2022届浙江高考英语二轮复习书面表达读后续写专项训练二10篇（附答案解析）

2022届浙江高考英语总复习-读后续写专项训练二
1．阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
The
Miracle
Charlie
entered
the
shop
and
laid
the
damp
fifty
pence
on
the
counter.
“One
Wonka’s
Whipple-Scrumptious
Fudgemallow
Delight,’’
he
said,
remembering
how
much
he
had
loved
the
one
he
had
on
his
birthday.
The
man
behind
the
counter
looked
fat.
The
fat
around
his
neck
bulged
out
all
around
the
top
of
his
collar
like
a
rubber
ring.
He
handed
the
chocolate
bar
to
Charlie.
Charlie
grabbed
it
and
quickly
tore
off
the
wrapper
and
took
an
enormous
bite.
Then
he
took
another...
and
another...
and
oh,
the
joy
of
being
able
to
cram
large
pieces
of
something
sweet
and
solid
into
one’s
mouth!
“You
look
like
you
wanted
that
one,
sonny,
’’
the
shopkeeper
said
pleasantly.
Charlie
nodded,
his
mouth
bulging
with
chocolate.
The
shopkeeper
put
Charlie’s
change
on
the
counter.
“Take
it
easy,”
he
said.
“It’ll
give
you
a
tummy-ache
if
you
swallow
it
like
that
without
chewing.”
Charlie
went
on
wolfing
the
chocolate.
He
couldn’t
stop.
And
in
less
than
half
a
minute,
the
whole
thing
had
disappeared
down
his
throat.
He
was
quite
out
of
breath,
but
he
felt
marvelously,
extraordinarily
happy.
He
reached
out
a
hand
to
take
the
change.
Then
he
paused.
His
eyes
were
just
above
the
level
of
the
counter.
They
were
staring
at
the
silver
coins
lying
there.
Surely
it
wouldn’t
matter
if
he
spent
just
one
more.
“I
think,”
he
said
quietly,
“I
think.
I’ll
have
just
one
more
of
those
chocolate
bars.
The
same
kind
as
before,
please.”
“Why
not?”
the
fat
shopkeeper
said,
reaching
behind
him
again
and
taking
another
Whipple-Scrumptious
Fudgemallow
Delight
from
the
shelf.
He
laid
it
on
the
counter.
Charlie
picked
it
up
and
tore
off
the
wrapper...and
suddenly...from
underneath
the
wrapper..
.there
came
a
brilliant
flash
of
gold.
Charlie’s
heart
stood
still.
“It’s
a
Golden
Ticket!”
screamed
the
shopkeeper,
leaping
about
a
foot
in
the
air.
“You’ve
got
a
Golden
Ticket!
You’ve
found
the
last
Golden
Ticket!
You
will
be
one
of
the
five
lucky
children
to
be
shown
around
Wonka’s
chocolate
factory.
Watch
out
now,
sonny!
Don’t
tear
it
as
you
unwrap
it!
That
thing
is
precious!”
In
a
few
seconds,
there
was
a
crowd
of
about
twenty
people
clustering
around
Charlie,
and
many
more
were
pushing
their
way
in
from
the
street.
注意：
1.
所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.
至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.
续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语己为你写好；
4.
续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph
1:
Charlie
hadn’t
moved.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph
2:
Then
the
fat
shopkeeper
shouted,
pushing
his
way
through
the
crowd
and
taking
Charlie
firmly
by
the
arm.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Paragraph
1:
Charlie
hadn't
moved.
He
hadn’t
even
unwrapped
the
Golden
Ticket
from
around
the
chocolate
bar.
He
was
standing
very
still,
holding
it
tightly
with
both
hands
while
the
crowd
pushed
and
shouted
all
around
him.
He
felt
quite
dizzy.
There
was
a
peculiar
floating
sensation
coming
over
him,
as
though
he
were
floating
up
in
the
air
like
a
balloon.
His
feet
didn’t
seem
to
be
touching
the
ground
at
all.
He
could
hear
his
heart
thumping
away
loudly
somewhere
in
his
throat.
Paragraph
2:
Then
the
fat
shopkeeper
shouted,
pushing
his
way
through
the
crowd
and
taking
Charlie
firmly
by
the
arm.
“Leave
the
kid
alone,
will
you!
Make
way
there!
Let
him
out!”
And
to
Charlie,
as
he
led
him
to
the
door,
he
whispered,
“Don't
you
let
anybody
have
it!
Take
it
straight
home,
quickly,
before
you
lose
it!”
“Thank
you!”
Charlie
said,
and
off
he
went,
running
through
the
street
as
fast
as
his
legs
would
go.
And
as
he
flew
past
Mr.
Willy
Wonka’s
chocolate
factory,
he
turned
and
waved
at
it
and
sang
out,
“I’ll
be
seeing
you!
I'll
be
seeing
you
soon!”
And
five
minutes
later
he
arrived
at
his
own
home.
【分析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Charlie在买巧克力时得到了参观旺卡巧克力工厂的金券，周围的人迅速围住了他，店主则让对他说不要给任何人，赶紧回家，Charlie谢了店主以最快的速度跑回了家。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“Charlie没有动。”可知，第一段可描写Charlie被那么多人围住时的感受和反应，他感到头晕且心在喉咙处剧烈地怦怦直跳。
②由第二段首句内容“这时，那个胖店主大叫着从人群中挤过去，紧紧抓住Charlie的胳膊。”可知，第二段可描写店主是如何叮嘱Charlie的，以及Charlie如何跑回家的。
2.续写线索：Charlie没有动——周围的人推着喊着——Charlie感到头晕——店主抓住Charlie的胳膊——店主让Charlie赶紧回家——Charlie跑回家
3.词汇激活
行为类
打开：unwrap/
open
拿着：hold/
grasp
到家：arrive
at
home
/
get
home
情绪类
特别的：peculiar
/
special
迅速：quickly/
rapidly
【点睛】
[高分句型1]
He
was
standing
very
still,
holding
it
tightly
with
both
hands
while
the
crowd
pushed
and
shouted
all
around
him.
(运用了现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2]
And
as
he
flew
past
Mr.
Willy
Wonka’s
chocolate
factory,
he
turned
and
waved
at
it
and
sang
out,
“I’ll
be
seeing
you!
I'll
be
seeing
you
soon!”(运用了as引导时间状语从句)
2．阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
After
dinner,
Mrs.
Quimby
told
the
family
that
Grandma,
who
lived
on
a
farm,
had
sent
in
a
lot
of
pumpkins
for
jack-o’-lanterns
(空心南瓜灯)
for
the
neighborhood
children.
There
was
one
in
the
basement
waiting
to
be
carved,
she
added.
Ramona
sprang
to
her
feet
and
dashed
down
to
bring
it
up,
but
it
was
too
heavy
for
a
second-grader.
Finally
Mr.
Quimby
gave
a
hand.
