中考英语复习---写作部分---记叙文

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记叙文部分
中考英语作文专题复习
文体学习（2）
记事篇
（记一件好事、一次车祸，一次经历； 一次游记 ；学校生活 ；课外活动；有意义的一天；难忘的一件事；节日；记一次运动会，第一次做家务，最让人激动的时刻，一次野餐）
写人篇
（自我介绍、同学、老师、历史人物，我的家庭、我的歌手）
状物篇
（兴趣，爱好，宠物， 我最喜欢的颜色、歌曲，梦想)
地理篇：
（家乡、社区、学校，英语角、城市 、风景点、）
一、知识小点滴
记叙文-----记事篇：
（Jim’s day; 有意义的一天；记一次运动会；记一次难忘的经历 ；记一件好事；记一次车祸；记一次游记；一次野餐；学校生活 ；难忘的一件事；节日（母亲节、春节）；第一次做家务；最让人激动的时刻；我的课外活动；日记一则）
二、文体范围学习
Today is Sunday. I got up very early in the morning. After breakfast I went to the bookstore. I wanted to buy a book Robinson Crusoe. I looked for the book for quite some time ,but I couldn't find it. The shopkeeper then came to help me. I was very glad that I got the book at last.　　In the afternoon I called on my friend Wang Lin. He just came back from Beijing. We talked a lot. In the evening I watched an interesting play on TV. I enjoyed it very much. i had a wonderful time.
Model 1: My day
范文展示
Model 4: An interesting day
Today is Friday. It is my thirteenth birthday. I got up very early in the morning and put on my new clothes happily. My parents bought me the new clothes as my birthday presents. I went to school earlier than before. I invited many of my classmates to come to my birthday party in the evening.
Evening came at last. Many of my classmates came to my home. They bought me lots of beautiful presents. They all said, “Happy birthday to you!" We sang birthday songs happily. Then my parents brought out a big birthday cake, saying, "We love you for ever. Happy birthday!"
　　At the end of the party, we ate the birthday cake and some other delicious food. How happy I was!
Model 2: What a bad day
It was a sunny day. We decided to have a picnic outside the city. In the morning, we took an early bus to Nanhui . It was quite a colorful world. there were green trees, orange leaves, red peach blossoms（桃花）. At noon, we reached the place, we sat by the river bank（河岸） and took out a lot of things, such as bread, orange juice, apples, cakes, eggs and so on. But all of a sudden（突然）, it began to rain. Unluckily there was no shelter（遮雨处） nearby. We had to take a bus to go back home in a hurry.
What an unforgettable picnic it was!
Not long ago, eight young people from Wuxi made a charity bicycle trip along the Grand Canal. The purpose of their trip was to raise money for Project Hope. They left Wuxi on May 20 and arrived in Beijing on June 5. Though the ride was long and tough, they went all the way in high spirits. With the help of the people, they collected / raised more than 50,000 yuan. After the long trip, they were tired, but they were happy. They were proud of what they had done. It is an unusual experience that they will never forget.
Task 5 A Charity Bicycle Trip
　　On the afternoon of November 18, we had the opening ceremony(仪式) of the fourth Jiaokou Middle School sports festival. Each class gave a wonderful performance. The next day, we had an exciting sports meeting. Many players were in it. All the others just watched them. Some were busy writing articles about it. The boys and girls 1500 meters races were the most exciting games. The relay races were exciting, too. Everyone cheered for the competitions. They did their best. When they scored for their own class, everyone was so excited that they jumped to their feet. The sports meeting didn’t end until four in the afternoon. we were tired, but we were so happy.
Model 3: A school sports meet
The other day, Tom was riding along the street. Suddenly, a car was running towards him fast. He was so frightened that he quickly turned to the left side. But it was too late. The car hit his bike and he fell off it. When the driver realized that he had caused an accident, he got such a fright that he took flight with his car. He was soon out of sight, leaving Tom helpless on the spot. Fortunately a passer-by happened to see what had happened and remembered the number of the car. He reported this to the police. Now the driver has been caught and will be punished for his wrong doing.
Model 6: An traffic accident
One day, I went to ski with my friend, Li Mei. we were playing happily on the ice when i heard a shout "help". i turned back and was surprised to see a boy falling into a ice hole.
　　But neither of us could swim. so Li Mei and i ran to ask for help. A few minutes later, a policeman came and pulled the boy out of the water. What an unusual experience it was!
Model 7:一件好事
We had an English evening yesterday. there were many performances. almost everyone took part in it. miss tang joined us. she sang us some nice English songs, we enjoyed her sweet voice very much.
　　Helen's recitation was so good that she gave three encores. peter, Eric, and martin's short play was so interesting that we couldn't help laughing. towards the end of the party we danced and sang together. we not only practiced our English but also had a good time.
Model 8 (An English Evening)
The summer holiday is coming. I’m going to have a good rest and learn to relax myself. I will read more useful books because reading more books is not only interesting but also can make me learn more knowledge. I will try to spend more time in chatting with my parents and help them to do some housework. I am going to take part in the social activities so that I can know more about the society. If possible, I’d like to go to Shanghai for a visit of the World Expo. I’m sure I’ll have an interesting and meaningful summer holiday.
Model 9: A plan for summer holiday
Model 10 :我的变化
I used to be a shy girl in my primary school. I was weak in English at that time, especially for spoken English. So I was afraid to answer the teacher’s questions during English classes.
After I entered my dream middle school, something changed. I started to learn many interesting English stories and my English teacher was patient to help me a lot. I studied hard in class and practiced by watching films and listening to English songs in my free time. Little by little, I found it more and more interesting to learn English. I could even talk with my classmates fluently in English and I was not shy any more. At last, I got high grades in English and I had confidence to do it better in the future.
