2022高考英语读后续写精读精炼（四）含答案解析
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2022高考英语读后续写精读精炼（四）
一：原文重现
“I just wa_nt_a_n_ormal birthday party,” April told Bailey as they walked home from school.
Bailey knew w_hat_Ap_ril meant. April’s parents loved the environment. And because April happened to be born on Earth Day, all her parties had an Earth Day theme.
揜emember when you turned seven? said Bailey.
揌ow could I forget the Throw-Out Blowout? said April.21*cnjy*com
揥e helped out HYPERLINK "http://www.21cnjy.com" t you garage sales and donated the money to charity. And when you turned eight...【出处：21教育名师】
“It was a Tree _Spree,_” finished April. “We planted maples.” “Last year, we all collected newspapers to recycle,” said Bailey. “The Print Sprint.” April groaned.
Bailey giggled. “I thought it was fun.”
Later that nigh_t,_as__April loaded the dishwasher, she said, 揑抎 like to plan my own party this year.
揝ure, sa YPERLINK "http://www.21cnjy.com" Mom.We could have a Composts Carnival. 揋reat idea! said Dad.
April clear_ed_her_ throat. 揑抎 like to go to Maze Craze instead. 揜eally? said Dad, surprised.
揑 guesHYPERLINK "http://www.21cnjy.com" we culd do that. Dad and I can send you kids there. said Mom.
April couldn抰 HYPERLINK "http://www.21cnjy.com" ait fr her birthday! She and her friends would have so much fun. And they wouldn抰 have to think one bit about the earth.
At school t_he_nex_t day, April told her friends. 揑抦 having my birthday party at Maze Craze!
揧ou aHYPERLINK "http://www.21cnjy.com" e? sad Josie. 揃ut we always do something earthy on your birthday. 揜emember that salamander we found two years ago? said Tyler. Yeah, said April. 揟his year, we抮e not even going outside.
揙h! said Tyler.
The followi_ng_wee_kend, everyone gathered in the parking lot outside of Maze Craze. 揟hanks for coming, said April. 揑抳e been so excited about my party. No shovels.
No collecting r_ecycla_bles. Nothing earthy about it. She shifted her feet. 揟hen I got here this morning and saw this parking lot.
April抯 frienHYPERLINK "http://www.21cnjy.com" s glaced around. Plastic bottles bounced across the ground. Newspapers and fast-food sacks blocked the storm drain. Shopping bags rustled in the trees.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为 150 左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
“What a mess!” April frowned.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
April looked at the collected rubbish and smiled.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
二：文本解析
【分析】本文以人物_??????????±???????_讲述了April过生日疯狂迷宫玩时，看到外面很多垃圾，于是建议朋友们先捡垃圾，他们为参加生日聚会而穿的整洁衣服被汗水湿透了。但他们的脸上洋溢着满意的神情，能为地球做点事的感觉真好。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“‘真是一团糟!’April皱起了眉头”可知，第一段可描写April建议朋友们先捡垃圾，描述他们捡垃圾的经过。
②由第二段首句内容“April看着收集的垃圾笑了”可知，第二段可描写April对捡垃圾的感受以及朋友们的反应。21*cnjy*com
2.续写线索：April皱眉——April建议捡垃圾——大家设法捡垃圾——April和朋友们感觉为地球做点事真好
3.词汇激活
行为类
渴望：long for/desire
支持：approve/ support
努力做某事：make great efforts to do sth./ take pains to do sth.21·cn·jy·com
情绪类
困难：difficult / rough
良好：good / great
得分句型