“Let’s
make
it
smile
like
last
year,”
exclaimed
Ramona.
“Hmm.
Let’s
see.”
Mr.
Quimby
studied
the
pumpkin,
turning
it
to
find
the
best
side
for
the
face.
With
a
pencil
he
sketched
(素描)
a
nose-shaped
nose,
not
a
triangle.
Then
the
mouth
turned
up
on
both
sides.
“smiling!”
Ramona
clapped
her
hands.
Mr.
Quimby
nodded
with
a
smile,
cut
a
circle
around
the
top
of
the
pumpkin
and
lifted
it
off
for
a
lid.
Without
being
asked,
Ramona
found
a
big
spoon
for
scooping
out
the
seeds.
Picky-picky,
the
Quimbys'
shabby
old
cat,
came
into
the
kitchen
to
see
if
something
had
been
put
in
his
dish.
When
he
found
that
it
had
not,
he
paused,
sniffed
the
pumpkin
smell
and
angrily
walked
out
with
his
tail
twitching.
Mr.
Quimby
began
to
whistle
as
he
carved
with
skill
and
care,
first
a
mouthful
of
teeth,
each
one
neat
and
square,
then
eyes
and
eyebrows.
He
was
working
on
two
ears
shaped
like
question
marks
when
Mrs.
Quimby
announced
it
was
bedtime
for
Ramona.
Unwillingly
Ramona
ran,
took
a
shower
and
quickly
returned.
Now,
Mr.
Quimby
had
just
carved
a
few
C-shaped
curls
(卷发)
around
the
hole
in
the
top
of
the
pumpkin.
He
reached
inside
and
dug
a
candle
holder
in
the
bottom.
“There,”
he
said,
putting
down
his
knife.
“A
work
of
art.”
Mrs.
Quimby
found
a
candle
stub
(残根),
inserted
it
in
the
pumpkin,
lit
it
and
set
the
lid
in
place.
Ramona
turned
off
the
light.
The
jack-o’-lantern
was
smiling
with
a
flickering
flame.
“Wow!”
Ramona
threw
her
arms
around
her
father
before
going
to
bed
with
great
satisfaction.
注意：
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph
1:
In
the
middle
of
the
night
Ramona
awoke
to
a
noise.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph
2:
On
the
table
their
jack-o’-lantern
no
longer
had
a
whole
face.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】In
the
middle
of
the
night,
Ramona
awoke
to
a
noise.
Ramona
turned
on
the
light
and
jumped
out
of
bed
angrily.
It
turned
out
that
the
cat
accidentally
bumped
the
jack-o’-lantern
to
the
floor
while
catching
mice.
It
was
broken.
Looking
at
her
beloved
jack-o-lantern
lying
on
the
floor,
the
candle
in
it
went
out,
Ramona
began
to
cry.
Mr.
Quimby
was
also
woken
up,
got
up
to
comfort
Ramona
and
helped
her
take
the
jack-o’-lantern
to
the
table.
On
the
table
their
jack-o’-lantern
no
longer
had
a
whole
face.
Ramona
continued
to
cry,
and
dad
decided
to
carve
the
pumpkin
again.
He
picked
up
the
knife
and
carved
along
the
incomplete
face
of
the
pumpkin.
The
incomplete
face
became
funnier,
and
the
lantern
laughed
more
brightly.
Dad
said,
“Ramona,
don't
cry.
Look
at
your
pumpkin
lantern.
It’s
alive
again.”
Ramona
dried
her
tears
and
smiled
with
greater
satisfaction.
【分析】
本文以南瓜灯为线索展开，讲述了住在农场的奶奶送来南瓜可以做南瓜灯，爸爸Mr.
Quimby帮助女儿，精心雕刻南瓜灯，女儿Ramona非常满意。结果晚上半夜南瓜灯被猫撞到地板上，Ramona非常伤心。爸爸重塑南瓜灯，让女儿重新欢乐起来的故事。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“半夜里，Ramona被一声吵醒了。”可知，第一段可描写猫把南瓜灯撞到地上，南瓜灯坏了，Ramona很伤心。
②由第二段首句内容“在桌子上，他们的南瓜灯不再是一张完整的脸了。”可知，第二段可描写爸爸重塑南瓜灯，Ramona重新欢乐起来。
2.续写线索：摔坏——伤心——重塑——欢乐
3.词汇激活
行为类
①摔坏：
bump
sth
to
the
floor
broken/
fall/drop
to
the
ground
and
become
damaged
②重塑：remodel
/carve
again
情绪类
①伤心：sad
/upset/heart-broken
②欢乐：be
happy/feel
pleased/
with
greater
satisfaction
【点睛】
[高分句型1].
It
turned
out
that
the
cat
accidentally
bumped
the
jack-o’-lantern
to
the
floor
while
catching
mice.
(that引导的名词性从句、while引导的时间状语从句的省略)
[高分句型2].
Looking
at
her
beloved
jack-o-lantern
lying
on
the
floor,
the
candle
in
it
went
out,
Ramona
began
to
cry.
(现在分词作状语)
3．阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Break
was
almost
over.
Normally,
I
didn’t
bother
to
keep
track
of
Michael
Peterson.
I
tried
to
ignore
him.
But
today
was
Valentine’s
Day,
a
special
day
for
children
to
exchange
“valentine
cards”
with
each
of
their
classmates.
No
way
was
I
going
to
let
him
play
a
mean
trick
today.
Michael
Peterson
sits
next
to
me
in
class.
He’s
also
my
neighbor.
So
I
know
him.
And
I
was
sure
he
was
up
to
something,
because
he
always
is.
Last
week,
he
put
a
sign
on
my
back
that
said
Sing
to
Me!
It
was
terrible.
Sure,
maybe
it
was
funny
at
first,
if
a
little
confusing.
Everywhere
I
went,
people
I
didn’t
even
know
started
singing
to
me.
But
once
I
realized
it
was
just
because
of
the
sign
on
my
back,
I
was
extremely
angry.
Michael
played
tricks
like
that
all
the
time.
So
I
knew
what
he
was
doing
now
—
ruining
someone’s
Valentine’s
Day.
I
was
going
to
stop
him.
But
where
was
he?
He
wasn’t
on
the
playground
for
break
as
supposed
to
be.
“Have
you
seen
Michael?”
I
asked
Josh,
who
swung
down
from
the
monkey
bars
and
said,
“Which
Michael?”
“Michael
Peterson,”
I
said.
I
had
forgotten
about
Michael
Rogers,
the
new
kid
in
our
class.
Josh
shrugged.
“Haven’t
seen
him.”
Then
he
grinned.
“He’s
probably
off
playing
a
funny
trick.”
I
sighed.
“That’s
what
I’m
afraid
of.”
I
headed
for
the
classroom.
There
was
Michael
Peterson
—
at
Michael
Rogers’
desk,
digging
in
his
box
of
valentine
cards!
“Michael,
leave
that
box
alone!”
