
（二）
She
reache_d_into_
the
pocket
of
her
dress.“Then
I
will
give
you
a
cadeau,”
she
announced.Kindly,she
placed
an
old
dark
brown
coin
in
my
hand.In
surprise,I
looked
at
the
coin,and
then
at
the
woman.At
that
moment,I
felt
rather
ashamed,ashamed
of
my
terrible
attitude
towards
the
old
woman.In
spite
of
her
poverty,she
was
able
to
give
me
something
priceless.I
had
taken
it
for
granted
that
beggars
would
only
receive
something
from
others,yet
the
coin
from
the
beggar
woman
in
Burkina
truly
changed
my
view
towards
them,and
her
smile
hit
the
deepest
of
my
heart.
There
was
a
slig_ht_tou_ch
on
my
hand;looking
down,I
saw
my
son
looking
at
me,curious.“Mum,can
I
have
this?Can
I
play
with
this
coin?”
he
repeated.“You
can’t
play
with
it,honey,”
I
touched
my
son
on
the
head
and
said
slowly,“This
one
is
special.It
is
an
unforgettable
precious
memory
to
e
and
let
me
tell
you
a
story.”
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