1：Though__she_h_ad been longing for a non-Earth Day birthday, it was difficult to turn a blind eye to such a mess. (运用了though引导让步状语从句)
2：How about picking the trash first? (运用了动名词作宾语)
三：续写单句训练
“多么糟！”阿普丽尔皱了皱眉头。
虽然她一直渴望一个非地球日的生日，但很难对这样的混乱视而不见。
她转过身来对朋友们说：“先捡垃圾怎么样？”
她的提议很快得到了其他人的批准，很快他们就成功了。
艾普丽尔的妈妈从后备箱里拿了一些手套，而她爸爸设法取出了树里的购物袋。
艾普丽尔和贝利拿着这些袋子收集了散落的瓶子。
在下水道旁，乔西和泰勒竭尽全力清除了堵塞物。
许多人都能动手轻松地干活。
不久之后，三个袋子里装满了罐子和报纸，以供回收利用。
阿普丽尔看着收集到的垃圾，笑了笑。然后她抬头看着她的朋友们。
他们参加生日派对的整洁衣服浑身湿透，但他们的脸上却很满意。
为地球做些事感觉很好。
“大家，地球日快乐，”April说。“现在我们准备好迎接迷宫大火了。”“April生日快乐！”她的朋友们喊道。21世纪教育网版权所有
“我很幸运能出生在地球日了！””（“哇，又一个朴实的生日，”）April自想。“明年的堆肥嘉年华可能是个好主意。”21cnjy.com
四：佳作展现
“What a mess!” April frowned.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
April looked at the collected rubbish and smiled.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
五：课后练笔
For many ye_ars,I__had a recurring(重复出现的) dream.I was a little girl again,rushing about,trying to get ready for school.【版权所有：21教育】
“Hurry,you’ll be late for school,”my mother called to me.
“I am hurrying,Mom!What did I do with my books?”
Deep in_side_I_ knew where the dream came from.It was about some unfinished business in my life.As a kid,I loved everything about school.I loved books,teachers,tests and homework.Most of all I longed to someday march down the aisle(通道) to receive my diploma.That seemed more appealing even than getting married.【来源：21cnj*y.co*m】
But at 15,I had__to_dr_op out because my parents couldn’t afford tuition(学费).My hope of getting a diploma was dead,or so I thought.Pretty soon,I married and had three children,and I thought,“There goes my diploma.”
Even so,I w_anted__my children to be educated.But Linda,our youngest child,had juvenile arthritis(幼年型关节炎) in her hands and knees,which made it impossible for her to function in a normal classroom.I felt really sorry for her and I didn’t want her to live her life with regret.I didn’t give up hope of her being back to school in some way.
One day_,I_saw_ an ad in the newspaper for evening courses.揟hat抯 the answer,擨 said to myself.Linda always feels better in the evening,so I抣l just sign her up for night school.
Linda was__busy__filling out enrollment(入学) forms when the secretary said,“Mrs.Schantz,why don’t you come back to school?”
I laughed,“_There???_s no way!I’m 55!”But he persisted,and before I knew what I had done,I was enrolled for classes in English and crafts.揟his is only an experiment,擨 warned him,but he just smiled.So,I told myself to try for just a semester and to see if it would work.Anyway,my dream was still there in my heart.
Paragraph 1:
It was exciting to go to school again but
燺_____________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph 2:
Linda and I saw each other through the time.
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
六：单句训练
再次去上学是很令人兴奋的，但这不是一场比赛。
坐在坐满孩子的教室里很尴尬，即使他们大多数都尊重和鼓励。
白天，我还是一个忙碌的已婚女人，有很多家务要做。
晚上，我是一个勤奋的学生，正在学习我的课程。
令我惊讶的是，琳达和我在夜校的表现都很好。
下个学期我又回去了，我的成绩稳步提高。
琳达和我一直见面。
当我倒下的时候，琳达鼓励我说：“妈妈，你现在不能辞职了！”
当她倒下的时候，我鼓励她。
我不得不说，这对我们俩来说都很艰难。
但我们俩都没有放弃。最后，我拿到了毕业证书。
令我惊讶的是，几乎所有的同学都投票给我做课堂演讲者，我获得了$3000份大学奖学金。我梦想中未完成的事情最终完成了。 【来源：21·世纪·教育·网】
参考答案
三：单句训练
“What a mess!” April frowned.
