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2022高考英语读后续写精读精炼(五)
一:原文重现
After Henry del_ivered_ all the newspapers, he pedaled fast to The Gazette offices by 8: 30. The chief editor had something important to tell him. He parked his bike and bounded up two nights of stairs to the chief editor's door.21*cnjy*com
Mr. Tro_tta_gr_eeted him."About those papers," he paused, "no good way to deliver bad news," Henry抯 smile faded. "Were closing shop Saturday. Advertising is down. Television is how people get their news today, Mr. Trotta shrugged, "You won't have to get up early on weekends." "No," said Henry, "but I like waking up early and meeting people on my route. It's sad People won't get their neighborhood news any more.
As Henry__rode__past the familiar houses, he saw Mr Grady on his porch (门廊) holding a broom (扫把). "Mr. Grady, wait," Henry called, setting down his bike. He led Mr. Grady to a chair and took the broom. In minutes, the porch was clean. "Now, Mr, Grady, anytime you have chores (家务) call me." They sat for a while as Mr. Grady recalled how happy he’d been moving his family to 26 Maple. He sounded lonely.
A week aft_er_clo_sing, Henry wondered if his customers missed The Gazette as much as he did. He thought of a way to find out.
He starte_d_out__on his old route with a notebook. First stop: Mr, Jonas, 17 Oak. When Henry asked him about the paper, Mr. Jonas answered, "I sure liked reading the week's happenings. By the way, I have a pile of old comics from燭he Gazette. Think someone would want them?"
揑抣l ask around." Henry made a note in his notebook.
He stopped at Mr_s._Bur_ke's, 27 Maple. She opened the door holding two babies. Her other two kids held on to her legs. Henry stared. "You could use a babysitter." "Definitely. I meant to put an ad in燭he Gazette, but....Know any neighbors with experience?
Mr Simon _was_ne_xt door, carrying his violin out to his car. "Hey, Henry. My band is having a concert in the park next Friday. Tell all your friends.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答.?
As Henry made more notes, an idea started forming in his head.www.21-cn-jy.com
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Customers cheered Henry idea and helped supply the news.21·世纪*教育网
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二:文本解析
【分析】本文以人物为线索展_??????è??è?°???H_enry发放宪报给各位邻居,日复一日,他好奇会不会有人和他一样在乎看报纸这件事,他询问每位邻居,每位邻居都有在报纸上刊登广告的需求,他准备为邻居出版一种报纸,找到了新的方式和邻居建立联系。
【详解】1.段落续写:
由第一段首句内容“随着亨利记下更_?¤????è?°?????????_想法开始在他脑海中形成。”可知,第一段可描写Henry计划创建一种新报纸,并将想法告诉了自己的朋友,得到了朋友的支持的经过。
由第二段首句内容“客户们都很_??????Henr_y的想法,并帮助提供了新闻。”可知,第二段可描写Henry开始筹办报纸编辑工作,将邻居的需求刊登在报纸上,获得了成功。
2.续写线索:提出想法——告诉朋友——得到支持——开始广告刊登——受到欢迎
3.词汇激活
行为类
提出想法:come up with/form an idea
告诉:inform/tell
支持:support/cheer
刊登:advertise/put sth. on the newspaper
高分句型
1. Miss Robe_rts_ad_vertised that she needed a teenager to help clean her basement.(由连接词that引导的宾语从句作advertised的宾语)www-2-1-cnjy-com
2.The new__famil_y who just moved in invited neighbors to a “Meet the John sons’ party. (由关系代词who引导定语从句)
三:续写单句训练
随着亨利做了更多的笔记,他的脑海里开始形成了一个想法。
也许他可以为邻居创建一个新闻页面。但他会怎么打印出来呢?
