1.
Dear Cecilia,
Thanks for telling me about your idol, I’m glad to share mine with you.
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2.Write down good expressions from others’ writing.(共21张PPT)
Learn to introduce a person.
By Cecilia
a person
…
achievements
appearance
personality
hobbies
personal information
Ways to describe a person.
tall short medium height
heavy thin medium build
handsome, cool, beautiful , slim
1.7 meters tall,
long / short/ curly/straight/black hair
big/ small nose, round face,
wear glasses
…
Appearance:
be
have
Personality:
quiet outgoing serious funny
calm wild friendly active
smart talented creative energetic
…
a singer
an actor
my idol
a love angel
…
How much do you know him
handsome, cool …
---Andy
an unusual singer
a movie king
a love angel
Name Liu Dehua/ Andy
Date of birth
Place of birth
Appearance Handsome , cool,…
Hobbies
Achievements
Read the passage and underline the answers.
Hong Kong
Singing ,acting, playing bowling, collecting…
3.has had a successful singing career
2.has made over one hundred films
4.the “Outstanding Young Person Award”in1999
5.the “Outstanding Young Person of the World
in 2000.
talented, hardworking, outstanding, kind…
Read the passage and find the structure.
September 27 , 1961
on
1.has won the admiration of fans
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Personality
Do you want to know my idol He is a famous singer, actor and love angel. Yeah, that’s Andy.
He is people’s idol, who was born on September 27, 1961. Not only does he like singing and acting, but also he likes playing bowling and collecting watches.
Over the years, Liu has solidified his position(巩固地位) as not only a superstar and Heavenly Sky King(天王巨星), but also as the most hardworking performer in Hong Kong. His dedication and work ethic has won the admiration of fans . In the last twenty years, Liu has made over one hundred films and has had a successful singing career.
Read and circle some description words for Andy .
As a singer, the most notable hits by Andy include The Days We Spent Together, Everlasting Love, The Tide, Forget Love Potion, Chinese People, Stupid Child, Love You For 10,000 Years, and You Are My Woman.
As an actor, Liu has made lots of wonderful movies ,such as The Deer and the Cauldron,The return of condor heroes,God of Gamblers,Battle the top of the Forbidden City,Prince Charming,Cat and Mouse and so on.
In 1994, Andy set up the “Andy Lau Charity Foundation” which is focused on supporting people in need and to help youth education services. His continuous endeavors(努力) and commitment to the community was recognized when he was honored the “Outstanding Young Person Award” in 1999(香港杰出青年). The next year, Andy was awarded the “Outstanding Young Person of the World“(世界杰出青年), the 3rd person from Hong Kong being awarded this excellent honor.
My dear idol, good luck!
Some description words for Andy .
famous, heavenly, hardworking, successful,
wonderful, continuous, outstanding, excellent
notable,
Can you find some good expressions here
Where What
Share your idol with us.
A: Hello,..., who is your idol
B: ….
A: What does he/she look like
/What is he/she like /
What’s her/his hobby
B: ….
A: Why do you like him/her
B: …. How about your idol
Beginning:
Body:
Ending:
( Write your hopes and opinions)
How to write a passage to introduce your idol
3 parts
General introduction
Detailed introduction
Tip: Use some good and useful expressions.
Good beginning
My favorite idol is …, he/she is well-known all over China this year.
2. My idol is one of the most popular stars
at present. Can you guess who he is
3. …is my idol, maybe you don’t know him/her,
but he/she is a hero in my heart.
4. He/She doesn’t have good looks, but …
. . .
Body
personal information
appearance
personality
achievements
hobbies
. . .
Good ending
1. I like him/her so much because he/she gives us a lot of pleasure.
2. I’m a fan of …, I like his/her performance very much. I will support him/her forever.
3. For…, my heart will go on.
4. My idol, my model, I love you very much. I hope you can be better and better. Good luck!
. . .
Practice
请你以书信的形式向Cecilia谈谈自己的偶像(关于
偶像的个人信息、外貌、性格、成就、爱好、你的祝福
等等)。
要求:行文连贯,条理清晰;
内容需包括以上要点;
字数:90-100左右。
Dear Cecilia,
Thanks for telling me about your idol, I’m glad to
share mine with you. …
作文评分标准
第五档:18—20分
包含内容要点;语言基本无误;行文连贯,能使用修饰词或表示顺序、逻辑关系的连接词,表达清楚。
第四档:15—17分
基本包含要点,遗漏少量次要点;语言有少量错误;行文基本连贯,表达基本清楚。
第三档:11—14分
包含部分要点;语言虽有较多错误,尚能达意。
第二档:6—10分
语言错误多,影响意思表达。
第一档:1—5分
只写出了几个单词,错误百出,不知所云。
0分:白卷或文不对题。
Homework
Find good words and expressions
from your partner’s writing and
write them down.
2. Improve your own writing.
3. Share the information of the idols.Do you want to know my idol He is a famous singer, actor and love angel. Yeah, that’s Andy.
He is people’s idol, who was born on September 27, 1961. Not only does he like singing and acting, but also he likes playing bowling and collecting watches.
Over the years, Liu has solidified his position(巩固地位) as not only a superstar and Heavenly Sky King(天王巨星), but also as the most hardworking performer in Hong Kong. His dedication and work ethic has won the admiration of fans. In the last twenty years, Liu has made over one hundred films and has had a successful singing career.
As a singer, the most notable hits by Andy include The Days We Spent Together, Everlasting Love, The Tide, Forget Love Potion, Chinese People, Stupid Child, Love You For 10,000 Years, and You Are My Woman.
As an actor, Liu has made lots of wonderful movies ,such as The Deer and the Cauldron ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com / " \o "欢迎登陆21世纪教育网" \t "_parent ),The return of condor heroes,God of Gamblers,Battle the top of the Forbidden City,Prince Charming,Cat and Mouse and so on.
In 1994, Andy set up the “Andy Lau Charity Foundation” which is focused on supporting people in need and to help youth education services. His continuous endeavors(努力) and commitment to the community was recognized when he was honored the “Outstanding Young Person Award” in 1999(香港杰出青年). The next year, Andy was awarded the “Outstanding Young Person of the World“(世界杰出青年), the 3rd person from Hong Kong being awarded this excellent honor.
My dear idol, good luck!
小词典
dedication 奉献 work ethic 职业道德
(The Days We Spent Together一起走過的日子), (Everlasting Love愛不完), (The Tide潮水), (Forget Love Potion忘情水), (Chinese People中國人), (Stupid Child笨小孩), (Love You For 10,000 Years愛你一萬年), (You Are My Woman你是我的女人),
The Deer and the Cauldron ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com / " \o "欢迎登陆21世纪教育网" \t "_parent ) 鹿鼎记,The return of condor heroes 神雕侠侣,God of Gamblers赌神,Battle the top of the Forbidden City决战紫禁城之巅,Prince Charming黑马王子,