2022高考英语读后续写精读精炼（二）含答案解析
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2022高考英语读后续写精读精炼（二）
一：原文重现
Devi looked__throu_gh the observation window at the kids below, all waiting in line to get into the pool. She turned to her mother with a furious frown on her face. “Mom, they’re all little kids! I抦 15 already! This is ridiculous!21cnjy.com
揑 know, DHYPERLINK "http://www.21cnjy.com" vi, rplied her mother, 揵ut you抮e a beginner, too, and you have to start somewhere!
Devi had neve_r_been_ to a swimming lesson in her life. Between schoolwork and helping on her grandfather抯 farm, she hadn抰 had time for lessons. The closest swimming pool Devi had been to was the alligator pool her mother bought her when she was five. Now that Devi was older, her mother had found a new jo b in the city, and Devi faced a new challenge梥chool field trips to the local pool.
The first day _that_D_evi went with her class to the pool, she had no idea what she was in for. What could be so difficult about swimming? Devi confidently slipped into the water and held onto the side of the pool, expecting to be able to touch the bottom with her feet. But when Devi let go of the side of the pool, she slipped under the water梩he whole pool was one big deep end! Devi threw her arm toward the side of the pool and grabbed the ledge (池壁), out of breath. “I really can’t swim! Everyone’s going to laugh at me!” she thought to herself in a panic.
On the nex_t_fiel_d trip to the pool, Devi sat on the side on a bench, paralyzed with fear. She huddled with a towel over her shoulders, too embarrassed to try again. When she came home, her mother noticed right away that Devi was upset. 揌oney, I抳e signed you up for Angela抯 swimming lessons at the local pool. Soon you抣l learn how to swim just like everyone else, she assured Devi, showing photos of Angela with her prize-winning students.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右；
2. 每段的开头语已为你写好；
Paragraph 1
Then came the time for Devi to take her first lesson.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2
Soon Angela came over to where Devi sat and introduced herself.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
二：文本解析
【分析】本文讲述了黛维因为学_????????¨?????????_助祖父而一直没有时间去游泳，妈妈给黛维在当地找了游泳池学习游泳，黛维初次学习时候感觉很自信，但是真正进入到水里的时候发现游泳比想象中难，不小心呛水的黛维觉得自己很尴尬，恐惧去学游泳，这时黛维的母亲给她报了一个游泳班。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“接着，轮到黛维上她的第一节课了。”可知，第一段描写黛维去上游泳课的情况。
②由第二段首句内容“不久，安吉拉来到黛维坐的地方，做了自我介绍”可知，第二段可描写安吉拉老师和黛维的相处。
2.续写线索：怀疑课程——看别人跳水——感到尴尬——和老师交流——尝试游泳——喜欢上游泳
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.和：together with /as well as
②.路过：pass by/go past
③.鼓励：cheer on/encourage
情绪类
①.感知：feel more__at_ea_se/feel relaxed；astonished/surprised/shocked；in amazement/in surprise
②.积极：fearless /brave
特色句型
1. She drag_ged_he_r feet to the side of the pool and sat down, in doubt whether lessons would be helpful.（由连接词whether引导同位语从句）
2. Devi__spott_ed her instructor across the pool, together with the little kids who jumped into the water like fish leaping into the ocean.（由关系代词who引导限制性定语从句）
三：续写单句训练
然后是黛维上她的第一堂课的时候了。
她拖着脚走到泳池边坐下来，怀疑上课是否有帮助。
环顾四周，黛维发现她的教练穿过游泳池，还有那些孩子们跳进了水里，就像鱼一样跳进了海里。
她惊奇地看着她。
尽管黛维很敏感，但当一个小女孩走过，要求她不要害怕时，她的脸上很快就泛起了一丝尴尬的红晕。
多么令人尴尬啊！她垂着头。
不久，安吉拉来到黛维坐着的地方，介绍了自己。
黛维惊讶地得知安吉拉直到20岁才学过游泳。
深受鼓舞后，德维现在重新获得了希望。
她在安吉拉的陪伴下第二次进入游泳池，几个快乐的孩子漂浮在附近为她加油。
黛维开始感到更放松，她的动作不那么僵硬，呼吸更平静。
黛维怀着感激的心意识到她可能不是一个无所畏惧的游泳运动员，但她肯定会很开心。
四：佳作展现
Then came the time for Devi to take her first lesson. 21教育网
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Soon Angela came over to where Devi sat and introduced herself. 21穋n穓y穋om
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
五：课后练笔
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。2·1·c·n·j·y
It was a Saturd_ay_aft_ernoon.The color of the sky was changing,first light gray,then dark gray,and finally dark and dense.The wind was blowing heavily,and the trees were swaying in the strong wind.It began to rain cats and dogs.Soon,the road was filled with puddles from the rain.