I
ordered.
“Hurry
and
help
me,”
Michael
said.
I
stared
at
him
in
amazement.
He
wanted
me
to
help
him?
“No
way!”
I
said,
thinking
that
he
was
stealing
valentine
cards
from
Michael
Rogers’
box.
Then,
after
watching
him
for
a
moment,
I
added,
“What
are
you
doing,
anyway?”
注意：
1.
所续写短文的词数应为
150
左右；
2.
至少使用
5
个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.
续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4.
续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph
1：
The
more
I
watched
my
next-door
neighbor,
the
more
confused
I
became.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph
2:
I
stood
there,
not
quite
believing
what
I
was
hearing.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】One
Possible
Version:
The
more
I
watched
my
next-door
neighbor
the
more
confused
I
became.
Instead
of
taking
valentines
out
of
the
box.
he
was
putting
them
in.
But
whatever
he
did.
I
was
sure
it
was
wrong.
I
scolded
him
for
picking
on
the
poor
kid.
Michael
just
kept
working
and
denied
playing
a
trick.
He
explained
that
he
was
the
last
person
to
pass
out
his
valentines
before
break.
When
he
got
to
Michael
Rogers'
box,
he
noticed
it
was
empty.
No
one
remembered
to
make
the
new
kid
a
card.
So
actually
he
was
giving
him
his
cards.
After
all,
the
cards
he
received
from
classmates
all
said
"Michael"
on
them.
I
stood
there,
not
quite
believing
what
I
was
hearing.
"You
mean
you're
doing
something
nice?"
I
asked.
"Of
course.
When
haven't
I
been
nice?"
he
teased.
I
blinked
but
gave
no
reply.
I
helped
Michael
to
shake
out
his
cards
through
the
slot
in
his
valentine
box.
Then
we
stuffed
the
cards
into
Michael
Rogers'
box.
I
felt
a
mixture
of
embarrassment
and
satisfaction
striking
into
my
heart.
Maybe
I
had
misunderstood
him
and
maybe
he's
even
kind
of
sweet…in
hidden
sort
of
way.
【分析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Michael
Peterson经常捉弄同学，在情人节那天，他试图破坏别人的情人节，作者正好碰到Michael
Peterson在班级正在翻新来同学的情人节贺卡，并想让作者帮帮他的故事。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我越看我隔壁的邻居，我就越困惑。”可知，第一段可描写作者所看到Michael
Peterson翻新来同学的情人节贺卡的过程。
②由第二段首句内容“我站在那里，不太相信我所听到的。”可知，第二段可描写作者了解到Michael
Peterson这样做的目的。
2.续写线索：捉弄——寻找——发现——真相大白——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.责备：scold/blame/accuse
②.解释：explain/make
an
explanation
to
sb.
③.取笑：tease/make
fun
of
情绪类
①.友善：nice/kind
②.尴尬：embarrassment/discomfiture
【点睛】
[高分句型1].
He
explained
that
he
was
the
last
person
to
pass
out
his
valentines
before
break.（运用连接词that引导的宾语从句）
[高分句型2].
I
felt
a
mixture
of
embarrassment
and
satisfaction
striking
into
my
heart.（运用现在分词作定语）
4．阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
The
excitement
about
Thanksgiving
was
really
building.
Grandma
arrived
with
a
homemade
pecan
pie.
Dad
was
searching
for
his
electric
carving
knife.
Mama
was
in
the
kitchen
humming
a
song.
Little
baby
Lonnie
bounced
up
and
down.
Dad
smelled
the
air
and
sighed.
My
big
brother,
Slim,
who
was
anything
but
slim,
sneaked
off
to
his
room
with
a
slice
of
the
pecan
pie.
Even
our
dog
Fido
was
wagging
his
tail.
Having
set
a
pretty
table,
Mama
looked
up,
smiling.
“Help
me
carry
in
the
food,”
she
said.
Slim,
who
had
come
out
of
his
room
by
this
time,
went
racing
into
the
kitchen.
"
I'll
get
it!
I'll
get
it!”
The
rest
of
us
piled
in
behind
him,
everyone
grabbing
a
dish.
Then
we
watched
Dad
carry
in
the
biggest,
brownest,
best-smelling
turkey
we
had
ever
seen
with
Mama's
hand
under
the
plate,
just
in
case.
Together
they
lowered
the
turkey
to
its
place
at
the
table.
It
was
the
tradition
in
our
family
to
think
of
something
for
which
we
were
most
thankful.
We
all
ran
to
the
table
yelling
something
like
“I'm
thankful
for
school
being
out”
or
“I'm
thankful
for
pecan
pie!”
All
eyes
were
on
that
enormous
turkey
as
we
took
our
seats.
Yes,
everything
was
perfect
except
for
one
thing.
On
that
special
day,
it
was
Dad
who
sat
at
the
head
of
the
table
and
carved
the
turkey.
It
was
an
honor
that
he
had
eagerly
expected
for
days.
Mama
always
called
Dad
a
clumsy
ox.
He
frequently
tripped
(绊倒)
over
his
own
two
feet,
and
he
could
drop
just
about
anything.
We
automatically
eased
back
when
Dad
tested
the
electric
carving
knife
in
the
air.
Dad
went
to
work
on
the
white
meat
first
with
surprisingly
few
problems.
Slice
after
slice
landed
neatly
on
the
plate
with
thick
gravy
(肉汁)。Dad
leaned
forward
and
grabbed
the
end
of
the
left
turkey
leg
and
cut
it
off,
placing
it
whole
on
the
plate.
His
oily
fingers
shone
brightly
in
the
light
of
the
chandelier
(大吊灯)，and
Mama
waved
her
napkin.
“I'm
all
right,
Mama,”
he
said.
“I'm
all
right.
”
注意：
1.
所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.
至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.
续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4.
续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph
1:
But
when
Dad
pulled
back
the
right
turkey
leg,
it
slipped
from
his
oily
fingers.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph
2:
As
Lonnie
yelled,
we
found
a
turkey
leg
was
missing.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】But
when
Dad
pulled
back
the
right
turkey
leg,
it
slipped
from
his
oily
fingers.
“You
clumsy
ox!”
Mom
yelled,
and
she
quickly
grabbed
and
picked
up
the
leg.
Baba
looked
at
the
chandelier
and
looked
annoyed.
We
all
laughed,
and
Fido
started
barking
in
circles
on
the
ground.
Anyway,
our
Thanksgiving
dinner
is
here.
As
Lonnie
yelled,
we
found
a
turkey
leg
was
missing.
Where’s
the
drumstick?
We
felt
very
strange.
Lonnie
kept
calling
and
looking
at
us,
pointing
under
the
table.
We
looked
under
the
table
and
saw
Fido
munching
on
a
big
turkey
leg.
When
he
was
found,
he
stared
back
at
us,
unrepentant.
Mom
said:
“So
Fido
wants
to
have
a
delicious
Thanksgiving,
too.”