Though__she_h_ad been longing for a non-Earth Day birthday it was difficult to turn a blind eye to such a mess. 21·世纪*教育网
She turned ar_ound_t_o her friends, “How about picking the trash first?”
Her proposal__was_q_uickly approved by others and soon they were in business.
April’s mum__grabb_ed some gloves from the trunk while her dad managed to remove those shopping bags in the trees. www-2-1-cnjy-com
With the bags, April and Bailey collected scattered bottles.2-1-c-n-j-y
By the drain,__Josie_ and Tyler made great efforts to clear the blockage.
Many hands ma_ke_lig_ht work. In a short while, three bags were filled with cans and newspapers to recycle.21教育名师原创作品
April looked at the collected rubbish and smiled.
Then she looked up at her friends.
Their neat cl_othes__for the birthday party were soaked with sweat, but their faces glowed with satisfaction.
It felt so good to do something for the earth.
“Happy Earth__Day,__everyone,” said April. “Now we are ready for Maze Craze.” “Happy Birthday, April!” shouted her friends.
“I’m so lucky _to_hav_e been born on Earth Day! ” (“Wow, another earthy birthday,” )April thought to herself. “A Composts Carnival may be a good idea for next year.”
六：单句训练
It was exciting to go to school again but it was no game.
Sitting in a cl_assroo_m full of kids was awkward,even if most of them were respectful and encouraging.
During the day,_I_was__still a busy married woman having loads of housework to do.
In the evening,I was a hardworking student working on my courses.
To my surprise,both Linda and I did very well in night school.
I went back again the next semester,and my grades steadily improved.
Linda and I _saw_ea_ch other through the time.When I was down,Linda encouraged me,
“Mom,you can’t quit now!”And when she was down,I encouraged her.
I have to say it was a time which was really hard on both of us.21教育网
But neither of us gave up.At last,I got my diploma.
To my su_rprise_,almost all of my classmates voted for me to be class speaker,and I got a $3,000 college scholarship.
The unfinished business in my dreams was eventually finished.
四：佳作展现
（一）
“What a__mess!_” April frowned. Though she had been longing for a non-Earth Day birthday it was difficult to turn a blind eye to such a mess. She turned around to her friends, “How about picking the trash first?” Her proposal was quickly approved by others and soon they were in business. April’s mum grabbed some gloves from the trunk while her dad managed to remove those shopping bags in the trees. With the bags, April and Bailey collected scattered bottles. By the drain, Josie and Tyler made great efforts to clear the blockage. Many hands make light work. In a short while, three bags were filled with cans and newspapers to recycle.
April look_ed_at__the collected rubbish and smiled. Then she looked up at her friends. Their neat clothes for the birthday party were soaked with sweat, but their faces glowed with satisfaction. It felt so good to do something for the earth. “Happy Earth Day, everyone,” said April. “Now we are ready for Maze Craze.” “Happy Birthday, April!” shouted her friends. “I’m so lucky to have been born on Earth Day! ” (“Wow, another earthy birthday,” )April thought to herself. “A Composts Carnival may be a good idea for next year.”www.21-cn-jy.com
（二）
It was exc_iting__to go to school again but it was no game.Sitting in a classroom full of kids was awkward,even if most of them were respectful and encouraging.During the day,I was still a busy married woman having loads of housework to do.In the evening,I was a hardworking student working on my courses.To my surprise,both Linda and I did very well in night school.I went back again the next semester,and my grades steadily improved.2·1·c·n·j·y
Linda and _I_saw__each other through the time.When I was down,Linda encouraged me,“Mom,you can’t quit now!”And when she was down,I encouraged her.I have to say it was a time which was really hard on both of us.But neither of us gave up.At last,I got my diploma.To my surprise,almost all of my classmates voted for me to be class speaker,and I got a $3,000 college scholarship.The unfinished business in my dreams was eventually finished.
