牛津译林版（2019）必修第一册Unit 4 Looking good, feeling good单元写作训练学案 （含答案）

译林版必修第一册Unit4
单元写作训练
写作指导
本单元的写作任务是写一篇观点类文章。在观点类文章中你应该清楚地向读者表达你对某个特定主题的观点。写一篇好的观点类文章，应该注意以下几点：
1．在第一段清楚地阐明你的观点；
2．给出理由解释你的观点；
3．在最后一段用不同的方式总结你的观点。
常用表达
1．Recent
research
shows
that...
2．In
my
opinion，it
is
very...
3．First，it
is
the
easiest
way
to
help...
4．Secondly，it
helps
people
with...
5．Lastly，it’s
a
good
idea
to
do...
6．In
a
word，I
strongly
hold
the
view
that...
假如你是李华，你们学校就“青少年是否应该整容”的问题进行讨论，要求每个同学用书信的形式投稿，发表自己的意见。请根据下面的提示写一篇短文。
1．你的观点：青少年不应该整容；
2．你的理由：对身体有害；分散学习的注意力；中学生过分注重外表不合适……
注意：
1．词数80左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
审题
写作要求是发表对“青少年是否应该整容”
的看法，写作时应注意下面几点：
1．确定文体：这是一篇议论文。写作时注意议论文的写作特点。
2．主体时态：文章应以一般现在时为主。
3．主体人称：由于是发表对某个问题的看法，所以人称应该以第一人称和第三人称为主。
谋篇
第一段：开门见山，引入主题：青少年不应该整容；
第二段：具体介绍自己的理由：1.……
第三段：总结自己的观点。
核心词汇
1．持有某种观点___________
2．在乎__________
3．集中精力于……____________
4．换句话说____________
5．恢复正常生活____________
6．远离___________
1.hold
the
view2
care
about
3
concentrate
on
4
in
other
words
5return
to
a
normal
life
6
keep
away
from
连词成句
1．我坚持认为青少年不应该整容。
________________________________________________________
2．首先，青少年不应该太在乎自己的外表。
________________________________________________________
3．他应该集中精力于学习。
________________________________________________________
4．有些青少年做了整容手术，这阻止了他们回到正常的生活状态。
________________________________________________________
1.I
strongly
believe
that
teenagers
shouldn’t
have
plastic
surgery.
2.Firstly，a
teenager
should
not
care
about
his
appearance
too
much.
3.He
should
concentrate
on
his
lessons.
4.Some
teenagers
had
plastic
surgery
and
it
stopped
them
from
returning
to
a
normal
life.
句式升级
1．用同位语从句改写第一句话。
_____________________________________________
2．用not...but...把第二句和第三句连成一句话。
_____________________________________________
3．用定语从句改写第四句话。
_____________________________________________
1.I
strongly
hold
the
view
that
teenagers
shouldn’t
have
plastic
surgery.
2.Firstly，a
teenager
should
not
care
about
his
appearance
too
much，but
concentrate
on
his
lessons.
3.Some
teenagers
had
plastic
surgery，which
stopped
them
from
returning
to
a
normal
life.
用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇80词左右的英语短文。
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参考范文
Dear
Editor，
I’m
Li
Hua.I’m
writing
to
express
my
opinions
about
whether
teenagers
should
have
plastic
surgery.
I
strongly
hold
the
view
that
teenagers
shouldn’t
have
plastic
surgery.Firstly，a
teenager
should
not
care
about
his
appearance
too
much，but
concentrate
on
his
lessons.In
other
words，a
teenager
should
improve
himself
by
working
hard.Secondly，a
teenager
is
still
growing
and
such
surgery
is
likely
to
harm
his
health.Some
teenagers
had
plastic
surgery，which
stopped
them
from
returning
to
a
normal
life.Therefore，they
regret
having
the
surgery.
In
a
word，a
teenager
should
keep
away
from
plastic
surgery，read
more
books
and
lead
a
meaningful
life.
Yours，
Li
Hua