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Module
1
Country
life
【写作主题】
本模块的主题是
Country
Life
【写作步骤】
1.在Umi2课文中，
Li
Wei认为
a
country
life
is
a
healthy
life。为什么他会这么认为呢?原因是，他的生活中有
plenty
of
exercise,
lean
air
and
fresh
food
every
day;他也通过具体的事例说明了以上几个让他能拥有健康生活的要素。我们在写作中，也要做到有理有据，这样，我们的观点才能让读者信服。
2.“
A
country
life
is
a
healthy
life这个观点你完全同意吗?在你眼中，乡村生活是怎样的呢?(happy，
dangerous，
unhealthy，
beautiful，hard，
boring，…)请填写下表，把你的想法用关键词或短语简单地列出来。
A
country
life
is
a______________life
Number
Reason(原因)
1
2
3
Plenty
of
fresh
milk
Play
outdoors
Grow
things
we
like
to
eat
【范文展示】
A
country
life
is
a
healthy
life
A
country
life
is
a
healthy
life.
You
can
always
have
plenty
of
fresh
milk
for
breakfast.
In
the
country,
you
can
play
many
outdoor
games.
You
can
also
grow
things
you
like
to
eat
in
your
garden.
So
I
think
a
country
life
is
a
healthy
life.
【写作任务】
你认为，乡村生活是怎样的一种生活呢?请以
A
country
life
is
a__________life”为题，至少用5句话阐明你的观点。要求观点鲜明，有理有据，逻辑合理，语言通顺流畅。
A
country
life
is
a___________life
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Module2
City
life
【写作主题】
本模块的主题是
City
life
【写作步骤】
1.在前一个
module中，Li
Wei认为
a
country
life
is
a
healthy
life;在Umi4，Li
Wei表达了他在城市的旅游经历，列举了城市生活和乡村生活的一些不同点。在你眼中，城市生活和乡村生活分别有哪些特点呢?请用关键词或词组，把两种生活最突出的些特点列下来。
City
Life
Country
Life
many
beautiful,modern
city
many
theatres
quiet
parks
delicious
food
comfortable
hotel
fresh
food
clean
air
plenty
of
exercise
nice
people
Plenty
of
fresh
milk
2.根据上表，想一想你更喜欢在城市生活还是乡村生活呢?
I
like
to
live
in
the
city/country.
列出你认为最主要的三个理由，并各给出一个有力的例子。
Number
Reasons
Examples(例子)
1
2
3
many
beautiful,modern
city
many
theatres
delicious
food
【范文展示】
I
like
to
live
in
the
city
I
like
to
live
in
the
city,
because
a
city
life
is
an
interesting
life.
There
are
many
modern
buildings
in
the
city.
We
can
enjoy
many
delicious
foods.
In
the
city,
there
are
many
shop
and
supermarkets.
We
can
buy
lots
of
different
things
if
we
want.
In
the
city
we
can
have
lots
of
fun.
There
are
many
theatres
and
parks.
We
can
have
fun
all
day.
That
is
why
I
like
to
live
in
the
city.
【写作任务】
以“I
like
to
live
in
the
city/country”为题，阐明你对城市或乡村生活的喜爱，请至少用5句话阐明你的观点。要求观点鲜明，例子恰当，有理有据，逻辑合理，语言通顺流畅。
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Module
3
Health
【写作主题】
本模块主题是健康，写作要求提出关于如何保持健康的建议。课文里面介绍的是李先生所知道的“健康的秘诀”，我们可以结合自己在日常生活中的体验，采取“总一分总”的结构来写。写作时可以借鉴课文中出现的句型，学以致用。可以使用祈使句,用于建议别人应该或者不应该做什么。
【写作步骤】
1.以强调“健康”重要性的句子作为文章的开头，也可以使用提问的方式，让读者先思考。例：
(1
)What
is
the
most
important
thing
in
the
world?
I
think
it
must
be
health.
(2)
Health
is
very
important
to
everyone.
But
do
you
know
how
to
stay
healthy?
(3)
What
is
the
secret
to
good
heath?
