2021年高考英语真题分类汇编专题:书面表达

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2021年高考英语真题分类汇编专题:书面表达
一、书面表达
1.(2021·全国甲)假定你是李华。你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会,并在英文网站展示。请你写一封邮件给外国朋友Chris,向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友人。邮件内容包括:
1)阐明写信事由;
2)征求建议;
3)表示感谢。
注意:
1)词数100左右;
2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
2.(2021·全国乙)书面表达
你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请你以Be
smart
online
learners
为题写一篇发言稿参赛,内容包括:
1)分析优势与不足:
2)提出学习建议。
注意:1)词数100左右;
2)题目和首句已为你写好。
3.(2021·新高考Ⅰ)你校英文报
Youth
正在庆祝创刊十周年。请你写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1)读报的经历;??
2)喜爱的栏目;??
3)期望和祝福。????
注意:
1)写作词数应为
80
左右;
2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Youth
and
Me
?
4.(2021·浙江)假定你是李华,下周有新西兰学生访问你校,你将作为学生代表致欢迎辞。请为此写一篇发言稿,内容包括:
1)表示欢迎;
2)介绍活动安排;
3)表达祝愿。
注意:
1)词数80左右;
2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
5.(2021·浙江)应用文写作
昨天你参观了学校举办的学生国画作品展。请给校英文报写一篇宣传稿,内容包括:
1)展览时间、地点;
2)观展感受;
3)推荐观展。
注意:1)词数80左右;
2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
答案解析部分
一、书面表达
1.【答案】
Dear
Chris,
Word
came
that
our
school
is
going
to
hold
a
class
meeting
whose
topic
is
related
to
Chinese
traditional
customs.
Because
this
activity
will
be
presented
on
the
English
website,
I
sincerely
want
you
to
offer
me
some
advice.
As
far
as
we
know,
there
is
a
huge
cultural
difference
between
China
and
the
western
countries.
In
order
to
get
more
clicks,
you'd
better
tell
me
which
Chinese
culture
you
westerners
prefer.
What's
more,
if
I
want
to
decorate
my
website
with
some
Chinese
elements,
what
should
I
do?
Knowing
you
are
interested
in
China,
I
do
believe
you
can
help
me
solve
these
puzzles.
If
possible,
you
can
reply
to
me
as
soon
as
possible.
I
will
take
your
advice
into
consideration.
I
really
appreciate
your
help.
Yours,
Li
Hua
【考点】提纲作文,文字式应用文,半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇英文信件,要求考生以李华的身份写一封邮件给外国朋友Chris,向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友人。写作背景:你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会,并在英文网站展示。写作要点已经给出,属于提纲类作文,内容包括:1)阐明写信事由;2)征求建议;3)表示感谢。提示中的内容比较泛泛,需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全,结构完整,条理清晰,应用了较多的语法结构和词汇,熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分,使整个文章结构紧凑,很好地完成了写作任务。例如:Word
came
that
our
school
is
going
to
hold
a
class
meeting
whose
topic
is
related
to
Chinese
traditional
customs.运用了同位语从句,限制性定语从句;
Because
this
activity
will
be
presented
on
the
English
website,
I
sincerely
want
you
to
offer
me
some
advice.运用了原因状语从句;As
far
as
we
know,
there
is
a
huge
cultural
difference
between
China
and
the
western
countries.
运用了there
be句式;In
order
to
get
more
clicks,
you'd
better
tell
me
which
Chinese
culture
you
westerners
prefer.
运用了宾语从句;What's
more,
if
I
want
to
decorate
my
website
with
some
Chinese
elements,
what
should
I
do?
运用了条件状语从句;Knowing
you
are
interested
in
China,
I
do
believe
you
can
help
me
solve
these
puzzles.运用了现在分词作原因状语,宾语从句和强调。
2.【答案】
Be
smart
online
learners
Network
learning
has
increasingly
become
an
important
means
for
people
to
acquire
knowledge
and
solve
problems.
But
being
smart
online
learners
has
its
advantages
and
disadvantages.