Fido
barked
at
us,
as
if
confirming
my
mother’s
words.
We
all
laughed.
It
was
so
much
fun.
【分析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者和家人一起度过的一次快乐的感恩节。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“但当爸爸把他的右火鸡腿拉开时，它从他油腻的手指上滑了下来。”可知，第一段可描写妈妈嗔怪了爸爸，爸爸觉得很羞赧。
②由第二段首句内容“朗尼大喊，我们发现一只火鸡腿不见了。”可知，第二段可描写大家发现火鸡腿不见了，发现狗狗在吃鸡腿。
2.续写线索：嗔怪——懊恼——欢乐——发现鸡腿——回应——开心
3.词汇激活
行为类
①大喊：yell/shout
②开始：start/begin
③发现：find/discover
情绪类
①懊恼：annoyed/upset
②大笑：laugh/guffaw
【点睛】
[高分句型1]
Lonnie
kept
calling
and
looking
at
us,
pointing
under
the
table.
(运用了现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2]
Fido
barked
at
us,
as
if
confirming
my
mother’s
words.
(运用了as
if引导的状语从句的省略)
5．阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
When
I
worked
as
a
nurse,
I
was
on
day
duty
and
while
my
friends
were
on
night
duty.
On
one
shift,
I
remember
I
sensed
something
just
before
going
off
duty
at
11am.
I
had
brought
the
ward
sister
her
morning
tea,
so
I
put
down
the
tea
tray.
The
tray
rattled
and
fell
through
the
window.
At
first
I
thought
I
had
accidentally
knocked
it
over,
but
then
I
felt
the
whole
building
shook
and
patients
screamed.
I
realized
that
we
were
in
the
grips
of
a
tremendous
earthquake.
I
caught
hold
of
a
nearby
patient,
who
was
terribly
frightened
by
it.
I
pushed
her
under
the
bed
and
held
the
bed
in
place
while
I
got
under
it
myself.
I
then
pulled
a
blanket
down
between
us.
As
soon
as
it
settled,
I
decided
to
try
and
get
the
patient
safely
outside,
I
carried
her
out
and
helped
her
down
to
the
lawn,
where
several
other
people
now
had
gathered.
I
knew
the
ward
sister
was
with
another
patient,
so
I
went
back
inside
the
building.
When
I
reached
the
ward
sister,
I
found
her
patient
couldn’t
walk.
We
made
a
seat
for
her
by
linking
our
hands
and
arms,
and
carried
her
outside
together.
We
went
back
through
the
building
to
check
no
one
was
left
behind.
Almost
all
of
the
patients
had
been
able
to
get
themselves
out
of
our
ward,
as
far
as
I
knew.
Once
our
ward
was
cleared,
a
doctor
called
for
volunteers
to
go
down
to
the
isolation
ward
with
him
to
help
more
people.
Another
nurse
and
I
went
down
there.
The
first
thing
we
saw
was
a
bath
in
the
hallway,
We
came
to
the
ruined
ward.
The
doctor
went
in
ahead
of
us
through
the
remains
of
what
had
been
a
doorway.
He
found
one
of
the
nurses
partially
covered
with
rubble
(碎石).
She
was
still
alive
so
we
began
to
clear
the
rubble
away.
Suddenly
the
aftershock
struck.
The
doctor
ordered
us
to
leave.
This
brave
man
intended
to
stay
with
the
trapped
nurse
and
risk
his
own
life.
注意：1.
所叙写的短文词数应为150左右；
2.
应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.
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4.
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We
were
determined
to
save
the
nurse
with
him
together.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Later
in
the
afternoon
I
had
time
to
look
around,
and
saw
the
ruined
building.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Possible
version
one:
We
were
determined
to
save
the
nurse
with
him
together.
We
were
faced
with
falling
rubble
from
time
to
time,
but
not
as
much
as
before.
We
were
as
stubborn
as
ever,
following
the
doctor.
The
trapped
nurse
was
still
alive.
We
focused
our
efforts
on
freeing
from
the
ruins.
Once
she
was
free,
the
doctor
guided
us
through
the
remains
safely.
He
kept
a
perfectly
calm
tone
throughout,
which
helped
soothe
me.my
heart
leaped
with
joy
as
we
successfully
walked
out
of
the
building.
All
of
the
survivors’
gratitude
was
profound,
passionate
and
boundless.
Later
in
the
afternoon
I
had
time
to
look
around,
and
saw
the
ruined
building
.I
felt
like
I
was
floating
in
an
ocean
of
sadness.
In
my
mind’s
eye
I
saw
the
original
building
that
I
worked
in,
so
massive
and
beautiful,
and
the
memories
filled
me
with
unbearable
sadness.
The
doctor
stood
beside
me
and
said
with
a
faint
smile,
“We
should
be
happy
for
those
who
survive
the
earthquake.”
I
managed
to
smile
back
as
the
wind
danced
around
us,
and
I
felt
lucky
to
be
alive.
(160
words)
Possible
version
two:
We
were
determined
to
save
the
nurse
with
him
together.
Fortunately,
the
aftershock
wasn’t
strong.
Once
it
had
passed,
we
focused
our
efforts
on
freeing
the
nurse.
We
removed
the
bricks
and
the
rubble
that
trapped
her
body.
A
sharp
stone
cut
my
hand.
The
sharp
pain
made
to
want
to
cry,
but
I
managed
to
hold
back.
Because
in
this
horrible
earthquake,
what
we
could
do
was
only
struggling
to
grasp
a
chance
of
surviving
for
her.
It
seemed
like
an
eternity
before
we
freed
her
from
the
rubble.
We
carried
her
outside
to
the
lawn.
Later
in
the
afternoon
I
had
time
to
look
around,
and
saw
the
ruined
building.
My
beautiful
workplace
now
lay
beyond
recognition
(lay
in
ruins)
The
only
thing
that
remained
was
broken
walls
amidst
the
dim
dust.
I
felt
a
weight
on
my
chest
as
the
sadness
swelled
inside.
My
musings
were
interrupted
by
the
noise
around
me.
The
rescue
team
was
working
against
the
clock
to
get
people
out
of
the
rubble
alive.
The
patients
were
evacuated
in
an
orderly
manner.
Looking
up
at
the
sky,
I
saw
the
sun’s
dazzling
light
was
shining
down
on
the
remain
and
sprinkling
the
streets.(175words)
【分析】
本文以地震为线索展开，讲述了作者和医生一起在地震中勇敢救人的故事。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我们决心和他一起去救那个护士。”可知，第一段可描写作者和那个医生一起拯救那个护士的过程，和结果。
②由第二段首句内容“下午晚些时候，我有时间四处看看，看到了那座废墟。”可知，第二段可描写作者震后看到废墟，伤感和庆幸。
2.续写线索：移开瓦砾——施救离开——震后观察——伤感——庆幸
3.词汇激活
行为类
①
移开瓦砾：remove
the
rubble
/carry
the
broken
stones
and
bricks
away
②
施救：freeing
from
the
ruins
/rescue
the
nurse/
keep
the
nurse
safe
情绪类
①.伤感：an
ocean
of
sadness
/feel
sad
and
upset
②.庆幸：feel
lucky
to
be
alive
/be
thankful
to
survive
【点睛】
[高分句型1].