Different
people
have
different
answers.
2.确定你想罗列的建议分别是什么。可以借鉴课文中的“
First...
Second
..
Third...Finally.”来罗列建议。如果你知道一些谚语，也可以写在文章里，锦上添花。
3.结尾可以用一两句话描述这些建议的意义，也可以适当发出呼吁，或者再次强调健康的重要性。例：
(1)
If
you
can
do
these,
I
think
you
can
have
a
healthy
body.
(2)So
let’s
try
together!
Let’s
stay
healthy
and
keep
the
doctor
away.
(3)
If
you
are
healthy,
you
can
be
happy.
【范文展示】
Health
is
very
important
to
everyone.
But
do
you
know
how
to
stay
healthy?
First,
you
should
keep
a
good
diet.
Don't
eat
too
much
oily
or
sweet
food.
Eat
more
vegetables
and
less
meat.
Second,
you
should
sleep
well,
at
least
8
hours
each
night.
It’s
good
if
you
can
get
up
early
and
go
to
bed
early.Third,
you
should
take
more
exercise
and
drink
more
water.
You
can
walk,
run,
swim
or
dance.
Finally,
laughter
is
the
best
medicine.
Don’t
worry
too
much
and
be
happy.
So
try
these
tips.
They
may
help
you.
Let's
stay
healthy
and
keep
the
doctor
away!
【写作任务】
请你以“
Do
you
know
the
secret
to
good
health?”为题，提出至少四个健康生活的建议，不少于5句话，30个单词。
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Module
4
Past
experiences
【写作主题】
本单元话题是描述自己或他人在过去某个时间、某段时间做的事情，关于个人些经历，或者描述过去经常做的事情，介绍过去的习惯爱好，体裁属于叙事文。
【写作步骤】
1.叙述文的写作，我们可以从when，
where，who，what，how几个要素入手。
Where
did
you
go?
When
did
you
go
there?How
long
did
you
stay
there?
Past
Experience
Who
did
you
go
with?
What
did
you
do
there?
How
was
the
weather?
How
did
you
feel?
2.用连接词或时间短语，组织多件事情的叙述，或者一件事情前、中、后不同活动的铺叙，让作文的主题部分有层次，而不是几句相同的句式堆在一起。
例:一天的事情可以用
in
the
morning,
at
noon,
in
the
afternoon,
in
the
evening,
at
night.将多件事情按时间顺序进行铺叙。
一件事情的先后步骤可以用first，next，then，
at
last等词或者短语进行叙述。某个事情前后做的事情，可以用
before，after来承上启下。
3.增加一些细节，避免整篇文章像流水账
例:描述心情I
was
very
excited.
例:去了购物，买的什么东西呢?这个东西怎么样呢?你将用来做什么呢?等等.
I
went
shopping
and
bought
a
bag.
It’s
blue,
my
favourite
colour.
4.最后加上总结句。
例:评价这是一段怎么样的时光。
It
was
a
busy/excited/boring...weekend.
例:表达一些期望。
I
hope
I
can
have
a
happy
Children's
Day
next
year.
【范文展示】
A
busy
Saturday
I
was
busy
last
Saturday.
On
Saturday
morning,
I
visited
my
grandparents.I
was
very
excited.We
planted
some
flowers
together.
In
the
afternoon,
I
did
my
homework
and
learned
English.
I
was
happy
because
I
finished
all
my
homework.
In
the
evening,
I
watched
TV
and
read
books.
I
read
a
book
about
Charlie
and
the
Chocolate
Factory.
It
was
really
interesting.
It
was
a
busy
but
wonderful
Saturday!
【写作任务】
上一个星期六你做了什么呢，请你写下来，要求不少于40个单词。请先回忆并在下列表格的每个空格中填写1至2件事情，再进行写作。
Time
What
did
you
do
last
Saturday?