他骑车去学校,向他的好朋友解释了一切。
“让我们一起解决吧。他所有的朋友都同意帮忙。
第二天,好消息来了。
珍妮帮助买了一台二手彩色打印机,鲍勃的父亲承诺免费为他们免费提供纸张。“完美的!””亨利说。
顾客们为亨利的想法欢呼,并帮助提供了新闻。
罗伯茨小姐做广告说,她需要一个十几岁的孩子来帮助打扫她的地下室。
刚搬进来的新家庭邀请邻居参加“见约翰逊”聚会。
亨利补充道:“枫树26号的友好的绅士讲的故事。顺便聊天。
亨利输入了新闻,复印了照片,并在周六发布了第一个树街新闻。
在那之后,邻居们做赠品广告,要求提供书籍和音乐。
亨利错过了他以前的公报工作,但他也发起了一些事情。他在讲新闻,联系邻居。
四:佳作展现
As Henry made more notes, an idea started forming in his head.21世纪教育网版权所有
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Customers cheered Henry idea and helped supply the news.【版权所有:21教育】
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五:课后练笔
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
It was somewher_e_betw_een spring and summer,my mom and I were driving through the countryside.Back then,I was 13 years old,and always felt unhappy with Mom.But little did I know that this trip was going to be a special one.21穋n穓y穋om
A pot of flow_ers_sa_t in the back seat,whose heavenly scent filled the car.
Suddenly,in th_e_midd_le of nowhere,my mom pulled over.揥hat are you doing?擨 cried,fearing that the car had broken down and we抎 be stuck there,so far from home.But that wasn抰 the case.My mom hopped out of the car,grabbing the flowers from the back seat.揑t抣l just be a minute,攕he called back through the open windows.
My eyes impati_ently__skimmed the edge of the road before settling on a little sign showing that it was a nursing home.I looked back to the building,somewhat annoyed,as my mom reappeared梕mpty-handed.【来源:21·世纪·教育·网】
Before she s_tarted_ the car,curiosity drove me to ask,“Do you know someone there?”She shook her head.“Then what did you do with the flowers?”She smiled slightly,“I gave them to the receptionist.”“What?”She laughed at my confusion.揑 told the receptionist to give the flowers to whoever needed them,especially who hasn抰 gotten any in a while.
I kept s_ilent__for a moment.Not long after we continued our driving,I spoke again,揇id you leave your name?擳o this she answered instantly,揘o.Leaving flowers there for someone who will appreciate them makes me feel good,which is enough of a thank-you for me.
Suddenly,still__think_ing about Mom抯 deeds,I heard something burst loudly.It was our car that broke down!Nothing could be worse,because neither my mom nor I understood how to repair it,and we didn抰 know where the garage was.It also seemed impossible to wait for any passer-by,since we had seen so few along the way.
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We were worrying about what could be done.
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As we drove along,a flower shop came into sight on the road.21cnjy.com
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六:单句训练
我们一直在担心能做些什么。
但在等待了相当长的一段时间后,我和妈妈决定走回疗养院寻求帮助。
天知道我们开了多远了!
当我们到达时,接待员很惊讶,但还是热情地帮助我们联系了车库。
在那里,收到鲜花的老人们很兴奋地见到我们,谈论着那一天有多棒。
令我惊讶的是,随机的善意对接受善意的人有什么意义。
正当我们笑着愉快地说话的时候,车库把我们的车修好了。
当我们开车走时,路上看见了一家花店。
我让妈妈停下来,飞快地进花店踱去,一束盛开的红色花朵引起了我的注意。
在目睹了善良的影响后,我决定把甜蜜的花送给妈妈。
很快,天堂般的气味再次充满了汽车。
妈妈试图掩饰她的兴奋感,但闪闪发光的眼泪使她失望了。
在这次旅行中,我发现,尽管我偶尔会对她生气,但我还是为她感到骄傲。
这是我生命中的一次旅程。
参考答案
三:单句训练
As Henry made more notes, an idea started forming in his head.?21教育网
Maybe he could create a news page for the neighbors. 2-1-c-n-j-y
But how would he print it?