On such a sto_rmy_af_ternoon,my mother took my five-year-old brother,Christopher,and me to a new big toy store she had read about in the newspaper.揝o many toys,攖he advertisement had shouted in full and flashy color,搕hat we had to get a huge warehouse to fit them all!
Christopher__and_I_ couldn抰 have been more excited.We ran across the parking lot,through the cold and biting rain,as fast as our little legs could carry us.We left our mother outside to battle with the frustrating umbrella,which never worked when she wanted it to.揅hristine!Take care of your young brother!擬other shouted at the top of her voice.【来源：21·世纪·教育·网】
“Christine!_I???m_go_ing to find the Lego section(乐高积木区)!There’s a new pirate ship I want,and I have four dollars!Maybe I can buy it!”Christopher exclaimed and ran off excitedly.I only half heard him.I took a right turn and,to my wide-eyed delight,found myself in the midst of the Barbie(芭比) World.?【来源：21cnj*y.co*m】
I was stud_ying_a_ Barbie and doing some simple math in my head when suddenly an earthshaking clap of thunder roared from the storm outside.I jumped at the noise,dropping the doll to the floor.The lights flickered(闪烁) once and died,covering everything in a blanket of blackness.Thunder continued to shake the sky and lightning illuminated the store for seconds,casting frightening shadows on my mind.
Paragraph 1:
“Oh no,”I thought,“Where’s Christopher?”?
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph 2:
揅hristine,I抦 here.敔
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
六：单句训练
哦，不，”我想，“克里斯托弗在哪儿？”
我害怕，吓得呆住了，需要见到我哥哥，拥抱他，确保他很好。
我的胃难受了，正在翻转进去。
我在黑暗的走廊上跑来跑去，恐慌充满了我的内心，使我呼吸困难。
我一边看到糖果，一边被玩具绊倒，一边疯狂地叫着我哥哥的名字。
虽然我很焦虑，但我几乎看不见他的身影。
沮丧和恐惧的眼泪从我的脸上滴了下来，但我继续跑着。
“克里斯汀，我在这里。
“兴奋让我喘住了呼吸——在黑暗的乐高走廊里，我找到了克里斯托弗。
他独自站着，一动不动，紧紧地抓着海盗船。
我开始欣慰地大叫起来，伸出双臂搂住他，紧紧地拥抱着他。
他拥抱我说：“我知道如果我在这里等着，克里斯汀，你就能找到我。
”然后，我把我的手抓住我的手，我们去找我们的母亲，她一定是拼命地在商店里寻找我们。
参考答案
三：单句训练
Then came the time for Devi to take her first lesson. 21世纪教育网版权所有
She dragge_d_her__feet to the side of the pool and sat down, in doubt whether lessons would be helpful. www.21-cn-jy.com
Scanning__aroun_d, Devi spotted her instructor across the pool, together with the little kids who jumped into the water like fish leaping into the ocean. 21·世纪*教育网
She watched in amazement.
Envious as _Devi_w_as, a flush of embarrassment soon crept to her cheeks when a little girl passed by, asking her not to be scared. 21*cnjy*com
How embarrassing! She hung her head.
Soon Angela came over to where Devi sat and introduced herself.【版权所有：21教育】
Devi was astoni_shed_t_o be made aware that Angela had never learned swimming until she was 20. 21教育名师原创作品
Greatly inspired, Devi now regained hope.
She entere_d_the__pool a second time in the company of Angela, several cheerful kids floating near to cheer her on.
Devi began _to_fee_l more at ease, her movement less stiff and her breath more even.
With a grateful _heart,_ Devi realized that she might not be a fearless swimmer, but she would sure have fun trying.
六：单句训练
“Oh no,”I thought,“Where’s Christopher?”
Scared,I was _frozen_ to the spot,overcome with the need to see my brother,to hug and make certain he was all right.
My stomach twisted and turned inside.
I ran _up_and_ down the aisles through the blackness,panic filling my small chest and making it difficult to breathe.
I knocked into d_isplay_s of candy and tripped over toys,all the while frantically calling my brother’s name.21*cnjy*com
Anxious as I was,I could barely see his figure.
Tears of frus_tratio_n and fear trickled down my face,but I continued to run.
“Christine,I’m here.”
Exciteme_nt_too_k my breath away—there in the dark Lego aisle I found Christopher.