In
the
morning
In
the
afternoon
In
the
evening
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Module
5
Changes
【写作主题】
本模块中涉及的
changes包括两个方面:
(1)
自己过去和现在的变化;
(2)
生活经历的变化以及某两个地方的比较。
但无论要写哪一个方面，我们都可以先构思过去和现在的内容，然后使用表示人或物过去和现在情况比较的句型。需要注意的是，表示过去情况的句子，要用一般过去时;表示现在情况的句子，用一般现在时。
【参考句型】
1.
Before/
In
the
past...,
but
now..
2.
When
I
was...(years
old),
...
But
now...
3.一段时间+ago,...But
now...
【关于自己的成长变化的写作步骤】
1.先思考自己要写的变化的方面，例如性格、爱好、身高、头发长度等(可以参照课本U9P51的词组)
2.用上表示过去和现在情况比较的句型，对变化的方面依次列举。例:
(1)
When
I
was
five
years
old,
I
was
short.
But
now,
I
am
tall
(2)In
the
past，I
was
very
quiet.
But
now，I
smile
a
lot.
3.在列举完变化的句子后，如果想让作文不那么单调，可以补充一些变化的原因和自己的受等。例：
(1)When
I
was
five
years
old,
I
was
short.
But
now,
I
am
tall,
because
I
have
a
healthy
diet
and
often
play
sports.
(2)
In
the
past,
I
was
very
quiet.
But
now,
I
smile
a
lot
and
have
plenty
of
good
friends.
4.在列举完变化后，在文章的结尾对这些变化加上一句总结，表达自己的感想。例：I
am
happy
I
become
a
good
boy
now.
【范文展示一】
Changes
When
I
was
five
years
old.
I
was
very
short.
But
now,
I
am
tall,
because
I
have
a
healthy
diet
and
often
do
sports.
I
like
doing
sports.
In
the
past,
I
liked
playing
football.
But
now,
I
like
playing
basketball
and
badminton.
Before,
my
hair
was
a
little
long.
But
I
always
keep
it
short
now.
I
was
very
quiet
and
I
often
cried
in
the
past,
but
now
I
smile
a
lot
and
have
plenty
of
good
friends.
I
am
happy
I
become
a
healthy
and
happy
boy
now.
【关于地方的变化的写作步骤】
1.如果写作题目有图片提示该地方过去和现在的变化对比，则先对照图片梳理变化的方面，如该地方的建筑、街道、场所等。如果没有图片提示，那么自己可以思考这个地方有哪些变化的地方可以写的。
2.用上表示过去和现在情况比较的句型，对变化的方面依次列举。不一定要先写一个过去的，再写一个现在的，可以先把过去的内容全部写完，再写现在的内容。例:
Three
year
ago,
the
city
was
small.
Most
of
the
people
went
to
work
by
bus,
so
there
were
not
many
cars
in
the
streets.
But
now,
the
city
is
big.
People
go
to
work
by
car,
so
the
streets
are
always
crowded.
3.在列举完变化后，在文章的结尾对这些变化加上一句总结，表达自己的感想。例:
The
city
now
is
very
different
to
the
city
in
the
past.
I
think
it
will
become
better
in
the
future.
【范文展示二】
Then
and
now
I
live
in
a
beautiful
city.
Three
years
ago,
the
city
was
small
and
quiet.There
were
only
two
supermarkets
in
the
city.
Most
of
the
people
went
to
work
by
bus,
so
there
were
not
many
cars
in
the
streets.
But
now,
the
city
is
big
and
there
are
many
supermarkets
and
tall
buildings.
People
go
to
work
by
car,
so
the
streets
are
always
crowded.
Sometimes
it
is
very
noisy
and
I
can't
go
to
sleep
at
night.
The
city
now
is
very
different
to
the
city
in
the
past.
I
think
it
will
become
better
in
the
future.
【写作任务】
转眼间，同学们即将从小学毕业了。在这六年的时间里，你一定取得了不少的进步，请你写一写自己在这六年里的变化吧。(不少于50词)
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Module6
Festivals
【写作步骤】
1.在写作前构思要写的节日的内容，包括节日名称、时间、人物活动、节日饮食、节日感受等。可以自己在草稿纸上先列出要点，梳理写作思路。
2.开头先写出作文的主题，介绍节日的名称和时间。例：
The
Spring
Festival
is
celebrated
on
the
first
day
of
the
first
lunar
month.