First
of
all,
as
smart
online
learners,
we
can
make
full
use
of
the
most
extensive
educational
resources
to
broaden
the
horizon.
Besides,
We
can
take
the
initiative
in
our
study
by
ourselves
without
time
and
space
limit.
Of
course,
these
disadvantages
are
as
follows.Faced
with
all
kinds
of
information
on
the
internet,
We
can't
tell
the
difference
between
the
true
and
the
false,
which
may
be
harmful
to
our
study
and
life.
On
the
other
hand,
online
learning
itself
has
some
imperfections,
making
it
dificult
for
us
not
to
be
affected.
In
condlusion,
we
should
have
a
good
understanding
of
its
advantages
and
disadvantages
and
find
a
proper
way
to
make
our
study
more
efficient.
【考点】提纲作文,文字式应用文,半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇应用文写作,要求考生以Be
smart
online
learners
为题写一篇发言稿参赛。写作背景:校将举办英语演讲比赛。写作要点已经给出,属于提纲类作文,内容包括:1)分析优势与不足:
2)提出学习建议。
考生需要根据写作要求,确定关键词(组),并进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。在连句成文时,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点评】本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括,缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
3.【答案】
Youth
and
Me
?
?
It
has
been
10
years
since
Youth
was
founded.
In
my
memory,
it
is
Youth?that
accompanies
me
through
my
whole
high
school.
When
feeling
depressed,
I
often
choose
to
enjoy
the
novel
part
which
indudes
a
lot
of
imaginative
stories.
These
stories
can
relieve
my
stress
and
broaden
my
horizon.
Besides,
I
even
submitted
my
own
fiction
to
Youth.
Refused
as
I
was,
I
still
received
some
great
encouragement,
which
gives
me
confidence
to
be
a
writer.
?
?
I
do
expect
Youth
can
publish
more
classic
works
and
have
a
promising
future.
【考点】提纲作文,文字式应用文,半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇应用文写作,要求考生写一篇短文投稿。写作背景:你校英文报
Youth
正在庆祝创刊十周年。写作要点已经给出,属于提纲类作文,内容包括:1)读报的经历;
?
2)喜爱的栏目;
?
3)期望和祝福。考生需要根据写作要求,确定关键词(组),并进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。在连句成文时,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点评】本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括,缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
4.【答案】
Distinguished
guests:
On
behalf
of
our
school,
I
would
like
to
convey
my
sincere
welcome
for
your
visiting.
At
first,
it
is
of
significance
to
fully
understand
the
school.
As
scheduled,
all
of
you
will
visit
the
museum,
which
contains
the
splendid
history
of
our
school.
Furthermore,
our
classes
are
worthy
of
being
attended,
because
you
can
appreciate
the
differences
between
Chinese
and
western
teaching
methods.
After
that,
it
is
at
canteen
that
you
can
have
a
special
lunch
with
our
students.
As
mentioned
above,
I
extremely
expect
your
coming.
May
you
have
an
unforgettable
experience.
【考点】提纲作文,文字式应用文,半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本体是一篇应用文写作,要求考生以李华的身份写一篇发言稿。写作背景:下周有新西兰学生访问你校,你将作为学生代表致欢迎辞。写作要点已经给出,属于提纲类作文,内容包括:1)表示欢迎;2)介绍活动安排;3)表达祝愿。提示中的内容比较泛泛,需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全,结构完整,条理清晰,应用了较多的语法结构和词汇,熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分,使整个文章结构紧凑,很好地完成了写作任务。例如:?At
first,
it
is
of
significance
to
fully
understand
the
school.
运用了it作形式主语;As
scheduled,
all
of
you
will
visit
the
museum,
which
contains
the
splendid
history
of
our
school.
运用了非限制性定语从句;Furthermore,
our
classes
are
worthy
of
being
attended,
because
you
can
appreciate
the
differences
between
Chinese
and
western
teaching
methods.运用了原因状语从句;
After
that,
it
is
at
canteen
that
you
can
have
a
special
lunch
with
our
students.运用了强调句。
5.【答案】
???