He
kept
a
perfectly
calm
tone
throughout,
which
helped
soothe
me
my
heart
leaped
with
joy
as
we
successfully
walked
out
of
the
building.(which引导的非限制性定语定语从句)
[高分句型2].
In
my
mind’s
eye
I
saw
the
original
building
that
I
worked
in,
so
massive
and
beautiful,
and
the
memories
filled
me
with
unbearable
sadness.(that引导的限制性定语从句)
6．阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
It
was
on
September
5th,
my
birthday,
that
we
left
Cambridge
and
moved
away.
We
went
to
the
seaside，to
our
holiday
house，which
was
now
to
be
our
permanent
home.
I
remember
the
day
was
cold
and
grey，
in
falling
slowly
but
constantly.
My
father
drove
in
silence.
No
one
spoke
and
all
we
could
hear
was
the
sound
of
the
tyres
on
the
wet
road
When
we
got
to
the
small
house
near
the
sea，my
mother
quietly
started
to
unpack
the
few
things
we
had
brought
with
us.
Carol，Julie
and
I
went
down
to
the
beach.
We
said
we
were
going
to
look
for
crabs
in
the
rockpools
but
actually，we
just
wanted
to
get
away
from
our
father
and
his
cold
silence.
We
climbed
along
the
rocks
by
the
side
of
the
beach.
Julie
and
Carol
became
interested
in
some
shells
they
found
in
one
of
the
pools.
I
wandered
away,
lost
in
my
private
thoughts.
It
was
my
birthday,
but
no
one
had
said
“Happy
Birthday”
to
me.
I
had
not
received
any
cards
or
presents.
I
walked
down
to
the
seashore,
where
the
waves
were
breaking
lazily
against
the
muddy
sand.
Suddenly,
I
saw
something
green
sticking
out
of
the
water.
I
looked
at
it
more
carefully.
The
green
thing
moved
closer
and
closer
to
the
shore,
and
when
it
was
almost
near
enough
for
me
to
touch,
I
realized
what
it
was.
It
was
a
bottle.
I
went
over
and
picked
it
up,
all
the
time
looking
at
it.
It
seemed
old,
and
had
no
label
on
it.
Then
1
realized
there
was
something
inside.
Slowly,
I
pulled
out
the
wet
cork
from
the
top
of
the
bottle.
Inside
was
a
piece
of
paper.
With
great
care,
1
took
out
the
folded
paper
and
opened
it.
Written
on
it
were
these
words:
“To
whomsoever
finds
this
bottle,
I
promise
you
a
new
friend.
”
注意：
1.
所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.
应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.
续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4.
续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph
1
I
stared
at
the
paper
and
then
looked
around.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph
2
As
I
opened
my
eyes,
I
found
my
father
standing
right
beside
me.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Paragraph
1
I
stared
at
the
paper
and
then
looked
around.
There
came
a
boy,
who
promised
to
be
my
friend.
I
didn’t
know
what
to
say,
so
I
kept
in
silence.
He
told
me
that
he
wanted
to
be
my
new
friend.
“what
was
said
in
the
paper
was
true”
I
said
to
myself.
and
he
took
a
lot
of
presents
for
my
birthday.
I
was
very
touched
to
receive
so
many
gifts.it
really
was
an
amazing
bottle.
Paragraph
2
As
I
opened
my
eyes,
I
found
my
father
standing
right
beside
me.
My
father
told
me
that
it
was
time
for
me
to
go
to
school.
He
asked
me
why
I
woke
up
so
late.
That’s
because
I
had
a
sweet
dream.
In
the
dream,
I
made
a
new
friend,
and
he
gave
me
many
presents
to
celebrate
my
birthday,
“It’s
a
sweet
dream.”
said
my
father.
“but
one
thing
is
true,
today
is
your
birthday.”
Have
a
look
at
what
we
got
for
you.
When
I
opened
the
box,
it
was
the
football
I
really
wanted.
I
could
have
never
been
happier.
It
was
then
I
realized
that
my
family
members
were
also
my
best
friends.
【分析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了在我的生日那天，我们一家人去了海边的度假屋。父亲默默地开着车，当我们到了海边的那所小房子后，为了逃避父亲和他冰冷的沉默，我去了海岸边，注意到了一个瓶子，里面有张纸条，上面写着：“谁找到了这个瓶子，我保证给你一个新朋友”
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我盯着这张纸条，然后环顾四周。”可推断，第一段可描写作者捡到瓶子环顾四周后发生的事情。
②由第二段首句内容“我睁开眼睛，发现父亲就站在我身边。”可推断，第二段可描写作者醒来看到父亲后的事情。
2.续写线索：过生日—失落——礼物——开心——梦境
3.词汇激活
行为类
①保持：
keep/remain/stay
②意识到：realize/learn
情绪类
①感到：
touch/move
②吃惊的：amazing/surpring/astonishing
【点睛】
[高分句型1].
He
told
me
that
he
was
my
new
friend.（由连接词that引导的宾语从句作tell的宾语）
[高分句型2].
That’s
because
I
had
a
sweet
dream.（由连接词because引导表语从句）
7．阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
It
was
our
tun
to
open
our
presents
this
particular
Christmas
morning.
The
living
room
was
already
covered
with
tom
wrapping
paper.
Obviously,
the
children
could
hardly
wait
to
discover
the
hidden
treasures,
which
they
had
expected
for
nearly
a
month.
Now
we
adults
sat
around
the
room
with
our
presents
at
our
feet,
slowly
removing
the
paper,
tying
o
maintain
our
dignity
in
front
of
the
children.
My
wife
Brenda,
and
her
family
have
a
tradition
of
getting
each
other
gag(恶作剧)
gifts.
This
day
makes
me
a
bit
uneasy
at
Christmas
or
my
birthday,
never
knowing
what
form
of
embarrassment
lies
waiting
for
me
under
the
thin
borders
of
the
wrapping
paper.
Recently,
my
six-year-old
daughter
Christy
seemed
to
busy
herself
with
something
while
I
was
playing
computer
video
flight
games.
Now
she
was
standing
directly
in
front
of
me.
The
excitement
of
the
moment
just
beamed
across
her
face.
It
was
everything
she
could
do
to
keep
herself
from
helping
me
rip
the
paper
from
each
present.
Finally,
I
came
to
the
last
gift
and
with
my
natural
Sherlock
Holmes
ability,
I
concluded
that
this
had
to
be
the
gag
gift.