_21?????????è?????(www.21cnjy.com)_
2022高考英语读后续写精读精炼（四）
一：原文重现
“I just wa_nt_a_n_ormal birthday party,” April told Bailey as they walked home from school.
Bailey knew w_hat_Ap_ril meant. April’s parents loved the environment. And because April happened to be born on Earth Day, all her parties had an Earth Day theme.
揜emember when you turned seven? said Bailey.
揌ow could I forget the Throw-Out Blowout? said April.21*cnjy*com
揥e helped out HYPERLINK "http://www.21cnjy.com" t you garage sales and donated the money to charity. And when you turned eight...【出处：21教育名师】
“It was a Tree _Spree,_” finished April. “We planted maples.” “Last year, we all collected newspapers to recycle,” said Bailey. “The Print Sprint.” April groaned.
Bailey giggled. “I thought it was fun.”
Later that nigh_t,_as__April loaded the dishwasher, she said, 揑抎 like to plan my own party this year.
揝ure, sa YPERLINK "http://www.21cnjy.com" Mom.We could have a Composts Carnival. 揋reat idea! said Dad.
April clear_ed_her_ throat. 揑抎 like to go to Maze Craze instead. 揜eally? said Dad, surprised.
揑 guesHYPERLINK "http://www.21cnjy.com" we culd do that. Dad and I can send you kids there. said Mom.
April couldn抰 HYPERLINK "http://www.21cnjy.com" ait fr her birthday! She and her friends would have so much fun. And they wouldn抰 have to think one bit about the earth.
At school t_he_nex_t day, April told her friends. 揑抦 having my birthday party at Maze Craze!
揧ou aHYPERLINK "http://www.21cnjy.com" e? sad Josie. 揃ut we always do something earthy on your birthday. 揜emember that salamander we found two years ago? said Tyler. Yeah, said April. 揟his year, we抮e not even going outside.
揙h! said Tyler.
The followi_ng_wee_kend, everyone gathered in the parking lot outside of Maze Craze. 揟hanks for coming, said April. 揑抳e been so excited about my party. No shovels.
No collecting r_ecycla_bles. Nothing earthy about it. She shifted her feet. 揟hen I got here this morning and saw this parking lot.
April抯 frienHYPERLINK "http://www.21cnjy.com" s glaced around. Plastic bottles bounced across the ground. Newspapers and fast-food sacks blocked the storm drain. Shopping bags rustled in the trees.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为 150 左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
“What a mess!” April frowned.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
April looked at the collected rubbish and smiled.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
二：文本解析
【分析】本文以人物_??????????±???????_讲述了April过生日疯狂迷宫玩时，看到外面很多垃圾，于是建议朋友们先捡垃圾，他们为参加生日聚会而穿的整洁衣服被汗水湿透了。但他们的脸上洋溢着满意的神情，能为地球做点事的感觉真好。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“‘真是一团糟!’April皱起了眉头”可知，第一段可描写April建议朋友们先捡垃圾，描述他们捡垃圾的经过。
②由第二段首句内容“April看着收集的垃圾笑了”可知，第二段可描写April对捡垃圾的感受以及朋友们的反应。21*cnjy*com
2.续写线索：April皱眉——April建议捡垃圾——大家设法捡垃圾——April和朋友们感觉为地球做点事真好
3.词汇激活
行为类
渴望：long for/desire
支持：approve/ support
努力做某事：make great efforts to do sth./ take pains to do sth.21·cn·jy·com
情绪类
困难：difficult / rough
良好：good / great
得分句型
1：Though__she_h_ad been longing for a non-Earth Day birthday, it was difficult to turn a blind eye to such a mess. (运用了though引导让步状语从句)
