人教新目标版英语九年级全Unit 1 How can we become good learners?作文学案（含答案）

单元话题写作Unit 1 How can we become good learners?
课题：学习问题及如何解压
【话题相关参考谚语】
1. Time flies. 时间飞逝。
2. A good book is a good learner. 好书如挚友。
3. Easier said than done. 说易行难。
4. Well begun, half done. 好的开始是成功的一半。
【写作微技能】
主题句 (Topic sentence) 是概括段落中心思想、反映作者写作意图的一个概括性句子，是段落的核心所在。段首的主题句开门见山，直接点明段落的主线。段尾主题句具有总结作用，是对前面句子的归纳总结。
写主题句要注意:
1.归纳出你要写的文章的几个要点。
2.提炼出一句能概括上述几个要点的话
3.主题句应具有可读性，能吸引读者。
Ex：请从ABC中给下面文章选择合适的主题句
A. I think school is a place where I can enjoy friendship.
B. School is a place where I can meet lots of challenges.
C. School is a place where I can not only get knowledge but also enjoy colorful activities.
My School Life
When I listen to the teachers in class, I feel I become knowledgeable.
That makes me feel happy and excited. When I work out difficult problems, I can feel I am like a successful winner and become more confident. On the playground, I play sports with my friends and we are full of energy. What’s more, we can do other colorful activities, such as singing competition, school trips and so on. How wonderful my school life is!
【语言积累】
Describe problems：根据首字母或中文提示，完成下列句子。
1. Jenny is a slow reader. She finds it d to increase her reading (速度).
2. Bob has some trouble in m English words.
3. Lucy's biggest problem is that she often (出错) in grammar.
4.I can't (发音正确).
5. it's difficult for Catherine (提高听力技能).
6. Victor doesn't know (如何记住) his vocabulary.
7. (我觉得难的另一件事) is writing.
Describe solutions：根据首字母或中文，完成下列针对以上问题的建议。
1. Jenny could improve her reading speed by (通过大量阅读).
I believe that the m she reads, the f she'll be.
2. It's a good i to remember English words by
(通过制作单词卡片) and using them more often.
3. I think t notes in English class is a good w to learn grammar well.
4. The b way to get the pronunciation right is by l to tapes.
5. I think Catherine (应该) do lots of listening practice.
6. (大量阅读) is helpful for Victor (记住) his vocabulary.
7. What about k an English diary or f a pen pal from an English-speaking country?
【篇章训练】
厦门一中校园杂志《采墨》以“How to be a good learner?"为题征稿，谈一谈你在学习方法或学习习惯方面的建议。题目已给出。词数不少于80词。
【写作指导】
不妨进行头脑风暴式的搜索，你能想到的好的学习经验，用英语表达出来就可以了。
开头：1. good learning habits 2. be a good learner
方法：3. concentrate on=focus on 4. take notes .
5. review what we’ve learned after class 6. do homework on time
7. don't be afraid of making mistakes 8.learn to share ideas with classmates
9. work/study hard 10.课本所提供的那些短语
总结：11. I feel it's beneficial(有益的) to do .
相关句式
1.课本所提供的句式 2.you/we should/ can +do
3. why not do...? 4. what about doing...?
5. it's a good idea to do... 6. I feel it's beneficial to do...
7.have difficulty in doing sth 8.have a hard time with
9.can't get the pronunciation right 10.join an English language club
11.can't understand the teacher 12.find a pen pal to practice writing
13.forget a lot of words 14.I've learned a lot that way.
15.I think it helps. 16.The best way to study is to...
17.One of the secrets of... is...(...的秘诀之一是... ) 18.课本上提供的其他句型(见Pg8)
【普通习作】
How to be a good learner?
Everyone wants to study well, To be a good learner, I think good learning habits are necessary.
First, it's very important for us to listen to the teacher carefully and take down some notes. After class, we should review the lessons, because we can't remember and understand everything in class. Second, when we are tired, we' d better go outside to do sports to relax ourselves.
In all, we need to work hard and never give up. I hope all of us will become good learners.
(点评：这是每一位同学只要稍稍努力就能创作出的文章，该文有以下特点：1.思路清楚, 要点齐全，语言较流畅。2.有first, second, in all将全文很好地贯穿起来，使文章具有连贯性和层次感。但是，不足的是文章略显单薄，仍有改进和提升空间。)
【高分习作】
How to be a good learner?
Nowadays, people expect to achieve good grades, so it's essential, particularly for us students, to learn about how to be a good learner. Here I'd like to share my suggestions.
It goes without saying that listening to teachers carefully and taking down notes in class is the first step, yet it's far from enough. To increase efficiency, we should go over what we’ve learned as often as possible after class. If we are tired sitting at the desk or reading books, it's a good idea to go outside. Do sports and breathe fresh air.
However, these tips won't work if we have no enthusiasm for our study. So, be positive! I hope everyone can get great progress in the near future.
(点评：1.文章使用了出彩的词、短语和句型，对原来的简单句进行扩展，为文章增色不 少。2.最后一段的结尾更是提出“没有学习热情, 一切都是无效的”的观点，精辟而有新意。3.作者看问题的深度和扎实的语言功底可见一斑。)
【小试牛刀】 How to be a good learner?