He pedaled to school and explained everything to his good friends.【出处:21教育名师】
“Let’s work it out together.” All his friends agreed to help. 21教育名师原创作品
The next day, good news came.
Jenny h_elped__to get a second-hand color printer and Bob’s father promised to supply paper to them for free. “Perfect!” Henry said.21*cnjy*com
Customers cheered Henry's idea and helped supply the news.?
Miss Roberts__adver_tised that she needed a teenager to help clean her basement.
The new fami_ly_who_ just moved in invited neighbors to a “Meet the Johnsons” party.
Henry ad_ded:_???_Stories told by friendly gentleman at 26 Maple. Stop by to chat.”
Henry t_yped_t_he news, made photocopies, and delivered the first Tree Streets News on Saturday.
After tha_t,_nei_ghbors advertised giveaways, and requested books and music.
Henry misse_d_his__old Gazette job, but he had launched something too. He was making news and connecting neighbors.
六:单句训练
We were worrying about what could be done.
But af_ter_wa_iting in vain for a considerable time,Mom and I decided to walk back the road to the nursing home and seek for help.【来源:21cnj*y.co*m】
God knows how far we had driven!
When we arr_ived,t_he receptionist was surprised,but warmly helped us contact the garage.
There,the o_ld_men_ who had received the flowers were excited to meet us,talking about how great that day was.
It amazed _me_wha_t random actions of kindness could mean to the people who received it.
While w_e_were_ laughing and talking merrily,the garage got our car repaired.?
As we drove along,a flower shop came into sight on the road.
I asked Mom to s_top_an_d paced quickly into the flower shop,where a bunch of flowers glowing red in full bloom caught my eye.
Having wit_nessed_ the effect of kindness,I decided to send Mom the sweet flowers.
Soon,the heavenly scent filled the car again.
Mom tried _to_con_ceal her excitement,but the glittering tears failed her.
Throug_h_this_ trip,I discovered that,despite my occasional anger towards her,I actually felt proud of her.
This was the trip of my life.
四:佳作展现
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As Henry made _more_n_otes, an idea started forming in his head.?Maybe he could create a news page for the neighbors. But how would he print it? He pedaled to school and explained everything to his good friends. “Let’s work it out together.” All his friends agreed to help. The next day, good news came. Jenny helped to get a second-hand color printer and Bob’s father promised to supply paper to them for free. “Perfect!” Henry said.2·1·c·n·j·y
Customers__cheer_ed Henry's idea and helped supply the news.?Miss Roberts advertised that she needed a teenager to help clean her basement. The new family who just moved in invited neighbors to a “Meet the Johnsons” party. Henry added: “Stories told by friendly gentleman at 26 Maple. Stop by to chat.” Henry typed the news, made photocopies, and delivered the first Tree Streets News on Saturday. After that, neighbors advertised giveaways, and requested books and music. Henry missed his old Gazette job, but he had launched something too. He was making news and connecting neighbors.
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We were worryin_g_abou_t what could be done.But after waiting in vain for a considerable time,Mom and I decided to walk back the road to the nursing home and seek for help.God knows how far we had driven!When we arrived,the receptionist was surprised,but warmly helped us contact the garage.There,the old men who had received the flowers were excited to meet us,talking about how great that day was.It amazed me what random actions of kindness could mean to the people who received it.While we were laughing and talking merrily,the garage got our car repaired.?
As we drov_e_alon_g,a flower shop came into sight on the road.I asked Mom to stop and paced quickly into the flower shop,where a bunch of flowers glowing red in full bloom caught my eye.Having witnessed the effect of kindness,I decided to send Mom the sweet flowers.Soon,the heavenly scent filled the car again.Mom tried to conceal her excitement,but the glittering tears failed her.Through this trip,I discovered that,despite my occasional anger towards her,I actually felt proud of her.This was the trip of my life.
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