The
Spring
Festival
is
the
Chinese
New
Year.
Module6
Festivals
3.描述人们在这个节日的活动、饮食和感受。例:
(1)Before
the
Spring
Festival,
people
usually
clean
their
house
and
buy
new
clothes
to
make
everything
new
and
fresh.
(2)
Children
can
get
some
lucky
money
from
their
parents.
(3)
People
can
not
only
watch
the
Spring
Festival
Gala
(春晚)but
also
set
off
fireworks.It
is
interesting.
(4)
People
will
have
a
big
dinner
with
jiaozi
and
lots
of
delicious
food.
4.在文章的结尾，以自己对这个节日的感受进行总结。
例:
I
really
enjoy
the
Spring
Festival.
Module6
Festivals
【范文展示】
The
Spring
Festival
The
Spring
Festival
is
the
Chinese
New
Year.
It
is
celebrated
on
the
first
day
of
the
first
lunar
month.Before
the
Spring
Festival,
people
usually
clean
their
house
and
buy
new
clothes
to
make
everything
new
and
fresh.
People
all
love
this
festival,
especially
children,
because
they
can
get
some
lucky
money
from
their
parents.
During
the
Spring
Festival,
people
can
not
only
watch
the
Spring
Festival
Gala
but
also
set
off
fireworks.
It
is
interesting.
People
will
also
have
a
big
dinner
with
jiaozi
and
lots
of
delicious
food.
I
really
enjoy
the
Spring
Festival.
Module6
Festivals
【写作任务】
请你向外国朋友Daid介绍你最熟悉的一个中国传统节日。不少于50个单词。
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1-6模块写作指导
Module
1
Country
life
【写作主题】
本模块的主题是
Country
Life
【写作步骤】
1.在Umi2课文中，
Li
Wei认为
a
country
life
is
a
healthy
life。为什么他会这么认为呢?原因是，他的生活中有
plenty
of
exercise,
lean
air
and
fresh
food
every
day;他也通过具体的事例说明了以上几个让他能拥有健康生活的要素。我们在写作中，也要做到有理有据，这样，我们的观点才能让读者信服。
2.“
A
country
life
is
a
healthy
life这个观点你完全同意吗?在你眼中，乡村生活是怎样的呢?(happy，
dangerous，
unhealthy，
beautiful，hard，
boring，…)请填写下表，把你的想法用关键词或短语简单地列出来。
A
country
life
is
a______________life
Number
Reason(原因)
1
2
3
【范文展示】
A
country
life
is
a
healthy
life
A
country
life
is
a
healthy
life.
You
can
always
have
plenty
of
fresh
milk
for
breakfast.
In
the
country,
you
can
play
many
outdoor
games.
You
can
also
grow
things
you
like
to
eat
in
your
garden.
So
I
think
a
country
life
is
a
healthy
life.
【写作任务】
你认为，乡村生活是怎样的一种生活呢?请以
A
country
life
is
a__________life”为题，至少用5句话阐明你的观点。要求观点鲜明，有理有据，逻辑合理，语言通顺流畅。
A
country
life
is
a___________life
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参考答案：
Number
Reason(原因)
1
Plenty
of
fresh
milk
2
Play
outdoors
3
Grow
things
we
like
to
eat
Module2
City
life
【写作主题】
本模块的主题是
City
life
【写作步骤】
1.在前一个
module中，Li
Wei认为
a
country
life
is
a
healthy
life;在Umi4，Li
Wei表达了他在城市的旅游经历，列举了城市生活和乡村生活的一些不同点。在你眼中，城市生活和乡村生活分别有哪些特点呢?请用关键词或词组，把两种生活最突出的些特点列下来。
City
Life
Country
Life
2.根据上表，想一想你更喜欢在城市生活还是乡村生活呢?
I
like
to
live
in
the
city/
country.
