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如何写想象类作文?
想象类作文就是作者根据已有的生活经验和知识,超越现实生活来勾画出从未见过或者不曾出现过的生活图景的文章。
具体内容
1.内容安排:文章可以分为三段:首段,进行概述;中间部分,具体描写;结尾对文章进行总结。
2.语言特征:(1)措辞准确,正确运用时态和语态。
(2)尽量使用多种表达方式。
3.注意事项:
(1)想象要丰富合理。要让读者感到真实可信。
(2)精心组织,清楚表达。
亮点句式
1.It
can
help
us
in
many
ways.
2.It
would
be
of
great
help
for
you
if
you
own...
3.Sometimes
I
dream
about
life
in
the
future.
4.Maybe
in
the
future
we
can...
5.We
will
be
living
a...life
in
the
future.
亮点句式
6.I
believe
the
dream
will
come
true
someday.
7.In
my
opinion,the
dream
will
become
a
reality
one
day.
8.I
would
like
to
play...
9.There
will
be
many...
10.It
will
be
very
comfortable
to
live...
想象类作文
2.语言措辞准确,正确时态和语态
1.文章内容可以为“三段式”
3.想象要丰富合理,真实可信
2050年时,人们的运动场所会是什么样的?
请你根据下面的提示,以“Future
Stadiums
for
Common
People
in
2050”为题,写一篇80词左右的短文。
1.未来的运动场将建在地下,不占用地上空间,而且冬暖夏凉,非常适合运动;
2.运动设施非常齐全,每个人都可以找到自己感兴趣的运动项目;
3.专门安排机器人陪你运动,比如打乒乓球、羽毛球等,使运动不再枯燥乏味。
参考词汇:陪伴partner 羽毛球
badminton
体裁
说明文
话题
2050年运动场所
时态
一般将来时
人称
第三人称
写作指导
Ⅰ.根据提示翻译下面句子
1.近来,高智能的机器人出现了。(intelligent;arise)
____________________________________________________
2.有些可以打字、发信号。(type;signal)
____________________________________________________
3.有些能处理一些重要事情。(deal
with)
____________________________________________________
4.在某种程度上说,电脑改变了我们的生活。(in
a
way)
____________________________________________________
5.许多学生对电脑如此着迷以至于在电脑上花费了太多的时间。(so...that...)
____________________________________________________
6.结果,部分学生考试不及格。(as
a
result)
____________________________________________________
7.即使如此,电脑仍在我们的日常生活中起着很重要的作用。(anyhow)
________________________________________________________________
【答案】
1.
High
intelligent
robots
have
arisen
recently.
2.Some
can
type
and
signal.
3.Some
can
deal
with
some
important
things.
4.In
a
way,computers
have
changed
our
life.
5.Many
students
become
so
crazy
about
computers
that
they
spend
too
much
time
on
them.
6.As
a
result,some
students
fail
in
the
exam.
7.Anyhow,computers
play
an
important
part
in
our
life.
Ⅱ.将以上句子连成一段语言流畅、用词准确、逻辑严密的短文__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Ⅰ.词汇
1._____________________运动器械
2.___________独自
3.___________节省空间
sports
equipment
alone
save
space
Ⅱ.句式
1.It
would
be
very
comfortable
to
exercise
in
an
underground
stadium.
It
is
warm
in
winter
and
cool
in
summer.(用as连接句子)
___________________________________________________________________________________________________
It
would
be
very
comfortable
to
exercise
in
an
underground
stadium
as
it
is
warm
in
winter
and
cool
in
summer.
Ⅱ.句式
2.There
will
be
so
many
different
kinds
of
sports
equipment
in
the
stadiums.
Everyone
will
be
able
to
find
something
to
interest
them.
(用so...that...改写句子)
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
There
will
be
so
many
different
kinds
of
sports
equipment
in
the
stadiums
that
everyone
will
be
able
to
find
something
to
interest
them.
Ⅱ.句式
3.The
sports
stadiums
of
the
future
will
have
robots.
Robots
can
partner
us
in
games
like
table
tennis
and
badminton.
(用不定式改写句子)
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________
The
sports
stadiums
of
the
future
will
have
robots
to
partner
us
in
games
like
table
tennis
and
badminton.
________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________
Future
Stadiums
for
Common
People
in
2050
What
will
sports
stadiums
in
2050
be
like?Maybe
they'll
be
built
underground
as
to
save
space.
It
would
be
very
comfortable
to
exercise
in
them,as
it's
warm
in
winter
and
cool
in
summer
inside.
参考范文
1.首段,进行概述
Hopefully,there
will
be
so
many
different
kinds
of
sports
equipment
in
the
stadiums
that
everyone
will
be
able
to
find
something
to
interest
them.
参考范文
2.中间部分,具体描写
I
think
the
future's
sports
stadiums
will
have
robots
to
partner
us
in
games
like
table
tennis
and
badminton.
That
way
we
can
play
team
games
even
when
we're
alone.
And
sports
done
in
such
stadiums
will
be
much
more
entertaining.
参考范文
3.结尾,对文章进行总结
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