With
everyone
looking
on,
I
decided
to
go
ahead
and
got
it
over
with—just
let
them
have
their
laugh—and
I
tore
the
paper
and
there
it
was…a
toy
airplane
about
two
inches
long.
Our
holiday
guests
started
giggling
to
themselves
as
I
looked
up
to
my
wife
with
an
unpleasant
smile
on
my
face
and
blurted
out,
“A
toy
airplane?
Are
you
kidding
me?”
Brenda
gave
me
the
look—that
look
that
always
tells
me
I
have
just
said
something
wrong
and
should
have
given
it
a
second
thought.
I
had
failed
to
look
at
the
name
tag(标签)
before
I
opened
the
present
to
see
who
it
was
from.
As
I
picked
up
the
paper
from
the
floor
and
read
the
name
tag,
my
heart
sank.
注意：
1.
所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.
至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.
续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4.
续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph
1:
On
the
tog
were
the
letters
that
read,
“To
Dad,
Love
Christy”.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph
2:
Storing
at
the
gift,
I
suddenly
thought
of
a
way
to
lift
her
up.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】On
the
tag
were
the
letters
that
read,
“To
Dad,
Love
Christy”.
I
felt
so
agonized
and
regretful
to
see
her
joy
replaced
by
a
look
of
total
embarrassment
and
humiliation.
She
must
be
praying
that
nobody
would
discover
whom
the
gift
came
from.
And
it
wasn't
just
any
present.
She
knew
I
was
fascinated
with
planes.
I
quickly
knelt
down
and
embraced
Christy
tightly,
willing
to
give
anything
to
take
back
those
words.
I
explained
I
had
thought
it
was
from
Mom,
but
since
it
came
from
her,
that
made
it
different.
However,
nothing
I
said
could
remove
the
hurt
in
her
heart.
（93
words）
Staring
at
the
gift,
I
suddenly
thought
of
a
way
to
lift
her
up.
I
took
that
toy
airplane
in
my
hand
and
began
making
vivid
airplane
noises.
I
taxied（滑行）onto
the
“runway”,
and
accelerated
and
it
was
soon
in
the
air.
I
put
so
much
excitement
into
that
airplane
that
other
children
wanted
a
turn
playing
with
it.
And
just
like
a
little
selfish
kid
I
said,
“No,
this
is
mine!”
It
wasn't
long
before
Christy
believed
it
was
really
a
charming
gift
and
smiled
again.
Now,
I
keep
the
little
plane
as
a
reminder
of
my
girl's
love
and
also,
the
power
of
words.
（96
words）
【分析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者拆圣诞礼物后看到是一架玩具飞机，以为是恶作剧，脸带不悦当场对妻子说出了抱怨的话。在得知玩具飞机是6岁的女儿送给自己后，作者意识到自己说的话伤害了女儿，于是想了一个办法去弥补，最后终于使女儿相信自己很喜欢她送的礼物。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①.由第一段首句内容“标签上写着：“送给爸爸，爱你的克里斯蒂。””可知，第一段可描写作者得知玩具飞机是6岁的女儿送的，对自己说的话感到非常懊悔，想要弥补。
②.由第二段首句内容“看着礼物，我突然想到了一个使她高兴起来的办法。”可知，第二段可描写作者想了一个办法去弥补，最后终于使女儿相信自己很喜欢她送的礼物。
2.续写线索：得知真相——感到懊悔——想办法弥补——实施措施——女儿相信
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.拥抱：give
sb.
a
hug/
hug
sb./
take
sb.
in
arms
②.消除：remove
/clear
off/
take
away
③.拿在手里：take
sth.
in
hand/
hold
sth.
in
hand
情绪类
①.自私的：selfish/
thoughtless/
self-serving
②.迷人的：charming/
fascinating/
attractive
【点睛】
[高分句型1].
She
must
be
praying
that
nobody
would
discover
whom
the
gift
came
from.
（由连接词that引导的宾语从句作pray的宾语）
[高分句型2].
I
put
so
much
excitement
into
that
airplane
that
other
children
wanted
a
turn
playing
with
it.
（由so…that引导的结果状语从句）
[高分句型3].
It
wasn't
long
before
Christy
believed
it
was
really
a
charming
gift
and
smiled
again.（使用固定句式It
wasn't
long
before…）
8．阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
The
watch
was
my
grandfather's.
He
hung
it
by
his
bed.
The
face
was
marked
with
elegant
Roman
numbers
and
the
case
was
gold.
My
grandfather
got
it
after
his
fifty
years
of
faithful
service
with
his
firm.
I
often
gazed
at
it
longingly
as
I
sat
with
my
grandfather
after
school.
The
day
I
told
him
of
my
success
in
the
examinations,
he
was
pleased,
"You'll
be
going
to
the
new
school
next,
Will.
Remember
you'll
need
plenty
of
patience.
That's
the
right
way.
"
I
nodded
when
handing
him
the
watch.
He
gazed
at
it
for
some
moments,
and
wound
it.
The
next
morning
my
mother
told
me
he
had
died
in
his
sleep
and
left
me
his
watch.
For
safety,
my
mother
was
to
put
it
away
in
trust
until
she
considered
me
old
enough
to
look
after
it.
I
protested（抗议）so
strongly
that
she
finally
agreed
to
hang
it
in
the
kitchen
where
I
could
always
see
it.
The
summer
soon
ended
and
it
was
time
for
me
to
enter
the
new
school.
I
never
made
friends
easily,
and
for
a
time
I
did
little
more
than
get
on
speaking
terms
with
some
boys.
One
of
them
was
a
rich
fellow
whose
way
of
impressing
us
was
to
parade
his
possessions
before
us.
Everything
Crawley
had
was
better
than
ours—until
he
brought
the
watch.
"I
have
a
better
watch
than
that,"
I
announced,
attempting
to
impress
them.
"Well,
show
it
to
us,"
Crawley
sneered（冷笑）in
disbelief.
Embarrassed,
I
promised
to
bring
it
to
them
that
afternoon.
Considering
there
was
no
way
to
persuade
my
mother
to
let
me
take
the
watch,
I
decided
to
wait
for
her
to
step
outside
and
slip
the
watch
into
my
pocket.
So
I
did.
After
lunch,
as
I
was
too
excited
to
wait
for
the
return
bus,
I
got
my
bike
out
of
the
shed
I
rode
fast,
excitement
coursing
through
me.
Then
suddenly
a
puppy
ran
out
into
my
path.
I
pulled
at
my
brakes
so
hard
that
the
bike
stopped
to
a
sharp
standstill（急停）and
I
fell
over.
注意：
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph
1
I
picked
myself'
up
and
put
a
trembling
hand
into
my
pocket.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph
2
"That's
not
the
right
way.
Patience,
Will.
Patience,
"
a
voice
echoed
in
my
ears
after
the
boys
left.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】One
possible
version:
I
picked
myself
up
and
put
a
trembling
hand
into
my
pocket.