列出你认为最主要的三个理由，并各给出一个有力的例子。
Number
Reasons
Examples(例子)
1
2
3
【范文展示】
I
like
to
live
in
the
city
I
like
to
live
in
the
city,
because
a
city
life
is
an
interesting
life.
There
are
many
modern
buildings
in
the
city.
We
can
enjoy
many
delicious
foods.
In
the
city,
there
are
many
shop
and
supermarkets.
We
can
buy
lots
of
different
things
if
we
want.
In
the
city
we
can
have
lots
of
fun.
There
are
many
theatres
and
parks.
We
can
have
fun
all
day.
That
is
why
I
like
to
live
in
the
city.
【写作任务】
以“I
like
to
live
in
the
city/country”为题，阐明你对城市或乡村生活的喜爱，请至少用5句话阐明你的观点。要求观点鲜明，例子恰当，有理有据，逻辑合理，语言通顺流畅。
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Module
3
Health
【写作主题】
本模块主题是健康，写作要求提出关于如何保持健康的建议。课文里面介绍的是李先生所知道的“健康的秘诀”，我们可以结合自己在日常生活中的体验，采取“总一分总”的结构来写。写作时可以借鉴课文中出现的句型，学以致用。可以使用祈使句,用于建议别人应该或者不应该做什么。
【写作步骤】
1.以强调“健康”重要性的句子作为文章的开头，也可以使用提问的方式，让读者先思考。例：
(1
)What
is
the
most
important
thing
in
the
world?
I
think
it
must
be
health.
(2)
Health
is
very
important
to
everyone.
But
do
you
know
how
to
stay
healthy?
(3)
What
is
the
secret
to
good
heath?
Different
people
have
different
answers.
2.确定你想罗列的建议分别是什么。可以借鉴课文中的“
First...
Second
..
Third...
Finally.”来罗列建议。如果你知道一些谚语，也可以写在文章里，锦上添花。
3.结尾可以用一两句话描述这些建议的意义，也可以适当发出呼吁，或者再次强调健康的重要性。例：
(1)
If
you
can
do
these,
I
think
you
can
have
a
healthy
body.
(2)So
let’s
try
together!
Let’s
stay
healthy
and
keep
the
doctor
away.
(3)
If
you
are
healthy,
you
can
be
happy.
【范文展示】
Health
is
very
important
to
everyone.
But
do
you
know
how
to
stay
healthy?
First,
you
should
keep
a
good
diet.
Don't
eat
too
much
oily
or
sweet
food.
Eat
more
vegetables
and
less
meat.
Second,
you
should
sleep
well,
at
least
8
hours
each
night.
It’s
good
if
you
can
get
up
early
and
go
to
bed
early.Third,
you
should
take
more
exercise
and
drink
more
water.
You
can
walk,
run,
swim
or
dance.
Finally,
laughter
is
the
best
medicine.
Don’t
worry
too
much
and
be
happy.
So
try
these
tips.
They
may
help
you.
Let's
stay
healthy
and
keep
the
doctor
away!
【写作任务】
请你以“
Do
you
know
the
secret
to
good
health?”为题，提出至少四个健康生活的建议，不少于5句话，30个单词。
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Module
4
Past
experiences
【写作主题】
本单元话题是描述自己或他人在过去某个时间、某段时间做的事情，关于个人些经历，或者描述过去经常做的事情，介绍过去的习惯爱好，体裁属于叙事文。
【写作步骤】
1.叙述文的写作，我们可以从when，
where，who，what，how几个要素入手。
Where
did
you
go?
When
did
you
go
there?How
long
did
you
stay
there?
Past
Experience
Who
did
you
go
with?
What
did
you
do
there?
How
was
the
weather?
How
did
you
feel?
2.用连接词或时间短语，组织多件事情的叙述，或者一件事情前、中、后不同活动的铺叙，让作文的主题部分有层次，而不是几句相同的句式堆在一起。
例:一天的事情可以用
in
the
morning,
at
noon,
in
the
afternoon,
in
the
evening,
at
night.将多件事情按时间顺序进行铺叙。
一件事情的先后步骤可以用first，next，then，
at
last等词或者短语进行叙述。某个事情前后做的事情，可以用
before，after来承上启下。
3.增加一些细节，避免整篇文章像流水账
例:描述心情I
was
very
excited.