2：How about picking the trash first? (运用了动名词作宾语)
三：续写单句训练
“多么糟！”阿普丽尔皱了皱眉头。
虽然她一直渴望一个非地球日的生日，但很难对这样的混乱视而不见。
她转过身来对朋友们说：“先捡垃圾怎么样？”
她的提议很快得到了其他人的批准，很快他们就成功了。
艾普丽尔的妈妈从后备箱里拿了一些手套，而她爸爸设法取出了树里的购物袋。
艾普丽尔和贝利拿着这些袋子收集了散落的瓶子。
在下水道旁，乔西和泰勒竭尽全力清除了堵塞物。
许多人都能动手轻松地干活。
不久之后，三个袋子里装满了罐子和报纸，以供回收利用。
阿普丽尔看着收集到的垃圾，笑了笑。然后她抬头看着她的朋友们。
他们参加生日派对的整洁衣服浑身湿透，但他们的脸上却很满意。
为地球做些事感觉很好。
“大家，地球日快乐，”April说。“现在我们准备好迎接迷宫大火了。”“April生日快乐！”她的朋友们喊道。21世纪教育网版权所有
“我很幸运能出生在地球日了！””（“哇，又一个朴实的生日，”）April自想。“明年的堆肥嘉年华可能是个好主意。”21cnjy.com
四：佳作展现
“What a mess!” April frowned.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
April looked at the collected rubbish and smiled.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
五：课后练笔
For many ye_ars,I__had a recurring(重复出现的) dream.I was a little girl again,rushing about,trying to get ready for school.【版权所有：21教育】
“Hurry,you’ll be late for school,”my mother called to me.
“I am hurrying,Mom!What did I do with my books?”
Deep in_side_I_ knew where the dream came from.It was about some unfinished business in my life.As a kid,I loved everything about school.I loved books,teachers,tests and homework.Most of all I longed to someday march down the aisle(通道) to receive my diploma.That seemed more appealing even than getting married.【来源：21cnj*y.co*m】
But at 15,I had__to_dr_op out because my parents couldn’t afford tuition(学费).My hope of getting a diploma was dead,or so I thought.Pretty soon,I married and had three children,and I thought,“There goes my diploma.”
Even so,I w_anted__my children to be educated.But Linda,our youngest child,had juvenile arthritis(幼年型关节炎) in her hands and knees,which made it impossible for her to function in a normal classroom.I felt really sorry for her and I didn’t want her to live her life with regret.I didn’t give up hope of her being back to school in some way.
One day_,I_saw_ an ad in the newspaper for evening courses.揟hat抯 the answer,擨 said to myself.Linda always feels better in the evening,so I抣l just sign her up for night school.
Linda was__busy__filling out enrollment(入学) forms when the secretary said,“Mrs.Schantz,why don’t you come back to school?”
I laughed,“_There???_s no way!I’m 55!”But he persisted,and before I knew what I had done,I was enrolled for classes in English and crafts.揟his is only an experiment,擨 warned him,but he just smiled.So,I told myself to try for just a semester and to see if it would work.Anyway,my dream was still there in my heart.
Paragraph 1:
It was exciting to go to school again but
燺_____________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph 2:
Linda and I saw each other through the time.
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
六：单句训练
再次去上学是很令人兴奋的，但这不是一场比赛。
坐在坐满孩子的教室里很尴尬，即使他们大多数都尊重和鼓励。
白天，我还是一个忙碌的已婚女人，有很多家务要做。
晚上，我是一个勤奋的学生，正在学习我的课程。
令我惊讶的是，琳达和我在夜校的表现都很好。
下个学期我又回去了，我的成绩稳步提高。
琳达和我一直见面。
当我倒下的时候，琳达鼓励我说：“妈妈，你现在不能辞职了！”
当她倒下的时候，我鼓励她。
我不得不说，这对我们俩来说都很艰难。
但我们俩都没有放弃。最后，我拿到了毕业证书。
令我惊讶的是，几乎所有的同学都投票给我做课堂演讲者，我获得了$3000份大学奖学金。我梦想中未完成的事情最终完成了。 【来源：21·世纪·教育·网】
参考答案
三：单句训练
“What a mess!” April frowned.