My life in the future will be colorful and meaningful.
I’m going to be a good doctor after I graduate from the university. I believe I’ll bring my parents health and happiness. In my spare time, I’ll stay with my family. We’ll travel a lot and do lots of sports. I’ll also read as many books as I can for I want to improve myself. Even if I work, I will never give up studying.
I’m sure my dream will come true because of my hard work and the life in the future will get better and better.
Model 11: My life in the future
My junior school life will end soon. During the three years, many things have moved me deeply and I can’t forget them forever.
My school is very beautiful. There are many ta ll buildings, all kinds of trees and flowers. All of my teachers are very kind and excellent. They taught us carefully. They taught us not only the knowledge but also how to be a real person. Each of classmates is good. We studied and played together and we helped each other.
I will remember my school life forever.
Model 12: My school life
三、写作前应注意问题：
2. 审题，找出关键词字 词, using connectives and adding details and specific information. )
3. 注意短文的人称、时态、文风时态the requirement person, tense, style） 。
1.看懂提示，注意题外话（ the references who, what, where, when, why, how)
4. 抓住记叙描绘文体要点：时间、地点、人物、事件的前后经过。
① 点题（时间、地点、人物、事件）
② 事件的起因
③ 事件的发展/过程
④ 事件的结果
⑤ 扣题
四、写作步骤
1. 把内容要点在稿纸上列成提纲。
2. 连词成句，连句成文。
3.成文后认真检查，确信无一要点遗漏。
4. 注意字句段数，
5.注意标点符号、
6.注意句式、句型、长句的使用等
五、写作要求
根据下列图画中 Tom 骑自行车的经历，用英语写一篇故事。
短文要写得连贯、完整。
Sample 1---例子讲解
1. topic :
2. Tense( generally):
3. Person:
1. Go over the requirement
A story （a traffic accident)
past tense
Tom , he
Tom /ride a bike
Along the street/road
A few days ago/ the other day/ one day
2. Go over the pictures
（who, what, where, when, why, how)
A car / run fast to/run into him
Tom/ fall off his bike
Suddenly
2. Go over the pictures
（who, what, where, when, why, how)
The driver/ frightened/ run away
2. Go over the pictures
（who, what, where, when, why, how)
A woman/ remember the number of the car
The police
The driver/ catch
2. Go over the pictures
（who, what, where, when, why, how)
Key words
sentences
A woman saw the accident and remembered the number of the car. She called the police. The driver was caught.
ride a bike
/run fast to
see the accident
/remember the
number
/call the police /be caught
be frightened /run away
hit him
/fall off his bike
When Tom was riding along the street. A car ran fast to him.
The car hit him. And he fell off his bike.
The driver was so frightened that he ran away.
1、几天前
the other day; several days ago
2、使人感到意外
to one’s surprise
3、就在这时
at that moment; at that time
常用关联词
① 副词：suddenly, unfortunately,
luckily, immediately
as a result ……
② so/such…that…
③ two hours later,
④ …and…
The other day, Tom was riding along the street when he saw a car run fast towards him. He turned left quickly but it was too late. The car hit him and he fell off his bike. The driver of the car was so frightened that he ran away as fast as he could. He was soon out of sight, leaving Tom helpless on the spot. Fortunately, a woman happened to see it and remembered the number of the car. She called the policeman and told him what had happened. Finally, the driver was caught and punished for his wrong doing.
参考范文
小结：写作的步骤
1.审题 在头脑中搜索你想用的文体
2.点题 想好开头句
3.简述经过及结果
4.扣题收尾,写出结尾句
5.补充，完善，有用句式，加上过渡词。
Create your writing !作文练习
下面4幅图片描述的是星期天上午在中山公园里发生的一件事。请根据图片所提供的信息用英语为你校的“英语园地”写一篇短文。
注意：①短文须包括所有图片的主要内容。短文的内容要连贯、完整；
②短文单词数：100左右（已给句子中的单词不计入总词数）；
③参考词汇：货摊stand (n.) ; 抢夺 snatch (v.) ; 逮捕 arrest (v.)
1．点题（时间、地点）
星期天上午，中山公园，冰淇淋货摊旁
2．事件的起因
年轻妇女的包被抢
3．事件的发展/过程
人们追赶抢包者 ；长排椅上坐着一位老人；抢包者从老人身旁跑过，老人用伞将他绊倒
4．事件的结果
两名警察逮捕抢劫者：
5．扣题
妇女感谢老人，人们称赞老人的机智
审题
描述过去个人经历
第三人称
4.主题：
3.人称：
1.体裁：
2.时态：
记叙文体
一般过去时
星期天上午，中山公园，冰淇淋货摊
One Sunday morning,；in Zhongshan Park.；At an ice-cream stand
年轻妇女的包被抢
snatch her handbag away
人们追赶抢包者
run after the snatcher
在附近长排椅上坐着一位老人
There be sb. sitting on the bench nearby
提纲
从老人身旁跑过
Run past the old man
拿起伞；将伞放在他两腿之间；
pick up his umbrella ; put it between the two legs of the snatcher;
摔一大跟斗
fall down on the ground heavily
两名警察来到并逮捕抢劫者
Came in a police car; arrest sb.
感谢老人的帮助
Thank sb. for his help
称赞老人的机智
Praise the old man for his cleverness
1、熟悉记叙文常见文章，能熟练一人一事
2、重点整理 记叙文常见用语并加以运用
3、选择以下的一篇作文作为今天的作业
课外作业：
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