In
order
to
enrich
students'
after-school
life,
an
exhibition
of
students'
traditional
Chinese
paintings
is
being
held
by
our
school,
which
sparks
a
growing
love
for
traditional
art.
The
exhibition
is
held
on
the
first
floor
of
the
school
litrary.
Most
of
the
students
think
highly
of
this
exhibition,
which
provides
a
platform
for
them
to
explore
the
beauty
of
China
and
experience
the
charm
of
Chinese
art.
???
Through
the
exhibition,
not
only
can
you
admire
wonderful
pictures,
but
also
enable
you
understand
the
art
of
traditional
Chinese
painting
better.
The
exhibition
will
last
for
two
weeks,
every
student
is
welcome
to
visit.
【考点】提纲作文,文字式应用文,半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇应用文写作,要求考生给校英文报写一篇宣传稿。写作背景:昨天你参观了学校举办的学生国画作品展。写作要点已经给出,属于提纲类作文,内容包括:1)展览时间、地点;
2)观展感受;3)推荐观展。提示中的内容比较泛泛,需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全,结构完整,条理清晰,应用了较多的语法结构和词汇,熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分,使整个文章结构紧凑,很好地完成了写作任务。例如:In
order
to
enrich
students'
after-school
life,
an
exhibition
of
students'
traditional
Chinese
paintings
is
being
held
by
our
school,
which
sparks
a
growing
love
for
traditional
art.
运用了不定式作目的状语,非限制性定语从句;The
exhibition
is
held
on
the
first
floor
of
the
school
litrary.运用了被动语态;
Most
of
the
students
think
highly
of
this
exhibition,
which
provides
a
platform
for
them
to
explore
the
beauty
of
China
and
experience
the
charm
of
Chinese
art.运用了非限制性定语从句;?Through
the
exhibition,
not
only
can
you
admire
wonderful
pictures,
but
also
enable
you
understand
the
art
of
traditional
Chinese
painting
better.
运用了倒装句。
1
/
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2021年高考英语真题分类汇编专题:书面表达
一、书面表达
1.(2021·全国甲)假定你是李华。你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会,并在英文网站展示。请你写一封邮件给外国朋友Chris,向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友人。邮件内容包括:
1)阐明写信事由;
2)征求建议;
3)表示感谢。
注意:
1)词数100左右;
2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【答案】
Dear
Chris,
Word
came
that
our
school
is
going
to
hold
a
class
meeting
whose
topic
is
related
to
Chinese
traditional
customs.
Because
this
activity
will
be
presented
on
the
English
website,
I
sincerely
want
you
to
offer
me
some
advice.
As
far
as
we
know,
there
is
a
huge
cultural
difference
between
China
and
the
western
countries.
In
order
to
get
more
clicks,
you'd
better
tell
me
which
Chinese
culture
you
westerners
prefer.
What's
more,
if
I
want
to
decorate
my
website
with
some
Chinese
elements,
what
should
I
do?
Knowing
you
are
interested
in
China,
I
do
believe
you
can
help
me
solve
these
puzzles.
If
possible,
you
can
reply
to
me
as
soon
as
possible.
I
will
take
your
advice
into
consideration.
I
really
appreciate
your
help.
Yours,
Li
Hua
【考点】提纲作文,文字式应用文,半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇英文信件,要求考生以李华的身份写一封邮件给外国朋友Chris,向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友人。写作背景:你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会,并在英文网站展示。写作要点已经给出,属于提纲类作文,内容包括:1)阐明写信事由;2)征求建议;3)表示感谢。提示中的内容比较泛泛,需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全,结构完整,条理清晰,应用了较多的语法结构和词汇,熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分,使整个文章结构紧凑,很好地完成了写作任务。例如:Word
came
that
our
school
is
going
to
hold
a
class
meeting
whose
topic
is
related
to
Chinese
traditional
customs.运用了同位语从句,限制性定语从句;
Because
this
activity
will
be
presented
on
the
English
website,
I
sincerely
want
you
to
offer
me
some
advice.运用了原因状语从句;As
far
as
we
know,
there
is
a
huge
cultural
difference
between
China
and
the
western
countries.