例:去了购物，买的什么东西呢?这个东西怎么样呢?你将用来做什么呢?等等.
I
went
shopping
and
bought
a
bag.
It’s
blue,
my
favourite
colour.
4.最后加上总结句。
例:评价这是一段怎么样的时光。
It
was
a
busy/excited/boring...weekend.
例:表达一些期望。
I
hope
I
can
have
a
happy
Children's
Day
next
year.
【范文展示】
A
busy
Saturday
I
was
busy
last
Saturday.
On
Saturday
morning,
I
visited
my
grandparents.I
was
very
excited.We
planted
some
flowers
together.
In
the
afternoon,
I
did
my
homework
and
learned
English.
I
was
happy
because
I
finished
all
my
homework.
In
the
evening,
I
watched
TV
and
read
books.
I
read
a
book
about
Charlie
and
the
Chocolate
Factory.
It
was
really
interesting.
It
was
a
busy
but
wonderful
Saturday!
【写作任务】
上一个星期六你做了什么呢，请你写下来，要求不少于40个单词。请先回忆并在下列表格的每个空格中填写1至2件事情，再进行写作。
Time
What
did
you
do
last
Saturday?
In
the
morning
In
the
afternoon
In
the
evening
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Module
5
Changes
【写作主题】
本模块中涉及的
changes包括两个方面:
自己过去和现在的变化;
生活经历的变化以及某两个地方的比较。
但无论要写哪一个方面，我们都可以先构思过去和现在的内容，然后使用表示人或物过去和现在情况比较的句型。需要注意的是，表示过去情况的句子，要用一般过去时;表示现在情况的句子，用一般现在时。
【参考句型】
1.
Before/
In
the
past...,
but
now..
2.
When
I
was...(years
old),
...
But
now...
3.一段时间+ago,...But
now...
【关于自己的成长变化的写作步骤】
1.先思考自己要写的变化的方面，例如性格、爱好、身高、头发长度等(可以参照课本U9P51的词组)
2.用上表示过去和现在情况比较的句型，对变化的方面依次列举。例:
(1)
When
I
was
five
years
old,
I
was
short.
But
now,
I
am
tall
(2)In
the
past，I
was
very
quiet.
But
now，I
smile
a
lot.
3.在列举完变化的句子后，如果想让作文不那么单调，可以补充一些变化的原因
和自己的受等。例：
(1)When
I
was
five
years
old,
I
was
short.
But
now,
I
am
tall,
because
I
have
a
healthy
diet
and
often
play
sports.
(2)
In
the
past,
I
was
very
quiet.
But
now,
I
smile
a
lot
and
have
plenty
of
good
friends.
4.在列举完变化后，在文章的结尾对这些变化加上一句总结，表达自己的感想。例：I
am
happy
I
become
a
good
boy
now.
【范文展示一】
Changes
When
I
was
five
years
old.
I
was
very
short.
But
now,
I
am
tall,
because
I
have
a
healthy
diet
and
often
do
sports.
I
like
doing
sports.
In
the
past,
I
liked
playing
football.
But
now,
I
like
playing
basketball
and
badminton.
Before,
my
hair
was
a
little
long.
But
I
always
keep
it
short
now.
I
was
very
quiet
and
I
often
cried
in
the
past,
but
now
I
smile
a
lot
and
have
plenty
of
good
friends.
I
am
happy
I
become
a
healthy
and
happy
boy
now.
【关于地方的变化的写作步骤】
1.如果写作题目有图片提示该地方过去和现在的变化对比，则先对照图片梳理变化的方面，如该地方的建筑、街道、场所等。如果没有图片提示，那么自己可以思考这个地方有哪些变化的地方可以写的。
2.用上表示过去和现在情况比较的句型，对变化的方面依次列举。不一定要先写一个过去的，再写一个现在的，可以先把过去的内容全部写完，再写现在的内容。例:
Three
year
ago,
the
city
was
small.