Then
I
brought
out
what
was
left
of
my
grandfather's
proudest
possession.
There
was
deep
bulge
in
the
watch,
the
glass
shattered,
and
the
Roman
numbers
looking
crazily
at
one
another.
Putting
it
back,
I
rode
slowly
on
to
school,
numb
with
misery.
After
what
seemed
forever,
I
finally
turned
up
before
the
waiting
boys.
"My
mother
wouldn't
let
me
bring
it,"
I
lied.
"His
mother
wouldn't
let
him,
"Crawley
jeered.
"What
a
story!"
The
others
took
up
his
cries
and
left
without
a
backward
glance.
"That's
not
the
right
way.
Patience,
Will.
Patience,
"a
voice
echoed
in
my
ears
after
the
boys
left.
Though
anger,
embarrassment
and
sadness
hung
heavily
in
the
air,
the
voice
drew
me
to
the
awareness
of
the
mistakes
I
had
made
when
I
attempted
to
impress
the
boys.
I
shouldn't
have
tried
to
integrate
in
such
a
hasty
way,
nor
should
I
have
stolen
the
watch
behind
my
mother.
It
was
the
first
time
that
I
had
truly
realized
the
meaning
of
the
gift---patience.
I
knew
for
sure
that
every
time
I
lost
patience
in
the
future
I
would
remember
my
grandfather's
words.
【分析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者的爷爷在去世之前送给了他一块手表。在他去了一所新学校之后，由于同学Crawley炫耀财富，他也想要将自己珍贵的手表展示给大家看。他悄悄地偷了表准备带到学校，谁知，在匆忙赶路的过程中，表摔碎了。突然他想起了爷爷对他说过的话，他意识到自己的行为错了，也明白了爷爷让他保持耐心的含义。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我站起来，颤抖着把手伸进口袋。”可知，第一段可描写作者的表被摔碎了，却骗同学们妈妈不允许他将表带到学校。
②由第二段首句内容“孩子们离开后，一个声音在我耳边回响：‘这不是正确的方法。耐心，威尔。耐心。’”可知，第二段可描写作者想起爷爷说的“耐心”，悟出了爷爷说的话的意思。
2.续写线索：摸手表——手表摔碎——欺骗同学——想起爷爷的话——理解“耐心”的含义
3.词汇激活（一个词汇要写出相近的表达）
行为类
①取出：bring
out/take
out/fish
out
②出现：turn
up/show
up/appear
③企图：attempt/intend/aim
at
情绪类
①沮丧、痛苦：numb
with
misery/frustrated
and
depressed
②尴尬：embarrassment/awkwardness
【点睛】
[高分句型1].
There
was
deep
bulge
in
the
watch,
the
glass
shattered,
and
the
Roman
numbers
looking
crazily
at
one
another.
（含独立主格结构）
[高分句型2].Though
anger,
embarrassment
and
sadness
hung
heavily
in
the
air,
the
voice
drew
me
to
the
awareness
of
the
mistakes
I
had
made
when
I
attempted
to
impress
the
boys.
（让步状语从句，限制性定语从句和时间状语从句）
[高分句型3].I
shouldn't
have
tried
to
integrate
in
such
a
hasty
way,
nor
should
I
have
stolen
the
watch
behind
my
mother.（虚拟语气条件句中含有nor开头的倒装句）
9．阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Carter
enjoyed
riding
the
school
bus
home.
The
ride
home
gave
him
some
time
to
relax
after
a
busy
day
of
fifth
grade.
He
usually
sat
alone
and
enjoyed
that
too.
With
four
siblings（兄妹
）he
didn’t
get
much
time
alone.
Sometimes
he
sat
with
his
younger
brother,
Jackson,
but
Jackson
was
sick
at
home
today.
The
bus
stopped
and
the
tallest
boy
in
his
class,
Dexter,
stepped
off
followed
by
his
younger
brother,
Billy.
As
the
bus
pulled
away,
Carter
looked
back
over
his
shoulder
to
watch
the
boys.
Dexter
was
yelling
and
waving
his
hands
at
his
little
brother.
Billy
said
something
Carter
could
not
hear.
Dexter
yelled,
gave
his
younger
brother
a
hard
shove
and
knocked
him
to
the
ground.
Billy
was
on
the
ground
wiping
at
his
eyes,
but
Dexter
walked
away.
Carter
turned
in
his
seat,
feeling
disgusted.
He
hated
seeing
little
kids
get
picked
on
(欺负).
The
sight
of
Billy
on
the
ground
crying
was
burned
into
his
memory.
He
tried
to
think
of
something
else.
He
thought
of
the
model
car
he
was
working
on
at
home,
a
1967
Corvette.
He
started
building
it
over
a
week
ago
and
just
finished
putting
it
together
last
night.
Tonight,
as
soon
as
he
finished
his
homework,
he
could
start
painting
the
car.
That
was
his
favorite
part.
He
already
had
the
perfect
color
of
blue
picked
out.
He
hurried
off
the
bus,
ran
through
his
yard,
and
breezed
through
the
kitchen
with
a
quick
hello
to
his
mom.
She
was
making
spaghetti,
which
smelled
delicious.
He
ran
up
the
stairs
two
at
a
time
and
rushed
into
his
room.
“Surprise!”
his
brother
Jackson
said,
throwing
his
arms
into
the
air.
“What
are
you
doing
in
my
room?
I
thought
you
were
sick!”
“I
feel
better!”
“What’s
on
your
face?
Are
you
bleeding?”
“No!
I’m
not
bleeding.”
Jackson
wiped
at
his
face.
“It’s
probably
just
paint.
Look!
Look
what
I
did!”
He
pointed
at
the
desk
in
the
corner
of
Carter’
s
room.
注意：
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.续写部分分为两段，每段开头语已为你写好；
4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph
1:
Carter
looked
down
at
his
desk
in
horror.
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Paragraph2:
Carter
took
a
deep
breath
and
then
unfolded
his
fist.
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【答案】One
possible
version:
Carter
looked
down
at
his
desk
in
horror.
His
Corvette!
Jackson
had
painted
it
red.
An
awful
dull
shade
of
red!
"Why
would
you
do
that?"
Carter
shouted.
"I
wanted
to
surprise
you!"
Jackson
grinned,
with
his
eyes
gleaming.
Carter
could
feel
the
anger
growing,
bubbling
up
inside
him,
his
hands
curling
into
fists.
Jackson
kept
saying
something,
but
so
angry
was
Carter
that
he
couldn't
even
hear
a
word.
"Do
you
like
it?
I
tried
so
hard.
Look!"
asked
Jackson.
Red
paint
was
smeared
across
his
face,
forehead,
even
hair.
Looking
at
Jackson,
Carter
couldn't
help
imagining
his
little
brother
spending
the
whole
day
carefully
painting
the
car.
Carter
took
a
deep
breath
and
then
unfolded
his
fist.