运用了there
be句式;In
order
to
get
more
clicks,
you'd
better
tell
me
which
Chinese
culture
you
westerners
prefer.
运用了宾语从句;What's
more,
if
I
want
to
decorate
my
website
with
some
Chinese
elements,
what
should
I
do?
运用了条件状语从句;Knowing
you
are
interested
in
China,
I
do
believe
you
can
help
me
solve
these
puzzles.运用了现在分词作原因状语,宾语从句和强调。
2.(2021·全国乙)书面表达
你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请你以Be
smart
online
learners
为题写一篇发言稿参赛,内容包括:
1)分析优势与不足:
2)提出学习建议。
注意:1)词数100左右;
2)题目和首句已为你写好。
【答案】
Be
smart
online
learners
Network
learning
has
increasingly
become
an
important
means
for
people
to
acquire
knowledge
and
solve
problems.
But
being
smart
online
learners
has
its
advantages
and
disadvantages.
First
of
all,
as
smart
online
learners,
we
can
make
full
use
of
the
most
extensive
educational
resources
to
broaden
the
horizon.
Besides,
We
can
take
the
initiative
in
our
study
by
ourselves
without
time
and
space
limit.
Of
course,
these
disadvantages
are
as
follows.Faced
with
all
kinds
of
information
on
the
internet,
We
can't
tell
the
difference
between
the
true
and
the
false,
which
may
be
harmful
to
our
study
and
life.
On
the
other
hand,
online
learning
itself
has
some
imperfections,
making
it
dificult
for
us
not
to
be
affected.
In
condlusion,
we
should
have
a
good
understanding
of
its
advantages
and
disadvantages
and
find
a
proper
way
to
make
our
study
more
efficient.
【考点】提纲作文,文字式应用文,半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇应用文写作,要求考生以Be
smart
online
learners
为题写一篇发言稿参赛。写作背景:校将举办英语演讲比赛。写作要点已经给出,属于提纲类作文,内容包括:1)分析优势与不足:
2)提出学习建议。
考生需要根据写作要求,确定关键词(组),并进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。在连句成文时,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点评】本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括,缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
3.(2021·新高考Ⅰ)你校英文报
Youth
正在庆祝创刊十周年。请你写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1)读报的经历;??
2)喜爱的栏目;??
3)期望和祝福。????
注意:
1)写作词数应为
80
左右;
2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Youth
and
Me
?
【答案】
Youth
and
Me
?
?
It
has
been
10
years
since
Youth
was
founded.
In
my
memory,
it
is
Youth?that
accompanies
me
through
my
whole
high
school.
When
feeling
depressed,
I
often
choose
to
enjoy
the
novel
part
which
indudes
a
lot
of
imaginative
stories.
These
stories
can
relieve
my
stress
and
broaden
my
horizon.
Besides,
I
even
submitted
my
own
fiction
to
Youth.
Refused
as
I
was,
I
still
received
some
great
encouragement,
which
gives
me
confidence
to
be
a
writer.
?
?
I
do
expect
Youth
can
publish
more
classic
works
and
have
a
promising
future.
【考点】提纲作文,文字式应用文,半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇应用文写作,要求考生写一篇短文投稿。写作背景:你校英文报
Youth
正在庆祝创刊十周年。写作要点已经给出,属于提纲类作文,内容包括:1)读报的经历;
?
2)喜爱的栏目;
?
3)期望和祝福。考生需要根据写作要求,确定关键词(组),并进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。在连句成文时,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点评】本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括,缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
4.(2021·浙江)假定你是李华,下周有新西兰学生访问你校,你将作为学生代表致欢迎辞。请为此写一篇发言稿,内容包括:
1)表示欢迎;
2)介绍活动安排;
3)表达祝愿。
注意:
1)词数80左右;
2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【答案】
Distinguished
guests:
On
behalf
of
our
school,
I
would
like
to
convey
my
sincere
welcome
for
your
visiting.