Though__she_h_ad been longing for a non-Earth Day birthday it was difficult to turn a blind eye to such a mess. 21·世纪*教育网
She turned ar_ound_t_o her friends, “How about picking the trash first?”
Her proposal__was_q_uickly approved by others and soon they were in business.
April’s mum__grabb_ed some gloves from the trunk while her dad managed to remove those shopping bags in the trees. www-2-1-cnjy-com
With the bags, April and Bailey collected scattered bottles.2-1-c-n-j-y
By the drain,__Josie_ and Tyler made great efforts to clear the blockage.
Many hands ma_ke_lig_ht work. In a short while, three bags were filled with cans and newspapers to recycle.21教育名师原创作品
April looked at the collected rubbish and smiled.
Then she looked up at her friends.
Their neat cl_othes__for the birthday party were soaked with sweat, but their faces glowed with satisfaction.
It felt so good to do something for the earth.
“Happy Earth__Day,__everyone,” said April. “Now we are ready for Maze Craze.” “Happy Birthday, April!” shouted her friends.
“I’m so lucky _to_hav_e been born on Earth Day! ” (“Wow, another earthy birthday,” )April thought to herself. “A Composts Carnival may be a good idea for next year.”
六：单句训练
It was exciting to go to school again but it was no game.
Sitting in a cl_assroo_m full of kids was awkward,even if most of them were respectful and encouraging.
During the day,_I_was__still a busy married woman having loads of housework to do.
In the evening,I was a hardworking student working on my courses.
To my surprise,both Linda and I did very well in night school.
I went back again the next semester,and my grades steadily improved.
Linda and I _saw_ea_ch other through the time.When I was down,Linda encouraged me,
“Mom,you can’t quit now!”And when she was down,I encouraged her.
I have to say it was a time which was really hard on both of us.21教育网
But neither of us gave up.At last,I got my diploma.
To my su_rprise_,almost all of my classmates voted for me to be class speaker,and I got a $3,000 college scholarship.
The unfinished business in my dreams was eventually finished.
四：佳作展现
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“What a__mess!_” April frowned. Though she had been longing for a non-Earth Day birthday it was difficult to turn a blind eye to such a mess. She turned around to her friends, “How about picking the trash first?” Her proposal was quickly approved by others and soon they were in business. April’s mum grabbed some gloves from the trunk while her dad managed to remove those shopping bags in the trees. With the bags, April and Bailey collected scattered bottles. By the drain, Josie and Tyler made great efforts to clear the blockage. Many hands make light work. In a short while, three bags were filled with cans and newspapers to recycle.
April look_ed_at__the collected rubbish and smiled. Then she looked up at her friends. Their neat clothes for the birthday party were soaked with sweat, but their faces glowed with satisfaction. It felt so good to do something for the earth. “Happy Earth Day, everyone,” said April. “Now we are ready for Maze Craze.” “Happy Birthday, April!” shouted her friends. “I’m so lucky to have been born on Earth Day! ” (“Wow, another earthy birthday,” )April thought to herself. “A Composts Carnival may be a good idea for next year.”www.21-cn-jy.com
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It was exc_iting__to go to school again but it was no game.Sitting in a classroom full of kids was awkward,even if most of them were respectful and encouraging.During the day,I was still a busy married woman having loads of housework to do.In the evening,I was a hardworking student working on my courses.To my surprise,both Linda and I did very well in night school.I went back again the next semester,and my grades steadily improved.2·1·c·n·j·y
Linda and _I_saw__each other through the time.When I was down,Linda encouraged me,“Mom,you can’t quit now!”And when she was down,I encouraged her.I have to say it was a time which was really hard on both of us.But neither of us gave up.At last,I got my diploma.To my surprise,almost all of my classmates voted for me to be class speaker,and I got a $3,000 college scholarship.The unfinished business in my dreams was eventually finished.
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