Most
of
the
people
went
to
work
by
bus,
so
there
were
not
many
cars
in
the
streets.
But
now,
the
city
is
big.
People
go
to
work
by
car,
so
the
streets
are
always
crowded.
3.在列举完变化后，在文章的结尾对这些变化加上一句总结，表达自己的感想。例:
The
city
now
is
very
different
to
the
city
in
the
past.
I
think
it
will
become
better
in
the
future.
【范文展示二】
Then
and
now
I
live
in
a
beautiful
city.
Three
years
ago,
the
city
was
small
and
quiet.There
were
only
two
supermarkets
in
the
city.
Most
of
the
people
went
to
work
by
bus,
so
there
were
not
many
cars
in
the
streets.
But
now,
the
city
is
big
and
there
are
many
supermarkets
and
tall
buildings.
People
go
to
work
by
car,
so
the
streets
are
always
crowded.
Sometimes
it
is
very
noisy
and
I
can't
go
to
sleep
at
night.
The
city
now
is
very
different
to
the
city
in
the
past.
I
think
it
will
become
better
in
the
future.
【写作任务】
转眼间，同学们即将从小学毕业了。在这六年的时间里，你一定取得了不少的进步，请你写一写自己在这六年里的变化吧。(不少于50词)
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Module6
Festivals
【写作主题】
本模块的主题是节日，作文设计角度可以分为两个方面:介绍某节日或者你最喜欢的节日。但是无论要写哪一个方面，本质上都是需要介绍这个节日。本部分写作指引以“介绍节日”为主，若需要写“最喜欢的节日”，可以在本部分写作基础上加入”My
favourite
festival
is....”等描述。
介绍一个节日，应该包含以下方面:节日名称、时间、人物活动、节日饮食、节日感受等。具体结构可以参考U12的课文。
【参考句型】
1.(表示时间)节日+
is
celebrated
on+具体日期/节日+
is
on
the...
day
of
the…
lunar
month.
2.(表示原因)
People
celebrate
it
to...
3.(表示活动)
People
usually
..
during+节日
4.(连接短语)
not
only.
..but
also...
【写作步骤】
1.在写作前构思要写的节日的内容，包括节日名称、时间、人物活动、节日饮食、节日感受等。可以自己在草稿纸上先列出要点，梳理写作思路。
2.开头先写出作文的主题，介绍节日的名称和时间。例：
The
Spring
Festival
is
celebrated
on
the
first
day
of
the
first
lunar
month.
The
Spring
Festival
is
the
Chinese
New
Year.
3.描述人们在这个节日的活动、饮食和感受。例:
(1)Before
the
Spring
Festival,
people
usually
clean
their
house
and
buy
new
clothes
to
make
everything
new
and
fresh.
(2)
Children
can
get
some
lucky
money
from
their
parents.
(3)
People
can
not
only
watch
the
Spring
Festival
Gala
(春晚)but
also
set
off
fireworks.It
is
interesting.
(4)
People
will
have
a
big
dinner
with
jiaozi
and
lots
of
delicious
food.
4.在文章的结尾，以自己对这个节日的感受进行总结。
例:
I
really
enjoy
the
Spring
Festival.
【范文展示】
The
Spring
Festival
The
Spring
Festival
is
the
Chinese
New
Year.
It
is
celebrated
on
the
first
day
of
the
first
lunar
month.Before
the
Spring
Festival,
people
usually
clean
their
house
and
buy
new
clothes
to
make
everything
new
and
fresh.
People
all
love
this
festival,
especially
children,
because
they
can
get
some
lucky
money
from
their
parents.
During
the
Spring
Festival,
people
can
not
only
watch
the
Spring
Festival
Gala
but
also
set
off
fireworks.
It
is
interesting.
People
will
also
have
a
big
dinner
with
jiaozi
and
lots
of
delicious
food.
I
really
enjoy
the
Spring
Festival.
【写作任务】
请你向外国朋友Daid介绍你最熟悉的一个中国传统节日。不少于50个单词。
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