Picturing
the
scene
that
Billy
sit
on
the
ground
wiping
at
his
eyes
as
his
big
brother
Dexter
walked
away,
Carter
stepped
toward
the
table
where
the
car
was
still
drying.
Carter
wasn't
sure
what
to
say.
He
didn't
want
to
lie,
but
he
didn't
want
to
hurt
his
brother's
feelings
either.
Jackson
was
only
trying
to
surprise
him.
He
could
see
that
now.
“Do
you?
Do
you
like
it?"
Jackson
insisted.
"Every
time
I
look
at
this
car,
I'm
going
to
think
of
you,"
Carter
responded,
a
smile
stretching
across
his
face.
And
that
was
the
truth.
"Now,
we'd
better
get
that
paint
off
your
face
before
dinner."
【分析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Carter坐校车回家，在路上看到同学Dexter把弟弟Billy推倒在地，扔下弟弟独自离开的场面，感到很厌恶。为了分散注意力，Carter想到回家后把自己制作的汽车模型漆成喜欢的蓝色，结果回家后发现弟弟在自己房间里，满脸红色油漆。原来弟弟把汽车模型漆成了红色，这让Carter非常生气，但想到弟弟花了一天时间为了给自己惊喜，想到Dexter对待弟弟的情景，Carter原谅了弟弟，并告诉弟弟每次看到汽车就会想到他。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“Carter惊恐地低头看着自己的桌子。”可知，第一段可描写弟弟把汽车模型漆成了红色，Carter生气的言语和动作。
②由第二段首句内容“Carter深吸了一口气，然后摊开拳头。”可知，第二段可描写Carter由生气转为不生气的过程和想法。
2.续写线索：质问——生气——握拳——松拳——回想——原谅
3.词汇激活
行为类
①喊叫：shout
/yell
/cry
out/
at
the
top
of
one's
voice
②想象：picture
/imagine/suppose
情绪类
①生气：anger/get
angry/
take
offence
②吃惊的：surprised
/amazed/shocked
【点睛】
[高分句型1]
Jackson
grinned,
with
his
eyes
gleaming.
（运用了with的复合结构）
[高分句型2]
Picturing
the
scene
that
Billy
sit
on
the
ground
wiping
at
his
eyes
as
his
big
brother
Dexter
walked
away,
Carter
stepped
toward
the
table
where
the
car
was
still
drying.(运用了that引导的定语从句和where引导的定语从句)
10．阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
On
a
weekend,
a
woman
won
a
big
bag
of
coins
at
a
game
machine.
She
took
a
break
for
dinner
with
her
husband
in
the
hotel
dining
room.
But
first
she
wanted
to
put
the
coins
in
her
room.
“I'll
be
right
back
and
we'll
go
to
eat,"
she
told
her
husband.
Then
she
carried
the
bag
to
the
lift.
As
she
was
about
to
walk
into
the
lift
she
noticed
two
men
already
aboard.
Both
were
huge,
very
huge
figures.
The
woman
was
scared.
Her
first
thought
was:
＂These
two
are
going
to
rob
me.”
Her
next
thought
was:
“Don't
be
afraid.
They
look
like
nice
gentlemen.”
But
fear
seized
her.
She
stood
and
stared
at
the
two
men.
She
felt
anxious
and
ashamed.
She
hoped
they
didn't
read
her
mind.
Surely
they
knew
her
hesitation
about
joining
them
in
the
lift.
It
was
all
too
obvious.
Her
face
was
red.
She
couldn't
just
stand
there,
so
with
an
effort
of
will
she
picked
up
one
foot
and
stepped
forward
and
followed
with
the
other
foot
and
was
on
the
lift.
Avoiding
eye
contact,
she
turned
around
and
faced
the
lift
doors
as
they
closed.
A
second
passed,
and
then
another
second,
and
then
another.
Her
fear
increased!
The
lift
didn't
move.
Panic
consumed
her.
“Oh
dear,"
she
thought,
“I'm
about
to
be
robbed!”
Her
heart
sank
and
sweat
poured.
Then
one
of
the
men
said,
“Hit
the
floor.”
Instinct
(本能）
told
her:
Do
what
they
tell
you.
The
bag
of
coins
flew
upwards
as
she
threw
out
her
arms
and
collapsed
on
the
lift
carpet.
A
shower
of
coins
rained
down
on
her.
“Take
my
money
and
spare
me,"
she
prayed.
More
seconds
passed.
She
heard
one
of
the
men
say
politely,
"Madam,
if
you'll
just
tell
us
what
floor
you're
going
to,
we'll
push
the
button.
"The
one
who
said
it
had
a
little
trouble
getting
the
words
out
.He
couldn't
help
laughing.
注意：
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph
1:
She
lifted
her
head
and
looked
up
at
the
two
men.
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Paragraph
2:
Then,
the
lift
arrived
at
her
floor.
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【答案】Paragraph
1:
She
lifted
her
head
and
looked
up
at
the
two
men.
They
reached
down
to
help
her
up.
Confused,
she
struggled
to
her
feet.
"When
I
told
my
friend
here
to
hit
the
floor,"
said
the
average-sized
one,
"I
meant
that
he
should
hit
the
elevator
button
for
our
floor.
I
didn't
mean
for
you
to
hit
the
floor,
Ma'am."
He
spoke
pleasantly.
He
bit
his
lip.
Paragraph
2:
Then,
the
lift
arrived
at
her
floor.
They
then
insisted
on
walking
her
to
her
room.
She
seemed
a
little
unsteady
on
her
feet,
and
they
were
afraid
she
might
not
make
it
down
the
corridor.
At
her
door
they
bid
her
a
good
evening.
As
she
slipped
into
her
room,
she
could
hear
them
roaring
with
laughter
as
they
walked
back
to
the
elevator.
The
woman
brushed
herself
off.
She
pulled
herself
together
and
went
downstairs
for
dinner
with
her
husband.
【分析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了一位女士想把赢来的硬币放回房间，在坐电梯时遇到两个很高大的男人，她以为他们想抢劫，一直很忐忑，被两个男人看出来，最后一路护送女士回房间的故事。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“她抬起头，抬头看着那两个男人。”可知，第一段可描写女士误会两个男士说的话。
②由第二段首句内容“然后，电梯到了她住的楼层。”可知，第二段可描写这位女士后来的反应。
2.续写线索：忐忑——误会——护送——振作
3.词汇激活
行为类
①摔倒：hit
the
floor/fall
down/tumble
②打起精神：pull
oneself
together/cheer
up/brace
up
情绪类
①愉快地：pleasantly/joyfully
②害怕：be
afraid
that/be
worried
about/in
worry
【点睛】
[高分句型1]：I
meant
that
he
should
hit
the
elevator
button
for
our
floor.这句话运用了宾语从句。
[高分句型2]：As
she
slipped
into
her
room
,
she
could
hear
them
roaring
with
laughter
as
they
walked
back
to
the
elevator.这句话运用了as引导的状语从句。