He was standi_ng_alo_ne,perfectly still,clutching tightly to the pirate ship set.
I began _to_cry_ out from relief,throwing my arms around him and hugged him tightly.
He hugged__me_ba_ck,saying,“I knew if I waited here,Christine,you would be able to find me.”www-2-1-cnjy-com
Then,I__took__his hand in mine and we went to find our mother,who must be desperately searching the store for us.?2-1-c-n-j-y
四：佳作展现
（一）
Then came th_e_time_ for Devi to take her first lesson. She dragged her feet to the side of the pool and sat down, in doubt whether lessons would be helpful. Scanning around, Devi spotted her instructor across the pool, together with the little kids who jumped into the water like fish leaping into the ocean. She watched in amazement. Envious as Devi was, a flush of embarrassment soon crept to her cheeks when a little girl passed by, asking her not to be scared. How embarrassing! She hung her head. 【出处：21教育名师】
Soon Angela cam_e_over_ to where Devi sat and introduced herself. Devi was astonished to be made aware that Angela had never learned swimming until she was 20. Greatly inspired, Devi now regained hope. She entered the pool a second time in the company of Angela, several cheerful kids floating near to cheer her on. Devi began to feel more at ease, her movement less stiff and her breath more even. With a grateful heart, Devi realized that she might not be a fearless swimmer, but she would sure have fun trying.
（二）
“Oh no,”I__thoug_ht,“Where’s Christopher?”Scared,I was frozen to the spot,overcome with the need to see my brother,to hug and make certain he was all right.My stomach twisted and turned inside.I ran up and down the aisles through the blackness,panic filling my small chest and making it difficult to breathe.I knocked into displays of candy and tripped over toys,all the while frantically calling my brother’s name.Anxious as I was,I could barely see his figure.Tears of frustration and fear trickled down my face,but I continued to run.
“Christine,I’m _here.???_Excitement took my breath away—there in the dark Lego aisle I found Christopher.He was standing alone,perfectly still,clutching tightly to the pirate ship set.I began to cry out from relief,throwing my arms around him and hugged him tightly.He hugged me back,saying,“I knew if I waited here,Christine,you would be able to find me.”Then,I took his hand in mine and we went to find our mother,who must be desperately searching the store for us.?
_21?????????è?????(www.21cnjy.com)_
2022高考英语读后续写精读精炼（二）
一：原文重现
Devi looked__throu_gh the observation window at the kids below, all waiting in line to get into the pool. She turned to her mother with a furious frown on her face. “Mom, they’re all little kids! I抦 15 already! This is ridiculous!21cnjy.com
揑 know, DHYPERLINK "http://www.21cnjy.com" vi, rplied her mother, 揵ut you抮e a beginner, too, and you have to start somewhere!
Devi had neve_r_been_ to a swimming lesson in her life. Between schoolwork and helping on her grandfather抯 farm, she hadn抰 had time for lessons. The closest swimming pool Devi had been to was the alligator pool her mother bought her when she was five. Now that Devi was older, her mother had found a new jo b in the city, and Devi faced a new challenge梥chool field trips to the local pool.
The first day _that_D_evi went with her class to the pool, she had no idea what she was in for. What could be so difficult about swimming? Devi confidently slipped into the water and held onto the side of the pool, expecting to be able to touch the bottom with her feet. But when Devi let go of the side of the pool, she slipped under the water梩he whole pool was one big deep end! Devi threw her arm toward the side of the pool and grabbed the ledge (池壁), out of breath. “I really can’t swim! Everyone’s going to laugh at me!” she thought to herself in a panic.