At
first,
it
is
of
significance
to
fully
understand
the
school.
As
scheduled,
all
of
you
will
visit
the
museum,
which
contains
the
splendid
history
of
our
school.
Furthermore,
our
classes
are
worthy
of
being
attended,
because
you
can
appreciate
the
differences
between
Chinese
and
western
teaching
methods.
After
that,
it
is
at
canteen
that
you
can
have
a
special
lunch
with
our
students.
As
mentioned
above,
I
extremely
expect
your
coming.
May
you
have
an
unforgettable
experience.
【考点】提纲作文,文字式应用文,半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本体是一篇应用文写作,要求考生以李华的身份写一篇发言稿。写作背景:下周有新西兰学生访问你校,你将作为学生代表致欢迎辞。写作要点已经给出,属于提纲类作文,内容包括:1)表示欢迎;2)介绍活动安排;3)表达祝愿。提示中的内容比较泛泛,需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全,结构完整,条理清晰,应用了较多的语法结构和词汇,熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分,使整个文章结构紧凑,很好地完成了写作任务。例如:?At
first,
it
is
of
significance
to
fully
understand
the
school.
运用了it作形式主语;As
scheduled,
all
of
you
will
visit
the
museum,
which
contains
the
splendid
history
of
our
school.
运用了非限制性定语从句;Furthermore,
our
classes
are
worthy
of
being
attended,
because
you
can
appreciate
the
differences
between
Chinese
and
western
teaching
methods.运用了原因状语从句;
After
that,
it
is
at
canteen
that
you
can
have
a
special
lunch
with
our
students.运用了强调句。
5.(2021·浙江)应用文写作
昨天你参观了学校举办的学生国画作品展。请给校英文报写一篇宣传稿,内容包括:
1)展览时间、地点;
2)观展感受;
3)推荐观展。
注意:1)词数80左右;
2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【答案】
???
In
order
to
enrich
students'
after-school
life,
an
exhibition
of
students'
traditional
Chinese
paintings
is
being
held
by
our
school,
which
sparks
a
growing
love
for
traditional
art.
The
exhibition
is
held
on
the
first
floor
of
the
school
litrary.
Most
of
the
students
think
highly
of
this
exhibition,
which
provides
a
platform
for
them
to
explore
the
beauty
of
China
and
experience
the
charm
of
Chinese
art.
???
Through
the
exhibition,
not
only
can
you
admire
wonderful
pictures,
but
also
enable
you
understand
the
art
of
traditional
Chinese
painting
better.
The
exhibition
will
last
for
two
weeks,
every
student
is
welcome
to
visit.
【考点】提纲作文,文字式应用文,半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇应用文写作,要求考生给校英文报写一篇宣传稿。写作背景:昨天你参观了学校举办的学生国画作品展。写作要点已经给出,属于提纲类作文,内容包括:1)展览时间、地点;
2)观展感受;3)推荐观展。提示中的内容比较泛泛,需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全,结构完整,条理清晰,应用了较多的语法结构和词汇,熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分,使整个文章结构紧凑,很好地完成了写作任务。例如:In
order
to
enrich
students'
after-school
life,
an
exhibition
of
students'
traditional
Chinese
paintings
is
being
held
by
our
school,
which
sparks
a
growing
love
for
traditional
art.
运用了不定式作目的状语,非限制性定语从句;The
exhibition
is
held
on
the
first
floor
of
the
school
litrary.运用了被动语态;
Most
of
the
students
think
highly
of
this
exhibition,
which
provides
a
platform
for
them
to
explore
the
beauty
of
China
and
experience
the
charm
of
Chinese
art.运用了非限制性定语从句;?Through
the
exhibition,
not
only
can
you
admire
wonderful
pictures,
but
also
enable
you
understand
the
art
of
traditional
Chinese
painting
better.
运用了倒装句。
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