On the nex_t_fiel_d trip to the pool, Devi sat on the side on a bench, paralyzed with fear. She huddled with a towel over her shoulders, too embarrassed to try again. When she came home, her mother noticed right away that Devi was upset. 揌oney, I抳e signed you up for Angela抯 swimming lessons at the local pool. Soon you抣l learn how to swim just like everyone else, she assured Devi, showing photos of Angela with her prize-winning students.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右；
2. 每段的开头语已为你写好；
Paragraph 1
Then came the time for Devi to take her first lesson.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2
Soon Angela came over to where Devi sat and introduced herself.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
二：文本解析
【分析】本文讲述了黛维因为学_????????¨?????????_助祖父而一直没有时间去游泳，妈妈给黛维在当地找了游泳池学习游泳，黛维初次学习时候感觉很自信，但是真正进入到水里的时候发现游泳比想象中难，不小心呛水的黛维觉得自己很尴尬，恐惧去学游泳，这时黛维的母亲给她报了一个游泳班。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“接着，轮到黛维上她的第一节课了。”可知，第一段描写黛维去上游泳课的情况。
②由第二段首句内容“不久，安吉拉来到黛维坐的地方，做了自我介绍”可知，第二段可描写安吉拉老师和黛维的相处。
2.续写线索：怀疑课程——看别人跳水——感到尴尬——和老师交流——尝试游泳——喜欢上游泳
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.和：together with /as well as
②.路过：pass by/go past
③.鼓励：cheer on/encourage
情绪类
①.感知：feel more__at_ea_se/feel relaxed；astonished/surprised/shocked；in amazement/in surprise
②.积极：fearless /brave
特色句型
1. She drag_ged_he_r feet to the side of the pool and sat down, in doubt whether lessons would be helpful.（由连接词whether引导同位语从句）
2. Devi__spott_ed her instructor across the pool, together with the little kids who jumped into the water like fish leaping into the ocean.（由关系代词who引导限制性定语从句）
三：续写单句训练
然后是黛维上她的第一堂课的时候了。
她拖着脚走到泳池边坐下来，怀疑上课是否有帮助。
环顾四周，黛维发现她的教练穿过游泳池，还有那些孩子们跳进了水里，就像鱼一样跳进了海里。
她惊奇地看着她。
尽管黛维很敏感，但当一个小女孩走过，要求她不要害怕时，她的脸上很快就泛起了一丝尴尬的红晕。
多么令人尴尬啊！她垂着头。
不久，安吉拉来到黛维坐着的地方，介绍了自己。
黛维惊讶地得知安吉拉直到20岁才学过游泳。
深受鼓舞后，德维现在重新获得了希望。
她在安吉拉的陪伴下第二次进入游泳池，几个快乐的孩子漂浮在附近为她加油。
黛维开始感到更放松，她的动作不那么僵硬，呼吸更平静。
黛维怀着感激的心意识到她可能不是一个无所畏惧的游泳运动员，但她肯定会很开心。
四：佳作展现
Then came the time for Devi to take her first lesson. 21教育网
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Soon Angela came over to where Devi sat and introduced herself. 21穋n穓y穋om
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
五：课后练笔
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。2·1·c·n·j·y
It was a Saturd_ay_aft_ernoon.The color of the sky was changing,first light gray,then dark gray,and finally dark and dense.The wind was blowing heavily,and the trees were swaying in the strong wind.It began to rain cats and dogs.Soon,the road was filled with puddles from the rain.
On such a sto_rmy_af_ternoon,my mother took my five-year-old brother,Christopher,and me to a new big toy store she had read about in the newspaper.揝o many toys,攖he advertisement had shouted in full and flashy color,搕hat we had to get a huge warehouse to fit them all!
Christopher__and_I_ couldn抰 have been more excited.We ran across the parking lot,through the cold and biting rain,as fast as our little legs could carry us.We left our mother outside to battle with the frustrating umbrella,which never worked when she wanted it to.揅hristine!Take care of your young brother!擬other shouted at the top of her voice.【来源：21·世纪·教育·网】
“Christine!_I???m_go_ing to find the Lego section(乐高积木区)!There’s a new pirate ship I want,and I have four dollars!Maybe I can buy it!”Christopher exclaimed and ran off excitedly.I only half heard him.I took a right turn and,to my wide-eyed delight,found myself in the midst of the Barbie(芭比) World.?【来源：21cnj*y.co*m】
I was stud_ying_a_ Barbie and doing some simple math in my head when suddenly an earthshaking clap of thunder roared from the storm outside.I jumped at the noise,dropping the doll to the floor.The lights flickered(闪烁) once and died,covering everything in a blanket of blackness.Thunder continued to shake the sky and lightning illuminated the store for seconds,casting frightening shadows on my mind.
Paragraph 1:
“Oh no,”I thought,“Where’s Christopher?”?
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph 2:
揅hristine,I抦 here.敔
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
六：单句训练
哦，不，”我想，“克里斯托弗在哪儿？”
我害怕，吓得呆住了，需要见到我哥哥，拥抱他，确保他很好。
我的胃难受了，正在翻转进去。
我在黑暗的走廊上跑来跑去，恐慌充满了我的内心，使我呼吸困难。
我一边看到糖果，一边被玩具绊倒，一边疯狂地叫着我哥哥的名字。
虽然我很焦虑，但我几乎看不见他的身影。
沮丧和恐惧的眼泪从我的脸上滴了下来，但我继续跑着。
“克里斯汀，我在这里。
“兴奋让我喘住了呼吸——在黑暗的乐高走廊里，我找到了克里斯托弗。
他独自站着，一动不动，紧紧地抓着海盗船。
我开始欣慰地大叫起来，伸出双臂搂住他，紧紧地拥抱着他。
他拥抱我说：“我知道如果我在这里等着，克里斯汀，你就能找到我。
”然后，我把我的手抓住我的手，我们去找我们的母亲，她一定是拼命地在商店里寻找我们。
参考答案
三：单句训练
Then came the time for Devi to take her first lesson. 21世纪教育网版权所有
She dragge_d_her__feet to the side of the pool and sat down, in doubt whether lessons would be helpful. www.21-cn-jy.com
Scanning__aroun_d, Devi spotted her instructor across the pool, together with the little kids who jumped into the water like fish leaping into the ocean. 21·世纪*教育网
She watched in amazement.
Envious as _Devi_w_as, a flush of embarrassment soon crept to her cheeks when a little girl passed by, asking her not to be scared. 21*cnjy*com
How embarrassing! She hung her head.
Soon Angela came over to where Devi sat and introduced herself.【版权所有：21教育】
Devi was astoni_shed_t_o be made aware that Angela had never learned swimming until she was 20. 21教育名师原创作品
Greatly inspired, Devi now regained hope.
She entere_d_the__pool a second time in the company of Angela, several cheerful kids floating near to cheer her on.
Devi began _to_fee_l more at ease, her movement less stiff and her breath more even.
With a grateful _heart,_ Devi realized that she might not be a fearless swimmer, but she would sure have fun trying.
六：单句训练
“Oh no,”I thought,“Where’s Christopher?”
Scared,I was _frozen_ to the spot,overcome with the need to see my brother,to hug and make certain he was all right.
My stomach twisted and turned inside.
I ran _up_and_ down the aisles through the blackness,panic filling my small chest and making it difficult to breathe.
I knocked into d_isplay_s of candy and tripped over toys,all the while frantically calling my brother’s name.21*cnjy*com
Anxious as I was,I could barely see his figure.
Tears of frus_tratio_n and fear trickled down my face,but I continued to run.
“Christine,I’m here.”
Exciteme_nt_too_k my breath away—there in the dark Lego aisle I found Christopher.
He was standi_ng_alo_ne,perfectly still,clutching tightly to the pirate ship set.
I began _to_cry_ out from relief,throwing my arms around him and hugged him tightly.
He hugged__me_ba_ck,saying,“I knew if I waited here,Christine,you would be able to find me.”www-2-1-cnjy-com
Then,I__took__his hand in mine and we went to find our mother,who must be desperately searching the store for us.?2-1-c-n-j-y
四：佳作展现
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Then came th_e_time_ for Devi to take her first lesson. She dragged her feet to the side of the pool and sat down, in doubt whether lessons would be helpful. Scanning around, Devi spotted her instructor across the pool, together with the little kids who jumped into the water like fish leaping into the ocean. She watched in amazement. Envious as Devi was, a flush of embarrassment soon crept to her cheeks when a little girl passed by, asking her not to be scared. How embarrassing! She hung her head. 【出处：21教育名师】
Soon Angela cam_e_over_ to where Devi sat and introduced herself. Devi was astonished to be made aware that Angela had never learned swimming until she was 20. Greatly inspired, Devi now regained hope. She entered the pool a second time in the company of Angela, several cheerful kids floating near to cheer her on. Devi began to feel more at ease, her movement less stiff and her breath more even. With a grateful heart, Devi realized that she might not be a fearless swimmer, but she would sure have fun trying.
（二）
“Oh no,”I__thoug_ht,“Where’s Christopher?”Scared,I was frozen to the spot,overcome with the need to see my brother,to hug and make certain he was all right.My stomach twisted and turned inside.I ran up and down the aisles through the blackness,panic filling my small chest and making it difficult to breathe.I knocked into displays of candy and tripped over toys,all the while frantically calling my brother’s name.Anxious as I was,I could barely see his figure.Tears of frustration and fear trickled down my face,but I continued to run.
“Christine,I’m _here.???_Excitement took my breath away—there in the dark Lego aisle I found Christopher.He was standing alone,perfectly still,clutching tightly to the pirate ship set.I began to cry out from relief,throwing my arms around him and hugged him tightly.He hugged me back,saying,“I knew if I waited here,Christine,you would be able to find me.”Then,I took his hand in mine and we went to find our mother,who must be desperately searching the store for us.?
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